Thanks a bunch for your mod, editing this post soon
Now answering
BLUE = FIXED
ORANGE = CONFUSED
RED = NOT FIXED
PURPLE = ADDITIONAL COMMENT
Same as always the way to update my diffAihuro wrote:
Hey! M4M request from my queue.
Well, here goes nothing.General:
- Please enable "Widescreen Support" sine you don't have a SB. Please remember this in your future maps.
- There seems to be a DS error in the easiest diff. Please fix that.
Forest's Easy:
- 00:05:825 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved. I think it's okay
- 00:07:289 (1,2) - Why not switch these two notes and add a note here: 00:08:167 - for a better flow, since you didn't leave any spaces open before or after. Added
- 00:09:630 (1,2) - I suggest you blanket them. No
- 00:10:508 (3,1) - This is an ugly overlap here. Please stack them. Ugly... Fixed
- 00:24:850 (3,4) - Mm. . why not try something like this instead: since you can't really blanket them, because you want them: 00:23:679 (1,3) - to look alike. Fixed
- 00:31:582 (5,6) - Uhm. . this seems a little complicated. Why not change them into a slider which ends here: 00:32:167 - . Imo, it plays nicely and also easier for beginners. Okay
- 00:34:216 (3) - This feels a little bit awkward! I suggest you do the same what you did here: 00:35:386 (4) - It follows the vocals nicely and also not oddly to play. Or you can just keep the slider as it is and add a note here: 00:35:094 (4) - . Your choice. Added a slider following the vocals I guess
- 00:36:850 (5,1) - I have something better in mind. Why not add a note here: 00:36:704 - and a slider that starts here: 00:36:996 - and which ends here: 00:37:435 - . I follows the beat and isn't really hard to play. (I must say, this is a really hard part to map) I guess it's okay now
- 00:38:606 (8,9) - Same here. Why not follow the rhythm that I suggested above. Just move them one step forward (Both) The slider will start here: 00:38:460 - and the note here: 00:39:630 - . It follows the vocals. OK
- 00:52:947 (3,4) - Not a nice way to place them. Blanket please. No
- 00:53:240 (4) - Why not end this slider here: 00:53:825 - It fits better with the music and also improves the flow. It's better this
- 00:54:118 (1,2) - ^ Same here. Blanket them. No
- 00:57:484 (3,4) - The rhythm here sounds also complicated. Just move this slider: 00:58:216 (4) - here: 00:58:069 - and end it here: 00:58:508 - . Imo, it plays better and follows the song. Same, no
- 01:01:143 (2,4) - As you can see, they are touching each other, which is really not acceptable. Please avoid these at once. DS fixed
- 01:13:874 (4) - Uhm. . maybe turn this into a 1/2 which starts here: 01:13:728 - ? No
- 01:18:850 (1) - If I were you, I would remove this slider here. If I were you, I would fix that
- 01:24:557 (4) - Add note here maybe? No
- Other than that. Seems like a fine diff. I understand that it's really hard to map this song, especially for an easy diff. Anyways good job!
Okay, I will stop here since you only mod one diff from me.
Good Luck with this mapset of yours.
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