Wh1teh wrote:

Suomimod inc xd


00:01:302 Offset kannattaa siirtää tähän, koska nyt tahti alkaa yhen iskun liia myöhään. säädin nyt vaikka ei sillä niin paljon väliä ole ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ (jos oltaisiin oikein oikein niin se olisi vasta ekan downbeatin kohdalla mikä tulee siinä mihin nuudeli loppuu)

[yes]
00:01:302 se holdi vois kans alkaa tästä juu
00:02:328 Ton äänen vois mappaa. maped
00:06:670 ja 00:06:986 Vähän inconsistent toi jumppien käyttö, noiden jälkeiset jumpit on ymmärrettäviä koska basso lyö nopeempaa. säädin nyt tätäkin ja werks
00:07:618 - 00:11:407 Rummut muuttuu intensiivisemmäksi mutta mappi helpottuu, tässä kohtaa vois tulla sitä jump+single+jump+single tai jump+3x single patternia. päätin mennä jump > single patternilla kun se kerran on muutenkin yleistä tässä mapissa
00:22:460 Jos toi trilli alkais vasurilla tohon äänee vois helposti mappaa vaikka jumpin tai holdin. nami, hypyd lisäddytd
00:29:723 - 00:32:881 Noi korkeet äänet kuulostaa sen verran dominoivalta, että niis vois olla vaikka single+hand tai jump+jump. säädin tätäkin (pitäiskö käyttää vihreetä 8-D )
00:42:986 Tohon saattaas sopii jump/hand. Sitä edeltävän rummutuksenki vois ehkä erottaa tosta muusta streamistä jollain tapaa, vaik jumpeil tai trill sen mukaa miten se snare paukkuu. juu
01:21:828 Toi rolli on aika ghosty eikä sovi mun mielestä tohon musiikkii hirveen hyvin, vois olla esim. näin http://puu.sh/n0JcV/f9f0686d41.png (jumpeille tai singleillä miten haluu) muutin sitä ton mukaan mutta sillä tavalla että toinen handi on 1/8 snapattynä jotta se pelaa oikein
01:22:144 - 01:23:407 http://puu.sh/n0Jza/d42b037c39.jpg Toi synkkaa lyriikoiden kaa paremmin. sai sitten tonkin korjattua
01:44:249 Aika vahva ääni jonka vois mappaa. huomattu ja korjattu
02:24:512 Vähän hämäävää, että tota ääntä, ja kaikkii vastaavanlaisii tapauksii tos sectionis, ei oo mapattu. tässä se on sellainen personal preference kun haluan sen tuntuvan vähän semmoselta kertosäkeeltä kunnes se sitten "kiihtyy" kun ne muut äänet alkaa soimaan

En tiiä kuinka paljo aattelit muuttaa tota mappii mut siin vähä mun mielipiteitä.

Han Solo wrote:

As requested :^)

General

1. You should change your diff name to Marathon if you want to rank it You can select a unique difficulty name for the hardest difficulty in your map. This also applies for marathon maps, where there's most of the time only one difficulty.
2. Also, add a source Source isn't required if the song isn't from a game/anime/series/etc.
3. Change the OD to 9, and the HP to 8,5 (not 9, due to the ridiculous burst) I'll look into this

Using lane 01-2-3

1. 00:02:565 (2565|1,2565|2) - Double here, but not 00:02:881 (2881|0,3196|0) etc. there? Not very consistent. Use doubles or remove 00:03:039 (3039|2,3354|1). Quite inconsistent I follow a 2/1 pattern here to better highlight the incoming burst.
2. 00:03:828 (3828|0,3828|2,5091|0,5091|3) - Same here, doesn't make sense ^
3. 00:06:670 (6670|1,6670|2,6828|0,6828|1,6986|3,6986|1,7144|0,7144|1,7302|3,7302|2,7302|1,7459|0,7459|1,7459|2,7617|3,7617|1,7617|2,7775|0,7775|1) - Doesn't make any sense either, use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4698722 instead I don't see how that would improve the pattern in any way
4. 00:07:933 (7933|2,8565|2) - No doubles? 00:08:091 (8091|0,8091|3) - And why doubles there? Don't know why the jumps were on red lines, fixed
5. 00:17:407 (17407|3,17486|2,17565|1,17644|2,17723|3,17802|2,17881|1,17960|0) - Break it up, like you did before, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4698730 nice
6. 00:22:302 (22302|0,22381|1,22459|2,22459|0,22539|1,22617|0,22617|2,22696|1) - You could thin this down a bit, very dense for a not very loud sound, also 00:22:696 (22696|1) - ghost note changed pattern and removed that one note then changed the one before to a jump
7. 00:25:302 (25302|2,25302|1) - Move to the left (0-1), the current pattern breaks the flow I think I did something about this before
8. 00:28:144 (28144|1,28460|1,28775|3) - Doubles, or LN's, this breaks pattern for no reason (I get that you want to chart the piano sound, but don't do it like this) Sorry it's my inner stepmania that got released here, put ln's there for better suitability
9. 00:30:038 (30038|1,30038|3,30039|2) - Sure, but continue all the way, so either make 00:30:354 (30354|2) - double and this 00:31:933 (31933|2) - triple, or don't Did some cleaning before and there are no hands here now (also rearranged them)
10. 00:32:880 (32880|1,32880|2,32881|3,32881|0) - Overkill, remove 00:32:880 (32880|1,32880|2) I may as well remove it then
11. 00:33:196 (33196|2,33512|3,33828|3) - Consistency, use doubles Made some changes here too
12. 00:34:144 (34144|1,34144|3,34302|2,34302|0,34460|2,34460|1,34617|2,34618|3,34775|3,34775|0,34775|1,34933|0,34933|1,34933|3,35091|3,35091|2,35091|1) - Waaaay too dense, especially if you started with singles! Slowly build up in the previous section, or thin this down. Yeah, triples are no good
13. 00:36:670 (36670|0) - Change to normal stairs, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4698762, fit's better Done
14. 00:39:196 (39196|2) - Single, or make the rest double (consistency!) Jumpstream boyz
15. 00:41:644 (41644|1) - Remove, add 00:41:723 (41723|3) , the current pattern breaks the flow you're trying to create with 00:41:407 I see(41407|1,41407|0,41565|2,41565|3)
16. 00:42:986 (42986|2) - Double or triple, remove 00:42:749 (42749|1,42828|0,42907|1), add LN's instead Woo
17. 01:02:249 (62249|1,62565|2,62881|3) - LN or double, undermapped compared to previous section, remove 01:02:723 (62723|0) as well (ghost note?), also 01:03:039 (63039|1,63118|0) remove or LN Doubles, then removed the one
18. 01:05:249 (65249|3,65249|0) - Why double? Remove It's there to highlight the whatever sound is playing, it's very minor and I like it the way it is
19. 01:05:565 (65565|0) - Why single? Make double? That's such a weird part to map on but I did it anyway
20. 01:13:775 (73775|1) - Not sure about this one, it doesn't really fit the song, but is awkward to remove it, due to pattern. Changed it to some LNs
21. 01:21:946 (81946|3,81946|2,81986|0,82025|1,82065|2,82104|3,82144|2) - Ctr + H Well, I somehow made it work with that change. The pattern just isn't the best for that since if I happen to move one note in the wrong spot it will make a super annoying jack in the middle of the burst.
22. 01:23:091 (83091|2) - Add LN or single But there is ;_;
23. 01:23:407 (83407|1) to 01:30:986 (90986|1) - Fill in those gaps, so many unused sounds I really want to keep this as a "break" of sorts as it's the only real calm part in the song. The long notes also compliment it nicely.
24. 01:32:091 (92091|2,92170|3) - Change to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4698790 That's pretty cool
25. 01:41:091 (101091|3,101091|1,101091|0,101091|2) - Triple, quad is overkill Okay then
26. 01:45:670 (105670|3,105670|1) - Remove, make 01:45:512 (105512|2,105512|0,105828|2,105828|0) triple I don't like the idea behind that. I want this part of the song to be a "rolling" part to get you going if you get what I mean.
27. 01:50:723 (110723|1,110723|2) - ^ ^
28. 01:48:196 (108196|2,108196|0,108275|1,108275|3,108354|2,108354|0,108433|1,108433|3,108512|2,108512|0,108591|3,108591|1,108670|0,108670|2) - Not sure about that and the part before that, I get that you try to chart the underlying bass, but it's not dominant, PLUS, in the previous section you're mapping the Egyption sounds as well. Really weird to suddenly chart the bass which you can barely hear This part would be really boring withount these, and even if they're not the most dominant sound there is I still think they have a place in this section.
29. 01:53:249 (113249|1,113249|2) - Remove, 01:53:091 (113091|0,113091|3,113407|0,113407|3) make triple I can't really get these to work in my head, I still think these idle hits work far better.
30. 01:53:565 (113565|0) - Remove, breaks stair But it would break the progression of the bursts D:
31. 01:58:538 (118538|2) - Move to 0, 01:58:618 (118618|1) - move to 3 The beat here goes from side to side, I prefer the thrill being here
32. 02:01:302 (121302|1,121302|3,121302|2,121302|0) - Use triple, since you use triples here 02:01:775 Yes(121775|0,121775|1,121775|3,122091|1,122091|2,122091|3)
33. 02:04:854 (124854|2,125486|1) - There are really awkward, use jumpstream or remove them, don't put them just there I can agree with that, I just got inspiration from a map that mapped such parts like this but these don't work as nicely as they do
34. 02:09:433 (129433|0,129907|1) - ^
35. 02:14:486 (134486|2,135275|1) - ^
36. 02:11:565 (131565|0) - Use LN+single for that section, just a single LN is quite underchart
37. 02:21:828 (141828|1,141828|3,141907|2,141986|1,141986|3,142065|2,142144|1,142144|3,142223|2,142223|0,142302|1,142302|3,142381|2,142381|0,142460|3,142460|1,142539|0,142539|2,142618|1,142618|3,142696|2,142696|0) - You can get more creative than that Adjusted a bit
38. 02:22:775 (142775|3) - Really awkward, but that's personal taste love
39. 02:43:302 (163302|2,163341|1,163381|0,163420|2,163460|1,163499|0,163539|2,163578|1,163618|0,163657|2,163696|1,163736|0,163775|2,163815|1,163854|0,163894|2,163933|1,163973|0,164012|2,164052|1,164091|0,164131|2,164170|1,164210|0) - Nice overchart, remove the LN or trim this down, this burst is really stupid compared to the previous section I'm just gonna change it because some people said it was really awkward to play (even though it feels so good tbh fam imo) it's a 4 lane basic burst now
40. 02:45:038 (165038|2) - Missing note I see
41. 02:48:196 (168196|1,168354|1) - Move to 0 and 3 Moved, also did some changes there
42. 02:13:775 (133775|2) - Use single Apparently there was a jump here
43. 02:53:249 (173249|3) - Move to 2, 02:53:407 (173407|0) move to 1 Done
44. 02:55:302 (175302|0) - Add note, yes it's a ghost, but it's better than breaking your pattern/flow All these done
45. 02:56:723 (176723|1) - ^
46. 03:01:933 (181933|0) - ^
47. 04:10:933 (250933|0,251249|0,251407|0) - Remove Yes
48. 04:11:565 (251565|3,251880|2) - Make single Done
49. 04:12:670 (252670|1) - Make double, repeat that for the rest as well For now it can stay as it is with the minor changes I made
50. 04:15:196 (255196|2,255196|0,255196|3,255196|1) - Pls no quad , use double Removed all the dumb triples/quads here
51. 05:04:460 (304460|3,304460|0,304775|2,304775|1,305091|0,305091|3,305407|2,305407|1) - You could use triples, since you used a 'heavy' stair pattern, plus it would work great as a finisher Yes indeed

Please don't kill me

BrosephStalin wrote:

Please no kds, I'm just showing you what AiMod is complaining about.

Many more unsnapped notes (600+!), go up to Timing (Next to "Design" and "Web", not the one by song setup) -> Resnap All Notes -> Yes I don't know how this happened but fixed

02:34:459 (154459|1) - , 02:36:038 (156038|3) - , and 02:37:617 (157617|0) - Literally unplayable (Stacked notes, even Auto misses on them) Lmao

Don't forget to set a preview point and disable countdown (F4 -> Design -> Uncheck "Enable Countdown" Box) Done
Some hitsounds & kiai would be cool as well. These are potentially under way if I can find fitting hitsounds, kiai is easier to add

I'd love to throw an actual mod your way once you clean up the map some!

xXx_Ivan_xXx wrote:

Hi
I'm from #modreq and im kinda not good at Mania modding but i will tell you single mistake i noticed for sure(my friend MilkingFarmer31 learnt be about that,contact him for modding too )and that is the way you mapped from 03:22:223-03:23:328.
[About it]
Welp,stream type mapping is fine BUT...It's one of the worst.
I would recommend you to make netting instead(if you dont know what netting shape mapping is,ask my friend,i don't know how to explain,it's shaped like X is all i know about it )
It definitely doesn't look dense enough for the section so I made it as dense as it should be. I don't really want to make it a mundane split handtrill spam so this should do.


You did same thing with 04:00:117-04:02:012. For this I'd rather not change it at all. The reasoning for this is that the other section(even though it sounds almost the same) serve different things in the song. The other being a climax while this is more like an "outro".
Use maybe something else(idk now)
That would be all from me,sorry if i din't make any difference on map
That's all from me

Eternalie wrote:

Hey ho~ Hope this can help modsu don~

Da-don

collumn = 1/2/3/4
[yes]
First of all , This was reaaaaally fun to play , many many beat and way to map them was incredibly fun to me owob thanks
I might not find alot of things but let's try :3

00:34:617 (34617|1,34775|1,34933|1,35091|1) - 4 notes in 2 in a row ? , I suggest moving one of them to 1 , 00:34:933 (34933|1) - this one for example did this and changed those that do the same ahead
01:22:302 (82302|1) - remove , there is no sound here imo yeah
01:22:775 (82775|2) - add note for the soft cymbal hit done
01:23:091 (83091|1) - add note for the WOOOOOOW xDDDDD that just looks fun that way :p okay then :^)
01:28:459 (88459|3) - this LN should end here : 01:29:565 (89565|2) - fixed
and then : 01:29:565 (89565|2,89644|1) - thoose two simple should be short LNs according to : 01:32:091 (92091|0,92170|3) - oh yes
01:42:670 (102670|0) - From here the correct snap is 1/3 for all LNs , you might need to re-arrange that part no wonder it felt so weird to play
01:52:617 (112617|3,112617|0) - I suggest moving to 2 and 3 respectively , there is alot of notes focused on 1 and 4 here moved
01:55:459 (115459|1) - move to 1 ^same reasons yeah
02:33:986 (153986|1) - move to 1 or 3 imo adjusted the patterning here a bit since there's a strong sound on 02:33:986 - and 02:34:144 -
02:50:880 (170880|0) - add one more note here , according to : 02:45:828 (165828|3,165828|2) - (same rythm here) let's do that
03:01:933 (181933|3) - add another note to 4 yeah
03:04:459 (184459|2) - add to 3 added
04:40:617 (280617|1) - move to 1 to avoid the triple jack fixed

Good Luck :3 ! catchy song there ayy~