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Suara - Kimi ga Tame

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Shad0w1and
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Shad0w1and
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年12月15日 at 2:24:57

Artist: Suara
Title: Kimi ga Tame
Source: うたわれるもの
Tags: utawarerumono
BPM: 75
Filesize: 15289kb
Play Time: 06:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hitomi no Oku (3.82 stars, 954 notes)
Download: Suara - Kimi ga Tame
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#5 Suara - キミガタメ
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うたわれるもの
Anime ED Theme | 2007

Not Designed for DT PP. Just slow down and enjoy this epic song (Play this song with your Home Theater, and you will know how good it is) :)
SB by me
English Lyric
KIMI GA TAME - For Your Sake
Suara : Yumeji - Track 12
Utawarerumono (anime) Episode 26 Ending Song
Lyrics: Sudani Shouko
Composition: Shimokawa Naoya

when reflected in your eyes, what color am I?
if you wish for deep red, I shall give you the light of the sun

overflowing with sadness, I closed my eyes
the spilled tears soak into my heart

the spreading waves gently mix
reaching my cradle and inviting sleep

in my dreams I search for a dearly missed face
I want to reach out my hand and strongly embrace it

when reflected in your eyes, what color am I?
if you wish for deep blue, I shall give you the soaring sky

overflowing with joy, we met by chance
our effusive smiles hide the farewell

all people fall to ruin before they know it, but
they become songs and continue to be handed down

when reflected in your eyes, what color am I?
if you wish for deep green, I shall give you this earth

fragile and fleeting ones, strong and beautiful ones
be as you are

when reflected in your eyes, what color am I?
if you remember tranquility, I am there

when reflected in your eyes, what color am I?
if you wish for the deep past, I shall give you these thoughts

I shall give you my everything
中文歌詞
映在你眼中的我 是怎样的颜色
若你期望殷红 愿将阳光交于你...

禁不住悲伤 紧闭双眼
滑落的泪滴 浸透我心扉
水波四散蔓延 无力交叠
宛如摇篮微荡 引人入眠
在梦中 寻找令人怀念的面容
只想伸出双臂 拼命将他抱紧

映在你眼中的我 是怎样的颜色
若你期望湛蓝 愿将天空交于你...

载着满心的喜悦 与你辗转相逢
不绝于口的欢笑 只为掩饰离别
世间人们终将变作尘埃默默逝去
而你的故事将化为歌谣传承千年

映在你眼中的我 是怎样的颜色
若你期望翠绿 愿将大地交于你...

脆弱虚幻之事 坚强美丽之物
请永远不要改变

映在你眼中的我 是怎样的颜色
若你感到安宁 那里便有我的身影

映在你眼中的我 是怎样的颜色
若你深深期望 愿将思念交于你...

愿将一切 全交于你... ...

=================
中文译名：
此心與你
My First SB
Last edited by Shad0w1and , edited 42 times in total.
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
sb 挺好的, star 一个 :)
Kvantuma Rozo
70 posts
Joined April 2014
Kvantuma Rozo
水

不少物件放的太靠下了，打起来效果是这样的：

最好挪一下

03:17:105 (4,5,6,7,8) - 03:26:105 (4,5,6,7) - 貌似是全图仅有的堆起来的单点，有点突兀？或者把5个单点都堆一起？
04:01:355 (3) - 从上面飞下来也许好一点？http://puu.sh/lRhJi/3ec95d029f.jpg
06:28:588 (7,8) - 还是空一拍比较好
06:42:463 (2,3,4,5) - 2的Next是2.25x 4的是2.01x 保持一致比较好吧
06:48:838 (10) - sample音量调低一些
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
☆
Good luick
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Kvantuma Rozo wrote:

水

不少物件放的太靠下了，打起来效果是这样的：

最好挪一下

03:17:105 (4,5,6,7,8) - 03:26:105 (4,5,6,7) - 貌似是全图仅有的堆起来的单点，有点突兀？或者把5个单点都堆一起？ :arrow: 暂时不改，因为其他地方还是有叠起来的
04:01:355 (3) - 从上面飞下来也许好一点？http://puu.sh/lRhJi/3ec95d029f.jpg :arrow: 好
06:28:588 (7,8) - 还是空一拍比较好 :arrow: 这地方我下点也考虑了的，但是由于06:28:775 - 有笛声，而我全图很多地方都跟了，这里放空没道理，所以还是滑条盖住好
06:42:463 (2,3,4,5) - 2的Next是2.25x 4的是2.01x 保持一致比较好吧 :arrow: 好
06:48:838 (10) - sample音量调低一些 :arrow: 好的

Zero__wind wrote:

☆
Good luick
谢谢 :)
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Vert
[General]
建议od+1 hp+1或者1.5

[Hitomi no Oku]
00:28:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - 变bpm建议全加nc
00:51:792 (2,4) - 2往左放一点，4往下来一点，这个感觉挨得太近不好看
02:14:667 (4,5) - 往左放点？
02:23:292 (2,3) - 这两个为何间距这么大，我是没听出来节奏的起伏或是其他什么需要变间距的东西
02:23:855 (5) - 不怎么好看
随便一摆
152,292,142917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,233,143105,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,196,143292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,143480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,233,143667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,332,143855,2,0,B|352:184,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
04:50:855 (1,2,3,4) - 摆的不怎么好看
04:59:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嘛。。还是那个问题感觉为了摆成视觉的ds太局促了，挨得太近（感觉整体摆的都很开，但是总觉得有几个类似于这样的地方和整体不是很搭

结尾可以加个转盘（？

有点厉害摸不太动，水一个，GL
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Euphoria wrote:

[General]
建议od+1 hp+1或者1.5

[Hitomi no Oku]
00:28:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - 变bpm建议全加nc
00:51:792 (2,4) - 2往左放一点，4往下来一点，这个感觉挨得太近不好看
02:14:667 (4,5) - 往左放点？ :arrow: 微调
02:23:292 (2,3) - 这两个为何间距这么大，我是没听出来节奏的起伏或是其他什么需要变间距的东西 :arrow: 我比较喜欢的梗，DS变化一倍以内都可以接受，微调了
02:23:855 (5) - 不怎么好看
随便一摆
152,292,142917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,233,143105,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,196,143292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,143480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,233,143667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,332,143855,2,0,B|352:184,1,131.99999597168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
04:50:855 (1,2,3,4) - 摆的不怎么好看
04:59:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嘛。。还是那个问题感觉为了摆成视觉的ds太局促了，挨得太近（感觉整体摆的都很开，但是总觉得有几个类似于这样的地方和整体不是很搭

结尾可以加个转盘（？

有点厉害摸不太动，水一个，GL
微调了一下你说得问题，降低了一点DS变化，
XiaofengTiger
122 posts
Joined September 2013
XiaofengTiger
是想求M4M的但是摸不到多少东西
  1. skin里面从左右弹出来那个东西稍微有点阻碍的感觉。或者把尺寸缩小一点？
  2. 01:12:605 (1) - 这个滑条位置这么低大丈夫噶~？
  3. 02:17:292 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉是overmap了。类似的人声后几拍都有overmap的感觉。
  4. 02:12:980 - 04:54:980 - 这两个位置SBL红了
给你星星照耀你飞向星空的道路

歌很好听，总感觉应该有古风歌拿它来填词的……
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

XiaofengTiger wrote:

是想求M4M的但是摸不到多少东西
  1. skin里面从左右弹出来那个东西稍微有点阻碍的感觉。或者把尺寸缩小一点？ :arrow: 降低透明度
  2. 01:12:605 (1) - 这个滑条位置这么低大丈夫噶~？ :arrow: 还好，没出界
  3. 02:17:292 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉是overmap了。类似的人声后几拍都有overmap的感觉。 :arrow: 故意的，就填上了1，这种允许的
  4. 02:12:980 - 04:54:980 - 这两个位置SBL红了 :arrow: 只有一瞬间，可以允许
给你星星照耀你飞向星空的道路

歌很好听，总感觉应该有古风歌拿它来填词的……
Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon
水起来呀巴扎黑！

od直接6就好吧，可能是喜欢低od，不过没必要搞这么奇怪的，ar也不是8.3
hp4的话理由是啥。。没特别的梗又不怎么难，放Normal的HP感觉低了点

00:36:605 (1) - 叠滑条尾嘛 这样按照平时习惯会有点看上去像隔1/4拍的读图
00:52:167 (4) - 往右一点点 352 116
00:52:355 (5) - 可以中间加个点往左稍微弯一点点
01:12:605 (1) - 发的时候看到老虎的摸了，不过还是想说整个滑条贴下面，这么低打起来难受阿 其他的好歹是就头或者尾在最底下，不过空挡实在不够的话就别动了
03:23:105 (4,5,6,7,8) - flow有一点怪，稍微倾向于47568这样
04:52:542 (4,5) - 交换一下，打起来有点怪
05:08:105 (1,2,3,4) - 4离1和2比较近是因为比较喜欢这么摆嘛，好奇一下 因为感觉ar8的话有点挤 这样的梗出现了若干次形状都比较类似
06:49:963 (3,1) - 要不要放正中（我就想想

跳的摆法很喜欢，没啥特别的节奏 来回重复，歌挺好听的sb也nice~祝快飞
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Mollon wrote:

水起来呀巴扎黑！

od直接6就好吧，可能是喜欢低od，不过没必要搞这么奇怪的，ar也不是8.3
hp4的话理由是啥。。没特别的梗又不怎么难，放Normal的HP感觉低了点

00:36:605 (1) - 叠滑条尾嘛 这样按照平时习惯会有点看上去像隔1/4拍的读图 :arrow: 有NC拉
00:52:167 (4) - 往右一点点 352 116 :arrow: 好
00:52:355 (5) - 可以中间加个点往左稍微弯一点点 :arrow: 不了
01:12:605 (1) - 发的时候看到老虎的摸了，不过还是想说整个滑条贴下面，这么低打起来难受阿 其他的好歹是就头或者尾在最底下，不过空挡实在不够的话就别动了 :arrow: 好改
03:23:105 (4,5,6,7,8) - flow有一点怪，稍微倾向于47568这样 :arrow: 差不多啦
04:52:542 (4,5) - 交换一下，打起来有点怪 :arrow: 改了
05:08:105 (1,2,3,4) - 4离1和2比较近是因为比较喜欢这么摆嘛，好奇一下 因为感觉ar8的话有点挤 这样的梗出现了若干次形状都比较类似 :arrow: 嗯我觉得还好，微调了一点点
06:49:963 (3,1) - 要不要放正中（我就想想 :arrow: 看不出来啦

跳的摆法很喜欢，没啥特别的节奏 来回重复，歌挺好听的sb也nice~祝快飞
Spy
2,538 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy
A，來支持一個
Qiyana
1,585 posts
Joined April 2014
Qiyana
Hi from my queue!
Whatever the mode was called.
[General]
Set the OD to 7.8
I recommend an epilepsy warning due to the storyboard.
[Modding Itself]
00:15:644 (1) - If there's one thing I recommend, it's not having this slider.
00:28:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't put these circles that close to each other.
00:33:604 (3,4) - This shouldn't be placed like that.
00:34:730 (6) - If you're going to space them out on snaps like that, you might as well, NC them.
00:49:355 (3,4) - There's no need for a jump like that.
00:53:855 (9,1) - I recommend not having them too close too each other like that on the snaps.
00:57:605 (3) - NC here.
01:02:105 (5) - NC here.
01:22:355 (3,4) - These two sliders don't match in with the earlier pattern.
01:37:355 (4,5,6) - Move the #6 slider beginning onto the #4 beginning.
02:08:480 (6,7,8) - Spacing them out that far isn't right.
02:19:167 (2) - Move this two grids up.
02:32:105 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend have them place more patternal/symmetrical.
02:33:605 - Move that end of kiai timing at --> 02:35:105 - .
03:08:105 (5) - NC this.
03:26:480 (5,6,7) - Space these out.
06:04:963 (8,1) - These are too far from each other.
That's all
Good luck getting it ranked.
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

dylanla12 wrote:

Hi from my queue!
Whatever the mode was called.
[General]
Set the OD to 7.8
I recommend an epilepsy warning due to the storyboard.
[Modding Itself]
00:15:644 (1) - If there's one thing I recommend, it's not having this slider.
00:28:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't put these circles that close to each other.
00:33:604 (3,4) - This shouldn't be placed like that.
00:34:730 (6) - If you're going to space them out on snaps like that, you might as well, NC them.
00:49:355 (3,4) - There's no need for a jump like that.
00:53:855 (9,1) - I recommend not having them too close too each other like that on the snaps.
00:57:605 (3) - NC here. :arrow: Cool
01:02:105 (5) - NC here.
01:22:355 (3,4) - These two sliders don't match in with the earlier pattern.
01:37:355 (4,5,6) - Move the #6 slider beginning onto the #4 beginning.
02:08:480 (6,7,8) - Spacing them out that far isn't right.
02:19:167 (2) - Move this two grids up.
02:32:105 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend have them place more patternal/symmetrical. :arrow: adjusted a little
02:33:605 - Move that end of kiai timing at --> 02:35:105 - . :arrow: kiai is expected end at big white stick b4 the last vocal ends, that's general concept of put kiai. i was told by bns and qats in my previous maps about this
03:08:105 (5) - NC this.
03:26:480 (5,6,7) - Space these out.
06:04:963 (8,1) - These are too far from each other. :arrow: that's for the crash and is ok.
That's all
Good luck getting it ranked.
not changing a lot since i am mapping for a insane standard diff, but some are slightly adjusted
Kyubey
osu! Alumni
3,097 posts
Joined December 2012
Kyubey
[General]
• Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
{sb\b8.jpg} (800x1133)
{sb\b5.jpg} (800x1121)
{sb\b6.jpg} (800x1132)
{sb\b7.jpg} (800x1135)
{sb\cir.png} (800x800)
{sb\b3.png} (724x1023)
{sb\frame.png} (800x1152)
Ranking Criteria for reference:
The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.
• Unused storyboard file: 111.osb. Delete it.
• Honestly I don't think your combobursts can work:
Combobursts must be oriented for the left side of the screen. Combobursts are aligned to the bottom and left sides of the screen by default, and are just horizontally flipped for the right side. Thus, you only need to worry about making sure that the comboburst is cleanly cropped on the top and right sides of the image.
Your combobursts aren't cropped and some of then don't look oriented for the left side. Either delete them or crop and align them since just flying pictures isn't what should work as comboburst.
[Hitomi no Oku]
Do you really need the letterboxing enabled? It doesn't look good for me in the break.
Concurent volume value for red-green line, make them same with greenlines on these places, like both 20% volume and not 100% redline and 20% green line.
00:02:844
05:50:338
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Kyubey wrote:

[General]
• Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
{sb\b8.jpg} (800x1133)
{sb\b5.jpg} (800x1121)
{sb\b6.jpg} (800x1132)
{sb\b7.jpg} (800x1135)
{sb\cir.png} (800x800)
{sb\b3.png} (724x1023)
{sb\frame.png} (800x1152)
Ranking Criteria for reference:
The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.
• Unused storyboard file: 111.osb. Delete it. :arrow: OK
• Honestly I don't think your combobursts can work:
Combobursts must be oriented for the left side of the screen. Combobursts are aligned to the bottom and left sides of the screen by default, and are just horizontally flipped for the right side. Thus, you only need to worry about making sure that the comboburst is cleanly cropped on the top and right sides of the image.
Your combobursts aren't cropped and some of then don't look oriented for the left side. Either delete them or crop and align them since just flying pictures isn't what should work as comboburst. :arrow: i will ask for more help
[Hitomi no Oku]
Do you really need the letterboxing enabled? It doesn't look good for me in the break. :arrow: ok
Concurent volume value for red-green line, make them same with greenlines on these places, like both 20% volume and not 100% redline and 20% green line.
00:02:844
05:50:338
for the SB pic dimension, i think it is more about how much pixels within a picture. so that why 640x1440=921600, 1920x480=921600 they are the same size. for mine biggest scrolling element, its 800x1152=921600, its calculated try not to against RC, I will ask for staff for more help as well
All Fixed
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Talk some thing with IRC mod, and pattern check all fine. #1 Bubble

IRC (Chinese)
2015-12-13 22:49 Shad0w1and: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/845212 Suara - Kimi ga Tame [Hitomi no Oku]] [strike]過慮了一些 LOL[/strike]
2015-12-13 22:49 Shad0w1and: 就是这个图
2015-12-13 22:58 smallboat: 嗯
2015-12-13 22:59 smallboat: 05:47:254 (1) - 這滑條尾怎麼感覺沒unsnap
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: 嗯我会先问问我认识的朋友的
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: 1/16
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: lol
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: 你看看
2015-12-13 23:00 smallboat: 05:47:254 (1) - 這一段都是1/16?
2015-12-13 23:00 smallboat: timing確定對 lol?
2015-12-13 23:00 Shad0w1and: timing我测的，但是我本身timing一般很准
2015-12-13 23:01 smallboat: 恩
2015-12-13 23:01 smallboat: 1這個note
2015-12-13 23:01 smallboat: 開了25%然後按space沒什麼對上耶0.0
2015-12-13 23:01 Shad0w1and: 有道理，贸易有点偏
2015-12-13 23:01 Shad0w1and: 貌似
2015-12-13 23:02 smallboat: 先點之後才有音lol
2015-12-13 23:02 smallboat: 圖真的看起來沒什麼問題  只是這timing有點捉急
2015-12-13 23:02 Shad0w1and: 惨，我重新看看这一段
2015-12-13 23:02 Shad0w1and: 好我会在问问的
2015-12-14 02:34 smallboat: timing弄好了?
2015-12-14 02:34 Shad0w1and: 好了
2015-12-14 02:34 Shad0w1and: 找性药确认了
2015-12-14 02:34 Shad0w1and: v587暂时不在
2015-12-14 02:36 smallboat: TIMING
2015-12-14 02:36 Shad0w1and: timing改了
2015-12-14 02:37 Shad0w1and: 我update一下免得sb有东西
2015-12-14 02:37 Shad0w1and: 好了
2015-12-14 02:37 smallboat: 好.
2015-12-14 02:41 smallboat: 05:47:639 (2) - 尾端偏了啊  要不然這尾端再加一條吧(?
2015-12-14 02:41 Shad0w1and: 你看看
2015-12-14 02:41 Shad0w1and: 是不是lastest
2015-12-14 02:41 smallboat: 是
2015-12-14 02:42 smallboat: 有重載
2015-12-14 02:42 Shad0w1and: 我这听着没啥问题Orz
2015-12-14 02:43 Shad0w1and: 05:47:639 (2) - 
2015-12-14 02:43 Shad0w1and: 这红线是25bpm？
2015-12-14 02:43 Shad0w1and: 有时系统会慢一点
2015-12-14 02:43 smallboat: 不太清楚  我沒辦法給精確的.
2015-12-14 02:44 Shad0w1and: 05:47:639 - 这根红线你那是25bpm么
2015-12-14 02:44 Shad0w1and: 我这里听着没问题
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 27
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 你更新後我有重仔啊
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 那我在下一次
2015-12-14 02:45 Shad0w1and: 那你更新一下下
2015-12-14 02:45 Shad0w1and: bss这几天抽风有点慢
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 恩ok可..
2015-12-14 02:47 Shad0w1and: 还有觉得需要改的问题么
2015-12-14 02:49 smallboat: 可能還有吧  鋼琴曲我一般都看比較慢.
2015-12-14 02:50 Shad0w1and: 好
2015-12-14 02:51 smallboat: 00:53:855 (9) - 尾端很有意見這個..
2015-12-14 02:52 smallboat: 拉到1/16是有何用意0.0
2015-12-14 02:52 Shad0w1and: 啊你是说拉到1/8
2015-12-14 02:52 smallboat: 建議跟紅線
2015-12-14 02:52 smallboat: 尾端跟著00:54:230
2015-12-14 02:53 smallboat: http://puu.sh/lUYcu/17e9bb24df.jpg
2015-12-14 02:53 smallboat: 紅線有鼓點
2015-12-14 02:53 Shad0w1and: 好吧
2015-12-14 02:53 smallboat: 同色combo最好還是跟著一樣的音軌比較好打
2015-12-14 02:54 Shad0w1and: 改了，绿线也删了
2015-12-14 02:56 smallboat: 恩快看了一半了.
2015-12-14 02:57 Shad0w1and: ^ ^
2015-12-14 02:59 smallboat: 如果02:47:855 (1) - 如果這能再減速一些  蠻符合音樂起伏的
2015-12-14 03:00 Shad0w1and: 好的
2015-12-14 03:01 smallboat: 網路瞬斷
2015-12-14 03:01 Shad0w1and: http://puu.sh/lUYvN/94dfe6f80d.jpg
2015-12-14 03:02 smallboat: 02:48:605 (1) - 記得給額外綠線
2015-12-14 03:02 Shad0w1and: 加了的
2015-12-14 03:02 smallboat: 恩 好險沒漏句
2015-12-14 03:02 smallboat: 好.
2015-12-14 03:13 smallboat: 04:24:792 (2) - 開頭有點怪怪的
2015-12-14 03:13 smallboat: lol
2015-12-14 03:13 Shad0w1and: 额，我比较故意的
2015-12-14 03:14 Shad0w1and: 04:12:792 (2) - 这里也是
2015-12-14 03:17 smallboat: 恩
2015-12-14 03:18 smallboat: 05:43:730 (2) - http://puu.sh/lUZ4R/6f2a7fb5ec.jpg 琴聲放頭比較有感覺
2015-12-14 03:18 smallboat: 2疊3頭
2015-12-14 03:19 Shad0w1and: 05:42:605 (1) - 嗯。这个nc开始的一节我想强调vocal
2015-12-14 03:19 Shad0w1and: 这一句式这曲子的点睛之笔
2015-12-14 03:19 Shad0w1and: （我会将一切都给你）
2015-12-14 03:19 smallboat: 恩請便
2015-12-14 03:25 smallboat: 都看完了.
2015-12-14 03:25 Shad0w1and: update?
2015-12-14 03:25 smallboat: 好
2015-12-14 03:25 Shad0w1and: 好了
2015-12-14 03:28 smallboat: 快下線了我能晚上再貼IRC?
2015-12-14 03:28 Shad0w1and: 嗯，你po论坛？
2015-12-14 03:28 smallboat: 恩晚上會貼
2015-12-14 03:28 Shad0w1and: 没事，你有空弄吧
2015-12-14 03:29 smallboat: 0.0 metadata確認一下正確嗎
2015-12-14 03:29 Shad0w1and: 正确啊
2015-12-14 03:29 Shad0w1and: 专辑封面照着写的
2015-12-14 03:29 smallboat: 好.
2015-12-14 03:29 smallboat: 晚上如果看沒問題的話會給bub1
2015-12-14 03:30 Shad0w1and: ^ ^谢谢
2015-12-14 03:30 Shad0w1and: 嗯
2015-12-14 03:30 smallboat: :)
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

smallboat wrote:

Talk some thing with IRC mod, and pattern check all fine. #1 Bubble

IRC (Chinese)
2015-12-13 22:49 Shad0w1and: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/845212 Suara - Kimi ga Tame [Hitomi no Oku]] [strike]過慮了一些 LOL[/strike]
2015-12-13 22:49 Shad0w1and: 就是这个图
2015-12-13 22:58 smallboat: 嗯
2015-12-13 22:59 smallboat: 05:47:254 (1) - 這滑條尾怎麼感覺沒unsnap
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: 嗯我会先问问我认识的朋友的
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: 1/16
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: lol
2015-12-13 22:59 Shad0w1and: 你看看
2015-12-13 23:00 smallboat: 05:47:254 (1) - 這一段都是1/16?
2015-12-13 23:00 smallboat: timing確定對 lol?
2015-12-13 23:00 Shad0w1and: timing我测的，但是我本身timing一般很准
2015-12-13 23:01 smallboat: 恩
2015-12-13 23:01 smallboat: 1這個note
2015-12-13 23:01 smallboat: 開了25%然後按space沒什麼對上耶0.0
2015-12-13 23:01 Shad0w1and: 有道理，贸易有点偏
2015-12-13 23:01 Shad0w1and: 貌似
2015-12-13 23:02 smallboat: 先點之後才有音lol
2015-12-13 23:02 smallboat: 圖真的看起來沒什麼問題  只是這timing有點捉急
2015-12-13 23:02 Shad0w1and: 惨，我重新看看这一段
2015-12-13 23:02 Shad0w1and: 好我会在问问的
2015-12-14 02:34 smallboat: timing弄好了?
2015-12-14 02:34 Shad0w1and: 好了
2015-12-14 02:34 Shad0w1and: 找性药确认了
2015-12-14 02:34 Shad0w1and: v587暂时不在
2015-12-14 02:36 smallboat: TIMING
2015-12-14 02:36 Shad0w1and: timing改了
2015-12-14 02:37 Shad0w1and: 我update一下免得sb有东西
2015-12-14 02:37 Shad0w1and: 好了
2015-12-14 02:37 smallboat: 好.
2015-12-14 02:41 smallboat: 05:47:639 (2) - 尾端偏了啊  要不然這尾端再加一條吧(?
2015-12-14 02:41 Shad0w1and: 你看看
2015-12-14 02:41 Shad0w1and: 是不是lastest
2015-12-14 02:41 smallboat: 是
2015-12-14 02:42 smallboat: 有重載
2015-12-14 02:42 Shad0w1and: 我这听着没啥问题Orz
2015-12-14 02:43 Shad0w1and: 05:47:639 (2) - 
2015-12-14 02:43 Shad0w1and: 这红线是25bpm？
2015-12-14 02:43 Shad0w1and: 有时系统会慢一点
2015-12-14 02:43 smallboat: 不太清楚  我沒辦法給精確的.
2015-12-14 02:44 Shad0w1and: 05:47:639 - 这根红线你那是25bpm么
2015-12-14 02:44 Shad0w1and: 我这里听着没问题
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 27
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 你更新後我有重仔啊
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 那我在下一次
2015-12-14 02:45 Shad0w1and: 那你更新一下下
2015-12-14 02:45 Shad0w1and: bss这几天抽风有点慢
2015-12-14 02:45 smallboat: 恩ok可..
2015-12-14 02:47 Shad0w1and: 还有觉得需要改的问题么
2015-12-14 02:49 smallboat: 可能還有吧  鋼琴曲我一般都看比較慢.
2015-12-14 02:50 Shad0w1and: 好
2015-12-14 02:51 smallboat: 00:53:855 (9) - 尾端很有意見這個..
2015-12-14 02:52 smallboat: 拉到1/16是有何用意0.0
2015-12-14 02:52 Shad0w1and: 啊你是说拉到1/8
2015-12-14 02:52 smallboat: 建議跟紅線
2015-12-14 02:52 smallboat: 尾端跟著00:54:230
2015-12-14 02:53 smallboat: http://puu.sh/lUYcu/17e9bb24df.jpg
2015-12-14 02:53 smallboat: 紅線有鼓點
2015-12-14 02:53 Shad0w1and: 好吧
2015-12-14 02:53 smallboat: 同色combo最好還是跟著一樣的音軌比較好打
2015-12-14 02:54 Shad0w1and: 改了，绿线也删了
2015-12-14 02:56 smallboat: 恩快看了一半了.
2015-12-14 02:57 Shad0w1and: ^ ^
2015-12-14 02:59 smallboat: 如果02:47:855 (1) - 如果這能再減速一些  蠻符合音樂起伏的
2015-12-14 03:00 Shad0w1and: 好的
2015-12-14 03:01 smallboat: 網路瞬斷
2015-12-14 03:01 Shad0w1and: http://puu.sh/lUYvN/94dfe6f80d.jpg
2015-12-14 03:02 smallboat: 02:48:605 (1) - 記得給額外綠線
2015-12-14 03:02 Shad0w1and: 加了的
2015-12-14 03:02 smallboat: 恩 好險沒漏句
2015-12-14 03:02 smallboat: 好.
2015-12-14 03:13 smallboat: 04:24:792 (2) - 開頭有點怪怪的
2015-12-14 03:13 smallboat: lol
2015-12-14 03:13 Shad0w1and: 额，我比较故意的
2015-12-14 03:14 Shad0w1and: 04:12:792 (2) - 这里也是
2015-12-14 03:17 smallboat: 恩
2015-12-14 03:18 smallboat: 05:43:730 (2) - http://puu.sh/lUZ4R/6f2a7fb5ec.jpg 琴聲放頭比較有感覺
2015-12-14 03:18 smallboat: 2疊3頭
2015-12-14 03:19 Shad0w1and: 05:42:605 (1) - 嗯。这个nc开始的一节我想强调vocal
2015-12-14 03:19 Shad0w1and: 这一句式这曲子的点睛之笔
2015-12-14 03:19 Shad0w1and: （我会将一切都给你）
2015-12-14 03:19 smallboat: 恩請便
2015-12-14 03:25 smallboat: 都看完了.
2015-12-14 03:25 Shad0w1and: update?
2015-12-14 03:25 smallboat: 好
2015-12-14 03:25 Shad0w1and: 好了
2015-12-14 03:28 smallboat: 快下線了我能晚上再貼IRC?
2015-12-14 03:28 Shad0w1and: 嗯，你po论坛？
2015-12-14 03:28 smallboat: 恩晚上會貼
2015-12-14 03:28 Shad0w1and: 没事，你有空弄吧
2015-12-14 03:29 smallboat: 0.0 metadata確認一下正確嗎
2015-12-14 03:29 Shad0w1and: 正确啊
2015-12-14 03:29 Shad0w1and: 专辑封面照着写的
2015-12-14 03:29 smallboat: 好.
2015-12-14 03:29 smallboat: 晚上如果看沒問題的話會給bub1
2015-12-14 03:30 Shad0w1and: ^ ^谢谢
2015-12-14 03:30 Shad0w1and: 嗯
2015-12-14 03:30 smallboat: :)
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ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
irc
2015-12-15 13:12 Shad0w1and: yo zzh i know its kinda sudden but may i have your bubble#2?
2015-12-15 13:13 Shad0w1and: ;w;
2015-12-15 13:13 ZZHBOY: ...
2015-12-15 13:14 ZZHBOY: link
2015-12-15 13:14 Shad0w1and: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/845212 Suara - Kimi ga Tame]
2015-12-15 14:25 Shad0w1and: 刚刚在作图
2015-12-15 14:26 Shad0w1and: 那个jump没啥问题啊
2015-12-15 14:26 ZZHBOY: 刚刚在作图
2015-12-15 14:26 ZZHBOY: 就是flow有点差
2015-12-15 14:26 Shad0w1and: 我全部都按着flow的
2015-12-15 14:26 ZZHBOY: 你觉得没问题那就不改
2015-12-15 14:26 ZZHBOY: 04:11:667 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这几个太难打了
2015-12-15 14:27 Shad0w1and: insane图Orz
2015-12-15 14:27 Shad0w1and: 还好吧
2015-12-15 14:27 Shad0w1and: 本就是mapping乐器
2015-12-15 14:27 Shad0w1and: 这里是乐器最清晰激昂的地方
2015-12-15 14:29 ZZHBOY: 04:12:178 -
2015-12-15 14:29 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136123
2015-12-15 14:29 ZZHBOY: 改几个flow角
2015-12-15 14:29 ZZHBOY: 你看看这样会不会好打点
2015-12-15 14:30 Shad0w1and: 客户端要卡退
2015-12-15 14:30 Shad0w1and: 等下
2015-12-15 14:30 ZZHBOY: 嗯..
2015-12-15 14:32 Shad0w1and: 嗯。。我的理解是，跳跃的读图实际上是两个为一组
2015-12-15 14:32 Shad0w1and: 所以假如可以保持每组的ds平衡，锐角跳是最好跳的
2015-12-15 14:32 ZZHBOY: 是啊
2015-12-15 14:32 Shad0w1and: 个人的体验是这样所以。。
2015-12-15 14:33 ZZHBOY: 04:11:855 (1,2,3) - 你这个角度太大了吧
2015-12-15 14:33 ZZHBOY: 04:11:105 (1,2,3,4) - 你这是一个钝角转一个锐角
2015-12-15 14:33 Shad0w1and: 行吧，我调低一点点
2015-12-15 14:33 ZZHBOY: 04:11:667 (4,1,2,3) - 所以我说这里不好打
2015-12-15 14:34 ZZHBOY: 反正我要是我我会放我那个 你可以先试试 要是你觉得我放得很垃圾 我就不看flow去看点其他东西了
2015-12-15 14:34 Shad0w1and: 我微调一点
2015-12-15 14:34 Shad0w1and: 降低一点角度
2015-12-15 14:36 Shad0w1and: （其实那里是送pp的地方）
2015-12-15 14:36 ZZHBOY: 送pp要能送的出去
2015-12-15 14:36 Shad0w1and: 降低了
2015-12-15 14:36 ZZHBOY: 反正我dt连不上
2015-12-15 14:36 Shad0w1and: 3.77sr了
2015-12-15 14:37 ZZHBOY: 04:12:230 (3) - 最好这个往右放
2015-12-15 14:37 ZZHBOY: 不是让你放近
2015-12-15 14:37 ZZHBOY: 是让你改角度 你角度对了放远点也不会难打
2015-12-15 14:40 Shad0w1and: http://puu.sh/lW9ag/3ad22e0b35.jpg
2015-12-15 14:40 Shad0w1and: 这种？
2015-12-15 14:40 Shad0w1and: 我擦3.75le
2015-12-15 14:41 Shad0w1and: 这梗原来这么高权重
2015-12-15 14:43 ZZHBOY: 是
2015-12-15 14:44 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136173
2015-12-15 14:44 ZZHBOY: 你看下这个如何 3.9的star
2015-12-15 14:44 ZZHBOY: 两个四边形 美观好打
2015-12-15 14:46 ZZHBOY: 04:12:605 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136177 还追求美观的话这个摆两个等边三角组成菱形 最后3.88star
2015-12-15 14:46 ZZHBOY: 随你
2015-12-15 14:46 ZZHBOY: 反正这个地方我觉得挺重要 建议你好好琢磨琢磨 我先去看看有没硬伤
2015-12-15 14:46 Shad0w1and: 嗯好，这段是pp啊啊啊啊
2015-12-15 14:46 ZZHBOY: 是啊
2015-12-15 14:47 ZZHBOY: 所以要是肯定有些人会挑这段事
2015-12-15 14:47 ZZHBOY: 你摆着又美观 打起来又还行 不就飞了
2015-12-15 14:48 Shad0w1and: 好像学到了几手
2015-12-15 14:48 Shad0w1and: 感觉不错
2015-12-15 14:48 ZZHBOY: 感觉不错
2015-12-15 14:49 Shad0w1and: zzb不愧是专业circle大师
2015-12-15 14:49 ZZHBOY: 提了
2015-12-15 14:49 Shad0w1and: 跳的爽
2015-12-15 14:51 ZZHBOY: 来修一个bug
2015-12-15 14:51 ZZHBOY: 00:33:604 (3) -
2015-12-15 14:51 ZZHBOY: 红线是33.605
2015-12-15 14:51 ZZHBOY: 拖一下这个滑条把snap一下
2015-12-15 14:52 Shad0w1and: 好
2015-12-15 14:53 Shad0w1and: 我把那个之前的红线也往后拉了1ms
2015-12-15 14:53 ZZHBOY: 为什么啊
2015-12-15 14:54 Shad0w1and: 不然那个红线快了一秒？
2015-12-15 14:54 ZZHBOY: 1莫i奥?
2015-12-15 14:54 Shad0w1and: 才会snap到33:604
2015-12-15 14:54 Shad0w1and: 00:33:418 -
2015-12-15 14:54 Shad0w1and: 这根红线我后拉了1ms
2015-12-15 14:55 Shad0w1and: 417到418
2015-12-15 14:55 ZZHBOY: 不是很懂你们timing
2015-12-15 14:55 Shad0w1and: 嗯，现在应该没问题了
2015-12-15 14:56 ZZHBOY: 01:30:605 - 这里我觉得放滑条尾不太好
2015-12-15 14:56 Shad0w1and: snap好了
2015-12-15 14:56 ZZHBOY: 你要不要考虑把滑条减一次折返 这里加个圈
2015-12-15 14:56 Shad0w1and: Orz主要是这曲子节奏一直重复啊
2015-12-15 14:56 Shad0w1and: 想加一点点变化
2015-12-15 14:57 ZZHBOY: 不是变化的问题
2015-12-15 14:57 ZZHBOY: 是这样不好
2015-12-15 14:57 ZZHBOY: 公认重音最好不要放滑条尾
2015-12-15 14:57 Shad0w1and: 算是突出了vocal吧
2015-12-15 14:57 Shad0w1and: 我明白的
2015-12-15 14:57 Shad0w1and: 主要这里有vocal，所以我觉得是可以接受的
2015-12-15 14:58 Shad0w1and: 节奏应该不会conduse
2015-12-15 14:58 Shad0w1and: confuse
2015-12-15 14:59 ZZHBOY: ...我的意思是 01:30:605 - 这里又有vocal又有后面的旋律音 放出来让player去点一下不是会很好...
2015-12-15 15:00 Shad0w1and: Orz我知道的，但是没大问题的话想保留啦，真心的
2015-12-15 15:01 ZZHBOY: 那好吧
2015-12-15 15:02 ZZHBOY: 01:57:605 (1) - 太太太远了
2015-12-15 15:02 ZZHBOY: unreasonable
2015-12-15 15:02 Shad0w1and: 好
2015-12-15 15:03 ZZHBOY: 01:57:605 (1) - 放42 202附近如何 正好还能跟01:56:855 (6,2) - 成等边三角
2015-12-15 15:03 Shad0w1and: 01:57:605 (1) -
2015-12-15 15:04 Shad0w1and: 我自己调到2.5x,3.3xds了
2015-12-15 15:04 ZZHBOY: 01:57:605 (1,2) - 这两个最好不要超过2.5
2015-12-15 15:05 ZZHBOY: 因为没理由那么远
2015-12-15 15:05 ZZHBOY: 反正又不影响pp 放近点又何妨
2015-12-15 15:05 Shad0w1and: 3.0吧，我排版差不多这样不用变太多
2015-12-15 15:05 ZZHBOY: 03:36:042 (8,9) - 这两个ctrl+g如何 正好实现ds变大
2015-12-15 15:06 Shad0w1and: 这里不了，纯flow
2015-12-15 15:06 Shad0w1and: 顺时针
2015-12-15 15:06 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-12-15 15:07 ZZHBOY: 03:46:730 (4) - 这里不比刚刚那里放该放远的多 反而比之前近
2015-12-15 15:07 ZZHBOY: 所以说你要有个整体观念
2015-12-15 15:08 Shad0w1and: 好
2015-12-15 15:08 ZZHBOY: 你前面那么远 这里唱的都激扬点反而没前面远
2015-12-15 15:08 ZZHBOY: 不是很奇怪吗
2015-12-15 15:08 Shad0w1and: 嗯
2015-12-15 15:09 ZZHBOY: 04:05:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里顺手摆个五边形不是好的很 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136241
2015-12-15 15:09 ZZHBOY: 虽然我是反美观党 不过你这里打着并不好 不如去摆美观
2015-12-15 15:11 ZZHBOY: 04:27:605 - 这里建议加个圈
2015-12-15 15:11 Shad0w1and: 算啦，我其实觉得这里5角不太好看呢
2015-12-15 15:11 ZZHBOY: youvocal 细听又一声叮
2015-12-15 15:12 Shad0w1and: 加了c圈有点怪？
2015-12-15 15:12 ZZHBOY: 不奇怪
2015-12-15 15:12 ZZHBOY: 建议加
2015-12-15 15:13 ZZHBOY: 而且加完打起来会好打的多
2015-12-15 15:13 Shad0w1and: 重起来吧？
2015-12-15 15:13 Shad0w1and: 行
2015-12-15 15:13 Shad0w1and: 给不给nc
2015-12-15 15:13 Shad0w1and: 你觉得
2015-12-15 15:14 ZZHBOY: nc
2015-12-15 15:15 ZZHBOY: 05:47:264 (1,2) -
2015-12-15 15:16 ZZHBOY: 我也不知道该不该跟
2015-12-15 15:16 ZZHBOY: 你留意一下 有空去问点qat
2015-12-15 15:16 Shad0w1and: 好，最后一个bn来之前我找qat核实一下
2015-12-15 15:17 Shad0w1and: 但timing是准的
2015-12-15 15:17 ZZHBOY: 嗯 能听出来
2015-12-15 15:17 ZZHBOY: 但是那些音不是很明显 强行跟反而会让图打起来违和
2015-12-15 15:17 ZZHBOY: 后面好像没啥
2015-12-15 15:17 ZZHBOY: 04:05:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里之所以让你改
2015-12-15 15:17 ZZHBOY: 04:05:480 (3,4,5) - 距离应该变大
2015-12-15 15:18 Shad0w1and: 那我就拉大ds吧？
2015-12-15 15:20 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4136266这样如何啊
2015-12-15 15:20 ZZHBOY: 我比较喜欢打这样的
2015-12-15 15:21 Shad0w1and: 04:05:105 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-12-15 15:21 ZZHBOY: ?
2015-12-15 15:21 Shad0w1and: 这里节奏没有过于激昂
2015-12-15 15:21 Shad0w1and: 我觉得还是我那图形加大一点ds就好
2015-12-15 15:22 Shad0w1and: 你这个跳感觉有点激昂
2015-12-15 15:22 ZZHBOY: 至少45得跳吧3
2015-12-15 15:22 Shad0w1and: 好我加大45
2015-12-15 15:22 ZZHBOY: 你琢磨琢磨 我去po歌irc 你改完了传了跟我说
2015-12-15 15:22 Shad0w1and: 好的
2015-12-15 15:23 ZZHBOY: 04:08:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你至少做成这里这样
2015-12-15 15:23 ZZHBOY: 原来那样不是很合理
2015-12-15 15:23 Shad0w1and: 好
2015-12-15 15:23 Shad0w1and: 明白
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