Kalibe wrote:
- Unused .osb file in your map folder. Please, delete it lol.wat I don't have any .osb lmao you sure?
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Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan
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IRC wwww | don't kudo it
18:26 Kalibe: wwww
18:26 Linada: www
18:26 *Kalibe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/854616 Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan]
18:26 *Kalibe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/854616 Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan [Linada's Insane]]
18:27 Kalibe: AIbot?
18:28 Linada: redling
18:28 Linada: i'm here
18:28 Kalibe: ok so let's do dis
18:29 Linada: aibot say no problems
18:29 Kalibe: ye
18:29 Kalibe: 00:02:454 (5) -
18:29 Kalibe: Still don't get it why you put here circle xD
18:30 Linada: idk to follow vocals xD
18:30 Linada: but i'll do what i did later, 3/4 slider instead
18:31 Kalibe: 00:03:508 (2,3) -
18:32 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/mjqOO/40c1b9c753.jpg
18:32 Kalibe: Maybe?
18:33 Kalibe: 00:02:859 (6,1) - Switch NC
18:33 Kalibe: 00:03:832 (5,1) - ^
18:33 Kalibe: 00:05:129 (6,1) - ^
18:34 Linada: i mapped this before i learned how to
18:34 Linada: lmao
18:34 Kalibe: lol
18:34 Kalibe: 00:07:724 (5,1) -
18:34 Kalibe: you know
18:35 Kalibe: 00:09:021 (8,1) -
18:36 Kalibe: 00:10:481 (1) - add nc
18:36 Kalibe: 00:11:291 (1) - ??
18:36 Kalibe: NC to vocal or wot?
18:36 Linada: shhh
18:36 Kalibe: owo
18:37 Linada: man
18:37 Linada: i think
18:37 Linada: instead
18:37 Linada: i'll re-do NC myself
18:37 Linada: then i send you
18:37 Kalibe: ou kay
18:38 Kalibe: 00:18:345 (7) - little overmapped, vocal isn't emphasis triple
18:39 Kalibe: 00:20:372 (1,2) - Wot
18:39 Kalibe: Skystar rhythm xD
18:39 Linada: idk, i think it fit really well owo
18:39 Linada: long vocal
18:39 Kalibe: oh, okay then
18:40 Linada: yay my road to be skystar's is going well
18:40 Linada: o/
18:43 Kalibe: 00:37:886 (2) - This slider sounds off
18:43 Kalibe: bcs is on da red beat
18:43 Kalibe: Should do ctrl G rhythm
18:45 Kalibe: 00:44:859 (5,7) - Stack (5) on (7) end for tidyness
18:45 Linada: slider fixed
18:46 Kalibe: 00:45:183 (7,1) - Suupper crazy jump as a normal Insane
18:46 Kalibe: really
18:47 Linada: it's still a 5,1 stars
18:47 Kalibe: but this jump is like 5.8
18:48 Linada: since there are 3 sliders as jumps
18:48 Linada: they are "easier"
18:48 Linada: i fc them fine
18:48 Kalibe: 00:48:589 (5,6) - ??
18:50 Linada: yea i think (6) i'll change into 2 circles
18:53 Kalibe: 01:16:156 (1,2,1) - 5 Circles fits better with beats imo
18:55 Kalibe: 01:57:670 (1,2,3,4) -
18:56 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/mjsid/19e62b684f.jpg
18:56 Kalibe: Better for me
18:57 Linada: yep
18:58 Linada: finished NC and all
18:58 Linada: want .osu ?
18:59 Kalibe: Maybe
18:59 Kalibe: ye
18:59 Kalibe: give me
18:59 Kalibe: 02:52:481 (1) - Maybe curve this a little? .w.
19:00 Linada: i want this to be parrallel but maybe
19:00 Linada: http://puu.sh/mjsAB/94315ee067.osu
19:01 Kalibe: 00:09:021 (8,1) - Swap
19:01 Linada: btw, fixed 01:43:643 (1,2) -
19:02 Linada: wat i don't have the one you gave me, you took the new .osu ?
19:02 Kalibe: yup
19:03 Kalibe: oh
19:04 Kalibe: 00:18:102 (6) - NC
19:04 Kalibe: 00:19:075 (1,3) - Swap
19:04 Kalibe: 00:25:886 (5) -
19:06 Linada: 01:03:508 (4) - fixed this
19:07 Kalibe: 01:27:021 (4) -
19:08 Kalibe: Omg rly
19:08 Kalibe: i must go again
19:08 Linada: wat ? xD
19:08 Kalibe: xD
19:08 Linada: xD
19:08 Kalibe: ok i'll just post in forum
18:26 Linada: www
18:26 *Kalibe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/854616 Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan]
18:26 *Kalibe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/854616 Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan [Linada's Insane]]
18:27 Kalibe: AIbot?
18:28 Linada: redling
18:28 Linada: i'm here
18:28 Kalibe: ok so let's do dis
18:29 Linada: aibot say no problems
18:29 Kalibe: ye
18:29 Kalibe: 00:02:454 (5) -
18:29 Kalibe: Still don't get it why you put here circle xD
18:30 Linada: idk to follow vocals xD
18:30 Linada: but i'll do what i did later, 3/4 slider instead
18:31 Kalibe: 00:03:508 (2,3) -
18:32 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/mjqOO/40c1b9c753.jpg
18:32 Kalibe: Maybe?
18:33 Kalibe: 00:02:859 (6,1) - Switch NC
18:33 Kalibe: 00:03:832 (5,1) - ^
18:33 Kalibe: 00:05:129 (6,1) - ^
18:34 Linada: i mapped this before i learned how to
18:34 Linada: lmao
18:34 Kalibe: lol
18:34 Kalibe: 00:07:724 (5,1) -
18:34 Kalibe: you know
18:35 Kalibe: 00:09:021 (8,1) -
18:36 Kalibe: 00:10:481 (1) - add nc
18:36 Kalibe: 00:11:291 (1) - ??
18:36 Kalibe: NC to vocal or wot?
18:36 Linada: shhh
18:36 Kalibe: owo
18:37 Linada: man
18:37 Linada: i think
18:37 Linada: instead
18:37 Linada: i'll re-do NC myself
18:37 Linada: then i send you
18:37 Kalibe: ou kay
18:38 Kalibe: 00:18:345 (7) - little overmapped, vocal isn't emphasis triple
18:39 Kalibe: 00:20:372 (1,2) - Wot
18:39 Kalibe: Skystar rhythm xD
18:39 Linada: idk, i think it fit really well owo
18:39 Linada: long vocal
18:39 Kalibe: oh, okay then
18:40 Linada: yay my road to be skystar's is going well
18:40 Linada: o/
18:43 Kalibe: 00:37:886 (2) - This slider sounds off
18:43 Kalibe: bcs is on da red beat
18:43 Kalibe: Should do ctrl G rhythm
18:45 Kalibe: 00:44:859 (5,7) - Stack (5) on (7) end for tidyness
18:45 Linada: slider fixed
18:46 Kalibe: 00:45:183 (7,1) - Suupper crazy jump as a normal Insane
18:46 Kalibe: really
18:47 Linada: it's still a 5,1 stars
18:47 Kalibe: but this jump is like 5.8
18:48 Linada: since there are 3 sliders as jumps
18:48 Linada: they are "easier"
18:48 Linada: i fc them fine
18:48 Kalibe: 00:48:589 (5,6) - ??
18:50 Linada: yea i think (6) i'll change into 2 circles
18:53 Kalibe: 01:16:156 (1,2,1) - 5 Circles fits better with beats imo
18:55 Kalibe: 01:57:670 (1,2,3,4) -
18:56 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/mjsid/19e62b684f.jpg
18:56 Kalibe: Better for me
18:57 Linada: yep
18:58 Linada: finished NC and all
18:58 Linada: want .osu ?
18:59 Kalibe: Maybe
18:59 Kalibe: ye
18:59 Kalibe: give me
18:59 Kalibe: 02:52:481 (1) - Maybe curve this a little? .w.
19:00 Linada: i want this to be parrallel but maybe
19:00 Linada: http://puu.sh/mjsAB/94315ee067.osu
19:01 Kalibe: 00:09:021 (8,1) - Swap
19:01 Linada: btw, fixed 01:43:643 (1,2) -
19:02 Linada: wat i don't have the one you gave me, you took the new .osu ?
19:02 Kalibe: yup
19:03 Kalibe: oh
19:04 Kalibe: 00:18:102 (6) - NC
19:04 Kalibe: 00:19:075 (1,3) - Swap
19:04 Kalibe: 00:25:886 (5) -
19:06 Linada: 01:03:508 (4) - fixed this
19:07 Kalibe: 01:27:021 (4) -
19:08 Kalibe: Omg rly
19:08 Kalibe: i must go again
19:08 Linada: wat ? xD
19:08 Kalibe: xD
19:08 Linada: xD
19:08 Kalibe: ok i'll just post in forum
btw i have random .osb too
wwww
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Topic Starter
Thanks ♥Lakx wrote:
Good luck bruh <3
Auxent
hi.
general:
- 01:00:913 - put a new timing point (red) at this time. downbeats and stuff are quite inconsistent so this should be able to fix the problem.
- 01:27:021 - ^ (if you are going to apply the suggestion from above, then don't forget to add also this)
- same goes here at: 02:42:102 - ; 02:03:183 - ;
easy:
- 00:45:345 - I feel like missing something here. My suggestion is to put a note here or extend the slider from this point to where it ends now (00:46:156 - )
- 01:36:102 (3) - i don't quite like the fact that the slider ends on downbeat. downbeat should be clickable at this point. (but i guess in the easiest diff it doesn't matter that much)
normal:
- 01:00:751 (5,1) - you should avoid stacks like these.
hard:
- 00:06:102 (4,1) - put the (4) as a 1/2 slider. for better emphasis of music and better gameplay.
- 00:16:481 (9,1) - same here ^ (i'm not going to write every single note, i guess you are smart enough to figure out, which notes need this) - if so, you can put it in a pattern like this 00:49:724 (2,3,1) - . (slider, circle, slider)
i've checked other diffs too and they seems fine to me.
sorry for small mod, good luck
general:
- 01:00:913 - put a new timing point (red) at this time. downbeats and stuff are quite inconsistent so this should be able to fix the problem.
- 01:27:021 - ^ (if you are going to apply the suggestion from above, then don't forget to add also this)
- same goes here at: 02:42:102 - ; 02:03:183 - ;
easy:
- 00:45:345 - I feel like missing something here. My suggestion is to put a note here or extend the slider from this point to where it ends now (00:46:156 - )
- 01:36:102 (3) - i don't quite like the fact that the slider ends on downbeat. downbeat should be clickable at this point. (but i guess in the easiest diff it doesn't matter that much)
normal:
- 01:00:751 (5,1) - you should avoid stacks like these.
hard:
- 00:06:102 (4,1) - put the (4) as a 1/2 slider. for better emphasis of music and better gameplay.
- 00:16:481 (9,1) - same here ^ (i'm not going to write every single note, i guess you are smart enough to figure out, which notes need this) - if so, you can put it in a pattern like this 00:49:724 (2,3,1) - . (slider, circle, slider)
i've checked other diffs too and they seems fine to me.
sorry for small mod, good luck
Topic Starter
thanks~ every mod helps me ♥Auxent wrote:
hi.
general:
- 01:00:913 - put a new timing point (red) at this time. downbeats and stuff are quite inconsistent so this should be able to fix the problem.
- 01:27:021 - ^ (if you are going to apply the suggestion from above, then don't forget to add also this)
- same goes here at: 02:42:102 - ; 02:03:183 - ; I see, I looked at Orangestar which is ranked one lol
easy:
- 00:45:345 - I feel like missing something here. My suggestion is to put a note here or extend the slider from this point to where it ends now (00:46:156 - ) extended
- 01:36:102 (3) - i don't quite like the fact that the slider ends on downbeat. downbeat should be clickable at this point. (but i guess in the easiest diff it doesn't matter that much) I'll keep this for now but I'll consider eet
normal:
- 01:00:751 (5,1) - you should avoid stacks like these. yes, we should only "Avoid" and not "Don't" so ye I'll keep this way since it's not the unrankable issue
hard:
- 00:06:102 (4,1) - put the (4) as a 1/2 slider. for better emphasis of music and better gameplay. emphasis of vocal, but lemme see if other modders will slap me here
- 00:16:481 (9,1) - same here ^ (i'm not going to write every single note, i guess you are smart enough to figure out, which notes need this) - if so, you can put it in a pattern like this 00:49:724 (2,3,1) - . (slider, circle, slider) same as above.
i've checked other diffs too and they seems fine to me.
sorry for small mod, good luck
Great mappu~ take my star (^3^)
Topic Starter
Thanks <3Jana Marie wrote:
Great mappu~ take my star (^3^)
Checked this out because Yuaru is <3
Might give a real mod later on, but just a few things to chew on:
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
You don't need the red lines at 1:16 and 1:27. Get rid of 'em.
I really wish you didn't use soft-hitnormal so much. You can't really hear it at all against the song and considering how streamy the upper level map is, it really lacks in feedback to the player.
Might give a real mod later on, but just a few things to chew on:
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
You don't need the red lines at 1:16 and 1:27. Get rid of 'em.
I really wish you didn't use soft-hitnormal so much. You can't really hear it at all against the song and considering how streamy the upper level map is, it really lacks in feedback to the player.
Topic Starter
Thanks for checking my beatmap ♥Garven wrote:
Checked this out because Yuaru is <3 omgggg Garven ♥
Might give a real mod later on, but just a few things to chew on:
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. I see.
You don't need the red lines at 1:16 and 1:27. Get rid of 'em. I set these since Orangestar's one (which is ranked already) has red ticks there as well
I really wish you didn't use soft-hitnormal so much. You can't really hear it at all against the song and considering how streamy the upper level map is, it really lacks in feedback to the player. uhmm, is it needed to add some another custom soft-hitnormal or increase the volume itself?
Sky Arrow
00:29:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'd HIGHLY recommend changing this stream up. And tbh, the stream could start at the downbeat here 00:32:535 (1) - where it makes most sense to have a crazy stream. But please design the stream better than having it go around in a circle. please please please
00:29:777 (8) - Here's an example rhythm I modified for that first half of the stream because it's like, not necessary at all http://puu.sh/msycc/4a7f8d8874.jpg
01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I can't really comment on this without saying to change a lot of the streams to be less aggressive. The sound in the background is very small and repetitive so there's no need to go high DS on the streams, best to keep it close together or use a lot more repeat sliders. I wanna say best bet is to ignore that background beat.
01:49:318 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream design here can be improved. It just goes round and around. Using more kicks could help lead you to other sections in the editor and create more design. Try more linear streams or something : s
01:54:508 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this one is a little bit better than the others but the loop at the end could be more circular than the squished up thing it is currently.
02:12:102 (4) - should be spaced more because clap/high vocal needs emphasis
02:21:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see this pattern being so necessary when the music doesn't shift much from your previous rhythm choices. I'd suggest using more sliders to keep the map more consistent with previous parts and future parts.
02:47:778 (2) - I like how you did these ending streams, these feel more fitting. I'd change 02:47:778 (2) - stream to be more circular instead of it having that weird straightness out of nowhere.
02:51:994 (3) - kick slider because circle feels odd amidst all the 1/4s
If you need help creating interesting stream patterns I am willing to help too ^^
00:29:777 (8) - Here's an example rhythm I modified for that first half of the stream because it's like, not necessary at all http://puu.sh/msycc/4a7f8d8874.jpg
01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I can't really comment on this without saying to change a lot of the streams to be less aggressive. The sound in the background is very small and repetitive so there's no need to go high DS on the streams, best to keep it close together or use a lot more repeat sliders. I wanna say best bet is to ignore that background beat.
01:49:318 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream design here can be improved. It just goes round and around. Using more kicks could help lead you to other sections in the editor and create more design. Try more linear streams or something : s
01:54:508 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this one is a little bit better than the others but the loop at the end could be more circular than the squished up thing it is currently.
02:12:102 (4) - should be spaced more because clap/high vocal needs emphasis
02:21:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see this pattern being so necessary when the music doesn't shift much from your previous rhythm choices. I'd suggest using more sliders to keep the map more consistent with previous parts and future parts.
02:47:778 (2) - I like how you did these ending streams, these feel more fitting. I'd change 02:47:778 (2) - stream to be more circular instead of it having that weird straightness out of nowhere.
02:51:994 (3) - kick slider because circle feels odd amidst all the 1/4s
If you need help creating interesting stream patterns I am willing to help too ^^
Linada's Insane
General: With High SV moments, I highly suggest spacing things more out and not falling back to your overlapping methods.
CS to 4 or 4.1 because using a bigger CS for a more difficult map makes no sense lol.
00:05:129 (1) - I think it'd be interesting to have something like this to emphasize the vocal a little bit more: http://puu.sh/msyTq/663750014c.jpg
00:15:345 (5,1) - I'd say the same over here but doing it more than once loses the uniqueness of it. Maybe try a blanket or something to emphasize vocal?
00:34:481 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't like how for a full 3 seconds all the attention in this start of the kiai is spent in such a small playfield: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4318520 Consider trying to not overlap so much and focus on using more space >> It happens a little more throughout the kiai too...
01:50:859 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - seems a little unfair to ignore the background beats here when its rhythmically the same. Imo, I don't think it's necessary to map those beats so harshly when the music itself is quite calm.
02:05:940 (6) - space out a little?
02:07:724 (7) - this might play better as a slider
02:08:859 (2,1) - these overlaps so trigger
02:10:805 (1) - Seeing how high SV you're using, throughout this kiai, consider spacing more of your notes because it becomes a little uncomfortable to have high SV with low DS. high sv with high ds is more pleasant to play and look at without having so many overlaps and tight spacing.
02:19:075 (2) - not a nice looking overlap with the repeat slider there : <
02:23:940 (1) - no slider?
02:42:427 (7) - NC and remove the NC on 02:42:913 (1) -
02:44:210 (1) - remove NC
02:52:156 (1) - remove NC
CS to 4 or 4.1 because using a bigger CS for a more difficult map makes no sense lol.
00:05:129 (1) - I think it'd be interesting to have something like this to emphasize the vocal a little bit more: http://puu.sh/msyTq/663750014c.jpg
00:15:345 (5,1) - I'd say the same over here but doing it more than once loses the uniqueness of it. Maybe try a blanket or something to emphasize vocal?
00:34:481 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't like how for a full 3 seconds all the attention in this start of the kiai is spent in such a small playfield: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4318520 Consider trying to not overlap so much and focus on using more space >> It happens a little more throughout the kiai too...
01:50:859 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - seems a little unfair to ignore the background beats here when its rhythmically the same. Imo, I don't think it's necessary to map those beats so harshly when the music itself is quite calm.
02:05:940 (6) - space out a little?
02:07:724 (7) - this might play better as a slider
02:08:859 (2,1) - these overlaps so trigger
02:10:805 (1) - Seeing how high SV you're using, throughout this kiai, consider spacing more of your notes because it becomes a little uncomfortable to have high SV with low DS. high sv with high ds is more pleasant to play and look at without having so many overlaps and tight spacing.
02:19:075 (2) - not a nice looking overlap with the repeat slider there : <
02:23:940 (1) - no slider?
02:42:427 (7) - NC and remove the NC on 02:42:913 (1) -
02:44:210 (1) - remove NC
02:52:156 (1) - remove NC
Insane
00:29:940 (1) - I mentioned this in the other difficulties as well but for an Insane, surely this should be toned down immensely.. as well as starting on 00:32:535 (1) -
01:37:237 (1) - same goes here with the needingness of adding streams to a quiet part of the song.
01:56:697 (1,2,3) - It feels more comfortable playing the music like this instead. You couldve (according to your logic) continued this with streams but it sounds and feels better when that 1/4 background beat is ignored for the calmness of the song and mapping calmly as you did here.
02:29:940 (3) - might be too close to (2)
02:32:210 (2,3) - this looks better
This diff looks alright but I'd rather see more patterns than continuous flowing go on because after a while, it starts to get 'stale' in a way.
01:37:237 (1) - same goes here with the needingness of adding streams to a quiet part of the song.
01:56:697 (1,2,3) - It feels more comfortable playing the music like this instead. You couldve (according to your logic) continued this with streams but it sounds and feels better when that 1/4 background beat is ignored for the calmness of the song and mapping calmly as you did here.
02:29:940 (3) - might be too close to (2)
02:32:210 (2,3) - this looks better
This diff looks alright but I'd rather see more patterns than continuous flowing go on because after a while, it starts to get 'stale' in a way.
It's a nice song ;o
Topic Starter
Thanks for the modKroytz wrote:
Sky Arrow00:29:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'd HIGHLY recommend changing this stream up. And tbh, the stream could start at the downbeat here 00:32:535 (1) - where it makes most sense to have a crazy stream. But please design the stream better than having it go around in a circle. please please please pattern maybe fixed, but I disagree the starting stream suggestion due to instruments. I used the DS changes on every strength of the vocal. I added green lines in all of my diffs instead for more specific at stream or the hitsound itself
00:29:777 (8) - Here's an example rhythm I modified for that first half of the stream because it's like, not necessary at all I prefer my current stack copypastahttp://puu.sh/msycc/4a7f8d8874.jpg
01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I can't really comment on this without saying to change a lot of the streams to be less aggressive. The sound in the background is very small and repetitive so there's no need to go high DS on the streams, best to keep it close together or use a lot more repeat sliders. I wanna say best bet is to ignore that background beat. nej. I will use this part as all x1 DS circles.
01:49:318 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream design here can be improved. It just goes round and around. Using more kicks could help lead you to other sections in the editor and create more design. Try more linear streams or something : s I'm not the fan of kicks btw, I will consider it to change the pattern, but I don't want to kick.
01:54:508 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this one is a little bit better than the others but the loop at the end could be more circular than the squished up thing it is currently. ehh it's fine as is
02:12:102 (4) - should be spaced more because clap/high vocal needs emphasis ok
02:21:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see this pattern being so necessary when the music doesn't shift much from your previous rhythm choices. I'd suggest using more sliders to keep the map more consistent with previous parts and future parts. Sky Arrow~♫ I really want to jump this part as for my diffname
02:47:778 (2) - I like how you did these ending streams, these feel more fitting. I'd change 02:47:778 (2) - stream to be more circular instead of it having that weird straightness out of nowhere. nej. I used reverse here for next 02:48:102 (1) -
02:51:994 (3) - kick slider because circle feels odd amidst all the 1/4s ok
If you need help creating interesting stream patterns I am willing to help too ^^ I map Flow > Fun. Sorry ;w;Insane00:29:940 (1) - I mentioned this in the other difficulties as well but for an Insane, surely this should be toned down immensely.. as well as starting on 00:32:535 (1) - It fits with this imo
01:37:237 (1) - same goes here with the needingness of adding streams to a quiet part of the song. ehh you can hear the instrument ;w;
01:56:697 (1,2,3) - It feels more comfortable playing the music like this instead. You couldve (according to your logic) continued this with streams but it sounds and feels better when that 1/4 background beat is ignored for the calmness of the song and mapping calmly as you did here. My logic was I'll add 1/1 slider if there's the long vocal that fits with that. as you see at 01:42:427 (1,1,1,7,1,1,1,3,1,1,1,1,2,1,3) - there's all based on vocals to avoid some extreme-related issue.
02:29:940 (3) - might be too close to (2) nahhh I stacked that with 02:28:966 (5) - and it's near enough imo
02:32:210 (2,3) - this looks better
This diff looks alright but I'd rather see more patterns than continuous flowing go on because after a while, it starts to get 'stale' in a way.
It's a nice song ;o
I will fix the stream issue if my reasons aren't valid.
Thanks for the mod !Kroytz wrote:
Linada's InsaneGeneral: With High SV moments, I highly suggest spacing things more out and not falling back to your overlapping methods.
CS to 4 or 4.1 because using a bigger CS for a more difficult map makes no sense lol. i don't see any reason to change this, i like it that way
00:05:129 (1) - I think it'd be interesting to have something like this to emphasize the vocal a little bit more: http://puu.sh/msyTq/663750014c.jpg i like your idea but i prefer to keep mine
00:15:345 (5,1) - I'd say the same over here but doing it more than once loses the uniqueness of it. Maybe try a blanket or something to emphasize vocal? ^
00:34:481 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't like how for a full 3 seconds all the attention in this start of the kiai is spent in such a small playfield: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4318520 Consider trying to not overlap so much and focus on using more space >> It happens a little more throughout the kiai too...
isn't it already fine ?
01:50:859 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - seems a little unfair to ignore the background beats here when its rhythmically the same. Imo, I don't think it's necessary to map those beats so harshly when the music itself is quite calm. yea fixed
02:05:940 (6) - space out a little? yep
02:07:724 (7) - this might play better as a slider i want to fully emphasize vocal here
02:08:859 (2,1) - these overlaps so trigger tried ctrl g first slider, might help ?
02:10:805 (1) - Seeing how high SV you're using, throughout this kiai, consider spacing more of your notes because it becomes a little uncomfortable to have high SV with low DS. high sv with high ds is more pleasant to play and look at without having so many overlaps and tight spacing. yea, you're right
02:19:075 (2) - not a nice looking overlap with the repeat slider there : < yea but idk how to change D:
02:23:940 (1) - no slider? no reason to do that
02:42:427 (7) - NC and remove the NC on 02:42:913 (1) -
02:44:210 (1) - remove NC
02:52:156 (1) - remove NC
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Title:Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan
TitleUnicode:アスノヨゾラ哨戒班
Artist:Yuaru
ArtistUnicode:ゆある
Creator:[-AKiTOSHi-]
Version:Linada's Insane
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Tags:歌い手 Utaite Tomorrow's Night Sky Patrol Team 歌ってみた Linada
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Here's the actual mod. Please don't kusodu.
[General]
Remove the two inherited timing sections in the middle. They set the metronome incorrectly. If you listen to the part with the vocals, it's the exact same background music playing but now the metronome is 1/2 beat off.
[Easy]
I kind of wish your beginning was a little bit less filled with hit objects. That way there's a much better contrast from before the additional instruments kick in at 00:11:778 -
Even something simpler like hitting only circles instead of sliders, or doing everything more of a 2/1 rhythm instead of 1/1s in there.
The entire beatmap feels like it's 1/2 beat off.
That you rely on having everything on the white tick really makes everything feel slightly off-time - this is especially apparent with key cymbal crashes like 00:45:345 - Considering you have everything spaced very tightly together, I think if you had a visual gap between notes you could pull off using different rhythms fairly safely.
Take 00:35:129 (1) - for example:
Instead of just following along your metronome beats, you could try something that helps accentuate the vocals and the chord changes much more accurately without adding difficulty
Also at points like 00:55:724 - I'd much prefer to have some sort of hit object at the beginning of a crash like that instead of a spinner. A spinner doesn't really have a start point that can be felt by players - it's all in the end. Starting a spinner with a hit object to have that crashing cymbal, then rolling into a spin really helps charge the player's energy to rip through to the end!
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position please.
[Normal]
Kind of the same sentiment with the intro from the Easy - make it more different so that there's a better feeling of change as the instrumentation builds up.
00:27:345 (1) - Big stretches of just playing the metronome is kind of boring. You have a much more dynamic rhythm going on with the vocal that you can play with to keep things a bit more interesting!
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position
Yeah, the majority of this map feels like you're just playing the metronome the entire time. It makes for a fairly unremarkable experience.
[Hard]
OD +1 at least
I'm not a fan of the unsnapped slider ends like 00:06:102 (4) - tbh - especially in a Hard level map. I'd reserve those for Insane and up.
00:40:156 (1) - I don't understand the slider shape here. Most of these hard kinks at least lead to the next hit object, but this one doesn't.
01:17:129 - Move break back to the default position please
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - I'm not really understanding why you're using these 1/4 stacks during this section. They seem to be randomly placed and not really following anything in the song that I can tell. Can you explain them?
So I was interrupted. I'll finish this mod later, sorry.
[General]
Remove the two inherited timing sections in the middle. They set the metronome incorrectly. If you listen to the part with the vocals, it's the exact same background music playing but now the metronome is 1/2 beat off.
[Easy]
I kind of wish your beginning was a little bit less filled with hit objects. That way there's a much better contrast from before the additional instruments kick in at 00:11:778 -
Even something simpler like hitting only circles instead of sliders, or doing everything more of a 2/1 rhythm instead of 1/1s in there.
The entire beatmap feels like it's 1/2 beat off.
That you rely on having everything on the white tick really makes everything feel slightly off-time - this is especially apparent with key cymbal crashes like 00:45:345 - Considering you have everything spaced very tightly together, I think if you had a visual gap between notes you could pull off using different rhythms fairly safely. Take 00:35:129 (1) - for example:
Instead of just following along your metronome beats, you could try something that helps accentuate the vocals and the chord changes much more accurately without adding difficulty
Also at points like 00:55:724 - I'd much prefer to have some sort of hit object at the beginning of a crash like that instead of a spinner. A spinner doesn't really have a start point that can be felt by players - it's all in the end. Starting a spinner with a hit object to have that crashing cymbal, then rolling into a spin really helps charge the player's energy to rip through to the end!
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position please.
[Normal]
Kind of the same sentiment with the intro from the Easy - make it more different so that there's a better feeling of change as the instrumentation builds up.
00:27:345 (1) - Big stretches of just playing the metronome is kind of boring. You have a much more dynamic rhythm going on with the vocal that you can play with to keep things a bit more interesting!
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position
Yeah, the majority of this map feels like you're just playing the metronome the entire time. It makes for a fairly unremarkable experience.
[Hard]
OD +1 at least
I'm not a fan of the unsnapped slider ends like 00:06:102 (4) - tbh - especially in a Hard level map. I'd reserve those for Insane and up.
00:40:156 (1) - I don't understand the slider shape here. Most of these hard kinks at least lead to the next hit object, but this one doesn't.
01:17:129 - Move break back to the default position please
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - I'm not really understanding why you're using these 1/4 stacks during this section. They seem to be randomly placed and not really following anything in the song that I can tell. Can you explain them?
So I was interrupted. I'll finish this mod later, sorry.
mod
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: 00:31:886
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: ここを
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: 円ぽくしたらもっとやりやすくなりそう
2016-01-14 18:05 Akitoshi: ほほう
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: なんていうのかな
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: ちょっとまってね
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/32320b5830ad743260cc1c3952db335f
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: konnna
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: 感じ
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: ニャルホド
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: いま丁度変えたよ
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: はやいｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: スライダーからCTRL + Fすれば結構楽に作れるよｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: CTRL + Shift + F*
2016-01-14 18:09 fdfdfdf: 初しり
2016-01-14 18:10 Akitoshi: こんな難易度作ったのまだ5-6回目だからどうすればいいか分かりませんでしたｗ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: いい感じだよ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: あと
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/976799f048b3c3eec8a33d06a3900a5c
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: ここは流れのままに行った方がいいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 急に曲がるとaimしにくいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 6.7.8
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: うん
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: もう直してある
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: はやいなー
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4331655
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: いいね！
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: さすが三桁
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: アドバイスが分かりやすいｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: そんなeditでアドバイスできないけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: 01:50:129
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ここの6を
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: もう少し←
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ｘ36くらいにするといいよ
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:426
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x80 y 320
2016-01-14 18:15 Akitoshi: うぃっす
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:507
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x108
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: y356
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: 連打すこし修正したらすごいいい譜面！
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: DSにたよりまくってるからなー
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: かなり適当な置き方になってしもうたｗ
2016-01-14 18:18 fdfdfdf: やりやすいと思うよｗ
2016-01-14 18:19 fdfdfdf: 個人的に3連打とか2連打を重ねておいてくれる譜面好き
2016-01-14 18:20 Akitoshi: そうだ, /savelogしてforumに張っておいて
2016-01-14 18:21 Akitoshi: テストだけじゃなくmodまでしてもらって申し訳ない
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: 少し書いただけだけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: しかも勝手にｗ
2016-01-14 18:23 Akitoshi: けど助かったよ
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: ここを
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: 円ぽくしたらもっとやりやすくなりそう
2016-01-14 18:05 Akitoshi: ほほう
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: なんていうのかな
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: ちょっとまってね
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/32320b5830ad743260cc1c3952db335f
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: konnna
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: 感じ
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: ニャルホド
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: いま丁度変えたよ
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: はやいｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: スライダーからCTRL + Fすれば結構楽に作れるよｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: CTRL + Shift + F*
2016-01-14 18:09 fdfdfdf: 初しり
2016-01-14 18:10 Akitoshi: こんな難易度作ったのまだ5-6回目だからどうすればいいか分かりませんでしたｗ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: いい感じだよ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: あと
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/976799f048b3c3eec8a33d06a3900a5c
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: ここは流れのままに行った方がいいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 急に曲がるとaimしにくいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 6.7.8
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: うん
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: もう直してある
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: はやいなー
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4331655
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: いいね！
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: さすが三桁
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: アドバイスが分かりやすいｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: そんなeditでアドバイスできないけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: 01:50:129
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ここの6を
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: もう少し←
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ｘ36くらいにするといいよ
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:426
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x80 y 320
2016-01-14 18:15 Akitoshi: うぃっす
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:507
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x108
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: y356
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: 連打すこし修正したらすごいいい譜面！
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: DSにたよりまくってるからなー
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: かなり適当な置き方になってしもうたｗ
2016-01-14 18:18 fdfdfdf: やりやすいと思うよｗ
2016-01-14 18:19 fdfdfdf: 個人的に3連打とか2連打を重ねておいてくれる譜面好き
2016-01-14 18:20 Akitoshi: そうだ, /savelogしてforumに張っておいて
2016-01-14 18:21 Akitoshi: テストだけじゃなくmodまでしてもらって申し訳ない
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: 少し書いただけだけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: しかも勝手にｗ
2016-01-14 18:23 Akitoshi: けど助かったよ
Topic Starter
ありがとう！fdfdfdf wrote:
mod2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: 00:31:886
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: ここを
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: 円ぽくしたらもっとやりやすくなりそう
2016-01-14 18:05 Akitoshi: ほほう
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: なんていうのかな
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: ちょっとまってね
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/32320b5830ad743260cc1c3952db335f
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: konnna
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: 感じ
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: ニャルホド
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: いま丁度変えたよ
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: はやいｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: スライダーからCTRL + Fすれば結構楽に作れるよｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: CTRL + Shift + F*
2016-01-14 18:09 fdfdfdf: 初しり
2016-01-14 18:10 Akitoshi: こんな難易度作ったのまだ5-6回目だからどうすればいいか分かりませんでしたｗ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: いい感じだよ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: あと
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/976799f048b3c3eec8a33d06a3900a5c
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: ここは流れのままに行った方がいいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 急に曲がるとaimしにくいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 6.7.8
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: うん
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: もう直してある
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: はやいなー
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4331655
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: いいね！
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: さすが三桁
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: アドバイスが分かりやすいｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: そんなeditでアドバイスできないけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: 01:50:129
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ここの6を
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: もう少し←
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ｘ36くらいにするといいよ
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:426
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x80 y 320
2016-01-14 18:15 Akitoshi: うぃっす
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:507
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x108
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: y356
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: 連打すこし修正したらすごいいい譜面！
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: DSにたよりまくってるからなー
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: かなり適当な置き方になってしもうたｗ
2016-01-14 18:18 fdfdfdf: やりやすいと思うよｗ
2016-01-14 18:19 fdfdfdf: 個人的に3連打とか2連打を重ねておいてくれる譜面好き
2016-01-14 18:20 Akitoshi: そうだ, /savelogしてforumに張っておいて
2016-01-14 18:21 Akitoshi: テストだけじゃなくmodまでしてもらって申し訳ない
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: 少し書いただけだけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: しかも勝手にｗ
2016-01-14 18:23 Akitoshi: けど助かったよ
Agreed, fixed
No change yet since I'm confused. but I'll consider it to change soon
I wanted to do something as my part but changed by your suggestions
I prefer my current one
Thank you for notice my map ;w;Garven wrote:
Here's the actual mod. Please don't kusodu.
[General]
Remove the two inherited timing sections in the middle. They set the metronome incorrectly. If you listen to the part with the vocals, it's the exact same background music playing but now the metronome is 1/2 beat off. uhmmm I see. Removed. (but this one have red ticks https://osu.ppy.sh/b/549280 . It isn't be issued in future?
[Easy]
I kind of wish your beginning was a little bit less filled with hit objects. That way there's a much better contrast from before the additional instruments kick in at 00:11:778 - I'm not fan of 2/1 gaps so I used sliders instead
Even something simpler like hitting only circles instead of sliders, or doing everything more of a 2/1 rhythm instead of 1/1s in there.
The entire beatmap feels like it's 1/2 beat off.
Take 00:35:129 (1) - for example:
Instead of just following along your metronome beats, you could try something that helps accentuate the vocals and the chord changes much more accurately without adding difficulty
Also at points like 00:55:724 - I'd much prefer to have some sort of hit object at the beginning of a crash like that instead of a spinner. A spinner doesn't really have a start point that can be felt by players - it's all in the end. Starting a spinner with a hit object to have that crashing cymbal, then rolling into a spin really helps charge the player's energy to rip through to the end! oh. I see.
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position please. Wanted to emphasize the echo of cymbals but ok ;3
[Normal]
Kind of the same sentiment with the intro from the Easy - make it more different so that there's a better feeling of change as the instrumentation builds up.
00:27:345 (1) - Big stretches of just playing the metronome is kind of boring. You have a much more dynamic rhythm going on with the vocal that you can play with to keep things a bit more interesting! I think this part can be boring since it's still pretty calm.
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position
Yeah, the majority of this map feels like you're just playing the metronome the entire time. It makes for a fairly unremarkable experience. ;3
[Hard]
OD +1 at least OD6 is enough for hard lol
I'm not a fan of the unsnapped slider ends like 00:06:102 (4) - tbh - especially in a Hard level map. I'd reserve those for Insane and up. trimmed
00:40:156 (1) - I don't understand the slider shape here. Most of these hard kinks at least lead to the next hit object, but this one doesn't. I put this how yuaru cuts her vocal ;3
01:17:129 - Move break back to the default position please
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - I'm not really understanding why you're using these 1/4 stacks during this section. They seem to be randomly placed and not really following anything in the song that I can tell. Can you explain them? auto stack. yes it applied to 01:47:454 (4,5,1) - as well. If you meant why I put triple is to emphasize each finish in next white tick.
So I was interrupted. I'll finish this mod later, sorry.
Hype, Compatriota.
Topic Starter
watdomSaur wrote:
Hype, Compatriota.
Imma drop a mod after Garven is done with his mod
Topic Starter
omgggg thanks in advance ♥Asagi wrote:
Imma drop a mod after Garven is done with his mod
Just doing a new reply because there was such a big gap. Sorry I'm slow. q:
[Easy]
00:37:724 (1) - So parts like this are still a bit off (1/2) and coule benefit from a shortened slider leading into more 1/1 rhythms.
01:11:291 - There are many more points like this - please find them and make your hit objects actually land on the chord changes. Otherwise it just feels and sounds way off.
[Normal]
So the beginning still makes me confused while playing. You start by following the vocals, but then you switch to the metronome while the vocal is doing offbeats and it just leaves me wondering what you're trying to follow in the song. Mainly looking at 00:02:697 (4,5) - or 00:07:562 (3,4) -
[Hard]
The OD is way low compared to the AR. Raise it by 1 at least.
00:16:481 (9) - There are more than just that one I pointed out if you're willing to trim them. I usually only point one out as an example when there are many more. Make sure that when you make a change that it fits with the rest of your map, otherwise stuff like this will remain and look weird.
00:40:156 (1) - Maybe make the shape like this then?
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - If you're trying to emphasize something, you want to emphasize it at the time that the sound actually happens, not before it. The way it is right now, it feels like you're trying to emphasize some drum track that isn't there leading into a new phrase. It would also double the vocal change if you had the 1/4s at 01:42:427 - instead.
Then you have ones like 01:50:210 (3,4,1) - where even the finish use doesn't make any sense or 01:52:805 (1) - where there's nothing at all. Please at least keep the pattern use consistent through sections.
01:58:481 - Return break to default position
[Insane]
OD +1 at least please. Too low compared to the AR.
00:24:102 (5) - Not really understanding why you're using an unsnapped slider end here.
00:25:886 (4,1,2,3) - What are you trying to follow at this point? The emphasis points are all over the place and I'm just confused.
00:43:399 (3,4,1) - I found these to flow better with sharper curves.
01:01:399 (2,3,4) - This spacing felt really linear and underwhelming compared to your normal patterns and flow.
01:17:129 - Move back to default break position
01:37:237 (1,2,3,4) - This grouping of 1/4s feels really awkward and doesn't fit how you use them for the rest of this section. I recommend you rethink them.
02:28:805 (4) - This flows better stacked with 02:29:129 (1) -
Aaaa I'll finish this some day. q:
[Easy]
00:37:724 (1) - So parts like this are still a bit off (1/2) and coule benefit from a shortened slider leading into more 1/1 rhythms.
01:11:291 - There are many more points like this - please find them and make your hit objects actually land on the chord changes. Otherwise it just feels and sounds way off.
[Normal]
So the beginning still makes me confused while playing. You start by following the vocals, but then you switch to the metronome while the vocal is doing offbeats and it just leaves me wondering what you're trying to follow in the song. Mainly looking at 00:02:697 (4,5) - or 00:07:562 (3,4) -
[Hard]
The OD is way low compared to the AR. Raise it by 1 at least.
00:16:481 (9) - There are more than just that one I pointed out if you're willing to trim them. I usually only point one out as an example when there are many more. Make sure that when you make a change that it fits with the rest of your map, otherwise stuff like this will remain and look weird.
00:40:156 (1) - Maybe make the shape like this then?
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - If you're trying to emphasize something, you want to emphasize it at the time that the sound actually happens, not before it. The way it is right now, it feels like you're trying to emphasize some drum track that isn't there leading into a new phrase. It would also double the vocal change if you had the 1/4s at 01:42:427 - instead.
Then you have ones like 01:50:210 (3,4,1) - where even the finish use doesn't make any sense or 01:52:805 (1) - where there's nothing at all. Please at least keep the pattern use consistent through sections.
01:58:481 - Return break to default position
[Insane]
OD +1 at least please. Too low compared to the AR.
00:24:102 (5) - Not really understanding why you're using an unsnapped slider end here.
00:25:886 (4,1,2,3) - What are you trying to follow at this point? The emphasis points are all over the place and I'm just confused.
00:43:399 (3,4,1) - I found these to flow better with sharper curves.
01:01:399 (2,3,4) - This spacing felt really linear and underwhelming compared to your normal patterns and flow.
01:17:129 - Move back to default break position
01:37:237 (1,2,3,4) - This grouping of 1/4s feels really awkward and doesn't fit how you use them for the rest of this section. I recommend you rethink them.
02:28:805 (4) - This flows better stacked with 02:29:129 (1) -
Aaaa I'll finish this some day. q:
Topic Starter
Take your time♥Garven wrote:
Just doing a new reply because there was such a big gap. Sorry I'm slow. q:
[Easy]
00:37:724 (1) - So parts like this are still a bit off (1/2) and coule benefit from a shortened slider leading into more 1/1 rhythms.
01:11:291 - There are many more points like this - please find them and make your hit objects actually land on the chord changes. Otherwise it just feels and sounds way off. I think I fixed in some part but not really guaranteed lmao
[Normal]
So the beginning still makes me confused while playing. You start by following the vocals, but then you switch to the metronome while the vocal is doing offbeats and it just leaves me wondering what you're trying to follow in the song. Mainly looking at 00:02:697 (4,5) - or 00:07:562 (3,4) - I see, I deleted note on 00:07:562 -
[Hard]
The OD is way low compared to the AR. Raise it by 1 at least. OD7 is too hard for player esp. average rankers like around 150~200k
00:16:481 (9) - There are more than just that one I pointed out if you're willing to trim them. I usually only point one out as an example when there are many more. Make sure that when you make a change that it fits with the rest of your map, otherwise stuff like this will remain and look weird. changed to 1/2
00:40:156 (1) - Maybe make the shape like this then?
Makes sense
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - If you're trying to emphasize something, you want to emphasize it at the time that the sound actually happens, not before it. The way it is right now, it feels like you're trying to emphasize some drum track that isn't there leading into a new phrase. It would also double the vocal change if you had the 1/4s at 01:42:427 - instead.
Then you have ones like 01:50:210 (3,4,1) - where even the finish use doesn't make any sense or 01:52:805 (1) - where there's nothing at all. Please at least keep the pattern use consistent through sections. removed triples instead.
01:58:481 - Return break to default position aylmao
[Insane]
OD +1 at least please. Too low compared to the AR. nope, used OD8 at Linada's Insane instead. My Insane is pretty easy so I used OD7.
00:24:102 (5) - Not really understanding why you're using an unsnapped slider end here. flute (or smthng like dat) instrument
00:25:886 (4,1,2,3) - What are you trying to follow at this point? The emphasis points are all over the place and I'm just confused. vocal
00:43:399 (3,4,1) - I found these to flow better with sharper curves. looks nice
01:01:399 (2,3,4) - This spacing felt really linear and underwhelming compared to your normal patterns and flow. adding moving linear-like pattern isn't bad at least for me
01:17:129 - Move back to default break position ayyy
01:37:237 (1,2,3,4) - This grouping of 1/4s feels really awkward and doesn't fit how you use them for the rest of this section. I recommend you rethink them. doing 01:37:237 (1) - as 6-reverse isn't good so current one is better imo.
02:28:805 (4) - This flows better stacked with 02:29:129 (1) - ok
Aaaa I'll finish this some day. q:
Hello! M4M ♥
This map is too amazing!
Best wishes!
Easy
00:14:372 (1) - looks weird
01:12:427 (2,1) - ugly overlay
01:15:345 (3) - symmetry?
01:12:427 (2,1) - ugly overlay
01:15:345 (3) - symmetry?
Normal
00:10:805 (5,6) - kind of switch these to, put (6) where (5) is atm and put (5) at the current slider ending
00:28:643 (3) - put it deeper...
01:45:508 (2,6) - overlay
01:54:264 (3,4,1) - better triangle
02:35:129 (2,1) - overlay
00:28:643 (3) - put it deeper...
01:45:508 (2,6) - overlay
01:54:264 (3,4,1) - better triangle
02:35:129 (2,1) - overlay
Hard
00:02:048 (3,1) - overlay
02:06:751 (2,4) - ^
02:11:048 (3) - extremly hard to hit
02:18:751 (1,1) - overlay
02:06:751 (2,4) - ^
02:11:048 (3) - extremly hard to hit
02:18:751 (1,1) - overlay
This map is too amazing!
Best wishes!
Topic Starter
Thanks!♥Prismetical wrote:
Hello! M4M ♥Easy00:14:372 (1) - looks weird blanket things with 00:15:345 (2) -
01:12:427 (2,1) - ugly overlay it's already faded but ok, fixed I guess.
01:15:345 (3) - symmetry?Asymmetry ftw lolNormal00:10:805 (5,6) - kind of switch these to, put (6) where (5) is atm and put (5) at the current slider ending
00:28:643 (3) - put it deeper...
01:45:508 (2,6) - overlay 3nazi. ok
01:54:264 (3,4,1) - better triangle not planning to triangle
02:35:129 (2,1) - overlay already faded, and 02:36:913 (1) - has NC to notice pplHard00:02:048 (3,1) - overlay it's fine imo
02:06:751 (2,4) - ^ ok stacked
02:11:048 (3) - extremly hard to hit nah, it's already hard m8, no prob to add some triples already
02:18:751 (1,1) - overlay 02:20:048 (1) - was stacked with tail of 02:19:237 (2) - so no.
This map is too amazing!
Best wishes!
hey, these are suggestions dont hate me
[Easy]
-00:15:670 (3) - do a cnormal curved slider plox since its looks kinda bad and no reason ofr that slider shape
-01:09:832 (2,3) - blanketrino
-01:29:616 (1) - reverse on the red tick
-01:41:291 (3) - anchor point on the slider tick plox
-01:50:372 (1) - u are your slider arts xD u couldnt just make a notmal curved one thats too hard for ya
-01:56:859 (3) - reverse on red tick blablabla and circle 01:58:156 - if u want
-02:05:616 (4,1) - better blankot
baguette
[Normal]
-00:01:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest a better rythme here but hey, u are the pro normal mapper here i suck
-00:04:318 (2) - no need note here dewd but here 00:04:481 - yes
-00:54:427 (4) - end here 00:54:751 - more logic ik u didnt want to miss that clap at the nd but here in this song vocals are the priority
-01:32:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - again i suggest better rythme but hey, im a lolicon
-02:42:913 (2) - hmmm
[Hard]
-00:04:481 - not here, not here 00:04:318 - well same thing as Notmal
-00:29:940 (1,2,1,2) - just my opinion but these could be better with a fitting whistle
-01:34:156 (4) - sound more logic here 01:33:994 -
-01:48:021 - triplet?
-01:53:210 - same?
[Insane]
-00:06:102 (4) - ctrl+j
-00:12:913 -try this ON FOR SIZE MISTERRR
-00:58:318 (5,6) - unecessary triplet yeah
-00:59:940 (2,3) - here too
-01:02:210 (5,6) - 01:03:589 (6) - 01:04:805 (5,6) - 01:07:481 (6) - shieeeeet, look for the rest dewd im stopping here
-01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - oh yeah whistles on those would sound cool, consider pls
<3
[Easy]
-00:15:670 (3) - do a cnormal curved slider plox since its looks kinda bad and no reason ofr that slider shape
-01:09:832 (2,3) - blanketrino
-01:29:616 (1) - reverse on the red tick
-01:41:291 (3) - anchor point on the slider tick plox
-01:50:372 (1) - u are your slider arts xD u couldnt just make a notmal curved one thats too hard for ya
-01:56:859 (3) - reverse on red tick blablabla and circle 01:58:156 - if u want
-02:05:616 (4,1) - better blankot
baguette
[Normal]
-00:01:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest a better rythme here but hey, u are the pro normal mapper here i suck
-00:04:318 (2) - no need note here dewd but here 00:04:481 - yes
-00:54:427 (4) - end here 00:54:751 - more logic ik u didnt want to miss that clap at the nd but here in this song vocals are the priority
-01:32:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - again i suggest better rythme but hey, im a lolicon
-02:42:913 (2) - hmmm
[Hard]
-00:04:481 - not here, not here 00:04:318 - well same thing as Notmal
-00:29:940 (1,2,1,2) - just my opinion but these could be better with a fitting whistle
-01:34:156 (4) - sound more logic here 01:33:994 -
-01:48:021 - triplet?
-01:53:210 - same?
[Insane]
-00:06:102 (4) - ctrl+j
-00:12:913 -try this ON FOR SIZE MISTERRR
-00:58:318 (5,6) - unecessary triplet yeah
-00:59:940 (2,3) - here too
-01:02:210 (5,6) - 01:03:589 (6) - 01:04:805 (5,6) - 01:07:481 (6) - shieeeeet, look for the rest dewd im stopping here
-01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - oh yeah whistles on those would sound cool, consider pls
<3
Topic Starter
♥ Thanks for the French BreadsHB24 wrote:
hey, these are suggestions dont hate me
[Easy]
-00:15:670 (3) - do a cnormal curved slider plox since its looks kinda bad and no reason ofr that slider shape removed 1curve anchor
-01:09:832 (2,3) - blanketrino lol
-01:29:616 (1) - reverse on the red tick ok
-01:41:291 (3) - anchor point on the slider tick plox ayyy
-01:50:372 (1) - u are your slider arts xD u couldnt just make a notmal curved one thats too hard for ya I think it's fine xd
-01:56:859 (3) - reverse on red tick blablabla and circle 01:58:156 - if u want my balls on 01:57:994 - can't be skipped
-02:05:616 (4,1) - better blankot l0l
baguette
[Normal]
-00:01:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest a better rythme here but hey, u are the pro normal mapper here i suck did something
-00:04:318 (2) - no need note here dewd but here 00:04:481 - yes based on vocal strength, I prefer to put on 00:04:318
-00:54:427 (4) - end here 00:54:751 - more logic ik u didnt want to miss that clap at the nd but here in this song vocals are the priority o hell yea
-01:32:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - again i suggest better rythme but hey, im a lolicon yes we are :^) btw I will change that soon if they slapped me again about hitting vocals or instruments
-02:42:913 (2) - hmmm I prefer current one for some hardneszxzxzxzxzxzx
[Hard]
-00:04:481 - not here, not here 00:04:318 - well same thing as Notmal same reason as normal
-00:29:940 (1,2,1,2) - just my opinion but these could be better with a fitting whistle SOON™
-01:34:156 (4) - sound more logic here 01:33:994 -
-01:48:021 - triplet?
-01:53:210 - same? about these two uhm, adding circles on blue ticks in this part will pretty hard imo so ye lemme think
[Insane]
-00:06:102 (4) - ctrl+j nein
-00:12:913 -try this ON FOR SIZE MISTERRR did similar thingy
-00:58:318 (5,6) - unecessary triplet yeah for next nc
-00:59:940 (2,3) - here too agreed this one
-01:02:210 (5,6) - 01:03:589 (6) - 01:04:805 (5,6) - 01:07:481 (6) - shieeeeet, look for the rest dewd im stopping here I can still map this as triples l0l. I used triples on Every ending of cc to avoid boredom so ye. and I can still hear "something" there
-01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - oh yeah whistles on those would sound cool, consider pls SOON™
<3
m4m
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Most of these are small things really, the map is already so good as it is
Rotate 00:05:778 about 2-3 degrees around selection centre, to line it up better with (4).
Rotate 00:15:021 by 1 degree around selection centre to line it up perfectly with the circle.
Maybe move NC from 00:19:075 to 00:19:399 for consistency.
Same with 00:20:372 move to 00:20:859
Rotate 00:57:183 by -1 degrees around selection centre to eyeball the other slider better, and same with 00:57:508 as it's symmetrical.
Map got updated here so if some of the above doesn't apply anymore that would be why xP
Rotate 01:27:021 by -1 degrees around selection centre to eyeball the slider before it better and same for 01:27:345 since they're a symmetrical pair
Assuming 02:03:508 is meant to line up with the circle just before it, the second slider point needs to be moved to (488,136).
Same with 02:03:832 which needs the second point moving to (436,280) to line up to the circles after it.
Looks like 02:05:454 is the same pattern as the above two so maybe copy those changes over?
Might want to change the slider at 02:21:345 to a different shape, it doesn't really fit the curve of the stream before it properly and overlaps 02:20:697
Rotate 00:05:778 about 2-3 degrees around selection centre, to line it up better with (4).
Rotate 00:15:021 by 1 degree around selection centre to line it up perfectly with the circle.
Maybe move NC from 00:19:075 to 00:19:399 for consistency.
Same with 00:20:372 move to 00:20:859
Rotate 00:57:183 by -1 degrees around selection centre to eyeball the other slider better, and same with 00:57:508 as it's symmetrical.
Map got updated here so if some of the above doesn't apply anymore that would be why xP
Rotate 01:27:021 by -1 degrees around selection centre to eyeball the slider before it better and same for 01:27:345 since they're a symmetrical pair
Assuming 02:03:508 is meant to line up with the circle just before it, the second slider point needs to be moved to (488,136).
Same with 02:03:832 which needs the second point moving to (436,280) to line up to the circles after it.
Looks like 02:05:454 is the same pattern as the above two so maybe copy those changes over?
Might want to change the slider at 02:21:345 to a different shape, it doesn't really fit the curve of the stream before it properly and overlaps 02:20:697
Topic Starter
Thanks for the modimmijimmi wrote:
Rotate 00:05:778 about 2-3 degrees around selection centre, to line it up better with (4). ok
Rotate 00:15:021 by 1 degree around selection centre to line it up perfectly with the circle. I can see the nazi after I rotated lol
Maybe move NC from 00:19:075 to 00:19:399 for consistency. emphasizing high-pitched vocals
Same with 00:20:372 move to 00:20:859 similar ^ I NC'd because of vocals
Rotate 00:57:183 by -1 degrees around selection centre to eyeball the other slider better, and same with 00:57:508 as it's symmetrical. b-but they're symmetrical already ;3;
Map got updated here so if some of the above doesn't apply anymore that would be why xP
Rotate 01:27:021 by -1 degrees around selection centre to eyeball the slider before it better and same for 01:27:345 since they're a symmetrical pair ^
Assuming 02:03:508 is meant to line up with the circle just before it, the second slider point needs to be moved to (488,136). nice
Same with 02:03:832 which needs the second point moving to (436,280) to line up to the circles after it. true
Looks like 02:05:454 is the same pattern as the above two so maybe copy those changes over? not rly copied but did it
Might want to change the slider at 02:21:345 to a different shape, it doesn't really fit the curve of the stream before it properly and overlaps 02:20:697Curved slider itself isn't changed but I stacked the tail to 02:20:210 (1) -
Topic Starter
I'm skrub ;3Asgore- wrote:
stronk mapper i cant find anything wrong on this map
PS: I'm newbie to do this things!
[Normal]
00:10:805 - Moving this circle to 00:10:886 will follow the vocal well.
For circle objects in this following time:
02:39:021
02:39:345
02:40:318
02:40:643
02:44:210
02:44:535
You can make them like this:
[Normal]
00:10:805 - Moving this circle to 00:10:886 will follow the vocal well.
For circle objects in this following time:
02:39:021
02:39:345
02:40:318
02:40:643
02:44:210
02:44:535
You can make them like this:
Topic Starter
I think it's pretty hard to low ranks to do 1/2sliders there imo, but let me double check this.kitashirakawa1 wrote:
PS: I'm newbie to do this things!
[Normal]
00:10:805 - Moving this circle to 00:10:886 will follow the vocal well. nope since it's blue tick lol
For circle objects in this following time:
02:39:021
02:39:345
02:40:318
02:40:643
02:44:210
02:44:535
You can make them like this:
Thanks for the suggestions!
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（only suggestions）
You can reduce objects' spacing before high pitch and raise spacing after it to show the wide and elongated feel, just like about 00:34
（only suggestions）
You can reduce objects' spacing before high pitch and raise spacing after it to show the wide and elongated feel, just like about 00:34
Topic Starter
I can see your thoughts there, I reduced objects but raising le spacing denied. Thanks~!uuuget wrote:
[sky arrow]
（only suggestions）
You can reduce objects' spacing before high pitch and raise spacing after it to show the wide and elongated feel, just like about 00:34
Easy
Nothing wrong Normal
PerfectHard
01:26:535 (1) - Would you rather have this slider the way it is, or should it reverse towards the top of the page so it flows into 01:27:021 (1) better?
Just a suggestion. No need to change it unless you think it's a better idea.
Other than this one suggestion, this map is fine
Insane
I can't find anything wrong... grr
Linada's Insane
00:02:210 (4) - Move down, and rotate back a little bit till it looks like this.
00:23:291 (3,4) - You sure it's ok to make these 2 sliders perfectly overlap here? Move one of the sliders a little bit to make it easier to read if you don't mind changing it.
00:25:886 (1,2) - These two things are overlapping each other. They aren't next to each other, but when you do this jump 00:26:859 (1,2,3) it feels a little weird, so consider jumping near the right side of the page.
00:27:670 (3,4) - Consider moving 00:27:670 (3) closer to 00:27:832 (4) . It's a little harsh.
00:28:481 (2,6) - They fit perfectly, but consider moving this pair 00:29:129 (5,6) a little bit to make this jump sequence 00:28:805 (3,4,5,6) easier to read.
00:30:913 (2) - Ctrl + J to flip this slider to flow into 00:31:237 (1) better.
00:34:967 (2) - Instead of having this circle directly behind 00:34:481 (1) I think it could go better to the left side of the it.
00:36:589 (3,4,5) - Sudden ds change. Seems a little harsh.
01:16:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream would probably be better curving down as seen below.
01:57:994 (4,1) - Lower the ds a little.
I'm sure there are other small things to fix that I couldn't spot, but I'm sure this helped a little.
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So streamy! I love it, and I don't see anything wrong with this map or any suggestions
btw, if you're doing m4m, here's my map.
Phoebe Ryan - Mine (Nightcore Mix)