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I wanted to replace the screen in the description :D



Replay if you want: http://puu.sh/mktlD/06a8f2b474.osr

Have fun! :D
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09kami

CptSqBany wrote:

I wanted to replace the screen in the description :D



Replay if you want: http://puu.sh/mktlD/06a8f2b474.osr

Have fun! :D
wow ok
But if I update Lunatic, maybe I'll cancel it.
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TtmnZk
话多了,不过我觉得必须说,我不说,那到时候就是bn,qat来说了, 别介意。
[Lunatic]

00:20:180 (11) - 比起突出piano,这里跟鼓,跟前面一致会好

00:24:347 (5,6,7) -没鼓,这加的三连没看懂

00:25:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里仔细听应该是5连+3连

00:26:847 (4) -

00:33:847-01:00:513,慢速滑条跟提琴的长音?但有些滑条开头明显不对,比如00:47:347 (1) - 的开头应该是00:47:513



00:54:013 (1) -

00:34:013 (2) -

00:40:680 (2) -

以上都有问题


这里就00:50:513 (11,12,1) -对了

后面的超慢滑条。老实说我没听出来是在跟哪条轨,一开始我因为是跟小提琴,但又觉得跟piano,怎么听都很怪

比如01:02:180 (1,2,3) - 就非常的不合适

01:02:180 和 01:02:680是重音,其它都不怎么明显,所以两个1/1滑条足矣。即便是为了在01:02:847加音效,第二个重音放滑条尾还是非常不合适

01:06:347 (3,4) - 还是重音的选取上,尾部打击感明显,况且你都在尾部加了音效,那3的打击感就真的很不舒服

01:15:847 (4) - 同上

01:16:347 (6,7,8,9,10) - 如果想用大跳来体现提琴,那开始的地方应该是从6开始跳,5因为没有音所以跳到6的过程就会不搭调, 建议还是两个1/1滑条

后面都跟对了,所以我就纳闷了你到底是再跟哪个轨


关于音效



IN也是,finish这个音效,我现在就单指这个finish,拿来强调重音音很合适,但就我而言,你现在这个音效鼓的节奏没有很好的跟音乐相结合

重音的地方跟的好,但去跟钢琴啊,提琴之类就不合适了,

而且你这个有些还是纯粹的跟随,比如01:09:847 (2,3,4) -, 00:25:180 (1,2,3,4) -

两个选择,一 是老实的跟音乐里的原有的鼓,
二,想多加点鼓来修饰的话,记住一定要对整个谱的鼓点有段落的分配,这段鼓的节奏是什么,这一小节的鼓节奏又是什么,具体你可以直接参考源流怀古,关掉音效听一便原鼓,再调小音乐音量 加大音效音量,听听麻婆在哪里用自己的鼓做了什么样的修饰
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09kami

TT Mouse wrote:

话多了,不过我觉得必须说,我不说,那到时候就是bn,qat来说了, 别介意。
[Lunatic]

00:20:180 (11) - 比起突出piano,这里跟鼓,跟前面一致会好 这里以前就是跟的鼓 后来改成了跟钢琴 因为这里有个段落感 而且这个部分钢琴比鼓音重

00:24:347 (5,6,7) -没鼓,这加的三连没看懂 done

00:25:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里仔细听应该是5连+3连 done

00:26:847 (4) -

00:33:847-01:00:513,慢速滑条跟提琴的长音?但有些滑条开头明显不对,比如00:47:347 (1) - 的开头应该是00:47:513 347的提琴音开头 按这种说法改了后 打起来没之前的流畅感



00:54:013 (1) -

00:34:013 (2) -

00:40:680 (2) -

以上都有问题同上


这里就00:50:513 (11,12,1) -对了 我这里是跟了两种小提琴的音 话说是这个原因吗..

后面的超慢滑条。老实说我没听出来是在跟哪条轨,一开始我因为是跟小提琴,但又觉得跟piano,怎么听都很怪

比如01:02:180 (1,2,3) - 就非常的不合适 done 改了下排列

01:02:180 和 01:02:680是重音,其它都不怎么明显,所以两个1/1滑条足矣。即便是为了在01:02:847加音效,第二个重音放滑条尾还是非常不合适

01:06:347 (3,4) - 还是重音的选取上,尾部打击感明显,况且你都在尾部加了音效,那3的打击感就真的很不舒服 done

01:15:847 (4) - 同上 done

01:16:347 (6,7,8,9,10) - 如果想用大跳来体现提琴,那开始的地方应该是从6开始跳,5因为没有音所以跳到6的过程就会不搭调, 建议还是两个1/1滑条 done

后面都跟对了,所以我就纳闷了你到底是再跟哪个轨 主要跟钢琴 提亲突出的地方用滑条表现出来


关于音效



IN也是,finish这个音效,我现在就单指这个finish,拿来强调重音音很合适,但就我而言,你现在这个音效鼓的节奏没有很好的跟音乐相结合

重音的地方跟的好,但去跟钢琴啊,提琴之类就不合适了,

而且你这个有些还是纯粹的跟随,比如01:09:847 (2,3,4) -, 00:25:180 (1,2,3,4) -

两个选择,一 是老实的跟音乐里的原有的鼓,
二,想多加点鼓来修饰的话,记住一定要对整个谱的鼓点有段落的分配,这段鼓的节奏是什么,这一小节的鼓节奏又是什么,具体你可以直接参考源流怀古,关掉音效听一便原鼓,再调小音乐音量 加大音效音量,听听麻婆在哪里用自己的鼓做了什么样的修饰 实际上我在考虑用音量去解决这个问题 因为鼓的音效现在已经不打算改了
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非常感谢
Nakano Itsuki
遲來的m4m,抱歉近來好忙

[Lunatic]
這個diff給我的感覺... 圖的風格就是不是很適合這樣的歌
總覺得insane那種sv比lunatic更能代表歌曲

[Insane]
覺得00:02:190 (5) - 跟 00:05:523 (5) - 可以nc
00:12:190 (4) - nc
00:18:023 (2,3) - 如果你這裡打算blanket可以做得好一點
00:24:357 (2) - 這裡repeat好怪 直接一個1/1個人認為更好
00:31:023 (2) - 可以跟00:31:357 (3,4) - 分開一點,這裡spacing不是很合適
01:22:690 (2,3) - 如上

抱歉 不是太能摸得動這張圖 祝你好運
沒幫助就不用kd了
Topic Starter
09kami

StarrStyx wrote:

遲來的m4m,抱歉近來好忙

[Lunatic]
這個diff給我的感覺... 圖的風格就是不是很適合這樣的歌
總覺得insane那種sv比lunatic更能代表歌曲

[Insane]
覺得00:02:190 (5) - 跟 00:05:523 (5) - 可以nc ok
00:12:190 (4) - nc ok
00:18:023 (2,3) - 如果你這裡打算blanket可以做得好一點 唉?这里是blanket吗 呆
00:24:357 (2) - 這裡repeat好怪 直接一個1/1個人認為更好 稍微修改了下
00:31:023 (2) - 可以跟00:31:357 (3,4) - 分開一點,這裡spacing不是很合適 没做很大的修改 稍微挪了下位置
01:22:690 (2,3) - 如上 这里好像没改

抱歉 不是太能摸得動這張圖 祝你好運
沒幫助就不用kd了

感谢MOD
Natteke desu
nice map!
__Ag
Normal
00:58:857 (1) - normal难度我不是很熟悉,但是我感觉这个转盘有点短,对于normal会不会有点措手不及,要不要改成slider
hard
00:16:357 (2) - x1 y178,这样就和上一组一样的ds啦
00:18:857 (4) - 这个没和5 6呈弧形,往左上移一点
00:27:190 (2) - 重音长白线在这,我觉得应该在这nc,而不是00:26:857 (1) - 这个nc
00:42:357 (2) - 这个盖在滑条后面感觉不好看
00:55:690 (2) - 这个也是,要不干脆就放在滑条头,盖一半露一半不好看
01:09:357 (1,2,3,4) - 这一串就做的很好看啊
insane
00:25:857 (7) - 这个有顿拍,和前面的6距离太近了,容易读错,要么nc,要么拉远一些
00:28:023 (3) - 右下部分没有包好
00:31:023 (2,3) - 这两个和上面一样的顿拍问题
00:51:523 (1,2,3) - 这三个感觉有点突兀啊,一下子没了形状没了对称,乱了的感觉
01:02:523 (6) - 没有完全叠到尾巴上,你拉到7后面的蓝线上就会发现
01:08:690 (2) - ^
01:20:857 (2) - ^
lunatic
00:04:023 (2,3,4) - 这一串可以复制00:03:523 (3,4,5) - 这一串然后对称过来会好看些

就先上面这些吧,insane的高sv还有风格和lunatic的低sv跳让我不禁想起了某个人233333
Topic Starter
09kami

__Ag wrote:

Normal
00:58:857 (1) - normal难度我不是很熟悉,但是我感觉这个转盘有点短,对于normal会不会有点措手不及,要不要改成slider 改了
hard
00:16:357 (2) - x1 y178,这样就和上一组一样的ds啦 这段其实是复制粘贴的啊....没有问题吧
00:18:857 (4) - 这个没和5 6呈弧形,往左上移一点 改了
00:27:190 (2) - 重音长白线在这,我觉得应该在这nc,而不是00:26:857 (1) - 这个nc 改了
00:42:357 (2) - 这个盖在滑条后面感觉不好看 挪开了点
00:55:690 (2) - 这个也是,要不干脆就放在滑条头,盖一半露一半不好看 这个地方其实不是很想改
01:09:357 (1,2,3,4) - 这一串就做的很好看啊
insane
00:25:857 (7) - 这个有顿拍,和前面的6距离太近了,容易读错,要么nc,要么拉远一些 改了
00:28:023 (3) - 右下部分没有包好 爷爷啊 我差不多没两个摸都让我包一次这个地方 我感觉现在是最好的位置了 没包好估计是改了CS的问题
00:31:023 (2,3) - 这两个和上面一样的顿拍问题 改了
00:51:523 (1,2,3) - 这三个感觉有点突兀啊,一下子没了形状没了对称,乱了的感觉 其实这里00:51:190 (3,1) - 和00:51:857 (2,3) - 是对称放大
01:02:523 (6) - 没有完全叠到尾巴上,你拉到7后面的蓝线上就会发现
01:08:690 (2) - ^
01:20:857 (2) - ^
后面这几个地方其实是已经叠好了的 至于啦到后面就显示没叠好是因为SL等于3的问题 改成0后拉过去是完全重叠的
lunatic
00:04:023 (2,3,4) - 这一串可以复制00:03:523 (3,4,5) - 这一串然后对称过来会好看些 改了 然后调整了下位置

就先上面这些吧,insane的高sv还有风格和lunatic的低sv跳让我不禁想起了某个人233333
非常感谢
KappaPraise
hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

General
Why you use in every diff CS 3?
Why BPM's offset -4476?

Normal
00:39:857 (9,1) - overlap
00:43:857 - strong note(hitsounds), should be clickable
00:47:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - dont fill rhythm here, just random
01:00:523 (1) - hitfinish i think should be better
01:05:523 (4) - hitfnish at start of slider please
01:05:523 (4) - weird sliders :( dont like their shape

Hard
May be make AR 8 instead of 7?
00:11:857 (2) - May be move end of slider to starts of next?
00:40:690 (1) - make blanket of this slider cleaner
00:40:690 (1,3,4) - meh overlaps
00:43:190 (5,1) - ^
00:43:857 (1,3) - blanket?
01:19:357 (4,1) - ^
01:24:690 (2,3) - and 01:25:190 (4,5) - same spacing?

Insane
Too high SV imo
00:24:357 (2) - excess hitsounds imo
00:33:857 - i dont know what you following in this part, cant say antyhing, just overmapped
01:00:523 - TOO high SV o_O

Lunatic
But here SV looks too low O_o
00:25:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - um, looks confusing
00:46:523 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing?

Strange, but interesting map o_O, well good luck
Topic Starter
09kami

WISPG_G wrote:

hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

General
Why you use in every diff CS 3? Personal interests
Why BPM's offset -4476? offset from Hollow Wings

Normal
00:39:857 (9,1) - overlap
00:43:857 - strong note(hitsounds), should be clickable fixed
00:47:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - dont fill rhythm here, just random
01:00:523 (1) - hitfinish i think should be better fixed
01:05:523 (4) - hitfnish at start of slider please fixed
01:05:523 (4) - weird sliders :( dont like their shape fixed


Hard
May be make AR 8 instead of 7? fixed
00:11:857 (2) - May be move end of slider to starts of next? fixed
00:40:690 (1) - make blanket of this slider cleaner
00:40:690 (1,3,4) - meh overlaps fixed
00:43:190 (5,1) - ^
00:43:857 (1,3) - blanket?
01:19:357 (4,1) - ^
01:24:690 (2,3) - and 01:25:190 (4,5) - same spacing?

Insane
Too high SV imo
00:24:357 (2) - excess hitsounds imo fixed
00:33:857 - i dont know what you following in this part, cant say antyhing, just overmapped
01:00:523 - TOO high SV o_O

Lunatic
But here SV looks too low O_o
00:25:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - um, looks confusing
00:46:523 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing?

Strange, but interesting map o_O, well good luck

thanks
eeezzzeee
Hi, from my queue

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:04:190 (4,5,6) - would be nice if these are the same spacing
  2. 00:08:023 (1,3) - try using ctrl+g on this for 2 reasons: flow is better into the next stream and also to be further away from 00:07:690 (5) - to show that it is 1/1 timing
  3. 00:08:857 (5,1) - swap the NC
  4. 00:09:357 (2,1) - ugh i dont like how this 1/1 timing is so close anyway. try reversing 00:09:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - around like this http://puu.sh/mRsaK/c0decada56.jpg
  5. 00:14:690 (1) - try moving it down a little because again its 1/1 timing http://puu.sh/mRslY/a05e8c88ee.jpg
  6. 00:16:357 (1,2) - this jump is too much... consider also that 00:14:690 (1,2) - is a similar part of the music so I don't agree with the jump here
  7. 00:20:190 (11) - NC here to make it easier to read 1/1 timing
  8. 00:22:357 (1) - no NC needed
  9. 00:25:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - check the DS on both of these streams
  10. 00:28:857 (5) - should be NC here. Compare it to 00:01:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:05:190 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:11:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - etc.
  11. 00:29:857 (1) - move the second point to x205y268 to be parallel with 00:29:357 (9) -
  12. 00:32:190 (5) - same as 00:28:857 (5) -
  13. 00:34:023 (2) - try shortening the slider into 1/1 and add a circle at 00:34:523 - http://puu.sh/mRuAU/80ba50419d.jpg
  14. 00:38:690 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 00:42:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - these are pretty cool nice!
  15. 00:45:523 (4) - try adding some points to make it look better http://puu.sh/mRuNW/a36514a8e9.jpg
  16. 00:50:857 (1) - try ctrl+g i think it would make a more interesting flow
  17. 01:00:190 (1) - try changing it into two circles jump. just a slider like this is not reflecting how powerful the drum is here imo
  18. 01:00:523 - lol this section... this is probably the largest SV vs spacing difference i've ever seen http://puu.sh/mRvwl/000881b8b9.jpg not saying its bad i personally dont enjoy it but i think some people will
  19. 01:03:857 - why is the hitsound volume the lowest here? I would argue this is one of the louder parts of the song
  20. 01:04:690 (4,5,6) - check DS between these objects
  21. 01:18:023 (4,5) - move them up a little to make it straight
  22. 01:27:690 (3) - try changing it into a two circles and placing it like this http://puu.sh/mRvvz/af2c8708c0.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - errr please at least use some NC's to make this easier to read, since you are using the exact same spacing for both 1/2 and 1/1
  2. 00:03:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  3. 00:07:190 (1) - what is this SV! This is Insane right... not extra...
Ok I don't want to do the rest of this diff. I think this gameplay is not acceptable for an Insane and the diff spread (because even though the star rating is very low, those sliders are actually extremely hard to play properly). It remind me a lot of Hollow Wings btw lol

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:190 (4,1) - probably not a good idea to use the same spacing as 00:14:690 (2,3) - which is 1/2 and this one is 1/1. Maybe you can try stacking them like this http://puu.sh/mRw5Q/e85517dcb7.jpg
  2. 00:16:857 (4,1) - ^
  3. 00:25:190 (3,4,5) - spacing is strangely small here
  4. 00:26:357 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:38:857 (3,1) - ooh this is nice
  6. 00:57:857 (5,1) - i think a lot of people will confuse the timing here..
  7. 01:03:190 (1) - why the SV change though. this part is actually the same as 01:09:857 (4) -
  8. 01:04:857 (4) - need an NC here, compare to 01:01:357 (3,1) -
  9. 01:05:523 (6,1) - too close!
  10. 01:07:190 (4) - NC?
  11. 01:14:857 (3,4) - too far
  12. 01:15:523 (4,5) - and then this is too close
  13. 01:16:857 (7,1) - this spacing is... too random and also very difficult to read for Hard
  14. 01:19:357 (4,1) - no blanket?
Ok that's all. Interesting map, but that insane...
Remember that your spacing should reflect the timing, especially important in lower diffs like Hard
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
09kami

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:04:190 (4,5,6) - would be nice if these are the same spacing fixed
  2. 00:08:023 (1,3) - try using ctrl+g on this for 2 reasons: flow is better into the next stream and also to be further away from 00:07:690 (5) - to show that it is 1/1 timing fixed
  3. 00:08:857 (5,1) - swap the NC fixed
  4. 00:09:357 (2,1) - ugh i dont like how this 1/1 timing is so close anyway. try reversing 00:09:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - around like this http://puu.sh/mRsaK/c0decada56.jpg fixed
  5. 00:14:690 (1) - try moving it down a little because again its 1/1 timing http://puu.sh/mRslY/a05e8c88ee.jpg fixed
  6. 00:16:357 (1,2) - this jump is too much... consider also that 00:14:690 (1,2) - is a similar part of the music so I don't agree with the jump here
  7. 00:20:190 (11) - NC here to make it easier to read 1/1 timing
  8. 00:22:357 (1) - no NC needed fixed
  9. 00:25:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - check the DS on both of these streams fixed
  10. 00:28:857 (5) - should be NC here. Compare it to 00:01:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:05:190 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:11:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - etc. fixed
  11. 00:29:857 (1) - move the second point to x205y268 to be parallel with 00:29:357 (9) - fixed
  12. 00:32:190 (5) - same as 00:28:857 (5) - fixed
  13. 00:34:023 (2) - try shortening the slider into 1/1 and add a circle at 00:34:523 - http://puu.sh/mRuAU/80ba50419d.jpg fixed
  14. 00:38:690 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 00:42:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - these are pretty cool nice! :)
  15. 00:45:523 (4) - try adding some points to make it look better http://puu.sh/mRuNW/a36514a8e9.jpg fixed
  16. 00:50:857 (1) - try ctrl+g i think it would make a more interesting flow fixed
  17. 01:00:190 (1) - try changing it into two circles jump. just a slider like this is not reflecting how powerful the drum is here imo fixed
  18. 01:00:523 - lol this section... this is probably the largest SV vs spacing difference i've ever seen http://puu.sh/mRvwl/000881b8b9.jpg not saying its bad i personally dont enjoy it but i think some people will lol just fun
  19. 01:03:857 - why is the hitsound volume the lowest here? I would argue this is one of the louder parts of the song
  20. 01:04:690 (4,5,6) - check DS between these objects
  21. 01:18:023 (4,5) - move them up a little to make it straight fixed
  22. 01:27:690 (3) - try changing it into a two circles and placing it like this http://puu.sh/mRvvz/af2c8708c0.jpg
fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - errr please at least use some NC's to make this easier to read, since you are using the exact same spacing for both 1/2 and 1/1
  2. 00:03:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  3. 00:07:190 (1) - what is this SV! This is Insane right... not extra...
Ok I don't want to do the rest of this diff. I think this gameplay is not acceptable for an Insane and the diff spread (because even though the star rating is very low, those sliders are actually extremely hard to play properly). It remind me a lot of Hollow Wings btw lol
Maybe there's no need to change this difficulty.lol
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:190 (4,1) - probably not a good idea to use the same spacing as 00:14:690 (2,3) - which is 1/2 and this one is 1/1. Maybe you can try stacking them like this http://puu.sh/mRw5Q/e85517dcb7.jpg fixed
  2. 00:16:857 (4,1) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:25:190 (3,4,5) - spacing is strangely small here fixed
  4. 00:26:357 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  5. 00:38:857 (3,1) - ooh this is nice :)
  6. 00:57:857 (5,1) - i think a lot of people will confuse the timing here.. I fold it up.
  7. 01:03:190 (1) - why the SV change though. this part is actually the same as 01:09:857 (4) - I'm not going to change here.
  8. 01:04:857 (4) - need an NC here, compare to 01:01:357 (3,1) - fixed
  9. 01:05:523 (6,1) - too close! Ummm... Maybe you didn't update? I have changed here.
  10. 01:07:190 (4) - NC? fixed
  11. 01:14:857 (3,4) - too far Maybe not?
  12. 01:15:523 (4,5) - and then this is too close ^
  13. 01:16:857 (7,1) - this spacing is... too random and also very difficult to read for Hard ^
  14. 01:19:357 (4,1) - no blanket?
fixed

Ok that's all. Interesting map, but that insane...
Remember that your spacing should reflect the timing, especially important in lower diffs like Hard
Good luck :)
You are a very very good moder. at least the best of the map. What you say is what I need to change, but I can't find it myself.Thank you very much
IamKwaN
為啥你拒絕摸都沒原因?
Topic Starter
09kami

IamKwaN wrote:

為啥你拒絕摸都沒原因?
有几个摸我都是边改边回复的 然后改到一半IE崩溃了 只能勉强想起改了什么 :cry:
IamKwaN
ok 你可以選擇被我打爆或者欠我一個摸 ( • ̀ω•́ )✧
Topic Starter
09kami

IamKwaN wrote:

ok 你可以選擇被我打爆或者欠我一個摸 ( • ̀ω•́ )✧
(´・ω・`)骏妈妈如果有要摸的可以随时找我啊 无偿摸要几个有几个
IamKwaN
耶 \( ‾◡‾)/
eeezzzeee

09kami wrote:

You are a very very good moder. at least the best of the map. What you say is what I need to change, but I can't find it myself.Thank you very much
Thanks! :oops:
-shikaco-
M4M
[General]
offset:这么诡异没问题吗
就我看这lunatic是诡异排列向的图,也不知道是好还是坏
那个四星的light insane排列简直恐怖,flow也有点怪,真的是light Insane?
H、N的滑条都有不少改进空间摸不了
其实可以考虑做刻意不对称
君妈妈E貌似挑不了刺…

[lunatic]
00:00:857 (4) - 建议换成两个单点
00:01:940 (2) - 没音
00:03:523 (3,4,5) - 蓝线没音,(这种白线开始的三连后面有很多,感觉不是很合节奏)
00:20:190 (7) - 三连
00:26:690 (3) - 移远一点
00:31:023 (5) - 白线没音
00:33:190 (1,2) - 可以考虑用短滑条
00:40:690 (2) - 把滑条尾部音量弄小点(后面一样)
01:01:357 (4,5) - 蓝线没音
01:09:190 (3) - 把clap去了吧
01:01:523 (6) - 01:05:190 (7) - 01:06:023 (2) - 01:08:523 (7) - 01:11:523 (5) - 01:12:690 (2) - 01:19:523 (3) - 01:21:523 (4) - 01:24:857 (1) - 01:26:023 (6) - 滑条尾部盖了音(很多地方都是这样,感觉不太好)
01:21:023 (2,3) - 换成一个滑条(后面也有很多这样的,可能你就是不想这样处理,感觉可以在仔细听一下,参考上一条,把有音的换成单点,没音的用滑条盖过去))
01:18:023 (4,5,6) - 像这种三连跟慢滑条糊在一起说实在话已经没有什么可读性了

[Insane]
00:13:857 (1) - 建议弄成对称
00:18:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 摆成正三角形吧
00:31:523 (3,4,5) - 间距统一
00:36:523 (3) - 00:40:523 (1) - 00:42:190 (1) - 00:53:857 (1) - 00:55:523 (1) - 红线音
01:28:523 (5,1) - 稍微错开一点
后面的长串柑橘跟歌不和

先这样吧;w; 以后可以叫我来改摸
Topic Starter
09kami
一个意外的楼层
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Topic Starter
09kami

09kami wrote:

-shikaco- wrote:

M4M
[General]
offset:这么诡异没问题吗 没问题 大概
就我看这lunatic是诡异排列向的图,也不知道是好还是坏
那个四星的light insane排列简直恐怖,flow也有点怪,真的是light Insane? 其实是EX
H、N的滑条都有不少改进空间摸不了
其实可以考虑做刻意不对称
君妈妈E貌似挑不了刺…

[lunatic]
00:00:857 (4) - 建议换成两个单点 fixed
00:01:940 (2) - 没音
00:03:523 (3,4,5) - 蓝线没音,(这种白线开始的三连后面有很多,感觉不是很合节奏) 有!
00:20:190 (7) - 三连 这里是跟的钢琴音
00:26:690 (3) - 移远一点 这里的音没前面的重 但后面有个比较清楚的音 考虑到这个现在的位置是最合适的
00:31:023 (5) - 白线没音 fixed
00:33:190 (1,2) - 可以考虑用短滑条 fixed 但2没改
00:40:690 (2) - 把滑条尾部音量弄小点(后面一样) fixed
01:01:357 (4,5) - 蓝线没音
01:09:190 (3) - 把clap去了吧 fixed
01:01:523 (6) - 01:05:190 (7) - 01:06:023 (2) - 01:08:523 (7) - 01:11:523 (5) - 01:12:690 (2) - 01:19:523 (3) - 01:21:523 (4) - 01:24:857 (1) - 01:26:023 (6) - 滑条尾部盖了音(很多地方都是这样,感觉不太好) 这里几乎每个1/2都是有声音的 所以不考虑
01:21:023 (2,3) - 换成一个滑条(后面也有很多这样的,可能你就是不想这样处理,感觉可以在仔细听一下,参考上一条,把有音的换成单点,没音的用滑条盖过去)) 不要
01:18:023 (4,5,6) - 像这种三连跟慢滑条糊在一起说实在话已经没有什么可读性了 这里我考虑了下后改变了滑条的速度 现在很好读了

[Insane]
00:13:857 (1) - 建议弄成对称 fixed
00:18:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 摆成正三角形吧 fixed 你们这些强迫症真难伺候[那张苦逼脸划鼠标的图片]
00:31:523 (3,4,5) - 间距统一 这里的音量是递增的 所以间距也想不统一 不过我修改了下位置
00:36:523 (3) - 00:40:523 (1) - 00:42:190 (1) - 00:53:857 (1) - 00:55:523 (1) - 红线音 这里比较特殊 所以我不打算改 因为我不是根据提琴音下的 是单独下的节奏
01:28:523 (5,1) - 稍微错开一点 fixed
后面的长串柑橘跟歌不和 我删掉了部分连打 做了一个缓和区

先这样吧;w; 以后可以叫我来改摸
就这样吧 其他暂时没有改的想法
liaoxingyao
soft-hitfinish真的不打算换..?
Topic Starter
09kami

liaoxingyao wrote:

soft-hitfinish真的不打算换..?
add new soft-hitfinish
Namki
yo

[KwaN's Easy]
01:16:523 (4) - rotate it by -12 degrees cuz it looks really randomly compare to whole diff.

[Normal]
00:19:857 (6) - hard to notice this circle when you are newbie.
Where is kiai?
01:06:357 (5,6,7) - unreadable pattern.
01:28:023 (2,3,4,5) - extremely hard 4 1/2 circles in a row.
00:26:357 (4,5) - newbie will play this like 1/1 so it can be sudden.

[Hard]
01:28:857 - place a circle, don't end the slider.
00:18:857 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/n2Ivi/cf447785d4.jpg maybe do this pattern?
01:23:690 (4,1) - why 1x spacing, there's a strong beat.
00:52:190 (3,1) - spacing issue, it's big.
01:20:357 (4,5) - strong beat.

[Light Insane]
Whole diff is mapped randomly imo.


good luck
Topic Starter
09kami
new Normal
Topic Starter
09kami

Namki wrote:

yo

[KwaN's Easy]
01:16:523 (4) - rotate it by -12 degrees cuz it looks really randomly compare to whole diff.

[Normal]
00:19:857 (6) - hard to notice this circle when you are newbie.
Where is kiai?
01:06:357 (5,6,7) - unreadable pattern.
01:28:023 (2,3,4,5) - extremely hard 4 1/2 circles in a row.
00:26:357 (4,5) - newbie will play this like 1/1 so it can be sudden.
remap difficulty


[Hard]
01:28:857 - place a circle, don't end the slider. fixed
00:18:857 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/n2Ivi/cf447785d4.jpg maybe do this pattern? NO
01:23:690 (4,1) - why 1x spacing, there's a strong beat. fixed
00:52:190 (3,1) - spacing issue, it's big. fixed
01:20:357 (4,5) - strong beat. Do not intend to modify

[Light Insane]
Whole diff is mapped randomly imo.


good luck
Thank you
Rizia
[General]
  1. 全難度有的話disable widescreen support
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:57:190 (1) - 頭放多了finish?
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:28:023 (3) - 疊好在後面00:28:190 (4) - 的折返位吧

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:857 (5,6,7,8,1) - stack
  2. 01:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 懷疑overmap
  3. 01:06:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  4. 還有幾條連打也是覺得overmap

[Hard]
  1. 01:00:523 (1,2) - 可以節奏上ctrl+g
[Normal]
  1. 00:23:523 - 空掉不舒服
  2. 00:26:857 - ^
  3. 01:00:523 (3) - nc
  4. 01:05:523 (4) - 是不是應該停在01:06:023 -
[KwaN's Easy]
駿喵太厲害啦
Topic Starter
09kami

Rizia wrote:

[General]
  1. 全難度有的話disable widescreen support
fixed

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:57:190 (1) - 頭放多了finish?
fixed

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:28:023 (3) - 疊好在後面00:28:190 (4) - 的折返位吧
fixed


[Insane]
  1. 00:06:857 (5,6,7,8,1) - stack fixed
  2. 01:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 懷疑overmap fixed
  3. 01:06:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ fixed
  4. 還有幾條連打也是覺得overmap
fixed


[Hard]
  1. 01:00:523 (1,2) - 可以節奏上ctrl+g fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:23:523 - 空掉不舒服 fixed
  2. 00:26:857 - ^ fixed
  3. 01:00:523 (3) - nc fixed
  4. 01:05:523 (4) - 是不是應該停在01:06:023 -
fixed

[KwaN's Easy]
駿喵太厲害啦

非常谢谢柚子 柚子是第一个愿摸我图的BN><
Topic Starter
09kami
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DreaM117er
2016-02-14 15:43 09kami: 01:20:523 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段你感觉要改吗
2016-02-14 15:43 09kami: 我前面的连打基本删完了
2016-02-14 15:44 09kami: 我考虑这段是比较高潮的地方就没删这里的连打
2016-02-14 15:45 DreaM117er: 我的建議
2016-02-14 15:45 DreaM117er: 刪掉這個就好了01:21:773 (4) -
2016-02-14 15:46 DreaM117er: 01:21:857 (4,5,6,7) - 這個可以改短條
2016-02-14 15:46 DreaM117er: 其他應該不怎麼需要動
2016-02-14 15:47 09kami: 删掉的话....恩 那我把01:22:107 (7) - 也删掉可以不 然后这里弄成对称的三连
2016-02-14 15:47 09kami: 起点位置调换一下就行
2016-02-14 15:47 DreaM117er: 不太建議
2016-02-14 15:47 DreaM117er: 你要這樣改也行
2016-02-14 15:48 09kami: 那我先试试你那样改
2016-02-14 15:48 DreaM117er: 因為你連打是跟著一個不同的背景音的
2016-02-14 15:49 DreaM117er: 01:24:357 (4) - 這裡少了一個折返
2016-02-14 15:50 09kami: 这个地方是故意删掉了一个
2016-02-14 15:50 09kami: 要加上去吗
2016-02-14 15:50 DreaM117er: 刪掉距離要變動
2016-02-14 15:50 DreaM117er: 要不然很坑人
2016-02-14 15:51 09kami: 那我还是加上去好了
2016-02-14 15:51 09kami: 01:24:857 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 我总感觉这段要重做一下
2016-02-14 15:52 09kami: 转折做得不是很好
2016-02-14 15:53 DreaM117er: 可以,你re一下
2016-02-14 15:54 09kami: 那我把这段改成一边减速的滑条 然后下一个NC变回原来速度你觉得怎么样01:24:857 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-02-14 15:55 DreaM117er: 試試看就知道了
2016-02-14 15:55 09kami: 厚
2016-02-14 15:56 DreaM117er: 我在想阿,這個L真的需要再找幾個摸來修一下外觀

Narcissu
2016-02-14 16:26 Narcissu: 臥槽我居然fail
2016-02-14 16:26 09kami: 卧槽居然fail了 很难吗
2016-02-14 16:27 Narcissu: 最後有點
2016-02-14 16:27 Narcissu: 前面一直FC
2016-02-14 16:27 09kami: 01:20:523 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 肯定是这段
2016-02-14 16:28 Narcissu: 不是
2016-02-14 16:28 Narcissu: 是01:22:690 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3) -
2016-02-14 16:29 09kami: 这个转折的5连我感觉还蛮好打的把
2016-02-14 16:30 Narcissu: 我可以FC,但是按錯了
2016-02-14 16:30 09kami: 233
2016-02-14 16:30 Narcissu: 沒什麼可以摸的啊……
2016-02-14 16:31 09kami: 你感觉有什么不顺手的地方吗
2016-02-14 16:31 Narcissu: 過十天去找bn吧

Lan wings
2016-02-14 17:07 Lan wings: 变速莫名 节奏莫名
2016-02-14 17:08 09kami: 变速....唔 那我试下删掉绿线重做
2016-02-14 17:09 Lan wings: 最后段
2016-02-14 17:09 Lan wings: 变速变的慢的太多
2016-02-14 17:09 09kami: 恩
2016-02-14 17:09 09kami: 那里的变速我直接减半的
2016-02-14 17:10 Lan wings: 00:17:190 (1) - 节奏每次看着都会读错
2016-02-14 17:11 Lan wings: 莫名拉长一节还摆这样的造型
2016-02-14 17:11 Lan wings: 00:17:857 (2) - 会把这个note读成00:17:690 -
2016-02-14 17:11 09kami: 恩 好 这里我改过
2016-02-14 17:12 Lan wings: 01:03:190 (4,5,6,7) - 你懂的
2016-02-14 17:12 09kami: 这里我改成了两个折返
2016-02-14 17:12 Lan wings: 然后从这里开始的一些slider 变速太慢
2016-02-14 17:12 Lan wings: 好吧
2016-02-14 17:13 Lan wings: 我看了下 不是变速问题
2016-02-14 17:13 Lan wings: 是突然用了1/4问题
2016-02-14 17:13 Lan wings: 01:12:190 (1) -
2016-02-14 17:14 09kami: 这段之前是一段长连打 后来想了下改成了这样
2016-02-14 17:14 09kami: 01:12:190 (1,2) -
2016-02-14 17:14 Lan wings: 其实就是节奏问题
2016-02-14 17:15 Lan wings: 这样的节奏这样的排列 除了靠看圈(就算是靠看圈估计也难看这一点点区别)没办法能读到你突然变成1/4 jump
2016-02-14 17:15 09kami: 恩...那我改01:12:190 (1) - 成1/1?
2016-02-14 17:16 Lan wings: 我只是提建议啊..怎么改你自己决定就好..
2016-02-14 17:16 09kami: 恩


liaoxingyao
2016-02-14 17:43 liaoxingyao: gan jue hao duo le
2016-02-14 17:43 liaoxingyao: 好像也没啥。。
2016-02-14 17:43 liaoxingyao: 你这种风格我不是很懂(虽然我一直不懂HW风格就是了hhh
2016-02-14 17:43 09kami: 好吧
2016-02-14 17:43 liaoxingyao: 00:32:190 (6) - 这里到00:33:190 (1) - 怎么空空如也
2016-02-14 17:44 09kami: 恩....那我换个滑条弥补下
FCL
Previous time is unsnapped
  • [Extra]
  1. 00:09:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The pentagon looks ugly because was made manually. Make it through ctrl+shift+d will pretty neat
  2. 00:37:523 (1) - you could make better blanket http://puu.sh/n7SIr/8097d9407b.jpg
  3. 00:55:690 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i thinks these patterns doesn't will work since these intended for gradually decreasing sound. Previous patterns looks pretty fine

  • [Lunatic]
  1. 00:27:190 (1) - try move red point to slidertich to make elbow slider symmetrical
  2. 00:29:857 (8) - this form looks weird relativity 00:29:690 (7) - . Blanket here would be better
  3. 00:30:857 (2,3) - blanket things, u can improve it
  4. 00:35:857 (1) - what's a random NC? I can't find some reasons for nc here
  5. 01:04:357 (2) - move to 385 345 .it's more correct
  6. 01:09:357 (1) - again nc things

Can't say something about Insane

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:24:357 (2,3) - you should use 1.3 ds since it's can be confusing for Harddiff players.
  2. 01:04:857 (1,2) - blanket would be better http://puu.sh/n7U99/60d4619467.jpg

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:09:690 (4,5) - flow is too sharp for beginners imo, try avoid flow like this in lowest diffs
  2. 00:58:857 (2,1) - ^
  3. 01:07:190 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:05:523 (4,5) - distance error

Can't say something about Easy too
Topic Starter
09kami

FCL wrote:

Previous time is unsnapped
  • [Extra]
  1. 00:09:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The pentagon looks ugly because was made manually. Make it through ctrl+shift+d will pretty neat fixed
  2. 00:37:523 (1) - you could make better blanket http://puu.sh/n7SIr/8097d9407b.jpg fixed?
  3. 00:55:690 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i thinks these patterns doesn't will work since these intended for gradually decreasing sound. Previous patterns looks pretty fine
fixed


  • [Lunatic]
  1. 00:27:190 (1) - try move red point to slidertich to make elbow slider symmetrical It's not symmetrical.
  2. 00:29:857 (8) - this form looks weird relativity 00:29:690 (7) - . Blanket here would be better I don't think so. Because there is no sense of violation and I in the play
  3. 00:30:857 (2,3) - blanket things, u can improve it fixed
  4. 00:35:857 (1) - what's a random NC? I can't find some reasons for nc here Here I feel that it is the place of stress. It will be NC
  5. 01:04:357 (2) - move to 385 345 .it's more correct fixed
  6. 01:09:357 (1) - again nc things
fixed some



Can't say something about Insane

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:24:357 (2,3) - you should use 1.3 ds since it's can be confusing for Harddiff players. fixed
  2. 01:04:857 (1,2) - blanket would be better http://puu.sh/n7U99/60d4619467.jpg
fixed

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:09:690 (4,5) - flow is too sharp for beginners imo, try avoid flow like this in lowest diffs
  2. 00:58:857 (2,1) - ^
  3. 01:07:190 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:05:523 (4,5) - distance error
I believe do not need to change

Can't say something about Easy too
thank
Rizia
looks good now
Chaoslitz
As requested

Insane跟Extra用的sv對比實在是太大, 老實說, 這spread真的不行.

就是說, 星數在極高sv的情況下完全作不了準, 以星數來說spread是沒問題的, 問題是在於Gameplay方面, 在高sv的滑條比起跳更講求玩家移動的能力, sv越高動量越大, 滑條尾打了100和斷滑條的情況更容易出現, 所以在Gameplay上實際的難度是這樣:


這就是我說spread出現問題的原因, Insane的實際難度比起Lunatic甚至是Extra還要高, 而且Insane overmap的情況也是很多.
你可能覺得這只是我主觀的看法, 例如只是我的移動辣雞啊打不動的一大堆的藉口之類,
以下附上3個難度的testplay:


想要replay的話我也可以提供
打圖的次序是Extra > Lunatic > Insane, Insane也是花了最多的pc

現在的spread是會墜的,原因也跟我說的一樣, 解決方法也只能從每個難度入手
只把Insane刪了或是增加難度是不可能的了, 不然Hard跟現在的Lunatic的難度相差太大
刪了Lunatic或是Extra也是不行, 問題根本沒有解決

所以我建議把Lunatic改易變成Insane, 把Insane改難成Lunatic,作為另一個"Extra"diff,這樣兩種sv就能並存

[General]
  1. 比較上不重要,但背景的比例最好是4:3或16:9
[KwaN's Easy]
  1. 01:05:523 (3) - 01:10:523 (1,3) - 這些都貼邊了...
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:190 (1,1) - Del NC, NC用得太多了
  2. 00:30:523 (3,4) - 這個角度有點過窄
  3. 01:13:023 (4) - 01:28:023 (2) - Normal不要放多於一個折返
[Hard]
  1. 請盡量統一ds
  2. 00:02:190 (5,5) - NC
  3. 00:35:857 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這些沒有必要疊上吧?
  4. 00:37:523 (1,3) - 疊上了讀圖會不清楚
  5. 00:40:690 (1,3) - 這為啥要疊上..
  6. 00:50:190 (6) - 正常不會把折返放過大白線吧
  7. 00:52:190 (3) - 你要是把那個圈疊成這樣我反而建議你不要這樣拉
  8. 00:56:523 (1,2,3,4) - 這兒怎麼不在跟小提琴了?

剩下3個難度先不摸了,待你把spread弄好再繼續, 當然要是你覺得這摸不合理把這直接無視我也沒辦法, 我總不能一直在戳, 但只好說以根據我的經驗, 這spread是會墜的.
再有問題的話可以隨時問我
Topic Starter
09kami

Chaoslitz wrote:

As requested

Insane跟Extra用的sv對比實在是太大, 老實說, 這spread真的不行.

就是說, 星數在極高sv的情況下完全作不了準, 以星數來說spread是沒問題的, 問題是在於Gameplay方面, 在高sv的滑條比起跳更講求玩家移動的能力, sv越高動量越大, 滑條尾打了100和斷滑條的情況更容易出現, 所以在Gameplay上實際的難度是這樣:


這就是我說spread出現問題的原因, Insane的實際難度比起Lunatic甚至是Extra還要高, 而且Insane overmap的情況也是很多.
你可能覺得這只是我主觀的看法, 例如只是我的移動辣雞啊打不動的一大堆的藉口之類,
以下附上3個難度的testplay:


想要replay的話我也可以提供
打圖的次序是Extra > Lunatic > Insane, Insane也是花了最多的pc

現在的spread是會墜的,原因也跟我說的一樣, 解決方法也只能從每個難度入手
只把Insane刪了或是增加難度是不可能的了, 不然Hard跟現在的Lunatic的難度相差太大
刪了Lunatic或是Extra也是不行, 問題根本沒有解決

所以我建議把Lunatic改易變成Insane, 把Insane改難成Lunatic,作為另一個"Extra"diff,這樣兩種sv就能並存

[General]
  1. 比較上不重要,但背景的比例最好是4:3或16:9
[KwaN's Easy]
  1. 01:05:523 (3) - 01:10:523 (1,3) - 這些都貼邊了...
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:190 (1,1) - Del NC, NC用得太多了
  2. 00:30:523 (3,4) - 這個角度有點過窄
  3. 01:13:023 (4) - 01:28:023 (2) - Normal不要放多於一個折返
[Hard]
  1. 請盡量統一ds
  2. 00:02:190 (5,5) - NC
  3. 00:35:857 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這些沒有必要疊上吧?
  4. 00:37:523 (1,3) - 疊上了讀圖會不清楚
  5. 00:40:690 (1,3) - 這為啥要疊上..
  6. 00:50:190 (6) - 正常不會把折返放過大白線吧
  7. 00:52:190 (3) - 你要是把那個圈疊成這樣我反而建議你不要這樣拉
  8. 00:56:523 (1,2,3,4) - 這兒怎麼不在跟小提琴了?

剩下3個難度先不摸了,待你把spread弄好再繼續, 當然要是你覺得這摸不合理把這直接無視我也沒辦法, 我總不能一直在戳, 但只好說以根據我的經驗, 這spread是會墜的.
再有問題的話可以隨時問我

all done
Chaoslitz
Recheck啊啊啊啊啊啊啊

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:857 (5) - NC, 00:05:523 (1) - 這個NC不要
  2. 00:30:523 (3,4) - 還是沒改好啊, 試試這樣
  3. 01:13:023 (4,5) - 這樣放的話新手有可能讀錯圖, 你可這樣放或是一個折返滑條+note
  4. 01:26:523 (5) - 這個把滑條尾放低點改善flow
  5. 01:28:023 (2,3) - 跟01:13:023 (4,5) 一樣
[Hard]
  1. 00:34:023 (2) - 這個的尾部看起來很怪啊, 把這改改, 還有為啥最尾那個是紅點(x

  2. 00:35:857 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個還是要改改,因為看起來不美觀,彎曲得太多了 (overcurved)
  3. 00:37:523 (1) - 最尾不用特意轉回去啦
  4. 00:40:690 (1) - 滑條最尾不要紅點
  5. 00:42:523 (3,4,5,6) - 跟00:35:857 (4,5,6,7,8)差不多,有點overcurved
  6. 00:49:190 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  7. 00:52:190 (3) - 這個還沒改啊..
  8. 00:57:190 (3) - NC 00:56:523 (1) - 這個不要
  9. 00:58:857 (1,2) - 這個跟DS放啊.為啥要跳
  10. 01:03:190 (1) - 這沒必要減速啊
  11. kiai time 沒啥問題,只是ds還是有些亂
[Insane]
  1. Overmap 是沒問題,但是為啥要在Insane overmap啊
  2. 00:02:273 - 00:03:607 - 00:06:940 - 00:07:107 - Overmap了qwq
  3. 00:07:190 (1) - 00:07:690 (2) - 紅點後的距離過短 (00:07:190 (1) - 滑條最尾還是紅點啊啊啊啊啊啊啊)
  4. 00:14:357 (2) - 這太遠了, ctrl+g一下
  5. 00:20:523 (1) - 也是紅點後的距離過短
  6. 00:22:190 (4) - ^
  7. 00:23:857 (1) - 這些紅點我是覺得沒必要的..>_>
  8. 00:29:690 (7,8) - Blanket好點
  9. 00:43:857 (1,2) - 這沒必要放那麼遠的跳啊
  10. 00:52:690 (2,3) - ^
  11. 00:59:857 (1) - Del NC
  12. 01:07:190 (1) - 這個滑條真的不好看,特別那個卷起來的
  13. 01:04:857 (1) - Del NC, 01:05:523 (3) - NC
  14. 01:10:523 (1,1) - 這2個滑條完全破壞了已統一的節奏啊,把它都改掉
  15. 01:14:857 (4) - 我建議這個用1/2滑條, 01:15:023 - 空了很奇怪
  16. 01:15:607 (2,4) - Overmap了
  17. 01:20:523 - 01:26:857 - 這段根本完全overmap了啊, 太亂了,把節奏統一
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:16:523 (3) - 也是紅點後的距離過短, 還有00:16:023 (2,3) - 疊好
  2. 00:18:023 (2,4) - 疊好
  3. 00:25:523 (6) - NC
  4. 00:32:190 (6) - ^
  5. 00:33:857 - 00:59:523 - 其實這段我會建議remap了,因為整段都是以曲的滑條來做的,結果距離放得很亂了,沒有跟音樂
  6. 01:19:023 (1,2) - 這個聽起來實在怪怪的,把這改改
  7. 01:06:857 (6) - 紅點啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
[Extra]
  1. 00:09:023 (2) - Ctrl+g, flow更好
  2. 01:03:190 (1,2) - 試試這樣?
  3. 01:06:023 (2) - Ctrl+g
  4. 01:07:690 (2,3,4) - 怎麼距離突然近了
  5. 01:09:190 (3) - 把距離改近點,然後ctrl+g
  6. 01:12:023 (6) - 01:12:023 (6,1) - 的距離應該比01:11:523 (5,6) - 遠,把01:12:023 (6)放近點01:11:523 (5)
  7. 01:15:523 (3,4) - 試試這樣?
  8. 01:17:857 (3,4) - 放遠點啦
  9. 01:23:690 (4,1) - ^
Topic Starter
09kami

Chaoslitz wrote:

Recheck啊啊啊啊啊啊啊

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:857 (5) - NC, 00:05:523 (1) - 這個NC不要 fixed
  2. 00:30:523 (3,4) - 還是沒改好啊, 試試這樣 fixed
  3. 01:13:023 (4,5) - 這樣放的話新手有可能讀錯圖, 你可這樣放或是一個折返滑條+note fixed
  4. 01:26:523 (5) - 這個把滑條尾放低點改善flow fixed
  5. 01:28:023 (2,3) - 跟01:13:023 (4,5) 一樣 fixed


[Hard]
  1. 00:34:023 (2) - 這個的尾部看起來很怪啊, 把這改改, 還有為啥最尾那個是紅點(x fixed

  2. 00:35:857 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個還是要改改,因為看起來不美觀,彎曲得太多了 (overcurved) fixed
  3. 00:37:523 (1) - 最尾不用特意轉回去啦 fixed
  4. 00:40:690 (1) - 滑條最尾不要紅點 fixed
  5. 00:42:523 (3,4,5,6) - 跟00:35:857 (4,5,6,7,8)差不多,有點overcurved fixed
  6. 00:49:190 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ fixed
  7. 00:52:190 (3) - 這個還沒改啊.. fixed
  8. 00:57:190 (3) - NC 00:56:523 (1) - 這個不要 fixed
  9. 00:58:857 (1,2) - 這個跟DS放啊.為啥要跳 这个地方放跳是因为2是个重音 而且是个比较关键的重音 它在整首曲子的转折点上 从这个位置开始 后面基本都可以算Kiai部分 而且这段前面的滑条是减速到了0.5SV 这里开SD放得话 反而显得没那么美观 除非是是重做前面的滑条 所以这个地方可以不改的话 我想尽量不去动它
  10. 01:03:190 (1) - 這沒必要減速啊 fixed
  11. kiai time 沒啥問題,只是ds還是有些亂 实际上我只用了两种DS倍率 1.3 1.5 但因为绿线部分的滑条减速加速会使开DS后间距改变 所以看着有些乱?>_<
[Insane]
  1. Overmap 是沒問題,但是為啥要在Insane overmap啊 咦 这些是overmap吗;w;
  2. 00:02:273 - 00:03:607 - 00:06:940 - 00:07:107 - Overmap了qwq fixed
  3. 00:07:190 (1) - 00:07:690 (2) - 紅點後的距離過短 (00:07:190 (1) - 滑條最尾還是紅點啊啊啊啊啊啊啊) fixed
  4. 00:14:357 (2) - 這太遠了, ctrl+g一下 fixed
  5. 00:20:523 (1) - 也是紅點後的距離過短 fixed
  6. 00:22:190 (4) - ^ fixed
  7. 00:23:857 (1) - 這些紅點我是覺得沒必要的..>_> fixed
  8. 00:29:690 (7,8) - Blanket好點 fixed
  9. 00:43:857 (1,2) - 這沒必要放那麼遠的跳啊 fixed
  10. 00:52:690 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  11. 00:59:857 (1) - Del NC fixed
  12. 01:07:190 (1) - 這個滑條真的不好看,特別那個卷起來的 fixed
  13. 01:04:857 (1) - Del NC, 01:05:523 (3) - NC fixed
  14. 01:10:523 (1,1) - 這2個滑條完全破壞了已統一的節奏啊,把它都改掉 fixed?
  15. 01:14:857 (4) - 我建議這個用1/2滑條, 01:15:023 - 空了很奇怪 fixed
  16. 01:15:607 (2,4) - Overmap了 fixed
  17. 01:20:523 - 01:26:857 - 這段根本完全overmap了啊, 太亂了,把節奏統一
fixed

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:16:523 (3) - 也是紅點後的距離過短, 還有00:16:023 (2,3) - 疊好 fixed
  2. 00:18:023 (2,4) - 疊好 fixed
  3. 00:25:523 (6) - NC fixed
  4. 00:32:190 (6) - ^ fixed
  5. 00:33:857 - 00:59:523 - 其實這段我會建議remap了,因為整段都是以曲的滑條來做的,結果距離放得很亂了,沒有跟音樂 fixed 拉长提琴音部分用降音来体现出来 这段remap完了
  6. 01:19:023 (1,2) - 這個聽起來實在怪怪的,把這改改 fixed
  7. 01:06:857 (6) - 紅點啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
fixed

[Extra]
  1. 00:09:023 (2) - Ctrl+g, flow更好 fixed
  2. 01:03:190 (1,2) - 試試這樣? fixed
  3. 01:06:023 (2) - Ctrl+g fixed
  4. 01:07:690 (2,3,4) - 怎麼距離突然近了 fixed
  5. 01:09:190 (3) - 把距離改近點,然後ctrl+g fixed
  6. 01:12:023 (6) - 01:12:023 (6,1) - 的距離應該比01:11:523 (5,6) - 遠,把01:12:023 (6)放近點01:11:523 (5) fixed
  7. 01:15:523 (3,4) - 試試這樣? fixed
  8. 01:17:857 (3,4) - 放遠點啦 fixed
  9. 01:23:690 (4,1) - ^
fixed
IamKwaN
兩個都辛苦了
Topic Starter
09kami

IamKwaN wrote:

兩個都辛苦了
骏妈妈(>w<) 超市才辛苦 我只是把说的都改了而已
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