Sonnyc forced me to take a look at this xD
[Lunatic]
* 01:13:327 (4) - 01:20:386 (1) - Inconsistent NC use.
* 00:34:724 - 00:35:386 - these piano sounds, are represented with whistles on 00:48:842 - 00:49:503 -
* 00:30:312 (3,4,5,6) - 00:32:297 (4,5,6) - Why are these represented differently? One is a train, and the other one is triangle jump.
* 00:29:430 (1,2,3) - This is the only one you didn't make 00:30:092 - this vocal clickable unlike 00:31:856 - 00:33:621 - 00:37:150 - 00:40:680 - 00:44:209 - 00:45:974 - 00:47:739 - 00:51:268 - 00:53:033 - 00:54:797 -
* 01:04:724 (1,2,3) - This have a big jump pattern to emphasize the sounds, but why not on 01:06:489 (1,2,3) - ?
* 01:16:194 - There's no sound here, so might be better to make 01:15:974 (3,4) - into a 1/1 slider.
* 01:23:474 (1,2,3) - Seems way too large compared to the rest of your map. Around 2.50 would work better.
[Hard]
* 00:01:195 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why not use same NC term as Lunatic?
* 00:18:621 (1) - 00:22:150 (6) - 00:25:680 (5) - Inconsistent NC
* 00:48:621 (6) - Need NC
* 00:59:430 - If you're going to neglect this downbeat, it's better to neglect 00:58:106 - this beat and extend 00:57:665 (1) - to 00:58:327 (2) - to represent the long vocal instead.
* 01:23:033 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing on a linear pattern isn't good, as it breaks the flow by suddenly accelerating/breaking the cursor speed without direction change.
[Lily Bread's Normal]
* 00:18:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - As the easiest difficulty, it's better to avoid such a long 1/2 train. Try
http://puu.sh/pFzQx/736162a8d3.jpg this instead.
* 00:27:665 (1) - This spinner is alright. But it feels super weird to have the next measure empty entirely. So rather than a spinner, how about filling it like this:
http://puu.sh/pFzXw/3b46b45487.jpg* 00:57:665 (1,2,3) - You have already ignored a lot of important drums to represent the vocal better. Then let's remove 01:00:092 (4) - this too. This also makes the train less long.
* 01:01:194 - From here, the rhythm looks very inconsistent with what you did to represent the vocals on 00:57:665 - . You ignored 00:58:327 - this to represent 00:58:768 - this vocal, but 01:01:856 - 01:02:077 - you did it in the opposite way here. You ignored 00:59:430 - this beat to represent 00:59:209 - this vocal better, but 01:02:739 - 01:02:959 - this is just the opposite. Please make them consistent.
* 01:16:636 (3) - You can also use one circle on the head to reduce the length of the train.
* 01:20:827 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - This is too much for the easiest diff. Please, reduce the beats somehow. You can simply do this:
http://puu.sh/pFAha/75cd9c7d2e.jpg* 01:29:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:18:842 (1,2,3,4,5) -
* Why not add a spinner at the end like other diffs?