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2015-12-18 20:33 Avishay: lets go
2015-12-18 20:34 Avishay: 00:00:935 (6,7) - is the slight rotation on purpose? it is kinda noticeable and ugly, either make them identical or different
2015-12-18 20:35 Avishay: 00:02:435 (6) - moving the red anchor to x408 y144 will look nicer because the slider is spaced more evenly between 00:01:872 (2,3) - and it is less tight
2015-12-18 20:36 Avishay: 00:03:560 (5,6) - unreasonably close? spacing out would be nice
2015-12-18 20:36 Avishay: 00:03:935 (6,7) - same like at the start
2015-12-18 20:37 Avishay: 00:06:560 (5,6) - egh.. looks like 1/4 spaced sliders, kinda misleading and unnecessary
2015-12-18 20:37 Avishay: well this happends again, so I just wouldn't do this and recommend you to change it
2015-12-18 20:38 Avishay: 00:25:142 (8,1) - that's really weird, the second note is as strong as 00:24:779 (6) - yet the degree and the emphasization are lacking here
2015-12-18 20:39 Avishay: moving it to x256 y232 (just an example so you'll get the idea) will be better
2015-12-18 20:40 Avishay: 00:31:127 (1,2) - I prefer those to not be stacked
2015-12-18 20:41 Avishay: 00:33:830 (8,1,2) - overall weird movement and as before, prefer those to not be stacked
2015-12-18 20:41 Avishay: the shape seems random and should be like have some purpose
2015-12-18 20:41 WISPG_G: about start what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4157007
2015-12-18 20:42 Avishay: it's nice
2015-12-18 20:43 Avishay: 00:35:627 (1) - increasing the SV from here (start lower) would be really really nice, I highly recommend it
2015-12-18 20:43 Avishay: 00:44:114 (8) - is this the best you came up with? not a fan of this slider heh
2015-12-18 20:44 Avishay: 00:50:085 (2,3) - why are those not stacked
2015-12-18 20:44 WISPG_G: nope, i just cant do good sliders)
2015-12-18 20:44 Avishay: 00:56:918 (9) - NC recommended
2015-12-18 20:45 Avishay: 00:57:585 (1,2) - try to be consistent about stacking or not stacking
2015-12-18 20:45 Avishay: will make it look better
2015-12-18 20:45 WISPG_G: in other kiai unstack too, i will fix it
2015-12-18 20:46 Avishay: 01:01:252 (6) - NC, change from 1.5 to 0.75 is brutal
2015-12-18 20:46 Avishay: 01:08:252 (1,2,3,4) - you can probably make something better, seems boring
2015-12-18 20:46 Avishay: the song doesn't really call for it
2015-12-18 20:47 WISPG_G: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4157049
2015-12-18 20:47 WISPG_G: 1.5? are you sure?
2015-12-18 20:47 Avishay: 01:12:251 (5,6,7,8,9) - a star here would be nicer http://puu.sh/m0o4g/34c9582a94.jpg
2015-12-18 20:47 Avishay: I mean
2015-12-18 20:47 Avishay: that because of the SV change
2015-12-18 20:47 Avishay: you should place a NC
2015-12-18 20:47 Avishay: the slider was fine, don't change it
2015-12-18 20:47 Avishay: it goes well with the music
2015-12-18 20:48 WISPG_G: ah, ok
2015-12-18 20:48 Avishay: as for the star, please use ctrl+shift+d to make it look perfect
2015-12-18 20:49 Avishay: 01:14:918 (5,6,7,8,9) - having those blank holes seems meh, rearrange it a bit to make it play and look well: http://puu.sh/m0oaR/c31f040e85.jpg
2015-12-18 20:49 Avishay: 01:19:918 (7,8,9,10) - it's soooo random, it honestly looked like you placed them just because
2015-12-18 20:50 Avishay: having interesting sliders and connections makes stuff fun to play
2015-12-18 20:50 Avishay: it's your job to think about those because yeah the music is kinda repetitive
2015-12-18 20:51 Avishay: 01:21:918 (2,3,4) - this kinda makes no sense, the spacing on the strong note is the smallest, you should always remember that most of the time, having big spacing towards the strongest note is the best
2015-12-18 20:51 Avishay: 01:29:585 (1,5,6) - those are great because of whatever instrument that plays when they start
2015-12-18 20:52 Avishay: 01:32:918 (4) - egh my hears, it's too strogn
2015-12-18 20:52 Avishay: 01:32:585 (3,4,5) - spacing unreasonable like before, try emphasizing the stronger note
2015-12-18 20:53 Avishay: 01:36:251 (7,8,9,10,11) - a star again would be nicer, or some other well done shape, this seems random and weird, at the very least make 8 and 10 not overlap
2015-12-18 20:53 WISPG_G: This strong note 01:32:918 (4) -
2015-12-18 20:53 WISPG_G: ?
2015-12-18 20:53 Avishay: 01:37:418 - that's a pretty strong note ignored
2015-12-18 20:53 Avishay: yes
2015-12-18 20:53 WISPG_G: i didnt mean here or in previos stars, i just placed notes
2015-12-18 20:54 WISPG_G: but may be stars should looks better
2015-12-18 20:54 Avishay: 01:38:751 (7) - two circles would be better in my opinion, with a jump made for the second circle, it's strong, you want the player to press on it
2015-12-18 20:54 Avishay: I know
2015-12-18 20:54 Avishay: but I am suggesting it because it will look better
2015-12-18 20:54 Avishay: you can make other stuff as well, just make it look well
2015-12-18 20:54 WISPG_G: ok
2015-12-18 20:55 Avishay: 01:39:585 (9,1) - I am fine with that, but the movement into the slider is not good, the angle of the slider is not going well with the movement before
2015-12-18 20:55 Avishay: think about the movement as a curve followed from 9
2015-12-18 20:56 Avishay: just an example, this could be better http://puu.sh/m0oBs/80236065db.jpg
2015-12-18 20:56 Avishay: because the player continues the sharp curve quick and fast and it goes nicely, instead of having a weird linear movement into a weird sliderbody
2015-12-18 20:58 WISPG_G: do you will post it in thread? i just cant fix all of it fast
2015-12-18 20:58 Avishay: I guess for now this'll do, I might recheck later
2015-12-18 20:59 Avishay: yeah lol you don't have to respond now
2015-12-18 20:59 Avishay: just go over them in your time
2015-12-18 20:59 Avishay: I'll stop now since I want to play some dota heh
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