I briefly looked over the easy, but I'm short on time, so I'm just going to do your diffs, not the GD. The easy looked pretty good, anyway.The beginning of this feels really strong on the clap hit sound. I liked the use of clap in the easy difficulty, maybe use that as a template? Whenever you use a lot of something it means less the more you use it. maybe you are right
00:14:313 (1) - I would strongly recommend mapping vocals in this section, since they're a lot more prevalent than the background instrument, like when you mapped 00:20:167 (1,2,3) - maybe, it seems now I fix it ?
00:18:264 (6,7) - Just as a general rule, you want neighboring sliders like this to be identical or reverse. These aren't really either, visual thing. hard to fix this
00:20:167 (1,2,3,) - 2 and 3 are same but 1 is different? fix
00:23:679 (1) - This section here feels really repetitive, is there any way you could mix this up so that some notes start on red ticks? i.e
00:24:850 (3) - http://puu.sh/lVmIf/4baa6ed4fa.png kinda neat I can't do like you
00:28:362 (1,2) - these sliders don't match maybe, it seems now I fix it ?
00:37:435 (4,5) - Feels like there should be a rest between these two notes i really don't understand what you mean for what gets a rest here?
00:47:094 (1) - If you move that middle square after you hover cursor over slider to the middle of this slider it'll look a lot better already?
00:55:582 (7) - Same thing with this section as with 23:679, would try to mix this up some I can't do like you
01:22:216 (1) - Distance between 1,2,3 here isn't the same, grid snap is messing with you here maybe, now i fix this?00:06:850 (3) - Overlap between this and 00:07:289 (1) - looks meh. You could move this single under 00:06:411 (2) -
00:07:289 (1) - Usually you either want to point slider ends towards the next note, or in the opposite direction (if you're going for some sort of extra emphasis) but the middle is a no go. This looks kinda nice -- this general area at least
00:08:167 (4) - Same with this one
00:11:972 (1) - Since these are all the same note, they should prob be spaced evenly, you could do a square here?
00:23:094 (2) - Finish here is nice No
00:21:923 (2) - Clap on end of this is nice No
00:28:069 (4) - This isn't the only issue like this in this map, you need to go through and check your blankets on these sliders. the top part doesn't align with the curve of the single hit circle it seems now I fix it ?
00:30:411 (3) - This is a good example of using an away slider for emphasis Apply that sort of idea to the earlier part of your song, like th 7:289 comment ehh?
00:35:386 (1) - Another blanket example to clean, you can move that slider to right a little to make the circles line up, this is what it looks like fixed
http://puu.sh/lVnPr/b08eea6db1.png maybe, it seems now I fix it ?
00:38:899 (1) - You want these to be directly in the middle of the slider, like this maybe, it seems now I fix it ?
00:49:435 (1) - That vocal starts on the red tick alright
00:51:045 (1,2) These need hit sounds, they're currently silent alright
00:55:582 (2,3,4) - This looks sloppy, make all three the same angles, use copy paste to do so okay?
01:08:167 (1) - Blanket here fix
01:09:923 (4) - Distance between 4 and 5 needs fixed okay
01:13:874 (1) - Distance between 1 and 2 is not same as 2 and 3 fix
01:21:045 (1) - Look at earlier comment about sliders in the middle okay
If you have any questions about these lemme know! Good luck getting this map ranked. Love the BG's and the song!