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M2U - Myosotis [OsuMania]

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ZZHBOY
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月2日 at 19:27:34

Artist: M2U
Title: Myosotis
Source: Deemo
Tags: Mobile collection Vol. 2 rayark NICODE Guriri Lucy
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4263kb
Play Time: 02:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (2.55 stars, 878 notes)
  2. Insane - 4Key (3.17 stars, 1078 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (1.77 stars, 589 notes)
Download: M2U - Myosotis
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Sandalphon
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滋池一下
cosran
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cosran
水一发
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|1 2 3 4 |
00:18:387 - 改成 00:18:387 (18387|0,18480|2,18574|1,18668|0) - 可能好一点 毕竟后面是1/6 前面1/4 看的别扭
00:18:762 - 删1 一个就好了
00:20:262 - 删3 这里不是抓钢琴音嘛 那就不管啦
00:19:699 - 删 （后面都没抓啊，所以这里？）
00:23:449 - 单键（不明显，随你）
00:25:699 - 单键
00:26:262 (26262|0,26355|2,26449|1,26543|3) - 我听了好几遍，基本听不见，所以抓主音好啦。
00:26:262 (26262|0,26262|1,26449|1,26449|2,26637|0,26637|3) - 改成这样好一点。
00:48:012 - 加一个
00:48:762 - 双键？
01:28:699 - 这里用我觉得继续面条比较好。
01:28:699 (88699|3,88699|0,88887|2,88887|1,89074|3,89074|2,89168|2,89168|3,89262|0,89262|1) - 我建议。排列随你
01:41:402 (101402|3,101449|2,101543|3,101637|2,101777|3,101824|2,101965|3,102012|2) - 这样如何？
01:58:512 - 从这里钢琴都改成单键吧，因为你这里（02:01:137 - ）后面也是啊。

最后补充一个 01:19:137 (79137|0) - 很明显是从这里开始的
01:31:137 - 01:31:324 - 我觉得应该单键啊， 和前面01:19:324 - 这里呼应。

水mod
住早日rank :)
ZZHBOY
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cosran wrote:

水一发
Insane
|1 2 3 4 |
00:18:387 - 改成 00:18:387 (18387|0,18480|2,18574|1,18668|0) - 可能好一点 毕竟后面是1/6 前面1/4 看的别扭
00:18:762 - 删1 一个就好了
00:20:262 - 删3 这里不是抓钢琴音嘛 那就不管啦
00:19:699 - 删 （后面都没抓啊，所以这里？）唔 后面有个这个音放了 所以这个就留着了
00:23:449 - 单键（不明显，随你）
00:25:699 - 单键
00:26:262 (26262|0,26355|2,26449|1,26543|3) - 我听了好几遍，基本听不见，所以抓主音好啦。
00:26:262 (26262|0,26262|1,26449|1,26449|2,26637|0,26637|3) - 改成这样好一点。
00:48:012 - 加一个
00:48:762 - 双键？
01:28:699 - 这里用我觉得继续面条比较好。
01:28:699 (88699|3,88699|0,88887|2,88887|1,89074|3,89074|2,89168|2,89168|3,89262|0,89262|1) - 我建议。排列随你唔 还是拒绝面条吧 这里鼓声比较明显想放双键
01:41:402 (101402|3,101449|2,101543|3,101637|2,101777|3,101824|2,101965|3,102012|2) - 这样如何？
01:58:512 - 从这里钢琴都改成单键吧，因为你这里（02:01:137 - ）后面也是啊。

最后补充一个 01:19:137 (79137|0) - 很明显是从这里开始的
01:31:137 - 01:31:324 - 我觉得应该单键啊， 和前面01:19:324 - 这里呼应。

其他都改了 谢谢你的摸 o.o

水mod
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liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao
先mark，过会edit
cao，denied什么kud，我又要po一次
liaoxingyao
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liaoxingyao
[NM]
00:35:449 (35449|2) - 移到2?
00:36:574 如果你在跟琴音的话这里add一个
00:38:637 (38637|0) - 移到2?
00:40:887 (40887|0,40887|3) - 这里建议删一个然后移到2或者3
01:31:137 这一段太难了 感觉不好 建议简化成1/2(
01:34:605 (94605|2) - 这个remove应该好些
01:37:137 (97137|0) - 这里简化成1/2感觉好点
02:16:512 (136512|2) - 感觉移到4好点 毕竟和前面不同音高
02:17:262 (137262|1) - ^
这个NM感觉抓vocal有点多了 不太好 抓音方面建议不要抓着抓着突然就变音了
[HD]
怎么一开头就一大堆双键..感觉不太好 你可以删一些
00:22:512 这里可以双键其实
00:40:512 (40512|0) - 低潮段你放什么三键。。这还是Hard
01:11:637 这里可以双键
01:24:293 (84293|3) - 建议别放条条
01:36:293 (96293|3) - ^
01:47:637 建议这样：
01:48:387 (108387|3) - 移到3会好些感觉
01:55:887 你抓提琴音抓全点阿
02:04:137 (124137|1) - 移到4?
[Insane]
01:16:137 (76137|2) - 这里琴声不明显 还是别抓了
02:08:637 (128637|1) - ^
好 就这样了 加油
gl
ZZHBOY
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liaoxingyao wrote:

[NM]
00:35:449 (35449|2) - 移到2?
00:36:574 如果你在跟琴音的话这里add一个
00:38:637 (38637|0) - 移到2?
00:40:887 (40887|0,40887|3) - 这里建议删一个然后移到2或者3还好啊 感觉前后音差不多
01:31:137 这一段太难了 感觉不好 建议简化成1/2(
01:34:605 (94605|2) - 这个remove应该好些
01:37:137 (97137|0) - 这里简化成1/2感觉好点
02:16:512 (136512|2) - 感觉移到4好点 毕竟和前面不同音高
02:17:262 (137262|1) - ^
这个NM感觉抓vocal有点多了 不太好 抓音方面建议不要抓着抓着突然就变音了我听什么音明显就抓什么音啊
[HD]
怎么一开头就一大堆双键..感觉不太好 你可以删一些
00:22:512 这里可以双键其实
00:40:512 (40512|0) - 低潮段你放什么三键。。这还是Hard
01:11:637 这里可以双键
01:24:293 (84293|3) - 建议别放条条
01:36:293 (96293|3) - ^
01:47:637 建议这样：
01:48:387 (108387|3) - 移到3会好些感觉这里换了下排列
01:55:887 你抓提琴音抓全点阿这里好像1/8 就不放了
02:04:137 (124137|1) - 移到4?
[Insane]
01:16:137 (76137|2) - 这里琴声不明显 还是别抓了
02:08:637 (128637|1) - ^
好 就这样了 加油
gl

其他都改了 thx for mod
AgeSheRi
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AgeSheRi
大兄弟 删了吧
Rumia-
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Rumia-
i actually want to map this song for quite a long time ,ill look into it after dinner ~
discussed few SV stuffs on the kiai~
biemote
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biemote
唉

水摸

1234

玩着你这铺面我最大的感受大概就是
抓音有点随意,,,,
排列...还要改进...你的排列按起来似乎很偏重12 或者34 这种,13 24 14这种双押很少见
而且很多地方我会建议你按照音高再排列一下...
以及,这变速....没有预想中的那么爽啊

NM
老实说,你的铺面似乎很多地方一下对这个系列的音效,一下子对那个系列的音效....

00:13:125 - 00:04:875 (4875|2) - 有的话...为何这里没有?
00:26:437 - 不知道算不算漏音,我听到这里有钢琴
01:53:437 (113437|1) - 这个去掉
02:02:625 (122625|3,122812|3) - 这两个不同音高,别放同一轨道吧
02:20:906 (140906|3,140953|2,141000|1,141000|0) - ctrl + h

HD
00:13:125 - 漏钢琴了
00:21:562 (21562|3,21625|2,21687|1,21750|3,21750|0) - 虽然我觉得ctrl + h会比较好但是改了的话前面 00:21:375 (21375|0) - 就要移到其他地方

02:10:875 (130875|1,130875|0,131250|0,131625|0) - 不大明白为啥是 211 这样的感觉.....

INSANE
00:33:000 - 到 00:37:875 - 好莫名其妙的塞满....
00:40:500 (40500|0,40500|3,40875|3,40875|0,41250|0,41250|3) - 好歹按着感觉变化一下咯
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liaoxingyao

OniJAM wrote:

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Sandalphon
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2015-12-16 11:19 SanadaYukimura: 00:04:324 (4324|1,4418|2) - 这两个是啥 orz
2015-12-16 11:19 SanadaYukimura: insane难度
2015-12-16 11:19 ZZHBOY: 不造
2015-12-16 11:19 ZZHBOY: 去掉了
2015-12-16 11:19 SanadaYukimura: （捂脸
2015-12-16 11:20 ZZHBOY: .-.
2015-12-16 11:20 SanadaYukimura: 00:11:637 - 一个就好
2015-12-16 11:20 SanadaYukimura: 00:08:637 -
2015-12-16 11:20 SanadaYukimura: 也是一个，没理由之前都一个这些一下子用double
2015-12-16 11:20 ZZHBOY: 前面是不是应该把那些条条都去了啊
2015-12-16 11:20 ZZHBOY: 感觉好zz
2015-12-16 11:21 SanadaYukimura: 你说你用LN写的人声么
2015-12-16 11:21 ZZHBOY: 嗯
2015-12-16 11:21 SanadaYukimura: 我就得还ok，虽然我不会写vocal
2015-12-16 11:21 SanadaYukimura: 我个人会只抓钢琴吧，看人
2015-12-16 11:21 ZZHBOY: 之前我觉得最高难度要是放那么空会不会不大好
2015-12-16 11:21 ZZHBOY: 但现在看这些好zz啊
2015-12-16 11:21 SanadaYukimura: 该relax就relax
2015-12-16 11:22 ZZHBOY: 要是不跟vocal 前面用单键就可以吗
2015-12-16 11:22 SanadaYukimura: 没啊
2015-12-16 11:22 SanadaYukimura: 钢琴的低音
2015-12-16 11:22 SanadaYukimura: 可以用double来写啊
2015-12-16 11:22 SanadaYukimura: 00:13:137 - 漏个琴
2015-12-16 11:24 ZZHBOY: 有道理
2015-12-16 11:24 SanadaYukimura: 00:25:137 (25137|2,25137|0,25324|2,25324|0) - 不同音高
2015-12-16 11:24 ZZHBOY: 唉 前面的你觉得单键可以吗
2015-12-16 11:24 ZZHBOY: 我把那些条条都去了
2015-12-16 11:25 SanadaYukimura: 还在讨论前面么hhh
2015-12-16 11:25 SanadaYukimura: 低音琴啊
2015-12-16 11:25 SanadaYukimura: double
2015-12-16 11:25 SanadaYukimura: 反正vocal都跟琴一个timing
2015-12-16 11:25 ZZHBOY: 唔 我不太懂 哪些地方应该double啊
2015-12-16 11:25 ZZHBOY: 我想把条条去了...
2015-12-16 11:26 SanadaYukimura: 低音
2015-12-16 11:26 SanadaYukimura: 我看看
2015-12-16 11:26 ZZHBOY: 厚
2015-12-16 11:27 SanadaYukimura: 00:01:512 - 00:03:012 - 00:04:512 -
2015-12-16 11:27 SanadaYukimura: 00:06:012 - 00:06:762 - 00:07:512 -
2015-12-16 11:29 SanadaYukimura: 00:28:605 - overmap，这里没有
2015-12-16 11:29 SanadaYukimura: 00:28:605 - 多了
2015-12-16 11:30 SanadaYukimura: 我是不应该发论坛（躺
2015-12-16 11:30 SanadaYukimura: 我疯狂掉线
2015-12-16 11:30 ZZHBOY: 好吧 我把你刚说的改一下把前面条条删了传一下
2015-12-16 11:30 SanadaYukimura: 00:28:699 - 这里不适合单手对点，毕竟音有变化
2015-12-16 11:30 ZZHBOY: 00:13:137 - 话说这个琴音不是很明显 可不可以不跟啊
2015-12-16 11:30 SanadaYukimura: 我看完剩下的你update一下我再看看前面那些把
2015-12-16 11:31 SanadaYukimura: 我觉得还好吧，正常play的时候也能听出来
2015-12-16 11:31 SanadaYukimura: 你不加估计会被人说，音还是跟全一点好
2015-12-16 11:32 SanadaYukimura: 00:27:668 - 漏
2015-12-16 11:32 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-12-16 11:33 ZZHBOY: 这里是不是应该全部换成点的啊
2015-12-16 11:33 SanadaYukimura: 00:29:355 - 这个也多了
2015-12-16 11:33 SanadaYukimura: 你说短LN那段么
2015-12-16 11:33 SanadaYukimura: 是的，我会建议全部换成普通凡人note
2015-12-16 11:33 SanadaYukimura: 普通凡人hhhhhhhh
2015-12-16 11:33 ZZHBOY: 厚
2015-12-16 11:34 SanadaYukimura: 00:29:449 - 00:28:699 - 打散，不要摆楼梯
2015-12-16 11:34 SanadaYukimura: 00:28:887 - 楼梯从这里开始
2015-12-16 11:35 SanadaYukimura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4141243
2015-12-16 11:36 ZZHBOY: 为什么楼梯不好啊
2015-12-16 11:36 ZZHBOY: 我觉得楼梯好打啊...
2015-12-16 11:36 SanadaYukimura: 音高
2015-12-16 11:36 ZZHBOY: 懂了...
2015-12-16 11:36 SanadaYukimura: 你仔细听00:28:887 - 开始
2015-12-16 11:37 SanadaYukimura: 才是从高到低
2015-12-16 11:37 SanadaYukimura: 所以前面打散
2015-12-16 11:37 SanadaYukimura: 00:28:887 - 开始用楼梯写出钢琴的那个彼岸花
2015-12-16 11:37 SanadaYukimura: 变化
2015-12-16 11:37 SanadaYukimura: 彼岸花hhhh
2015-12-16 11:37 ZZHBOY: 唔
2015-12-16 11:37 ZZHBOY: 懂啦
2015-12-16 11:37 ZZHBOY: 神
2015-12-16 11:38 SanadaYukimura: 00:31:512 (31512|2) - 这个多于
2015-12-16 11:38 ZZHBOY: 度偶遇?
2015-12-16 11:38 ZZHBOY: 多余?
2015-12-16 11:38 SanadaYukimura: 嗯
2015-12-16 11:39 ZZHBOY: 好
2015-12-16 11:39 SanadaYukimura: 00:30:012 (30012|3) - 留这个就好
2015-12-16 11:39 ZZHBOY: 00:30:012 (30012|3) - 这个该不该也去了啊
2015-12-16 11:39 SanadaYukimura: 00:32:262 - 结束这里
2015-12-16 11:39 SanadaYukimura: 留
2015-12-16 11:39 SanadaYukimura: 背景的长音只有一个所以
2015-12-16 11:39 ZZHBOY: 00:30:668 (30668|2,30762|1,30855|0,30949|1,31043|0,31137|2,31230|1) - 这些该不该刘啊
2015-12-16 11:40 SanadaYukimura: 00:30:012 (30012|3) - 00:30:012 (30012|3) - 00:30:012 (30012|3) - 这些都有
2015-12-16 11:40 SanadaYukimura: 放啊，为啥不
2015-12-16 11:42 ZZHBOY: 厚
2015-12-16 11:42 ZZHBOY: 哪些逗哦与啊
2015-12-16 11:42 ZZHBOY: 都有
2015-12-16 11:42 SanadaYukimura: 嗯
2015-12-16 11:43 SanadaYukimura: woc
2015-12-16 11:43 SanadaYukimura: 我全部贴错了
2015-12-16 11:43 ZZHBOY: woc
2015-12-16 11:43 SanadaYukimura: 00:31:699 -
2015-12-16 11:43 ZZHBOY: .=.
2015-12-16 11:43 SanadaYukimura: 00:32:262 -
2015-12-16 11:43 SanadaYukimura: 00:32:449 -
2015-12-16 11:43 ZZHBOY: 为什么我听不出来啊;w;
2015-12-16 11:44 SanadaYukimura: 00:31:699 - 这个绝对有呀
2015-12-16 11:44 ZZHBOY: laole
2015-12-16 11:44 ZZHBOY: 老了
2015-12-16 11:45 SanadaYukimura: 00:34:512 - why三个
2015-12-16 11:45 ZZHBOY: 00:32:074 - 这里是不是也有啊
2015-12-16 11:45 SanadaYukimura: 有
2015-12-16 11:45 SanadaYukimura: 00:31:887 - 这里其实也有
2015-12-16 11:45 SanadaYukimura: 之间的蓝线也有
2015-12-16 11:46 ZZHBOY: 唉 还是先都塞上
2015-12-16 11:46 SanadaYukimura: 不够都不是很明显
2015-12-16 11:46 ZZHBOY: 蓝线?
2015-12-16 11:46 ZZHBOY: ...
2015-12-16 11:46 ZZHBOY: 完了 我要去看耳朵了
2015-12-16 11:47 SanadaYukimura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4141286
2015-12-16 11:47 SanadaYukimura: 但是都是不明显的琴所以可以不抓
2015-12-16 11:48 SanadaYukimura: 00:36:762 - why三个
2015-12-16 11:48 SanadaYukimura: 00:38:637 -
2015-12-16 11:48 SanadaYukimura: 三个很奇怪
2015-12-16 11:48 ZZHBOY: 嗯
2015-12-16 11:48 SanadaYukimura: 00:38:637 - 改成34，跟前面00:38:262 - 对比
2015-12-16 11:49 ZZHBOY: 后
2015-12-16 11:50 SanadaYukimura: 00:48:762 - 前面不都是三个来写这个音
2015-12-16 11:51 ZZHBOY: 是
2015-12-16 11:51 ZZHBOY: 加到3歌了
2015-12-16 11:52 SanadaYukimura: 00:54:762 - 134
2015-12-16 11:52 SanadaYukimura: 这样好看一点
2015-12-16 11:53 ZZHBOY: 后
2015-12-16 11:53 SanadaYukimura: 00:56:262 - 这里你的鼓都是double...但是到这里01:01:512 - 又全部是三个了...
2015-12-16 11:53 SanadaYukimura: 统一一下
2015-12-16 11:55 SanadaYukimura: !roll
2015-12-16 11:56 ZZHBOY: !roll
2015-12-16 11:56 ZZHBOY: 你觉得2歌好还是3个好啊
2015-12-16 11:56 SanadaYukimura: 实力掉线
2015-12-16 11:56 SanadaYukimura: roll不出来
2015-12-16 11:56 SanadaYukimura: 两个
2015-12-16 11:56 ZZHBOY: 实力掉线
2015-12-16 11:56 SanadaYukimura: 可是你前面都三个了
2015-12-16 11:56 SanadaYukimura: 改要改很多
2015-12-16 11:56 ZZHBOY: 全都换成2个吗
2015-12-16 11:59 SanadaYukimura: 换肯定都换
2015-12-16 11:59 SanadaYukimura: 三也没问题啊
2015-12-16 11:59 ZZHBOY: 唔
2015-12-16 11:59 ZZHBOY: 我也不知道 因为我3打不了 但感觉2又简单了
2015-12-16 12:00 SanadaYukimura: 哪有为难而难哦
2015-12-16 12:00 ZZHBOY: 有道理
2015-12-16 12:00 ZZHBOY: 所以说还是2歌好>?
2015-12-16 12:00 SanadaYukimura: 嗯
2015-12-16 12:00 ZZHBOY: 但是我记得有个这个图
2015-12-16 12:00 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/391595 DJ Genericname - Dear You [S.Star's 4K HD+]]
2015-12-16 12:00 ZZHBOY: 好像放了很多3键
2015-12-16 12:01 ZZHBOY: 难度名还是hd///
2015-12-16 12:01 SanadaYukimura: 没问题啊
2015-12-16 12:02 SanadaYukimura: 我不是说3也可以
2015-12-16 12:02 ZZHBOY: 厚
2015-12-16 12:02 SanadaYukimura: 01:03:012 - 这种鼓两个，01:03:762 - 这种音可以三
2015-12-16 12:03 ZZHBOY: 很有道理
2015-12-16 12:04 ZZHBOY: 我按你说的个i啊该
2015-12-16 12:04 ZZHBOY: 改改
2015-12-16 12:05 SanadaYukimura: 01:39:387 (99387|3,99574|2) - 都结束在蓝线
2015-12-16 12:06 SanadaYukimura: 02:04:137 - 不同音高，换轨
2015-12-16 12:07 ZZHBOY: 02:03:949 (123949|1,124137|1,124324|1) - 这三个我听是一个银啊
2015-12-16 12:07 ZZHBOY: ...
2015-12-16 12:07 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4141347 这里是应该这样吗01:39:387 -
2015-12-16 12:07 SanadaYukimura: 贴错
2015-12-16 12:08 SanadaYukimura: 02:04:324 - 这个不同
2015-12-16 12:08 SanadaYukimura: 对，LN那个对了
2015-12-16 12:09 SanadaYukimura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4141353这样爽一点
2015-12-16 12:09 ZZHBOY: 会不会不好打啊
2015-12-16 12:10 SanadaYukimura: 不会啊
2015-12-16 12:29 ZZHBOY: 对了 我那个变速有没有要改的啊
2015-12-16 12:32 SanadaYukimura: 我不会看SV
2015-12-16 12:32 SanadaYukimura: orz
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
[Emiria]
insane
00:16:687 - 这几串梯子打乱写比较好
00:23:343 - 有音加个note
00:24:937 - 再加一个note
00:26:625 - 这开始你在仔细听听 音不对
00:28:500 - 加个note
00:33:000 - 这里有钢琴都双键 没钢琴的单键 自己检查一下
00:38:250 - 绿线1.4
00:38:437 - 绿线0.6
00:38:625 - 绿线1
00:42:562 - 楼梯别这么放后面00:42:937 - 还有音 怎么不写
00:43:125 - 最好把这里的钢琴写出来
00:48:468 - 漏音
00:48:843 - ^ 你自己检查检查。。后面有漏的我不写出来了 这段还有漏一些钢琴的 你自己检查啊
00:56:250 - 这的 你前面都是三键 这个音这里全是三键 同样的 我后面就不写了
01:00:750 - 这里
01:01:687 (61687|3,61687|2,62062|1,62062|2) - 。为啥2个
01:06:000 - 红线单note吧 不然和你后面承接太差
01:48:750 (108750|3,108750|0,108843|1,108937|3,109031|2) - 这样卡手
01:49:500 (109500|0) - 01:50:062 - 者结束
01:49:875 - 加个note
02:09:000 - 绿线0.9
02:09:093 - 绿线0.85以此类推 到下面
02:09:562 - 绿线0.6
02:10:500 - 这里的绿线删了 音效放在0.9的那个开始

hard
00:36:937 (36937|1) - 删了
00:47:625 (47625|0) - 删了
00:52:875 (52875|0) - ^
01:45:375 - 加个note。

摸不动了。。
Feerum
osu! Alumni
2,042 posts
Joined August 2014
Feerum
Requested Mod



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello ZZHBOY
You request this Map to me. Here is my Mod! Hope i can help you

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: You have no Tags. Here some suggestions for Tags: Mobile, collection Vol. 2 // Because it's a Mobile Game and the Collection where the Song in the game appears.
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: Disable Widescreen Support in: Normal, Hard because you don't have a Storyboard

Normal

00:04:875 (4875|2) - Delete this note for consistency. It has no sound, also you haven't mapped here 00:02:625 -
00:12:375 (12375|2) - Move to 1 and 00:12:750 (12750|0) - to 2 for a nice pitch to the End of the Calm part.
00:22:500 - Add here a note. In Mania is Consistency very important. Look here 00:21:000 - you have a Chord for this sound. Very strong beat.
00:24:000 - Here too, same reason as above.
I highly recommend to add notes ad 00:25:875 - and 00:27:375 - . Don't keep it empty. It has a nice Piano and this 2/1 Beat Emptynes plays weird
00:30:000 (30000|1,30000|2) - These LN's should end 00:32:625 - . The remaining sound is just an echo. How about something like this? Fit's also great with pitch
Screen
00:35:625 (35625|1,35812|2) - CTRL + G for Pitch.
00:38:062 (38062|3,38156|2,38250|1) - CTRL + H for better handbalance and 00:38:625 (38625|0) - to 2 for pitch.
00:40:500 - how about this for nice playabiliy and pitch with vocal:
Screen
00:43:500 - why not map from here the strong beats with Chords? You start randomly with that here 00:50:250 -
00:49:312 (49312|2) - I highly recommend to move this to 2. Something like this 00:48:937 (48937|2,49125|2,49312|2) - plays really bad especially after a one-handed-trill
01:00:187 (60187|2,60281|3,60375|2,60937|2,61031|3,61125|2) - Don't make this kind of trill everytime again and again, change it to the left hand or make it 4-3-4 instead of 3-4-3 every time. You can add a lot of varity.
01:01:500 - Add note at 2 for consistency.
01:06:937 (66937|1,67125|2) - CTRL + G here. Don't map Jacks when the sound is not same pitch. :c
01:22:500 (82500|2) - Delete, no sound.
01:36:750 - add at 3 for strong beat.
01:50:062 - How about this? I rearrange the pattern here to follow nice pitch instead of just 3 times stair:
Screen
01:59:625 (119625|3) - Move to 3, different pitch then the next Note.
02:03:937 (123937|3,124125|3) - Move to 2, and 02:04:312 (124312|2) - to 3 for better Pitch. These notes have not the same sound.
02:20:812 (140812|3,140906|2,141000|1,141000|0) - These notes are Wrong Snapped. They should be 1/8 Snapped like this
Screen

Hard

00:04:875 (4875|0) - Same suggestion like in the Normal. No sound.
00:11:250 (11250|0,11625|1) - Move one col to the right for pitch.
00:12:375 (12375|2) - Move to 1 for Pitch.
00:25:125 (25125|2) - Move to 2. This note has same pitch like the previous but not like the next.
00:26:062 (26062|2) - Move to 2, different pitch.
00:28:312 (28312|2) - I suggest to move this to 4 to have a Stair with 00:27:750 (27750|0,27937|1,28125|2) - for Pitch c:
00:30:000 (30000|3,31500|0) - Same suggestion like in the Normal.
00:40:875 (40875|3,41250|3) - Same like NM :3
00:46:125 (46125|2,46312|1) - CTRL + G and one col to the left for Pitch.
00:48:468 - Add a note for Piano.
01:00:468 - and 01:00:656 - Add for Piano.
01:07:875 (67875|3) - Move to 3 to avoid tripple jacku.
01:25:312 (85312|3,85406|2,85500|3) - Move on col to the left for better balance.
01:26:625 (86625|1,86625|0) - This LN Sounds ends at 01:27:000 -
01:32:625 (92625|1,92625|2) - This LN Sounds ends at 01:33:000 -
01:45:375 (105375|0) - LN should end 01:45:562 -
01:49:500 (109500|0) - This LN should end 01:50:062 -
01:50:625 - Maybe something like this for better playability:
Screen
02:03:937 (123937|3,124125|3,124312|3) - same suggestion like NM

Insane

00:04:875 (4875|2) - same like other. No Sound.
00:15:000 (15000|3,15750|1,16500|2) - I highly recommend to delete these notes. They are absolute same like all other. Don't use chord here
00:22:375 (22375|0,22437|1) - These notes are Wrong Snapped. It should be 1/8 from 00:22:406 - .
00:24:937 - i would add here a note at 3. To emphasize the strong 1/2 melody
00:26:906 - Why no note? You have in Hard one here.
00:30:000 (30000|3) - same Suggestion with LN like on Normal and Hard.
00:40:500 (40500|2,40875|1,41250|2) - I highly recommend to delete here one note at every chord. You used 3Chord for Vocals. Thats absolute
unnecessary. Two Chord is more then enough to emphasize it.
00:48:468 - Add for Piano.
00:56:250 - Add here one and delete 00:57:000 (57000|0) - here one to be consistent. Look at thel ast part what you mapped with you 3Chord. Continue this.
00:57:750 - Add for Consistency.
00:59:250 - Same suggestion like above.
01:00:656 - Add here for Piano.
01:01:687 (61687|3,61875|0,62062|1,62437|2,62625|0,62812|1,63187|1) - What exactly you try to Emphasize with you chords here? They are really bad placed here because you never used chords for this kind of sound.
From 01:06:000 - to 01:09:000 - don't use 1/2 beat chords. It don't fit. Make it 1/1 and from 01:09:000 - 1/2 Chords. fit more to music.
01:19:875 - How about this. Fit better to music.
Screen
01:34:500 - Next Suggestion with Screen for nice Pitch:
Screen
01:38:437 (98437|1) - Delete, doesn't rly fit here.
01:50:812 (110812|1,111000|1,111187|1,111375|1) - Always try to avoid something like this. Maybe rearrange the Chords here a bit?
01:52:781 (112781|1) - Ghost Note. No Sound.
01:54:375 (114375|3) - Would delete. No strong sound.
02:16:500 (136500|1) - Delete. Keep 2Chords at the ending.
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
维多神

victorica_db wrote:

insane
00:16:687 - 这几串梯子打乱写比较好改了下 没放一起了
00:23:343 - 有音加个note
00:24:937 - 再加一个note
00:26:625 - 这开始你在仔细听听 音不对
00:28:500 - 加个note
00:33:000 - 这里有钢琴都双键 没钢琴的单键 自己检查一下
00:38:250 - 绿线1.4
00:38:437 - 绿线0.6
00:38:625 - 绿线1
00:42:562 - 楼梯别这么放后面00:42:937 - 还有音 怎么不写
00:43:125 - 最好把这里的钢琴写出来
00:48:468 - 漏音
00:48:843 - ^ 你自己检查检查。。后面有漏的我不写出来了 这段还有漏一些钢琴的 你自己检查啊
00:56:250 - 这的 你前面都是三键 这个音这里全是三键 同样的 我后面就不写了
01:00:750 - 这里
01:01:687 (61687|3,61687|2,62062|1,62062|2) - 。为啥2个
01:06:000 - 红线单note吧 不然和你后面承接太差
01:48:750 (108750|3,108750|0,108843|1,108937|3,109031|2) - 这样卡手
01:49:500 (109500|0) - 01:50:062 - 者结束
01:49:875 - 加个note
02:09:000 - 绿线0.9
02:09:093 - 绿线0.85以此类推 到下面
02:09:562 - 绿线0.6
02:10:500 - 这里的绿线删了 音效放在0.9的那个开始

hard
00:36:937 (36937|1) - 删了
00:47:625 (47625|0) - 删了
00:52:875 (52875|0) - ^这里好像有个音 感觉可以先留着
01:45:375 - 加个note。

摸不动了。。神 其他都改了

feerum

Feerum wrote:

Requested Mod



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello ZZHBOY
You request this Map to me. Here is my Mod! Hope i can help you

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: You have no Tags. Here some suggestions for Tags: Mobile, collection Vol. 2 // Because it's a Mobile Game and the Collection where the Song in the game appears.added
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: Disable Widescreen Support in: Normal, Hard because you don't have a Storyboardfixed

Normal

00:04:875 (4875|2) - Delete this note for consistency. It has no sound, also you haven't mapped here 00:02:625 - em.. i just want to follow the piano
00:12:375 (12375|2) - Move to 1 and 00:12:750 (12750|0) - to 2 for a nice pitch to the End of the Calm part.
00:22:500 - Add here a note. In Mania is Consistency very important. Look here 00:21:000 - you have a Chord for this sound. Very strong beat.
00:24:000 - Here too, same reason as above.
I highly recommend to add notes ad 00:25:875 - and 00:27:375 - . Don't keep it empty. It has a nice Piano and this 2/1 Beat Emptynes plays weirdadded some notes
00:30:000 (30000|1,30000|2) - These LN's should end 00:32:625 - . The remaining sound is just an echo. How about something like this? Fit's also great with pitchkept, because sound after 00:32:625 - is audible imo

00:35:625 (35625|1,35812|2) - CTRL + G for Pitch.
00:38:062 (38062|3,38156|2,38250|1) - CTRL + H for better handbalance and 00:38:625 (38625|0) - to 2 for pitch.
00:40:500 - how about this for nice playabiliy and pitch with vocal:

00:43:500 - why not map from here the strong beats with Chords? You start randomly with that here 00:50:250 -
00:49:312 (49312|2) - I highly recommend to move this to 2. Something like this 00:48:937 (48937|2,49125|2,49312|2) - plays really bad especially after a one-handed-trill moved to 3
01:00:187 (60187|2,60281|3,60375|2,60937|2,61031|3,61125|2) - Don't make this kind of trill everytime again and again, change it to the left hand or make it 4-3-4 instead of 3-4-3 every time. You can add a lot of varity.changed in another way
01:01:500 - Add note at 2 for consistency.
01:06:937 (66937|1,67125|2) - CTRL + G here. Don't map Jacks when the sound is not same pitch. :c
01:22:500 (82500|2) - Delete, no sound.
01:36:750 - add at 3 for strong beat.
01:50:062 - How about this? I rearrange the pattern here to follow nice pitch instead of just 3 times stair:

01:59:625 (119625|3) - Move to 3, different pitch then the next Note.
02:03:937 (123937|3,124125|3) - Move to 2, and 02:04:312 (124312|2) - to 3 for better Pitch. These notes have not the same sound.
02:20:812 (140812|3,140906|2,141000|1,141000|0) - These notes are Wrong Snapped. They should be 1/8 Snapped like this

Hard

00:04:875 (4875|0) - Same suggestion like in the Normal. No sound.same to nm
00:11:250 (11250|0,11625|1) - Move one col to the right for pitch.
00:12:375 (12375|2) - Move to 1 for Pitch.
00:25:125 (25125|2) - Move to 2. This note has same pitch like the previous but not like the next.
00:26:062 (26062|2) - Move to 2, different pitch.
00:28:312 (28312|2) - I suggest to move this to 4 to have a Stair with 00:27:750 (27750|0,27937|1,28125|2) - for Pitch c:
00:30:000 (30000|3,31500|0) - Same suggestion like in the Normal.
00:40:875 (40875|3,41250|3) - Same like NM :3
00:46:125 (46125|2,46312|1) - CTRL + G and one col to the left for Pitch.
00:48:468 - Add a note for Piano.
01:00:468 - and 01:00:656 - Add for Piano.
01:07:875 (67875|3) - Move to 3 to avoid tripple jacku.
01:25:312 (85312|3,85406|2,85500|3) - Move on col to the left for better balance.
01:26:625 (86625|1,86625|0) - This LN Sounds ends at 01:27:000 -
01:32:625 (92625|1,92625|2) - This LN Sounds ends at 01:33:000 -
01:45:375 (105375|0) - LN should end 01:45:562 -
01:49:500 (109500|0) - This LN should end 01:50:062 -
01:50:625 - Maybe something like this for better playability:

02:03:937 (123937|3,124125|3,124312|3) - same suggestion like NM

Insane

00:04:875 (4875|2) - same like other. No Sound.^
00:15:000 (15000|3,15750|1,16500|2) - I highly recommend to delete these notes. They are absolute same like all other. Don't use chord heresomeone suggested me to added those, so i'd like kept them now
00:22:375 (22375|0,22437|1) - These notes are Wrong Snapped. It should be 1/8 from 00:22:406 - .
00:24:937 - i would add here a note at 3. To emphasize the strong 1/2 melody
00:26:906 - Why no note? You have in Hard one here.
00:30:000 (30000|3) - same Suggestion with LN like on Normal and Hard.
00:40:500 (40500|2,40875|1,41250|2) - I highly recommend to delete here one note at every chord. You used 3Chord for Vocals. Thats absolute
unnecessary. Two Chord is more then enough to emphasize it.
00:48:468 - Add for Piano.
00:56:250 - Add here one and delete 00:57:000 (57000|0) - here one to be consistent. Look at thel ast part what you mapped with you 3Chord. Continue this.
00:57:750 - Add for Consistency.
00:59:250 - Same suggestion like above.
01:00:656 - Add here for Piano.
01:01:687 (61687|3,61875|0,62062|1,62437|2,62625|0,62812|1,63187|1) - What exactly you try to Emphasize with you chords here? They are really bad placed here because you never used chords for this kind of sound.
From 01:06:000 - to 01:09:000 - don't use 1/2 beat chords. It don't fit. Make it 1/1 and from 01:09:000 - 1/2 Chords. fit more to music.removed some of them but kept a few notes
01:19:875 - How about this. Fit better to music.

01:34:500 - Next Suggestion with Screen for nice Pitch:

01:38:437 (98437|1) - Delete, doesn't rly fit here.
01:50:812 (110812|1,111000|1,111187|1,111375|1) - Always try to avoid something like this. Maybe rearrange the Chords here a bit?
01:52:781 (112781|1) - Ghost Note. No Sound.there has a drum sound, so i set a not there
01:54:375 (114375|3) - Would delete. No strong sound.
02:16:500 (136500|1) - Delete. Keep 2Chords at the ending.

no reply = fixed
thank for mod!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
|1234|

說好的乖乖把kiai放副歌呢

希望官網預覽聽清楚第一個人聲的話可以把預覽點提前1/4

[Normal]

00:03:375 (3375|2,3750|1) - 前面你要是打算嚴格按音高擺的話這兩個要反一下

00:04:875 (4875|2) - 這種裏音樂空了，相反00:13:125 - 有個高音應該加note

00:25:875 - 這裡不是白線鋼琴嗎……前後紅線為何反而放note……要麼跟音軌要麼按音量啊

00:38:250 (38250|1,38625|0) - 這種一樣/類似的音一般放同一條綫上，類似00:42:750 (42750|1,43125|1) -

01:51:000 (111000|2,111187|0,111375|1,111562|2) - 理論上第一個放左邊往右……01:52:500 (112500|3) - 兩個note

01:52:875 - 這邊空的有點久……可以考慮加一個note

01:56:250 (116250|1) - 因為是Nomral 所以建議這個停在01:56:625 - 方便讀圖

[Hard]

00:21:562 (21562|3,21609|2,21656|1,21703|0,21750|3) - 這個明顯是1/6……總共四個音

00:38:062 (38062|0,38109|1,38156|2,38203|3,38250|0) - ^

密集恐懼症……看不清楚……
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
那西速

Narcissu wrote:

|1234|

說好的乖乖把kiai放副歌呢换到最前面了

希望官網預覽聽清楚第一個人聲的話可以把預覽點提前1/4

[Normal]

00:03:375 (3375|2,3750|1) - 前面你要是打算嚴格按音高擺的話這兩個要反一下好

00:04:875 (4875|2) - 這種裏音樂空了，相反00:13:125 - 有個高音應該加note唔 之前我好像就是你说的那样 被要求改掉了

00:25:875 - 這裡不是白線鋼琴嗎……前後紅線為何反而放note……要麼跟音軌要麼按音量啊加了

00:38:250 (38250|1,38625|0) - 這種一樣/類似的音一般放同一條綫上，類似00:42:750 (42750|1,43125|1) - 唔 好像有点差别 暂时还是先放开吧

01:51:000 (111000|2,111187|0,111375|1,111562|2) - 理論上第一個放左邊往右……01:52:500 (112500|3) - 兩個note好

01:52:875 - 這邊空的有點久……可以考慮加一個note据说不能乱跟 之前这里好像有note被要求删了

01:56:250 (116250|1) - 因為是Nomral 所以建議這個停在01:56:625 - 方便讀圖好

[Hard]

00:21:562 (21562|3,21609|2,21656|1,21703|0,21750|3) - 這個明顯是1/6……總共四個音有道理 改了

00:38:062 (38062|0,38109|1,38156|2,38203|3,38250|0) - ^改了

密集恐懼症……看不清楚……

感谢那西速o.o
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