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FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2015-12-08T15:06:17+00:00

o/

[General]

lol http://puu.sh/lNTxC/9f33a23487.png (song name i mean). Also add opening in tags
Maybe add Extra diff, i know u can xD

[Easy]

00:37:739 (1) - improve blanket
00:57:079 (4,1) - yea, you can improve this too http://puu.sh/lNTOE/0831f58549.jpg
01:20:074 (3,4) - same http://puu.sh/lNTSp/fafb709e51.jpg

[Normal]

00:21:749 (4,1) - do it better pls
00:28:602 (1,2) - same, improve it
00:34:237 - nonono, miss it is really bad idea, map pls. even if you follow to the vocal at this diff
00:57:384 (1) - tail of slider looks really weird for me, my option http://puu.sh/lNUt0/48bc93cf80.jpg
01:15:658 (3,4) - bad blanket, fix it

[Hard]

00:06:647 (2,3) - NC here will be funny
00:22:511 (7,8,9,10) - lol, position of 00:22:967 (10) - is weird. Move on 126 124 for creation of pentagon (yea, this will create overlap with 00:22:054 (6) - but I do not see a better solution here)
00:59:820 (1,2,3) - NC's xD
01:01:648 (1,1) - i think spasing here is too large for hard, do it a bit less or stack
01:05:759 (6,7,8) - okay you can ignore previous comment if are you sure to this moments
01:16:267 (7,1) - yea, do blanket here
01:25:709 (1) - nc because your combo is too long

[Light insane]

00:22:967 (9) - don't like this overlap, i suggest move it to 72 284 because sound have here a strong piano sound
00:40:785 (2,3,4) - triangle form? http://puu.sh/lNVHA/893017f434.jpg
01:15:049 (3,4) - rotate here a lot more different than before, i guess

[Sotarks]

00:28:145 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same as Normal diff, it's really bad idea. Remake this now otherwise you will say it in every mods
00:40:328 (1,2,3,4) - rotate of sliders here looks really randomly, my suggestion http://puu.sh/lNW8S/1f73d84e4b.jpg
00:42:155 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^ (yea, circles looks randmly too)
00:44:440 - NO pls, don't miss this beat
00:45:201 (1,2,3,4) - okay, here you some sequence, but it needs work
01:01:648 (1) - ~~mda~~ this form is weird, blanket or something else will be better

[Insane]

00:46:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - bad form of stream imo, you can use ctrl+shift+d for do it better
00:56:470 (2,3,4,5,6) - k, in the light insane this looked fine, but here you should make a some spacing between circles

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2015-12-08T18:01:57+00:00

FCL wrote:
o/
[General]
lol http://puu.sh/lNTxC/9f33a23487.png (song name i mean). Also add opening in tags
Maybe add Extra diff, i know u can xD nah no more Extras x) at least not for this mapset

[Easy]
00:37:739 (1) - improve blanket
00:57:079 (4,1) - yea, you can improve this too http://puu.sh/lNTOE/0831f58549.jpg
01:20:074 (3,4) - same http://puu.sh/lNTSp/fafb709e51.jpg

[Normal]
00:21:749 (4,1) - do it better pls
00:28:602 (1,2) - same, improve it
00:34:237 - nonono, miss it is really bad idea, map pls. even if you follow to the vocal at this diff
00:57:384 (1) - tail of slider looks really weird for me, my option http://puu.sh/lNUt0/48bc93cf80.jpg
01:15:658 (3,4) - bad blanket, fix it

[Hard]
00:06:647 (2,3) - NC here will be funny
00:22:511 (7,8,9,10) - lol, position of 00:22:967 (10) - is weird. Move on 126 124 for creation of pentagon (yea, this will create overlap with 00:22:054 (6) - but I do not see a better solution here)
00:59:820 (1,2,3) - NC's xD
01:01:648 (1,1) - i think spasing here is too large for hard, do it a bit less or stack
01:05:759 (6,7,8) - okay you can ignore previous comment if are you sure to this moments
01:16:267 (7,1) - yea, do blanket here
01:25:709 (1) - nc because your combo is too long

[Light insane]
00:22:967 (9) - don't like this overlap, i suggest move it to 72 284 because sound have here a strong piano sound cant do that big jump in light insane
00:40:785 (2,3,4) - triangle form? http://puu.sh/lNVHA/893017f434.jpg overlaps with previous slider
01:15:049 (3,4) - rotate here a lot more different than before, i guess

[Insane]
00:46:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - bad form of stream imo, you can use ctrl+shift+d for do it better but i like that form
00:56:470 (2,3,4,5,6) - k, in the light insane this looked fine, but here you should make a some spacing between circles why

No reply=fixed
Thanks!

Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2015-12-09T15:07:40+00:00

Sup sup!

[Easy]
Useless green line over red (no SV changes): 00:07:435 -
00:14:744 (3) - If anything this slider sounds like it should end at 00:15:049 -
00:16:572 (2) - It's kinda hard to hear what these are following
other than that its fine

[Normal]
Useless green line over red (no SV changes): 00:07:435 -
Ready!

[Hard]
Useless green line over red (no SV changes): 00:07:435 -
01:16:724 - I suggest adding another note underneath 01:16:572 (8) - here
Ready!

[Light Insane]
00:49:465 (7,8,9,10) - Please somehow make a perfect triangle or use a completely different pattern
00:50:074 (1) - Can blanket 00:50:683 (3) - better. If you decide not to do this imo 00:50:683 (3) - will keep standing out and looking bad
00:54:338 (7,8,9,10) - This triangle can use some work aswell
01:26:165 (5,6,7) - Maybe you can do something else with this instead of a triangle

[Sotarks' Insane]
00:03:991 (7) - Maybe nc for clarity?
00:06:647 (1,1) - No need for nc imo
00:07:739 (1) - ^
00:37:130 (1) - I think you messed the timing of this one up?
00:47:256 (4,1) - How do you hit this? You probably didn't realise that you make a 1/4 jump
01:16:495 (4,5) - This is better

[Insane]
00:46:648 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Make the rotation of this stream better please, like just make it half a circle or something
01:20:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ This one stands out visually aswell, they both play well though

If you were to ask me which diff needs the most mods I'd say Sotarks' Insane. Get a bn after that! Good luck :3

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2015-12-09T16:32:16+00:00

Zectro wrote:
Sup sup!

[Easy]
Useless green line over red (no SV changes): 00:07:435 -
00:14:744 (3) - If anything this slider sounds like it should end at 00:15:049 -
00:16:572 (2) - It's kinda hard to hear what these are following guitar ^^ i cant see any other solution
other than that its fine

[Normal]
Useless green line over red (no SV changes): 00:07:435 -
Ready!

[Hard]
Useless green line over red (no SV changes): 00:07:435 -
01:16:724 - I suggest adding another note underneath 01:16:572 (8) - here overmap x)
Ready!

[Light Insane]
00:49:465 (7,8,9,10) - Please somehow make a perfect triangle or use a completely different pattern
00:50:074 (1) - Can blanket 00:50:683 (3) - better. If you decide not to do this imo 00:50:683 (3) - will keep standing out and looking bad
00:54:338 (7,8,9,10) - This triangle can use some work aswell
01:26:165 (5,6,7) - Maybe you can do something else with this instead of a triangle

[Insane]
00:46:648 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Make the rotation of this stream better please, like just make it half a circle or something tryed to make it better
01:20:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ This one stands out visually aswell, they both play well though

If you were to ask me which diff needs the most mods I'd say Sotarks' Insane. Get a bn after that! Good luck :3

Thanks!

Zarthbenn

84 posts

Joined December 2013

Zarthbenn 2015-12-09T18:43:57+00:00

Hey! From mod queue~

[Normal]
00:39:719 (6,1) - Potential for blanket?

[Hard]
01:13:374 (7,9) - Nazi suggestion, but I think these two sliders are a little to close together

[Light Insane]
00:07:116 (3) - This circle offset looks weird when everything else is stacked in this part

[Sotark's Insane]
00:37:739 (1,1) - This overlap is pretty crazy and it covers almost entire slider, you might want to change it for "readability"

[Insane]
00:21:749 (4) - Maybe move this slider a little more up and right. Should look neater with slider 2 and 3

Sorry for small mod, great map, GL on rank~!

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2015-12-09T18:55:22+00:00

Zarthbenn wrote:
Hey! From mod queue~

[Normal]
00:39:719 (6,1) - Potential for blanket?

[Hard]
01:13:374 (7,9) - Nazi suggestion, but I think these two sliders are a little to close together wat sliders?

[Light Insane]
00:07:116 (3) - This circle offset looks weird when everything else is stacked in this part well its not my fault it automatically custom stack

[Insane]
00:21:749 (4) - Maybe move this slider a little more up and right. Should look neater with slider 2 and 3

Sorry for small mod, great map, GL on rank~!

Thanks!

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2015-12-09T18:55:46+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~ we meet again~

[General]

Easy and Insane didn't have "Widescreen Support" while other diffs had it checked.
There's a break in Sotark's Insane? Since Easy mapped the break part then maybe you should map that break too.
Here is the video just in case you need it, you can pm me later if it's corrupted, looks like offset is unneeded, just put in the video and it'll probably sync with the song beautifully.sry if the video's quality is not up to your standard

[Easy]

00:19:008 (2,3) - Hmmm, from my point of view, 00:19:617 (3) should be more curvy.
00:44:592 (4,1) - Does this symmetrical? Probably just my imagination.

[Normal]

I would increase OD by 1.
00:02:429 (1) - How about tweak it's head a bit so it will support the flow coming from 00:01:804 (3) .
00:03:679 (3) - I would move this to x:124 y:88 so it will make the flow smoother towards 00:04:304 (1) .
00:43:830 (4,2) - I would avoid this overlap for neatness, but it won't be such a problem so up to you then.
01:26:013 (3) - How about Ctrl+J this and move back to the same position? Just a random suggestion.

[Hard]

00:00:554 (1) - I would move this up a bit for a better flow.
00:02:897 (3) - Just my own preference, I would prefer this slider to be curved like 00:02:429 (1) .
00:25:404 (10,1,2) - lol spacing feels weird here because of 00:25:556 (1) .

sry, I couldn't find anything much, most likely because I'm very sleepy right now. and looks like I spammed too much about flows, sry
Good luck~

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2015-12-09T19:28:55+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~ we meet again~

[General]

Easy and Insane didn't have "Widescreen Support" while other diffs had it checked.
There's a break in Sotark's Insane? Since Easy mapped the break part then maybe you should map that break too.
Here is the video just in case you need it, you can pm me later if it's corrupted, looks like offset is unneeded, just put in the video and it'll probably sync with the song beautifully.sry if the video's quality is not up to your standard
[Easy]

00:19:008 (2,3) - Hmmm, from my point of view, 00:19:617 (3) should be more curvy.
00:44:592 (4,1) - Does this symmetrical? Probably just my imagination.
[Normal]

I would increase OD by 1.
00:02:429 (1) - How about tweak it's head a bit so it will support the flow coming from 00:01:804 (3) .
00:03:679 (3) - I would move this to x:124 y:88 so it will make the flow smoother towards 00:04:304 (1) .
00:43:830 (4,2) - I would avoid this overlap for neatness, but it won't be such a problem so up to you then.
01:26:013 (3) - How about Ctrl+J this and move back to the same position? Just a random suggestion.
[Hard]

00:00:554 (1) - I would move this up a bit for a better flow.
00:02:897 (3) - Just my own preference, I would prefer this slider to be curved like 00:02:429 (1) .
00:25:404 (10,1,2) - lol spacing feels weird here because of 00:25:556 (1) .
sry, I couldn't find anything much, most likely because I'm very sleepy right now. and looks like I spammed too much about flows, sry
Good luck~

Thanks so much for the video and the mod but i think its corrupted x)

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2015-12-09T19:47:19+00:00

Hey all~

Thanks for all mods, some of it fixed~

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:HB24
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Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2015-12-09T23:13:18+00:00

tell me if it is corrupted again

This is my pride and dignity.

If the video file isn't corrupted this time, offset is either 0 or -8, try checking it out

Just skip this post lol

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2015-12-13T10:58:51+00:00

M4M

Hey! Good job!

General

I thing your timing is some wrong. Try add

red line at 01:02:105 Cause kiai must begin and

end at big white ticks.
01:10:632 - End second kiai here

Easy

Star rate of this diff, is Normal. Try fix

it.
00:08:957 (3) - Need NC
00:28:602 (2) - I thing same

Normal

Try don't use stacks. It is not good for

lowest diffs.
01:26:622 - Maybe circle?

I don't see anything in other diffs. Sorry. If

you thing my mod is awful don't give me kds. Good

luck

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2015-12-13T11:54:41+00:00

shmiklak wrote:
M4M

Hey! Good job!

General
I thing your timing is some wrong. Try add

red line at 01:02:105 Cause kiai must begin and

end at big white ticks. stole mp3 and timing points from a ranked map so i think its okey
01:10:632 - End second kiai here
Easy
Star rate of this diff, is Normal. Try fix

it.
00:08:957 (3) - Need NC
00:28:602 (2) - I thing same
Normal
Try don't use stacks. It is not good for

lowest diffs. for Normal i guess its fine
01:26:622 - Maybe circle? all my diffs ends there so yeah

I don't see anything in other diffs. Sorry. If

you thing my mod is awful don't give me kds. Good Its okey i appreciate any kind of help ^^

luck

Thanks!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-12-13T13:54:18+00:00

m4m we talked about in game

[Easy]

00:00:554 (1) - decrease the angle a bit
00:07:435 (1) - shouldnt the slider start here?
00:27:536 (1) - have the anchor point in the middle of the slider, would look prettier
00:31:648 (3) - I think decrease the note density would better suit the tempo of the song at this point. How about this rhythm?

[Normal]

00:20:226 (5) - change the angle to match slider (4)
00:37:739 (1,2) - replace these 2 circles for a slider?
00:46:267 - add circle
01:20:531 (1) - I feel like this should be mapped as the spinner just seems to break down flow, especially since its in the middle of a kiai time

[Hard]

00:26:165 (3) - change to a circle and 1/2 slider
00:30:429 (7) - delete note? It plays a lot better and makes sense since you dont have a note here 00:35:303

[Light Insane]

00:35:303 (7) - I have a hard time seeing the good side of this pattern. Maybe try having the slider curve under slider (1) instead?
00:30:429 (7) - delete note? (same as hard)

[Sotark's Insane]

00:08:500 (1) - make into a slider and end at 00:08:805
00:40:632 (2,4) - ctrl +g
01:16:572 (5) - alter pattern a bit, like this?
x

suggestion: rename your 'Light Insane' to 'Insane' and have your current Insane a custom name?

Well thats all from me, I hope this mod was useful, GL!

Louis Cyphre

2,684 posts

Joined October 2009

Louis Cyphre 2015-12-14T08:55:38+00:00

[Overall]
- I think it's better to change the background or change combo colors, because blood red merges a bit with background. How about making red color brighter by some percents?
- And i really do not like the colors that you have chosen, try something else, or find another background.
- Add easier difficulty

[Insane]
- 00:07:116 (3,1) - just continue the flow, do not turn back like this.
~~- 00:10:937 (1) - BLANKET BLANKET BLANKET, HOW THE HELL YOU DIDN'T MAKE A F_L_A_W_L_E_S_S BLANKET~~
- 00:17:485 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - what is the meaning of such spacing?

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- 00:33:475 (2,3) - i highly suggest to use another shape... at least something like this.
- 01:03:475 (7) - new combo
- 01:06:140 (2,3) - and other "this way" patterns: I suggest to use stacking like this.
- 01:13:983 (6,7) - move to x176:y356.
- 01:18:551 (3) - move to x376:y208.
- 01:10:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - totally not a fan of such streams, probably it's better to use like this?

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[Light Insane]
- 00:09:566 (5,6) - i do not feel like this stack looks cool, probably try to use something like this?
- 00:10:937 (1) - as i pointed out previously, try to use another slider shape
- 00:50:683 (3) - ^etc
- 00:14:744 (7) - new combo
- 01:13:221 (6) - ^
- 00:35:455 (1) - ingnore spacing and avoid stacking

[Sotarks' Insane]

- 00:03:991 (1) - unreadable slowdown
- 00:37:739 (1) - This look weird. Probably it's readable, but i see no reasons to do like exactly this
- 01:01:648 (1) - ^
- 00:47:485 (2,1) - are you really sure that such 1/4 fits with the music?
- 01:04:998 (2) - i would agree with all of this, but not in this case, seriously remake this.
- 01:17:181 (2,3,4,5,6) - perfect start shape please

[Hard]
- 00:22:511 (7,8,9,10) - perfect star shape...etc
~~- 00:28:602 (2) - THIS BLANKET IS NOT F*CK**G PERFECT~~

[Easy]
- AR+2
- Too much beats for "Easy"
- 00:07:739 (2,1) - try your best to avoid 1/2. I can suggest to add one repeat on that slider and delete the next one.
- 01:23:577 (4,1) - ^

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2015-12-17T14:56:28+00:00

fixed some of those..
thanks for the mod

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176,152,43374,2,0,L|224:216,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43678,2,0,L|56:256,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,346,43983,6,0,P|263:378|367:338,1,143.999995605469,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,362,44592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,44744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,296,44896,2,0,L|488:296,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,45201,6,0,L|264:104,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,45506,2,0,L|240:192,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,45810,2,0,L|88:128,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,112,46115,2,0,L|273:32,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,46419,6,0,L|472:216,3,35.9999989013672,0|0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,46724,2,0,L|472:256,3,40,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,248,47028,5,2,0:0:0:0:
424,282,47104,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,309,47180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,320,47256,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,304,47333,6,0,L|328:264,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,312,47485,2,0,L|232:352,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,177,47638,6,0,P|121:113|17:129,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,199,48094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,96,48247,2,0,L|152:96,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,48551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,19,48704,6,0,P|57:83|104:173,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,96,49160,2,0,L|152:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,49465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,49617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,240,49770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,80,49922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,200,50530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,312,50683,2,0,L|224:311,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,200,50987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,358,51140,6,0,P|405:276|371:213,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,294,51597,2,0,L|299:294,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,190,51902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,294,52054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
2,150,52207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,310,52359,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,211,52511,6,0,P|232:128|132:97,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,190,52967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,162,53120,2,0,L|267:126,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,280,53424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
433,164,53577,6,0,P|417:108|319:65,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,197,54033,2,0,L|338:161,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,70,54338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,174,54490,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,30,54643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,190,54795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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342,193,56013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,248,56698,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,248,56775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,56927,1,8,0:3:0:0:
24,120,57079,2,0,L|24:32,1,80,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,57384,6,0,P|248:160|272:240,2,120.000004577637,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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96,144,59516,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,144,59820,5,0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,60277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,320,60734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,256,62105,6,0,B|184:208|184:208|232:200|232:200|256:176|256:176|288:144,1,176.000005371094,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,120,62714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,62866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,63018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,171,63171,2,0,P|98:123|103:91,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,120,63475,6,0,L|190:120,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,63704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,40,64237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,136,64389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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356,231,64998,2,0,P|317:197|260:198,1,80
88,312,65303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,312,65455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,65607,2,0,P|88:136|40:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,218,65912,6,0,P|228:178|220:138,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,142,66140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,142,66216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,226,66369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,312,66521,2,0,L|248:312,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,66825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,304,66978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,135,67130,6,0,P|345:102|262:131,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,67587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,105,67739,2,0,P|347:72|264:101,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,68196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,176,68348,6,0,L|80:238,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,68653,2,0,L|183:262,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,184,68957,2,0,L|240:104,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,80,69262,2,0,L|40:80,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,264,69566,6,0,B|96:320|160:312|160:312|120:336,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,220,70023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,70176,2,0,L|320:320,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,70480,2,0,L|304:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,70785,6,0,L|320:120,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,71013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,120,71089,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,32,71242,2,0,L|176:32,2,40,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,71546,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,120,71622,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,120,71698,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,328,71851,6,0,P|304:336|360:272,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,200,72308,2,0,P|128:200|96:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,248,72612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,248,72764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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327,191,73450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,191,73526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,80,73678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,88,73830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,88,74135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,168,74287,6,0,P|143:125|159:16,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,172,74744,2,0,P|252:230|220:246,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,75049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,75201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,120,75353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,172,75506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,24,75658,5,4,0:0:0:0:
273,172,75810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,32,75962,1,12,0:0:0:0:
273,172,76115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,76267,5,0,0:0:0:0:
421,153,76343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,191,76419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,231,76495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,76572,2,0,L|344:272,1,40
336,352,76724,2,0,L|296:352,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,76876,6,0,P|136:280|112:240,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,77181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,77333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,144,77485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,240,77638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,80,77790,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,192,77942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,78018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,78094,6,0,L|408:192,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,112,78399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,0,78551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,88,78704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,240,79237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,79313,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,312,79465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,79617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,328,79770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,344,80074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,184,80226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,360,80379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,96,80836,2,0,L|232:136,3,40,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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117,150,81292,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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350,231,81597,6,0,P|373:174|326:87,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,82054,2,0,P|291:305|337:319,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,82358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,82511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,82663,2,0,P|267:317|313:331,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,82967,6,0,B|214:157|179:222|179:222|167:166,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,260,83577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,83729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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177,323,84414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,208,85252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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KASUM1

336 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1 2015-12-17T20:16:14+00:00

#modreqs

[General]

modding assistant wrote:
• Inconsistency in [Video]
{Easy} : tv.flv
{First Impact} : tv.flv
{Hard} : tv.flv
{Light Insane} : tv.flv
{Normal} : tv.flv
{Sotarks' Insane} : ??
• Unable to find video for this difficulties
{Easy} : tv.flv
{First Impact} : tv.flv
{Hard} : tv.flv
{Light Insane} : tv.flv
{Normal} : tv.flv

[Easy]

00:35:455 (1,2) - don't you think it's hard to beginners to predict for 00:36:673 (2) - since 00:35:455 (1) - is aiming right ( or up). maybe 00:35:455 (1) - ctrl+j this and curve it down fixes the problem
01:18:094 (2,1) - ^^
01:26:013 (3) - this should end here 01:26:622 - maybe?
00:27:536 (1) - why NC here ? not here 00:27:231 (5) - ?
00:49:465 (3) - maybe add NC here because you added nc evey 2 big white ticks
00:51:902 (1,2) - switch NC
01:16:267 (4,1) - ^
01:19:008 (1,2) - ^

Other diffs tomorrow

KASUM1

336 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1 2015-12-21T19:12:25+00:00

Double post , Sorry for being late completely forgot about this ><

but the other difficulties seems to be fine for me

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2015-12-22T10:55:32+00:00

dude hi

[Easy]

00:11:698 (2) - this dont fit well imo the reverse arrow is mapped on nothing,
00:26:318 (4) - flip this upside down would flow better imo
00:27:536 (2) - make this slider change its direction on slidertick will make more sense http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182154
00:57:079 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:02:866 (2,3) - ctrl+g fits more imo (the vocal)
01:20:074 (2,3) - blanket

[Normal]

00:03:679 (3) - just make a straight slider the curve almost makes no difference cuz its so close to slider's tail
00:10:176 (4) - ^ lol pls atleast make the red anchor closer to the middle of slider
00:12:612 (4) - ^
00:19:617 (4,5) - fix blanket xdddd
00:51:140 (3) - slider curve thing
00:57:079 (6,1) - blanket dude

[Hard]

00:49:465 (7,8,9,10) - dont stack this the claps should be jumps cuz they're strong.
00:52:054 (7,8) - ^
01:05:759 (6) - nc this i think 10 note combo is too much for a hard diff
01:15:353 (4,5,6) - since hard diff is fine with inconstant spacing, maybe make these jump bit bigger to emphasize the finish hitsound
01:24:490 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^ could emphasize here too they're pretty strong imo and its the end of map

[First Impact]

you might have to make this over 5* for the diff spread consistencyyy
00:07:435 (1) - this is strong so should be a jump dont stack
00:22:054 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - ugly star shape imo
00:27:231 (2) - move this further up dont overlap
00:47:638 (1,3) - dont overlap just make bigger jump
00:58:297 (2,3) - could just stack on 00:56:775 (6) - looks cleaner imo
01:02:105 (1) - this is strong lol

thats it gl :3

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2015-12-22T12:01:09+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
dude hi

[Easy]
00:11:698 (2) - this dont fit well imo the reverse arrow is mapped on nothing, o_O listen carefully dood
00:26:318 (4) - flip this upside down would flow better imo nah i like it as it is
00:27:536 (2) - make this slider change its direction on slidertick will make more sense http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4182154
00:57:079 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:02:866 (2,3) - ctrl+g fits more imo (the vocal)
01:20:074 (2,3) - blanket
[Normal]
00:03:679 (3) - just make a straight slider the curve almost makes no difference cuz its so close to slider's tail i moved the anchor point a bit
00:10:176 (4) - ^ lol pls atleast make the red anchor closer to the middle of slider
00:12:612 (4) - ^
00:19:617 (4,5) - fix blanket xdddd
00:51:140 (3) - slider curve thing
00:57:079 (6,1) - blanket dude
[Hard]
00:49:465 (7,8,9,10) - dont stack this the claps should be jumps cuz they're strong. i cant make more jumps for this hard diff x)
00:52:054 (7,8) - ^
01:05:759 (6) - nc this i think 10 note combo is too much for a hard diff
01:15:353 (4,5,6) - since hard diff is fine with inconstant spacing, maybe make these jump bit bigger to emphasize the finish hitsound
01:24:490 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^ could emphasize here too they're pretty strong imo and its the end of map
[First Impact]
you might have to make this over 5* for the diff spread consistencyyy
00:07:435 (1) - this is strong so should be a jump dont stack its more cool stacked ;w;
00:22:054 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - ugly star shape imo
00:27:231 (2) - move this further up dont overlap
00:47:638 (1,3) - dont overlap just make bigger jump nah this one is okey
00:58:297 (2,3) - could just stack on 00:56:775 (6) - looks cleaner imo
01:02:105 (1) - this is strong lol i cant separate them since its 1/4
thats it gl :3

No reply=fixed
Thanks for the mod 0/

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2015-12-23T09:09:02+00:00

First Impact

00:22:511 (6,7,8,9) - Make this star pattern better
00:31:039 (2,3) - oh i think they didn't stacked perfectly
00:39:795 - umm i didn't feel necessity of note
00:42:536 (5) - ^
00:45:658 (2) - Move this note a little above
00:48:247 (3) - uh, how about avoiding overlapping with (1)?
00:49:465 (3) - Move this a bit down
00:49:922 (1) - ^
00:49:922 (1,2,3) - fix like this

00:54:490 (5) - x256 y364
00:54:643 (6) - Stack on (1) perfectly
00:58:450 (3,4) - Make a distance same as (4) and (5)
01:03:932 (4) - x244 y188
01:06:673 (6,7) - I didn't want to overlap this
01:08:044 (4) - Make better blanket
01:08:805 (8) - How about changing this slider to notes??
01:16:876 (5) - Why don't you add NC here?
01:22:967 (6) - ^
01:25:099 (1,2,3) - I suggest some flow I fixed patterns roughly. If you fix it like my suggestion, you should fix 01:26:013 (4,5,6,7) - too xD

Sotark's Insane

00:12:003 (6) - 00:12:612 (2) - Copy/paste 00:12:308 (1,1) - and use ctrl+shift+R for your pattern
00:22:054 (5,6) - I think it's too close
00:23:120 (1,2) - Avoid overlapping ;w;
00:40:328 (1,2,3,4) - it's better to make the distance
00:54:033 (2) - Stack on 00:53:120 (3) - 's tail perfectly
01:03:932 (4,5,6,7) - it may confuse some players, so i recommend you to fix them
01:08:957 (3) - Give some variety to this slider.. like ctrl+G?
01:13:830 (5,7) - two circles' spacing is not same as 01:13:678 (4,6) -
01:21:369 (6) - Change this to notes

Light Insane

00:14:744 (7) - Remove NC
01:04:541 (1) - It's tilted a little left. i felt awkward
01:13:221 (1) - Remove NC

Hard

01:03:704 (7) - why did you use tripple? i don't think it's not necessary

Hard is just fine xD

Sorry to be late ;w;

BriedisLT

46 posts

Joined August 2013

BriedisLT 2015-12-23T17:46:31+00:00

Hey,
right, firstly,
around 00:04:304 - I can clearly hear audio fragments, i.e. bad quality (basically digitalised sound waves are out of the spectrum, lowering the sound on something like Audacity will help in Effect->Amplify and it will automatically set the value to which it doesn't artifact. Of course, an easier way would be just to download a better quality one and replace, since the notes won't move). I can't stand that.

Hard

Everything looks nice while playing HDDT only the BPM is really high. But there's a compromise with the spacing so everything works out, great job!
Nothing else, move along.

Light Insane

Nit picking:
00:46:648 (6,7,8,9,10) - considering the high BPM, streams at this star rating with this speed are really hard for lower players to make. Keep in mind for whom (the target player skill) you're mapping. This applies to every stream on this difficulty. You might want to give this map to players with lower skill to see and test for yourself, since I'm only speculating.
00:22:967 (9) - 00:39:262 (7) - 01:26:165 (5) - random note under a circle, doesn't feel that consistent, although, you might want to leave it. See if it corresponds to the rhythm.
00:49:618 (8,10) - claps - this means that the note is "stronger" and yet still it's in the same pattern as the less stronger ones.
Overall, good job on the map, it's well-made.

Sotarks' Insane

00:23:577 (2) - 01:07:739 (3) - this can be made not to overlap, no big difference, though
some parts are
00:40:328 (1) - potentially too far, since it also looking towards the last note is extra difficulty to hit.
Nothing else really wrong, good job!

First Impact

00:32:257 - missed triple hat, it bothers me, yes.
and all the other hats, I understand that the map doesn't emphasises it, but in my opinion, it would be better to map according to the hats rather than the voice during the calmer areas. You can of course do a mixture of those
00:46:648 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - first stream and it's not so linear, I hate streams overall, but at least do streams from the easiest pattern to the hardest? something like 01:10:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - on the start and something more curvy later.

Not much else to say, the mapping is top-notch.

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2015-12-25T15:57:50+00:00

m4m reply from my queue

General
I fixed some small delay/"unresponsiveness" on two of you hitsounds, try those:
http://puu.sh/m8aLk/f112be3151.zip
Why are hard to Extra all HP6? It is a difficulty setting and should be used like that and not having 4 diffs from 3-5* with the same drain

First Impact
00:04:772 - this is clearly stronger, yet not clickable try around with some different rhythms here, would be more interesting than just keeping solely focused on the guitar when there is so much going on
00:05:866 - this seriously need to be clickable, mnaybe try sth like this http://i.imgur.com/LxclLB3.jpg fits the music way better and 00:06:179 (1) - shouldnt be stacked with before anyways as that makes no sense with the music

00:07:435 (1) - seriously, do you think this is a suitable hitsound for a low piano sound? A low quality gunshot fx? please reconsider

00:21:140 (2,3,4) - dont ignore the piano here, sliderends feel unfitting for this, you should really map this to 1/2 + why is 00:22:358 - a sliderend? it is a very strong drum + piano sound, even if you dont change 2-3-4 (which I still recommend) change this
00:28:526 - not 1/4 here, makes it feel overmapped. at least mute sliderend

00:29:059 - with such audible 1/2 this feels to empty, try sth like this, will still follow vocals and fit better: http://i.imgur.com/MDU5eGO.jpg

00:29:668 (5,6,7,8) - is there any logic behind that spacing? at least not for me

00:36:673 (4,6) - these feel really plain for such distorded guitar sound, try making some interesting shapes http://i.imgur.com/jwCkSsC.jpg
but actually 00:37:282 (6) - compeltely disregards the strong drums so it feels weird anyways

00:38:196 (2,4) - once you mapped the strong drum properly (clickable) then it is on a sliderend, that makes no sense consistency wise and musically
same goes for 00:42:764 (1,4) - and many others

00:46:648 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this feels way too overmapped, there are no drum hits on 00:46:800 (4) - 00:47:105 (8) - 00:47:409 (12) -
this is much more fitting http://i.imgur.com/meiZbjn.jpg
then you could also add a change in flow/direction on 00:47:181 - which would go really nice with how the guitar changes

00:52:815 - even if I said it before, this is one of the worst cases of unfitting sliderends. A strong drum beat and new vocal? happen very often in this part especially. You should understand what I mean already so no more mentioning them
also, do you really want to cover like every downbeat with those 1/1 sliders? they dont even go that wel lwith the vocals...

00:56:546 (3) - completely overmapped again
also I guess you wanted a blanket, but autostacking really makes it look bad, so arrange it differently
with the new rhythm you could try sth like suqare => triangle wihich plays really nice http://i.imgur.com/ijI5rmB.jpg

00:58:754 - feels unfitting for the guitar
00:57:384 (1) - is kinda okay cause at least it goes with the vocals
but here you should try sth tha actually makes it clickable (and a slider doesnt really fit here anyways) http://i.imgur.com/EacmpAK.jpg

01:01:495 - so why does 01:01:648 (1) - not start here? where the vocals start? since that is clearly what you mapped it to
01:11:165 (4) - no 1/4 here

01:25:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - there a re loud drums here on every 1/2, this is clearly a versy intense ending, you map a second Insane after a 4.7* one and still make it this underwhelming? No you don't have to throw some 6* ending on it, but actually clickable 1/2 and some spacing would be such much better with the song + probably even more spacing for 01:26:013 (4,5,6,7) - as it gets even more intense, could also spam claps to fit with the music

Light Insane
Well ,the whole diff basically has the same rhythm and sliderend issues as your Extra, so no point writing everything again
basically go through the Extramod and check the stuff here too, good example is piano on 00:21:140 (2,3,4) -
or the overmapped 1/4 like osme after this: 00:46:419 (5) -
why such a long hold slider 01:16:267 (7) - at least split it like on Extra or sth
01:25:709 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wow, you mapped more 1/2 than on extra here (also spacing and 1/2 stuff from this spot from extra applies here too)
00:32:866 (6,1) - are both strong audible sounds and should not be stacked
=> actually a bit betetr executed on extra

Hard
same problems as above, but more forgiveable here as it is only a hard and you can't throw around with singletaps/jumps here at this bpm
00:32:714 (5,6,1) - this spacing is more confusing than anything else and doesnt make much sense with the music anyways
00:32:866 (6,1) - are both strong audible sounds and should not be stacked => see light insane

easy
01:10:785 (3) - path might be a bit too curvy for a lowest diff

normal/easy seem kinda okay with some more polishing

hope it could help and good luck

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2015-12-31T14:11:29+00:00

General

Inconsistency in Combo Colors, in all diffs.
Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped in Hard difficulty: 00:49:364

Celsius's Extra

00:00:109 - 00:01:214 - this whole first part should be like: http://puu.sh/meNvF/f97fffd0ac.png | http://puu.sh/meNwc/7b6991f8e4.png So the slider should start here 00:00:161 - to fit the music since there's no sound at the red line.
00:00:345 - If you want to map to the drums too, you should add circles here: http://puu.sh/meOb7/7b75814e11.png
00:10:056 (1) - Move down to x:404 y:294, makes more sense imo.
00:36:424 (4) - Move a little bit up? Like: http://puu.sh/meOxx/b187e25b61.png
00:48:740 (3) - NC?
00:53:635 (3,5) - Fix blanket, so it blankets more properly.
01:26:951 (3) - Move this more to the right to avoid sliderbreak: http://puu.sh/meOHP/4d43a64822.png

-Yuzurihara's Insane

00:00:109 - Should be like: http://puu.sh/meOM4/1088fa67d8.png | http://puu.sh/meOMR/e624f61ebb.png to fit the music since there's no sound at the red line.
00:02:951 (2) - Fix this slider like this: http://puu.sh/meORf/88f568a30b.png for better flow maybe?
00:07:056 (3) - Ctrl+G? Makes a better flow imo.
00:16:766 (2) - Please delete, there's no sound here to support it.
00:49:845 (3) - NC, 00:50:319 (5) - NC, to fix the misreading of 1/2.
01:01:530 (2,1) - Please avoid this tiny overlap.
01:06:898 (1) - Mute end?
01:08:161 (1) - Same as above.

Insane

00:00:109 - Please change this to something like: http://puu.sh/mePc2/e0697d9786.png Because there's no sound at 00:00:109 - to support, and it's 1/6 streams from 00:00:161 - to 00:00:319 -
00:05:635 (4,5) - This part isn't really supporting to the music/fits with the music very well. Feels kinda random to play, so you should move around with things and make it play like: http://puu.sh/mePiT/8575a3c7db.png
00:12:582 (1,2,3) - Same a above, just change it like: http://puu.sh/mePlw/f4fbe64eaf.png
00:15:109 (1,2) - Same as above, this is to make the mapping fit more with the music.
00:20:635 (5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, 00:20:951 (6) - NC to fix it, or move it to x:336 y:176 and select these 00:20:951 (6,7) - then move it a bit down like: http://puu.sh/mePqk/310482c9f9.png
00:21:582 (3,4) - Why suddenly low spacing when the song get's more intense from here to here? 00:22:845 -
00:21:740 (4,5) - Same as above.
00:22:372 (7,8) - Same.
00:38:003 (1) - Mute end?
00:49:372 (1,2,1,2) - Imo, these jumps are way too big for the diff, it should be more consistent, so please make it smaller.
00:50:477 (2) - Mute end?
00:57:503 (7) - Delete, it's overmapped.
01:03:187 (6) - Same as above.
01:05:082 (4) - Same.
01:13:845 (4) - Convert this to two circles to make it more fit with the music?

Well... Not to be strict or anything, but this needs more mods, and improvements to make it fit in the ranked maps. Some jumps and streams are randomly placed in the map, and overmapped like: 00:53:082 (2) - 00:53:714 (6) - 00:05:319 (2,3) - This is like only happening one time in the whole map, the jump is awkward and shouldn't be so big. Sorry for bad words, but welp. I hope you have the motivation to improve these, and make it fit more for ranking Good luck!

Feedback

Nice map and all, i like the anime too lol. Good luck o/

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2015-12-31T15:48:30+00:00

#modreq

First Impact

00:28:145 (1) - i think 1/2 is enuff
00:35:303 - bass continues here so i think 00:35:150 (6) - making this into a slider can be good
00:56:470 (2) - i think ncing here for giving impact can be good
01:14:135 (7) - id rather stack here 01:13:830 (5) -
01:26:013 (4) - nc

Insane

00:23:577 (2) - how bout this http://puu.sh/meThs/4fb3814e54.jpg
00:59:820 (1,2,3) - try this. http://puu.sh/meTlD/5c8bca2779.jpg
01:01:648 (1) - and if ur going to do like this, stack 01:01:648 (1) - to the circle 3
01:21:292 (5,6) - a circle is missing imo

Light Insane

00:46:724 - considering the diff, decreasing spacing or smth like this http://puu.sh/meTz3/088ee89ed2.jpg is needed imo
01:11:013 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - same
01:26:013 (4,5,6,7) - finish on 4, all clap

Hard

00:57:231 (8) - this one might flow better http://puu.sh/meU1e/b88cb79070.jpg
swap nc

Normal

00:26:013 - theres a snare
00:58:754 (3) - remove an arrow and relocate this
01:01:648 - the actual sound is not but lyrics begins with here so i think u can put notes here instead of avoiding blueticks
01:26:013 - how about this http://puu.sh/meUgE/bb1442ad1f.jpg or two 1/2s?

Easy
-

gl

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2015-12-31T16:03:00+00:00

oh, oops
posted mod on wrong map D:

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2015-12-31T16:22:52+00:00

Kloyd wrote:
#modreq

First Impact
00:28:145 (1) - i think 1/2 is enuff uhh 1/2? i dont think so
00:35:303 - bass continues here so i think 00:35:150 (6) - making this into a slider can be good
00:56:470 (2) - i think ncing here for giving impact can be good
01:14:135 (7) - id rather stack here 01:13:830 (5) -
01:26:013 (4) - nc

Light Insane
00:46:724 - considering the diff, decreasing spacing or smth like this http://puu.sh/meTz3/088ee89ed2.jpg is needed imo since its a light insane i wanted more 1/4 patterns to not let a gap between insane and hard so i think its okey the way it is
01:11:013 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - same ^
01:26:013 (4,5,6,7) - finish on 4, all clap

Hard
00:57:231 (8) - this one might flow better http://puu.sh/meU1e/b88cb79070.jpg might, but i think its too simple in term of placing
swap nc wat notes? xD

Normal
00:26:013 - theres a snare
00:58:754 (3) - remove an arrow and relocate this
01:01:648 - the actual sound is not but lyrics begins with here so i think u can put notes here instead of avoiding blueticks uhh i tried but it doesnt sound riight to my ear so id rather not put notes there
01:26:013 - how about this http://puu.sh/meUgE/bb1442ad1f.jpg or two 1/2s? changed in a diffrent way

Easy
-

gl

No reply= fixed
Thanks so much!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-01-02T10:23:32+00:00

Can i buy Sotark's mapping? x) Here's my staaar

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2016-01-02T11:31:43+00:00

Jana Marie wrote:
Can i buy Sotark's mapping? x) Here's my staaar

Sotarks is only miiine

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-01-02T12:16:31+00:00

HB24 wrote:
Jana Marie wrote:
Can i buy Sotark's mapping? x) Here's my staaar
Sotarks is only miiine

fudge ._.

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-01-02T14:34:43+00:00

General

There's a file you don't use: TV.flv - Consider using it.

First Impact

00:02:897 (3,4) - These two should switch places to fit the song more, like you did here at first 00:00:554 (1,2,3)
00:09:566 (5) - Ctrl+G?
00:15:810 (1,2) - Maybe do something like: http://puu.sh/mgT4W/0591a158b9.png For better flow?
00:28:145 (1,2) - This stacking is kinda weird, don't you think?
00:37:282 (6) - This should be a 1/2 slider because there's a sound here 00:37:435 - and then add a circle here 00:37:587 - like: http://puu.sh/mgTgB/dd87215f69.png
00:47:028 (7) - Add new combo here.
00:46:419 (1,2,3) - It feels awkward to play when a stream starts from a sliderend like this. Convert the slider to circles instead, feels way better to play.
01:04:084 (5,1) - This doesn't flow well imo, maybe do like you did in some other parts like: http://puu.sh/mgTpf/09db99e545.png
01:09:414 (1,2) - Blacket like: http://puu.sh/mgTrt/fc14c6abd8.png
01:14:744 (2) - Move this a bit more to the left, feels better to start a jump with.

Sotarks' Insane

00:09:262 (5,6) - This flows really bad imo, no offense but imo you should ctrl+g this 00:09:262 (5) - and move it down like: http://puu.sh/mgTBh/165095c77d.png Plays way better imo.
00:37:130 (1) - This should be 1/2, and switched with 00:37:587 (2) - like: http://puu.sh/mgTIH/c895673a72.png Fits, and plays much better.
00:40:176 (5,1) - This jump is way too big and sudden, consider ctrl+g on 00:40:328 (1) - so this whole part 00:40:328 (1,2,3,4) - gets a better pattern.
01:04:541 (1) - Rotate this more like: http://puu.sh/mgTRK/f549ccc2bd.png for a better flow.
01:05:303 (3,4,5) - Stack? The two circles on the sliderhead.

Light Insane

00:30:582 (1) - Not something necessary to change, but maybe curve it a bit like?: http://puu.sh/mgTYa/8b6a63a35d.png
00:46:419 (5,6,7) - I think you know what im going to say here. " It feels awkward to play when a stream starts from a sliderend like this. Convert the slider to circles instead, feels way better to play."
00:56:470 (5) - NC.
01:10:785 (6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:46:419 (5,6,7) -

Hard

01:01:648 (1) - Mute sliderend?

Feedback

Nice map, good luck! ^^

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2016-01-02T21:42:07+00:00

-Tochi wrote:

General
There's a file you don't use: TV.flv - Consider using it.

First Impact
00:02:897 (3,4) - These two should switch places to fit the song more, like you did here at first 00:00:554 (1,2,3)
00:09:566 (5) - Ctrl+G? nah
00:15:810 (1,2) - Maybe do something like: http://puu.sh/mgT4W/0591a158b9.png For better flow?
00:28:145 (1,2) - This stacking is kinda weird, don't you think? its okey imo
00:37:282 (6) - This should be a 1/2 slider because there's a sound here 00:37:435 - and then add a circle here 00:37:587 - like: http://puu.sh/mgTgB/dd87215f69.png
00:47:028 (7) - Add new combo here. why
00:46:419 (1,2,3) - It feels awkward to play when a stream starts from a sliderend like this. Convert the slider to circles instead, feels way better to play.
01:04:084 (5,1) - This doesn't flow well imo, maybe do like you did in some other parts like: http://puu.sh/mgTpf/09db99e545.png
01:09:414 (1,2) - Blacket like: http://puu.sh/mgTrt/fc14c6abd8.png
01:14:744 (2) - Move this a bit more to the left, feels better to start a jump with.

Light Insane
00:30:582 (1) - Not something necessary to change, but maybe curve it a bit like?: http://puu.sh/mgTYa/8b6a63a35d.png i like it the way ut is :3
00:46:419 (5,6,7) - I think you know what im going to say here. " It feels awkward to play when a stream starts from a sliderend like this. Convert the slider to circles instead, feels way better to play." it seems harder for me to to press circles then streams xD maybe ill change idk
00:56:470 (5) - NC.
01:10:785 (6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:46:419 (5,6,7) -

Hard
01:01:648 (1) - Mute sliderend?

Feedback

Nice map, good luck! ^^

No reply=fixed
Thanks for modding!

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-01-04T01:13:37+00:00

Thanks for the mod guys ! :3

My shitmap updated~

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Bull's Eye.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61495
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1491,5866
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Bull's eye
TitleUnicode:Bull's eye
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:HB24
Version:Sotarks' Insane
Source:緋弾のアリアAA
Tags:Aria the Scarlet Ammo Double A AT-X Sotarks
BeatmapID:842815
BeatmapSetID:384588

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Combo3 : 255,168,211
Combo4 : 192,192,192
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Jana Marie wrote:
Can i buy Sotark's mapping? x) Here's my staaar

Haha thanks dude, but my mapping is not so great LOL ^^'

HB24 wrote:
Jana Marie wrote:
Can i buy Sotark's mapping? x) Here's my staaar
Sotarks is only miiine

fck u HB

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-01-06T17:02:43+00:00

[First Impact]
first of all i really like your mapping style c:

00:04:929 (4) - maybe move this note to x0 y288
00:12:003 (5,1) - maybe stack em?

[le insane gd whichs name i forgot ]

00:11:698 (4,5) - make this a back and forth jump too?
00:36:521 (1,2,3,1,2) - dont let them overlap
00:42:155 (2) - ´NC so its easier to read that theres a pause_?
00:50:074 (1,3) - ugly overlap v:
00:52:511 (1,3) - ^
01:24:643 (4,5,6,7,8) - i recommend moving that pattern away since its hard to read after those doubles v:

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2016-01-07T18:45:23+00:00

Hello from my queue,
Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.

Easy

00:27:536 (2) - This is really weird here that you didn't make the strongest beat clicked and just followed by the sliderend, imo when a new part starts, it should be better if you introduduce it with something clickable instead of a sliderend, so you should make this tick clicked 00:28:145 -
And same for 01:16:267 (4) -

Normal

00:12:003 (3) - It's like the same thing i said for easy but there's no new part after this object. I know you're following the melody, but it sounds more logical to use 2 circles instead of this slider because you just followed the strongest beat (on the big white tick) with a sliderend, and for a good impression it should be clicked instead.
00:27:536 (5) - same thing as i said for easy, and also, the current transition between this slider 00:27:536 (5) - and 00:28:602 (1) - is not really a good idea, 00:28:602 (1) - 's direction is on the right when the next one is on the left, the player might not play this slider well to its end, Yiour current transition works well for insane diffs, but it should be avoided for easier diffs. It could be better if you make a better transition, more "linear" if you see what i mean.
00:46:267 - This is the first polarity issue i've seen for now, it could be better if you avoid it so you should make this tick 00:46:267 - player or followed, you can add a circle on it, and it will follow vocals. It will be less confusing for players to find the rhythm, you perfectly used 1/2 to avoid this kind of "white - red 3/2" transition before, so why don't to do it again here ?

I have the impression that the kiai part is less difficult than the part before, i don't really think it's a good thing, the kiai part is more powerful, and there should be more density than before, or at least the same.

Hard

nothing to say

Light Insane

00:24:186 (5) - Same thing as i said for Normal, you should not really just follow the big white tick here 00:24:490 - because it's a strong note, and it will give a better impression if you make it clicked instead.

Sotarks' Insane

00:16:572 (3,4) - I think there should be more distance between 00:16:572 (3,4) - because you mainly use jumps for this map and this pattern doesn't have any antijump like this, plus, 00:16:876 (4) - is powerful, and it would give a better impression if you make it more distant from 00:16:572 (3) -
00:22:054 (5,6,7) - Here I really think the transition could be improved, the motion between (6) and (7) is a little uncomfortable to do because of the little spacing between 00:22:054 (5,6) - . It could be better if you stack 00:22:815 (6) - on 00:23:120 (1) - 's end.
00:27:231 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This plays a little weird because the player expects something powerful, with more distance between objects. You introduced this pattern with fast patterns. It could be better if you increase the distance between 00:27:536 (5,6) - , 00:27:688 (6,7) - .
00:28:602 (2,3) - Imo, they play more naturally if they are stacked.
00:29:668 (2,3,4,5) - This part is a little confusing because the player should be able to read this 00:30:277 (4,5) - as 1/2 when the previous objects have visually the same spacing between them, but not the same gap in timeline.
00:40:328 (1,2,3,4) - They must have more distance between them, they play like weird antijump on anything. If they had consistent and high spacing between them, it would be really nicer, like this 00:42:764 (1,2,3,4) - for example.
01:18:094 (1,2) - The transition here is really weird, because this circle 01:18:399 (2) - doesn't let the player play this slider 01:18:094 (1) - properly, and when he is playing, his motion will be more or less weird and uncomfortable. Just avoid a "right -> left" motion for this case, and it could be better if the circle is on 01:18:094 (1) - 's direction.

First Impact

00:19:008 (3,4,5,6) - Could you explain me why the spacing is so inconsistent here ? I mean, i don't really find any interest in putting a lower spacing between 00:19:313 (5,6) - , it makes this pattern less comfortable to play when playing. It could be really nice if the spacing between 00:19:160 (4,5) - is the same as the spacing between 00:19:313 (5,6) - . it would make more sense.
01:09:414 (1) - Here, as i said for other diffs, you also skipped the big white tick where you can hear a strong beat, and here is a kick sound. I guess it could be better if you make it played in order to give a better impression.

Good mapset overall, but many things have to be improved especially on Sotarks' Insane, and also just see what i said for Normal.
Easy contains a lot of polarity issues (3/2 transition between white and red tick) but i think it's not really avoidable due to the nature of the song, so i guess that's fine.
Good luck ~

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-01-07T19:47:01+00:00

[Sotarks' Mod Reply]

pink = stuff fixed
purple = i take it in consideration but keep it like that for the moment
red = missunderstanding
dark blue = keep my own patern

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello from my queue,
Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.

Sotarks' Insane
00:16:572 (3,4) - I think there should be more distance between 00:16:572 (3,4) - because you mainly use jumps for this map and this pattern doesn't have any antijump like this, plus, 00:16:876 (4) - is powerful, and it would give a better impression if you make it more distant from 00:16:572 (3) - //Okay fixed, good idea here tho.
00:22:054 (5,6,7) - Here I really think the transition could be improved, the motion between (6) and (7) is a little uncomfortable to do because of the little spacing between 00:22:054 (5,6) - . It could be better if you stack 00:22:815 (6) - on 00:23:120 (1) - 's end. //Yeah I agree, done.
00:27:231 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This plays a little weird because the player expects something powerful, with more distance between objects. You introduced this pattern with fast patterns. It could be better if you increase the distance between 00:27:536 (5,6) - , 00:27:688 (6,7) - . //Distance increased.
00:28:602 (2,3) - Imo, they play more naturally if they are stacked. //Stacked
00:29:668 (2,3,4,5) - This part is a little confusing because the player should be able to read this 00:30:277 (4,5) - as 1/2 when the previous objects have visually the same spacing between them, but not the same gap in timeline. //Yeah just saw that while checking the other mod, and I fixed the whole thing...
00:40:328 (1,2,3,4) - They must have more distance between them, they play like weird antijump on anything. If they had consistent and high spacing between them, it would be really nicer, like this 00:42:764 (1,2,3,4) - for example. //Yeah, indeed.
01:18:094 (1,2) - The transition here is really weird, because this circle 01:18:399 (2) - doesn't let the player play this slider 01:18:094 (1) - properly, and when he is playing, his motion will be more or less weird and uncomfortable. Just avoid a "right -> left" motion for this case, and it could be better if the circle is on 01:18:094 (1) - 's direction. //Okay, fixed!

Good mapset overall, but many things have to be improved especially on Sotarks' Insane, and also just see what i said for Normal.
Easy contains a lot of polarity issues (3/2 transition between white and red tick) but i think it's not really avoidable due to the nature of the song, so i guess that's fine.
Good luck ~

Thanks for the very usefull mod CB ! It helped !!

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Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2016-01-07T20:24:10+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello from my queue,
Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.

Easy
00:27:536 (2) - This is really weird here that you didn't make the strongest beat clicked and just followed by the sliderend, imo when a new part starts, it should be better if you introduduce it with something clickable instead of a sliderend, so you should make this tick clicked 00:28:145 -
And same for 01:16:267 (4) -

Normal
00:12:003 (3) - It's like the same thing i said for easy but there's no new part after this object. I know you're following the melody, but it sounds more logical to use 2 circles instead of this slider because you just followed the strongest beat (on the big white tick) with a sliderend, and for a good impression it should be clicked instead.
00:27:536 (5) - same thing as i said for easy, and also, the current transition between this slider 00:27:536 (5) - and 00:28:602 (1) - is not really a good idea, 00:28:602 (1) - 's direction is on the right when the next one is on the left, the player might not play this slider well to its end, Yiour current transition works well for insane diffs, but it should be avoided for easier diffs. It could be better if you make a better transition, more "linear" if you see what i mean.
00:46:267 - This is the first polarity issue i've seen for now, it could be better if you avoid it so you should make this tick 00:46:267 - player or followed, you can add a circle on it, and it will follow vocals. It will be less confusing for players to find the rhythm, you perfectly used 1/2 to avoid this kind of "white - red 3/2" transition before, so why don't to do it again here ?

I have the impression that the kiai part is less difficult than the part before, i don't really think it's a good thing, the kiai part is more powerful, and there should be more density than before, or at least the same. really? i mean there s some hard patterns like 00:49:465 (5,6) - that are exclusively for kiai

Hard

nothing to say

Light Insane
00:24:186 (5) - Same thing as i said for Normal, you should not really just follow the big white tick here 00:24:490 - because it's a strong note, and it will give a better impression if you make it clicked instead.

First Impact
00:19:008 (3,4,5,6) - Could you explain me why the spacing is so inconsistent here ? I mean, i don't really find any interest in putting a lower spacing between 00:19:313 (5,6) - , it makes this pattern less comfortable to play when playing. It could be really nice if the spacing between 00:19:160 (4,5) - is the same as the spacing between 00:19:313 (5,6) - . it would make more sense.
01:09:414 (1) - Here, as i said for other diffs, you also skipped the big white tick where you can hear a strong beat, and here is a kick sound. I guess it could be better if you make it played in order to give a better impression.

Good mapset overall, but many things have to be improved especially on Sotarks' Insane, and also just see what i said for Normal.
Easy contains a lot of polarity issues (3/2 transition between white and red tick) but i think it's not really avoidable due to the nature of the song, so i guess that's fine.
Good luck ~

wow fixed all, litteraly didnt skip a thing thanks for this awesome mod

Last edited by Starset 2016-01-07T21:46:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-01-07T21:20:03+00:00

Checked some rythmn things and other stuff on First Impact diff IRC with HB

SPOILER

22:01 HB24: ;w;
22:01 Sotarks: and also
22:01 Sotarks: i don't like
22:01 Sotarks: one thing
22:01 HB24: ill ask the first one in tunisia to fc this
22:02 Sotarks: 00:39:719 (4,5,6,4,5,6) - 
22:02 Sotarks: this doesn't fit
22:02 Sotarks: to the song
22:02 Sotarks: at all
22:02 Sotarks: worse than your stream
22:02 HB24: u mean not in rythme?
22:02 Sotarks: yeah
22:02 Sotarks: everything
22:03 HB24: 00:39:719 (4,5,6) - this is okey and i like it
22:03 Sotarks: 00:39:719 (4,5,6) - lol dude
22:03 Sotarks: this
22:03 Sotarks: doesn't fit
22:03 Sotarks: to the song
22:03 Sotarks: at all
22:03 HB24: why CB didnt mention it
22:03 Sotarks: 00:39:795 (5) - there is nothing to put a note here
22:03 Sotarks: and
22:03 Sotarks: doesn't mean someone else
22:04 Sotarks: won't notice
22:04 Sotarks: he might doesn't know the song
22:04 Sotarks: the real rythmn
22:04 Sotarks: he just judge the map
22:05 Sotarks: what ever dude
22:05 Sotarks: ^^'
22:05 Sotarks: it's your map
22:05 Sotarks: xD
22:05 HB24: ok ok
22:05 HB24: fixed
22:05 HB24: thanks ^^
22:06 Sotarks: np^^
22:06 Sotarks: 01:10:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
22:06 Sotarks: wait
22:06 Sotarks: 01:10:176 (3,5) - 
22:06 Sotarks: this moove it on the right
22:06 Sotarks: so 5 is making a blanket with the stream
22:07 HB24: sure
22:07 Sotarks: 00:20:683 (1) - curve it so 00:21:140 (2) - can be blanketed.
22:08 HB24: ok
22:08 Sotarks: 00:35:455 (1,2) - Here curve more 1 so u can blanket both sliders
22:08 Sotarks: if you know what I mean
22:09 Sotarks: 00:38:957 (1) - this is bad, because you are ignoring a hard beat here 00:39:110 - I would make it clickable like for real imo
22:10 Sotarks: I think CB didn't judge the rythmn
22:10 Sotarks: only paterns
22:10 Sotarks: 00:43:830 (1) - fck same here
22:10 Sotarks: I know you are following vocals
22:10 Sotarks: vut you can't ignore this beat ...
22:10 HB24: yeah
22:10 HB24: fak
22:11 Sotarks: why u didn't ask me to mod
22:11 Sotarks: ,
22:11 Sotarks: XD
22:11 Sotarks: 00:51:140 (1) - FCK U 
22:11 Sotarks: 00:53:577 (1) - AND AGAIN
22:11 Sotarks: xDDD
22:11 Sotarks: 00:54:795 (1,4) - ^
22:12 HB24: http://puu.sh/mngoc/4f2c5f8bd3.png
22:12 HB24: he only mentione this
22:12 Sotarks: ^^
22:12 Sotarks: well i tell you
22:12 Sotarks: this will 'cause problem
22:12 HB24: yeah
22:12 Sotarks: 'cause QATs and BNs like when rythmn and vocal
22:12 HB24: will fix
22:12 HB24: all
22:12 Sotarks: are followed
22:12 Sotarks: both
22:13 Sotarks: U can ignore white ticks just in few situations
22:13 Sotarks: 00:29:211 (3) - like here its fine
22:13 HB24: ²00:51:140 (1) - i like this slider ;w;
22:13 Sotarks: yeah
22:13 Sotarks: its nice
22:13 Sotarks: :(
22:13 Sotarks: the patern 
22:13 Sotarks: is nice
22:13 Sotarks: dude
22:14 Sotarks: but you know...
22:14 Sotarks: u can't leave it
22:14 Sotarks: xD
22:14 Sotarks: sorry dude xD
22:15 *Sotarks is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/843989 nano - Bull's eye [Light Insane]]
22:15 Sotarks: 00:12:155 (5) - ....
22:15 Sotarks: 00:17:028 (5) - ......
22:16 Sotarks: 00:26:775 (5) - ...............
22:16 Sotarks: 00:38:653 (4,5,6,7) - this is bad flow 
22:17 Sotarks: 01:09:414 (1) - xD
22:17 HB24: since its light insane
22:17 Sotarks: well
22:17 Sotarks: i dunno for light insane
22:17 HB24: shouldnt there be an exeption?
22:17 Sotarks: no idea
22:17 Sotarks: no one will play it
22:17 Sotarks: i'm more focusing on last diff
22:18 Sotarks: 01:15:049 (3) - ctrl g
22:18 Sotarks: 01:26:470 (7) - increase spacing

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2016-01-08T05:39:55+00:00

hi
-first combo color is too fitting with the bg.. use something different so it doesnt blend too much
-soft-hitfinish why are u using the default finish as a custom? it's mostly increasing the osz size}

first impact
-00:07:435 - would u lower the volumen of this hs pls it freaks me out everytime ;;
-00:12:003 (5,6,1,2) - movement is quite awkward here. if you want to keep that slider shape, you should do a flow like these green lines http://puu.sh/mnHK9/48f5929400.jpg cuz orange is bad. i think i'd do something like this if helps as example xd http://puu.sh/mnHOp/0aa3fc12fe.jpg . and the same happens later here 00:51:445 (2,3,4) -
-00:22:511 (6,7,8,9,1) - u could do a better polygon here ;w; even the editor tool is good
-00:28:145 (1) - i'd end it at the white tick instead, even if you want to hold the vocals i think it's easier to play if u use the instruments. especially if you right after do that, 00:29:211 (3) - .
-00:37:739 - increase the volumen of this section pls ><, you clap is hard to hear cuz it's so similar to the song. 60% or so will be good (altho u could rise a bit more the overlall volumen, those 70% to a bit more like 80~ would be ok)
-00:48:704 (5,1) - rhythm doesnt sound well.. ctrl g makes more sense with the vocals, which is what you focus the most i believe
-01:26:470 (4) - add clap, sound good xd
-plays pretty well tbh o

sotarks
-00:19:313 (5,6,1) - the acceleration you do here, isnt too natural to play. rather move 6 to x400y290 for instance or just change the whole thing cuz doubling distance in the same angle isnt nice. i'd say the same for some similar pattern like 00:21:445 (3,4,5) - but uh up to u
-00:37:739 (1,1) - i thought it was extended slider all this time ><.. patterns like this, where next object is too close, work well with extended sliders or 1/1 gaps, but a simple 1/2 isnt good. u should move the second slider somewhere more readable
-01:03:932 (4,5,6,7,1) - u do the same movement twice then change into a slider that doesnt care about the direction you were playing before. basically i say that stuff like http://puu.sh/mnJqE/98a1a9895e.jpg flows better

light sane
-00:04:304 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hitsounds pls
-01:13:221 (1) - cancel nc
-didnt like much how strong cymbals and such arent really emphasized cuz you do this kind of stack 00:13:221 (8,1) - in that section. would be cool if you do something different

hard
-00:26:165 (3,4) - rhythm is mapping nothing i could think of.. ctrl g makes sense with the instruments
-map is straight forward but ar is 8. ar 7 would be a much better choice here

normal
-00:22:054 (1) - nc
-found weird how easy the rhythms became after 01:07:130 - . using mostly 1/1 when you've been using 1/2 a lot. adding some different rhythm atleast on the downbeats would be ok

easy
-01:19:313 (1,2,3) - drums are 1/1 all the time on this aprt. so something like http://puu.sh/mnKxH/46a92afd29.jpg fits better imo

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Starset 2016-01-08T08:22:05+00:00

Milan- wrote:
hi hai hai :3
-first combo color is too fitting with the bg.. use something different so it doesnt blend too much made it brighter, hope its better
-soft-hitfinish why are u using the default finish as a custom? it's mostly increasing the osz size} maybe to force players with skin to hear that sound xDDD

first impact
-00:07:435 - would u lower the volumen of this hs pls it freaks me out everytime ;; xDDD
-00:12:003 (5,6,1,2) - movement is quite awkward here. if you want to keep that slider shape, you should do a flow like these green lines http://puu.sh/mnHK9/48f5929400.jpg cuz orange is bad. i think i'd do something like this if helps as example xd http://puu.sh/mnHOp/0aa3fc12fe.jpg . and the same happens later here 00:51:445 (2,3,4) - okey fixed
-00:22:511 (6,7,8,9,1) - u could do a better polygon here ;w; even the editor tool is good done
-00:28:145 (1) - i'd end it at the white tick instead, even if you want to hold the vocals i think it's easier to play if u use the instruments. especially if you right after do that, 00:29:211 (3) - . sure (i hope the placement is gud tho ;w;)
-00:37:739 - increase the volumen of this section pls ><, you clap is hard to hear cuz it's so similar to the song. 60% or so will be good (altho u could rise a bit more the overlall volumen, those 70% to a bit more like 80~ would be ok) ok
-00:48:704 (5,1) - rhythm doesnt sound well.. ctrl g makes more sense with the vocals, which is what you focus the most i believe a lot told me to not ignore that big white tick so yeah ;w;
-01:26:470 (4) - add clap, sound good xd yes
-plays pretty well tbh o Thank you *-*

light sane
-00:04:304 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - hitsounds pls ok
-01:13:221 (1) - cancel nc ok
-didnt like much how strong cymbals and such arent really emphasized cuz you do this kind of stack 00:13:221 (8,1) - in that section. would be cool if you do something different ill try ;w;

hard
-00:26:165 (3,4) - rhythm is mapping nothing i could think of.. ctrl g makes sense with the instruments yeah fixed
-map is straight forward but ar is 8. ar 7 would be a much better choice here really? i mean theres high bpm so i thought ar8 is the best, anyway ill see

normal
-00:22:054 (1) - nc there s already nc xD
-found weird how easy the rhythms became after 01:07:130 - . using mostly 1/1 when you've been using 1/2 a lot. adding some different rhythm atleast on the downbeats would be ok sure ^^

easy
-01:19:313 (1,2,3) - drums are 1/1 all the time on this aprt. so something like http://puu.sh/mnKxH/46a92afd29.jpg fits better imo okey

Thank you Milan senpai i really appreciate it 0/

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-01-08T22:15:20+00:00

Milan- wrote:
hi

sotarks
-00:19:313 (5,6,1) - the acceleration you do here, isnt too natural to play. rather move 6 to x400y290 for instance or just change the whole thing cuz doubling distance in the same angle isnt nice. i'd say the same for some similar pattern like 00:21:445 (3,4,5) - but uh up to u
-00:37:739 (1,1) - i thought it was extended slider all this time ><.. patterns like this, where next object is too close, work well with extended sliders or 1/1 gaps, but a simple 1/2 isnt good. u should move the second slider somewhere more readable
-01:03:932 (4,5,6,7,1) - u do the same movement twice then change into a slider that doesnt care about the direction you were playing before. basically i say that stuff like http://puu.sh/mnJqE/98a1a9895e.jpg flows better

Hey thanks for the mod Milan, fixed everything!

SPOILER

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416,88,74135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,168,74287,6,0,P|143:125|159:16,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,80,75201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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273,172,75810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,32,75962,1,12,0:0:0:0:
273,172,76115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,76267,5,0,0:0:0:0:
421,153,76343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,191,76419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,231,76495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,144,77181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,77333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,144,77485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,240,77638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,80,77790,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,192,77942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,78018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,78094,6,0,L|408:192,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,96,78399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,0,78551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,112,78704,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,96,78856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,272,79237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,272,79313,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,320,79465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,79617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,336,79770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,352,80074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,368,80379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,224,81445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Zectro wrote:

Zarthbenn wrote:

Electoz wrote:

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Easy

Normal

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General

Easy

Normal

modding assistant wrote:

Deppyforce wrote:

First Impact

Sotark's Insane

Light Insane

Hard

General

Celsius's Extra

-Yuzurihara's Insane

Insane

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Jana Marie wrote:

HB24 wrote:

Jana Marie wrote:

General

First Impact

Sotarks' Insane

Light Insane

Hard

Feedback

-Tochi wrote:

General

First Impact

Light Insane

Hard

Feedback

Jana Marie wrote:

HB24 wrote:

Jana Marie wrote:

Easy

Normal

Hard

Light Insane

Sotarks' Insane

First Impact

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Sotarks' Insane

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Easy

Normal

Hard

Light Insane

First Impact

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