Another attempt lul.
[Jusenkyo's Frost]
00:01:369 (1) - Tilt this slider up a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379253 Seems a bit weird for it to start of with just leaning straight like that, since this is a cup I think this is leaning a bit too much basicaly.
00:06:865 (1) - CTRL+G x192 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379308 I simply enough just think this type of pattern makes this part play out better and smoother, also naturally if you go ahead and do this type of pattern I would highly suggest you do it aswell on 00:08:697 (1,2) - or well basicaly something like it, if you do it exactly the same it won't work.
00:14:193 (1) - x312 then 00:15:109 (2) - CTRL+G Imo I just think this makes the pattern look better, not so stale as the past one you know? <: Also following this up if you do that then 00:16:483 (1,3) - press CTRL+G on this so it makes it more logical and not so antiflowish, you know you ain't want no darn anti flow in a cup am I right ;^)?
00:27:017 (1) - x296 and 00:26:559 (3) - x192 if you do this it separates the same pattern aka this: 00:24:727 (2,3,1) - from the one I mentioned in the start of this sentence, sure it just slightly decreases the spacing of the triple but it's imo way better than just having one weird circle stand out from the rest.
00:27:475 (2,3,1,2) - CTRL+G all these seperately so it makes the pattern more logical instead of anti flow like, as i've mentioned earlier in this mod anti flow on a cup imo doesn't just look ridicously bad but it also plays out pretty strange because of the slow pace and ar for example.
00:36:178 (1) - CTRL+G follow up on that CTRL+G is this one aswell 00:38:010 (1) - I want you to do this because of the reason I stated just above this suggestion basicaly, I say nono to antiflow in cups!
00:43:506 (1) - CTRL+G ^
00:48:544 (2) - x456 and to follow up with this do 00:49:002 (1) - CTRL+H on this and move it back to x272 or something around there
00:49:002 (1) - Also don't forget to tilt the slider up a bit like I mentioned in the first suggestion, can't have one wide slider and one that's going up! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379585 This should show you not only how you're suppose to do the mod mentioned slightly above but also how I want you to tilt it up.
[Sleet]
00:01:369 (1,2,3) - So if you line these up like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379622 You can see that the pattern gets progressively less spaced, why? Never the less I suggest you to 00:01:369 (1) - CTRL+C this and CTRL+V it on 00:02:285 - and then pressing CTRL+H to make this pattern look more logical. (If you do this) 00:02:284 (3) - remove this one then.
00:29:765 (2,3,4) - This pattern sucks doesn't it? I mean, honestly, what were you even THINKING!? It doesn't stand out whatsoever imo, a boring pattern is a sad pattern didn't you know? You better do something else >: (Nor does it even fit I mean comeon.)
00:44:422 (2) - I'm not so sure how you like those "antiflow" patterns but GODAMN this is so FILTHY, please for the love of god try CTRL+G, I mean do you even think it fits if you take a look on it with CTRL+G, if you answer with "the spacing gets too small" just friggin get that shit outta the way, move it to like x316? (This also creates a "salad" jump as some would call it, not a "hyper" but you need dat THICC boost doe.)
00:34:346 (1,2) - I would suggest just a little bit of spacing here between these two? I mean it's the kiai time and these 2 are just glued together and it's like wtf who put these here ya know? I mean jeese it's not even a cup like damn.
[Snowfall]
00:17:857 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Jesus this part of the stream you just straight up fall asleep on, give this damn sad stream some curve would ya? I mean it's starting off good but ends on a horrible note don'tcha think?
00:19:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - So you're going to repeat these triples like this 3 times in a row? Alright fine, no problem, BUT there's a defect on one of them and it needs to get treated immediately! 00:19:689 (1) - This one ends with a hyper but the "special out of the ordinary" sound actually starts on the first part of the slider? Now don't you find this just slightly missleading? I would suggest moving 00:19:689 (1) - a bit to the right so it follows the other patterns aka no hypers to each one just a normal jump.
00:30:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - You know, i'm all for a little bit of copy pasta in a map, but this section just feels WAY to repeated? I mean it's not even that fun to play it's just back and forwards into the exact same type of stream, I'd suggest spicing it up a little atleast.
00:37:437 (7) - I want this one to be on x496 because I dun like that anti flow yo, this one isn't really "critical" it's just personal preference.
00:49:002 (1,2,3) - So on the Cup and Salad you're gonna have similar endings and beginings because it's the SAME SOUND but on this you wanted to be a little adventurous and make it almost a full screen jump back and forward even though the begining was super calm? Yeah no, don't do this nerf dat shit y0.
00:49:002 (1) - x180 00:49:460 (2) - x396 00:49:919 (3) - x84 Looks good? Try around with it yourself if you're not satisfied with my suggestions.
[Hyperion's Hail]
00:46:712 (1) - x81? If you're gonna make the pattern look like it's progressively becoming bigger, how about you actually go ahead and do so? idk about you but I feel like this fits perfectly.
00:18:888 (3,4) - I don't think it was intentional, but imo these 2 circles in the stream come out as very "straight" for me, give it a litte more curve would ya?
[Blizzard]
00:19:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What is this? Standing still simulator in an overdose? Nuhuh I say no to that, so I got 2 suggestions here you can choose from, you either CTRL+H the whole stream to make up for the friggin HUGE sound that you now simply stand still on, if you CTRL+H it may look bad so, therefore I got another suggestion which is, make the stream as a whole way more curvier and way less linear. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7586293 This is my attempt when I did both of those things, but I guess this would be called "overmapping/overpatterning" so therefore, choose one of the things.
00:34:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here is another problem where you simply just stand still, this time you don't need to increase the spacing or whatever I just want you to make sure that when you're playing the stream you don't have to stand still in it.
00:47:285 (3,4) - I don't think this was intentional but this looks way too linear to be fitting in this stream and the "curved" streams following up don't you think?
00:49:461 (2) - Since this is an overdose I think you can move this slider to x60 to create a hyper pattern here instead of this dull weird jump part.
00:01:369 (1) - x432 and 00:01:827 (2) - x48 creates a similar pattern as the one mentioned just one tick above ^ however, don't do this one if you haven't done the one above.
00:25:185 (1,3) - I think you can move these two respectively to the left and to the right to make this a hyper pattern instead of a normal stream looking pattern, simply because of the fact that this is an Overdose. (and it fits)
00:40:643 (4) - x0, I don't like antiflow and this plays better, it is as simple as that.
[Jusenkyo's Frost]
00:01:369 (1) - Tilt this slider up a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379253 Seems a bit weird for it to start of with just leaning straight like that, since this is a cup I think this is leaning a bit too much basicaly.
00:06:865 (1) - CTRL+G x192 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379308 I simply enough just think this type of pattern makes this part play out better and smoother, also naturally if you go ahead and do this type of pattern I would highly suggest you do it aswell on 00:08:697 (1,2) - or well basicaly something like it, if you do it exactly the same it won't work.
00:14:193 (1) - x312 then 00:15:109 (2) - CTRL+G Imo I just think this makes the pattern look better, not so stale as the past one you know? <: Also following this up if you do that then 00:16:483 (1,3) - press CTRL+G on this so it makes it more logical and not so antiflowish, you know you ain't want no darn anti flow in a cup am I right ;^)?
00:27:017 (1) - x296 and 00:26:559 (3) - x192 if you do this it separates the same pattern aka this: 00:24:727 (2,3,1) - from the one I mentioned in the start of this sentence, sure it just slightly decreases the spacing of the triple but it's imo way better than just having one weird circle stand out from the rest.
00:27:475 (2,3,1,2) - CTRL+G all these seperately so it makes the pattern more logical instead of anti flow like, as i've mentioned earlier in this mod anti flow on a cup imo doesn't just look ridicously bad but it also plays out pretty strange because of the slow pace and ar for example.
00:36:178 (1) - CTRL+G follow up on that CTRL+G is this one aswell 00:38:010 (1) - I want you to do this because of the reason I stated just above this suggestion basicaly, I say nono to antiflow in cups!
00:43:506 (1) - CTRL+G ^
00:48:544 (2) - x456 and to follow up with this do 00:49:002 (1) - CTRL+H on this and move it back to x272 or something around there
00:49:002 (1) - Also don't forget to tilt the slider up a bit like I mentioned in the first suggestion, can't have one wide slider and one that's going up! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379585 This should show you not only how you're suppose to do the mod mentioned slightly above but also how I want you to tilt it up.
[Sleet]
00:01:369 (1,2,3) - So if you line these up like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379622 You can see that the pattern gets progressively less spaced, why? Never the less I suggest you to 00:01:369 (1) - CTRL+C this and CTRL+V it on 00:02:285 - and then pressing CTRL+H to make this pattern look more logical. (If you do this) 00:02:284 (3) - remove this one then.
00:29:765 (2,3,4) - This pattern sucks doesn't it? I mean, honestly, what were you even THINKING!? It doesn't stand out whatsoever imo, a boring pattern is a sad pattern didn't you know? You better do something else >: (Nor does it even fit I mean comeon.)
00:44:422 (2) - I'm not so sure how you like those "antiflow" patterns but GODAMN this is so FILTHY, please for the love of god try CTRL+G, I mean do you even think it fits if you take a look on it with CTRL+G, if you answer with "the spacing gets too small" just friggin get that shit outta the way, move it to like x316? (This also creates a "salad" jump as some would call it, not a "hyper" but you need dat THICC boost doe.)
00:34:346 (1,2) - I would suggest just a little bit of spacing here between these two? I mean it's the kiai time and these 2 are just glued together and it's like wtf who put these here ya know? I mean jeese it's not even a cup like damn.
[Snowfall]
00:17:857 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Jesus this part of the stream you just straight up fall asleep on, give this damn sad stream some curve would ya? I mean it's starting off good but ends on a horrible note don'tcha think?
00:19:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - So you're going to repeat these triples like this 3 times in a row? Alright fine, no problem, BUT there's a defect on one of them and it needs to get treated immediately! 00:19:689 (1) - This one ends with a hyper but the "special out of the ordinary" sound actually starts on the first part of the slider? Now don't you find this just slightly missleading? I would suggest moving 00:19:689 (1) - a bit to the right so it follows the other patterns aka no hypers to each one just a normal jump.
00:30:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - You know, i'm all for a little bit of copy pasta in a map, but this section just feels WAY to repeated? I mean it's not even that fun to play it's just back and forwards into the exact same type of stream, I'd suggest spicing it up a little atleast.
00:37:437 (7) - I want this one to be on x496 because I dun like that anti flow yo, this one isn't really "critical" it's just personal preference.
00:49:002 (1,2,3) - So on the Cup and Salad you're gonna have similar endings and beginings because it's the SAME SOUND but on this you wanted to be a little adventurous and make it almost a full screen jump back and forward even though the begining was super calm? Yeah no, don't do this nerf dat shit y0.
00:49:002 (1) - x180 00:49:460 (2) - x396 00:49:919 (3) - x84 Looks good? Try around with it yourself if you're not satisfied with my suggestions.
[Hyperion's Hail]
00:46:712 (1) - x81? If you're gonna make the pattern look like it's progressively becoming bigger, how about you actually go ahead and do so? idk about you but I feel like this fits perfectly.
00:18:888 (3,4) - I don't think it was intentional, but imo these 2 circles in the stream come out as very "straight" for me, give it a litte more curve would ya?
[Blizzard]
00:19:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What is this? Standing still simulator in an overdose? Nuhuh I say no to that, so I got 2 suggestions here you can choose from, you either CTRL+H the whole stream to make up for the friggin HUGE sound that you now simply stand still on, if you CTRL+H it may look bad so, therefore I got another suggestion which is, make the stream as a whole way more curvier and way less linear. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7586293 This is my attempt when I did both of those things, but I guess this would be called "overmapping/overpatterning" so therefore, choose one of the things.
00:34:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here is another problem where you simply just stand still, this time you don't need to increase the spacing or whatever I just want you to make sure that when you're playing the stream you don't have to stand still in it.
00:47:285 (3,4) - I don't think this was intentional but this looks way too linear to be fitting in this stream and the "curved" streams following up don't you think?
00:49:461 (2) - Since this is an overdose I think you can move this slider to x60 to create a hyper pattern here instead of this dull weird jump part.
00:01:369 (1) - x432 and 00:01:827 (2) - x48 creates a similar pattern as the one mentioned just one tick above ^ however, don't do this one if you haven't done the one above.
00:25:185 (1,3) - I think you can move these two respectively to the left and to the right to make this a hyper pattern instead of a normal stream looking pattern, simply because of the fact that this is an Overdose. (and it fits)
00:40:643 (4) - x0, I don't like antiflow and this plays better, it is as simple as that.