hi m4m
This is where I say goodbye for I cease to exist from here on; 1 kds = 1 prayer. I hope my last words were helpful to you. GL!
Everlasting Snow]
I think you should used another BG, doesnt feel right to use a touhou BG imo even though it is from touhou. https://osu.ppy.sh/b/929297 <--- One of these types of BGs would suit it nicely.
- 00:11:550 (1,2) - Isnt this easily misreadable as 00:10:667 (4,5) - are half a beat away and the distance between are much less even though these 2 notes are 1/4 beat away
- 01:08:197 (1,2) - I know you made the jump for emphasis but I stilll think you should decrease it a bit since the overall volume at this point is low. It feels kinda forced to me imo
- 02:49:844 (1) - NC?
- 03:23:197 (3,1) - I think it would be better if you just stacked these
- 04:06:609 (1,2,1,2) - I really think you should make these 1/4 sliders to match the drums. imo it seems like you wanted to use 1/8 sliders just because you could, 1/8 sliders like these are usually coupled with the combo break sound ;w;
- 04:04:844 (1,2) - I this jump pattern I think it would play better if this pair went up then down instead of down then up, I feel like it would flow better after coming from the previous pair. I'm too lazy to draw a diagram or anything of the sorts so I hope you get what I'm trying to say
- 04:14:726 (3,4) - Why is this jump so big? Oo it doesnt feel right at alll
- 04:29:550 (3,4,5) - Move 4 and 5 out just a little bit to make it slightly more visible http://puu.sh/o2wun/264b9cf100.jpg
- 05:29:020 (2) - Surely the slider should start here listening to the music, its on the red tick on all the patterns after though you did do it twice here 05:34:138 soooo idk. Maybe im deaf and I can't hear what youre trying to follow