Hihi!
I briefly looked over the easy, but I'm short on time, so I'm just going to do your diffs, not the GD. The easy looked pretty good, anyway.
[Advanced]
The beginning of this feels really strong on the clap hit sound. I liked the use of clap in the easy difficulty, maybe use that as a template? Whenever you use a lot of something it means less the more you use it.
00:14:313 (1) - I would strongly recommend mapping vocals in this section, since they're a lot more prevalent than the background instrument, like when you mapped 00:20:167 (1,2,3) -
00:18:264 (6,7) - Just as a general rule, you want neighboring sliders like this to be identical or reverse. These aren't really either, visual thing.
00:20:167 (1,2,3,) - 2 and 3 are same but 1 is different?
00:23:679 (1) - This section here feels really repetitive, is there any way you could mix this up so that some notes start on red ticks? i.e
00:24:850 (3) - http://puu.sh/lVmIf/4baa6ed4fa.png kinda neat
00:28:362 (1,2) - these sliders don't match
00:37:435 (4,5) - Feels like there should be a rest between these two notes
00:47:094 (1) - If you move that middle square after you hover cursor over slider to the middle of this slider it'll look a lot better
00:55:582 (7) - Same thing with this section as with 23:679, would try to mix this up some
01:22:216 (1) - Distance between 1,2,3 here isn't the same, grid snap is messing with you here
[Hard]
00:06:850 (3) - Overlap between this and 00:07:289 (1) - looks meh. You could move this single under 00:06:411 (2) -
00:07:289 (1) - Usually you either want to point slider ends towards the next note, or in the opposite direction (if you're going for some sort of extra emphasis) but the middle is a no go. This looks kinda nice -- this general area at least
http://puu.sh/lVnfI/25831b24f8.png
00:08:167 (4) - Same with this one
http://puu.sh/lVnhR/f866c3a900.png
00:11:972 (1) - Since these are all the same note, they should prob be spaced evenly, you could do a square here?
http://puu.sh/lVnnS/30d5a4c902.png
00:23:094 (2) - Finish here is nice
00:21:923 (2) - Clap on end of this is nice
00:28:069 (4) - This isn't the only issue like this in this map, you need to go through and check your blankets on these sliders. the top part doesn't align with the curve of the single hit circle
http://puu.sh/lVnx9/b7eb488b77.png
00:30:411 (3) - This is a good example of using an away slider for emphasis
Apply that sort of idea to the earlier part of your song, like th 7:289 comment
00:35:386 (1) - Another blanket example to clean, you can move that slider to right a little to make the circles line up, this is what it looks like fixed
http://puu.sh/lVnPr/b08eea6db1.png
00:38:899 (1) - You want these to be directly in the middle of the slider, like this
http://puu.sh/lVnV0/a6e1b1197f.png
00:49:435 (1) - That vocal starts on the red tick
00:51:045 (1,2) These need hit sounds, they're currently silent
00:55:582 (2,3,4) - This looks sloppy, make all three the same angles, use copy paste to do so
01:08:167 (1) - Blanket here
01:09:923 (4) - Distance between 4 and 5 needs fixed
01:13:874 (1) - Distance between 1 and 2 is not same as 2 and 3
01:21:045 (1) - Look at earlier comment about sliders in the middle
If you have any questions about these lemme know! Good luck getting this map ranked. Love the BG's and the song!
I briefly looked over the easy, but I'm short on time, so I'm just going to do your diffs, not the GD. The easy looked pretty good, anyway.
[Advanced]
The beginning of this feels really strong on the clap hit sound. I liked the use of clap in the easy difficulty, maybe use that as a template? Whenever you use a lot of something it means less the more you use it.
00:14:313 (1) - I would strongly recommend mapping vocals in this section, since they're a lot more prevalent than the background instrument, like when you mapped 00:20:167 (1,2,3) -
00:18:264 (6,7) - Just as a general rule, you want neighboring sliders like this to be identical or reverse. These aren't really either, visual thing.
00:20:167 (1,2,3,) - 2 and 3 are same but 1 is different?
00:23:679 (1) - This section here feels really repetitive, is there any way you could mix this up so that some notes start on red ticks? i.e
00:24:850 (3) - http://puu.sh/lVmIf/4baa6ed4fa.png kinda neat
00:28:362 (1,2) - these sliders don't match
00:37:435 (4,5) - Feels like there should be a rest between these two notes
00:47:094 (1) - If you move that middle square after you hover cursor over slider to the middle of this slider it'll look a lot better
00:55:582 (7) - Same thing with this section as with 23:679, would try to mix this up some
01:22:216 (1) - Distance between 1,2,3 here isn't the same, grid snap is messing with you here
[Hard]
00:06:850 (3) - Overlap between this and 00:07:289 (1) - looks meh. You could move this single under 00:06:411 (2) -
00:07:289 (1) - Usually you either want to point slider ends towards the next note, or in the opposite direction (if you're going for some sort of extra emphasis) but the middle is a no go. This looks kinda nice -- this general area at least
http://puu.sh/lVnfI/25831b24f8.png
00:08:167 (4) - Same with this one
http://puu.sh/lVnhR/f866c3a900.png
00:11:972 (1) - Since these are all the same note, they should prob be spaced evenly, you could do a square here?
http://puu.sh/lVnnS/30d5a4c902.png
00:23:094 (2) - Finish here is nice
00:21:923 (2) - Clap on end of this is nice
00:28:069 (4) - This isn't the only issue like this in this map, you need to go through and check your blankets on these sliders. the top part doesn't align with the curve of the single hit circle
http://puu.sh/lVnx9/b7eb488b77.png
00:30:411 (3) - This is a good example of using an away slider for emphasis

00:35:386 (1) - Another blanket example to clean, you can move that slider to right a little to make the circles line up, this is what it looks like fixed
http://puu.sh/lVnPr/b08eea6db1.png
00:38:899 (1) - You want these to be directly in the middle of the slider, like this
http://puu.sh/lVnV0/a6e1b1197f.png
00:49:435 (1) - That vocal starts on the red tick
00:51:045 (1,2) These need hit sounds, they're currently silent
00:55:582 (2,3,4) - This looks sloppy, make all three the same angles, use copy paste to do so
01:08:167 (1) - Blanket here
01:09:923 (4) - Distance between 4 and 5 needs fixed
01:13:874 (1) - Distance between 1 and 2 is not same as 2 and 3
01:21:045 (1) - Look at earlier comment about sliders in the middle
If you have any questions about these lemme know! Good luck getting this map ranked. Love the BG's and the song!