Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World

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Doyak

Underforest wrote:

Thanks Swegmec :)
Congrats on 4-digit posts!
Underforest
lol thanks
Topic Starter
Wou

Underforest wrote:

lol thanks
Azulae
I am sorry wou that I couldn't correct my map.
I had no internet and now I have no time. I will my GD as soon as I can.
Sorry D:
Ambient
#whatamidoingwithmylife


General

Be weary of the spacing of the jumps.

Asteriks

00:09:191 (7,8) - Space the 8th note out about 1.0x DS. looks like it should be on the blue tick but isnt.
00:26:606 (1,2,3) - No need for a NC
00:26:752 (2,1) - Stack on the end of the slider, feels/looks better
00:27:923 (1,2) - Same deal, no need for a NC and stack the first note on the red tick onto the slider.
00:33:777 (1,2,3,4) - I can definitely hear a beat here, try adding a note on the red tick to stack with notes 1 and 2.
00:35:386 (8) - NC
00:35:386 (8,1) - Same as before try adding another note onto the stack.
00:37:435 (1,2) - New combo on the second note, change the first to be on the previous combo. So from this to this.
00:39:191 - Try adding a note onto the stack to match the beat of the vocals, from this to this.
00:39:630 (4,6) - If you agree with the suggestion above, move the what would be 4th note onto the 6th note which would now look like this with notes 1, 2, and, 3 being stacked.
00:54:411 (5,3) - Grab these 2 and pull them up with 2.0x DS
00:55:582 (1,2,4) - Space this out more and/or stack the 4th note onto the end of the slider
00:56:460 (6,1) - Either stack onto the end of the slider or space it out further, blue tick issue as before.
01:00:996 (1,2) - ^
01:03:338 (1,2) - ^
01:04:216 (4,5,6) - ^
01:12:704 (1,2) - ^
01:14:313 (2,3) - ^Try stacking the 3rd note onto the 5th
01:21:191 (6,1) - Same issue.

Hopefully this was helpful, some were hard to explain so PM me if they didn't make much sense or no sense at all.

GL friend. :D
Zeason
Just happened to be passing, LOL.

[General]
  1. I found a picture of unused the name file is A1G, please delete it
  2. I found the widescreen support in diff Az's Extra, remove please.


[Asterisk]
  1. 00:10:508 (4) - Change position to x:153 y:281 or stack the head on the tail of 00:09:630 (1)
  2. After move ^ , Blanket this 00:10:508 (4,5)
  3. You miss some note here 00:36:411 and 00:36:557 - try add some note please
  4. 00:38:606 (5) - You miss some note/hitsound in the red tick
  5. The same problem, try add some note here 00:39:484 and here 00:40:216
  6. 00:55:874 (2) - Stack the head on the tail of 00:55:143 (3)
  7. 00:56:167 (3) - The same problem ^ , try stack the head on the head of 00:53:094 (7)
    Actually, I found many shortage of note in 00:33:777 to 00:39:484


[Azulae]
  1. 00:26:899 (3,4) - Try change this to slider
  2. 00:31:143 (4,5) - To me, if you agree, this is too pushy if this note like this. Why not try to replace it, for example, 5 to 4, 4 to 5 like this
  3. 00:52:801 (1,2) - Too sloppy, from the position and why you 00:52:801 (1) - make the tail on the blue tick ?
  4. 00:56:899 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:57:484 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:22:069 (8) - Please delete it, since there is no sound here
  7. 01:22:801 (1,2) - Please move the note 2 toward another position


[Fuyuyu]
  1. 01:09:630 (3,4,5,6,7) - Lots of hitsound whistle, like someone was farting lol
    It seems there is no problem. Good job fuyuyu-


Okay enough, Good luck with your beatmap. ;)
Topic Starter
Wou

Ambient wrote:

#whatamidoingwithmylife


General

Be weary of the spacing of the jumps.

Asteriks

00:09:191 (7,8) - Space the 8th note out about 1.0x DS. looks like it should be on the blue tick but isnt.
00:26:606 (1,2,3) - No need for a NC
00:26:752 (2,1) - Stack on the end of the slider, feels/looks better
00:27:923 (1,2) - Same deal, no need for a NC and stack the first note on the red tick onto the slider.
00:33:777 (1,2,3,4) - I can definitely hear a beat here, try adding a note on the red tick to stack with notes 1 and 2.
00:35:386 (8) - NC
00:35:386 (8,1) - Same as before try adding another note onto the stack.
00:37:435 (1,2) - New combo on the second note, change the first to be on the previous combo. So from this to this.
00:39:191 - Try adding a note onto the stack to match the beat of the vocals, from this to this.
00:39:630 (4,6) - If you agree with the suggestion above, move the what would be 4th note onto the 6th note which would now look like this with notes 1, 2, and, 3 being stacked.
00:54:411 (5,3) - Grab these 2 and pull them up with 2.0x DS
00:55:582 (1,2,4) - Space this out more and/or stack the 4th note onto the end of the slider
00:56:460 (6,1) - Either stack onto the end of the slider or space it out further, blue tick issue as before.
01:00:996 (1,2) - ^
01:03:338 (1,2) - ^
01:04:216 (4,5,6) - ^
01:12:704 (1,2) - ^
01:14:313 (2,3) - ^Try stacking the 3rd note onto the 5th
01:21:191 (6,1) - Same issue.

Hopefully this was helpful, some were hard to explain so PM me if they didn't make much sense or no sense at all.

GL friend. :D
[quote="Yuuki Akamatsu"]Just happened to be passing, LOL.

[General]
  1. I found a picture of unused the name file is A1G, please delete it


[Asterisk]
  1. 00:10:508 (4) - Change position to x:153 y:281 or stack the head on the tail of 00:09:630 (1) Nah
  2. After move ^ , Blanket this 00:10:508 (4,5) Nah
  3. You miss some note here 00:36:411 and 00:36:557 - try add some note please
  4. 00:38:606 (5) - You miss some note/hitsound in the red tick
  5. The same problem, try add some note here 00:39:484 and here 00:40:216
  6. 00:55:874 (2) - Stack the head on the tail of 00:55:143 (3)
  7. 00:56:167 (3) - The same problem ^ , try stack the head on the head of 00:53:094 (7)
    Actually, I found many shortage of note in 00:33:777 to 00:39:484
Thanks for mod :)
Underforest
Hi, I re-mapped my entire diff and also fix some issues
Please, re-update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: brand-new world.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50972
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Brand-new World
TitleUnicode:Brand-new World
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Wou
Version:Forest's Easy
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags:Gakusen Toshi Asterisk The Academy City on the Water op theme tv size Underforest fuyuyu- Azulae
BeatmapID:846900
BeatmapSetID:387647

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3.5
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-522,"video.flv"
0,0,"bg3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,42611,48055
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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13728,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
14021,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
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79655,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


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Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,192

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Firis Mistlud
KAKERO

Placehold because Avatar: Himeno Sena
User page: full of Kurashina Asuka
Underforest
And you forgot to update my diff thought ;_;
Topic Starter
Wou

Underforest wrote:

And you forgot to update my diff thought ;_;
Sorry if i forgot to update your diff...
coz, i'm changing a bit of my diff
Topic Starter
Wou

KuranteMelodii wrote:

KAKERO

Placehold because Avatar: Himeno Sena ♥♥♥
User page: full of Kurashina Asuka lol :v
Firis Mistlud
Himeno Se- *slapped*

[Asterisk]
  1. 00:06:118 (6) - NC, big white tick
  2. 00:06:557 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:07:289 (6) - NC
  4. 00:08:167 (1,2) - swap NC
  5. 00:10:801 (5) - NC
  6. 00:11:533 (1,3) - swap NC
  7. 00:15:191 (3) - NC
  8. 00:16:655 (6) - ^
  9. 00:18:996 (4) - ^
  10. 00:21:045 (3) - ^
  11. 00:24:850 (5) - ^
  12. 00:31:874 (8,1) - swap NC
  13. 00:33:045 (6) - NC
  14. 00:33:777 (1) - remove NC
  15. 00:34:216 (3) - NC
  16. 00:35:240 (8) - ^
  17. 00:35:679 (1) - remove NC
  18. 00:36:557 (5) - NC
  19. 00:38:899 (6,1) - swap NC
  20. 00:42:411 (7) - NC
  21. 00:44:752 (4) - ^
  22. 00:45:923 (6) - ^
  23. 00:52:801 (6) - ^
  24. 00:53:679 (1) - remove NC
  25. 00:55:143 (3) - NC
  26. 00:56:460 (4,1) - swap NC
  27. 00:57:484 (3) - NC
  28. 00:58:069 (1) - remove NC
  29. 00:58:508 (5) - NC
  30. 01:01:728 (1) - remove NC
  31. 01:02:167 (2) - NC, SV changes
  32. 01:04:655 (5,1) - swap NC
  33. 01:05:825 (4,1) - ^
  34. 01:06:850 (3) - NC
  35. 01:07:435 (1) - remove NC
  36. 01:09:338 (4,1) - swap NC
  37. 01:20:899 (5) - NC
  38. 01:21:484 (1) - - remove NC
  39. 01:22:801 (1) - ^
  1. 00:04:508 (1) - Make it clickable plz
  2. 00:05:825 (5) - Overlap, i think it should put it a little bit left to blanket 00:05:240 (2) -
  3. 00:07:582 (7) - Overlap
  4. 00:08:167 (1) - ^
    There's so many overlapping problems, try to not make those slider overlap each other so the map is neater, but some overlap like 00:21:923 (2,4) - is acceptable, better ask someone what is a great overlap.
  5. 00:23:094 (1) - Make the end clickable by shortening it into 3/4 and add a note at the white tick, no i am not applying my style but i think this is the best way to map with the vocal hold
  6. 00:27:923 (4) - should stack with 00:27:191 (1) - head
  7. 00:29:240 (7,1) - that just a little bit, but the stack is off.
  8. 00:32:752 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I personality don't like this kind of anti jumps, they're too hard yet uncomfortable to play
  9. 00:33:338 (8,2,6,1) - Stack, this is too messy
  10. 01:02:460 (3) - Overlap again, i am mentioning this because i think i need to screenshot to adjust the pattern later on.
  11. 01:08:606 (2) - That doesn't change much but... symmetry with 01:08:167 (1) -
    I also personalty don't let sliders end on white tick unless the previous red tick is stronger and it's a 1/1 slider, i don't know does it unrankable

good luck~
ultimatrix117
re-upload
Underforest

ultimatrix117 wrote:

re-upload
The beatmap download is working fine, so no need
Wow, first post
Electoz

Underforest wrote:

Wow, first post
Hazu-
from #modreqs

[Normal]
01:00:557 (1) - Wrong positioned claps.
01:01:143 (2) - ^
01:01:728 (3) - ^
01:02:313 (4) - ^
01:02:606 (5) - ^
01:03:191 (6) - ^
01:03:777 (7) - ^
01:04:655 (1) - ^
01:10:216 (3) - ^
01:10:801 (1) - ^
01:11:386 (2) - ^
01:12:264 (3) - ^
01:12:557 (4) - ^
01:13:143 (5) - ^
01:13:582 (6) - ^
Azulae
Can you maybe take out my difficulty please?
Thanks
Topic Starter
Wou

Azulae wrote:

Can you maybe take out my difficulty please?
Thanks
:? okay?
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