Reclaimer wrote:

holy fukn moly I almost forgot xd

General
I think you should work on slider leading especially on the hard and normal diffs (links from hard diff) stuff like 01:55:923 (4,5) 01:55:280 (2,3) 01:48:851 (4,5) 01:58:923 (2,3) etc. don't really look good because A. the circle doesn't lead into the slider well or B. the slider doesn't lead into the circle well, you do have good slider leads like 01:33:209 (2,3) 01:34:923 (2,3) 01:36:637 (2,3) 01:48:209 (2,3) etc. Granted most of them are on purpose and are meant to not lead in a linear fashion but the ones like i linked are just aesthetically unappealing. Fixing these would help your mapset substantially imo. polished cuz things haven't been modded since gaia said "make the slow part bigger space so that way when there's 1/2 it's not a surprise" .-.

Easy

1. 01:28:280 (5,1) - I'm assuming you wanted to emphasize vocals with this spacing but no other notes in this diff have such spacing so it was probably a mistake It's not like I can change ds in lower diffs anyways lol, fixed

Normal

1. 00:31:280 (2,3) - (2) doesnt really lead into (3) well like 00:23:566 (4,1) or 00:33:851 (5,1) do
2. 00:44:137 (3,4) - ^ this one is most likely on purpose but it doesnt really look good imo I like it
3. 01:14:994 (4,1) - Overlap doesn't really fit imo It's structured since it's throughout all kiais n stuff
4. 02:16:709 (4,1) - ^ ^
5. 02:23:780 - Missing a beat here Focused on vocals here
6. 02:26:994 - 02:27:209 - you could add some notes here, pretty big beats to skip 2 beats recovery time for normal
7. 02:40:709 (4,5) - These should be removed like 02:37:280 Well, I made that consistent whenever the vocals was "man (insert w/e lyric)" so basically unchanged, it's done in a way so it's consistent, having there a pause here wouldn't make sense imo
8. 02:50:994 (4,1) - ^^^ Why, there are notes here?
9. 03:35:137 - You could ass a note here for the symbol Consistent with hard, it's also worth noting that I was trying to make there be like moment of pause after all that dubstep to appreciate it lol
10. 03:57:851 (4,1) - ^^ Same as b4

Hard

1. 01:04:709 (5,6) - ctrl+g would flow better A left-right left-right motion is really uncomfortable imo
2. 02:28:280 (6,7,1) - This overlap's ugly I like it
3. 03:26:137 (2) - Having this slider curve like this doesn't support the following stream and negates the flow, reversing the slider like this would flow better nut obviously you would need to move a few things around The thing I'm against for this is because, the whole sound that's the reason for making is go like all curved in stuff happens around that time, combined with the fact that you only really need to go to the curve (not the actual end) to get 100 makes it easy to transition to the stream so I think it should be fine
4. 03:35:137 - Again I think a note here would be nice nah

Done!

I hope the things I pointed out will help you improve your map, good luck! (´・ω ・｀)

11.26 Battle: so like, I asked beatofike if he could look at the christmas map and he bubbled it so ya
11.26 Hinsvar: wow
11.26 Hinsvar: hmm
11.26 Hinsvar: the mapset is entirely mapped by you right
11.26 Battle: yep
11.26 Hinsvar: fine
11.26 Hinsvar: I'll do an IRC mod on the spot
11.26 Hinsvar: and I can qualify it
11.26 Hinsvar: now
11.26 Battle: mkay
11.26 Hinsvar: but first let me redownload just to be safe
11.27 Battle: aight
11.36 Hinsvar: actually
11.36 Hinsvar: how long will you be online
11.36 Battle: long time probs
11.36 Hinsvar: I gotta have my lunch so
11.36 Battle: I'm not sleepy atm but it's 10 pm
11.36 Battle: ah kk
11.36 Hinsvar: k
11.36 Battle: I'll be around dw
11.36 Hinsvar: sure
12.11 *Hinsvar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/839057 Anna Yvette & Popeska - Give Love On Christmas Day (Cover) [Normal]]
12.11 Hinsvar: actually
12.11 Hinsvar: I just realized something
12.11 Hinsvar: this Normal is too intense
12.11 Hinsvar: too much 1/2s without any 1/1 gaps
12.11 Hinsvar: why haven't I realized this ugh
12.11 Battle: idk
12.12 Battle: how should I fix it tho
12.12 Hinsvar: hmm
12.12 Hinsvar: well
12.12 *Hinsvar is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/841426 Rain - Hip Song]
12.12 Hinsvar: we have this map
12.13 Hinsvar: so
12.13 Hinsvar: considering your map's spread
12.13 Hinsvar: it might be passable
12.13 Hinsvar: I hope so
12.13 Hinsvar: we'll leave Normal as is for now
12.13 Battle: mkay
12.13 Battle: can i fix some small visual things since we're like changing stuff up
12.13 Hinsvar: sure
12.14 Hinsvar: do as you wish
12.14 Hinsvar: do tell me tho
12.14 Battle: cuz I just saw something 1.4 instead of 1.5
12.14 Hinsvar: lmao
12.14 Hinsvar: yeah sure
12.15 Battle: 02:02:566 (3,4,1) -  so fixed this
12.15 Battle: on normal
12.15 Hinsvar: ah stacking
12.15 Hinsvar: yeah
12.15 Hinsvar: sure
12.15 Hinsvar: that's ok
12.16 Battle: aaaaand
12.16 Battle: 04:16:280 (5,1,2,3) -  stacked this
12.16 Battle: on hard
12.16 Hinsvar: 02:23:137 (4,5) - xd
12.16 Battle: well I fixed the stack for 5-1
12.16 Hinsvar: (Normal)
12.16 Hinsvar: actually check all the stacks
12.16 Hinsvar: 02:36:851 (3,4) - kinda
12.16 Battle: wait what do i do to 4,5
12.16 Hinsvar: well
12.17 Hinsvar: make them consistent?
12.17 Hinsvar: 1.4x
12.17 Battle: oo
12.17 Hinsvar: 03:54:851 (1,2) - oh and
12.17 Hinsvar: spacing
12.18 Hinsvar: that's all for Normal
12.18 Hinsvar: oh and Easy's perfectly fine
12.18 Hinsvar: I think
12.18 Battle: kk
12.18 Battle: do I upload or?
12.18 *Hinsvar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/839058 Anna Yvette & Popeska - Give Love On Christmas Day (Cover) [Snow]]
12.18 Hinsvar: no
12.19 Hinsvar: lmao
12.19 Hinsvar: let me check this one
12.19 Battle: o lol kk
12.20 Hinsvar: 01:40:280 (3) - I still feel this positioning makes a little too big jump for a Hard diff
12.20 Hinsvar: maybe
12.20 Hinsvar: move this to 268,60
12.21 Battle: kk
12.22 Hinsvar: 02:47:137 (3,4,5,1) - oh and you might want to just make the spacing consistent
12.23 Hinsvar: I don't know why but
12.23 Hinsvar: this just looks
12.23 Hinsvar: unnecessary
12.23 Hinsvar: lemme know what you think
12.23 Hinsvar: up to you
12.23 Battle: hmm
12.23 Battle: yeah I can make it consistent for the
12.23 Battle: re
12.24 Battle: done
12.24 Hinsvar: 03:21:423 (3,4) - also maybe change these to circles
12.24 Hinsvar: these can be deceiving and are supposed to only be used in Insanes
12.24 Hinsvar: 03:26:887 (6,7) - the spacing
12.24 Hinsvar: 03:28:280 (3,4) - oh and yeah you know
12.25 Battle: ah kk
12.25 Hinsvar: 03:29:780 (2,3,4,5) - I'm also really unsure about
12.25 Hinsvar: the jump
12.25 Hinsvar: and the flow here
12.25 Hinsvar: first off the jump from (4) to (5) plays uncomfortably due to how you move around your cursor on 03:29:780 (2,3,4,5) - 
12.26 Battle: should I fix 1 so it points downwards to flow more smoothly?
12.26 Hinsvar: 03:29:994 (3,4,5) - this one is the most problematic regarding flow
12.26 Hinsvar: (1) is ok
12.26 Battle: or should I just reposition 5
12.26 Battle: ah kk
12.26 Hinsvar: yeah
12.27 Battle: [http://puu.sh/m0Y1F/241efb4f39.jpg does this look a little better flow-wise?
12.27 Battle: forgot bracket
12.28 Battle: rip
12.28 Hinsvar: 03:33:637 (5,6,7) - the (7) is overlapped way too much by (5,6)
12.28 Hinsvar: hmm wait
12.28 Hinsvar: that looks ok
12.28 Hinsvar: hmm
12.28 Hinsvar: maybe make (2,3,4,5) look more symmetrical
12.29 Hinsvar: if possible
12.30 Battle: hm
12.30 Battle: idk if I can do that x.x
12.31 Hinsvar: well just attempt to do your best
12.31 Hinsvar: dw
12.32 Battle: kk
12.33 Hinsvar: 03:36:851 (3,4,5) - same as 02:47:137 (3,4,5,1) - 
12.33 Battle: so make symmetrical or fix flow or both?
12.34 Hinsvar: do both if possible
12.34 Battle: kk
12.34 Hinsvar: prioritize the flow
12.34 Hinsvar: 03:57:423 (4) - move to (361,259) for the aesthetics?
12.35 Hinsvar: looks pretty cramped right now
12.35 Hinsvar: 04:15:423 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing inconsistency on (1,2)
12.35 Hinsvar: (just fix stuff while I find more to mod btw)
12.35 Battle: kk
12.36 Hinsvar: actually
12.36 Hinsvar: that's all
12.36 Hinsvar: just check everything
12.37 Battle: kk
12.37 Battle: so should I update now?
12.41 Hinsvar: sure
12.41 Battle: kk
12.42 Battle: done
12.45 Battle: what now btw?
12.45 Hinsvar: redownloading because I'm a paranoid person
12.45 Battle: ah
12.47 Hinsvar: 03:29:780 (2,3,4,5,1) - actually something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4160320 this] is possible
12.47 Hinsvar: you'll just have to play with the positioning a bit
12.48 Hinsvar: 03:30:423 (5) - and do you really need that red node at the end
12.49 Battle: [http://puu.sh/m0YV7/a7880cf983.jpg is this more symmetrical btw?
12.49 Battle: i forgot bracket
12.49 Battle: again
12.49 Battle: z
12.49 Hinsvar: lmao
12.49 Hinsvar: that looks worse tbh
12.49 Hinsvar: but then again this isn't really necessary
12.49 Battle: ;-;
12.49 Hinsvar: I dunno try rotating (2,3,4) CCW
12.49 Hinsvar: 03:57:423 (4,5,1) - inconsistent spacing
12.50 Hinsvar: that'd be all
12.51 Battle: kk
12.52 Battle: slightly rotated (and hopefully made more symmetrical) for triangle thing
12.52 Battle: plus the whole spacing fix
12.53 Hinsvar: sure
12.53 Hinsvar: update now
12.54 Battle: done
12.54 Hinsvar: uh
12.54 Hinsvar: I'm
12.54 Hinsvar: stupid
12.54 Hinsvar: last thing
12.54 Hinsvar: difficulty settings on Easy and Normal are a little too high
12.55 Hinsvar: consider AR3/OD2 for Easy and 5/4 for Normal
12.55 Hinsvar: that'd *really* be all
12.56 Battle: kk updating now
12.56 Battle: done