1. Naked Rang - 5Key (4,41 stars, 3620 notes)

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hi frim
Mod req dr chat..

[Greget]
00:09:942 - 00:31:884 - have same sound, but different amount of notes? ok
01:37:884 - add one? loud beat? ok. forgot about it
01:38:699 (98699|2) - what does this follow? ok. sorry itu kelebihan
02:05:742 - add? i hear something. ga ada suara disitu kk. the sound is in here 02:05:827 - become one with whistle
02:06:084 - add? i don't know if you only follow the beat at this timing, but you also add for melody at 02:04:713 (124713|0) - add. forgot
02:09:256 - add for cymbal? ok
02:12:856 - i feel something wrong with stream in this area. 02:13:070 (133070|0,133070|4) - why is this double anyway? my suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4131840, make 02:12:856 - and 02:13:027 - because there's some kind of beat emphasis there. fix in my way
03:11:913 (191913|2,191913|0) - sengaja no hs? forgot
03:14:570 - add one? same sound as 03:14:056 - ? ok
04:29:142 - add? cymbal isn't too big, but i still think it worths triple. ok
04:56:227 (296227|2) - why note here? you didn't add it at 01:30:513 - 03:03:770 - 04:23:313 - ,etc. fix
05:01:456 (301456|4) - waw jack, move to 3? ok
05:05:484 - 05:05:999 - ga ykin ma stream ini, ssh ngehitny, tp trserah sih mw gnti/ga. follow song and also for more challenge

Good luck :3

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY

M4M
M4M with Frim4503

5K

[1|2|3|4|5]

Mod Inside

[General]

AiMod

1. No Problem

Timing

1. No Problem

Difficulty

1. ~Marathon~

Hitsound

1. No Problem

Metadata/Song Setup

1. erm
   

File/BG/etc.

1. Clear

[Greget]

00:09:942 (9942|3) - actually the sound is end on 00:10:970 - but
00:17:142 (17142|1) - move to 1 for better pattern also to prevent this 00:16:799 (16799|1,16970|1,17142|1) -
00:17:313 (17313|3) - move to 2 to prevent 00:17:142 (17142|3,17313|3,17484|3) -
00:20:570 (20570|2) - move to 2 ? 00:20:570 (20570|4,20570|2,20656|3,20742|2) - this pattern is uncomfortable for left hand space user bodo amat. i didn't use space, i'm using F
00:33:770 (33770|4,33770|2) - wrong snap, should be on 00:33:856 -
00:34:113 (34113|0,34113|4,34456|1,34456|4) - 00:35:484 (35484|0,35484|3,35827|1,35827|4) - 00:36:856 (36856|1,36856|4,37199|1,37199|4) - actually, should be just 1 note for consistency with 00:33:427 (33427|4) - 00:34:799 (34799|0) - 00:36:170 (36170|3) - 00:37:542 (37542|0) - since the sound is just same tho
00:35:142 (35142|2,35142|0) - wrong snap again, should be on 00:35:227 - maybe fix the others too 00:37:884 (37884|3,37884|1) -
00:39:084 (39084|4,39127|3,39170|2,39213|0,39256|1,39299|2,39342|3,39384|4) - actually it's 1/12 snap, if you don't believe me it's ok
00:43:542 - 00:43:713 - should be 2 note according to what you map on 00:43:199 (43199|1,43199|0,43370|4,43370|3) - also 00:21:599 (21599|0,21599|4,21770|1,21770|0) - but if you reject this with reason of low sound then it's ok
00:54:084 - should add note here for the hithat, since the sound is similar to 00:53:999 (53999|2) - also just like what you do on 00:43:113 (43113|2) -
01:07:542 - isn't 3 note are too over ? also i think it's not fair with the other sound which has kick+cymbal (01:04:799 (64799|4,64799|1,64799|0,65484|2,65484|1,65484|4) - 01:06:170 (66170|0,66170|2,66170|4) - )
01:19:199 - just suggesting something since i hate bracket (01:19:627 (79627|1,79713|0,79799|1) - ) http://puu.sh/lZWQT/9a2f73ba2f.png
01:22:542 (82542|0) - 01:23:570 (83570|1) - 01:24:770 (84770|3) - actually i didn't hear the synt (even hear nothing except the echo)
01:27:856 (87856|2) - delete, i dont know what ive heard
01:30:770 (90770|1) - if you following the stream then why you make it empty on 01:30:599 -
01:31:370 (91370|0,91370|1) - should be on 01:31:456 - ?
01:32:742 (92742|3,92742|4) - should be on 01:32:827 -
and the other part that i noticed before, since this part is just the same
01:53:313 (113313|1,113656|3) - 01:55:027 (115027|1) - 01:56:056 (116056|1) - 01:57:427 (117427|1) - 01:57:427 (117427|1) - (etc. i cant notice all of it) maybe delete this ? since it just not fair with the other part that have a synt 01:53:999 (113999|4) - while this one just the wub wub and even same with the part htat have a synt. btw it just my opinion, ignore it if it was your style
01:54:770 (114770|4) - delete, i dont know what sound that you layer here
01:55:456 (115456|2) - delete please..
01:59:484 (119484|2,119656|4) - Ctrl J for pitch
02:04:284 (124284|4,124284|3) - one of it should be on 02:04:370 - ? since the snare is there not on the red line. also fix 02:05:656 (125656|0,125656|1) - 02:07:027 (127027|4,127027|1) - etc.
02:09:770 - what about http://puu.sh/lZXn4/b4b5505fe2.png? since 02:09:856 (129856|2,129942|2) - this is just so uncomfortable
02:16:627 (136627|4,136799|4,136970|4) - might want to re-arrange
02:40:799 (160799|1,160799|2,160799|4) - 02:42:170 (162170|3,162170|2,162170|0) - 02:43:542 (163542|4,163542|3,163542|0) - same as i said before
02:39:770 - 02:41:142 - 02:42:513 - 02:43:884 - i think this should be 2 note for piano+snare just like 02:40:113 (160113|4,160113|1) - 02:41:484 - 02:42:856 -
02:44:399 (164399|0) - the sound start 02:44:227 -
02:50:313 - add note for similar sound with 02:50:570 (170570|0,170656|1,170913|4,170999|3) - just like you do on 01:17:056 (77056|2) -
02:52:027 - should add note here, since you add note on the other part
02:56:827 - missing note for the synt
03:03:856 - same like i have said before
03:04:627 (184627|0,184627|2) - 03:05:999 (185999|4,185999|2) - 03:07:370 (187370|0,187370|4) - 03:08:742 (188742|0,188742|4) - same like before
03:11:742 (191742|2,191827|1,191913|2) - swap the collumn will be better
03:13:884 - 03:14:227 - missing note ?
03:14:399 - should be 2 note
03:26:913 - 03:32:399 - 03:37:884 - 03:40:284 - missing note
03:44:399 (224399|4,224399|3,224570|3,224570|4,224742|2,224913|3,224999|4,225084|2,225170|3,225256|2,225256|4) - might want to re-arrange since this is too heavy on the right hand for right hand space user
04:23:827 (263827|1) - 04:25:199 (265199|4) - 04:26:570 (266570|1) - same like before 04:24:513 (264513|2,264513|0,264856|0,264856|2) - 04:25:884 (265884|4,265884|2,266227|2,266227|4) - 04:27:256 (267256|0,267256|4,267599|0,267599|4) -
04:24:170 (264170|4,264170|2) - 04:25:542 (265542|0,265542|2) - 04:26:913 (266913|0,266913|4) - 04:28:284 (268284|1,268284|4) - same like before
04:29:913 (269913|2,270170|2,270427|2) - move to 1st collumn for hand balance since this is too heavy on the right for right hand space user, also 04:29:784 (269784|2,269827|3,269913|2) - this is confusing
04:32:656 (272656|0) - move to 3 for a pattern with 04:32:999 (272999|0,273042|1,273084|2) -
04:52:713 (292713|2) - i hear nothing
04:53:227 (293227|2) - delete ? i hear nothing
04:56:313 - 04:56:484 - you didn't layer the stream ? then 04:56:227 (296227|2,296399|0) - what is this for ?
04:57:084 (297084|3,297084|4) - etc.
05:05:999 (305999|3) - move to 2 for better pattern also to prevent 1/8 bracket 05:05:913 (305913|3,305956|4,305999|3) -
05:10:113 - the LN should end on 05:10:199 - and add new LN on 05:10:199 - just like 05:08:742 (308742|3,308827|2) - . at least make something like 05:08:742 (308742|3,308827|2) - two times and two times for just single LN since the sound is fading 05:11:484 -
05:24:084 (324084|3,324256|1,324342|3) - move to 2 4 5 ? for better pattern
05:24:684 (324684|1) - move to 1 to prevent 05:24:256 (324256|1,324427|1,324684|1,324942|1) -
05:26:484 (326484|1,326656|3) - Ctrl J for better pattern
05:27:427 (327427|2) - move to 2 to prevent 05:27:256 (327256|2,327342|3,327427|2,327513|3,327599|2) -
05:28:970 (328970|4) - move to 1 since 05:28:884 (328884|3,328970|4,328970|2,329056|3) - this pattern is kinda uncomfortable
05:29:484 (329484|3) - better to move it to 3 and be a stair with 05:29:313 (329313|0,329399|1) -

ok, osu need more 5K and Greget map xD
Good Luck Furimu ~~~

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hai Frim

M4m with Frim5403

5K column : 1-2-3-4-5

well, it's like you still newbie at modding so, i will explain why i mostly reject your mods using bahasa lokal

MOD ready

00:01:884 (1884|4) –delete this, if you want keep this then you should apply some small volume kick sound such as 00:01:199 -00:03:256 – 00:03:599 – 00:03:942 - and etc, so the main is you want make that kick sound exist or not? (Well I will just don’t keep it cause many place like this and you don’t notice it) well, it;s becos no sound kick. kenapa ada bagian yg pake single note dan ada yg ga pake karna yg aku follow bukanlah kick ataupun hithat tpi melainkan suara piano see: 00:01:884 (1884|4,2227|2,2570|2,2913|4) - coba dengerin lagi pake 50% playback. contoh: dibagian 00:01:884 - 00:02:056 - 00:02:227 - adl suara piano kyg baian tengah aku kasih double karna udh ketimpa ama suara snare.

00:03:427 (3427|4,3427|2) -00:01:370 (1370|1,1370|0) –i’m feeling confused why you just used 2 notes while actually you have to make a LN beside the note to fulfill the snare(perhaps, sorry i have little knowledge about hs sound ) ? maksudnya LN ? komposisinya udh pas (whistle 2, snare 2)

00:33:084 - make it into double notes for differentiation with other note itu karna hanya ada suara hithat disana see: 00:32:913 (32913|3,32999|2,33170|2) -

00:33:684 -00:33:856 – 00:34:456 - 00:33:856 - make it into 1 note only, cause i feel it unmatch when u use 2 notes, try to match them with after/before this part that is 2 notes
00:35:056 -00:35:227 -00:35:484 -^, different with 00:35:827 –which 00:35:999 –you already make it into 3 so two is okay
00:36:342 (36342|2,36342|0,36427|3,36427|4,36599|4,36599|3,36684|2,36684|0,36856|1,36856|4,37027|0,37027|3,37199|4,37199|1,37370|2,37370|3) –same problem^
00:37:713 (37713|0,37713|1,37799|2,37799|3,37970|2,37970|3,38056|1,38056|0,38227|1,38227|2,38399|4,38399|3) –again^
01:31:199 (91199|1,91199|0,91284|4,91284|3,91456|1,91456|0,91542|4,91542|3,91713|1,91713|2,91884|3,91884|0,92056|0,92056|3,92227|2,92227|1) – again ^
01:32:570 (92570|3,92570|4,92656|0,92656|1,92827|3,92827|4,92913|0,92913|1,93084|2,93084|3,93256|4,93256|1) –same^
01:33:942 (93942|2,93942|4,94027|3,94027|0,94199|0,94199|3,94284|2,94284|4,94456|3,94456|1,94627|2,94627|0,94799|3,94799|1,94970|4,94970|0) -^
01:35:827 (95827|1,95827|3,95999|4,95999|2) -^
03:07:713 (187713|4,187713|2,187884|3,187884|1,188056|2,188056|0,188227|1,188227|4) -^
03:09:084 (189084|2,189084|0,189256|3,189256|1,189427|2,189427|4,189599|0,189599|1) -^(i give you again the explaination to avoid you become
weel, i will give you some explaination cuz i think you misunderstand with my pattern work. dibagian 00:33:599 (33599|0,33599|2,33942|3,33942|1) - ada suara snare jadi 2 note, dibagian 00:33:684 (33684|3,33684|1,33856|2,33856|4) - ada whistle jadi 2 note, dibagian 00:34:113 (34113|4,34113|0,34284|4,34284|0,34456|1,34456|4,34627|3,34627|2) - ada suara drum wihstle campur snare jadi smuanya 2 note, dibagian 00:33:427 (33427|4) - 00:34:799 (34799|0) - ada suara synth/guitar jadi 1 note. tru utk suara yg sama ada single note yg nyempil itu juga utk suara guitar. coba dengerin pake playback 50% dan matiin hsnya

confuse :
03:09:084 –only 1 note then 03:09:427 –is also 1 note, and others are 2 ^

01:11:313 –better to make a new LN until 01:11:656 –at column 4 i suggest, cause there is sound changed well, maybe dat work

01:35:399 (95399|4,95399|1,95570|1,95570|4) –better for these to make it into 1, it different with other which you use 2 notes(01:35:313 (95313|0,95313|2) -01:35:656 (95656|2,95656|0) -) tentu saja sama, cuma dibagian ini aku ga ikut suara guitar. dis how it works: smua kiai ga follow guitar sound dibagian itu, cuma bagian abis kiai yg pake see: 02:04:113 - and 04:56:913 -

02:05:656 –add a note here for consistency (02:04:284 -) ok. delete that note

02:07:113 –make it into 1 (like in the up mod which is so many) see 02:06:856 (126856|4,126856|1,126942|3,126942|0,127113|2,127113|4,127199|3,127199|1) - like prev. pattern

02:08:484 – maker it into 1, it doesnt similar with 02:08:570 (128570|3,128570|4) – ^

03:45:427 (225427|0,225599|2,225770|4) –i don’t feel any beats here as i feel in 03:46:113 (226113|0,226284|2,226456|4) - , my suggestion change into LN which start from 03:45:256 – end at 03:45:770 –and add new one from 03:45:770 –to 03:46:113 – okay. adding LN but using my own stlye

04:14:913 - 04:15:599 - 04:15:942 – 04:18:684 - 04:51:599 - you miss a beat here
04:15:942 – 04:14:913 – 04:18:684 - 04:51:599 - is for consistency like 04:16:627 (256627|2,256713|1,256799|0,256799|3) – itu sengaja biar smua ga jadi sama seperti itu

04:17:227 (257227|4) –move to 04:17:313 – buat apa ? itu udh ikut guitar, jdi ga perlu pindah
04:19:970 (259970|4) –move to 04:20:056 – ^
04:50:142 (290142|0) –move to 04:50:227 -^

04:42:684 (282684|4,282770|2) –broken stair? Just make it into stair as same like others keep. for variations :v

Give you star cause the preview point :v

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii frim

sorry for long delay

4k = 1~4

Click me

[GG]01:37:027 (97027|0,97113|0) - jgn jack pls abis 1/8s. susah dipencet ><
01:37:284 (97284|4,97370|4) - mengikuti aja yg atas biar konsisten
02:09:942 (129942|2,130027|0,130199|2,130284|0) - tukar kolom? tukar kolom gimana ? udh bagus kayak gitu kok
04:30:984 - missing yellow line?

nice diff
Goodluck ><)b

Rivals_7 wrote:

Mod Request

earthmind - ENERGY (Asterisk Remix)[OsuMania]

[General]

BG: I personally think that the BG is not suitable for some reason. Dunno about you
Metadata: OK
Mapset: OK
Diff Spread:OK
AiMod (ctrl+shift+a): OK
Hitsound: OK (not checking this tbh since Audacity broken atm ;w;)
Timing:OK

Column
1|2|3|4|5

Greget

SPOILER

1. 00:31:199 (31199|3,31370|4) - Suggest to move this to 5|3 respectively, Seems pretty much lookin better and column-spread-wise imo
   
2. 00:34:456 (34456|4,34456|1,34627|3,34627|2) - should be moved to the very left due to Lower Pitch than - 00:34:113 (34113|0,34113|4,34284|4,34284|0) - . and move - 00:34:799 (34799|0) - to 4 if you accept for column spreading
   
3. 00:39:342 (39342|3,39384|4) - ctrl+g. burst will be much easier to read. The player will also could prepared more easily to hit those minijacks on the left hand.
   
4. 01:24:684 (84684|2,84856|2,85027|2) - Jack in a mini-stream is not really comfortable to hit, especially for spacebar player. also there's probably a Ghost note - 01:24:770 (84770|3) -
   
5. 01:30:513 (90513|3) - move to 2 for more balanced play. and prevent accuracy breaker because of LN usage in the right hand.
   
6. 01:35:142 (95142|2) - suggest moving to 4. many people cant reflect the special key (col 3) in a fast respond. moving that note will give comfortabilty to the players so they can prepared more accurately for this fast-hitted-notes - 01:35:313 (95313|0,95313|2,95399|4,95399|1) -
   
7. 01:38:321 - suggestion for reducing jacks on spacebar (col 3)
   
   
8. 02:07:542 (127542|4,127542|2) - this noise are different from - 02:07:713 (127713|2,127713|4) - so might move left these -> 02:07:713 (127713|2,127713|4,127884|3,127884|1) -
   
9. 02:08:399 (128399|3) - Move to 3 to prevent triple stacking - 02:08:227 (128227|3,128399|3,128570|3) -
   
10. 02:09:599 - suggestion
    
    I just dont like the minijack on the spacebar xD
    
11. 02:55:370 (175370|3) - move to 2? you already made a similar pattern before - 02:54:342 (174342|3,174427|2,174513|1,174513|3) - . so... this is just for variation
    
12. 03:13:413 (193413|3,193456|2,193499|1) - move to right. Easier to play imo.
    
13. 03:13:884 - and - 03:14:227 - add note?
    
14. 03:28:456 (208456|4) - probably move to 4. I see no reason why is this should be stacked - 03:28:456 (208456|4,208799|4) - as they're on a different pitch and instrument
    
15. 05:10:113 (310113|0) - does this should be the same as measure before - 05:08:742 (308742|3,308827|2) - ? the noise are exactly the same and still loud. though i can agree with - 05:11:484 (311484|2) - because the electric are more dominant
    
16. 05:14:227 - 1/4 electric noise still exist. where is the LN? it's for the other guitar

I think that's all. Cool map as always xD