Nivrad00 wrote:

Allezard asked me to go ahead with the check even though there's a pending mod because the map is in graveyard and he doesn't have any open slots ;n;

BN check

General

I'm afraid you are only allowed to use a custom diff name on the hardest difficulty. That means you can't call Shana's diff "Disinformation"
I suggest the following name changes:
"Shana's Disinformation" -> "Shana's Extra"
"Extra" -> "Disinformation"
But of course you are free to use any system that follows the Ranking Criteria.

Difficulties

Easy
00:26:980 - maybe you should start with a double to match the doubles later on
00:58:235 - I think there should be a whistle hitsound here, following the previous pattern
01:38:421 - you could add a finish here, it's the beginning of a new section
03:30:049 - 03:38:979 - 03:41:212 - 03:45:677 - these should probably be doubles, to follow the pattern

Normal
00:58:235 - should be a whistle here
01:38:4 21 - could add a finish here
03:21:398 - missing whistle hitsound

Hard
00:58:235 - should be a whistle here
01:24:328 - missing note?
04:00:886 - same
02:50:282 - why is there a double here

Insane
00:49:305 - missing whistle
00:58:235 - should be a whistle here
01:51:119 - missing note?
03:02:700 (182700|3,182840|3,182979|3,183119|3,183259|3,183398|3,183538|3) - this is a very long anchor. did you make it on purpose?
03:12:328 - maybe this should be a single, since the rest of this little part is singles only

Shana's Disinformation
00:54:607 - 01:00:189 - i think these are supposed to be triples for the snare
01:15:049 - this whistle hitsound should be on 01:14:979 -
01:20:421 - this little drum break would be more consistent if this were a double
01:55:584 - and why not make this a triple to match the previous notes?
01:51:259 - missing whistle
I think the sync in the laughing section could be improved (I love this part btw):
02:21:166 (141166|3) - move to 02:21:154 -
02:21:538 (141538|1) - move to 02:21:503 -
02:21:724 (141724|3) - move to 02:21:712 -
02:21:910 (141910|1) - move to 02:21:886 -
02:22:096 (142096|2) - move to 02:22:061 -
02:22:282 (142282|3) - move to 02:22:270 -
02:22:468 (142468|1) - move to 02:22:445 -
If you disagree with my timing suggestions please don't hesitate to say so
02:42:514 (162514|1,162607|1) - this jack is placed uncomfortably compared to the other patterns. Can I suggest ctrl+j on 02:42:607 (162607|1,162677|0,162747|1,162817|0) - ?
02:41:724 - missing whistle (?)
03:03:677 - I don't think there's a bass drum here, maybe a single or a LN would be more appropriate
03:06:189 (186189|1) - what's this note for?
03:19:863 - I don't hear the bass drum, maybe it should be a single
03:51:398 - missing whistle
03:59:003 - 04:01:235 - ghost notes?
04:07:724 - it's suddenly quiet here, maybe you can represent it with a single or no notes
04:09:259 - 04:09:538 - 04:14:561 - 04:14:700 - consider adding notes here for consistency (drum kicks)
04:10:166 - missing whistle

Extra
00:58:235 - should be a whistle here
01:07:096 (67096|3,67131|2,67166|3) - this is extremely fast for this easy section, maybe you should make this 01:07:166 - a double instead
01:33:538 (93538|3,93573|2) - if you do ctrl+j on this, the burst patterns will match the change in tone better
01:51:119 - missing note?
02:23:631 - I think this LN should start at 02:23:352 - if you want to follow the bass
02:42:468 - why don't you map the 1/6 burst here?
02:46:793 (166793|3,166933|3,167073|3,167212|3,167352|3,167491|3,167631|3,167770|3,167910|3) - this anchor is rather extreme
02:48:886 (168886|3,169026|3,169166|3,169305|3,169445|3,169584|3,169724|3,169863|3) - so is this one
03:44:840 (224840|2,224840|0,224840|3,224910|1,224979|2,225119|0,225119|3,225119|1,225189|2,225259|1) - maybe you should do ctrl+h on this? the anchor at 03:44:700 (224700|2,224840|2) - breaks the pattern that you followed since the start of the kiai ;n;
04:00:886 - this should be a double for the bass drum

phew, long mod

Great map! I look forward to your response

Nivrad00 wrote:

We made a few minor changes to L45T C4LL through pm.


Bub!!

Rivals_7 wrote:

Looking at the map once again, there is some issues that could be an Unrankable issues. Mainly about the use of snapping between 3 highest diff.
So I popping the bubble for now.
Pls take into consideration about which snap that should be used properly.

1|2|3|4

[L45T C4LL]

00:46:654 (46654|1) - its better to keep your consistency. move it to 2. as you can see that previous
pattern has a stack - 00:46:235 (46235|1,46375|1) - 00:45:956 (45956|3,46096|3) - etc

00:46:793 (46793|2,46793|0,46793|3,46933|0,46933|3,46933|1,47073|0,47073|3,47073|2) - Then you need to ctrl+h this

00:47:212 (47212|1) - but dont move this. keep the consistency

00:48:607 (48607|2) - again. make it a stack. move to 1

00:59:770 (59770|2) - to 2. stacking consistency

01:07:131 - I think there's still a sound here. Try this one

if still want to keep your triple

01:09:817 (69817|2,69956|3) - swap place. keep the stack consistency as I said

01:11:631 (71631|1) - I guess its better if its placed on 1

01:13:654 (73654|3,73671|2,73689|1,73706|0) - as I said in the review. change this into 1/12 snap. compare with all the other diff

01:24:747 (84747|2) - welp. why quad? there arent any additional sounds beside the usual loud kicks. delete this note

01:29:073 (89073|0) - literally same ^

01:53:491 (113491|1,113631|1) - move to 3. for a proper hand balancing

02:34:514 - try

to get rid of unecessary stackin at col 3

02:54:886 (174886|3) - not doubled?

02:57:817 (177817|2) - same

03:45:468 (225468|0,225485|1,225503|2,225520|3) -

hmmmhh snaps

03:56:561 (236561|2) - maybe move to 2 for better control

04:05:352 (245352|1) - to 3. same reason

04:14:421 (254421|1) - ^

[Shana's Extra]

01:20:142 (80142|0,80282|2) - ctrl+g. looks more structural and aesthetic that way

02:41:677 (161677|2,161724|3) - I think these was unsnapped? should they on 1/4?

02:49:445 -

I dont know what is going on here. Shana using constant 1/6 while Allezard using a mix of 1/6 and 1/4 snaps
I cant really assure as well for now, if possible ask opinion to a QAT member before we move on

03:11:142 (191142|2) - I dont think this is important enough to be highlighted. delete?

03:34:375 (214375|0) - delete. see the previous pattern structure - 03:34:026 (214026|1,214096|2,214166|3) -

[Insane]

03:45:433 (225433|3,225468|2,225503|1,225538|0) - reminder that


[Hard]

01:13:584 (73584|0,73654|1,73724|3,73793|2) - hmm maybe its more convenient if its like...


02:57:956 (177956|2) - and - 02:58:514 (178514|3) - I think these should be doubled

[Normal]

02:32:003 (152003|3) - double. as the song encounter a new phase

02:40:933 (160933|1) - ^

03:09:398 (189398|0,189398|3) - wait why doubled? pretty sure this should be one note

[Easy]

Clear

Hitsound mod later~

Rivals_7 wrote:

No Kudos

1|2|3|4

Hitsound + some pattern mod again
Tips: click View -> Show sample name to find the hitsound easier

[L45T C4LL]

01:04:654 (64654|1,64724|2,64793|1,64933|2,64933|1) - 01:04:375 (64375|2,64514|1) - 01:07:166 (67166|1) - 01:33:956 (93956|2) - 03:02:979 (182979|0,183119|0) - 03:12:189 (192189|1) - W

02:05:212 (125212|1) - change to W

02:11:910 (131910|2) - F

[Shana's Extra]

Disable Widescreen support

02:49:584 (169584|0,169654|1,169724|3) - why is the snap still conflicted?

just to be safe, use 1/6 mixed with 1/4 like insane/L45T C4LL has

01:15:538 (75538|3,75607|2,75677|3) - 01:38:282 (98282|1) - 02:09:538 (129538|2) - 03:33:398 (213398|1,213677|2,213956|3) - W

02:46:375 (166375|1,166514|1) - remove F. doesnt seem fit on this part

03:16:654 - last time i saw this it was full stream, now it has the same structure as last call xD

03:19:863 (199863|0) - remove W

04:07:724 (247724|1) - delete note, this seems to be a ghost

[Insane]

01:02:700 (62700|3) - 03:34:514 (214514|3) - 03:43:445 (223445|0) - change to W

01:04:654 (64654|1,64724|2,64793|1,64933|1) - W

01:15:956 (75956|1) - add one more note since the kick is quite loud

02:05:212 (125212|1) - change to W

[Hard]

01:04:654 (64654|3,64724|2,64793|1,64933|3) - 01:07:166 (67166|3) - 01:24:886 (84886|1) - 01:33:956 (93956|3) - 01:56:840 (116840|1,117119|2) - 02:00:468 (120468|3,120607|3) - 02:05:212 (125212|1) - 03:12:189 (192189|0) - W

01:29:491 (89491|3) - 03:25:584 (205584|0) - change to W

02:07:166 (127166|3,127305|3) - change to F

01:56:840 (116840|0,117119|1) - F

03:12:747 - maybe add one more note. leaving this empty is kinda awkward

[Normal]

01:02:700 (62700|1) - 01:04:654 (64654|0,64724|1,64793|2,64933|0) - 01:07:166 (67166|3) - 01:11:631 (71631|3) - 01:24:468 (84468|0,84607|3) - 01:29:491 (89491|3) - 01:33:398 (93398|3) - 02:05:212 (125212|1) - 03:16:654 (196654|1) - 03:34:514 (214514|2) - 03:36:538 (216538|1) - W

02:14:142 (134142|3) - end LN at - 02:18:328 -

[Easy]

01:00:189 (60189|1) - 01:02:700 (62700|2) - 01:11:631 (71631|3) - 01:29:491 (89491|3) - 03:16:654 (196654|2) - 03:25:166 (205166|2,205305|0) - 03:25:584 (205584|1) - 03:33:398 (213398|0,213677|3,213956|0,214235|2,214514|1) - W

03:41:212 (221212|1) - delete. i dont get why is this the only double

you may call niv to rebub if you agreed with some of the Hitsound and pattern suggestion above.
Poke me if its done

Thank you very much for the work done.
Expect a C4LL

Krah wrote:

You might want to add "gilles de rais" in tags since searching for g1ll35 d3 r415 can quickly be annoying.

Nivrad00 wrote:

Great work!

Rebubble []img[/]

Rivals_7 wrote:

Late 2 hours :v
was in psychotest

Good Luck passing qualify