Lets go
Sunset
only that good luck for you bro bye.
SPOILER
- listening to the introduction of music to this part (01:07:955 -), I have a certainty that the volume should not be 50% should be 15% and rising gradually and I think it would be better if it were soft than normal, I think it does not flow as the music (at least the beginning of it)
- 00:12:543 (4) - Stack them 00:11:485 (1,2,3) -
- 00:12:896 (1,2,3) - Don't overlap sliders, anyway I think it would look better if it were one triangle every 3 sliders.
- 00:15:720 (1,2,3) - are the only sliders that have changing speed, why others have not? I do not see any relevance in that part to change the speed, like the other
- 00:19:602 (3) - remember what I said three identical sliders
- 00:17:485 (1,2,3) - move to x4 y 344
- 00:27:543 (4) - move to x116 y 192 for a perfect square
- 00:30:896 (4) - move to x328 y236
- 00:44:661 (3,4) - the distance between the notes is too high, fix.
- 00:47:837 (2) - move to x196 y148
- 00:51:720 (2) - move to x244 y276 and 00:52:426 (2) - x196 y276
- 00:52:779 (3,4) - make a slider 1/1
- 00:53:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think you should give an equivalent distance, would be very good one jump, how about?
- 01:02:661 (1,2,3) - stack with end of 01:01:955 (5) -
- 01:24:543 - delete this slider, replace for a single note, because here begins a sequence of beats, given beginning to kiai think it will be much more emphatic if you delete all of the following sliders (01:26:308 (1,2) - ) and replacing for single notes.
- 01:25:249 (1,2,3) - more distance before i said ^
- 01:38:396 - missing a note here.
- 01:45:896 (8) - move to x220 y208
- 01:51:720 (1,2) - I think it would be great if you replaced those sliders for 4 single notes
- 01:54:543 - the slider should begin here, listen well to music.
- 02:50:308 (3) - this note should be here 02:50:485 - ,02:53:132 (2) - 02:53:308 - , 02:55:955 (2) - 02:56:132 - follow the beat now or put 1 note this parts to follow the rhythm
- 03:22:073 - single note here.
- 03:32:308 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - damn this its really cool this jumps, but not create any emphasis put them, because it has stream, you put only those jumps you cut the rhythm of this part and can practically see an bn and say the same thing I said, I recommend you place the streams in this part and keep some jump think it would be a good choice.
- 04:15:720 (5) - NC here.
- 04:19:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 04:21:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ,04:22:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) ,- 04:24:279 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ,04:25:602 (1,2,3,4) - , 04:27:014 (1,2,3,4) - ,04:28:426 (1,2,3,4) - ,04:29:838 (1,2,3,4) -
okay.. sorry, sincerely but you'll have to remove these streams, ta very obvious that is overmapped, sincerely does not make sense, it is not good to play,
Music has a necessary intensity in this part to create this overmap, in another way it was not cool, I recommend fix this.
only that good luck for you bro bye.