community forum

Hanatan - Attakain Dakara

posted
Total Posts
131
show more
Dyl-Byl
Hi! From my queue!
[General]
Set the AR rate down. When I say down, I mean down.
[Modding Itself]
00:04:229 (1) - Place this close to the last slider.
That's right! Theres no mistakes for a long time until finally...
00:56:905 (1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't place the sliders like that.
01:00:787 (2) - This slider should be more symmetrical.
Sorry for the short mod but theres really not much mistakes.
Left
제삼자의 입장서 모딩을 해봤습니다~

우선, 스토리보드에서 반짝반짝 하는 효과가 있으니 Song Setup > Design에서 Display epilepsy warning 을 체크해줍시다.

[Normal]
전체적으로 뉴콤보가 불규칙합니다. 특별한 이유가 없는 이상 일정한 주기로 써주시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:02:905 (3,1) - 애매하게 끝부분이 겹쳤네요
00:24:082 (4,1) - 이런 오버랩은 피하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.. 00:30:435 (3,1) - 이런건 흔히 쓰는 거니 괜찮을 거 같습니다 (노말서는 저도 잘 모르겠네요)
01:02:552 (1,2) - 불완전한 담요 http://puu.sh/lUIKF/90bc97cbb3.jpg
01:05:375 (1,2) - 마찬가지
01:06:080 (2,1,1) - 이렇게 두개 노트 끝이 스냅되어 있지 않다고 AiMod 에 뜨네요 체크해보시길.
그 외 AiMod 참고

[Hard]
00:04:317 (1,2) - 이렇게 두개를 담요시킬려고 했던 거 같은데 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129572 불완전하게 된 것 같습니다. 대칭시킨 반대편도 마찬가지네요.
00:06:258 (2,3,4) - 아마 담요를 생각하셨을 거라고 생각합니다(?) 두 쪽 다 블랭킷이 안되어있네요... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129577
그 이후에도 어째서인지는 모르겠지만 블랭킷들이 조금씩 한쪽으로 기울어져 있네요...체크해 보셔야 할 것 같습니다.
00:18:964 (3) - 이건 개인적인 거다만 플레이할때 하드에서는 상당히 불편할 거 같네요...하지만 무시하셔도 상관 없을 것 같습니다.
00:23:552 (6,2) - 좋아보이지 않는 오버랩입니다.
00:35:376 (1,2) - 디스턴스를 너무 짜게 주신 것 같습니다. 00:35:199 (5,1) - 얘와 시간간격은 두배인데 디스턴스는 같다니요...01:11:375 (3,1) - 이정도는 주셔야 할 것 같습니다.

[Left's Insane]
00:17:199 (2,3) - 슬라와 연타사이의 디스턴스가 앞에비해 너무 줄어든 거 같습니다...조금 늘리는 것이..
00:23:552 (8,9) - 연타가 조금 삐뚤어져 있네요
00:23:552 (8,9,1,2) - 블랭킷
00:27:258 (2,3) - 마찬가지
00:30:788 (4,1) - 마찬가지
00:43:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 디스턴스가 갑자기 앞과는 다르게 일정하게 흘러가서 노잼인거 같습니다.


00:09:258 - (?뭐지)타이밍 지점이 두개가 같은곳에 되어있습니다. 하나는 삭제하셔야 할 것 같습니다.

[Rose's Insane]
00:02:905 (1,2) - 이것과 00:04:317 (2,3) - 이것의 거리차이, 이건 확실하지 않은 부분이지만
00:05:729 (1,2) - 이 둘의 거리차이는 명백히 너무 가깝습니다. 조금 늘려주셔야 할 것 같습니다.
전체적으로 디스턴스에 좀 신경을 써주시는 편이 좋을 것 같습니다. 노래 분위기에 따라 조절했다고 하기에 너무 디스턴스가 좁거나 넓은 부분이 있습니다. 특별한 의도가 있다면 무시해주세요
00:06:435 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129622 담요

[Soup Tabetai]
00:32:552 (1,4) - 충분히 피할 수 있었던 오버랩이라고 생각합니다...모양이 그렇게 이쁘게 나오진 않으므로 피하는 게 어떨까 생각합니다.
00:48:611 (3,4,5) - 이쪽 공간은 어차피 비어있으니 자연스러운 흐름이 되게 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129654 이렇게 (위쪽 블랭킷은 맞추지 않았습니다 이렇게 한다면 따라서 움직여야 하겠죠?) 맞추시는게 더 안정적이지 않을까 생각됩니다.


ㅋㅋㅋ http://puu.sh/lULqw/092944b172.zip 수정했습니다.
Topic Starter
Down

Left wrote:

우선, 스토리보드에서 반짝반짝 하는 효과가 있으니 Song Setup > Design에서 Display epilepsy warning 을 체크해줍시다.

[Normal]
전체적으로 뉴콤보가 불규칙합니다. 특별한 이유가 없는 이상 일정한 주기로 써주시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:02:905 (3,1) - 애매하게 끝부분이 겹쳤네요 이부분 고치기가 너무 어렵네요.. 다음에 이부분에대한 모딩이 또 오면 그부분자체를 다시만들어야 될듯
00:24:082 (4,1) - 이런 오버랩은 피하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.. 00:30:435 (3,1) - 이런건 흔히 쓰는 거니 괜찮을 거 같습니다 (노말서는 저도 잘 모르겠네요) 슬라머리를 꺾어버렸습니다.
01:02:552 (1,2) - 불완전한 담요 http://puu.sh/lUIKF/90bc97cbb3.jpg fix
01:05:375 (1,2) - 마찬가지 fix
01:06:080 (2,1,1) - 이렇게 두개 노트 끝이 스냅되어 있지 않다고 AiMod 에 뜨네요 체크해보시길.//아무리해도 없어지질않아욬ㅋㅋ
그 외 AiMod 참고

[Hard]
00:04:317 (1,2) - 이렇게 두개를 담요시킬려고 했던 거 같은데 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129572 불완전하게 된 것 같습니다. 대칭시킨 반대편도 마찬가지네요.fix
00:06:258 (2,3,4) - 아마 담요를 생각하셨을 거라고 생각합니다(?) 두 쪽 다 블랭킷이 안되어있네요... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129577 fix
그 이후에도 어째서인지는 모르겠지만 블랭킷들이 조금씩 한쪽으로 기울어져 있네요...체크해 보셔야 할 것 같습니다. 아마 완전하지못한 슬라를 계속 복붙해서 그런거같네요. 보이는건 계속 수정해 나가겠습니다.
00:18:964 (3) - 이건 개인적인 거다만 플레이할때 하드에서는 상당히 불편할 거 같네요...하지만 무시하셔도 상관 없을 것 같습니다. 고치기가 어렵습니다 ㅠ
00:23:552 (6,2) - 좋아보이지 않는 오버랩입니다. 다른곳으로 보냈습니다.
00:35:376 (1,2) - 디스턴스를 너무 짜게 주신 것 같습니다. 00:35:199 (5,1) - 얘와 시간간격은 두배인데 디스턴스는 같다니요...01:11:375 (3,1) - 이정도는 주셔야 할 것 같습니다. fix

[Left's Insane]
자아성찰이라니 lol

[Soup Tabetai]
00:32:552 (1,4) - 충분히 피할 수 있었던 오버랩이라고 생각합니다...모양이 그렇게 이쁘게 나오진 않으므로 피하는 게 어떨까 생각합니다. fix
00:48:611 (3,4,5) - 이쪽 공간은 어차피 비어있으니 자연스러운 흐름이 되게 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129654 이렇게 (위쪽 블랭킷은 맞추지 않았습니다 이렇게 한다면 따라서 움직여야 하겠죠?) 맞추시는게 더 안정적이지 않을까 생각됩니다. 이부분은 동선보단 모양을보고 만들었기 때문에 두겠습니다.


ㅋㅋㅋ http://puu.sh/lULqw/092944b172.zip 수정했습니다. 넣었습니다.
감사합니다!
Reillia
노래감사합니다
Topic Starter
Down

[C u r i] wrote:

노래감사합니다
오신김에모딩을!
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ;
Cellina
엑라 만들어도됨?
Topic Starter
Down

Reana wrote:

엑라 만들어도됨?
이맵에 엑라넣긴 좀 힘들듯하네요.
그리고 더이상의 겟난도 받기엔 부담스럽습니다.
죄송합니다 :o
Cellina

그리고 태그에 rose pacifica left 넣어주세요
Reillia
이거 최저난이도 별이 1.9이하인거로 알고있습니당.. 2성이었나? 무시하셈
Topic Starter
Down

[C u r i] wrote:

이거 최저난이도 별이 1.9이하인거로 알고있습니당.. 2성이었나? 무시하셈
2성으로 알고있습니당
Left

Down wrote:

[C u r i] wrote:

이거 최저난이도 별이 1.9이하인거로 알고있습니당.. 2성이었나? 무시하셈
2성으로 알고있습니당
근데 AiMod에 그 이지/노말 필요하다고 뜨긴 하던데 무시해도 되는걸까요
Cellina
난이도 스프레드상 그냥 이지 하나 더 만드시는게 좋습니다
Topic Starter
Down

Reana wrote:

난이도 스프레드상 그냥 이지 하나 더 만드시는게 좋습니다

Left wrote:

[C u r i] wrote:

이거 최저난이도 별이 1.9이하인거로 알고있습니당.. 2성이었나? 무시하셈
근데 AiMod에 그 이지/노말 필요하다고 뜨긴 하던데 무시해도 되는걸까요
만들었습니다~~~
(어쩌다 6diff가 되버린거지..)
Rose Pacifica

Left wrote:

제삼자의 입장서 모딩을 해봤습니다~


[Rose's Insane]
00:02:905 (1,2) - 이것과 00:04:317 (2,3) - 이것의 거리차이, 이건 확실하지 않은 부분이지만
00:05:729 (1,2) - 이 둘의 거리차이는 명백히 너무 가깝습니다. 조금 늘려주셔야 할 것 같습니다. fix
전체적으로 디스턴스에 좀 신경을 써주시는 편이 좋을 것 같습니다. 노래 분위기에 따라 조절했다고 하기에 너무 디스턴스가 좁거나 넓은 부분이 있습니다. 특별한 의도가 있다면 무시해주세요
00:06:435 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4129622 담요 fix

모딩해주신것 외애도 연타좀 수정했어요
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Attakain Dakara.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61140
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 35729
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Attakain Dakara
TitleUnicode:あったかいんだからぁ♪
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Down
Version:Rose's Insane
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:851518
BeatmapSetID:388403

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,51258,55952
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1494,352.941176470588,4,2,1,65,1,0
1582,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
2552,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
2641,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
2905,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
2993,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
4317,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
4405,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
5376,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
5464,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
5729,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
5817,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
6435,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
6523,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
7141,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
7846,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
7935,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
8199,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
8288,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
8552,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
8641,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
8905,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
8993,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
9258,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
9346,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
9611,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
9699,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
9964,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
10052,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
10317,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
10405,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
10493,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
10670,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
10758,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
11023,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
11111,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
11376,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
11464,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
11729,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
11817,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
12082,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
12170,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
12435,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
12523,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
13493,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
14199,-100,4,3,2,65,0,0
25493,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
26905,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
26993,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
27964,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
28052,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
28317,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
28405,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
29729,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
29817,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
30788,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
30876,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
31141,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
31229,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
31846,-100,4,3,5,65,0,0
31935,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
32552,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
32641,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
32905,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
32993,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
33258,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
33346,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
33611,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
33699,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
33964,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
34052,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
34317,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
34405,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
34670,-100,4,3,6,65,0,0
34758,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
35023,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
35111,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
35376,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
35464,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
35729,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
35817,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
36082,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
36170,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
36435,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
36523,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
36611,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,65,0,0
38199,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
39699,-100,4,3,2,65,0,0
39876,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
41111,-100,4,3,2,65,0,0
41288,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
41905,-100,4,3,2,65,0,0
41993,-100,4,3,1,5,0,0
42082,-83.3333333333333,4,3,1,65,0,0
42258,-83.3333333333333,4,3,2,65,0,0
42435,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
48788,-133.333333333333,4,3,3,65,0,0
51258,352.941176470588,4,3,1,65,1,0
56552,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,65,0,0
56728,-133.333333333333,4,3,3,65,0,0
56816,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,5,0,0
56905,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
56993,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
57258,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
57346,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
57610,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
57699,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
57963,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
58052,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
58316,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
58405,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
58669,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
58757,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
59022,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
59110,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
59375,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
59463,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
59728,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
59816,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
60081,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
60169,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
60434,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
60522,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
60787,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
60875,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
61140,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
61228,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
61493,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
61581,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
61669,-100,4,3,1,75,0,0
61846,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
61934,-100,4,3,1,65,0,0
62022,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
62199,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
62287,-100,4,3,3,65,0,0
62552,-100,4,3,1,75,0,1
68199,-100,4,3,1,75,0,1
68728,-100,4,3,1,75,0,1
69169,-100,4,3,1,5,0,1
69269,-100,4,3,1,75,0,1
73140,-100,4,3,3,75,0,1
73846,-100,4,3,1,100,0,0
74552,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 0,255,0

[HitObjects]
76,60,1494,6,0,L|64:164,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,208,1846,2,0,L|186:123,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,288,2199,2,0,P|180:308|236:300,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,228,2552,2,0,P|316:208|260:216,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,136,2905,6,0,P|431:107|452:55,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,3258,2,0,P|468:256|503:300,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,380,3611,2,0,L|264:372,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,336,3964,2,0,L|188:328,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,308,4229,5,0,0:0:0:0:
215,306,4317,2,0,L|303:298,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,216,4670,2,0,B|68:220|68:220|24:208,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,123,5023,2,0,B|242:119|242:119|286:131,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,128,5376,1,12,0:0:0:0:
72,107,5464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,85,5552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,64,5640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,43,5729,6,0,P|119:45|159:32,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,49,6082,2,0,P|277:84|269:126,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,185,6435,2,0,P|399:147|360:120,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,6788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,304,6964,1,4,0:0:0:0:
453,306,7052,1,4,0:0:0:0:
487,309,7140,1,10,0:0:0:0:
500,228,7493,1,12,0:0:0:0:
340,288,7846,5,10,0:0:0:0:
353,370,8023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,256,8199,1,12,0:0:0:0:
249,338,8376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,308,8552,6,0,P|124:328|64:328,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,292,8905,1,12,0:0:0:0:
111,147,9082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
109,168,9170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
107,189,9258,1,10,0:0:0:0:
105,210,9346,1,4,0:0:0:0:
104,232,9435,2,0,L|61:234,1,42.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,184,9611,1,12,0:0:0:0:
96,52,9788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
77,62,9876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
59,73,9964,2,0,L|143:69,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,49,10317,2,0,P|277:84|269:126,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,168,10582,1,4,0:0:0:0:
342,168,10670,1,10,0:0:0:0:
415,210,10846,1,4,0:0:0:0:
342,253,11023,1,12,0:0:0:0:
496,252,11199,5,4,0:0:0:0:
504,210,11287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,168,11375,1,10,0:0:0:0:
342,253,11552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,368,11729,1,12,0:0:0:0:
415,125,11905,1,4,0:0:0:0:
269,210,12082,1,10,0:0:0:0:
496,168,12258,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,253,12435,1,12,0:0:0:0:
415,295,12611,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,344,13493,6,0,L|72:336,1,127.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,200,14199,6,0,L|56:100,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,104,14464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,93,14552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,252,14729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,156,14905,2,0,L|128:168,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,59,15258,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,80,15346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,107,15434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,137,15522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,169,15611,6,0,P|390:153|432:153,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,296,15964,2,0,P|329:295|290:280,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,240,16229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,252,16317,2,0,L|161:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,200,16670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,64,16846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,83,16934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,102,17023,6,0,L|222:94,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,169,17288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,188,17377,2,0,L|271:180,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,140,17729,2,0,B|460:176|460:176|456:222,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,84,18082,2,0,P|396:53|448:40,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,188,18435,5,8,0:0:0:0:
450,265,18611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,243,18699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,222,18787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,315,18964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,293,19052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,19141,2,0,L|359:187,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,95,19493,2,0,L|274:179,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,19846,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,20,20023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,140,20199,2,0,P|164:124|208:128,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,220,20552,2,0,P|65:203|40:169,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,125,20905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,297,21082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,297,21170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,297,21258,6,0,L|76:302,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,364,21611,2,0,L|336:369,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,294,21964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,277,22052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,260,22140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,243,22228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,226,22317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,239,22405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,239,22493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,227,22581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,203,22670,6,0,P|384:204|420:180,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,52,23023,2,0,P|358:93|361:137,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,23288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,23376,2,0,L|115:124,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,185,23729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
43,202,23817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
45,219,23905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,236,23993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,253,24082,6,0,L|45:341,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,340,24435,2,0,P|194:322|236:321,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,24788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,336,24876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,24964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,304,25052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,288,25140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,272,25229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,256,25317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,240,25405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,25493,5,0,0:0:0:0:
457,154,25670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,84,25846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,224,26023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,84,26200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,154,26376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,154,26552,2,0,P|496:100|488:44,1,85
336,84,26905,6,0,P|248:124|164:104,1,170,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,96,27435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,32,27611,2,0,P|193:28|232:46,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,27964,1,12,0:0:0:0:
191,194,28052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,205,28140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,215,28228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,226,28317,6,0,B|144:240|144:240|106:237,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,167,28670,2,0,P|298:207|299:249,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,336,29023,2,0,L|126:330,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,29376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
362,311,29464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,311,29552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,310,29640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,310,29729,6,0,B|388:240|388:240|368:212|368:212|376:128,1,170,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,92,30258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,188,30435,2,0,P|432:184|392:156,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,300,30788,2,0,P|259:267|303:246,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,28,31141,6,0,P|277:64|273:113,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,136,31493,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,130,31670,2,0,B|248:123|248:123|276:143|276:143|346:135,1,170,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,68,32199,2,0,P|93:106|93:149,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,250,32552,6,0,P|129:287|130:329,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,384,32905,2,0,L|264:284,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,256,33258,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,352,33435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,288,33611,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,252,33788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,136,33964,6,0,B|292:188|292:188|296:224,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,34317,1,12,0:0:0:0:
295,219,34493,2,0,L|115:223,1,170
12,196,35023,1,12,0:0:0:0:
32,276,35199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,355,35376,6,0,P|55:313|70:274,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,240,35729,2,0,P|220:260|247:293,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,384,36082,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,332,36258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,280,36435,1,12,0:0:0:0:
319,152,36611,6,0,L|329:306,1,127.500004863739
424,336,37141,2,0,P|455:338|484:351,1,63.7500024318696
408,248,37493,2,0,P|378:260|347:263,1,63.7500024318696
424,112,37846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,224,38023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,263,38199,6,0,L|168:252,1,170,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,156,38729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,56,38905,2,0,B|176:80|176:80|179:136,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,39258,2,0,L|84:155,1,85,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,284,39611,6,0,L|377:294,1,170,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,126,40141,2,0,P|339:167|349:208,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,72,40493,2,0,P|392:44|351:32,1,85,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,40846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
179,136,41023,6,0,L|358:126,1,170,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,41552,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,33,41729,2,0,B|248:40|248:40|212:32,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,12,42082,6,0,P|152:60|72:40,1,152.999995330811,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,63,42435,6,0,P|76:104|56:152,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,288,42788,1,12,0:0:0:0:
8,220,42964,2,0,B|80:228|80:228|112:208|112:208|184:216,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,43493,1,12,0:0:0:0:
184,144,43670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,288,43846,6,0,L|140:392,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,44199,1,12,0:0:0:0:
348,283,44376,2,0,L|263:291,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,204,44729,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,120,44905,1,12,0:0:0:0:
476,240,45082,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,120,45258,6,0,B|372:60|372:60|392:24,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,192,45611,1,12,0:0:0:0:
267,146,45788,2,0,P|225:156|184:146,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,68,46141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,236,46317,1,12,0:0:0:0:
96,180,46493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,146,46670,6,0,P|189:187|177:228,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,47023,2,0,P|129:310|170:299,1,85,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,220,47376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,316,47552,2,0,P|269:299|239:269,1,85,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,312,47905,2,0,P|396:336|260:328,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,220,48435,2,0,L|408:224,1,85,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,176,48699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,165,48788,6,8,P|480:128|480:108,2,42.5000016212464
384,88,49141,2,4,P|386:109|391:129,2,42.5000016212464,12|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,44,49493,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,140,56552,6,0,P|144:132|164:108,1,95.6250036478044,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,56905,6,0,L|192:192,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,57258,2,0,L|320:192,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,208,57610,2,0,B|195:256|195:256|191:308,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,57963,2,0,B|316:256|316:256|321:308,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,360,58316,6,0,B|188:376|188:376|215:369,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,58669,2,0,B|56:248|56:248|28:254,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,148,59022,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,68,59199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,24,59375,2,0,P|108:80|120:112,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,59728,6,0,L|368:96,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,112,60081,2,0,L|440:284,1,170,12|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,352,60610,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,60787,2,0,B|264:324|264:324|228:336|228:336|188:320|160:336|160:336|204:344,1,170,12|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,208,61316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,152,61493,5,12,0:0:0:0:
87,281,61669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,187,61846,5,10,0:0:0:0:
33,227,62022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,262,62199,5,12,0:0:0:0:
127,133,62375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,62552,2,0,L|252:224,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,62905,2,0,L|364:186,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,63257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
463,119,63434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,24,63610,2,0,P|312:8|264:12,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,48,63963,6,0,L|126:160,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,152,64316,1,12,0:0:0:0:
181,187,64493,2,0,P|129:195|101:219,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,276,64846,2,0,P|144:320|145:357,1,85,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,317,65199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,302,65287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,65375,6,0,P|296:296|260:288,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,152,65728,2,0,P|462:149|503:158,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,200,66081,2,0,P|315:158|317:116,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,66434,1,12,0:0:0:0:
284,294,66610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,116,66787,6,0,L|424:108,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,40,67140,1,12,0:0:0:0:
236,40,67316,2,0,P|220:104|228:216,1,170
140,280,67846,1,12,0:0:0:0:
48,144,68022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,146,68110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,148,68199,6,0,L|86:64,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,264,68552,2,0,L|152:348,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,68905,2,0,P|344:312|416:320,1,127.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,340,69257,1,12,0:0:0:0:
372,232,69434,1,4,0:0:0:0:
436,320,69610,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,168,69787,1,4,0:0:0:0:
280,172,69963,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,232,70140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,214,70228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,193,70316,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,84,70493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,70669,1,12,0:0:0:0:
436,285,70846,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,164,71022,6,0,L|184:156,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,84,71375,2,0,L|216:72,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,35,71728,6,0,P|123:78|113:119,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,68,72081,2,0,P|22:141|38:214,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,72434,6,0,P|116:260|172:260,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,284,72787,2,0,B|240:316|212:336|212:336|292:320,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,304,73140,6,4,L|404:307,2,56.6666666666667,12|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,224,73493,2,4,L|476:220,2,56.6666666666667,12|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,160,74552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75257,12,0,79316,0:0:0:0:
VTC
앋따까잉~

천성의약함도 어서 재작업하셨으면 ㅎㅎㅎ
Topic Starter
Down

VTC wrote:

앋따까잉~

천성의약함도 어서 재작업하셨으면 ㅎㅎㅎ
앗 죄송합니당 ㅠㅠ
맵핑실력을 좀더 키우고 엑스트라를 리맵해야 될것 같아서요.. 퀄리티가 너무 떨어집니다 ㅠ
최대한 빨리 재작업 하겠습니다
Kawashiro
From Project Korean Air
대충할거지만 쿠도스는 주시길


General Setting

  1. 저 이거 보다보니까 머리아픈데 Display epilepsy warning 모든 난이도에 켜주세요
  2. Ctrl Shift A 확인, 무슨 파일이 없다는데 저는 스토리보드 하나도 모름

Left's Insane

  1. 00:12:082 (5,1) - 드럼 소리를 잘 들어보시면 5번 노트 부분의 드럼소리부터 점점 커지니 뉴콤보 서로 바꿔주시는게 더 어울립니다
  2. 00:12:258 (1,2,3) - 점점 드럼소리가 강해지는 부분이니 앞부분처럼 모아두지 말고 점프를 넣어두는게 더 어울립니다, http://puu.sh/lWlOW/e9758ef0f7.jpg
  3. 00:16:670 (9) - 이 슬라도 그냥 앞에처럼 1/4 반복으로 바꾸는게 더 낫다고 봐요

    전체적으로 중반부터 3연타 많이 쓰셨는데 00:40:141 (4,5,6) - 이런거나 00:59:552 (5,6) - 이런거나 00:43:317 (5,6,7) - 이런게 제 귀에는 다 오버매핑으로 들리네요, 차라리 1/4 반복이면 괜찮았을듯

Rose's Insane

  1. 00:13:493 (1) - 이거 슬라 속도 0.5 로 하면 완전 어울릴텐데, 박자도 http://puu.sh/lWm4h/413c668e1e.jpg
  2. 00:18:611 (2,3,4) - 이 연타 동선 일부러 꼬아둔것 같은데 x256 y304 로 옮기면 더 깔끔하고 재밌어짐
  3. 00:38:199 (1) - 3번 슬라 끝에 겹쳐두기보다는 그냥 4번 5번 살짝 위로 올리고 머리에 겹쳐두는게 더 깔끔한데
  4. 00:47:905 (5) - 이렇게 두면 보기 안좋은데 http://puu.sh/lWmmf/110fd32e58.jpg 어떰?
  5. 01:00:610 (1,2) - 박자 막 두다간 혼나요, http://puu.sh/lWmoU/caebdceff2.jpg 이 박자가 그나마 가장 적절할듯? 바꿀거면 01:01:140 (4) - 이거는 x64 y356 에 두고 뉴콤 하는걸 추천
  6. 01:02:552 (3) - 뉴콤
  7. 01:12:081 (2) - 박자가 드럼만 따라가는건 알겠는데 그래도 이렇게 바꿔주면 보컬이랑도 어울리지 않을까 싶음 http://puu.sh/lWmCu/17e3653377.jpg
  8. 01:13:846 - 노트 추가, 피니시
  9. 01:14:552 (3) - 뉴콤





눈아픔
Reillia
[Easy]
00:07:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 아무리 이지래도 이렇게 1/1슬라가 연속으로 나오면 뉴비입장에서도 지루함을 느낄수있음
00:15:611 (3) - 이지에서 1/2반복 리버스슬라라... 사용 안하시는게 좋습니다 BPM이 170으로 낮은편도아니라 매우 위험함
00:34:670 (4,1) - 이지에서는 웬만하면 슬라꼬리가 향하는방향으로 노트 두시는걸 추천함
00:38:199 - 여기부터 00:49:493 - 여기까지 키아이추가 추천드림

아니 어째서 키아이부분보다 다른 평범한 부분이 더 어려운거죠.. 1/2반복 슬라가 나오질않나..

[Normal]
처음부분부터 00:06:435 - 여기까지 너무 1/1박자만 쓰인듯 노말이라 생각하고보면 지루함
디스턴스 0.7로하실꺼면 0.7로 통일해주세요 0.63도 보이고 하네요
00:08:552 (1,2,3) - 이런박자 쓰시면 노래 충분히 표현가능함 http://puu.sh/lWmxC/738630ec30.PNG

제가볼땐 노말이 아니라 그냥 디스턴스좀 넓은 쉬운노말느낌이 너무 많이남 이지가있음에도 불구하고
왠만하면 리맵을 선고하고싶음..

[Hard]
00:15:435 - 00:16:846 - 00:18:258 - 어째서 박자가 비는거죠 음이 확실하게 들리는데..
00:18:964 (3) - 1/2로 여러번 리버스되는슬라는 별로 추천하고싶지않네요 요즘 맵 트렌드상..
00:43:846 (1) - 여기에 왜 기다란 슬라가 나오는지 의문...
00:45:258 - 00:45:611 - 00:45:964 - 이런 부분들은 슬라 꼬리로하는것보단 클릭으로하는게 훨씬더 맵표현이 잘될것같습니다

아무래도 전부 디스턴스 고정인것같은데 하드정도되면 강하게느껴지는 박자정도에서는 디스턴스 살짝 넓혀서 찍어주는것도 퀄상승에 도움됨

[Left's Insane]
00:11:552 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 좀더 점프를 크게 넣어보시는건 어떠신가요 음에비해 임팩트가 너무없달까..
00:59:552 (5,6,1) - 직선으로하실꺼면 동선 완벽하게 직선이되게


아 귀찮아 모딩여기까지만 할래양 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Dailycare
#Project Korean Air

soup tabetao



00:03:611 (3) - 는 00:02:552 (5) 슬라이더의 시작부분에 스택하는게 보기에는 좋을 것 같아요
00:36:082 (3,4,5) - 저라면 아마 노트 간격이 균일하도록 만들었을 거에요
00:43:317 (1) - 이유가 없다면 여기 뉴콤보는 빼시는게..?
01:03:963 (5) - 뉴콤보
01:09:610 (5) - ^
01:14:552 - 여기 노트 넣는거도 고려해보세용

개인적으로 너무 DS가 하드같아요. 아마 이게 가장 높은 난이도일텐데, left님의 인세인과 비교해보면 확실히 차이가 나는 것 같네요 전..

Rose's Insane



01:02:552 (3) - 뉴콤 넣으시는게 좋을것같아요
01:02:905 (4,5) - 안겹치게 하는 편이?

디게 잘 만드시네요..

Left's Insane



00:48:435 (2) - 이게 (1)이랑 살짝 겹치는데 조금 옆으로 옮겨주시는게..?

Hard



00:32:552 (1) - 앞선 슬라이더에 모양을 맞추시려 한건 알겠는데.. 음..
00:45:082 - 개인적으로 여기엔 슬라이더보단 노트가 낫다고 생각되네요
01:01:493 (4) - 뉴콤보..?
01:02:552 (1) - 블랭킷
01:07:493 (3) - 이것도 00:32:552 (1) 과 같은데, ctrl+클릭 두 번 하면 각지게 슬라이더를 꺾을수 있잖아요, 그렇게 만들어보심이 어떠세요?
01:13:140 (1,2) - 거리를 쪼꼼만 줄여주시는게 저는 좋을거같은데 :3


저퀄 죄송해요.. 이지랑 노말은 나중에 시간이 된다면 해드릴게요 ;w;
Azulae
Here is my mod, as requested.


[First]
In my opinion
Should get changed
Not rankable

[General]
Hitsound: Wow nice! Which programm did you use for those hitsounds?
Source: Add a source if there is one!
Tags: Please add some tags. (GD creator names...)
Difficulty settings: Hmm, I guess OD 3 in 'Normal' diff would be better.

[Normal]
00:12:788 (4) - Doesn't this note fit here better? 00:12:611
00:49:493 (3) - Break: Do this to this.

[Hard]
00:32:552 (1) - I personally hate such slider because their structure is like shit.
00:36:082 (2) - Why didnt you copy this from this 00:35:376 (1) - ?

[Soup Tabatei]
01:07:493 (3,4) - Stack this.
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply