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Hi im not really a high experienced mapper but ill try my best :'v

00:13:145 (2) - move the slider to 00:12:974 - and make it reverse
00:16:059 (2) - maybe end this slider at 00:16:231 - and add a circle at 00:16:574 -
00:18:802 (4) - add a circle here and move the slider to 00:18:974 -
00:33:374 (1) - this slider should be longer (end at 00:33:631 - )
00:44:517 (3) - add a triple here?
00:55:317 (7) - make this slider long like 00:33:374 -
02:00:802 (4) - reverse slider here its better
05:15:888 (7) - make this lionger
05:27:545 (1) - this jump isnt necessary..

I hope this help :'v

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi im not really a high experienced mapper but ill try my best :'v

00:13:145 (2) - move the slider to 00:12:974 - and make it reverse
00:16:059 (2) - maybe end this slider at 00:16:231 - and add a circle at 00:16:574 -
00:18:802 (4) - add a circle here and move the slider to 00:18:974 -
00:33:374 (1) - this slider should be longer (end at 00:33:631 - )
00:44:517 (3) - add a triple here?
00:55:317 (7) - make this slider long like 00:33:374 -
02:00:802 (4) - reverse slider here its better
05:15:888 (7) - make this lionger
05:27:545 (1) - this jump isnt necessary..

I hope this help :'v

00:13:145 (2) - move the slider to 00:12:974 - and make it reverse Fixed
00:16:059 (2) - maybe end this slider at 00:16:231 - and add a circle at 00:16:574 - Fixed
00:18:802 (4) - add a circle here and move the slider to 00:18:974 -Fixed
00:33:374 (1) - this slider should be longer (end at 00:33:631 - )Fixed
00:44:517 (3) - add a triple here?Just... just no ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
00:55:317 (7) - make this slider long like 00:33:374 - Fixed
02:00:802 (4) - reverse slider here its better Fixed
05:15:888 (7) - make this lionger Fixed ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
05:27:545 (1) - this jump isnt necessary..Fixed

Hey here is the mod you asked for

00:30:116 (1,2) - I saw you did those sliders during the whole map so i just show one, i think you could space them a little bit
00:44:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool jumps (triangles fanboy)
00:50:345 (3,1,2) - Confusing part, could be spaced a bit
01:13:659 (5,6,7,8) - move the 7 on the right or the 5 on the left, to get something symetrical
01:46:402 (3,4) - put the 3 further from the 4
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I had to say it, I love this stream :3
03:24:802 (4,5,6) - those triples doesn't look good (there are others after, won't point them)
03:44:688 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Triples should be a bit less spaced imo, maybe something like x2.8~x3.0
04:48:459 (1,2,3) - 04:49:317 (5,6,7) - It hurts... You can't know if this is 1/4 the first time you play it, spacing should be reduced a bit
04:53:088 (1,2,3) - ^
04:55:659 (1,2,3) - ^ + hard to aim properly, I won't point this spacing problem anymore
05:09:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That's what i wanted to see

That's all, good luck at ranking this

Nerthar wrote:

Hey here is the mod you asked for

00:30:116 (1,2) - I saw you did those sliders during the whole map so i just show one, i think you could space them a little bit
00:44:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool jumps (triangles fanboy)
00:50:345 (3,1,2) - Confusing part, could be spaced a bit
01:13:659 (5,6,7,8) - move the 7 on the right or the 5 on the left, to get something symetrical
01:46:402 (3,4) - put the 3 further from the 4
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I had to say it, I love this stream :3
03:24:802 (4,5,6) - those triples doesn't look good (there are others after, won't point them)
03:44:688 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Triples should be a bit less spaced imo, maybe something like x2.8~x3.0
04:48:459 (1,2,3) - 04:49:317 (5,6,7) - It hurts... You can't know if this is 1/4 the first time you play it, spacing should be reduced a bit
04:53:088 (1,2,3) - ^
04:55:659 (1,2,3) - ^ + hard to aim properly, I won't point this spacing problem anymore
05:09:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That's what i wanted to see

That's all, good luck at ranking this

All fixed too lazy to make a list and shit

[Black Coffin]
00:37:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - czemu tu są finishe?
00:45:031 (3) - może przesuń to do X:205 Y:88?
00:47:259 (5) - raczej ten slider nie pasuje
01:04:231 (8) - NC
01:22:745 (3,4) - zmiana 01:22:745 (3) na zwykły circle i przeniesienie 01:23:259 (4) do 01:23:088 powinno lepiej pasować
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - em, do czego to jest zmapowane?
02:29:088 (4) - położenie tego slidera jakoś mi nie bardzo pasuje... może spróbuj po prawej go dać
02:45:545 (1) - zakończ ten spinner na 02:46:745
02:46:917 - dodaj tu kółko plz
02:59:431 (1) - ten spinner też się powinien skończyć na white beacie
04:27:545 (2) - dodaj może repeat do tego slidera?
04:28:231 (1) - ten spinner powinien zacząć się na 0:4:28:574
04:52:402 (1) - 04:52:916 (7) - ta część streamu już chyba nie jest potrzebna
05:33:031 (1) - nie żeby coś, ale ten spinner może zabić na HR, jeżeli nie jest to constant 400 RPM :/

Hi MJ! Nice map&song, my advice:
00:37:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove finish sound
00:40:745 (4,5,6) - ^ same
00:42:974 (1) - ^
00:47:259 (5) - not catch up with the song?
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like a spinner is better?
03:20:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ compulsory combos? feel weird while testplay, not match with the sound
03:24:974 (6) - same distance with 03:24:802 (4,5) -
03:26:174 (7) - ^ 03:26:002 (5,6) -

04:17:088 (2) - starts at 04:16:917 (2) - , also add another slider in 04:17:259 (3) -
04:17:945 (6) - add a note

good luck:)

XVoIR wrote:

[Black Coffin]
00:37:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - czemu tu są finishe?
00:45:031 (3) - może przesuń to do X:205 Y:88?
00:47:259 (5) - raczej ten slider nie pasuje
01:04:231 (8) - NC
01:22:745 (3,4) - zmiana 01:22:745 (3) na zwykły circle i przeniesienie 01:23:259 (4) do 01:23:088 powinno lepiej pasować
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - em, do czego to jest zmapowane?
02:29:088 (4) - położenie tego slidera jakoś mi nie bardzo pasuje... może spróbuj po prawej go dać
02:45:545 (1) - zakończ ten spinner na 02:46:745
02:46:917 - dodaj tu kółko plz
02:59:431 (1) - ten spinner też się powinien skończyć na white beacie
04:27:545 (2) - dodaj może repeat do tego slidera?
04:28:231 (1) - ten spinner powinien zacząć się na 0:4:28:574
04:52:402 (1) - 04:52:916 (7) - ta część streamu już chyba nie jest potrzebna
05:33:031 (1) - nie żeby coś, ale ten spinner może zabić na HR, jeżeli nie jest to constant 400 RPM :/

Naprawiłem wszystko (CHYBA) oprócz "02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - em, do czego to jest zmapowane?"; nie chce tu spinnera, tak nieładnie wygląda ;-; A i spinner, skróciłem i początek zamieniłem na stream nie chce tracić draintime

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

Hi MJ! Nice map&song, my advice:
00:37:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove finish sound
00:40:745 (4,5,6) - ^ same
00:42:974 (1) - ^
00:47:259 (5) - not catch up with the song?
02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like a spinner is better?
03:20:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ compulsory combos? feel weird while testplay, not match with the sound
03:24:974 (6) - same distance with 03:24:802 (4,5) -
03:26:174 (7) - ^ 03:26:002 (5,6) -

04:17:088 (2) - starts at 04:16:917 (2) - , also add another slider in 04:17:259 (3) -
04:17:945 (6) - add a note

good luck:)

everything is fixed. I left only that stream,(02:03:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like a spinner is better? ) I feel like spinner doesn't fit there ;w;

Mods

04:16:917 (2,3) - Consider adding a stream to bridge the gap between those two sliders.

Good Job on the map btw. I hope it gets ranked

LostRedX wrote:

Mods

04:16:917 (2,3) - Consider adding a stream to bridge the gap between those two sliders.

Good Job on the map btw. I hope it gets ranked

Lol wtf no

Hi, from #modreqs

Hmm not really much to say about it, nice song and map
Good luck!
EDIT: whoops wrong diff name

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

General

1. Try to not use grid snap too much
2. That's a lot of combo colours dude

Black Coffin

1. 00:12:117 (1,2) - Blanket maybe
2. 00:15:717 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:41:431 (1,2) - Try to make a better blanket
4. 00:51:374 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe a bit too much spaced and not really expected imo
5. 00:54:288 (5,6) - Try to make a better blanket
6. 00:57:374 (7) - Blanket maybe
7. 00:58:231 (1,2,3,4) - Not really expected imo
8. 01:23:088 (4,1) - A bit weird to read but should be fine
9. 01:39:374 (4,5) - Blanket maybe
10. 02:40:231 (4) - Weird to read
11. 05:33:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Maybe start the stream with a low DS and increase it like you did on the other streams

Hmm not really much to say about it, nice song and map
Good luck!
EDIT: whoops wrong diff name

Kudos to you, my friend! Unluckily, I don't have access to any device where I could apply the mod, I will do it just as I will get my laptop back

EDIT: APPLIED

Black Coffin:
00:14:859 (6,1) - You can curve these sliders a bit and place them different way.
00:21:202 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make it more natural, without simple slider and triangles in corners.
00:23:774 (4,5) - You can move "5" a little bit more to the bottom.
00:24:460 (3,4) - Move the circle a bit to the left corner.
00:25:489 (1,2) - These can be curved.
00:29:602 (4) - Too far on the left.
00:30:117 (1,2) - Should be 1/8 notes before "2".
00:30:974 (4,5) - Reverse these notes.
00:32:774 (1,2,3,4) - Space the stream a little bit.
00:34:231 (1,2,3) - Copy/Paste. Edit them.
00:38:345 (3) - Move it to the top/right a bit.
00:41:945 (2) - Ugly slider.
00:42:288 (3,4) - Again, there should be 1/8 notes before "4".
00:45:545 (2,3,4) - Weird shape, rotate the second slider.
00:49:831 (1) - Another ugly slider.
00:50:859 (1,2) - 1/8 before "2".
00:54:802 (6) - Weird slider.
00:56:345 (2,3) - 1/8 before "3"
00:57:374 (7) - Rotate it somehow.
00:58:745 (4,5) - Weird shape.
01:08:688 (2,3) - 1/8 before "3".
01:10:059 (1,2) - Also 1/8 before "2".
01:11:602 (2,3) - 1/8.
01:14:859 (2,3) - 1/8.
01:20:002 (1) - Reverse it.
01:21:374 (1,2) - Boring copy paste, edit.
01:23:774 (1,2) - You know, try to make sliders unique, not simple and random.
01:30:631 (3,4) - 1/8 before "4".
01:32:517 (3,4,5) - Space these objects a bit.
01:34:574 (3,4) - 1/8.
01:42:802 (4,5) - 1/8, also you can make a note after 5 without reverser.
01:46:917 (5,6) - 1/8.
01:54:117 (3,4) - 1/8 again.
01:56:517 (6,7) - Again.
01:58:574 (5,6) - And here.
02:15:545 (5) - Make the slider turned to the previous stream direction without a reverser.
02:16:917 (1,2) - 1/8.
02:19:831 (7,8) - 1/8.
02:21:888 (2,3) - Same here.
02:26:002 (5,6) - And here.
02:29:602 (1,2) - And here.
02:30:802 (1,2) - Here too.
02:32:002 (6,7) - Also.
02:34:231 (7,8) - And heeere

All the rest seems cool, but edit all these sliders for 1/8 notes and it will be nice.
Good luck!

deadpon3 wrote:

Black Coffin:
00:14:859 (6,1) - You can curve these sliders a bit and place them different way.
00:21:202 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make it more natural, without simple slider and triangles in corners.
00:23:774 (4,5) - You can move "5" a little bit more to the bottom.
00:24:460 (3,4) - Move the circle a bit to the left corner.
00:25:489 (1,2) - These can be curved.
00:29:602 (4) - Too far on the left.
00:30:117 (1,2) - Should be 1/8 notes before "2".
00:30:974 (4,5) - Reverse these notes.
00:32:774 (1,2,3,4) - Space the stream a little bit.
00:34:231 (1,2,3) - Copy/Paste. Edit them.
00:38:345 (3) - Move it to the top/right a bit.
00:41:945 (2) - Ugly slider.
00:42:288 (3,4) - Again, there should be 1/8 notes before "4".
00:45:545 (2,3,4) - Weird shape, rotate the second slider.
00:49:831 (1) - Another ugly slider.
00:50:859 (1,2) - 1/8 before "2".
00:54:802 (6) - Weird slider.
00:56:345 (2,3) - 1/8 before "3"
00:57:374 (7) - Rotate it somehow.
00:58:745 (4,5) - Weird shape.
01:08:688 (2,3) - 1/8 before "3".
01:10:059 (1,2) - Also 1/8 before "2".
01:11:602 (2,3) - 1/8.
01:14:859 (2,3) - 1/8.
01:20:002 (1) - Reverse it.
01:21:374 (1,2) - Boring copy paste, edit.
01:23:774 (1,2) - You know, try to make sliders unique, not simple and random.
01:30:631 (3,4) - 1/8 before "4".
01:32:517 (3,4,5) - Space these objects a bit.
01:34:574 (3,4) - 1/8.
01:42:802 (4,5) - 1/8, also you can make a note after 5 without reverser.
01:46:917 (5,6) - 1/8.
01:54:117 (3,4) - 1/8 again.
01:56:517 (6,7) - Again.
01:58:574 (5,6) - And here.
02:15:545 (5) - Make the slider turned to the previous stream direction without a reverser.
02:16:917 (1,2) - 1/8.
02:19:831 (7,8) - 1/8.
02:21:888 (2,3) - Same here.
02:26:002 (5,6) - And here.
02:29:602 (1,2) - And here.
02:30:802 (1,2) - Here too.
02:32:002 (6,7) - Also.
02:34:231 (7,8) - And heeere

All the rest seems cool, but edit all these sliders for 1/8 notes and it will be nice.
Good luck!

żadnych 1/8, nie brzmi dobrze. zmieniłem to, co uważałem za słuszne. Kudos i tak leci

pleb

[general]

1. you got a 1365x768 bg lmao
2. delete that useless osb

[diff]

1. 00:14:859 (6,1) - switch NC. (6) sounds much stronger.
2. 00:16:231 - 00:19:317 - your objects are based on vocal, which makes this beat skipping quite strange.
3. 00:22:145 - to be honest i can't hear anything important on this blue tick.
4. 00:23:088 - welp, personally i don't like using spinner ends for strong beats. That's not clickable, and not as strong as normal circles/sliders.
5. 00:23:260 (1,1,1) - no disrespect, but it seems like your NCing can be improved. placing them constantly will be better.
6. 00:26:517 (5,6) - there's a forced angle on (5), it makes your flow become weird.
7. 00:32:945 - the sound here is not really clear. maybe you should delete the note here.
8. 00:36:117 - 00:36:459 - those strong beats are skipped, and they are obviously not intentional. a slider end is weaker than a slider head.
9. 02:38:517 - the note density around here can be increased. the song is still intense, so low density is not recommended.
10. 04:30:117 (1,3) - reverse arrow block. unrankable.

most of the problem can be applied to the whole map, like strong beats, NCs....etc.
also there are a lot more space for you to use in the grid
and stream shapes, try to combine some different sliders with slider-to-stream tool and make some mind-blowing shapes
it's possible to take a look at the whole map and find more points to fix by yourself.

gl

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

pleb

[general]

1. you got a 1365x768 bg lmao
2. delete that useless osb

[diff]

1. 00:14:859 (6,1) - switch NC. (6) sounds much stronger.
2. 00:16:231 - 00:19:317 - your objects are based on vocal, which makes this beat skipping quite strange.
3. 00:22:145 - to be honest i can't hear anything important on this blue tick.
4. 00:23:088 - welp, personally i don't like using spinner ends for strong beats. That's not clickable, and not as strong as normal circles/sliders.
5. 00:23:260 (1,1,1) - no disrespect, but it seems like your NCing can be improved. placing them constantly will be better.
6. 00:26:517 (5,6) - there's a forced angle on (5), it makes your flow become weird.
7. 00:32:945 - the sound here is not really clear. maybe you should delete the note here.
8. 00:36:117 - 00:36:459 - those strong beats are skipped, and they are obviously not intentional. a slider end is weaker than a slider head.
9. 02:38:517 - the note density around here can be increased. the song is still intense, so low density is not recommended.
10. 04:30:117 (1,3) - reverse arrow block. unrankable.

most of the problem can be applied to the whole map, like strong beats, NCs....etc.
also there are a lot more space for you to use in the grid

image

most of the object are placed at the center of grid

and stream shapes, try to combine some different sliders with slider-to-stream tool and make some mind-blowing shapes
it's possible to take a look at the whole map and find more points to fix by yourself.

gl

Shiiiiiiiit nrg modded my map *eats fame*

[Black coffin]
00:16:659 - Maybe put a small spinner right here.
00:58:917 (5) - Increase repeat by 1.
01:04:231 (1) - Cut this in half and make it a repeating slider.
01:17:259 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - Maybe make this spot like this? http://prnt.sc/a3rzop, http://prnt.sc/a3s05q, http://prnt.sc/a3s0bk
01:19:317 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe add a circle between the sliders like so: http://prnt.sc/a3s0n6
01:24:974 (3) - Add a slider like this: http://prnt.sc/a3s1i7
01:25:659 (2) - ^, but after the circle (2 ticks).
02:00:288 (2) - Add a 2 tick slider here.
02:37:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Instead of what it is now, make it like this: http://prnt.sc/a3s88l
03:35:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like earlier, add a circle between each slider.
04:08:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Turn it into this: http://prnt.sc/a3s7jf
04:16:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Either you forgot or something, but here: http://prnt.sc/a3s97b
05:33:031 (1) - Just make this into an extremely long spinner.

[Side Notes]
Overall, just a ton of additions and combinations, but overall pretty nice. I hope you get ranked!

dark_assassin16 wrote:

[Black coffin]
00:16:659 - Maybe put a small spinner right here.
00:58:917 (5) - Increase repeat by 1.
01:04:231 (1) - Cut this in half and make it a repeating slider.
01:17:259 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - Maybe make this spot like this? http://prnt.sc/a3rzop, http://prnt.sc/a3s05q, http://prnt.sc/a3s0bk
01:19:317 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe add a circle between the sliders like so: http://prnt.sc/a3s0n6
01:24:974 (3) - Add a slider like this: http://prnt.sc/a3s1i7
01:25:659 (2) - ^, but after the circle (2 ticks).
02:00:288 (2) - Add a 2 tick slider here.
02:37:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Instead of what it is now, make it like this: http://prnt.sc/a3s88l
03:35:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like earlier, add a circle between each slider.
04:08:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Turn it into this: http://prnt.sc/a3s7jf
04:16:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Either you forgot or something, but here: http://prnt.sc/a3s97b
05:33:031 (1) - Just make this into an extremely long spinner.

[Side Notes]
Overall, just a ton of additions and combinations, but overall pretty nice. I hope you get ranked!

some parts of this mod are just not, but some are very useful. thanks anyway :3

general: the placing of your 1/4 sliders before 1/2 sliders seems a bit random, im sure there could be some cleaning up being done.
also you sometimes seem to switch between vocal rythm/background rythm, maybe work on that a little

00:58:917 (5) - feels unnatural to me, and 00:59:602 (1,2) - is hard to read with the overlap

01:08:173 (3,1,2,3) - youre mapping vocals here so i would change 3 to a slider and move 1,2,3 1/2th earlier, putting 4 instead of 3 singles after.

01:15:545 (1) - move it away from the slider as theres a break

01:23:088 (4) - ctrl g the slider

02:16:059 (1,2,3,4) - move 1/2 earlier, make 4 a reverse, also move 02:16:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/2 later

03:20:688 (7,8,9,10) - looks a bit messy

03:24:117 - from here on your triples arent equal in spacing, idk if thats intended but it looks a little weird

03:46:059 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these feel forced

04:44:002 (3) - move the slider down a little for better flow

05:33:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i personally wouldnt put a stream here

other than that i really enjoyed the map, good luck to you