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DJ Okawari - Minamo

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EvianBubble
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-11-10 at 9:13:04 PM

Artist: DJ Okawari
Title: Minamo
Tags: piano tsukino sora Mirror
BPM: 130
Filesize: 10695kb
Play Time: 03:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Calm (2.56 stars, 212 notes)
  2. Chill (3.73 stars, 246 notes)
  3. Cool (4.73 stars, 346 notes)
Download: DJ Okawari - Minamo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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9th beatmap created. 3rd submitted + ranked

November 21st, 2010: RANKED. Everyone who helped I give you my thanks, special thanks going to Doomsday, Krisom, and of course James!

First attempt at storyboarding, so any comments would be nice

CURRENTLY WORKING ON SKIN / SPRITES

ADDITIONAL INFO:
Another track from DJ Okawari's Mirror. Was going to finish another map before this, but I was obssessed with this song for a while, which is why this was finished before

October 16th, 2010: Initial submission
October 17th: Tightened up timing, new combos. Fixed storyboard and skin
October 18th: Hitsound changes, added a few notes
October 19th: Fixed spacing, added and changed a few notes
October 20th: Skin fixes
October 21st: Hitsound fix and addition
October 22nd: More skin fixes, changed a few sliders and spacing
(October 23rd: Hitsound additions, changed a few sliders and slider border to black)
October 24th: More hitsound and volume changes, deleted a few things, skin changes
October 25th: Tags changed, spacing fix, hitsound changes
October 26th: Spacing changes and added a note
October 28th: More timing and hitsound changes, OD + AR +1 in Chill, resized backgrounds
October 30th: Many hitsound changes, fixed some SB timing, will fix all with confirmed offsets
November 1st: OD + AR -1 in Calm, fixed volume and spacing, changed a few patterns and hitsounds as well
November 2nd: Using Doomsday's offset. Re - snapped most timing sections / bookmarks and storyboard
November 3rd: Fixed skin, spacing, hitsound, note changes
November 5th: Hitsound changes
November 6th: More hitsound, slider changes
November 7th: Added hitcircleoverlay, fixed scorebar-bg
November 9th: Storyboard fixes, deleted blue pulse (now unneeded)
November 11th: Minor spacing fix, scorebar kis fixed
Charles445
Worthlessmod gogo

General
Clip the song at about 3:20, and have it fade out. Saves file size.
Seek timing help, I can't help with this :X

Calm
01:42:621 New Combo?

Cool
01:38:467 New Combo
01:39:852 Remove New Combo
01:41:698 New Combo

Sorry I can't be of much assistance. Everything's really really good.
Torran
I cannot provide much help when it comes to multiple timing sections, sorry.
However, you seem to have done an ample job of timing this song so give yourself a pat on the back.
I can only offer a few minor suggestions:

osu! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 130 , Offset 22310 (-4)
    2. BPM 125 , Offset 105460 (-6)
    3. BPM 125 , Offset 163140
    4. BPM 120 , Offset 195780
    5. BPM 125 , Offset 197780 (+4)
Starred~!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Charles445 wrote:

Worthlessmod gogo

General
Clip the song at about 3:20, and have it fade out. Saves file size.
Seek timing help, I can't help with this :X

Calm
01:42:621 New Combo? This feels kind of an awkward place ... so no :S

Cool
01:38:467 New Combo
01:39:852 Remove New Combo
01:41:698 New Combo
OIC wat u did thar. All done

Sorry I can't be of much assistance. Everything's really really good.
Haha, thanks :P

soradg123 wrote:

I cannot provide much help when it comes to multiple timing sections, sorry.
However, you seem to have done an ample job of timing this song so give yourself a pat on the back.
I can only offer a few minor suggestions:

osu! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 130 , Offset 22310 (-4) Done
    2. BPM 125 , Offset 105460 (-6) Fixed
    3. BPM 125 , Offset 163140
    4. BPM 120 , Offset 195780
    5. BPM 125 , Offset 197780 (+4) Nice catch there XD
Starred~!
Thank you very much! :D
noneed
Hi!

Calm:
01:01:079 (4) - clap in the beginning instead of whistle?
01:08:463 (5) - end clap
01:29:463 (2) - was suspecting finish here..
01:32:002 (6) - ^
02:25:780 (3) - clap at the end

Chill:
00:24:156 (4) - new combo
nothing else.good diff.

Cool:
HP+1?
01:37:309 (3,4) - delete the slider and make a triple out of it
01:52:660 (11) - align with (10)
02:08:500 (x) add note with finish


good mapset!
Joon
hi

my modding

[Calm]
01:35:233 (x) - add Notes and add clap
02:43:140 (1) - End Notes add clap
02:44:580 (2) - remove clap

[Chill]
02:08:980 (1) - add whistle


There is no special problem.
kuyukiP
Sorry for the wait!

Backwards modding...yes
I <3 this map and SB. :)

General:
Source? Maybe piano works.

Cool:
00:54:617: Somehow I found it more...fitting to add a note here with a clap.
01:00:156: ^
02:08:500: Add note here as well, but with a finish?
02:16:180: ^

Chill:
01:10:310: Take out note 6 and stretch 5 so it ends where 6 was?

Calm:
Seems a little hard to be easy to me, make the circles larger~
02:27:700: Shape this slider a little better

I can't get over how beautiful this is. 8-) Take my star!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

noneed wrote:

Hi! Hallo ^_^

Calm:
01:01:079 (4) - clap in the beginning instead of whistle? Mmm sounds better with whistle to me
01:08:463 (5) - end clap I like it better with nothing here
01:29:463 (2) - was suspecting finish here.. OK added but quietly
01:32:002 (6) - ^ Don't like it here
02:25:780 (3) - clap at the end I think claps on beat 3 fit in this song better, this feels awkward to me

Chill:
00:24:156 (4) - new combo This is fine I think
nothing else.good diff.

Cool:
HP+1? I'll ... think about it :P
01:37:309 (3,4) - delete the slider and make a triple out of it Well that's essentially what it was, but OK
01:52:660 (11) - align with (10) No, this was purposely one grid lower
02:08:500 (x) add note with finish Good idea, added


good mapset!
Thank you very much for your time! :D

Joon wrote:

hi Hi hi ;D

my modding

[Calm]
01:35:233 (x) - add Notes and add clap Done
02:43:140 (1) - End Notes add clap Added
02:44:580 (2) - remove clap Fixed, dunno what happened here O_o

[Chill]
02:08:980 (1) - add whistle OK


There is no special problem.
Thank you for checking my hitsounds! ^_^

kuyukiP wrote:

Sorry for the wait! Don't worry about it :P

Backwards modding...yes
I <3 this map and SB. :) Wow, thanks! My first time attempting SB XD

General:
Source? Maybe piano works.

Cool:
00:54:617: Somehow I found it more...fitting to add a note here with a clap. Mmm ... I don't like this here
01:00:156: ^ I like the break here, otherwise I feel it's kind of ... crowded? I dunno
02:08:500: Add note here as well, but with a finish? Done
02:16:180: ^ OK

Chill:
01:10:310: Take out note 6 and stretch 5 so it ends where 6 was? Hrm I'll think about the length of this slider (might make this shorter) but I want (6) to be its own note

Calm:
Seems a little hard to be easy to me, make the circles larger~
02:27:700: Shape this slider a little better Hmm OK, hope it looks better now

I can't get over how beautiful this is. 8-) Take my star!
Thanks so much! :D
Heatherfield
Star first, mod comes later ;)

[General]
A little decrease in offset? haha duno
great skin, great music, very cool
[Calm]
As a easy, I suggest you use a bigger circle size, and the whole map is like a normal rather than an easy
And, maybe a little decrease in SV?
I think this one needs some big changes ><
[Chill]
Generally speaking, I think it's hard for a rookie to read this map, consider fill it up a little bit, some parts are hard to read, sometimes it's not nessary to make all your notes follow the sound.
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - like this
02:47:700 (3,4,5) - and this
4/3 beats are not that normal for a normal ;)
[Cool]
00:45:617 (3) - I think it would be better if you add two notes before and after this, cuz it's hard to hit them correctly when they appear to be on the red line separately, same feeling comes from other parts of this map
00:46:079 (4,5) - don't like this >< how about something like this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31629
00:55:079 (7,1) - though I can read this cuz you used a new combo, but maybe better if you double the spacing
01:00:386 (4) - same as the first one
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - don't like this, maybe feel better if you make a reverse slider here
02:09:700 (3,4,5) - same to ↑

very beautiful map! XD
wmfchris
[Cool]
0:39:386 (5) right 1 grid
1:41:233 (6) finish?
2:13:900 (5) right 1 grid
3:07:140 (2) left 1 grid?
3:17:780 (11) left 1 grid
COOL SB

[Chill]
0:38:002 (2) left 1 grid

nice SB and I can't stop myself to double stat this one.
Verdisphena
Mai mod ~

Cool :

00:49:310 (4) - Add a note?
00:54:617 (7) - ^
01:35:925 (10) - ^
01:42:617 (2) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider
01:44:463 (4) - ^
02:00:820 (10) - Add a note and a finish

Chill :

00:23:233 (3) - Add a clap in the fiinsh of the slider
00:25:540 (7) - Add a clap
00:26:925 (3) - ^
00:29:233 (7) - ^
00:30:617 (2) - ^
00:32:694 (5) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:33:156 (6) - Add a clap
00:33:617 (2) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:36:617 (6) - Add a clap
00:38:002 (2) - ^
00:39:848 (6) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider
02:16:180 (5) - Add a note and a clap


Calm :

Fine ~
I like the song and the sb
Good job :3
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Heatherfield wrote:

Star first, mod comes later ;)

[General]
A little decrease in offset? haha duno I think timing / offset is OK, got a little help up there :P
great skin, great music, very cool
[Calm]
As a easy, I suggest you use a bigger circle size, and the whole map is like a normal rather than an easy
And, maybe a little decrease in SV? Mmm ... pretty slow already, 1.1
I think this one needs some big changes ><
[Chill]
Generally speaking, I think it's hard for a rookie to read this map, consider fill it up a little bit, some parts are hard to read, sometimes it's not nessary to make all your notes follow the sound.
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - like this I like this, sorry D:
02:47:700 (3,4,5) - and this Hmm well this one is just one beat apart so I'm going to leave this
4/3 beats are not that normal for a normal ;)
[Cool]
00:45:617 (3) - I think it would be better if you add two notes before and after this, cuz it's hard to hit them correctly when they appear to be on the red line separately, same feeling comes from other parts of this map I guess I kind of understand what you mean, but I don't think it would fit well here. I will keep this in mind for other parts
00:46:079 (4,5) - don't like this >< how about something like this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/31629 It's basically the same thing, but OK, changed (I just wanted some more variation in the patterns)
00:55:079 (7,1) - though I can read this cuz you used a new combo, but maybe better if you double the spacing Ah yes sorry, spacing error on my part. Thank you for catching that
01:00:386 (4) - same as the first one Hmm I checked the spacing and it's fine
01:29:925 (4,5,6) - don't like this, maybe feel better if you make a reverse slider here I think they feel more like separate notes
02:09:700 (3,4,5) - same to ↑

very beautiful map! XD
Thanks for your mod! :)

wmfchris wrote:

[Cool]
0:39:386 (5) right 1 grid Done
1:41:233 (6) finish? I don't think this fits here
2:13:900 (5) right 1 grid Fixed
3:07:140 (2) left 1 grid? Turned off grid snap and moved kind of half a grid
3:17:780 (11) left 1 grid Moved (10) kind of half a grid right
COOL SB

[Chill]
0:38:002 (2) left 1 grid Moved 1 left and down

nice SB and I can't stop myself to double stat this one.
Wow, thanks so much! :D *hugs*

Verdisphena wrote:

Mai mod ~

Cool :

00:49:310 (4) - Add a note? No I like this gap here
00:54:617 (7) - ^ Okay
01:35:925 (10) - ^ I think I will keep this one
01:42:617 (2) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider I want this to be a clap free section as well XD
01:44:463 (4) - ^
02:00:820 (10) - Add a note and a finish I kind of like the pause, but if other people suggest then I will

Chill :

00:23:233 (3) - Add a clap in the fiinsh of the slider I want the beginning part to be "lighter" so I'm going with no claps this part :P
00:25:540 (7) - Add a clap
00:26:925 (3) - ^
00:29:233 (7) - ^
00:30:617 (2) - ^
00:32:694 (5) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:33:156 (6) - Add a clap
00:33:617 (2) - Add a clap in the finish of the slider
00:36:617 (6) - Add a clap
00:38:002 (2) - ^
00:39:848 (6) - Add a clap in the begin of the slider
02:16:180 (5) - Add a note and a clap I like this gap here so I'm keeping this


Calm :

Fine ~
I like the song and the sb
Good job :3
Thanks for your time! :D
Sorry I'm late in getting to your mods, school's a bit busy lately D:
Kalypso_old
Okai~ Modding

Well nothing wrong except the clap kinda kills the mood I was in when listening to the song XD

star
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Kalypso wrote:

Okai~ Modding

Well nothing wrong except the clap kinda kills the mood I was in when listening to the song XD

star
Haha really? Thanks XD
Maybe I'll try to find custom clap or something ... sorry don't think I can give you kudosu! for that D:
Astom
Hi~
[Skin]
-Cut unnecesary transparency in hit0.png,hit50.png, hit100.png, ... , hit300g.png
-Resize scorebar-bg.png to 1x1 pixels.

[SB]
-Nice

<3 Star~
Kiddo-Kun
Mod~ Just like you asked for.....BUT! Before we start...../me rips of EvianBubble's face.
:3

Uhhh.....Well.....Can't find much x3

STAR!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Astom wrote:

Hi~
[Skin]
-Cut unnecesary transparency in hit0.png,hit50.png, hit100.png, ... , hit300g.png Okay
-Resize scorebar-bg.png to 1x1 pixels. Done

[SB]
-Nice

<3 Star~
Thanks for checking! :)

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Mod~ Just like you asked for.....BUT! Before we start...../me rips of EvianBubble's face.
:3

Uhhh.....Well.....Can't find much x3

STAR!
AURGH, MY FACE! D;

Well, thank you for looking anyway :P
Disoy
[Calm]
first [calm] it's bit hard for a [Easy]..

00:31:310 (3) - remove this circle
01:07:309 (2) - ^
01:58:660 (3) - ^
02:11:620 (5) - change this note from 02:11:620 to 02:11:380?

[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - add a hitclap?
00:38:233 (3) - remove this circle

[Cool]
00:59:694 (3) - add a hitwhistle at the begin?
02:23:860 (1) - add a hitfinish at the begin?
02:44:580 (6) - add a hitclap at the begin?
02:46:500 (12) - ^
03:09:540 (7) - add a hitcalp?

good job^ ^
Soaprman
Nice relaxing maps here. The storyboard is a nice touch.

I'd give you suggestions, but I don't have any! Oh well~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Disoy wrote:

[Calm]
first [calm] it's bit hard for a [Easy].. Really? I don't think so O_o

00:31:310 (3) - remove this circle No, I think this fits really well
01:07:309 (2) - ^ I really think this helps with the flow
01:58:660 (3) - ^ Sorry, no D:
02:11:620 (5) - change this note from 02:11:620 to 02:11:380? That feels kind of ... random to me O_O

[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - add a hitclap? Ah sorry, don't know why I had a clap at the beginning ... my mistake T_T So no, this first section is clap free :P
00:38:233 (3) - remove this circle Uhrm ... no

[Cool]
00:59:694 (3) - add a hitwhistle at the begin? Okay
02:23:860 (1) - add a hitfinish at the begin? I think whistle sounds better here
02:44:580 (6) - add a hitclap at the begin? These I think no clap is OK
02:46:500 (12) - ^
03:09:540 (7) - add a hitcalp?

good job^ ^
Thanks :)

Soaprman wrote:

Nice relaxing maps here. The storyboard is a nice touch.

I'd give you suggestions, but I don't have any! Oh well~
Oh ... well thanks for your time anyway ^_^
Guzzzzm4n
Hello~

General : Add 1 More Slider Tick Rate to All Difficulties (2)

[Calm]
Nice.

[Chill]
01:08:463 : This Slider It Sounds Very Good, Move it to the white line

[Cool]
00:23:002 : I do not like anything these circles, You can not get the streams and make simple circles?
00:34:079 : ^
01:42:617 : Attempts to fix a little more this slider
02:43:380 : Following on from this time begin to abuse the streams, try to fix it

The map is pretty good, and SB also. My general recommendation would be to try to fix plus some sliders.

Good luck (Star)
Sallad4ever
dang you map another DJ Okawari map and it's Minamo
Shoot!! I hope I notice this sooner, I want to make a diff :(

Maybe I'll mod this
* take a quick look*
it seems the circle behind the cursor is bigger than the cursor overlay
here's the pic
please fix it

I'll do a complete mod later
Here take my star for now~
IceBeam
[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - How about moving this note to 00:27:156 and add addtional to 00:27:386?
00:33:617 (2) - Finish this slider at 00:34:079?
01:08:463 (5) - Repeat placed wrong.It should be at 01:09:386.
01:41:694 (5) - New combo.

Others seems fine to me,great job~

Have you made this SB by yourself?
This music made me sad :cry:
*sigh*
Star of course~
thekillerhjkhjk
[storyboard]: 02:43:140 -02:58:500, the background pulses way too much here

[cool]
01:26:348 (4) - spacing...

jks, i know how you hate that, move it up to align with 3 and 5, the distancing is too big and looks like 1/2's, not 1/4's
01:28:194 (9,10) - move these closer together, then closer to 8
02:49:620 (7) - new combo

[chill]

ok

[calm]

ok

good job, though a bit slow for my liking :/
Sekuyi
Wow, what a relaxing song :D

[Chill]
- 01:08:463 ~ (5) I was almost asleep and this note kicked me out of my bed -.-' I recommend to make it repeat from the red tick (01:09:156). Sounds much better in my opinion

The rest is perfectly fine!

Have your star->+s*
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

darck360 wrote:

Hello~

General : Add 1 More Slider Tick Rate to All Difficulties (2) I like tick rate 1 :S

[Calm]
Nice.

[Chill]
01:08:463 : This Slider It Sounds Very Good, Move it to the white line This slider already starts on the white line O_o

[Cool]
00:23:002 : I do not like anything these circles, You can not get the streams and make simple circles? I'm sorry but I don't quite understand what you mean - they are consisted of circles
00:34:079 : ^
01:42:617 : Attempts to fix a little more this slider Okay I hope it looks better now
02:43:380 : Following on from this time begin to abuse the streams, try to fix it I actually did that on purpose but will reconsider this

The map is pretty good, and SB also. My general recommendation would be to try to fix plus some sliders.

Good luck (Star)
Thanks for your input :D

Sallad4ever wrote:

dang you map another DJ Okawari map and it's Minamo
Shoot!! I hope I notice this sooner, I want to make a diff :( Sorry? D:

Maybe I'll mod this
* take a quick look*
it seems the circle behind the cursor is bigger than the cursor overlay
here's the pic
[attachment=0:a6ef9]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:a6ef9]please fix it

I'll do a complete mod later
Here take my star for now~
Ah OK, thank you, I will fix that :)

IceBeam wrote:

[Chill]
00:26:925 (3) - How about moving this note to 00:27:156 and add addtional to 00:27:386? Oh I like this ... but I like the way it is too ... I will think about this one >_<
00:33:617 (2) - Finish this slider at 00:34:079? Hmm no I think it flows better longer
01:08:463 (5) - Repeat placed wrong.It should be at 01:09:386. Done on purpose, but since many people pointed it out I shortened the slider
01:41:694 (5) - New combo. I think this is OK but if other people say I will chage it

Others seems fine to me,great job~

Have you made this SB by yourself? Yep I did, my first time trying ^_^
This music made me sad :cry: Oh ... sorry about that D: *hugs*
*sigh*
Star of course~
Thank you very much :)

I go to sleep and so many mods?! Onwards! XD
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[storyboard]: 02:43:140 -02:58:500, the background pulses way too much here :( I like this :(

[cool]
01:26:348 (4) - spacing...

jks, i know how you hate that, move it up to align with 3 and 5, the distancing is too big and looks like 1/2's, not 1/4's Not completely aligned because I don't particularly like that straight line look, but it should be closer now (moved up a bit)
01:28:194 (9,10) - move these closer together, then closer to 8 OK fixed, turned off grid snap for this
02:49:620 (7) - new combo No :S

[chill]

ok

[calm]

ok

good job, though a bit slow for my liking :/
Haha, sorry? :P Thanks for the mod though, especially about spacing ;D

Sekuyi wrote:

Wow, what a relaxing song :D

[Chill]
- 01:08:463 ~ (5) I was almost asleep and this note kicked me out of my bed -.-' I recommend to make it repeat from the red tick (01:09:156). Sounds much better in my opinion I want the (6) to be a separate note so I shortened the slider (5)

The rest is perfectly fine!

Have your star->+s*
Wow, thank you so much! :D
Meiri
Hi Hi EvianBubble ~
Sorry If It A Bit Late ~

Here Is My Mod : ( Ignore If It Doesn't Seem Fit For You )

SPOILER
Calm
00:23:233 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:25:310 (4) - ^ ?
00:28:771 (5) - ^ ?
00:49:771 (3) - ^ ?
00:51:617 (6) - ^ ?
00:52:771 (1) - Change With Whistle ?
01:29:463 (2) - ^ ?
Okay It's Fine Though :D

Chill
00:23:233 (3) - Add Whistle ?
00:26:925 (3) - ^ ?
Okay It's Fine Though :D

Hard
00:29:233 (6) - Add Whistle ?
Okay It's Fine Though :D

Nice Calming Piano !
Nice HitSound, Nice SB !
Good :3 Star ~
lovhin456
Hey ~ Requested mod and I'm here :3

General;
- Everything fine here ~

Skin;
- Could you make hit100 and hit100k a bit different ?? Also make hit300, hit300g and hit300k different from each other too ~ (Not really that important but ~)
- Hit0 is too big, well for me it is
- Copy this below the last combo color (open diffs with notepad)
SliderBorder : 0,0,0
So that borders will be black, that'd look better
- Add sliderpoints ?? :3

SB;
- Looks really good :3

Calm;
- 00:26:463 >> Could you curve this better ??
- 01:39:386 >> Align this with (4)
- 01:47:860 >> Align with (3)
- 01:57:220 >> Curve it like this ??


Chill;
- 00:59:002 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 01:38:925 (6,7) >> Place (6) between (3,4) and align (7) with (5)
- 02:00:100 (6,7) >> Either align (7) with (6) or (6) with (7)

Cool;
- 03:15:780 >> New combo ??

* Really good mapset ~ Star :3 !!
Sallad4ever
Halo Again :D

[General]
Slider tick rate 2 sound much better
No kiai?
use the slider border code from lovhin, it fit your hit circle :3

[Skin]

There almost no different between 300, 300g, and 300k score burst. The same also happens for 100 and 100k
I suggest you to change the color of the number and make it different from each score burst, you don't have to make it bigger to make it different as bigger score burst is annoying xD
I'm going to be blunt on the scorebar, it's too plain without any score-bar bg :(

[Calm]

Normal?
00:23:233 (2) - remove this or shorten 00:22:310 (1) by 1/2 beat than add note add 00:23:002
00:55:079 (5) - clap is kinda don't fit here, remove it
02:02:740 (3) - remove the whistle from the slider slide
02:21:220 (2) - shorten this by 1/1 beat then add a circle on where the slider end was
02:46:980 (1) - remove the whistle from the slider slide
03:13:860 (1) - add a timing section that decrease the volume from here, 40% volume is good

[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
02:43:620 - umm why is this timing section on the middle of slider?
03:15:780 - decrease the volume by 1 tick

[Cool]
Normal+?
01:08:463 (5) - actually it's better if you lengthen this bye 1/1 beat, then remove 01:10:310 (6) even more better with slider ticki rate 2
02:13:540 (2) - remove the whistle slider slide
02:27:700 (1) - same as 01:08:463 (5)

[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
03:13:620 - decrease the volume by 1 tick

[Chill]
This is hard :3
00:40:656 (7) - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35%
01:02:925 (1,2) - imo it'll flow better if you put 2 on 01:02:925 and 1 on 01:03:848
01:06:156 (7,8,9,10) - ok this stream doesn't fit the song and it's kinda random. I strongly suggest you to remove 'em
01:41:694 (1) - change the start to finish

[timing section]
03:13:740 - decrease the volume by 1 tick
03:15:780 - ^

Good map, good SB, and superb song
Overall this is a good map
what worried me is how Calm and Cool are similar :?

+pink star cause it's DJ Okawari 8-)
you don't have to kudosu this cause I've already got one before :3
please PM me if you want to map another DJ Okawari song
Gonzvlo
Hey o/ Sorry I've been really busy.
General:
  1. Is "hitcircleoverlay.png" just an empty file? Just asking because all I get to see is a transparent pixel.
  2. You should make a little resize to your wallpaper so it's 1024x768 (+2 pixels).
  3. Make "hit0.png" smaller, something like "hit50.png"
  4. Crop transparent pixels: "blue.png", "yellow.png", "red.png", "green.png", "colorpulse.png"
Calm:
  1. 01:43:540 (5) - New Combo.
  2. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo.
  3. I guess this is easy right?. This difficulty is too hard for beginners imo (I know it's below 3 stars but it plays harder), consider mapping a new one and call it "Quiet" or something, Make sure that it's easy enough for somebody who just started playing the game.
  4. I'll point out some of the streams that seem too hard if you decide that you won't create a new difficulty.
  5. 01:06:156 (5,6,1,2,3) - Delete (6) and (2) and it'll be fine. ( I guess :roll: ).
  6. 02:23:140 (3,1,2,3) - Change (1) for a circle, place it on the same spot and do the same with (3) (Change it for a circle placed on the same spot)
  7. 00:40:309 (5,6,1) - Delete (6) and make sure spacing is ok between (5) and (1)
  8. 02:54:180 (6,7,1) - Delete (7) and it'll be fine.
  9. I strongly suggest you to create that new difficulty so beginners can enjoy this really cool map. Most of the notes should be at least 1 beat apart from each other, also use a bigger circle size.
Chill:
  1. 00:26:925 (3) - This is doesn't match the music, the piano ends 1/2 before, delete it?
  2. 00:30:617 (2) - ^
  3. 01:41:463 (X) - Add a circle here.
  4. 01:41:694 (5) - Move this to: "01:41:925" and use New Combo.
  5. 03:15:780 (6) - New Combo?
Cool:
  1. 00:23:002 (2,3,4) - These notes doesn't sound good for this intro (slow part), I suggest you to delete (3).
  2. 00:26:694 (2) - Make the slider 1/2 (Red ticks only) for the same reason as above.
  3. 00:34:079 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) same thing as above.
  4. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo?
That's all GREAT job, Star~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

Hi Hi EvianBubble ~
Sorry If It A Bit Late ~ Don't worry about it :P

Here Is My Mod : ( Ignore If It Doesn't Seem Fit For You )

SPOILER
Calm
00:23:233 (2) - Add Whistle ? I'm doing whistles only on the tall white ticks for this first section
00:25:310 (4) - ^ ?
00:28:771 (5) - ^ ?
00:49:771 (3) - ^ ? Okay
00:51:617 (6) - ^ ?
00:52:771 (1) - Change With Whistle ? No I want clap here
01:29:463 (2) - ^ ?
Okay It's Fine Though :D

Chill
00:23:233 (3) - Add Whistle ? Yea want it only on tall white ticks, sorry
00:26:925 (3) - ^ ?
Okay It's Fine Though :D

Hard
00:29:233 (6) - Add Whistle ? Same here
Okay It's Fine Though :D

Nice Calming Piano !
Nice HitSound, Nice SB !
Good :3 Star ~
Thank you very much! ^_^

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~ Requested mod and I'm here :3

General;
- Everything fine here ~

Skin;
- Could you make hit100 and hit100k a bit different ?? Also make hit300, hit300g and hit300k different from each other too ~ (Not really that important but ~) OK, will do that later
- Hit0 is too big, well for me it is Sorry, will resize
- Copy this below the last combo color (open diffs with notepad) Done
SliderBorder : 0,0,0
So that borders will be black, that'd look better
- Add sliderpoints ?? :3 Must have forgotten about this >_< OK

SB;
- Looks really good :3 ;)

Calm;
- 00:26:463 >> Could you curve this better ?? Well I tried to, at least XD
- 01:39:386 >> Align this with (4) No, misaligned on purpose
- 01:47:860 >> Align with (3) This too
- 01:57:220 >> Curve it like this ?? Changed it to look more like that but not exactly
[attachment=0:17e14]image.png[/attachment:17e14]

Chill;
- 00:59:002 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note Meh I think this is fine
- 01:38:925 (6,7) >> Place (6) between (3,4) and align (7) with (5) Purposely not aligned
- 02:00:100 (6,7) >> Either align (7) with (6) or (6) with (7) This too

Cool;
- 03:15:780 >> New combo ?? It feels like one phrase to me

* Really good mapset ~ Star :3 !!
Thanks for such a quick mod! :D

I will get to the rest of your mods later, sorry! You guys mod so fast XD
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Again :D

[General]
Slider tick rate 2 sound much better Sorry, but I think 2 is too much D:
No kiai? I know I'm sad too, but I honestly can't find the right place for it >_<
use the slider border code from lovhin, it fit your hit circle :3 Done :D

[Skin]

There almost no different between 300, 300g, and 300k score burst. The same also happens for 100 and 100k
I suggest you to change the color of the number and make it different from each score burst, you don't have to make it bigger to make it different as bigger score burst is annoying xD
I'm going to be blunt on the scorebar, it's too plain without any score-bar bg :( Will fix everything ... later :P

[Calm]

Normal?
00:23:233 (2) - remove this or shorten 00:22:310 (1) by 1/2 beat than add note add 00:23:002 Was going to do this originally but I didn't like how the gap between this and (3) was lengthened, so this is staying
00:55:079 (5) - clap is kinda don't fit here, remove it I might try to find another clap but ... I'm lazy orz
02:02:740 (3) - remove the whistle from the slider slide Okay
02:21:220 (2) - shorten this by 1/1 beat then add a circle on where the slider end was While I do agree it flows about the same I like the feel of the slider better :P
02:46:980 (1) - remove the whistle from the slider slide Done
03:13:860 (1) - add a timing section that decrease the volume from here, 40% volume is good I made it 50%

[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35% Okay, done
02:43:620 - umm why is this timing section on the middle of slider? So the clap at the end of the slider is the same volume as the rest of the section :P
03:15:780 - decrease the volume by 1 tick Sure thing

[Cool]
Normal+?
01:08:463 (5) - actually it's better if you lengthen this bye 1/1 beat, then remove 01:10:310 (6) even more better with slider ticki rate 2 (6) is going to be its own circle D<
02:13:540 (2) - remove the whistle slider slide All righty then
02:27:700 (1) - same as 01:08:463 (5) I think (2) feels better as its own circle here

[timing section]
00:40:656 - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35% Done
03:13:620 - decrease the volume by 1 tick Okay

[Chill]
This is hard :3
00:40:656 (7) - increase the volume for this timing by another 1 tick to 35% Yup
01:02:925 (1,2) - imo it'll flow better if you put 2 on 01:02:925 and 1 on 01:03:848 I think it's better as is :P
01:06:156 (7,8,9,10) - ok this stream doesn't fit the song and it's kinda random. I strongly suggest you to remove 'em I like this stream T_T If other people don't like this then I will change it I guess
01:41:694 (1) - change the start to finish Sorry don't like that, it feels kind of heavy to me

[timing section]
03:13:740 - decrease the volume by 1 tick Done
03:15:780 - ^ Leaving this one to keep it consistent with the other difficulties

Good map, good SB, and superb song
Overall this is a good map
what worried me is how Calm and Cool are similar :?

+pink star cause it's DJ Okawari 8-)
you don't have to kudosu this cause I've already got one before :3 Ah are you sure? Okay ... :S
please PM me if you want to map another DJ Okawari song
Haha all right, I will keep you informed (although you could always map one yourself XD). Thanks for your mod! :)
EDIT: OTL FAIL, I ended up giving you Kudosu! anyway T_T YOU DESERVE IT THOUGH D<

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey o/ Sorry I've been really busy.
General:
  1. Is "hitcircleoverlay.png" just an empty file? Just asking because all I get to see is a transparent pixel. Yep it is
  2. You should make a little resize to your wallpaper so it's 1024x768 (+2 pixels). O_o Uh, okay?
  3. Make "hit0.png" smaller, something like "hit50.png"
  4. Crop transparent pixels: "blue.png", "yellow.png", "red.png", "green.png", "colorpulse.png" Skin fixes will be coming ... later XD
Calm:
  1. 01:43:540 (5) - New Combo. This is fine
  2. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo. :S Well ... maybe
  3. I guess this is easy right?. This difficulty is too hard for beginners imo (I know it's below 3 stars but it plays harder), consider mapping a new one and call it "Quiet" or something, Make sure that it's easy enough for somebody who just started playing the game. D: Uh ... might or might not do this if I find time
  4. I'll point out some of the streams that seem too hard if you decide that you won't create a new difficulty.
  5. 01:06:156 (5,6,1,2,3) - Delete (6) and (2) and it'll be fine. ( I guess :roll: ). This plays so well though! Fine, I deleted (6) D<
  6. 02:23:140 (3,1,2,3) - Change (1) for a circle, place it on the same spot and do the same with (3) (Change it for a circle placed on the same spot) I honestly think this one is fine, sorry, the flow just gets wrecked otherwise
  7. 00:40:309 (5,6,1) - Delete (6) and make sure spacing is ok between (5) and (1) Fine D:
  8. 02:54:180 (6,7,1) - Delete (7) and it'll be fine. I am leaving this
  9. I strongly suggest you to create that new difficulty so beginners can enjoy this really cool map. Most of the notes should be at least 1 beat apart from each other, also use a bigger circle size. A lot of so - called "beginner" maps are just notes every beat that have like, nothing to do with anything. I guess maybe that's what they can do but they just seem boring to me >_< I refuse to fall into this trap and do so, but for the "good" of the people then I guess I'll ... think about it :S
Chill:
  1. 00:26:925 (3) - This is doesn't match the music, the piano ends 1/2 before, delete it? It feels right here though, and I don't like pauses that are too long
  2. 00:30:617 (2) - ^
  3. 01:41:463 (X) - Add a circle here.
  4. 01:41:694 (5) - Move this to: "01:41:925" and use New Combo. I like this idea here but it feels a bit off to me, sorry
  5. 03:15:780 (6) - New Combo? This is fine :S
Cool:
  1. 00:23:002 (2,3,4) - These notes doesn't sound good for this intro (slow part), I suggest you to delete (3). It's for the "snap" ish thing? Kind of hard to explain but it's there and I really wanted to accent it :P
  2. 00:26:694 (2) - Make the slider 1/2 (Red ticks only) for the same reason as above.
  3. 00:34:079 (2,3,4) - Delete (3) same thing as above.
  4. 03:15:780 (1) - New Combo?
That's all GREAT job, Star~
Thanks for your mod! :D
Colin Hou
Hi, this is my suggestions only:

[General]:
  1. whitles in all diffs are a little loud and too often imo
  2. remove 'instrumental' from tags
[Cool]:
  1. 00:55:079 (8) - whistle here
  2. 00:57:156 (3) - cancel whistle
  3. 01:31:425 (T) - 1 note here with whistle
  4. 01:31:886 (10) - remove this
  5. 01:37:079 (T) - 1 note here with clap
  6. 01:40:771 (5) - cancel the clap or replace with a whistle
  7. 02:58:260 (11,1,2) - spacing here seems very odd
[Calm]:
  1. 00:55:079 (5) - use whistle instead of clap
other things look great, star!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Colin Hou wrote:

Hi, this is my suggestions only:

[General]:
  1. whitles in all diffs are a little loud and too often imo D: May change this if other people say so
  2. remove 'instrumental' from tags OK done
[Cool]:
  1. 00:55:079 (8) - whistle here Added
  2. 00:57:156 (3) - cancel whistle I think whistle here sounds good
  3. 01:31:425 (T) - 1 note here with whistle I think the triple is better where it is
  4. 01:31:886 (10) - remove this
  5. 01:37:079 (T) - 1 note here with clap Hmm ... maybe? :P
  6. 01:40:771 (5) - cancel the clap or replace with a whistle OK
  7. 02:58:260 (11,1,2) - spacing here seems very odd Turned grid snap off, hope it's better now
[Calm]:
  1. 00:55:079 (5) - use whistle instead of clap No, I like clap here
other things look great, star!
Thank you for your time! ;D
Hijiri Tezuka
Hello~
-------------
Calm:
00:34:771 (3) - Just bring it a little bit closer to 2, and bring 4 ca bit closer to 3
00:44:463 (1) - Could you make it last to 00:45:386 and add a clap to the end? (Suggestion)
00:45:617 (2) - If you do the one above, delete this? (Suggestion)
02:11:380 - Add a note here
---------------
Chill:
01:38:463 (5,6,7) - Could you bring these notes closer?
---------------
Cool:
00:23:117 (3) - Delete this note
01:29:925 (4) - Add a Finish here?
02:19:780 - New combo and remove the NC from the 02:20:020 (1)
----------------
I enjoyed the ambience of the song and the notes fit it perfectly, so have a star and my best wishes~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Hello~
-------------
Calm:
00:34:771 (3) - Just bring it a little bit closer to 2, and bring 4 ca bit closer to 3 Spacing is good here D:
00:44:463 (1) - Could you make it last to 00:45:386 and add a clap to the end? (Suggestion) Hmm OK, done Actually a couple more run throughs I think it plays better as is
00:45:617 (2) - If you do the one above, delete this? (Suggestion)
02:11:380 - Add a note here Done
---------------
Chill:
01:38:463 (5,6,7) - Could you bring these notes closer? All these and (1, 2) of next combo moved one grid closer together
---------------
Cool:
00:23:117 (3) - Delete this note No D< (lol)
01:29:925 (4) - Add a Finish here? Whistle sounds better to me
02:19:780 - New combo and remove the NC from the 02:20:020 (1) I think NC is better where it is but if someone else suggests it then I'll change it
----------------
I enjoyed the ambience of the song and the notes fit it perfectly, so have a star and my best wishes~
Thank you for your time! :)
Sure
Just.. I shoot a star to solid map. :D
Dotsu
Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]


  • 01:41:694----01:45:460 : I think BPM is a bit off here~
    I got :
    Offset: 01:41:694 BPM:128.00
    Offset: 01:43:569 BPM:127.00
    I’m not sure because I’m not a good timer~ :D
[Calm]


  • 00:55:079 (5): Remove Clap
    01:08:463 (5): Add whistle at the beginning
    01:26:925 (7): ^
[Cool]


  • 02:58:980 (3,4,5,6,7,8): Distance


Good map~

☆ STAR ☆
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