M4M yo!
00:04:491 (1,2) - These sliders seem a bit too far apart for a 1/4 timing gap, especially since its the very beginning of the song.
00:05:373 (2) - Listening to the music, this slider seems like it would be more fitting as two separate circles, in a line like the very beginning
00:24:609 (6,4,5) - Not just these mini kick sliders, but throughout the whole beginning, I feel that these 1/8th beat snap sliders are a bit unnecessary. Maybe a few would be fine, but having them persist throughout the whole intro just seems like a bit overkill. It would also be nice if you included them at the end or in other parts of the song as well for consistency.
00:35:903 (5,6) - These are extremely hard to read, especially since they are almost double the distance from the 00:35:726 (4) - as 00:35:550 (3) - is
00:39:079 (1) - Notice the line that the bend back for the slider makes. I would put 00:39:609 (2,4) - these two circles in line with the straight tail for aesthetic effect.
00:39:609 (2,4) - I would also say put the circle in line with slider here.
01:12:785 (10) - I think it would make this a better jump if you put this farther and ctrl +g it to reverse the slider. That way it's a far jump with another short jump back.
01:20:373 (3) - Move this slider slightly down so you can tell that there are stacked notes underneath. Right now its kind of hard to tell.
02:11:197 (3) - ^
02:12:609 (3) - ^^
02:37:667 (1,1,2) - Gave me goosebumps XD so freakin' cool
02:46:668 (4,5,6,8) - Layer this triple stream and slider like the one before it 02:46:668 (4,5,6,8) - for consistency
02:55:844 (8) - I think it would be more natural for this to be a jump rather than a stack
03:11:903 (4) - Extend this slider to blue tick mark and pattern it so its close to 03:12:432 (1) - since there's no music at the end of the slider
04:05:550 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Just a personal opinion, but I think these would look way cool if you continued with the pattern from before of having the NC in the middle and jumping out, all with the NC in the center.
04:13:667 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Super hard to read
04:19:314 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ Like the idea of going reversing the order tho, just kind of hard to see
04:24:256 (1,2) - Should make these jumps like 04:23:550 (1,2,1,2) -
04:42:256 (4) - Same as 03:11:903 (4) -
05:01:667 (1,2) - More natural as jumps. Also the hitsound is missing from these two
05:30:432 (4) - I think there are more sounds in music to map to than just slider here
05:38:903 (2) - Sound better if slider is shortened to red tick mark in the middle and another circle added were slider currently ends.
Overall, I loved the map! Super fun to play with all the short sliders. I just thought the beginning was a bit odd with the 1/8 divisor stuff and some parts were hard to read. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the final product!
00:04:491 (1,2) - These sliders seem a bit too far apart for a 1/4 timing gap, especially since its the very beginning of the song.
00:05:373 (2) - Listening to the music, this slider seems like it would be more fitting as two separate circles, in a line like the very beginning
00:24:609 (6,4,5) - Not just these mini kick sliders, but throughout the whole beginning, I feel that these 1/8th beat snap sliders are a bit unnecessary. Maybe a few would be fine, but having them persist throughout the whole intro just seems like a bit overkill. It would also be nice if you included them at the end or in other parts of the song as well for consistency.
00:35:903 (5,6) - These are extremely hard to read, especially since they are almost double the distance from the 00:35:726 (4) - as 00:35:550 (3) - is
00:39:079 (1) - Notice the line that the bend back for the slider makes. I would put 00:39:609 (2,4) - these two circles in line with the straight tail for aesthetic effect.
00:39:609 (2,4) - I would also say put the circle in line with slider here.
01:12:785 (10) - I think it would make this a better jump if you put this farther and ctrl +g it to reverse the slider. That way it's a far jump with another short jump back.
01:20:373 (3) - Move this slider slightly down so you can tell that there are stacked notes underneath. Right now its kind of hard to tell.
02:11:197 (3) - ^
02:12:609 (3) - ^^
02:37:667 (1,1,2) - Gave me goosebumps XD so freakin' cool
02:46:668 (4,5,6,8) - Layer this triple stream and slider like the one before it 02:46:668 (4,5,6,8) - for consistency
02:55:844 (8) - I think it would be more natural for this to be a jump rather than a stack
03:11:903 (4) - Extend this slider to blue tick mark and pattern it so its close to 03:12:432 (1) - since there's no music at the end of the slider
04:05:550 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Just a personal opinion, but I think these would look way cool if you continued with the pattern from before of having the NC in the middle and jumping out, all with the NC in the center.
04:13:667 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Super hard to read
04:19:314 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ Like the idea of going reversing the order tho, just kind of hard to see
04:24:256 (1,2) - Should make these jumps like 04:23:550 (1,2,1,2) -
04:42:256 (4) - Same as 03:11:903 (4) -
05:01:667 (1,2) - More natural as jumps. Also the hitsound is missing from these two
05:30:432 (4) - I think there are more sounds in music to map to than just slider here
05:38:903 (2) - Sound better if slider is shortened to red tick mark in the middle and another circle added were slider currently ends.
Overall, I loved the map! Super fun to play with all the short sliders. I just thought the beginning was a bit odd with the 1/8 divisor stuff and some parts were hard to read. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the final product!