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SNCF - Carte Kiwi [Osu|Taiko]

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Thundur
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 10 août 2018 at 00:13:50

Artist: SNCF
Title: Carte Kiwi
Tags: carte kiwi dessert Nozhomi _Gezo_ azer467 Milady Battquif Ovoui
BPM: 167,87
Filesize: 825kb
Play Time: 00:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aze's Muzukashii (2,53 stars, 113 notes)
  2. Batt's Easy (1,57 stars, 45 notes)
  3. Collab Normal (1,95 stars, 53 notes)
  4. Gezo's Oni (3,11 stars, 127 notes)
  5. Noz's Insane (4,35 stars, 98 notes)
  6. Ovoui's Hard (3,18 stars, 80 notes)
  7. Ameyy's KIWI (4,59 stars, 100 notes)
  8. Insane (4,37 stars, 109 notes)
  9. ULTIMATE KIWI 2018 EDITION (6,68 stars, 152 notes)
Download: SNCF - Carte Kiwi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Batt's Easy by Battquif
Collab Normal by azer467 and me
Ovoui's Hard by Ovoui
Noz's Insane by Nozhomi
Insane by me
Ameyy's KIWI by Ameyy
Aze's Muzukashii by azer467
Gezo's Oni by _Gezo_

check Remyria's rebit jumps : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/455855
pls mod normal

2018 edit : dead mapset lol
added a more "recent" diff hope you'll like it
Nozhomi
WE WANT MORE DESSERT !
Ovoui
je reserve hard
azer467
je fé 1 taco
Topic Starter
Thundur

azer467 wrote:

je fé 1 taco

Ovoui wrote:

je reserve hard
oké
Zerss
le mp3 est tout caca
c'est kdo
azer467
bjr
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Oui
Bonsoir je peux m'incruster en Taiko ?
La carte KiOui
PS: Le dessert
Ameyy
OLALALA CE N'EST PAS POSSI-..

cc cette diff pète tout, même tous tes rêves.
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Topic Starter
Thundur
Bon j'ai add les diffs, >30 secs rip
Battquif
Bon, rapide mod de 2-3 trucs que j'ai trouvé ;)

The mod '0'
Noz's Insane

  • 00:02:527 (2,3,1) - Je vois plus 3 copié-collé de 2, ça fait plus "propre" je trouve. Après, même si c'est pas trop dans l'esprit de la map, peut-être que 2 circles en plus en 3 et 1 rendrait bien :) Dans ce style : http://puu.sh/mqT6j/61847620a4.jpg Avec le circle 5 blanket à 1 :)

    00:06:456 (6,1,2,3) - 1 est trop proche de 6, ça change de voix, un jump à bien plus sa place qu'un anti-jump :) De plus le "ton tonton" devrait être fait de circle, étant des "notes" nets et précises. Un stack suivi d'un aller-retour en 2* passerait bien je pense :)

    00:08:956 (4) - CTRL+H de 00:07:885 (6) - puis 00:09:134 (5) - centré sur l'axe x (donc x=256 et y bouge) ? :) quite à faire de la symmetry :D

    00:21:099 (3,5,6) - L'ordre 6 -> 4 -> 5 -> 3 -> 7 passe mieux je trouve, après c'est que mon avis après avoir testé xD Je saurai pas te dire pourquoi :D

KIWI

  • 00:06:633 (1,2) - Même remarque que pour la diff de Nozhomi. "le "ton tonton" devrait être fait de circle, étant des "notes" nets et précises. Un stack suivi d'un aller-retour en 2* passerait bien je pense :)"

    00:12:348 (3,4,5) - Fait un triangle, c'est plus propre. Donc 5 : 459|96 puis fait un truc de ce genre : http://puu.sh/mqUGV/e40c0d16f7.jpg Tu peux déplacer 7 vers le bas (voire faire un triangle, mais après on va croire que je vis triangle). Cette anchènement sera meilleur ;)

    00:13:598 (2,4) - Blanket ? Ne bouge pas le slider (enfin, tu devras surment le déformer), ne bouge que le circle, ça rend bien ;) puis bouge 00:13:776 (3) - dans le flow de 4 du style 266|196

    00:16:812 (2,3) - Si tu jump juste avant, faut jump ici aussi. En plus le flow est pas terrible terrible :D. De plus, tu rentre dans le kiai et tu viens de jump, bah continue encore dans les jumps xD Add quelque patern sympa plutôt ;)

    00:19:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - Une étoile propre s'il te plaît ;D Peut-être plus space et placée vers le bas, le slider le visant :D

    Les éspacements entre 00:21:098 (4,6,8) - et 00:20:919 (3,5,7) - ne sont pas les mêmes o.o tu devrais préférer vers des copié-collé -> rotation à la airman ;) Je suis pas super fan de ce genre de patern vu la musique mais bon :D

    00:23:596 (1) - Un simple CTRL+H de 00:22:884 (5) - rendra plus propre je pense :) Et NC sur le 5 ;)

    00:24:312 (3) - Essaye de le centré sur l'axe x (donc x=256 et y bouge). Vu que tu fais du CTRL+H après, ça rendra mieux ;)

    00:26:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Même remarque que pour 00:21:098 (4,6,8) et 00:20:919 (3,5,7).

    00:28:688 (1) - Finis le au même point que Nozhomi ;)

Voila voila :)
Oui
Ma Futsuu est décédée ? :(
Shyotamaze
Mod random parce que pourquoi pas ? (bon j'le fais en anglais parce que l'habitude)

General
  1. Add combo colours
Noz's Insane
  1. 00:15:742 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm not sure about this, we can misread it with singletaps/streams (perso je sais pas j'ai alterné sur ce passage) and it's kinda hard to have a good accuracy on it
  2. 00:23:599 (1) - You can do a better blanket imo
  3. Nice map
KIWI
  1. 00:06:633 (1,2) - Collides, try to move the first slider's end a bit to the right
  2. 00:18:598 (6) - Not sure about this slider shape, it kinda ruins the flow imo
  3. 00:26:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wow really unexpected you should really nerf them
Milady's EXTRA KIWI
  1. 00:01:276 (2,3,4) - idk if intended but it's not making a straight line
  2. 00:01:811 (5,6) - A bit unexpected and too much spaced imo nerf it a bit
  3. 00:06:811 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda hard to aim, maybe try to put more vertical space (ok j'me comprends) between those 00:06:811 (1,2) -
  4. 00:15:383 (1,2) - Really nice
  5. 00:19:669 (2) - Overlap with 00:18:954 (4) - 's head maybe
Mod pas très long mais je trouve la map pas mal du tout :)
Bonne chance !
Topic Starter
Thundur

Battquif wrote:

KIWI

  • 00:06:633 (1,2) - Même remarque que pour la diff de Nozhomi. "le "ton tonton" devrait être fait de circle, étant des "notes" nets et précises. Un stack suivi d'un aller-retour en 2* passerait bien je pense :)"C'est bien comme ça je trouve

    00:12:348 (3,4,5) - Fait un triangle, c'est plus propre. Donc 5 : 459|96 puis fait un truc de ce genre : http://puu.sh/mqUGV/e40c0d16f7.jpg Tu peux déplacer 7 vers le bas (voire faire un triangle, mais après on va croire que je vis triangle). Cette enchainement* sera meilleur ;)done

    00:13:598 (2,4) - Blanket ? Ne bouge pas le slider (enfin, tu devras surment le déformer), ne bouge que le circle, ça rend bien ;) puis bouge 00:13:776 (3) - dans le flow de 4 du style 266|196 done

    00:16:812 (2,3) - Si tu jump juste avant, faut jump ici aussi. En plus le flow est pas terrible terrible :D. De plus, tu rentre dans le kiai et tu viens de jump, bah continue encore dans les jumps xD Add quelque patern sympa plutôt ;) le jump je l'ajouterais ci quelqu'un d'autre le fait remarquer et flow refait

    00:19:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - Une étoile propre s'il te plaît ;D Peut-être plus space et placée vers le bas, le slider le visant :Ddone

    Les éspacements entre 00:21:098 (4,6,8) - et 00:20:919 (3,5,7) - ne sont pas les mêmes o.o tu devrais préférer vers des copié-collé -> rotation à la airman ;) Je suis pas super fan de ce genre de patern vu la musique mais bon :D done

    00:23:596 (1) - Un simple CTRL+H de 00:22:884 (5) - rendra plus propre je pense :) Et NC sur le 5 ;) done

    00:24:312 (3) - Essaye de le centré sur l'axe x (donc x=256 et y bouge). Vu que tu fais du CTRL+H après, ça rendra mieux ;) done

    00:26:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Même remarque que pour 00:21:098 (4,6,8) et 00:20:919 (3,5,7). done + pattern nerfé



    00:28:688 (1) - Finis le au même point que Nozhomi ;)bah en fait c'est unrankable si je fais pas comme ça, vu que ça fait moins de 30 secondes :/ j'hésite vraiment à changer, je le ferai si c'est mentionné dans un autre mod.
Voila voila :)denkyuuuu

Shyotamaze wrote:

Mod random parce que pourquoi pas ? (bon j'le fais en anglais parce que l'habitude)

General
  1. Add combo colours done
KIWI
  1. 00:06:633 (1,2) - Collides, try to move the first slider's end a bit to the rightdone
  2. 00:18:598 (6) - Not sure about this slider shape, it kinda ruins the flow imodone
  3. 00:26:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wow really unexpected you should really nerf themdone


Mod pas très long mais je trouve la map pas mal du tout :)
Bonne chance ![Thank you for the mod !
Nozhomi

Battquif wrote:

Noz's Insane

  • 00:02:527 (2,3,1) - Je vois plus 3 copié-collé de 2, ça fait plus "propre" je trouve. Après, même si c'est pas trop dans l'esprit de la map, peut-être que 2 circles en plus en 3 et 1 rendrait bien :) Dans ce style : http://puu.sh/mqT6j/61847620a4.jpg Avec le circle 5 blanket à 1 :) - Je préfère ma symétrie~

    00:06:456 (6,1,2,3) - 1 est trop proche de 6, ça change de voix, un jump à bien plus sa place qu'un anti-jump :) De plus le "ton tonton" devrait être fait de circle, étant des "notes" nets et précises. Un stack suivi d'un aller-retour en 2* passerait bien je pense :) - Changé le pattern.

    00:08:956 (4) - CTRL+H de 00:07:885 (6) - puis 00:09:134 (5) - centré sur l'axe x (donc x=256 et y bouge) ? :) quite à faire de la symmetry :D - Changé un poil aussi.

    00:21:099 (3,5,6) - L'ordre 6 -> 4 -> 5 -> 3 -> 7 passe mieux je trouve, après c'est que mon avis après avoir testé xD Je saurai pas te dire pourquoi :D - J'aime mon triangle flow ici. Ca marche bien.

Shyotamaze wrote:

Noz's Insane
  1. 00:15:742 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm not sure about this, we can misread it with singletaps/streams (perso je sais pas j'ai alterné sur ce passage) and it's kinda hard to have a good accuracy on it - Rip circles, changé pour 2 sliders ;w;
  2. 00:23:599 (1) - You can do a better blanket imo - Tenté d'improve un peu.
  3. Nice map

Thunderfire wrote:

>30 secs rip
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Sinon thx ayayayayayayaya

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Ameyy
Hey Shyo', flemme de rep en anglais tu m'excuseras.

Milady's EXTRA KIWI
  1. 00:01:276 (2,3,4) - idk if intended but it's not making a straight line oups, j'avais pas vu merci.
  2. 00:01:811 (5,6) - A bit unexpected and too much spaced imo nerf it a bit Ouais j'ai changé carrément toute la série de jump, car c'était chaud quand même.
  3. 00:06:811 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda hard to aim, maybe try to put more vertical space (ok j'me comprends) between those 00:06:811 (1,2) - J'ai pas compris mais j'ai aussi un peu changé ici, tout à peu près. J'avais déjà idée de le faire.
  4. 00:15:383 (1,2) - Really nice Merci bb
  5. 00:19:669 (2) - Overlap with 00:18:954 (4) - 's head maybe Non, c'est bien comme ça. J'ai juste changé la fin du jump car j'en avais déjà l'idée.

Merci pour le mod, la bise.

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Ovoui
euh faut toujours que je finisse ma hard non ?
Topic Starter
Thundur

Ovoui wrote:

euh faut toujours que je finisse ma hard non ?
oui baka
azer467
cherche des mods tacos
Ovoui
ok 2minutes


edit
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Aldwych
MESSI C POSSIBL AVEC LA KART KIWI
L'ONI DE MOINS DE 3*
ET CEUX QUI L'ACCOMPAGNE JUSKA 4 PERSONNES
PAYENT TOUS MOITEE PRIX

Abanon y'a pas d'oni kekekekekekek
Surono
Hi, Taiko mod reqs here
editd since idk what matter wet.,

>Gezo's Inner Oni
* 00:04:134 (14,15) - ctrl g? I think more emphasize with vocal
* 00:06:814 (26,27,28) - change to kkk or dkk? for vocal emphasize
* 00:10:032 - don for down voice?
* 00:19:772 - change to don? is smooth voice
* 00:26:205 - delete it for clearly to hear de kiwi lyrics?
* 00:26:741 - and put a don here for voice flow?

>Aze's Muzukashii
* 00:02:705 - 00:15:125 - 00:17:717 - 00:19:861 - 00:21:291 - 00:25:222 - delete them? I think is harsh and unnecessarry for muzu, for rest point too
*00:04:313 - kat? for emphasize vocal, and next is looks have dkd so have mirror variation

GLuck!
azer467

Surono wrote:

>Aze's Muzukashii
* 00:02:705 - 00:15:125 - 00:17:717 - 00:19:861 - 00:21:291 - 00:25:222 - delete them? I think is harsh and unnecessarry for muzu, for rest point too
only deleted 00:15:125 , 00:19:861 , 00:21:291 and 00:25:222
*00:04:313 - kat? for emphasize vocal, and next is looks have dkd so have mirror variation it's not a bad solution, i actually did a kdk pattern followed by kdd, so the player could imagine than the next one would be kkd for example
thanks for modding :D
Yuzeyun

Surono wrote:

Hi, Taiko mod reqs here
editd since idk what matter wet.,

>Gezo's Inner Oni
* 00:04:134 (14,15) - ctrl g? I think more emphasize with vocal ok, changed 17 as well cuz
* 00:06:814 (26,27,28) - change to kkk or dkk? for vocal emphasize arranged as ddd (kkd d d)
* 00:10:032 - don for down voice? y
* 00:19:772 - change to don? is smooth voice i've deleted, it's better
* 00:26:205 - delete it for clearly to hear de kiwi lyrics? yes
* 00:26:741 - and put a don here for voice flow? nha i prefer having deleted the note at 00:26:473 -
https://www.dropbox.com/s/z4syshw10ebux ... D.osu?dl=0

@azer: tu peux largement monter le HP à 9 sans problèmes
Topic Starter
Thundur

Surono wrote:

Hi, Taiko mod reqs here
editd since idk what matter wet.,

>Gezo's Inner Oni
* 00:04:134 (14,15) - ctrl g? I think more emphasize with vocal
* 00:06:814 (26,27,28) - change to kkk or dkk? for vocal emphasize
* 00:10:032 - don for down voice?
* 00:19:772 - change to don? is smooth voice
* 00:26:205 - delete it for clearly to hear de kiwi lyrics?
* 00:26:741 - and put a don here for voice flow?

>Aze's Muzukashii
* 00:02:705 - 00:15:125 - 00:17:717 - 00:19:861 - 00:21:291 - 00:25:222 - delete them? I think is harsh and unnecessarry for muzu, for rest point too
*00:04:313 - kat? for emphasize vocal, and next is looks have dkd so have mirror variation

GLuck!
Thanks for the mod :v
Incise
From my queue

Milady's EXTRA KIWI
00:08:954 (5,6) - Where's the NC, if other sliders were also vocally emphasized?

00:21:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section of jump. is staying inconsistent from the whole map's other jumps

Overall thoughts of lady's kiwi, It's seems really linear, also sliders when spread, are almost reaching out of the across screen, 00:13:954 (4,5,6) - Just look at that spread

KIWI
00:03:239 (4,1) - In this gap , I feel your not emphasizing any beat, try adding/fill this gap
00:14:667 (6,1) - Why is there nothing here?

Really overall, those two maps aren't that bad, Nice Song btw heh, Anyway, I hope my mod slightly helps, Im still kinda getting used to the whole deal, GL on rank o/
Topic Starter
Thundur

HaloMaster96 wrote:

From my queue

KIWI :
00:03:239 (4,1) - In this gap , I feel your not emphasizing any beat, try adding/fill this gap done
00:14:667 (6,1) - Why is there nothing here? filled

Really overall, those two maps aren't that bad, Nice Song btw heh, Anyway, I hope my mod slightly helps, Im still kinda getting used to the whole deal, GL on rank o/
Thank you !
Ameyy

HaloMaster96 wrote:

From my queue

Milady's EXTRA KIWI
00:08:954 (5,6) - Where's the NC, if other sliders were also vocally emphasized? leave my sliders alone </3

00:21:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section of jump. is staying inconsistent from the whole map's other jumps changed!

Overall thoughts of lady's kiwi, It's seems really linear, also sliders when spread, are almost reaching out of the across screen, 00:13:954 (4,5,6) - Just look at that spread ikr, I changed it a little bit

Btw, thanks !♥


kiwi, le retour II
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Nozhomi
Pyon~ lazy de faire la mise en forme.

General :
  1. Check l'AiMod, y a des tas de conflits à fix ^^'
  2. 00:16:738 - / 00:16:738 - Kiai time pas snap.
  3. Le preview point n'est pas snap non plus.
  4. Je ne pense pas qu'utiliser le stack leniency à 4 soit très utile :/
  5. Conflit (de canard) de combo color entre les diffs (ce qui n'est pas voulu je pense).
  6. Disable le Countdown et le Widescreen Support pour toutes les diffs thx.
  7. Pourquoi toutes les diffs ne finissent pas au même endroit ? C'est débile lol.
Easy :
  1. 00:15:382 (2,4) - Il est (pas) bo l'overlap change ça pls.
  2. 00:16:454 (4,1) - J'éviterais ça aussi, le but est que la diff soit super simple à lire, donc les overlaps du genre c'est à éviter absolument.
  3. 00:18:240 (3,1) - Same
  4. 00:20:025 (2,4) - Same
Collab de l'amour Normal :
  1. Recheck le spacing c'est le bordel (genre 00:07:882 (3,4,1) - ou 00:11:097 (2,1) - ).
  2. 00:00:382 (2,1) - GG le flow, et aussi ce genre de slider c'est pas top pour une Normal, vu que c'est encore sensé être "facile".
  3. 00:05:025 (2,4,3) - Alors pourquoi c'est nul ? Et bien c'est simple mon petit. Tu démarre un reverse alors que la précédente section de voix n'est pas fini, du coup ça démarre un rythme pas cohérent avec ce qu'on entend, et ça ruin tout. Exemple de ce qui pourrait être mieux : http://puu.sh/o73MZ/51c59ecd22.jpg / http://puu.sh/o73Or/8d74f3505f.jpg / http://puu.sh/o73PB/066b2d2851.jpg.
  4. 00:16:454 - Allo les hitsounds ? ALLOOOOO ?
  5. 00:19:668 (1) - Deux 1/2 sliders font tellement plus le café ici :c
  6. 00:20:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - C'est SUPER intense pour un Normal player ça, l'object density est pété, je nerferais le pattern si j'étais toi :/
  7. 00:22:525 (8) - Ici aussi deux 1/1 sliders ça colle 100x mieux à la musique.
  8. 00:26:097 (6,1) - Niveau transition c'est illisible, les gens vont être surpris par 00:26:811 (2,3,4) - vu que c'est plus dans l'axe de 00:26:097 (6) - pour les jouer.
Saucisse Hard :
  1. 00:15:740 (2) - Dsl c'est du 1/3 hue.
  2. 00:21:811 (3,4,5,6,1) - Les jumps sont un poil trop violent à mon gout, surtout quand on voit que 00:22:347 (6,1) - est plus petit que 00:21:990 (4,5) - alors qu'il est plus intense.
  3. 00:25:025 (5) - Finir sur un blue tic est pas nécessaire ici.
Noz Insane :
  1. Wow shitdiff remap plz thx :c
KIWI :
  1. AiMod : La fin de cet objet n'est pas aligné sur le tempo x 9999 = fix plsssss.
  2. 00:02:881 (3,4) - Le mouvement crée par le décalage de 00:03:239 (4) - rend le pattern biazrre à jouer parce que tu veux taper la fin du slider en premier imo. Peut-être essaye de le centrer plus par rapport à 00:02:881 (3) - .
  3. 00:05:917 (1,2,1,2) - GG t'as foiré ton truc, tout simplement parce que c'est pas snap sur les voix, et donc rend les sliders super weird et incompréhensibles. Essaye genre ça http://puu.sh/o74vH/96b70f3b12.jpg tu verra c'est mieux ^^
  4. 00:06:631 (1,2) - C'est très pas bo, franchement tu peux trouver mieux comme pattern :c
  5. 00:08:060 (1,2,3,4) - Pourquoi des jumps d'un coup ? T'en a genre jamais fait avant pour cette section (00:06:631 (1,2,1) - / 00:03:774 (1,2,3,4,1) - ) alors pourquoi ????
  6. 00:23:595 (2) - Ce NC il est très le random. Enlève le.
  7. 00:28:619 (1) - Le clap la dessus c'est non, c'est trop fort pour la fin. Remove le.
Milady veut son mutual.jpg Extra Kiwi :
  1. 00:05:740 (3,4) - Lel un jump alors que y a genre 0 pression sur ce tempo là c'est genre ridicule. Aussi j'aimerais souligné le problème dans cette section de ta diff, c'est que c'est toujours le même rythme et globalement la même intensité dans la musique, alors pourquoi tu me fait des jumps pété pour 00:05:740 (3,4) - / 00:07:168 (3,4) - et ensuite du spacing constant pour 00:03:954 (1,2,3,4) - / 00:08:240 (1,2,3,4) - ??? C'est la même chose partout ! Perso je serait pour un spacing constant sur ces passages là mais tu vois comment fix les choses si ne veut pas. En tout cas dans l'instant présent ça n'a pas de sens.
  2. 00:15:383 (1) - Très beau, mais je trouve dommage de passer sous silence ce beat 00:15:740 - avec la voix qui est super important :c
  3. 00:16:276 (2) - Surtout quand il n'y a rien a cliquer ici, ça c'est du pur overmap pour justifier le pattern.
  4. 00:18:954 (4) - Tu map la voix ça se sent, mais alors pourquoi faire sauter 00:19:133 - celui-là alors ?
  5. 00:26:901 (2) - Eeeeeeeeeet nop dommage. La voix maintenu comme ça ne permet pas d'en faire un triplet désolé. Remove moi ce circle, totallement de l'overmap again.
Je ne sais pas taco :c
Mukyu~
Naxess
From Queue

Never seen a 30 second map before lol

Batt's Easy
SPOILER
  1. 00:08:239 (3) - Refrain from doing stacks in easy difficulties. All notes should be visible from the moment they appear until they are clicked.
  2. 00:16:811 (1,3) - Avoid overlaps in easy difficulties. It obstructs vision of another object and it doesn't look very good.
    00:20:025 (2,4) - ^

Collab Normal
SPOILER
  1. 00:00:382 (2) - Having a slider's end and beginning touching doesn't look very good in my opinion.
  2. 00:15:025 - Consider mapping this as well. There's no need for pauses in 30 second maps xD
  3. 00:27:883 (5,6,7) - Spread these out more. They're stacking very badly imo.
  4. Overall, consider tweaking the map's difficulty settings (the AR seems to be too low, for example), and increase distance spacing a bit.

General
SPOILER
  1. I think all of the maps should use the same combo colors as the KIWI difficulty uses. Some of them are just using default colors at the moment.
Topic Starter
Thundur

Nozhomi wrote:

Pyon~ lazy de faire la mise en forme.

General :
  1. Check l'AiMod, y a des tas de conflits à fix ^^'
  2. 00:16:738 - / 00:16:738 - Kiai time pas snap.
  3. Le preview point n'est pas snap non plus.
  4. Je ne pense pas qu'utiliser le stack leniency à 4 soit très utile :/
  5. Conflit (de canard) de combo color entre les diffs (ce qui n'est pas voulu je pense).
  6. Disable le Countdown et le Widescreen Support pour toutes les diffs thx.
  7. Pourquoi toutes les diffs ne finissent pas au même endroit ? C'est débile lol.
tout fait

Collab de l'amour Normal :
  1. Recheck le spacing c'est le bordel (genre 00:07:882 (3,4,1) - ou 00:11:097 (2,1) - ).
  2. 00:00:382 (2,1) - GG le flow, et aussi ce genre de slider c'est pas top pour une Normal, vu que c'est encore sensé être "facile".
  3. 00:05:025 (2,4,3) - Alors pourquoi c'est nul ? Et bien c'est simple mon petit. Tu démarre un reverse alors que la précédente section de voix n'est pas fini, du coup ça démarre un rythme pas cohérent avec ce qu'on entend, et ça ruin tout. Exemple de ce qui pourrait être mieux : http://puu.sh/o73MZ/51c59ecd22.jpg / http://puu.sh/o73Or/8d74f3505f.jpg / http://puu.sh/o73PB/066b2d2851.jpg.
tout fait

Noz Insane :
  1. Wow shitdiff remap plz thx :c
agreed

KIWI :
  1. AiMod : La fin de cet objet n'est pas aligné sur le tempo x 9999 = fix plsssss.
  2. 00:02:881 (3,4) - Le mouvement crée par le décalage de 00:03:239 (4) - rend le pattern biazrre à jouer parce que tu veux taper la fin du slider en premier imo. Peut-être essaye de le centrer plus par rapport à 00:02:881 (3) - .
  3. 00:05:917 (1,2,1,2) - GG t'as foiré ton truc, tout simplement parce que c'est pas snap sur les voix, et donc rend les sliders super weird et incompréhensibles. Essaye genre ça http://puu.sh/o74vH/96b70f3b12.jpg tu verra c'est mieux ^^
  4. 00:06:631 (1,2) - C'est très pas bo, franchement tu peux trouver mieux comme pattern :c
  5. 00:08:060 (1,2,3,4) - Pourquoi des jumps d'un coup ? T'en a genre jamais fait avant pour cette section (00:06:631 (1,2,1) - / 00:03:774 (1,2,3,4,1) - ) alors pourquoi ????
  6. 00:23:595 (2) - Ce NC il est très le random. Enlève le.
  7. 00:28:619 (1) - Le clap la dessus c'est non, c'est trop fort pour la fin. Remove le.
tout fait

Je ne sais pas taco :c t'es nul
Mukyu~
thx et mutual moi fdp

Naxess wrote:

From Queue

Never seen a 30 second map before lol

Collab Normal
SPOILER
  1. 00:00:382 (2) - Having a slider's end and beginning touching doesn't look very good in my opinion. changed
  2. 00:15:025 - Consider mapping this as well. There's no need for pauses in 30 second maps xDchanged

General
SPOILER
  1. I think all of the maps should use the same combo colors as the KIWI difficulty uses. Some of them are just using default colors at the moment.changed
Thank you !
TylorTheDJ
Normal diff mods:
00:11:908 make this slider end here. keep the starting time
00:12:177 add a circle
00:12:355 add a circle
00:12:713 add a circle
00:13:070 add a circle
00:13:249 delete circle
00:28:707 make the spinner start here
00:29:511 make the spinner end here
Ameyy

Nozhomi wrote:

Milady veut son mutual.jpg Extra Kiwi :
  1. 00:05:740 (3,4) - Lel un jump alors que y a genre 0 pression sur ce tempo là c'est genre ridicule. Aussi j'aimerais souligné le problème dans cette section de ta diff, c'est que c'est toujours le même rythme et globalement la même intensité dans la musique, alors pourquoi tu me fait des jumps pété pour 00:05:740 (3,4) - / 00:07:168 (3,4) - et ensuite du spacing constant pour 00:03:954 (1,2,3,4) - / 00:08:240 (1,2,3,4) - ??? C'est la même chose partout ! Perso je seraiS pour un spacing constant sur ces passages là mais tu vois comment fix les choses si ne veut pas. En tout cas dans l'instant présent ça n'a pas de sens. Please, me tape pas, j'ai changé
  2. 00:15:383 (1) - Très beau, mais je trouve dommage de passer sous silence ce beat 00:15:740 - avec la voix qui est super important :c Oui, mais je préfère le laisser là même si la voix est "importante". Je trouve que ça fait une pause, avant de commencer le kiai time et c'est super à jouer
  3. 00:16:276 (2) - Surtout quand il n'y a rien a cliquer ici, ça c'est du pur overmap pour justifier le pattern. Peut-être, au début je l'avais mit pour faire un beau point d'interrogation. Donc idk, j'pense que j'vais laisser même si c'est de l' "overmap"
  4. 00:18:954 (4) - Tu map la voix ça se sent, mais alors pourquoi faire sauter 00:19:133 - celui-là alors ? fixed
  5. 00:26:901 (2) - Eeeeeeeeeet nop dommage. La voix maintenu comme ça ne permet pas d'en faire un triplet désolé. Remove moi ce circle, totallement de l'overmap again. oui chef
Je ne sais pas taco :c
Mukyu~
Un mod riche en émotions. Merci à toi Nozhomi même si t'es rude

Penser à changer le nom de la diff en Ameyy's EXTRA KIWI
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Ovoui

Nozhomi wrote:

Saucisse Hard :
  1. 00:15:740 (2) - Dsl c'est du 1/3 hue. en effet
  2. 00:21:811 (3,4,5,6,1) - Les jumps sont un poil trop violent à mon gout, surtout quand on voit que 00:22:347 (6,1) - est plus petit que 00:21:990 (4,5) - alors qu'il est plus intense. Vu ton insane, je pense c'est bien d'avoir au moins un pattern jump imo. sinon les deux jump que tu as cité sont de la même taille, 0.05 de spacing c'est négligeable a cette sv.
  3. 00:25:025 (5) - Finir sur un blue tic est pas nécessaire ici.Pas nécessaire, mais possible :v
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Battquif
Hi~~ :)

Nozhomi wrote:

Easy :
  1. 00:15:382 (2,4) - Il est (pas) bo l'overlap change ça pls. J'ai fais ce que j'ai pu, la restriction du 1.0* rend très difficile le mapping sans aucun overlap pas beau xD
  2. 00:16:454 (4,1) - J'éviterais ça aussi, le but est que la diff soit super simple à lire, donc les overlaps du genre c'est à éviter absolument. Ya pas d'overlap ici ?_? xD
  3. 00:18:240 (3,1) - Same J'pense que c'est pas dur à lire ça, le slider a disparu in-game quand l'autre apparaît :)
  4. 00:20:025 (2,4) - Same ^

Naxess wrote:

Batt's Easy
  1. 00:08:239 (3) - Refrain from doing stacks in easy difficulties. All notes should be visible from the moment they appear until they are clicked. I think it's better now
  2. 00:16:811 (1,3) - Avoid overlaps in easy difficulties. It obstructs vision of another object and it doesn't look very good. Same :)
    00:20:025 (2,4) - ^
Thank you !

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