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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年1月6日 at 下午 05:18:15

Artist: nao
Title: Anthem Short Version
Source: 1/2 summer
Tags: one side eroge galgame ending 秋田うと Akita Uto 古津ケーキ Furutsu Cake pocket Gao Minakami Yuki
BPM: 138
Filesize: 11511kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gao's Easy (1.25 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Normal (1.85 stars, 189 notes)
  3. Summer (3.75 stars, 341 notes)
  4. Yuki's Hard (2.62 stars, 242 notes)


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1/2 summer
nao - アンセム Short Version

Difficulties List :
Gao's Easy by | pocket-Gao
Normal by | Me
Yuki's Hard by | Minakami Yuki
Summer by | Me
Lyrics and Storyboard by | Me

TT Mouse
Mollon
Hollow Wings
DreaM117er
KaedekaShizuru
Rizia - Bubbled
Wafu - Rebubbled
Rizia - Qualified
Thank all of you!
Koiyuki
音效没下

osu file format v14

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Title:Anthem (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:アンセム (Short Ver.)
Artist:nao
ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:Kencho
Version:Yuki's Hard
Source:1/2 summer
Tags:alcot honey comb one side summer eroge ending
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TtmnZk


first
[Summer]


01:23:455 (4,1) - 近了有点,01:23:890这里音这么重,拉远了能较好体现出来

01:30:846 (1) - 01:32:151 (4) -分别 ctrl+g? 这样同向略别扭

01:36:498 漏了鼓,不过无所谓,强调voacl就好


od7,pp美丽


[Yuki's Hard]

00:42:803 (2,3) - try http://puu.sh/m68mm/99aef6547d.jpg

00:48:238 (3) - try http://puu.sh/m68r8/297bfb0c8b.jpg



[Gao's Easy]
00:13:455 (3,1) - 没在一条线上,(xixi)

Mollon
Easy
00:07:368 (1) - 可能因为DS的原因滑条要贴这么近,但感觉和之前的物件间距相比有点近不是太好看,反正下一个滑条头在上一个滑条尾,感觉把1转一下横着一点不要包可能好一点
00:38:672 (1) - 要不要考虑包下前面的4
00:52:585 (1,2) - 如果要包的话,包的弧度修一下下
01:06:933 (2) - 有点低
01:36:716 (4,1) - 有点半包不包的感觉

Normal
00:41:064 (3) - 要不要稍微转下滑条尾包4
01:15:846 (3,4) - 这里应该是有DS的关系和为了配合1的形状不过还是感觉N里这种不怎么常见。。
01:30:846 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 也是感觉有一点挤,发现CS3.2不涨星星的样子。。属于个人YY 其实也没啥影响。。

Hard
00:00:194 (1) - 说不上来的有点怪 = = 而且sv还和后面开始的滑条都不一样,会不会有一点坑
别的都很好~

Summer
01:03:020 (1) - 这里不知道是不是要包01:03:890 (4) - 的尾,要的话就调整一下1,不包就不管啦
01:09:107 (1) - 感觉可以像M酱diff一样拆两个单个note变三连加单戳 然后把后面一个放跳一点
01:43:020 (1,2) - (纯属YY)感觉可以考虑看看摆成不折返然后两个短滑条,位置还是和现在的1 2一样 放两遍 感觉也蛮合曲 最高难度这么放也可以的吧。。

好图>w< 感觉SB贼神
Hollow Wings
m4m

Summer

  1. 什么,看了第一遍啥都没挑出来...
  2. 00:00:412 (1) - 像这些特地为跟violin的滑条,我觉得sv还是太低了,建议调到1.5左右。
  3. 01:11:716 (1) - 换成两个note跟vocal好了。01:25:629 (1) - 同理。好吧其实跟guitar也无妨。
  4. 01:36:716 (1) - 不做个s形什么的么。
  5. 01:40:846 (5) - 换成两个note跟guitar。。。
  6. 居然有sb,射。

Yuki's Hard

  1. 00:00:194 (1) - 这个显然arrow那个tick是重音,note+1/2slider比较好吧?
  2. 00:10:846 (1,2) - 这里2还是跳出去跟violin比较好。
  3. 00:54:325 (1) - 这里好像过于安静了。。。arrow上加个whistle你听听如何?
  4. 01:09:107 (1,2) - 这个跳好像还是有点大,建议1移到272,220,或者2移到136,256.
  5. 01:13:455 (1) - 从这里的kiai开始whistle少了,hs听上去很单薄,随便加一点?
  6. 爷爷,不同sb,射。

Normal

  1. 巨乳妹子我喜欢啊。。。等下。。。kiai里sb的第一张图,好像是男主正在袭胸啊,这真的大丈夫?!
  2. 01:15:846 (3,4) - norma别搞这种overlap。
  3. 爷爷,吓尿我了。

Gao's Easy

  1. 00:49:107 (1) - move the slider's head to 318,148 and you can avoid the overlapping.
  2. 01:43:020 (3) - the last obj in other diffs are all end at 01:43:998, maybe this slider as well.
  3. 我跟你们说,运动系的,赞。
不惜拆包也要做sb,黄油大神们你们赢了。

good luck
DreaM117er
發懶報到 :)

[Easy]

  • 00:52:585 (1,2) - 這個滑條00:52:585 (1) - 沒有要順著下一個包嗎??
  1. 看起來沒什麼好抓的 :)
[Normal]

  • 00:48:238 (1) - NC去掉
    00:56:933 (2,3) - 我覺得這裡1/1滑條加circle比較合曲,試試看
    01:03:890 (2,3) - 這裡也是^
[Hard]
  1. 沒有可挑的 :)
[Insane]

  • 00:30:629 (2,3,4) - 建議不要把滑條疊在一起...
    00:34:107 (2,3,4) - ^
  1. 依然沒什麼可以抓的 :)

飛吧肯求 :)
KaedekaShizuru
[General]
妹妹呢!不应该是5diff吗!

[Summer]
澄空好萌啊
00:02:151 (1,2,3,4) - 太单调 把00:03:020 (3,4) 换成4个circle做小跳 感觉至少应该换掉00:03:020 (3)
00:06:498 (3,4) - ↑
00:09:977 (3,4) - ↑
过多的重复梗显得boring
00:14:977 (3,4,5) - 像这样的节奏重复实在是太多了 你可以选择几个位置改成三连+1circle
http://puu.sh/m76Ql/6451ef238b.jpg
然后到这里 01:01:933 (3,4,5) - 像这样的可以试试这个http://puu.sh/m76SU/6c07b2bd70.jpg
01:07:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这串跳的vocal的音调是提升 不必从一开始就跳那么大 推荐逐渐加大DS
01:08:890 (4,5,1) - 我推荐yukiyuki的摆法 一来01:09:107 (1) 本身时间就很短 加速其实并没有明显的体感 二来这里是进refrain的地方 可以适当加大难度
01:12:585 (3,4) - same with 00:02:151 (1,2,3,4) 同时为了避免过长的连跳 可以把01:13:455 (1,2) 换成slider
01:26:498 (3,4) - ↑
01:31:716 (3,4) - same with 00:02:151 (1,2,3,4)
01:33:455 (3,4) - ↑
01:35:846 (7,8,1) - same with 01:08:890 (4,5,1);当然如果你想要保留的话 1.2X太低 没有加速的实感

[Yuki]
汐也好萌啊好想娶回家 但是yukiyuki更萌=3=
break我觉得没什么必要
00:39:977 (5,1) - nazi一下 感觉有点不太平行
00:50:411 (3,1) - 再nazi一下 有点歪
00:54:325 (1) - 推荐减速X0.6 不要折返 不过不知道hard里能不能这样
别的没有啦

[Normal]
00:00:846 (2,3) - 很明显你follow的是vocal 这里突然切到乐器上太突然了
00:04:324 (2,3) - 同↑
00:07:802 (2,3) - ↑
00:11:280 (2,3) - ↑
以上4条是凑数的你不改也无所谓

[Gao]
00:52:585 (1,2) - 提一下 不太舒服 不改也行
01:43:020 (3) - 尾端 wrong snap,应在01:43:998

[Storyboard]
我强迫症又犯了
四个diff的都在编排上是一样的毛病
拿澄空举例
Sora1和BG3在主歌居然来回切换了3次???爷爷 要不是熟人可能我就要骂敷衍了事了……就算能用的CG不多 但其实还有能用的不是吗?
比如裙子被迷の妖风掀起来后慌忙盖下去撅着小嘴http://puu.sh/m78Qd/e18ca55082.jpg
两人坐在神社谈心http://puu.sh/m78Ut/e8a31681aa.jpg
还有结局那张http://puu.sh/m78X0/ccc921bf52.jpg
别直接拿来用 我从游戏里截的图
别的diff也是 随便翻翻每个妹子能用的CG都有……呃……汐也有一大把CG可以用 叶和鸫就算没多少 也别用来回切换 我觉得就像是在敷衍
顺便每个diff结束的时候我推荐渐变成游戏的title画面 去掉左边的选项和右下角的字(如果你能找到合适的图的话 强烈推荐)
http://puu.sh/m79az/d8855ccb6c.jpg

Hollow Wings wrote:

不惜拆包也要做sb,黄油大神们你们赢了。
毕竟真爱
Koiyuki
@ttm: no change, 后面那个是故意放的一个小跳
@mollon: 没办法改,那是红线前的
@kksr: nazi fixed

Hollow Wings wrote:

Yuki's Hard

  1. 00:00:194 (1) - 这个显然arrow那个tick是重音,note+1/2slider比较好吧?开头速度不好改,这样不容易断
  2. 00:10:846 (1,2) - 这里2还是跳出去跟violin比较好。k
  3. 00:54:325 (1) - 这里好像过于安静了。。。arrow上加个whistle你听听如何?k
  4. 01:09:107 (1,2) - 这个跳好像还是有点大,建议1移到272,220,或者2移到136,256.不用,我鼠标都随手接
  5. 01:13:455 (1) - 从这里的kiai开始whistle少了,hs听上去很单薄,随便加一点?copy的
  6. 爷爷,不同sb,射。
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368,171,51498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,168,51607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Kencho
小高拜託了我幫他改

TT Mouse wrote:



first
[Summer]


01:23:455 (4,1) - 近了有点,01:23:890这里音这么重,拉远了能较好体现出来 加大了一點點

01:30:846 (1) - 01:32:151 (4) -分别 ctrl+g? 这样同向略别扭 特意的啦

01:36:498 漏了鼓,不过无所谓,强调voacl就好 本來加了,然後打出梗了,覺得還是不加好


od7,pp美丽 DT後就很多了,OD8 DT我打不了

[Gao's Easy]
00:13:455 (3,1) - 没在一条线上,(xixi)fixed

Mollon wrote:

Easy
00:07:368 (1) - 可能因为DS的原因滑条要贴这么近,但感觉和之前的物件间距相比有点近不是太好看,反正下一个滑条头在上一个滑条尾,感觉把1转一下横着一点不要包可能好一点 我覺得這樣還挺好看的
00:38:672 (1) - 要不要考虑包下前面的4 刻意包不好看
00:52:585 (1,2) - 如果要包的话,包的弧度修一下下 改了
01:06:933 (2) - 有点低 好吧,弄高了點
01:36:716 (4,1) - 有点半包不包的感觉 他應該是包了前面的滑條

Normal
00:41:064 (3) - 要不要稍微转下滑条尾包4 並沒有包的意思
01:15:846 (3,4) - 这里应该是有DS的关系和为了配合1的形状不过还是感觉N里这种不怎么常见。。 改了
01:30:846 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 也是感觉有一点挤,发现CS3.2不涨星星的样子。。属于个人YY 其实也没啥影响。。 我也喜歡用CS3.2的,但發現星星不漲,還是用3好了

Summer
01:03:020 (1) - 这里不知道是不是要包01:03:890 (4) - 的尾,要的话就调整一下1,不包就不管啦 不是包4的
01:09:107 (1) - 感觉可以像M酱diff一样拆两个单个note变三连加单戳 然后把后面一个放跳一点 太難啦
01:43:020 (1,2) - (纯属YY)感觉可以考虑看看摆成不折返然后两个短滑条,位置还是和现在的1 2一样 放两遍 感觉也蛮合曲 最高难度这么放也可以的吧。。 良心就不放短滑條了

好图>w< 感觉SB贼神 >w<

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

Summer

  1. 什么,看了第一遍啥都没挑出来...
  2. 00:00:412 (1) - 像这些特地为跟violin的滑条,我觉得sv还是太低了,建议调到1.5左右。 1.2x+NC我覺得已經夠了
  3. 01:11:716 (1) - 换成两个note跟vocal好了。01:25:629 (1) - 同理。好吧其实跟guitar也无妨。 這是送分梗,嗯
  4. 01:36:716 (1) - 不做个s形什么的么。 反而覺得直線能強調(其實是現在不喜歡蛇形滑條
  5. 01:40:846 (5) - 换成两个note跟guitar。。。送分,嗯
  6. 居然有sb,射。

Normal

  1. 巨乳妹子我喜欢啊。。。等下。。。kiai里sb的第一张图,好像是男主正在袭胸啊,这真的大丈夫?!噫,這種程度我想應該沒事吧/w\
  2. 01:15:846 (3,4) - norma别搞这种overlap。 ok
  3. 爷爷,吓尿我了。

Gao's Easy

  1. 00:49:107 (1) - move the slider's head to 318,148 and you can avoid the overlapping. fixed
  2. 01:43:020 (3) - the last obj in other diffs are all end at 01:43:998, maybe this slider as well.
  3. 我跟你们说,运动系的,赞。

不惜拆包也要做sb,黄油大神们你们赢了。

good luck

DreaM117er wrote:

發懶報到 :)

[Easy]

  • 00:52:585 (1,2) - 這個滑條00:52:585 (1) - 沒有要順著下一個包嗎??

    [Normal][notice][list:1337]
    00:48:238 (1) - NC去掉 ok
    00:56:933 (2,3) - 我覺得這裡1/1滑條加circle比較合曲,試試看 好,用了1/1滑條+圓圈
    01:03:890 (2,3) - 這裡也是^

[Insane]

  • 00:30:629 (2,3,4) - 建議不要把滑條疊在一起... 好吧
    00:34:107 (2,3,4) - ^
  1. 依然沒什麼可以抓的 :)

飛吧肯求 :)

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
妹妹呢!不应该是5diff吗!(沒法推的我就不算啦,何況沒CG

[Summer]
澄空好萌啊
00:02:151 (1,2,3,4) - 太单调 把00:03:020 (3,4) 换成4个circle做小跳 感觉至少应该换掉00:03:020 (3)
00:06:498 (3,4) - ↑
00:09:977 (3,4) - ↑
过多的重复梗显得boring 小跳的圓圈沒pp又會出100,考慮打圖的角度,我還是用回滑條
00:14:977 (3,4,5) - 像这样的节奏重复实在是太多了 你可以选择几个位置改成三连+1circle 不改,不想加難度了,而且後面也有這種組合啊
http://puu.sh/m76Ql/6451ef238b.jpg
然后到这里 01:01:933 (3,4,5) - 像这样的可以试试这个http://puu.sh/m76SU/6c07b2bd70.jpg 1/4滑條曾經想用過,但發現DT還是略坑,不改了
01:07:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这串跳的vocal的音调是提升 不必从一开始就跳那么大 推荐逐渐加大DS 好,現在整個排列改了下
01:08:890 (4,5,1) - 我推荐yukiyuki的摆法 一来01:09:107 (1) 本身时间就很短 加速其实并没有明显的体感 二来这里是进refrain的地方 可以适当加大难度 好,上面幾個都這樣說,改了
01:12:585 (3,4) - same with 00:02:151 (1,2,3,4) 同时为了避免过长的连跳 可以把01:13:455 (1,2) 换成slider no need,現在的排列也很順啊,而且不想破壞滑條梗
01:26:498 (3,4) - ↑
01:31:716 (3,4) - same with 00:02:151 (1,2,3,4)
01:33:455 (3,4) - ↑
01:35:846 (7,8,1) - same with 01:08:890 (4,5,1);当然如果你想要保留的话 1.2X太低 没有加速的实感 和上面回復HW的一樣,1.2x+NC其實已經能突顯到加速,太快的話還容易斷

[Normal]
00:00:846 (2,3) - 很明显你follow的是vocal 这里突然切到乐器上太突然了 噫,我覺得跟提琴沒什麼問題啊
00:04:324 (2,3) - 同↑
00:07:802 (2,3) - ↑
00:11:280 (2,3) - ↑
以上4条是凑数的你不改也无所谓

[Gao]
00:52:585 (1,2) - 提一下 不太舒服 不改也行
01:43:020 (3) - 尾端 wrong snap,应在01:43:998 fixed

[Storyboard]
我强迫症又犯了
四个diff的都在编排上是一样的毛病
拿澄空举例
Sora1和BG3在主歌居然来回切换了3次???爷爷 要不是熟人可能我就要骂敷衍了事了……就算能用的CG不多 但其实还有能用的不是吗?
比如裙子被迷の妖风掀起来后慌忙盖下去撅着小嘴http://puu.sh/m78Qd/e18ca55082.jpg
两人坐在神社谈心http://puu.sh/m78Ut/e8a31681aa.jpg
还有结局那张http://puu.sh/m78X0/ccc921bf52.jpg
别直接拿来用 我从游戏里截的图
别的diff也是 随便翻翻每个妹子能用的CG都有……呃……汐也有一大把CG可以用 叶和鸫就算没多少 也别用来回切换 我觉得就像是在敷衍
顺便每个diff结束的时候我推荐渐变成游戏的title画面 去掉左边的选项和右下角的字(如果你能找到合适的图的话 强烈推荐)
http://puu.sh/m79az/d8855ccb6c.jpg
SB這裡請允許我再弄一會,我看看怎麼改吧

Thanks your modding^^
Konge
#(不是很懂你们黄油玩家)
moonlightleaf
#(不是很懂你们黄油玩家)
Rizia
#(不是很懂你们黄油玩家)

[Insane]
  1. 整段kiai的紅線都加whistle? 像01:11:716 (1,2,3,4) - 一樣
  2. 01:18:672 (1,2,3) - 我的想法是這裡歌聲比01:16:933 (1,2,3) - 強得多 所以應該是01:18:672 (1,2,3) - 的間距比01:16:933 (1,2,3) - 高 一些建議:
  3. 01:20:846 (2) - 個人覺得這裡用1/2slider會比較合曲
  4. 01:36:498 - 聽到有鼓 試試加一個circle在x304 y200(或者其他你想要你的地) 然後01:36:716 (1) - 向左下跟01:36:064 (1) - 錯開也不錯


[Gao's Easy]
  1. 無限update


call me back
另外這歌出full ver的話叫我
Topic Starter
Kencho

Rizia wrote:

#(不是很懂你们黄油玩家)

[Insane]
  1. 整段kiai的紅線都加whistle? 像01:11:716 (1,2,3,4) - 一樣
  2. 01:18:672 (1,2,3) - 我的想法是這裡歌聲比01:16:933 (1,2,3) - 強得多 所以應該是01:18:672 (1,2,3) - 的間距比01:16:933 (1,2,3) - 高 一些建議: 我嘗試了一下感覺flow有點卡,然後整個部分換了個排版,加大了01:18:672 (1,2,3) - 的間距
  3. 01:20:846 (2) - 個人覺得這裡用1/2slider會比較合曲 特意放了個跳不然沒有I標了,感覺圓圈也合曲的
  4. 01:36:498 - 聽到有鼓 試試加一個circle在x304 y200(或者其他你想要你的地) 然後01:36:716 (1) - 向左下跟01:36:064 (1) - 錯開也不錯 大家都說加個圓圈好,那我就加吧,然後換了個排列


[Gao's Easy]
  1. 無限update 重新上傳了下,問題應該解決了


call me back 感謝柚子的mod
另外這歌出full ver的話叫我 full其實已經有了,但op的full被dmca了,我怕ed開full也會所以才開了short=.=
Shad0w1and
#(不是很懂你们黄油玩家)
yf_bmp
好图>w< 感觉SB贼神
IamKwaN
I love Kalafina.

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Kencho
I check the metadata, now change song title to this
Please redownload :)
mintong89
>_< Kencho 又要rank图了!!!
好图 :)
Rizia
nice
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