hey, m4m here
00:12:540 (3,4) - probably ctrl-g the rhythm so it will be 3/4 => 1/2 slider, because sudden shift to vocals and suddenly clicking the blue tick is a bit confusing for the target players
00:35:673 (3,4) - ^same
also ignoring that really strong piano hit on the white tick feels so wrong.
I know you want to follow the vocals, but swithcing them should still folow them fine
00:20:492 (1,2,3) - you can rotate this a bit or move so you can make 00:22:661 (4) - the same angle as 1-2-3 like
http://i.imgur.com/CrDeRUs.jpg00:25:914 (4,1) - maybe stack this too?
00:46:516 (1,2) - and 00:49:408 (1,2) - not same spacing? They are the same sounds and all, you even use the same sliders
01:04:950 - and 01:07:841 - those gaps feel so weid, there is even the piano hit here, so not having anything on this is confusing. could add a circle or make 1 two 1/2 sliders. Also you mapped the same sound all the time before...
same for the other times this happens. I understand you want to make the rhythm more interesten but that could also be done with slidersor something I think
01:16:516 (2,3,4) - 1/2 stack stacked on 1/1 stack and with same combo. Might be a bit too confusing for people that play 2* maps :/
01:58:805 (1,2,3) - maybe overlap like this? would look nicer imo
http://i.imgur.com/NobHzax.jpg 02:03:865 (4) - 1/4 really necessary?
02:14:709 (3) - maybe ctrl-g? Think same spacing on all 3 would make more sense here
03:36:757 (1) - think it would look better if you changed the last part of it a bit like
http://i.imgur.com/Qlm4rbL.jpg03:43:625 (3) - curve the same as 2 would look nicer
03:44:347 (1,2) - bit higher spacing would make change from 1/4 to 1/2 better to read
04:39:287 (5) - 1/4 repeat slider would feel better, idk why the 1/4 are suddenly ignored?
http://i.imgur.com/GwPx3xO.jpg or maybe
http://i.imgur.com/5Yz7wfz.jpg ?
04:52:299 (1) - I understand why you used this before because there were vocals, but ignoring all those 1/2 piano etc here doesnt really fit
05:49:381 (1,2) - think 1/1 slider might be better since sudden change to 1/1 together with changed bpm is hard to time hits properly