Kalypso wrote:

Okai~ Modding

Well nothing wrong except the clap kinda kills the mood I was in when listening to the song XD

star

Astom wrote:

Hi~
[Skin]
-Cut unnecesary transparency in hit0.png,hit50.png, hit100.png, ... , hit300g.png Okay
-Resize scorebar-bg.png to 1x1 pixels. Done

[SB]
-Nice

<3 Star~

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Mod~ Just like you asked for.....BUT! Before we start...../me rips of EvianBubble's face.
:3

Uhhh.....Well.....Can't find much x3

STAR!

Disoy wrote:

[Calm]
first [calm] it's bit hard for a [Easy].. Really? I don't think so O_o

00:31:310 (3) - remove this circle No, I think this fits really well
01:07:309 (2) - ^ I really think this helps with the flow
01:58:660 (3) - ^ Sorry, no D:
02:11:620 (5) - change this note from 02:11:620 to 02:11:380? That feels kind of ... random to me O_O

[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - add a hitclap? Ah sorry, don't know why I had a clap at the beginning ... my mistake T_T So no, this first section is clap free
00:38:233 (3) - remove this circle Uhrm ... no

[Cool]
00:59:694 (3) - add a hitwhistle at the begin? Okay
02:23:860 (1) - add a hitfinish at the begin? I think whistle sounds better here
02:44:580 (6) - add a hitclap at the begin? These I think no clap is OK
02:46:500 (12) - ^
03:09:540 (7) - add a hitcalp?

good job^ ^

Soaprman wrote:

Nice relaxing maps here. The storyboard is a nice touch.

I'd give you suggestions, but I don't have any! Oh well~

darck360 wrote:

Hello~

General : Add 1 More Slider Tick Rate to All Difficulties (2) I like tick rate 1 :S

[Calm]
Nice.

[Chill]
01:08:463 : This Slider It Sounds Very Good, Move it to the white line This slider already starts on the white line O_o

[Cool]
00:23:002 : I do not like anything these circles, You can not get the streams and make simple circles? I'm sorry but I don't quite understand what you mean - they are consisted of circles
00:34:079 : ^
01:42:617 : Attempts to fix a little more this slider Okay I hope it looks better now
02:43:380 : Following on from this time begin to abuse the streams, try to fix it I actually did that on purpose but will reconsider this

The map is pretty good, and SB also. My general recommendation would be to try to fix plus some sliders.

Good luck (Star)

Sallad4ever wrote:

dang you map another DJ Okawari map and it's Minamo
Shoot!! I hope I notice this sooner, I want to make a diff Sorry? D:

Maybe I'll mod this
* take a quick look*
it seems the circle behind the cursor is bigger than the cursor overlay
here's the pic
[attachment=0:a6ef9]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:a6ef9]please fix it

I'll do a complete mod later
Here take my star for now~

IceBeam wrote:

[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - How about moving this note to 00:27:156 and add addtional to 00:27:386? Oh I like this ... but I like the way it is too ... I will think about this one >_<
00:33:617 (2) - Finish this slider at 00:34:079? Hmm no I think it flows better longer
01:08:463 (5) - Repeat placed wrong.It should be at 01:09:386. Done on purpose, but since many people pointed it out I shortened the slider
01:41:694 (5) - New combo. I think this is OK but if other people say I will chage it

Others seems fine to me,great job~

Have you made this SB by yourself? Yep I did, my first time trying ^_^
This music made me sad Oh ... sorry about that D: *hugs*
*sigh*
Star of course~

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[storyboard]: 02:43:140 -02:58:500, the background pulses way too much here :( I like this

[cool]
01:26:348 (4) - spacing...

jks, i know how you hate that, move it up to align with 3 and 5, the distancing is too big and looks like 1/2's, not 1/4's Not completely aligned because I don't particularly like that straight line look, but it should be closer now (moved up a bit)
01:28:194 (9,10) - move these closer together, then closer to 8 OK fixed, turned off grid snap for this
02:49:620 (7) - new combo No :S

[chill]

ok

[calm]

ok

good job, though a bit slow for my liking :/

Sekuyi wrote:

Wow, what a relaxing song

[Chill]
- 01:08:463 ~ (5) I was almost asleep and this note kicked me out of my bed -.-' I recommend to make it repeat from the red tick (01:09:156). Sounds much better in my opinion I want the (6) to be a separate note so I shortened the slider (5)

The rest is perfectly fine!

Have your star->+s*

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

1. Is "hitcircleoverlay.png" just an empty file? Just asking because all I get to see is a transparent pixel.
2. You should make a little resize to your wallpaper so it's 1024x768 (+2 pixels).
3. Make "hit0.png" smaller, something like "hit50.png"
4. Crop transparent pixels: "blue.png", "yellow.png", "red.png", "green.png", "colorpulse.png"

1. 01:43:540 (5) - New Combo.
2. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo.
3. I guess this is easy right?. This difficulty is too hard for beginners imo (I know it's below 3 stars but it plays harder), consider mapping a new one and call it "Quiet" or something, Make sure that it's easy enough for somebody who just started playing the game.
4. I'll point out some of the streams that seem too hard if you decide that you won't create a new difficulty.
5. 01:06:156 (5,6,1,2,3) - Delete (6) and (2) and it'll be fine. ( I guess ).
6. 02:23:140 (3,1,2,3) - Change (1) for a circle, place it on the same spot and do the same with (3) (Change it for a circle placed on the same spot)
7. 00:40:309 (5,6,1) - Delete (6) and make sure spacing is ok between (5) and (1)
8. 02:54:180 (6,7,1) - Delete (7) and it'll be fine.
9. I strongly suggest you to create that new difficulty so beginners can enjoy this really cool map. Most of the notes should be at least 1 beat apart from each other, also use a bigger circle size.

1. 00:26:925 (3) - This is doesn't match the music, the piano ends 1/2 before, delete it?
2. 00:30:617 (2) - ^
3. 01:41:463 (X) - Add a circle here.
4. 01:41:694 (5) - Move this to: "01:41:925" and use New Combo.
5. 03:15:780 (6) - New Combo?

1. 00:23:002 (2,3,4) - These notes doesn't sound good for this intro (slow part), I suggest you to delete (3).
2. 00:26:694 (2) - Make the slider 1/2 (Red ticks only) for the same reason as above.
3. 00:34:079 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) same thing as above.
4. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo?

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

Hi Hi EvianBubble ~
Sorry If It A Bit Late ~ Don't worry about it

Here Is My Mod : ( Ignore If It Doesn't Seem Fit For You )

SPOILER

Calm
00:23:233 (2) - Add Whistle ? I'm doing whistles only on the tall white ticks for this first section
00:25:310 (4) - ^ ?
00:28:771 (5) - ^ ?
00:49:771 (3) - ^ ? Okay
00:51:617 (6) - ^ ?
00:52:771 (1) - Change With Whistle ? No I want clap here
01:29:463 (2) - ^ ?
Okay It's Fine Though

Chill
00:23:233 (3) - Add Whistle ? Yea want it only on tall white ticks, sorry
00:26:925 (3) - ^ ?
Okay It's Fine Though

Hard
00:29:233 (6) - Add Whistle ? Same here
Okay It's Fine Though

Nice Calming Piano !
Nice HitSound, Nice SB !
Good :3 Star ~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~ Requested mod and I'm here :3

General;
- Everything fine here ~

Skin;
- Could you make hit100 and hit100k a bit different ?? Also make hit300, hit300g and hit300k different from each other too ~ (Not really that important but ~) OK, will do that later
- Hit0 is too big, well for me it is Sorry, will resize
- Copy this below the last combo color (open diffs with notepad) Done

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

So that borders will be black, that'd look better
- Add sliderpoints ?? :3 Must have forgotten about this >_< OK

SB;
- Looks really good :3 ;)

Calm;
- 00:26:463 >> Could you curve this better ?? Well I tried to, at least XD
- 01:39:386 >> Align this with (4) No, misaligned on purpose
- 01:47:860 >> Align with (3) This too
- 01:57:220 >> Curve it like this ?? Changed it to look more like that but not exactly
[attachment=0:17e14]image.png[/attachment:17e14]

Chill;
- 00:59:002 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note Meh I think this is fine
- 01:38:925 (6,7) >> Place (6) between (3,4) and align (7) with (5) Purposely not aligned
- 02:00:100 (6,7) >> Either align (7) with (6) or (6) with (7) This too

Cool;
- 03:15:780 >> New combo ?? It feels like one phrase to me

* Really good mapset ~ Star :3 !!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Again

[General]
Slider tick rate 2 sound much better Sorry, but I think 2 is too much D:
No kiai? I know I'm sad too, but I honestly can't find the right place for it >_<
use the slider border code from lovhin, it fit your hit circle :3 Done

[Skin]
There almost no different between 300, 300g, and 300k score burst. The same also happens for 100 and 100k
I suggest you to change the color of the number and make it different from each score burst, you don't have to make it bigger to make it different as bigger score burst is annoying xD
I'm going to be blunt on the scorebar, it's too plain without any score-bar bg Will fix everything ... later

[Calm]
Normal?
00:23:233 (2) - remove this or shorten 00:22:310 (1) by 1/2 beat than add note add 00:23:002 Was going to do this originally but I didn't like how the gap between this and (3) was lengthened, so this is staying
00:55:079 (5) - clap is kinda don't fit here, remove it I might try to find another clap but ... I'm lazy orz
02:02:740 (3) - remove the whistle from the slider slide Okay
02:21:220 (2) - shorten this by 1/1 beat then add a circle on where the slider end was While I do agree it flows about the same I like the feel of the slider better
02:46:980 (1) - remove the whistle from the slider slide Done
03:13:860 (1) - add a timing section that decrease the volume from here, 40% volume is good I made it 50%

[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35% Okay, done
02:43:620 - umm why is this timing section on the middle of slider? So the clap at the end of the slider is the same volume as the rest of the section
03:15:780 - decrease the volume by 1 tick Sure thing

[Cool]
Normal+?
01:08:463 (5) - actually it's better if you lengthen this bye 1/1 beat, then remove 01:10:310 (6) even more better with slider ticki rate 2 (6) is going to be its own circle D<
02:13:540 (2) - remove the whistle slider slide All righty then
02:27:700 (1) - same as 01:08:463 (5) I think (2) feels better as its own circle here

[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35% Done
03:13:620 - decrease the volume by 1 tick Okay

[Chill]
This is hard :3
00:40:656 (7) - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35% Yup
01:02:925 (1,2) - imo it'll flow better if you put 2 on 01:02:925 and 1 on 01:03:848 I think it's better as is
01:06:156 (7,8,9,10) - ok this stream doesn't fit the song and it's kinda random. I strongly suggest you to remove 'em I like this stream T_T If other people don't like this then I will change it I guess
01:41:694 (1) - change the start to finish Sorry don't like that, it feels kind of heavy to me

[timing section]
03:13:740 - decrease the volume by 1 tick Done
03:15:780 - ^ Leaving this one to keep it consistent with the other difficulties

Good map, good SB, and superb song
Overall this is a good map
what worried me is how Calm and Cool are similar

+pink star cause it's DJ Okawari
you don't have to kudosu this cause I've already got one before :3 Ah are you sure? Okay ... :S
please PM me if you want to map another DJ Okawari song

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey o/ Sorry I've been really busy.
General:

1. Is "hitcircleoverlay.png" just an empty file? Just asking because all I get to see is a transparent pixel. Yep it is
2. You should make a little resize to your wallpaper so it's 1024x768 (+2 pixels). O_o Uh, okay?
3. Make "hit0.png" smaller, something like "hit50.png"
4. Crop transparent pixels: "blue.png", "yellow.png", "red.png", "green.png", "colorpulse.png" Skin fixes will be coming ... later XD

Calm:

1. 01:43:540 (5) - New Combo. This is fine
2. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo. :S Well ... maybe
3. I guess this is easy right?. This difficulty is too hard for beginners imo (I know it's below 3 stars but it plays harder), consider mapping a new one and call it "Quiet" or something, Make sure that it's easy enough for somebody who just started playing the game. D: Uh ... might or might not do this if I find time
4. I'll point out some of the streams that seem too hard if you decide that you won't create a new difficulty.
5. 01:06:156 (5,6,1,2,3) - Delete (6) and (2) and it'll be fine. ( I guess ). This plays so well though! Fine, I deleted (6) D<
6. 02:23:140 (3,1,2,3) - Change (1) for a circle, place it on the same spot and do the same with (3) (Change it for a circle placed on the same spot) I honestly think this one is fine, sorry, the flow just gets wrecked otherwise
7. 00:40:309 (5,6,1) - Delete (6) and make sure spacing is ok between (5) and (1) Fine D:
8. 02:54:180 (6,7,1) - Delete (7) and it'll be fine. I am leaving this
9. I strongly suggest you to create that new difficulty so beginners can enjoy this really cool map. Most of the notes should be at least 1 beat apart from each other, also use a bigger circle size. A lot of so - called "beginner" maps are just notes every beat that have like, nothing to do with anything. I guess maybe that's what they can do but they just seem boring to me >_< I refuse to fall into this trap and do so, but for the "good" of the people then I guess I'll ... think about it :S

Chill:

1. 00:26:925 (3) - This is doesn't match the music, the piano ends 1/2 before, delete it? It feels right here though, and I don't like pauses that are too long
2. 00:30:617 (2) - ^
3. 01:41:463 (X) - Add a circle here.
4. 01:41:694 (5) - Move this to: "01:41:925" and use New Combo. I like this idea here but it feels a bit off to me, sorry
5. 03:15:780 (6) - New Combo? This is fine :S

Cool:

1. 00:23:002 (2,3,4) - These notes doesn't sound good for this intro (slow part), I suggest you to delete (3). It's for the "snap" ish thing? Kind of hard to explain but it's there and I really wanted to accent it
2. 00:26:694 (2) - Make the slider 1/2 (Red ticks only) for the same reason as above.
3. 00:34:079 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) same thing as above.
4. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo?

That's all GREAT job, Star~

1. whitles in all diffs are a little loud and too often imo
2. remove 'instrumental' from tags

1. 00:55:079 (8) - whistle here
2. 00:57:156 (3) - cancel whistle
3. 01:31:425 (T) - 1 note here with whistle
4. 01:31:886 (10) - remove this
5. 01:37:079 (T) - 1 note here with clap
6. 01:40:771 (5) - cancel the clap or replace with a whistle
7. 02:58:260 (11,1,2) - spacing here seems very odd

1. 00:55:079 (5) - use whistle instead of clap

Colin Hou wrote:

Hi, this is my suggestions only:

[General]:

1. whitles in all diffs are a little loud and too often imo D: May change this if other people say so
2. remove 'instrumental' from tags OK done

[Cool]:

1. 00:55:079 (8) - whistle here Added
2. 00:57:156 (3) - cancel whistle I think whistle here sounds good
3. 01:31:425 (T) - 1 note here with whistle I think the triple is better where it is
4. 01:31:886 (10) - remove this
5. 01:37:079 (T) - 1 note here with clap Hmm ... maybe?
6. 01:40:771 (5) - cancel the clap or replace with a whistle OK
7. 02:58:260 (11,1,2) - spacing here seems very odd Turned grid snap off, hope it's better now

[Calm]:

1. 00:55:079 (5) - use whistle instead of clap No, I like clap here

other things look great, star!

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Hello~
-------------
Calm:
00:34:771 (3) - Just bring it a little bit closer to 2, and bring 4 ca bit closer to 3 Spacing is good here D:
00:44:463 (1) - Could you make it last to 00:45:386 and add a clap to the end? (Suggestion) Hmm OK, done Actually a couple more run throughs I think it plays better as is
00:45:617 (2) - If you do the one above, delete this? (Suggestion)
02:11:380 - Add a note here Done
---------------
Chill:
01:38:463 (5,6,7) - Could you bring these notes closer? All these and (1, 2) of next combo moved one grid closer together
---------------
Cool:
00:23:117 (3) - Delete this note No D< (lol)
01:29:925 (4) - Add a Finish here? Whistle sounds better to me
02:19:780 - New combo and remove the NC from the 02:20:020 (1) I think NC is better where it is but if someone else suggests it then I'll change it
----------------
I enjoyed the ambience of the song and the notes fit it perfectly, so have a star and my best wishes~

• 
  01:41:694----01:45:460 : I think BPM is a bit off here~
  I got :
  Offset: 01:41:694 BPM:128.00
  Offset: 01:43:569 BPM:127.00
  I’m not sure because I’m not a good timer~

• 
  00:55:079 (5): Remove Clap
  01:08:463 (5): Add whistle at the beginning
  01:26:925 (7): ^

• 
  02:58:980 (3,4,5,6,7,8): Distance

• Change wallpaper-2637.jpg and pause-overlay.png to size to 1024*768. Also delete thumbs.db
  
  hmm, though I don't care this, 192Kbps is new rule... it's all up to you.Or MAT/BAT ._.
  
  yea, I think impossiblexu's bpm is better, and you can try his.
  
  01:45:460 (T) - offset +5 sounds better for me

• 00:26:925 (3) - Remove this?
  00:50:233 (6) - Whistle at the end of slider?
  00:51:848 (1) - Whistle and remove the whistle at the end? (Reason: 00:53:694 (4))
  01:38:925 (6) - maybe use whistle instead?
  02:27:700 (1) - Whistle in the end, and 02:29:620 (2) - use clap instead
  02:58:500 (1,3) - I think you'd better stop using clap here due to the rhythm change and whistle pattern after these two.

• 00:44:002 (7,8) - Move 7's whistle to 8?
  01:05:233 (6) - start 01:05:002? (beats pattern like 01:02:925 (1,2))
  01:55:545 (9) - Whistle at beginning?
  02:53:700 (9) - add a note here with clap?
  03:00:420 (7) - 1 grid up
  03:03:780 (3) - try this pattern? : Clap instead of whistle 03:05:220 (7) remove clap and add clap 03:05:700 (8) 03:07:140 (2) whistle 03:07:620 (4) clap?

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]

• 
  01:41:694----01:45:460 : I think BPM is a bit off here~
  I got :
  Offset: 01:41:694 BPM:128.00
  Offset: 01:43:569 BPM:127.00
  I’m not sure because I’m not a good timer~ Well I'll use these, thanks ^_^

[Calm]

• 
  00:55:079 (5): Remove Clap OK, I used whistle instead
  01:08:463 (5): Add whistle at the beginning Done
  01:26:925 (7): ^ Well if you mean (4) ... done[color]

[Cool]

• 
  02:58:980 (3,4,5,6,7,8): Distance Fixed ... I hope? (P.S. read my sig XD)

Good map~

☆ STAR ☆

Selee wrote:

[General]

Nice skin

• Change wallpaper-2637.jpg and pause-overlay.png to size to 1024*768. Also delete thumbs.db OK ... kind of done. What's thumbs.db?
  
  hmm, though I don't care this, 192Kbps is new rule... it's all up to you.Or MAT/BAT ._. ... when did this happen ... -_-"
  
  yea, I think impossiblexu's bpm is better, and you can try his.
  
  01:45:460 (T) - offset +5 sounds better for me OK sure

[Calm]

Nice and relaxing!..normal?
kind difficult for beginner, but it's really nice made.

ahh, Chill is 1.6m points, and this is 1.2m points. Oh ... well, maybe I will mess with them a bit
Maybe it's better to reduce the difficulty setting ?
how about this? HP: 1 Circle size: 1 OD&AR: 3?

Fantastic!


[Chill]

I feel the hitsound is a little bit random..

• 00:26:925 (3) - Remove this? I think this fits in well actually :S
  00:50:233 (6) - Whistle at the end of slider? Added
  00:51:848 (1) - Whistle and remove the whistle at the end? (Reason: 00:53:694 (4)) I prefer the difference, actually
  01:38:925 (6) - maybe use whistle instead?No :S
  02:27:700 (1) - Whistle in the end, and 02:29:620 (2) - use clap instead I like the whistle on (2) D:
  02:58:500 (1,3) - I think you'd better stop using clap here due to the rhythm change and whistle pattern after these two. I'll think about it ...

[Cool]

• 00:44:002 (7,8) - Move 7's whistle to 8? Well in this section it's straight whistle on beat
  01:05:233 (6) - start 01:05:002? (beats pattern like 01:02:925 (1,2)) Again, it's just me, but I like the difference
  01:55:545 (9) - Whistle at beginning? I actually think there's a bit too much whistle here ... so I changed it
  02:53:700 (9) - add a note here with clap? Pause
  03:00:420 (7) - 1 grid up Fixed
  03:03:780 (3) - try this pattern? : Clap instead of whistle 03:05:220 (7) remove clap and add clap 03:05:700 (8) 03:07:140 (2) whistle 03:07:620 (4) clap? Tried it out but sorry, it feels kind of awkward to me :S

An undisputed star!

Also, the soft-clap is a little inharmonious for me since the music has piano theme.

you can try this... (It may work better than soft clap I suppose...If you use this, reconsider the hitsound.)

Famfrit wrote:

Amazing melody

Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9) Ehmm ... I don't really want to mess with this since I'm not too sure on what it does
- Too long entry, but that's ok
- Awesome skin (offtopic)

Timing:
BPM: 130
Offset: 22300 I think OTL I'm asking I've asked Zekira for this lol

Calm:
<Sound>
W - Whostle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
------
00:25:304 - W? First part is whistle only on tall white ticks
00:32:688 - W?
00:59:223 - R, 00:59:453 - W, 00:59:223 (1) - delete W, 00:59:915 - W+R Don't like this, sorry
01:01:069 - W+R I don't like clap here :S
01:10:304 - delete E, put W+R Finish is better D<
01:30:261 - W+R
01:56:745 - E? OK
I don't see errors. Pretty good :3

Chill:
01:37:309 (2,3,4) - make a straight triangle Turned off grid snap, should look better
<Sound>
00:48:386 - delete W I think it's good here
I don't see errors. Good

Cool:
<Sound>
00:23:002 - W I'm keeping first section like this :S
00:23:117 - delete W
00:46:194 - delete W No D:
00:50:233 - delete W Okay
01:00:963 - delete W No
01:26:463 - delete W OK
01:28:309 - delete W
01:29:463 - delete W, put E? No
01:37:425 - delete W
01:38:002 - E Added
01:49:545 - delete W No
01:50:145 - delete W
01:54:825 - delete W
01:59:385 - delete W Done
02:46:260 - delete W
02:47:340 - delete W No
02:48:180 - delete W OK
02:52:140 - delete W

Cool map. Star

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi~
i think i give you some suggestion only

Clam
01:48:345 - add note?
01:48:825 (6) - delete this note? Ooh I like this idea too ... I think I'm going to keep it though :S

Chill
lovely~

Cool
00:23:002 (2,3,4) - delete this note? and use this slider 00:22:310 (1) do a 1 tick back Ehm, no, this is for the snap thing in the background
00:34:079 (2,3,4) - ^ and use this slider 00:33:386 (1) - do a 1 tick back
00:50:233 (7) - the slider maybe start form 00:50:002 is better? Hmm ... I kind of like it the way it is but I'll think about this


nice map!! <3 it
and star~~~~~

shabao_pig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo'))> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Cool

maybe you can try some pattern.Everything's good here but it makes me a little sleepy >.>

00:34:079(2,3,4) arrange them linear? I don't really want linear patterns here ... :S
02:45:420(8) remove this note? I like these triples ... D:
02:47:340(2) ^

Chill

01:49:785 add a note or make some change to the slider? I don't think it's friendly in this diff that a slider starts at red line without some notes before it. I think adding the note there feels kidn of strange ... D:

others are fine

Calm

it's a diff for beginner so circle size +1? I like this circle size XD Maybe will change other settings though

others are fine


star

Example

• → 02:43:500 (3,4) - Switch Whistles. (Remove from 3 and add it to 4)
  → 02:45:420 (8,9) - Same as above.
  → 02:46:260 (10,11,12) - Add Whistles to 10, then either remove 11 or remove it's whistle.

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gyt wrote:

[Calm]
Use a bigger circle size? (lol, again) + maybe make this diff a bit easier. OK how about I lower AR and OD by one each
00:23:233 (2) - delete circle? No :S
01:38:925 (5) - too loud clap for me OK I've lowered volume a bit
01:41:694 (3) - replace whistle to finish + new combo? Nah, I like whistle here
01:48:825 (6) - delete circle? Uh ... I think this fits in pretty well here, and even if I did ... random 3 beat gap? o_O

[Chill]
00:26:002 (1,2,3) - make this like 00:22:310 (1,2,3)? No I want this variety here
00:30:617 (2) - delete circle? This fits in so nicely though T_T
01:38:925 (6) - too loud clap for me Fixed
01:41:694 (5) - replace whistle to finish + new combo? :S

[Cool]
00:23:002 (2,3,4) - these circles are unexpected for me. Replace them with one slider? [like 00:26:694 (2)]. I want them to be different ... D:
And why you use 1.3-1.4x spacing for 1/4 notes and 0.9-1.0x for others? It's not big problem, but looks a bit strange and random. I suggest using 1.2x spacing for 1/4 notes and 1.0x for others. I didn't really pay much attention to that, it just felt right to me. I guess I'll change it though

For example

00:29:463 (7,1,2,3,4)
[attachment=2:ecf0f]better1.jpg[/attachment:ecf0f]
00:34:079 (2,3,4)
[attachment=1:ecf0f]better2.jpg[/attachment:ecf0f]
00:34:771 (5,6,7,8,9)
[attachment=0:ecf0f]better3.jpg[/attachment:ecf0f]

Ok, it's very good map for cool song. Star!

Dragvon wrote:

Queue response: Normal Mod

Hello~
Info
Suggestions! It's up to you!
Problems! You should take a look at these.
Errors! Please fix those.

<General>
• Everything okay!
<Timing>
• BPM & Offset: Fine!

<Calm>
• 00:51:848 (1) - Maybe switch this combo marker with (2)? I think this is fine
• 00:59:002 (6) - New combo here? (Remove from (1) then) Hmm I think this is OK as well but I see what you mean. Will fix if someone else suggests this
• 01:48:345 (6) - I would move this one 1/1 back and add Claps to it. (Don't forget to fix spacing if you do so!) OTL nobody likes this, but this flows so well for me T_T K if one more person says this I'll change it :S
• 02:23:145 (3,1) - Switch the combo marker? Well ... they feel fine?
• 02:27:225 (4,1) - ^
• 02:55:860 (2) - Reduce by 1/2 and add a repeat here? Hmm, OK

Aesthethics: (Feel free to ignore)
• 01:51:225 (3) - With Distance Snap activated, move it once to the right so it can be aligned with the end of the slider? (If you do so, move (4) 1 grid right & 1 grid up) OK did this and messed with note placements a bit
• 01:37:309 (3) and any similar sliders- Move the finishing point 2 grids down and 1 grid left then flip it Done
This way the slider looks like it's "guiding" you to the next note =p

Example

Comments: 02:23:865 (1,2,3) - Oh i liked this combo! Haha thanks! I do my best to please

<Chill>
• 01:01:079 (4) - Replace this with a 1/1 slider. Sounds nice doesn't it :O? (Don't forget your Whistles) This is so amazingly obvious I wonder why I didn't do this in the first place O_O
• 01:58:185 (2,3,4) - Another crazy idea: Replace 2 & 3 for a single 1/1 slider with whistles in the notes (not in the body), then, make 4 a 1/2 slider with 1 or 2 repeats. I think you may be my favouritest modder ever. Don't tell anyone

Aesthethics:
• 00:32:233 (4) - Align with the slider? (1 grid right & 2 grids up) No, not here

Comments: It's a nice diff, some notes could be spaced better but it plays fine =p Spacing /color]

<Cool>
•[color=#FF8000] 01:28:540 (11,1) - Switch this combo marker. Hmm ... OK
• 01:30:617 (6) - Add a combo marker here or in (7). Meh ... no
• 01:52:665 (11,1) - Switch this combo marker too. I think this one feels better the way it is
• 02:17:385 (5,6) - I would remove 6 and add a repeat to 5 Sorry, I think this plays better
• 02:43:380 (2,3,4,8,9,10,11,12) - This sounds weid. Try this:

• → 02:43:500 (3,4) - Switch Whistles. (Remove from 3 and add it to 4) Done
  → 02:45:420 (8,9) - Same as above. OK
  → 02:46:260 (10,11,12) - Add Whistles to 10, then either remove 11 or remove it's whistle. Okay

Did you noticed the pattern i've tried to tell you here? Repeat that if you liked in the following combos.
• 02:49:620 (7) - New combo here. I kind of like this as a "prelude" to the next combo :S

Comments: Pretty fun diff i must say , again, some ugly spacing but that don't really bother me at all xD! Me and spacing are not friends

Final Comments:
I liked your mapset, all diffs are quite balanced. But i think you could have used more the beats related to the piano! It's such a beautiful melody ^-^!

Good luck! Star!
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1. Maybe the offset is a tiny bit late (like, taking -4ms from the offset). If you do this, don't forget to do it for the other red sections too
2. after a bit of research I found out what the tags were, except "mirror". Mind telling me what it is? Just to make sure the tags make sense for the song.
3. Apparently now, the mp3 kbps rule is stricter now. Now, 192 kbps mp3s are the maximum kbps you can use. I don't necessarily agree, but if you're looking to get this ranked, you'll have to reencode it down to 192.
4. Mind cropping out the transparent pixels in those strobe images? Nice storyboard and all, but the images you used for the strobes (well, some of them) have a lot of transparent pixels. It takes up space and can lag some people since at times a few full screen strobes are flashing away.

Doomsday wrote:

'Kay, let's have a look:

1. Maybe the offset is a tiny bit late (like, taking -4ms from the offset). If you do this, don't forget to do it for the other red sections too I'm trusting you on this. Going to do a full re snap of the whole storyboard :S
2. after a bit of research I found out what the tags were, except "mirror". Mind telling me what it is? Just to make sure the tags make sense for the song. Ah, Mirror is the name of the album I forgot to include it in Luv Letter ... orz
3. Apparently now, the mp3 kbps rule is stricter now. Now, 192 kbps mp3s are the maximum kbps you can use. I don't necessarily agree, but if you're looking to get this ranked, you'll have to reencode it down to 192. OTL When ... was this changed ...?! *RAGE* D< ... AHEM. OK, I'll fix this XD
4. Mind cropping out the transparent pixels in those strobe images? Nice storyboard and all, but the images you used for the strobes (well, some of them) have a lot of transparent pixels. It takes up space and can lag some people since at times a few full screen strobes are flashing away. Okay, will be fixed ... soon?

[CALM]

I dunno, but I think this is a bit too tough for the easiest difficulty. It'd be great if you could make an easier one to fill the gap. Maybe I will ... we'll see how busy I am with school and such >_<

The map itself is nice though. Looks good to me

[CHILL]

Cool. Lookin' good

[COOL]

Awesome stuff. Damn fun to play.

Oh man, this is a sleeper. It's a simple map, but I really, really like it. It's fun and fits the song perfectly, just how I like it. I liked your Luv Letter map, and I can see you've improved with this one.

I think I'll drop a pink star on this

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