2558-12-18 07:15 Wou: Hi~
2558-12-18 07:16 Electoz: hi
2558-12-18 07:17 Wou: would you like to recheck this beatmap ?
2558-12-18 07:17 Wou: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846758 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World]
2558-12-18 07:21 Electoz: wait
2558-12-18 07:21 Electoz: I'll download it
2558-12-18 07:21 Wou: alright
2558-12-18 07:25 Electoz: I'll go for Advanced first
2558-12-18 07:26 Electoz: why you renamed it to Advanced?
2558-12-18 07:26 Electoz: I thought it was named "Normal" before
2558-12-18 07:26 Wou: okay
2558-12-18 07:29 Wou: you will see the modder in https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393288/start=15
2558-12-18 07:29 Wou: XiaofengTiger
2558-12-18 07:31 Electoz: 00:15:191 Try to change this from sliderend into something that's clickable
2558-12-18 07:31 Electoz: Because there's a vocal
2558-12-18 07:31 Wou: but do you think that is where the good? normal or advanced ?
2558-12-18 07:32 Electoz: depends on what you're trying to do
2558-12-18 07:32 Electoz: Normal and Advanced do have some differences
2558-12-18 07:32 Electoz: Advanced is like between Normal and Hard
2558-12-18 07:32 Electoz: But to be honest
2558-12-18 07:32 Electoz: I never see a 2.04* for Advanced before
2558-12-18 07:33 Electoz: If you change back to Normal now you have to fix all distance snap
2558-12-18 07:35 Electoz: 00:20:167 (1,2,3) - It's a little bit weird here
2558-12-18 07:36 Electoz: You don't have to do patterns like that, just map these sliders normally
2558-12-18 07:37 Electoz: 00:23:679 (1,2) - The blanket here is off.
2558-12-18 07:37 Electoz: 00:32:460 (7,8) - The overlap here doesn't look good
2558-12-18 07:37 Electoz: 00:33:191 (8,3) - This one too
2558-12-18 07:38 Electoz: 00:42:996 (1,2) - Make these two sliders the same shape
2558-12-18 07:39 Electoz: 00:49:435 (5) - Stack the head on the tail of 00:51:630 (1) -
2558-12-18 07:39 Electoz: 00:54:996 (6,1) - This one also
2558-12-18 07:41 Electoz: That's it for now for Advanced
2558-12-18 07:41 Electoz: I'll go for Hard now
2558-12-18 07:43 Electoz: 00:34:508 (2,3) - Put 3 more far from 2
2558-12-18 07:43 Electoz: 00:40:362 (2,3,2) - Not a good overlap
2558-12-18 07:44 Electoz: Try to make unintentional overlaps as less as possible
2558-12-18 07:47 Electoz: 01:18:850 (1,1) - Try stacking their heads
2558-12-18 07:47 Electoz: Also, don't overlap this 01:19:728 (1,3) -
2558-12-18 07:48 Electoz: 01:23:386
2558-12-18 07:48 Electoz: map something here
2558-12-18 07:49 Electoz: overall hard's pretty good for someone who's just started mapping
2558-12-18 07:55 Wou: okay bro, maybe I fix it later, I'll savelog first. Have problem if i fix it later? because now I have to going off for now
2558-12-18 07:55 Electoz: sry, my pc got crashed
2558-12-18 07:55 Electoz: yeah, no problem
2558-12-18 07:55 Wou: okay
I'm writing here just in case you GD'ers are wondering.
- Did a recheck on Advanced and Hard.
- Pointed out only important issues. I'll leave other things to the later mods.
- Advanced still needs some work.
- Hard looks above average for who's just started mapping, rhythm looks fine, good flow, only need to fix minor issues.
- Bro, your spacing is kinda inconsistent. Try removing each NC and see if the error comes up from AImod and fix them please.
- 00:04:801 (1) - Why you put a reverse on a blue tick? The strong sound there is clearly on the white tick 00:05:240 here.
- 00:05:825 (2,3) - The blanket here is off. By the way, I think 00:06:118 (3) is a bit off in terms of rhythm. I think you should map on two white ticks there instead of putting a reverse on the red tick. Same applies to 00:08:460 (3) - 00:10:801 (4) . Because you can put some claps there if you map them on the white tick.
- 00:14:313 - The intensity kinda drop here but I think it shouldn't be a break. Same applies to 00:42:411 .
- 00:28:362 (1,2) - You should replace sliderends with something clickable since there are claps there. So it would emphasizes the hitsound better.
- 00:31:289 - I would map something with clap here and put clap on here 00:32:167 to keep the clap consistent.
- 00:33:338 (2,3) - Kinda ugly, if you're trying to maintain the DS then please come up with something better than this.
- 01:01:143 (1,2,3) - LOL they clearly don't look symmetrical.
- 01:05:825 (1,2) - Blanket here could be improved imo.
- Claps are pretty inconsistent, especially in kiai.
- This is first time for me modding Insane so keep in mind that I might point out some blablabla things that won't make sense lol.
- 00:08:313 (1,2) - I think sliderends here should be clickable since hitsounds are there. And almost every hitsounds you put there in that part are clickable.
- 00:25:582 (4) - I think the spacing here should be decreased. It's almost the same spacing here 00:04:655 (2,1) but this time the "4" here didn't emphasize anything.
- 00:44:606 (5) - Does this match anything in the song? Because I didn't hear anything here.
- 00:47:167 (1) - Spinner is kinda long, maybe shorten it like what Asterisk and Extra diff did?
- 01:01:728 (3,4) - I think the spacing here is too small.
- 01:19:289 (5,1) - The jump here is too sudden imo.
- 01:24:118 (2) - I don't know if it's just me, but I found it very hard to read here.
- I can't mod Extra because I'm noob lol.
- Uncheck widescreen support please since all diffs had it unchecked.
- 01:24:411 - You should end the song here like the other diffs instead of the blue tick there.
Also, about the intro. Some diffs didn't map that, some diffs put a spinner, while Extra mapped there from the beginning. It would be better if all diffs are the same.
I don't mind if it's no kd or whatsoever since I already modded this map once.