Rendyindo wrote:

Hello! For your Modding queue

Sunset

03:24:014 (4,5) - Switch it to stream, but it's up to you.
03:25:161 - I prefer to stream until 03:25:602
03:26:132 (6,1) - Isn't it too long for jump?

You made a very good job for this Marathon beatmap. Hopefully get's ranked.

arnoldusj wrote:

01:24:014 (1) - out of line
02:30:190 (1) - This is also out of line
02:36:543 (3,3) - the distance is not in accordance with 02:37:779 (3)
02:56:132 (2) - out of line
03:59:132 (2) - out of line
04:05:308 (6,7,8) - out of line

Kyle73 wrote:

Hello! From your M4M queue !!

Sunset

00:24:543 (3,4) - I'd suggest nerfing the spacing here a little bit, give it similiar/the same spacing as 00:24:367 (2,3) - I messed around with a bit of the angles and got this I understand why you'd want to space it here, but later on in the map the spacing isn't this big Done
00:27:367 (3,4) - If you so choose to edit the spacing ^ try and match the same intensity/spacing as it's the same sound and still a relaxing part of the song I think the spacing here is totally fine
00:32:661 (1,2) - This is fine tbh but imo I think if it was 4 notes instead of 2 sliders, it'd match the music a lot better I can't really find a good 4 note pattern so i will keep the 2 sliders
00:51:367 (1,2,1) - Perhaps convert this to a similar pattern like this one 00:48:367 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ok I did change this a bit to make it look similar
01:27:720 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Perhaps gradually increase the spacing? I didn't gradually increase the spacing but i did increase it just a bit for the first 4 notes
02:00:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Honestly, I don't hear any triples here, maybe a slider pattern and some notes easing into the burst? I'm not sure what to do but I don't think the triples here are a good direction I will think about this. If someone else points it out i will change it
02:02:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Triples here don't make sense imo, maybe a small jump pattern or something fits better Same here
03:14:485 (9) - Have this slider curve match 03:12:720 (3) - not the placement or direction, but have the same type of curve, basically make it so if you flipped it, rotate it etc, both sliders fit into each other Done
03:17:838 (1) - ^ so match it with 03:18:367 (3) - or vise versa Done
03:21:367 (5,6) - This pattern doesn't really make sense to me, maybe replace 03:21:632 (6) - with just a single note on the white tick? Yeah now that i see it, it does look weird so i changed it
03:30:367 (7) - Perhaps silent this slider end or something? Just having that kick there doesn't sound right to me I just changed it to a single note thats easier
03:31:779 (8) - ^ Same here
03:40:779 (2,3) - The jump pattern is rather nice but try to keep the spacing consistent, have the spacing match 03:40:602 (1,2) - here but flipped around obviously, so it'd be spaced like this fix the rest of jump the pattern's spacing too if you so choose to do this The thing is, i just scaled them using the scaling tool, I didn't really made the spacing like that.
04:10:602 (3) - I think it'd look better if the slider end here stacked under this note's 04:11:485 (1) - slider end Done
04:57:014 (1,2,3) - Stack under 04:56:308 (3) - the slider end here Done
05:02:661 (1,2,3) - Stack under 05:01:955 (3) - the slider end here Done
Basically stack those or align these 04:59:838 (1,2,3) - in a similar fashion to 04:57:014 (1,2,3) - and 05:02:661 (1,2,3) - Done

It's a really solid map! Also check ctrl + shift + a and fix those issues

And I love the song (it's actually in my play list LOL)

DnB is great ^^! Good luck on getting it ranked and happy new year

CptBlackBird wrote:

SPOILER

2016-01-03 20:49 Scebtile: do you still mod?
2016-01-03 20:49 CptBlackBird: well, I didn't mod cuz I was lazy to bump my thread but I can still mod
2016-01-03 20:51 Scebtile: would you mind if you checked out a map of mine? its a marathon (5:03 drain) DnB map
2016-01-03 20:51 Scebtile: currently has 14 star priority
2016-01-03 20:51 CptBlackBird: sure
2016-01-03 20:51 CptBlackBird: but I think I will only do it tomorrow
2016-01-03 20:51 Scebtile: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/853486 Feint - My Sunset]
2016-01-03 20:51 Scebtile: thats fine
2016-01-03 20:51 CptBlackBird: I'm too tired atm for it
2016-01-03 20:51 Scebtile: thanks
2016-01-03 20:58 CptBlackBird: okay, I played it once, I'm just gonna run through it once
2016-01-03 20:58 Scebtile: alright
2016-01-03 20:59 CptBlackBird: 00:07:249 (4,5) - here
2016-01-03 20:59 CptBlackBird: what if you would try something like this
2016-01-03 21:00 CptBlackBird: http://puu.sh/mio4p/643530bae4.jpg it looks a lot better
2016-01-03 21:00 Scebtile: yeah those sliders arent the greatest. im not that great at making good looking slider
2016-01-03 21:01 CptBlackBird: 00:10:073 (1,2,1,2) - here, the song has this rhythm lots of times
2016-01-03 21:01 CptBlackBird: with the same emphasis(not sure if I spelled it right)
2016-01-03 21:01 CptBlackBird: so I think you should increase the spacing a bit
2016-01-03 21:02 Scebtile: the spacing between the 1 and 2 or between the 1,2 and 1,2?
2016-01-03 21:02 CptBlackBird: just increase the spacing between both 1 and 2, just like you did everywhere else
2016-01-03 21:03 Scebtile: alright
2016-01-03 21:03 CptBlackBird: http://puu.sh/miohm/a16d057177.jpg I would do something like this
2016-01-03 21:04 Scebtile: i actually did that xd
2016-01-03 21:04 Scebtile: but a little further
2016-01-03 21:05 CptBlackBird: 00:12:896 (1,2,3) - here, I would try doing something like thisd
2016-01-03 21:05 CptBlackBird: this
2016-01-03 21:05 CptBlackBird: http://puu.sh/miopu/b1d8a2994c.jpg
2016-01-03 21:06 Scebtile: wait
2016-01-03 21:06 Scebtile: im confused
2016-01-03 21:06 Scebtile: oh wait nvm
2016-01-03 21:06 Scebtile: i get i
2016-01-03 21:07 Scebtile: hmm
2016-01-03 21:07 Scebtile: i get it*
2016-01-03 21:07 CptBlackBird: yeah the sv keeps increasing a bit
2016-01-03 21:07 Scebtile: I will think about this one
2016-01-03 21:07 CptBlackBird: 00:24:543 (3,4) - I personally always try to avoid making notes in a straight line because in my opinion, it doesn't look good nor play good
2016-01-03 21:08 CptBlackBird: 00:25:602 - I would add a note here instead of the slider end because it's a harder sound
2016-01-03 21:08 Scebtile: hmm
2016-01-03 21:08 CptBlackBird: 00:28:426 - same here
2016-01-03 21:10 Scebtile: I think its fine the way it is atm
2016-01-03 21:10 Scebtile: if someone else points it out i will do it
2016-01-03 21:13 CptBlackBird: 00:48:367 (1,1,1,1) - I would remove these beucase the sounds there are really quiet
2016-01-03 21:15 Scebtile: ye i agree actualyl
2016-01-03 21:15 Scebtile: actually
2016-01-03 21:15 Scebtile: done
2016-01-03 21:16 CptBlackBird: 00:53:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this as a whole doesn't look so good
2016-01-03 21:16 CptBlackBird: I would change the first 4 to a square and the rest 6 note, I would change it to these kind of triangles
2016-01-03 21:16 CptBlackBird: wait
2016-01-03 21:18 CptBlackBird: http://puu.sh/mipeh/1ada01486a.jpg looks a lot better
2016-01-03 21:19 Scebtile: yeah i agree
2016-01-03 21:19 Scebtile: i will do it
2016-01-03 21:21 CptBlackBird: 01:11:132 (1,2,3) - I would change this to http://puu.sh/mippy/2dabc90f73.jpg
2016-01-03 21:21 CptBlackBird: 01:13:955 (1,2,3) - same as before
2016-01-03 21:22 CptBlackBird: 01:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - blanket properly
2016-01-03 21:25 CptBlackBird: osu is giving up on me and lagging like hell
2016-01-03 21:25 Scebtile: rip
2016-01-03 21:26 Scebtile: btw
2016-01-03 21:26 Scebtile: this might be a stupid question
2016-01-03 21:26 Scebtile: but what does blanket means again?
2016-01-03 21:26 CptBlackBird: 01:33:896 (2,3,4,5,6) - for here, I would do something like this http://puu.sh/mipJU/bc6c8679fd.jpg just for variety
2016-01-03 21:26 CptBlackBird: uh, blanketing is when
2016-01-03 21:26 CptBlackBird: wait
2016-01-03 21:27 CptBlackBird: http://puu.sh/mipPl/980e2686cb.jpg so it's like, I can't explain it with words
2016-01-03 21:28 Scebtile: oh so is it like when you put a slider to cover up another slider's start
2016-01-03 21:28 CptBlackBird: yeah, you can do that with notes too
2016-01-03 21:28 CptBlackBird: also, the last one I pointed out, do that or something like that to some of the streams
2016-01-03 21:28 CptBlackBird: it adds variety
2016-01-03 21:29 Scebtile: ye i actually did it
2016-01-03 21:29 Scebtile: oh
2016-01-03 21:29 Scebtile: ok i will do it
2016-01-03 21:29 Scebtile: to other streams then
2016-01-03 21:29 CptBlackBird: nonono
2016-01-03 21:29 CptBlackBird: not all of them
2016-01-03 21:29 CptBlackBird: just some of them
2016-01-03 21:29 Scebtile: ik what u mean
2016-01-03 21:29 Scebtile: i can see which ones that need changing
2016-01-03 21:30 CptBlackBird: 01:38:132 (2,3,4,5,6) - idk why did you switch to lower spacing, it has the same emphasis as other ones
2016-01-03 21:32 CptBlackBird: 02:05:926 - add note
2016-01-03 21:32 CptBlackBird: 02:06:632 - add note
2016-01-03 21:33 Scebtile: actually i made those triples to increase variety as well
2016-01-03 21:34 Scebtile: so its not all just 5 note stream
2016-01-03 21:35 CptBlackBird: 02:14:308 (2,3,1,2) - instead of all this, I will add a jump
2016-01-03 21:36 Scebtile: Why though? i think the current one is fine
2016-01-03 21:36 Scebtile: fits the flow as well
2016-01-03 21:37 CptBlackBird: 02:27:014 (1,2,3,4) - I would make an even pattern here cuz the current one is weird in my opinion
2016-01-03 21:38 Scebtile: even pattern?
2016-01-03 21:38 CptBlackBird: idk how to say it, symmetric
2016-01-03 21:39 Scebtile: hmm in that case
2016-01-03 21:39 Scebtile: i might just do it as an X shape
2016-01-03 21:39 CptBlackBird: 03:21:896 - what is this stop here
2016-01-03 21:40 Scebtile: hmm idk someone on the map thread pointed this out
2016-01-03 21:40 Scebtile: there was a small slider here before
2016-01-03 21:40 CptBlackBird: 03:34:955 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - not sure what are you trying to map with this repeating pattern here
2016-01-03 21:41 CptBlackBird: 03:37:602 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - same here
2016-01-03 21:42 Scebtile: i was trying to map an intense part to where the hardest chorus is approaching
2016-01-03 21:43 CptBlackBird: 04:34:073 (1) - what's with this slider, I know you said you can't make pretty sliders, me neither but, this slider is really weird
2016-01-03 21:44 Scebtile: i kinda ran out of ideas xD
2016-01-03 21:44 CptBlackBird: 04:38:308 - from this part, I would start making the spacing even lower because you can kinda hear how to song gets less dramatic
2016-01-03 21:45 CptBlackBird: easier way would be
2016-01-03 21:45 CptBlackBird: just
2016-01-03 21:45 CptBlackBird: from this part 04:38:308 - up to 04:53:838 - just idk, make it noticable how to song gets calmer and less dramatic in the map
2016-01-03 21:45 CptBlackBird: hope you get what I'm saying
2016-01-03 21:46 CptBlackBird: 05:06:543 (1,2,3,4,5) - plz make the spacing even
2016-01-03 21:47 CptBlackBird: 05:09:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here
2016-01-03 21:47 CptBlackBird: 05:12:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
2016-01-03 21:47 CptBlackBird: and that's it
2016-01-03 21:47 CptBlackBird: I ended up modding the whole thing even thought I said I won't
2016-01-03 21:47 Scebtile: yeah i was wondering
2016-01-03 21:47 Scebtile: thanks

hope it helped

1. I think addind some hitsound at the beginning part would be good idea lol , just add some whistle on clickable notes (slider head , circles) so that it will make thing sound a bit intresting
2. 00:12:190 (3,4) - this is kinda a bit confuse to react seeing that you use stack for the previous part , I think that stack would work better here or just increase spacing a bit so it would looks good imo
3. 00:46:073 (1) - I don't think it need to be nc lol I don't see anything changing here
4. 00:47:132 (3,1) - would be better to increase spacing a bit here to give some nice momentum there
5. 00:52:779 (1,2) - sliderend for emphasized sound sound not that good here imo , would be better to just keep the same rhythm you use for previous part ,it's ok tho at least if you make pattern different lol
6. 00:56:485 (4) - would be better to map that downbeat clickable , try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:24:367 (2,3) - increase spacing here would make thing sound cool since it will emphasis the beat on (3) really well ,try move (3) to around x176 y268 ?
8. 01:29:749 (8,1) - the 1/4 spacing here is maybe a bit too large , there is no leniency thing here tho , it would be better if you keep making spacing consistent with previous spacing here so that this will play better
9. 01:30:896 (3,4) - (4) doesn't sound really that emphasized compare with (3) so using higher spacing here just sound a bit weird , try move that stream to around x328 y240 ?
10. 01:35:132 (3,4) - ,01:32:132 (4,5) - ya similiar to what I said above lower spacing a bit might be good , you did it good here tho 01:37:602 (1,2) - 01:40:779 (2,3) -
11. 01:44:485 (8,1) - should have higher spacing than 01:44:308 (7,8) - since (1) sound more emphasized than (8) , try move (8) to around x108 y92
12. 01:45:896 (8,1) - 01:51:543 (6,1) - ,01:54:367 (8,1) - similiar ^^^ higher spacing sound better
13. 01:52:603 (8,9) - transition from stream to note isn't that good , I would move (9) to around x448 y200 so it would make thing play better
14. 01:57:543 (2,3) - would be better to use higher spacing than 01:57:367 (1,2) - since (3) sound much more emphasized than (2) , try move (2) to around x260 y156 ?
15. 02:05:485 (1,2,3,4) - lower spacing work better since that triplet sound not really that strong , so I guess it would be better to try make spacing correlation with the song more or something lol
16. 02:11:484 (3,4) - naziiiiiiiiii 1.2x spacing pls lol , low spacing combine with triplet or stream isn't really work imo
17. 02:53:308 (2,3) - woah looks like 1/2 spacing here a bit too similiar with previous 1/1 spacing , would be better to just increase 1/1 spacing there a bit so it make a bit difference in spacing here which make it a bit easier to read , maybe similiar to what you did here 02:55:602 (1,2,3) - lol
18. 03:37:426 (7,1) - this play a bit awkward imo , it would be better to increase spacing here
    
    ok so I guess the main problem that I find pretty a lots in here is how the spacing is not really consistent with the beat in the music that much lol like somehow some emphasized would work better with higher spacing than the previous one so ya I guess you can try to make spacing consistent with the music more it's like when beat start to get intense or get more emphasized -- > increase spacing , and when beat start to sound lower or less emphasized ---> decrease spacing
    ya

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested

[sunset]

1. I think addind some hitsound at the beginning part would be good idea lol , just add some whistle on clickable notes (slider head , circles) so that it will make thing sound a bit intresting
2. 00:12:190 (3,4) - this is kinda a bit confuse to react seeing that you use stack for the previous part , I think that stack would work better here or just increase spacing a bit so it would looks good imo
3. 00:46:073 (1) - I don't think it need to be nc lol I don't see anything changing here
4. 00:47:132 (3,1) - would be better to increase spacing a bit here to give some nice momentum there
5. 00:52:779 (1,2) - sliderend for emphasized sound sound not that good here imo , would be better to just keep the same rhythm you use for previous part ,it's ok tho at least if you make pattern different lol
6. 00:56:485 (4) - would be better to map that downbeat clickable , try this rhythm ?
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:24:367 (2,3) - increase spacing here would make thing sound cool since it will emphasis the beat on (3) really well ,try move (3) to around x176 y268 ?
8. 01:29:749 (8,1) - the 1/4 spacing here is maybe a bit too large , there is no leniency thing here tho , it would be better if you keep making spacing consistent with previous spacing here so that this will play better
9. 01:30:896 (3,4) - (4) doesn't sound really that emphasized compare with (3) so using higher spacing here just sound a bit weird , try move that stream to around x328 y240 ?
10. 01:35:132 (3,4) - ,01:32:132 (4,5) - ya similiar to what I said above lower spacing a bit might be good , you did it good here tho 01:37:602 (1,2) - 01:40:779 (2,3) -
11. 01:44:485 (8,1) - should have higher spacing than 01:44:308 (7,8) - since (1) sound more emphasized than (8) , try move (8) to around x108 y92
12. 01:45:896 (8,1) - 01:51:543 (6,1) - ,01:54:367 (8,1) - similiar ^^^ higher spacing sound better
13. 01:52:603 (8,9) - transition from stream to note isn't that good , I would move (9) to around x448 y200 so it would make thing play better
14. 01:57:543 (2,3) - would be better to use higher spacing than 01:57:367 (1,2) - since (3) sound much more emphasized than (2) , try move (2) to around x260 y156 ?
15. 02:05:485 (1,2,3,4) - lower spacing work better since that triplet sound not really that strong , so I guess it would be better to try make spacing correlation with the song more or something lol
16. 02:11:484 (3,4) - naziiiiiiiiii 1.2x spacing pls lol , low spacing combine with triplet or stream isn't really work imo
17. 02:53:308 (2,3) - woah looks like 1/2 spacing here a bit too similiar with previous 1/1 spacing , would be better to just increase 1/1 spacing there a bit so it make a bit difference in spacing here which make it a bit easier to read , maybe similiar to what you did here 02:55:602 (1,2,3) - lol
18. 03:37:426 (7,1) - this play a bit awkward imo , it would be better to increase spacing here
    
    ok so I guess the main problem that I find pretty a lots in here is how the spacing is not really consistent with the beat in the music that much lol like somehow some emphasized would work better with higher spacing than the previous one so ya I guess you can try to make spacing consistent with the music more it's like when beat start to get intense or get more emphasized -- > increase spacing , and when beat start to sound lower or less emphasized ---> decrease spacing
    ya

good luck

Cheesecake wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

[Sunset]

You've got a pretty low quality MP3, I looked around and found that this map has a 192kbps MP3, so maybe you can ask them nicely if you can use it Will do

00:01:607 (1) - NC since it's on a downbeat and is pretty long after 00:00:196 (1) - I don't understand what do u mean by that this note is already NC'ed
00:04:431 (2) - ^ ^
00:07:254 (2) - ^ ^
00:08:666 (1,2) - You get the point Nope i don't really get it
00:10:431 (3) - I would move the head of this to overlap 00:11:490 (1) - and then move 00:10:784 (4) - to X:127 Y:265 I like it the way it is
00:15:725 (2,3) - Rotate this so that one of the sliders is perfectly horizontal, like 00:01:607 (2,3) - Sorry but it would just look stupid
00:23:137 (1) - Move to X:158 Y:268 so that it's equidistant from (2) and (3) Done
00:27:019 (5) - Maybe move the head so that it goes underneath the head of 00:24:725 (5) - I like it better the way it is atm
00:26:666 (4) - If you do the above move this to the same stack as 00:25:254 (6,1) - ^
00:28:078 (7,1) - You should do the same stack ^ ^
00:40:784 (4) - Maybe move to X:240 Y:65, I don't like the overlap that it's in now You're the first one to ever point out this part. So I think its fine
01:34:431 (9) - Ctrl+G Done
01:36:725 (3,4,5,6,7) - Perhaps make this quintet straight and parallel to 01:36:195 (1) - I didn't completely understand that but I did moved a bit here
02:58:078 (1) - Add finish Done
03:04:254 (3,4) - Umm...... what?
03:18:372 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ugly IMO, keep to straight and curved quintets I made it straight
03:57:372 (1) - Ctrl+G No

Good luck, the fact that no maps of this song are approved is a crime

Cheesecake wrote:

OH MY GOD IM RETARDED I MODDED THE WRONG MAP

Cheesecake wrote:

sdggposfjhpokskfhpodgkh

No KD since you gave on the previous one

[Sunset]

00:08:308 (3) - Ugly and unnecessary imo I like it and no one hated it before.
00:18:543 (1,2) - Overdone and doesn't fit (having the little hooks on the end) Changed them to normal ones
00:24:367 (2,3,4) - Too linear, awkward to play, rotate (4) around maybe I moved (4)
00:30:190 (2) - Suddenly 3.4x spacing when it isn't needed, move to X:271 Y:179 perhaps Moved it to x:204, y:120
01:01:426 (4,5) - These don't look great I suck at making good looking sliders i know but i will just keep them for now
01:03:720 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:47:485 (1) - Unrankable I think A BN didn't have a problem with this slider so I will keep it for now
02:01:426 (7,1) - Ctrl+G Sounds weird
02:15:543 (1) - Remove NC and 02:15:720 (2) - add NC I can see how this can be better in tag coop so done
02:31:249 (1,2) - Ugly, try not to overdo your slider shapes like this Made them normal i guess
02:35:132 (3) - ^ This one is fine. Also, isn't nice to see some new sliders xd
02:36:896 (1,2,3,1,2) - Bad flow I will keep them for now. If someone else says the same i will change them
02:41:132 (1,2) - I'll stop mentioning sliders like this Changed
03:23:485 (1,2,3) - Turn this into a triangle or something rather than a straight line Won't because of variety
03:25:249 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:28:073 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:31:073 (1,2,1) - Just keep these in the same combo as 03:30:543 (1) - Done
05:16:426 (5) - NC and add finish Done

Have some stars for the trouble

[Colours]
Combo1 : 71,44,182
Combo2 : 245,187,10
Combo3 : 249,241,100

Log Off Now wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue!

Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to modding so what I say may not be useful! If this is the case feel free to ignore this mod, although feedback would be much appreciated! All mods are my opinion

It's also worth noting that I can't really mod maps above 5*, which I state in my queue. However since this is DnB and cmon this song is sick and I think I might be able to help with general things and maybe hitsounds I'll give you my input here

[General]

Your combo colours don't seem to match the background very well, and if this is intentional I don't agree with using blue here since it doesn't contrast well. I've suggested some new ones below ^^

[Colours]
Combo1 : 71,44,182
Combo2 : 245,187,10
Combo3 : 249,241,100

I changed them. Thanks for the colors

[Sunset (Hitsounds)]

01:07:955 - 01:24:896 (1) - I don't really agree with how you've hitsounded this section, I think the kick hitsounds are nice but the snares are I think unnecessary, however the snare idea has a lot of potential. I would first of try and find a 'flatter' and less aggressive snare hitsound for this section, unfortunately I'm not much use when it comes to finding hitsounds but you can check out free .wav files on the internet or check out LordRaika's Profile. I would also make the volume of these hitsounds quieter and gradually get louder by roughly 5-10% each time starting from 01:19:249 - and increasing by 5-10% at 01:22:073 - and 01:24:896 (Make sure you don't go too loud though!) I have changed the snare to a one that fits better now. However i haven't lowered the volume or gradually increased it because I think its fine as it is. Thanks for the snare change though

01:33:367 (1) - A soft whistle hitsound ontop of your current kick hitsound would sound good here as the guitar and piano both play on this downbeat, this can be said for almost every other downbeat in this section, examples of where you might want to include them are 01:36:190 (1) - 01:37:602 (1) - 01:39:014 (1) - 01:41:838 (1) - 01:44:661 (1) - 01:47:485 (1) - (Hopefully you understand what I mean by this, and I occasionally skip one as it is predominantly covered by a more important beat or part of a phrase) These now sounds nice. I agree. I also added a few more to some parts

02:27:014 - Soft soundset here Done

02:49:249 - Use the same idea that you had at 01:07:955 - 01:24:896 (1) - although at a lower volume than previous, and increase volume where you think it makes sense to I won't do this because the drums in this part are not the same as the previous ones

03:00:896 - From this section you can continue to use the soft whilst idea from above (if you choose to use it) but try to use the whistles more often, but don't overdo them and make sure they match the important parts of the lead piano, otherwise it can sound messy and uncoordinated/inconsistent Done

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Sorry that this probably wasn't the mod that you were looking for, but I tried anyway ^^ Hope this helps!

Maakkeli wrote:

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is it just me but is your mp3 low quality? It's not you. Still looking for a good one
00:02:661 (3) - i hate how you end these on a strong piano sound that imo should be clickable I will fix these
00:15:720 (1,2,3) - ehhh.. the song does not really support this sv changing Eh, at first I didn't agree, but yeah I can see why now
00:32:661 (1,2) - you did these sounds with circles before and i thought they fit better 00:31:602 (1,2,3) - you could change these to a 1/1 return slider if you wanted to add some more sliders I think the current ones are fine
00:35:838 (2,3) - this really takes the emphasizing out of the song. and the stack doesn't fit since the piano sounds are definitely different sounds I don't think the piano sounds different here lol
00:36:367 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:56:132 (3,4) - confusing spacing but normal people should be able to read this lol I don't see how this is confusing
01:24:543 (3,2) - imo you should avoid this kind of overlaps. if you wanna overlap then overlap more like this http://puu.sh/mFKiC/45045ac0e8.jpg Will be careful next time
01:36:985 (5) - let's not place kicksliders on blue ticks and here the kick is on the red tick so yea, that kick should be clickable Thanks for pointing this out, I didn't realize its this important.
01:40:249 (6,1) - i don't really like how you don't emphasize this kick and piano sound at all I didn't understand what you meant by ''emphasize'' but I did increase the spacing between the notes
01:55:073 (2,3,4) - pls no kicksliders on blue ticks I think this one is fine
02:12:896 (1) - oh yea check you blankets Done
02:36:896 (1,2,3,1,2) - this spacing is too damn intese for this kind of a slow part Agreed. Fixed
03:06:367 (1) - pls don't end sliders on downbeats, this rythm would fit much better http://puu.sh/mFLsc/838000d6fb.jpg Agreed
03:34:955 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i don't really understand what does the music give to you to do this kind of nc'ing Because tag coop exists
03:37:602 (1) - ^ ^
03:40:603 (1) - ^ ^
03:43:250 (1) - ^ ^
04:19:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - this 5 note burst does not fit the song at all This one doesn't fit, but the next 6 ones along with the sliders ones fit even though they have the exact same beat and rhythm??
04:21:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ and so don't the coming ^^^
04:23:838 (2) - downbeat Done
04:31:249 (1) - the song gets so much more calm here but you decide to go with the same sv It does get calm, but there are still drum sounds and claps, so reducing the SV here would make it really weird to play
04:34:073 (1) - pls what is this Yeah...... just pretend you never saw this shit
yea well i'm just gonna end my mod here and give you some stuff to work with.
problems like not emphasizing correctly with spacing like 03:23:838 (3) - there's a hard kick there but you just have it with the same spacing as (2). You also many times emphasize wrong things like 03:31:779 (6) - you have a huge jump from (5) to (6) when (5) is a kick and should be spaced more than (6). You have some really questionable slidershapes and those 1/4 sliders on blue ticks are a nono (unless there is a clear kick or something on them). some of your nc's are a bit confusing like 00:10:073 (1,1) - why would you suddenly add a new nc there since it's still the same piano sounds going on. You definitely know what flows good and what doesn't but try to give your map a more polished look by getting rid of some of your overlaps. Idk how much you have mapped but you're definitely heading in the right direction so keep at it!
Good luck!