1. Hard (3,06 stars, 229 notes)
2. Insane (4,38 stars, 304 notes)
3. Normal (1,89 stars, 128 notes)

BriedisLT wrote:

I said maybe Hard difficulty, but the very parts I like in insane make me loose with DT, so I can only mention that it does that, maybe give easier HP? Not sure.

Insane

00:00:544 (1,2,3,4) - for some reason I love these throughout the map
00:03:136 (5,6) - try unstacking them instead Fix
00:05:636 - missed beat (and all the others that are similar to this), but this might be [too] hard for the star rating, i suggest trying it out and possibly showing it to me if you doubt it Fix and the star rating is real (+0.02*)
00:07:951 (1) - this is the slider equivalent down syndrome. The arrow isn't making any sense for me. Fix
00:45:543 (2,4) - same words on vocals, you might want to stack these or experiment with two sliders instead of 00:45:543 (2,3) - and 00:45:914 (4,5) - Fix, I don't like the use of slider on this, so I stacked them.
01:08:136 (1,2,3) - experiment with making these with jumps, since this is the climax. Same applies for 00:56:469 (5,6) - but this might not work out. Fix for the first one, but I think its still better to keep the second one like this for the moment.
01:14:618 (1,2,3,4,1) - listen to the vocals, map accordingly. The objects should be quite similar to each other in this part, mainly this: 01:15:173 (3) - This part was just a trial at first, so I just take the same patern as 01:20:543 (1,2,3,4) - since its the same thing.
make 01:21:284 (4) - half the length, then place 01:21:840 (1) - at 01:21:655 - and a new circle at 01:22:025 - then tidy up the flow and it should look a lot nicer Maybe it could work without the add of this circle 01:22:025 (There is no sound or anything so), but I will keep the same for now . I will keep this in mind.

Cheers & good luck!

Prismetical wrote:

Hey! Wow, you are starving with the amount of mods here. ;_; #ModReqs ♥

Normal

- seems like distance snap/AiMod isn't your friend here ._.
00:06:099 (1) - would rather see a circle here... Meh, maybe later, but for now I think this is better like this.
00:15:358 - spinner? Nope, there is not enought time to recover after the spinner
00:34:988 (4) - try to get the circle out of the slider Just change the slider for something that is not ugly

00:49:803 (5,6) - stack? yeah... fix
00:54:062 - spinner? Nope ^
01:24:618 (1) - I get it that you want to start the spinner there, but either put it here 01:23:692 - or make 2 spinners and fill the space Fix

Hard

- same distance snap problems
00:06:840 (2,3) - dislike the stack here, I would feel a little to stressed when I see the stack here, as if there was a fast double or something, better remove the stack Maybe I will just change this part for a repeat slider later, but for now i just change the combo to help
00:12:395 (1,1) - stack them, would look cool :3 It will at the same time remove the stack from 00:12:395 (1,3) -
- I would suggest you to decide one beat where you stack, so that the player doesn't get confused where to click faster and where to click slower when it is a stack
00:28:321 (5,3) - stack meh, not necessary
00:29:432 (3,2,3) - ^ meh
01:01:469 (1,1) - ugly overlay I just change this part, but not for this reason. I don't this this was a ''real'' overlay since you didn't even see them in play mod
01:19:803 (6,1,2) - stack properly Fix

Much luck!

1. 01:03:506 (3) - I think if you move the bend in the slider to the opposite side (so that it looks like a 'C') it flows a little better.
2. 01:23:506 (6,1) - Maybe actually make this into a spinner - it fits better with both the lyrics and guitar.
3. Also maybe increase the slider tick rate to '2' as it sounds better (although it makes some of the earlier sliders sound bad...) idk.

NucleaRaven wrote:

[Insane]

1. 01:03:506 (3) - I think if you move the bend in the slider to the opposite side (so that it looks like a 'C') it flows a little better. Actually, I just change the slider to something who looks better
2. 01:23:506 (6,1) - Maybe actually make this into a spinner - it fits better with both the lyrics and guitar. meh... I don't know, I will think about it.
3. Also maybe increase the slider tick rate to '2' as it sounds better (although it makes some of the earlier sliders sound bad...) idk.I will keep it unchange at 1. 1/3 of slider could have the ''2'', but for the other its just random.

Nice map

Aeii wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:26:099 (4,1) - this overlapped really awkwardly and may be confusing to a new player, consider remapping
2. 00:34:988 (4) - the curve on this looks could be improved Fix
3. 01:01:840 (6) - you could move this slider a bit to the left so it flows better with the curve of 01:01:099 (5) - Fix
4. 01:16:469 (1,2,3,4) - since the break here is so long, I don't understand why 01:16:469 (1) - is stacked with 01:15:914 (4) - especially since you haven't done this before in this difficulty Roger, I spaced them a bit
5. 01:11:284 (1) - you could even this slider out more (so it's symmetrical) Not sure what you wanted to say but I think I found out... So I did it
6. 01:07:951 (5) - this would look better if it was more in line with 01:07:395 (4) - fix
7. 00:15:173 (7) -00:20:914 (5) - 01:14:618 (1) - read above Fix
8. 01:08:692 (1) - wrong distance snap (you never increased distance snap on any other NCs so I assumed this was a mistake) Fix, probaly hit ( Alt+scroll )
9. 01:13:692 (6) - distance is slightly off fix
10. 01:26:840 (1) - you could make this a fade out slider (lower the volume every white tick by 5, so when you play the slider the slider spin noise fades out with the music) Also did it for my other difficulty
11. 01:26:840 (1) - the spinner should start at the blue tick (01:26:562) as that's when the sound you are mapping the slider to starts (this is also how you done it in the other difficulties) Fix
12. 01:15:358 (3) - it would fit better with the song if you shortened the slider to the red tick and made 01:15:914 (5) - a double (this would follow the vocals more closely) Might be to much for this difficulty and it doesn't play very well
13. 01:19:803 (2) - this slider is too long, 01:20:729 (1) - should be starting at the white tick, as that's when the singing starts (it doesn't make much sense to have a strong beat such as this end as a slider end) I did something for this
14. 01:21:284 (2) - this slider looks kind of ugly :c, consider making it more curvy, or maybe even one of these 01:13:692 (6) - Fix

Note: I can't testplay, (as I don't have my usual setup) so this mod will be mainly based on aesthetics. (Sorry if that makes me come off as picky as a result ;-;)
I do not want to talk about the other difficulties as I cannot test them in the current situation :c [/color]
Nice map though! uwu

dytedy wrote:

Suggestions:

Normal:
data:
CS:3,6 ---> 3 (maybe) 3,3
AR:5 -----> 4 ok
-consider this because the diff is a "normal"

-00:06:840 (2,3,4,5) - this maybe should be less harder I will think about it
-00:12:025 (1,2,3,4) - ^^^^ same

Hard:

-00:00:544 (1,2,3,4) - this, its ok but you should take a look (maybe) I will ask other person before doing anything
-00:02:025 (1,2,3,4) - ^^^^ same

Insane:

-00:40:543 to 00:41:902 you should make a sequence here IMO its fine, but maybe...




nice map

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eclipselotus wrote:

Just a little check of this nice map

Normal:
01:01:099 (5) replace this Fix-by removing the triple note

Hard:
00:22:395 (4) ctrl+g Yap
00:34:618 (1) ^ Yep

Insane:
00:04:988 (1) feel kinda unfort Fix the flow
00:34:247 (4) this feel better Yip
00:53:692 add circle IMO, there is nothing that justify this circle. I will still keep this in mind and ask some person to be sure
01:12:025 (2) ctrl+g yop
01:26:006 (10) NC yup

LostRedX wrote:

Good Map looking forward to it being ranked


00:43:877 (2) - Move this circle closer to this 00:44:062 (3) It's the same thing as 00:49:803 (2,3) - and I think the jump is fine, but I moved the (1) to have a better flow.

00:57:766 (5) - Flip this slider horizontally. For this one, I prefer my patern and I think it fit more with the song.


Happy Mapping!!

This is referring to the insane difficulty.

DreaM117er wrote:

May I ask Insane GD for this song??

kitashirakawa1 wrote:

[Normal]
First off,
Time: 00:18:136
Something was "missing" here. Add a hitcircle here. Not that long ago I had this circle, but it is realy weird for a normal diff. This is why I removed it. EDIT : I added it

Second,
Time & Object: 01:23:321 - 01:23:506
Overmapped i think? or it was following the vocal line? Imo, its fine. But I will keep it in mind if someone says the same thing

If it is following the vocal line, make 01:23:506 as a spinner or a slider until the
end of the vocal. For this one, it fells strange to put two spinner in a row for this diff, maybe im wrong

The rest was okay.

[Hard]
Same suggestion in this given time:
01:23:506
(see Normal, Second) Same

The rest was okay

I hope this is helpful
btw, nice song you got there!

result of my test play