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Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World
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it's been 2 years since I last modded something, and wasn't that good to begin with, so please have mercy.
for now I will look at Gandalfr's diffs (except Light Insane, because it looks incomplete atm)
[Insane]
having the stack leniency that low is kinda overkill to me. I know it's for symmetry purposes, but it can really be surprising too. nothing wrong with it really, but proper stacking isn't wrong as well. you can always manually stack them to fit the symmetry.
00:36:557 - you could add a note here. the pause here feels kinda long and might get the player to hit earlier by accident
00:39:630 (1,2,3,4) - this part might be confusing because of the overlapping here and slider with a repeat. I would suggest starting with regular hit circles instead
00:48:264 (1) - can you start the spinner at 00:47:094 - instead? if feels like a more solid place to start it at imo
01:00:704 - mind adding a note here?
[Extra]
00:28:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part can be tough because of the overlaps
01:07:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - this part is hella confusing because of all the slider overlaps
01:15:190 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I found this part quite difficult to perform, could just be me though. but is it possible if you can find a more friendlier pattern for this part?
[GandKard]
00:50:606 - how about adding a regular soft hitcircle here in the centre
01:17:533 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - pretty pattern, but looks really difficult because of the overlapping. probably easy if you follow the colors, I'm just too slow
[Brand-new War]
00:39:191 - why not add a note here
01:10:508 (1) - since the stream is going a curvy way, it somehow looks weird when this slider breaks the curvy shape like that
01:18:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wouldn't having the triplet parts right after each-other be better?
01:23:386 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - can you place them so the slider-ends are facing each-other? I find it easier to play them because less awkward movements. something similar to what you did on GandKard 00:58:216 (1,1,1,1) -
01:24:557 (1) - is this spinner really necessary? especially being that long too
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overlapping can sometimes be hard to read, especially if it's happening within a short period of time. so if you can find alternative ways instead, then that would probably be better.
I hope you found this helpful enough, good luck~!
for now I will look at Gandalfr's diffs (except Light Insane, because it looks incomplete atm)
[Insane]
having the stack leniency that low is kinda overkill to me. I know it's for symmetry purposes, but it can really be surprising too. nothing wrong with it really, but proper stacking isn't wrong as well. you can always manually stack them to fit the symmetry.
00:36:557 - you could add a note here. the pause here feels kinda long and might get the player to hit earlier by accident
00:39:630 (1,2,3,4) - this part might be confusing because of the overlapping here and slider with a repeat. I would suggest starting with regular hit circles instead
00:48:264 (1) - can you start the spinner at 00:47:094 - instead? if feels like a more solid place to start it at imo
01:00:704 - mind adding a note here?
[Extra]
00:28:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part can be tough because of the overlaps
01:07:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - this part is hella confusing because of all the slider overlaps
01:15:190 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I found this part quite difficult to perform, could just be me though. but is it possible if you can find a more friendlier pattern for this part?
[GandKard]
00:50:606 - how about adding a regular soft hitcircle here in the centre
01:17:533 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - pretty pattern, but looks really difficult because of the overlapping. probably easy if you follow the colors, I'm just too slow
[Brand-new War]
00:39:191 - why not add a note here
01:10:508 (1) - since the stream is going a curvy way, it somehow looks weird when this slider breaks the curvy shape like that
01:18:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wouldn't having the triplet parts right after each-other be better?
01:23:386 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - can you place them so the slider-ends are facing each-other? I find it easier to play them because less awkward movements. something similar to what you did on GandKard 00:58:216 (1,1,1,1) -
01:24:557 (1) - is this spinner really necessary? especially being that long too
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overlapping can sometimes be hard to read, especially if it's happening within a short period of time. so if you can find alternative ways instead, then that would probably be better.
I hope you found this helpful enough, good luck~!
uh.
Can you just fix the hitsounds of my diff?
Yes I said that you can change everything you'd hated on my work but pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase the other part was obviously wrong like you spammed claps on 01:22:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - aaa
Can you just fix the hitsounds of my diff?
Yes I said that you can change everything you'd hated on my work but pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase the other part was obviously wrong like you spammed claps on 01:22:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - aaa
Lince Cosmico_old
xd desde osu!arg
GD No hitsounds :C
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176,48,60557,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,368,61143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,336,61582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,336,62606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,352,64947,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,65240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,224,67143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,67582,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,320,67728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,176,68313,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,68460,2,0,P|288:336|256:336,1,75.1999988525391
48,320,68899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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252,260,69557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,268,69704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,69777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,69850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,204,69923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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360,148,70069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,70143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,180,70655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,260,70801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,228,71533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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I suck at this game
Topic Starter
Because you didn't used HD HR :^)DavidEd wrote:
I suck at this game
as your req
one diff right? w
good luck
Ser-Vestra Over Complexification
- check aimod and you can pick lots of unsnapped objects.
- 00:04:508 (1,2) - here you have 1/1 gap at 00:04:215 (2,1) - but give similar distance at 00:04:508 (1,2) - to it, so i just suggest you move 00:04:508 (1,2) - together a bit up, to larger the jump at 00:04:215 (2,1) - and make this ds pattern easier to judge.
- 00:19:289 (1,2,3) - idk, maybe these jumps are too large for that quiet part.
- 00:21:045 (4) - still recommend you add nc to notice the sv shifting.
- 00:49:143 (5,6) - you need to make these tapping points really audiable to let players know the hit tick's position, this is a must fix.
- 01:14:752 (6,1) - maybe avoid this ds pattern here, like moving 01:14:752 (6) - to 339,49 or somewhere like that.
- 01:22:216 (1) - hitclap from this note sounds really noisy, i recommend you reduce some a bit.
- personally i think this symm style map is well made, some really large jumps can be a bit overdone? lol thou i'm ok with what you've done to them, let players judge that maybe. :3
good luck
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings wrote:
as your reqone diff right? wSer-Vestra Over Complexification
- check aimod and you can pick lots of unsnapped objects. -Fixed
- 00:04:508 (1,2) - here you have 1/1 gap at 00:04:215 (2,1) - but give similar distance at 00:04:508 (1,2) - to it, so i just suggest you move 00:04:508 (1,2) - together a bit up, to larger the jump at 00:04:215 (2,1) - and make this ds pattern easier to judge. -Fixed
- 00:19:289 (1,2,3) - idk, maybe these jumps are too large for that quiet part. -Fixed
- 00:21:045 (4) - still recommend you add nc to notice the sv shifting. -There is not SV TP ShiftUp
- 00:49:143 (5,6) - you need to make these tapping points really audiable to let players know the hit tick's position, this is a must fix.-Fixed
- 01:14:752 (6,1) - maybe avoid this ds pattern here, like moving 01:14:752 (6) - to 339,49 or somewhere like that.-New idea.No applied
- 01:22:216 (1) - hitclap from this note sounds really noisy, i recommend you reduce some a bit.Fixed
- personally i think this symm style map is well made, some really large jumps can be a bit overdone? lol thou i'm ok with what you've done to them, let players judge that maybe. :3
good luck
where do i start
no pink hair bg??
Ser-Vestra Over Complexification
00:02:021 (1,2) - compared with the rest of the starting section, this spacing feels waaaay too low, it's not like the music gets more silent or anything!
00:04:801 (3) - you may map more after this note imo, since it's a high ass diff you can take in more drum beats
00:09:630 (1) - would make this slider more like this so that it catches the flow a little better
00:18:704 (4,1) - aaaa this overlap
00:19:435 (2,2) - not a secret sacred way to blanket these?
00:34:216 (3) - since the singing changes here, NC this note instead of 00:34:362 (1) - (also big white tick)
00:38:899 (3) - ^^^
00:41:094 (2,3) - should make these tappable imo as it are strong beats
00:42:411 (1) - in this slow section, why are there the clap hitsounds? i don't hear anything that could indicate the claps ;w;
also it sounds weird
00:52:655 (7,1) - this spacing after the jump section is somehow awkward, try increasing it
00:55:582 (1) - on these sliders, the finish+clap hitsound combo is A LOT louder than the rest of the hitsounds + music (put both effects and music on 100% for testing) , consider making them more silent ;w;
they dont fit the rest of the hitsounds that well too imo
01:03:338 (1) - this slider feels really awkward after the star jump, the curve feels really unnatural. would try to make it a straight slider myself, eventho i understand the concept of the stacking
01:04:215 (4) - would make this straight too so it connects a little better to 01:04:508 (5) -
01:10:215 (1,2,3,4) - not sure if you did it but decrease the spacing here because the sound the stream is probs mapped to is getting less strong (or if u did decrease spacing consider decreasing it even more)
01:10:947 (2) - clap hs on sliders like these feels overdone because it doesn't follow the drums that well (and no since the section in the map is not intense or anything i see no reason for it)
01:20:899 (5,6) - would personally switch those around to keep the linear flow going
01:24:557 (1) - doubting whether this spinner is needed :X
thats it okbye!!
no pink hair bg??
Ser-Vestra Over Complexification
00:02:021 (1,2) - compared with the rest of the starting section, this spacing feels waaaay too low, it's not like the music gets more silent or anything!
00:04:801 (3) - you may map more after this note imo, since it's a high ass diff you can take in more drum beats
00:09:630 (1) - would make this slider more like this so that it catches the flow a little better
00:18:704 (4,1) - aaaa this overlap
00:19:435 (2,2) - not a secret sacred way to blanket these?
00:34:216 (3) - since the singing changes here, NC this note instead of 00:34:362 (1) - (also big white tick)
00:38:899 (3) - ^^^
00:41:094 (2,3) - should make these tappable imo as it are strong beats
00:42:411 (1) - in this slow section, why are there the clap hitsounds? i don't hear anything that could indicate the claps ;w;
also it sounds weird
00:52:655 (7,1) - this spacing after the jump section is somehow awkward, try increasing it
00:55:582 (1) - on these sliders, the finish+clap hitsound combo is A LOT louder than the rest of the hitsounds + music (put both effects and music on 100% for testing) , consider making them more silent ;w;
they dont fit the rest of the hitsounds that well too imo
01:03:338 (1) - this slider feels really awkward after the star jump, the curve feels really unnatural. would try to make it a straight slider myself, eventho i understand the concept of the stacking
01:04:215 (4) - would make this straight too so it connects a little better to 01:04:508 (5) -
01:10:215 (1,2,3,4) - not sure if you did it but decrease the spacing here because the sound the stream is probs mapped to is getting less strong (or if u did decrease spacing consider decreasing it even more)
01:10:947 (2) - clap hs on sliders like these feels overdone because it doesn't follow the drums that well (and no since the section in the map is not intense or anything i see no reason for it)
01:20:899 (5,6) - would personally switch those around to keep the linear flow going
01:24:557 (1) - doubting whether this spinner is needed :X
thats it okbye!!
Topic Starter
HighTec wrote:
where do i start
no pink hair bg??
Ser-Vestra Over Complexification
00:02:021 (1,2) - compared with the rest of the starting section, this spacing feels waaaay too low, it's not like the music gets more silent or anything! Thinking
00:04:801 (3) - you may map more after this note imo, since it's a high ass diff you can take in more drum beatsowo
00:09:630 (1) - would make this slider more like this so that it catches the flow a little betterFixed
00:18:704 (4,1) - aaaa this overlap ....?
00:19:435 (2,2) - not a secret sacred way to blanket these?Fixed
00:34:216 (3) - since the singing changes here, NC this note instead of 00:34:362 (1) - (also big white tick)Fixed
00:38:899 (3) - ^^^ ^^^
00:41:094 (2,3) - should make these tappable imo as it are strong beats new idea
00:42:411 (1) - in this slow section, why are there the clap hitsounds? i don't hear anything that could indicate the claps ;w;
also it sounds weird fixed
00:52:655 (7,1) - this spacing after the jump section is somehow awkward, try increasing it o-o
00:55:582 (1) - on these sliders, the finish+clap hitsound combo is A LOT louder than the rest of the hitsounds + music (put both effects and music on 100% for testing) , consider making them more silent ;w;...
they dont fit the rest of the hitsounds that well too imo
01:03:338 (1) - this slider feels really awkward after the star jump, the curve feels really unnatural. would try to make it a straight slider myself, eventho i understand the concept of the stacking o.o
01:04:215 (4) - would make this straight too so it connects a little better to 01:04:508 (5) - ^^^
01:10:215 (1,2,3,4) - not sure if you did it but decrease the spacing here because the sound the stream is probs mapped to is getting less strong (or if u did decrease spacing consider decreasing it even more) ...
01:10:947 (2) - clap hs on sliders like these feels overdone because it doesn't follow the drums that well (and no since the section in the map is not intense or anything i see no reason for it) ........
01:20:899 (5,6) - would personally switch those around to keep the linear flow goingNo
01:24:557 (1) - doubting whether this spinner is needed :X ...... c: ?
thats it okbye!!
[Complexification]
know that i'm not trying to be offensive in any way, i'm just blunt and say what i think of the map
- 00:05:094 - anyone who listens to the song is going to be very confused that there's no note here, i'd really recommend adding one
- 00:09:630 (1) - don't really see a reason to have a hitsound on the end of this slider, the fact that it's 3/4 is enough to get the effect you're looking for
- 00:11:679 (3) - ^
- 00:11:679 (3,4,7) - the misalignment here makes this look like a symmetry mistake, could adjust 4+7 so that this stacks properly
- 00:13:289 (2,3) - ctrl+g here would make this a more intuitive jump pattern
- 00:17:825 (2,3,4) - personally i'd move these outwards just a little bit so that the heads don't touch, but it's minor
- 00:23:679 - recheck hitsounding in this section, it seems very inconsistent when compared to the drum track
- 00:34:216 (1,3) - so i can see that you're trying to make 1 symmetrical with 5 in the pattern before. but what happens here is because of how the patterns are arranged this just looks like a mistake since it's not lined up with 3. i'd move this to the left so that it's symmetrical with 3 instead
- 00:37:435 (4) - again, if you're going to go for a very structured map like this, in order for it to seem really well done you have to be constantly consistent, or consistent in how you break the style. this is out of the box that you started with 00:36:996 (1,2,3) - before so i'm wondering why it's moved outwards for no apparent reason
- 00:38:899 (1,2,3) - same pattern as 00:34:216 (1,3) - so the same point applies
- 01:04:508 (5) - this slider really stood out to me as being out of place stylistically. it'd probably look better if it was more similar to 01:03:338 (1) - or something like that
not much to comment on in terms of playability since it's clearly designed to be a very difficult symmetry map but it's definitely not the worst i've seen so good job on that. just trying to make sure that you're as clear as possible on your structure choices
- 00:12:850 (4) - why is there an extra clap lol
- 00:17:533 (1,3) - is this intentionally stacked off cause it looks pretty...bad
- 00:18:704 (4) - i'd also move this away from 3 so it's not overlapped
- 00:26:460 (2,4) - again just some slider stacking that just ends up looking like a mistake more than intentional
- 00:32:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure you want these triples? you don't have them in your top diff and they seem pretty randomly placed
- 00:40:362 (1,2) - oh man this is a pretty big reading trap, you've been having jumps the whole time here and then you just drop some 1/1 circles in that don't even fit the music that well since the vocal is on 00:40:508 -
- 00:41:825 (1,2,3,4) - this just sounds bad, straight up, i'd remove the finishes
- 00:54:704 (3,4,5,6) - it seems like you trapped yourself into this pattern and ended up just disregarding the music because of it. i'd recommend reworking this to better fit what's going on here in either the vocals or the drum
- 00:57:045 (3,4,5,6) - same here as well
- 01:15:191 - this map isn't even remotely hard until this section. kinda obvious that it's just placed to increase the rating
- 01:19:874 - what why is this a break
- 01:22:216 - this just seems lazy to me
you focus so much on the highest diff that this one is really slipping through. if you ask me this diff needs way more work and/or a remap. focus less on the rating and more on making it a good low tier extra
- wth is that diff name supposed to mean, especially since you call the 4.3 one a light insane in the description but just Insane in the actual name
- 00:08:899 (1,2,3) - this seems really unnecessary, i'd just remove the extra note
- 00:32:460 - try adding a note in here, it'd work out well to fit the music
- 00:34:801 - again, you're skipping strong beats for no good reason in an insane. there's other ways to represent them too rather than just circles, try experimenting more
- 00:57:191 (1) - random nc, can probably be removed
- 01:00:996 - and then here you switched to two bar nc phrasing instead of the one bar that you have been doing. stay consistent
- 01:05:533 (1,2,3) - please don't do this. it's just not fun to play and doesn't make sense. triples starting on white ticks need good song backing or they just feel bad
- 01:17:533 - really big spike in difficulty here with the long stream, try finding a way to break this up instead
- 01:19:874 - like extra, this break just doesn't make sense. should just map through this to the end
- 01:22:216 - and then another lazily done ending. you're better than this
know that i'm not trying to be offensive in any way, i'm just blunt and say what i think of the map
Topic Starter
captin1 wrote:
[Complexification][Extra]
- 00:05:094 - anyone who listens to the song is going to be very confused that there's no note here, i'd really recommend adding one -Fixed
- 00:09:630 (1) - don't really see a reason to have a hitsound on the end of this slider, the fact that it's 3/4 is enough to get the effect you're looking for -Fixed
- 00:11:679 (3) - ^ -Fixed
- 00:11:679 (3,4,7) - the misalignment here makes this look like a symmetry mistake, could adjust 4+7 so that this stacks properly -Fixed
- 00:13:289 (2,3) - ctrl+g here would make this a more intuitive jump pattern -Fixed
- 00:17:825 (2,3,4) - personally i'd move these outwards just a little bit so that the heads don't touch, but it's minor :3
- 00:23:679 - recheck hitsounding in this section, it seems very inconsistent when compared to the drum track -Fixed
- 00:34:216 (1,3) - so i can see that you're trying to make 1 symmetrical with 5 in the pattern before. but what happens here is because of how the patterns are arranged this just looks like a mistake since it's not lined up with 3. i'd move this to the left so that it's symmetrical with 3 instead -Fixed
- 00:37:435 (4) - again, if you're going to go for a very structured map like this, in order for it to seem really well done you have to be constantly consistent, or consistent in how you break the style. this is out of the box that you started with 00:36:996 (1,2,3) - before so i'm wondering why it's moved outwards for no apparent reason -Fixed
- 00:38:899 (1,2,3) - same pattern as 00:34:216 (1,3) - so the same point applies -Fixed
- 01:04:508 (5) - this slider really stood out to me as being out of place stylistically. it'd probably look better if it was more similar to 01:03:338 (1) - or something like that :3
not much to comment on in terms of playability since it's clearly designed to be a very difficult symmetry map but it's definitely not the worst i've seen so good job on that. just trying to make sure that you're as clear as possible on your structure choices[Strong Insane]
- 00:12:850 (4) - why is there an extra clap lol -Fixed
- 00:17:533 (1,3) - is this intentionally stacked off cause it looks pretty...bad Will change
- 00:18:704 (4) - i'd also move this away from 3 so it's not overlapped Will change
- 00:26:460 (2,4) - again just some slider stacking that just ends up looking like a mistake more than intentional Will change
- 00:32:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure you want these triples? you don't have them in your top diff and they seem pretty randomly placed Considering
- 00:40:362 (1,2) - oh man this is a pretty big reading trap, you've been having jumps the whole time here and then you just drop some 1/1 circles in that don't even fit the music that well since the vocal is on 00:40:508 - Will change
- 00:41:825 (1,2,3,4) - this just sounds bad, straight up, i'd remove the finishes -Fixed
- 00:54:704 (3,4,5,6) - it seems like you trapped yourself into this pattern and ended up just disregarding the music because of it. i'd recommend reworking this to better fit what's going on here in either the vocals or the drum Will change
- 00:57:045 (3,4,5,6) - same here as well Will change
- 01:15:191 - this map isn't even remotely hard until this section. kinda obvious that it's just placed to increase the rating :3
- 01:19:874 - what why is this a break Will change
- 01:22:216 - this just seems lazy to me Will change
you focus so much on the highest diff that this one is really slipping through. if you ask me this diff needs way more work and/or a remap. focus less on the rating and more on making it a good low tier extrai think that's enough for now. you get an idea of what i'm getting at i hope, and if you have questions let me know.
- wth is that diff name supposed to mean, especially since you call the 4.3 one a light insane in the description but just Insane in the actual name
- 00:08:899 (1,2,3) - this seems really unnecessary, i'd just remove the extra note -Fixed
- 00:32:460 - try adding a note in here, it'd work out well to fit the music -Fixed
- 00:34:801 - again, you're skipping strong beats for no good reason in an insane. there's other ways to represent them too rather than just circles, try experimenting more Will change
- 00:57:191 (1) - random nc, can probably be removed -Fixed
- 01:00:996 - and then here you switched to two bar nc phrasing instead of the one bar that you have been doing. stay consistent Will change
- 01:05:533 (1,2,3) - please don't do this. it's just not fun to play and doesn't make sense. triples starting on white ticks need good song backing or they just feel bad Will change
- 01:17:533 - really big spike in difficulty here with the long stream, try finding a way to break this up instead :3
- 01:19:874 - like extra, this break just doesn't make sense. should just map through this to the end
- 01:22:216 - and then another lazily done ending. you're better than this
know that i'm not trying to be offensive in any way, i'm just blunt and say what i think of the map
IRC mod c:
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22:38 Gandalfr: ready
22:38 eeezzzeee: 00:01:874 (2,1) - ok the flow is kinda funky here
22:39 eeezzzeee: due to the slider's shape vs the direction of the note before it
22:39 Gandalfr: i understand
22:39 eeezzzeee: maybe you can try like http://puu.sh/pchyg/2aa9fd9364.jpg
22:39 Gandalfr: and..
22:39 Gandalfr: that? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5286992
22:39 Gandalfr: a
22:40 eeezzzeee: yeah that works too
22:40 Gandalfr: okok
22:40 Gandalfr: ok then
22:40 eeezzzeee: hmm
22:40 eeezzzeee: 00:05:825 (2,3,4) -
22:40 eeezzzeee: i dont think triple sounds good here
22:41 eeezzzeee: theres not even any sound on the red even lol
22:41 Gandalfr: I deleted and moved 00:05:825 (2) - to x320 y352
22:42 eeezzzeee: ok
22:42 eeezzzeee: 00:07:874 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - lol uh how to explain
22:43 Gandalfr: :bad flow:
22:43 eeezzzeee: its kinda just not fun
22:43 eeezzzeee: cuz weird flow and really small spacing
22:43 Gandalfr: a
22:44 eeezzzeee: maybe you can even try this http://puu.sh/pchMc/93c1d87098.jpg
22:44 eeezzzeee: if you want them to be touching
22:44 eeezzzeee: or fix into normal stuff so no touching
22:44 Gandalfr: oh
22:44 Gandalfr: I did that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5287007
22:45 eeezzzeee: yep alright perfect
22:45 eeezzzeee: 00:08:752 (1) - no clap needed
22:45 Gandalfr: ok
22:45 eeezzzeee: sorry
22:45 eeezzzeee: not that one
22:45 eeezzzeee: 00:08:460 (3) -
22:46 eeezzzeee: the end of 3
22:46 eeezzzeee: oh also no need to NC on 00:08:313 (1) -
22:47 Gandalfr: a.
22:47 Gandalfr: ok
22:48 eeezzzeee: 00:09:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
22:49 Gandalfr: are fucking overmap
22:49 eeezzzeee: i dont really hear the reason why these are divided into 1,2 1,2 like that lol
22:49 Gandalfr: ok xD
22:49 eeezzzeee: no not that its too big spacing or whatever
22:49 eeezzzeee: but the pattern doesnt make sense to me
22:50 eeezzzeee: if you think about it its the same as before
22:50 Gandalfr: i know
22:50 eeezzzeee: same as this 00:07:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) -
22:50 Gandalfr: Ik, but at this 00:09:631 (1) -
22:51 Gandalfr: I started using symm
22:51 Gandalfr: btw Hakard did the rythm
22:51 Gandalfr: not me xD
22:51 Gandalfr: I just placing
22:51 eeezzzeee: its not as simple as rhythm though
22:51 Gandalfr: ik lol
22:51 eeezzzeee: i mean the pattern of this implies that the music has some thing going
22:51 eeezzzeee: 1,2 1,2 1,2
22:52 Gandalfr: T_T sorry for that
22:52 eeezzzeee: which is not the case xD
22:52 Gandalfr: is a HP map(?
22:52 eeezzzeee: hp?
22:52 Gandalfr: ikr
22:52 Gandalfr: nc = hp
22:52 Gandalfr: last note of combo = HP
22:52 eeezzzeee: oh
22:53 Gandalfr: 1 , (2 gives HP) 1, 2, 3 ,(4 gives HP)
22:53 eeezzzeee: tbh hp should be fine at this point
22:53 Gandalfr: i know haha
22:53 eeezzzeee: there wasnt a break or anything lol
22:53 Gandalfr: HP combo type is for joke maps i guess
22:53 eeezzzeee: so yeah thats my thoughts on this
22:53 Gandalfr: for overmap maps
22:53 Gandalfr: :3;
22:53 eeezzzeee: try to do some sliders too lol
22:53 eeezzzeee: not all circles
22:53 eeezzzeee: to be more similar with previous parts
22:54 Gandalfr: CX
22:54 Gandalfr: cuz are the hakard's rythm
22:54 Gandalfr: I only placed the notes, and gave from
22:54 Gandalfr: but, I ll change it then
22:54 eeezzzeee: ok but this will take some time to fix so do it later xD
22:55 Gandalfr: ok
22:55 eeezzzeee: 00:11:167 (3) - try moving the triple to
22:55 eeezzzeee: 00:11:167 -
22:55 eeezzzeee: oops
22:55 eeezzzeee: 00:11:021 (2) - movee that to 00:11:167 -
22:55 eeezzzeee: i mean
22:55 eeezzzeee: WTF
22:55 eeezzzeee: no im sorry
22:55 Gandalfr: LOL
22:55 eeezzzeee: u know what i mean tho
22:55 Gandalfr: I understand
22:55 Gandalfr: dw haha
22:55 eeezzzeee: put the triple at 00:11:021 -
22:55 eeezzzeee: LOL
22:56 eeezzzeee: sounds better right
22:56 Gandalfr: read
22:56 Gandalfr: y
22:57 eeezzzeee: ok
22:57 eeezzzeee: 00:13:582 (1,2) - swap the nc?
22:57 Gandalfr: I just did it
22:57 Gandalfr: dw
22:57 eeezzzeee: lol
22:57 Gandalfr: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5287059
22:58 eeezzzeee: that works
22:58 Gandalfr: :3
22:58 eeezzzeee: though i was suggesting two triangles
22:58 eeezzzeee: http://puu.sh/pcixp/569723f549.jpg lol
22:58 eeezzzeee: but both is ok
22:58 Gandalfr: haha
22:58 Gandalfr: :3
22:58 eeezzzeee: (my skin is not very good for modding lol)
22:59 eeezzzeee: colors look too similar
22:59 eeezzzeee: lol
22:59 eeezzzeee: ok lets continue
22:59 eeezzzeee: 00:14:313 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - can you just do standard NC's
23:00 Gandalfr: yes
23:00 Gandalfr: the BG circle
23:00 eeezzzeee: or at least
23:00 eeezzzeee: remove these two ncs 00:19:435 (1,1) -
23:00 eeezzzeee: ...
23:00 Gandalfr: ready
23:00 eeezzzeee: 00:19:435 (1) - and 00:20:606 (1) -
23:01 Gandalfr: yes
23:01 Gandalfr: ready
23:01 eeezzzeee: 00:32:606 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - shouldnt be triples imo
23:02 Gandalfr: i know
23:02 eeezzzeee: 00:32:313 (1,2,3) - this one too perhaps
23:02 eeezzzeee: lol
23:03 Gandalfr: ready
23:04 eeezzzeee: 00:32:899 - dont use soft hs
23:04 eeezzzeee: the song is softer but the instruments havent changed lol
23:04 eeezzzeee: just use a lower volume is ok
23:04 Gandalfr: i understand
23:07 eeezzzeee: ready?
23:09 Gandalfr: ofc
23:09 Gandalfr: LOL
23:10 eeezzzeee: uhhh
23:10 eeezzzeee: 00:33:191 - idk the rhythm of this whole section is just too random
23:11 eeezzzeee: 00:33:777 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - sometimes we have 2 triples sometimes only 1 00:34:947 (1,2,3) -
23:12 eeezzzeee: and like this section doesnt even have that many triples tbh
23:12 eeezzzeee: i mean the music
23:16 eeezzzeee: 00:33:045 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ok for this part heres what i come up with http://puu.sh/pcjv3/c3cb08b7dc.jpg
23:17 Gandalfr: ready
23:17 Gandalfr: I deleted major of triple
23:17 eeezzzeee: alright then
23:18 eeezzzeee: 00:52:801 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - argh
23:18 eeezzzeee: so many triples ;_;
23:19 eeezzzeee: its probably overmapped i cant hear the reason for this lol
23:20 eeezzzeee: 01:03:191 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is a similar part of the music
23:20 eeezzzeee: try using that rhythm lol
23:20 Gandalfr: yes
23:20 Gandalfr: hakard overmapped it
23:21 Gandalfr: I ll try then xD
23:21 eeezzzeee: well maybe not the 1/1 slides
23:21 eeezzzeee: hmm
23:21 eeezzzeee: the 1/1 sliders for vocal but vocals are differnt here
23:21 eeezzzeee: ok this might take some time too to come up with anew rhtyhm
23:21 eeezzzeee: so do that later and lets continue xD
23:22 Gandalfr: ok
23:22 eeezzzeee: 00:54:850 (1) - no NC
23:24 Gandalfr: ok
23:24 eeezzzeee: 01:01:874 (4) - try stacking it at 01:02:460 (7) -
23:24 eeezzzeee: cuz this straight line flow is just
23:24 eeezzzeee: its really awkward imo due to how close the sliders are
23:24 eeezzzeee: 01:01:435 (2,6) -
23:25 eeezzzeee: so if 4 is not part of the straight line
23:25 eeezzzeee: it helps a bit
23:25 Gandalfr: fixed
23:26 eeezzzeee: 01:02:460 (7) - i dont recommend using 1/1 reverse slider
23:26 eeezzzeee: cuz the player only clicks once here for that whole time
23:26 eeezzzeee: this part loses a lot of intensity
23:27 Gandalfr: i understand
23:27 eeezzzeee: nothing wrong with the musical aspect but its for gameplay
23:27 Gandalfr: :U
23:28 Gandalfr: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5287149
23:28 eeezzzeee: (y)
23:28 Gandalfr: :3
23:28 Gandalfr: btw
23:28 Gandalfr: how much mods I need for rank that shit set?
23:28 Gandalfr: CX
23:29 eeezzzeee: idk
23:29 Gandalfr: i receivced 6 mods for the overcomplex
23:29 Gandalfr: and 1 for that
23:29 eeezzzeee: it depends more about the quality of the map not the number of mods lol
23:29 eeezzzeee: but lets continue
23:29 Gandalfr: and 3 for insane, extra and others insane
23:29 eeezzzeee: 01:12:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - isnt this a little too easy
23:29 eeezzzeee: lol
23:29 Gandalfr: ok
23:29 Gandalfr: yes
23:30 Gandalfr: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5287156
23:30 eeezzzeee: sure
23:30 eeezzzeee: a little more would be fine too lol
23:31 Gandalfr: ok
23:31 eeezzzeee: 01:15:191 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - uh
23:31 Gandalfr: XD
23:31 eeezzzeee: ok 1,2 is fine for this part
23:31 Gandalfr: cancer pattern
23:31 eeezzzeee: but the design of the pattern
23:31 eeezzzeee: yes
23:32 eeezzzeee: LOL
23:32 Gandalfr: lmaei
23:32 Gandalfr: rolfmaei
23:32 Gandalfr: 01:19:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lazy sliders? :^)
23:34 eeezzzeee: 01:19:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nah this is fine
23:35 eeezzzeee: who cares if its lazy nothing wrong with that
23:35 eeezzzeee: lol
23:35 Gandalfr: LOL
23:35 Gandalfr: ok then
23:35 Gandalfr: if you want, stop modding
23:35 eeezzzeee: ay
23:35 eeezzzeee: i was goung to stop anyway
23:35 eeezzzeee: we are at the end of the song
23:35 eeezzzeee: squares at the end
23:36 Gandalfr: :3
23:36 eeezzzeee: not great but sure np
23:36 Gandalfr: updateing
23:36 eeezzzeee: lol
23:36 Gandalfr: just post
23:36 Gandalfr: and get rek-
23:36 Gandalfr: kds
23:36 eeezzzeee: okie
[Habi Stronger Extra]
HP trop grand >.< J'arrive pas à la passer
HP trop grand >.< J'arrive pas à la passer
Hi Gandalfr. How are you doing?
This is something to keep you going. Note that whatever I say is my own opinion, so you do not have to follow everything I say.
Considering that there are a lot of mods applied on this map, I may focus more on the polishing aspect of mapping.
General
1) You seem to have an extra copy of the song. You can delete it as it increases file size for no useful reason.
2) Consider adding the opening video.
3) Consider using custom combo colours.
Kwan's Amateur
1) 00:00:265 (1) - Being very anal here, but if you look closely, the slider is not symmetrical, as one end of the slider is different from the other end by 1 pixel. Yes I know you may say that 'this is so small that there is no point in changing it' but I think tiny things may add up.
2) 00:09:630 (1,2,1) - Completely optional, but I think that this part should be symmetrical like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5519814 because I think it looks better.
3) 00:21:338 (1) - Considering the previous sliders, such as 00:16:655 (1) and 00:18:996 (1), I think that you should add a hitwhistle on the sliderhead. I do not know whether you intentionally chose not to add a hitwhistle on 00:21:338 (1), or was an oversight?
Either way, I think adding a hitwhistle there is a good touch.
4) 00:52:362 (2,1) - Make the shapes symmetrical, for aesthetic purposes.? Otherwise it is fine.
Forest's Normaler
Fun fact: Normaler is an inflected form of Normal in German, and in Swedish Normaler is an indefinite plural of Normal.
Unfortunately in English, normaler does not sound right, but whatever.
1) The majority of this difficulty is not hitsounded. I assume that you did not finish hitsounding, or you may be copying the hitsounds from another difficulty.
2) This may be too difficulty to play, but I think you should add a note at 00:06:557 because it somehow does not feel right when there is no note being put here.
3) 00:15:191 I assume you did not add this note on purpose? I think there should be a note here because it feels empty without a note.
4) 00:21:338 (1) I feel that a repeating slider does not sound right; I would say a 1/1 slider works better but the current one is alright.
5) 01:16:362 (3,4) - Blanket part seems off.
6) 01:21:630 (5,1) - I assume you are using 0.8x for the whole map, but for this part, I noticed from 01:21:338 (4,5) - the distance between them is 0.67x and from 01:21:630 (5,1) - the distance between them is 0.69x. Please fix.
7) 01:23:679 (4) - Shift this note 1/2 so it is now at 01:23:825. You will see that this 01:23:825 (4,5) - sounds a lot better.
Akitoshi's Hyper
You have some unsnapped objects according to AI mod.
1) 00:02:021 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I like the idea of raising the hitsound volume to reflect the increasing volume of the music, but I think around 00:03:484 you should have the hs volume at 70% because the music starts getting really loud, so have an even louder hitsound to reflect that.
2) 00:16:655 (1) - Considering that at 00:17:825 (4) you use a 3/2 repeating slider to follow the vocals (I assume), shouldn't this (00:16:655 (1)) be a 3/2 repeating slider as well since you can follow the vocals? If you do make the change, then add a note at 00:17:679
3) 00:28:362 (1,2) - For the first slider, you only have a hitfinish, but for the 2nd one you have a hitwhistle and a hitfinish. Is that supposed to be the case, or is it supposed to be the case that both sliders have a hitfinish and a hitwhistle.
- Applies to 00:29:533 (1,2) (in this case slider 1 has a hitfinish and hitwhistle but not slider 2)
- Applies to 00:30:704 (1,2) (no hitfinish or whistle despite the sliders following the same vocal pattern)
4) 00:33:338 (2,3) - Because of the vocal bits here, I think you should emphasize 2 and the sliderhead of 3 by adding a hitwhistle to give this part more punch.
-Applies to 00:34:508 (2,3) -
-Applies to 00:38:021 (2,3) -
5) 00:41:825 (1,2,3,4,1) -
Just to be creative, you can convert this to a star pattern. If you do make sure that 1 is not a new combo.
6) 01:18:704 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't mind having 5 note streams for a hard/hyper, but then when you put it at the end, especially when you do not use 5 note streams anywhere else, I would say that this would catch a few people out as they won't expect it. I would say that if you want to keep this pattern, you have to use it during the beginning or the middle of the song, wherever applicable.
GuineaQ's Hypest
1) 00:12:850 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - The square pattern looks off (looking at the editor) but I assume that is due to the stacked notes. You can try and make the shape look like a perfect square if you want to.
2) 00:19:435 (2,3) - Try and tuck 3 underneath 2 nicely because it looks a lot better. To help you with that, reduce stack leniency
3) 00:33:045 (1,2) - Sliderend of 1 and sliderhead of 2. To emphasize the vocal parts here, add a hitwhistle. It gives this part more punch.
- Applies to 00:34:362 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:37:874 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:39:045 (2,3) -
4) 01:02:606 (2) - I assume you are missing a hitclap?
5) 01:05:533 (4) - Why have a hitclap at the sliderend? I am curious as to why?
6) 01:18:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't mind having 5 note streams for a hard/hyper, but then when you put it at the end, especially when you do not use 5 note streams anywhere else, I would say that this would catch a few people out as they won't expect it. I would say that if you want to keep this pattern, you have to use it during the beginning or the middle of the song, wherever applicable.
Insane
Very very symmetrical map, something that Andrea would have done.
That said, this map took a long time for me to check, since I wanted to confirm that each note is perfectly symmetrical
1) The majority of this difficulty is not hitsounded. I assume that you did not finish hitsounding, or you may be copying the hitsounds from another difficulty.
2) 00:15:484 (4) - Being very anal here, but if you look very very closely, they are not symmetrical, because the y-coordinate of the sliderends are not the same; one end is off from the other end by 1 pixel.
- Applies to 00:18:997 (4) -
- Applies to 00:20:167 (3) -
3) 00:25:728 (3) - Assuming that you want to center the arrow slider, you can see that the red anchor point is not in the center of the map.
- Applies to 00:28:069 (3) -
4) 00:33:923 (2,1) - Not aligned on the same y-coordinate, unless this was intentional.
- Applies to 00:35:094 (2,1) -
- Applies to 00:38:606 (2,1) -
5) 00:42:996 (1,2) - The way slider 2 is positioned, it makes it seem like the blanket is off.
6) 00:55:582 (1,1,1) - I think having 3 different combo colours for this pattern seems unnecessary, unless you did that for aesthetic purposes.
7) 01:13:435 (3,4) - I think you should swap the order of these notes, because the slider can then capture both of the vocals, and the note can capture the strong beat.
8) 01:15:630 (2,3) - Tuck 3 underneath 2 because it looks a lot better.
9) 01:17:825 (3,4) - Not aligned properly. Shift 4 down by 1 pixel so it is now at (361,266)
10) 01:23:972 (1,2,3,4) - If you still want to be symmetrical, this could be an idea: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5520102
Frey's Filler Insane
1) 00:03:777 (4) - Notice how for this part, the music rises sharply in volume. I was thinking that near the end of this slider, you increase the volume of the slider track sharply to reflect the sharp increase in volume.
2) 00:17:533 (5,6) - I think they look better if they are perfectly tucked underneath each other. You have to reduce stack leniency to achieve that though.
- Applies to 00:32:313 (2,3,4,5) (affects 2 and 3)
3) 01:24:264 (3) - I just feel that this should be split into 2 notes instead of a 1/1 slider.
Strong Insane
One thing I want to mention before I continue is that I felt that I was playing your insane, just with larger distances between notes. Apart from 1 or 2 places, there was not much new in terms of the rhythm you offered.
You should ask someone else and see if they share the same sentiments as I do?
1) 00:16:655 (1) - The shape is not symmetrical; if you look closely, one sliderend is off from the other by 1 pixel.
2) 00:32:606 (1) - Missing a hitclap
3) 01:20:445 Curious as to why you leave this section empty?
Chris' Stronger Insane
From Auto Mod:
• Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
00:04:811 {4811}
00:23:689 {23689}
00:51:640 {51640}
01:01:006 {61006}
01:10:518 {70518}
01:19:738 {79738}
1) 00:36:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is quite a reading challenge. I honestly do not know whether I should say that a reading challenge is good in this case or it feels very cluttered and ruins the difficulty?
2) 00:51:191 (2) - The sliderticks ruin the slider for me. I know that there is already a silent sliderslide sound so you are not allowed to have a silent slidertick sound. However, I think they will let you off if you have 1 slider that has no slidertick or sliderslide sound.
Extra
From Automod:
• Object is unsnapped:
00:18:842 {18842} Slider edge
00:21:322 {21322} Slider edge
00:21:768 {21768} Slider edge
• Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
00:04:811 {4811}
00:23:689 {23689}
00:51:640 {51640}
01:01:006 {61006}
01:10:518 {70518}
01:19:738 {79738}
1) 00:24:850 (1,2) - For aesthetic purposes, 2 should be perfectly tucked underneath 1. You will have to lower stack leniency to achieve that though.
- Applies to 00:32:606 (1,2,3,4) -
2) 00:30:411 (4,1,2) - 1 is not tucked underneath 4 properly, so it does not look good.
3) 00:40:069 (2) - Shift to (256,96) so it sits right on the y-axis. Again for aesthetic purposes.
4) 00:42:889 No break section here? Why not map this section?
5) 00:51:338 (3) - Shift the note down to (140,192) so it sits on the x-axis
6) 01:22:801 (1,2,3,4) - Very weird looking diamond pattern. I assume you rotated the previous pattern and scaled it upwards which is why it is not aligned properly?
- Applies to 01:23:972 (1,2,3,4) -
The last section feels like a jump training map.
Edit: Decided to mod some more because why not?
Filler Extra
In a chat you said that the rest of the difficulty will be finished, so I will mod what I currently have.
1) 00:13:435 (1) Shift to (256, 240), lower stack leniency as well because with a high stack leniency, it is hard to get it to align properly.
2) 00:24:557 (1) - Shift this to (296,14) so the sliderend is perfectly tucked underneath 00:24:118 (2)
- Applies to 00:26:899 (1) - Shift to (216,14)
I really cannot say much about the diff.
Ser-Vestra Over Complexification.
1)00:33:045 (1,2,3,4) - You should emphasize the vocal bits here by adding hitwhistles.
- Applies to 00:37:728 (1,2,3,4) -
2) 00:44:752 (3) - You can see the slider is not symmetrical; one end of the slider is different from the other end by 2 pixels.
- Applies to 00:45:923 (1) -
3) 01:09:484 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The egg shaped stream pattern does not look nice. Is there a way you can make the pattern more circular?
4) 01:18:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very odd looking star pattern. You should use the polygon tool to make a star pattern, and then scale it up so you can have the jumps you want, while making it look a lot better.
5) 01:24:557 (1) - I do not know if you need the spinner or not. Even if you keep the spinner, why extend it to 01:28:655? I would say end the spinner at 01:26:899 or even a bit earlier.
Final thoughts
Keep working on this map. Apart from a few niggles and a bit of polishing, you have a nice set of difficulties, and the GD's so far are pretty nice
. Just make sure all the difficulties are properly hitsounded.
Good luck with this set. I apologize in advance if the mod is not satisfactory.
Have a nice day,
RVMathew
This is something to keep you going. Note that whatever I say is my own opinion, so you do not have to follow everything I say.
Considering that there are a lot of mods applied on this map, I may focus more on the polishing aspect of mapping.
General
1) You seem to have an extra copy of the song. You can delete it as it increases file size for no useful reason.
2) Consider adding the opening video.
3) Consider using custom combo colours.
Kwan's Amateur
1) 00:00:265 (1) - Being very anal here, but if you look closely, the slider is not symmetrical, as one end of the slider is different from the other end by 1 pixel. Yes I know you may say that 'this is so small that there is no point in changing it' but I think tiny things may add up.
2) 00:09:630 (1,2,1) - Completely optional, but I think that this part should be symmetrical like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5519814 because I think it looks better.
3) 00:21:338 (1) - Considering the previous sliders, such as 00:16:655 (1) and 00:18:996 (1), I think that you should add a hitwhistle on the sliderhead. I do not know whether you intentionally chose not to add a hitwhistle on 00:21:338 (1), or was an oversight?
Either way, I think adding a hitwhistle there is a good touch.
4) 00:52:362 (2,1) - Make the shapes symmetrical, for aesthetic purposes.? Otherwise it is fine.
Forest's Normaler
Fun fact: Normaler is an inflected form of Normal in German, and in Swedish Normaler is an indefinite plural of Normal.
Unfortunately in English, normaler does not sound right, but whatever.
1) The majority of this difficulty is not hitsounded. I assume that you did not finish hitsounding, or you may be copying the hitsounds from another difficulty.
2) This may be too difficulty to play, but I think you should add a note at 00:06:557 because it somehow does not feel right when there is no note being put here.
3) 00:15:191 I assume you did not add this note on purpose? I think there should be a note here because it feels empty without a note.
4) 00:21:338 (1) I feel that a repeating slider does not sound right; I would say a 1/1 slider works better but the current one is alright.
5) 01:16:362 (3,4) - Blanket part seems off.
6) 01:21:630 (5,1) - I assume you are using 0.8x for the whole map, but for this part, I noticed from 01:21:338 (4,5) - the distance between them is 0.67x and from 01:21:630 (5,1) - the distance between them is 0.69x. Please fix.
7) 01:23:679 (4) - Shift this note 1/2 so it is now at 01:23:825. You will see that this 01:23:825 (4,5) - sounds a lot better.
Akitoshi's Hyper
You have some unsnapped objects according to AI mod.
1) 00:02:021 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I like the idea of raising the hitsound volume to reflect the increasing volume of the music, but I think around 00:03:484 you should have the hs volume at 70% because the music starts getting really loud, so have an even louder hitsound to reflect that.
2) 00:16:655 (1) - Considering that at 00:17:825 (4) you use a 3/2 repeating slider to follow the vocals (I assume), shouldn't this (00:16:655 (1)) be a 3/2 repeating slider as well since you can follow the vocals? If you do make the change, then add a note at 00:17:679
3) 00:28:362 (1,2) - For the first slider, you only have a hitfinish, but for the 2nd one you have a hitwhistle and a hitfinish. Is that supposed to be the case, or is it supposed to be the case that both sliders have a hitfinish and a hitwhistle.
- Applies to 00:29:533 (1,2) (in this case slider 1 has a hitfinish and hitwhistle but not slider 2)
- Applies to 00:30:704 (1,2) (no hitfinish or whistle despite the sliders following the same vocal pattern)
4) 00:33:338 (2,3) - Because of the vocal bits here, I think you should emphasize 2 and the sliderhead of 3 by adding a hitwhistle to give this part more punch.
-Applies to 00:34:508 (2,3) -
-Applies to 00:38:021 (2,3) -
5) 00:41:825 (1,2,3,4,1) -
Just to be creative, you can convert this to a star pattern. If you do make sure that 1 is not a new combo.6) 01:18:704 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't mind having 5 note streams for a hard/hyper, but then when you put it at the end, especially when you do not use 5 note streams anywhere else, I would say that this would catch a few people out as they won't expect it. I would say that if you want to keep this pattern, you have to use it during the beginning or the middle of the song, wherever applicable.
GuineaQ's Hypest
1) 00:12:850 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - The square pattern looks off (looking at the editor) but I assume that is due to the stacked notes. You can try and make the shape look like a perfect square if you want to.
2) 00:19:435 (2,3) - Try and tuck 3 underneath 2 nicely because it looks a lot better. To help you with that, reduce stack leniency
3) 00:33:045 (1,2) - Sliderend of 1 and sliderhead of 2. To emphasize the vocal parts here, add a hitwhistle. It gives this part more punch.
- Applies to 00:34:362 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:37:874 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:39:045 (2,3) -
4) 01:02:606 (2) - I assume you are missing a hitclap?
5) 01:05:533 (4) - Why have a hitclap at the sliderend? I am curious as to why?
6) 01:18:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't mind having 5 note streams for a hard/hyper, but then when you put it at the end, especially when you do not use 5 note streams anywhere else, I would say that this would catch a few people out as they won't expect it. I would say that if you want to keep this pattern, you have to use it during the beginning or the middle of the song, wherever applicable.
Insane
Very very symmetrical map, something that Andrea would have done.
That said, this map took a long time for me to check, since I wanted to confirm that each note is perfectly symmetrical
1) The majority of this difficulty is not hitsounded. I assume that you did not finish hitsounding, or you may be copying the hitsounds from another difficulty.
2) 00:15:484 (4) - Being very anal here, but if you look very very closely, they are not symmetrical, because the y-coordinate of the sliderends are not the same; one end is off from the other end by 1 pixel.
- Applies to 00:18:997 (4) -
- Applies to 00:20:167 (3) -
3) 00:25:728 (3) - Assuming that you want to center the arrow slider, you can see that the red anchor point is not in the center of the map.
- Applies to 00:28:069 (3) -
4) 00:33:923 (2,1) - Not aligned on the same y-coordinate, unless this was intentional.
- Applies to 00:35:094 (2,1) -
- Applies to 00:38:606 (2,1) -
5) 00:42:996 (1,2) - The way slider 2 is positioned, it makes it seem like the blanket is off.
6) 00:55:582 (1,1,1) - I think having 3 different combo colours for this pattern seems unnecessary, unless you did that for aesthetic purposes.
7) 01:13:435 (3,4) - I think you should swap the order of these notes, because the slider can then capture both of the vocals, and the note can capture the strong beat.
8) 01:15:630 (2,3) - Tuck 3 underneath 2 because it looks a lot better.
9) 01:17:825 (3,4) - Not aligned properly. Shift 4 down by 1 pixel so it is now at (361,266)
10) 01:23:972 (1,2,3,4) - If you still want to be symmetrical, this could be an idea: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5520102
Frey's Filler Insane
1) 00:03:777 (4) - Notice how for this part, the music rises sharply in volume. I was thinking that near the end of this slider, you increase the volume of the slider track sharply to reflect the sharp increase in volume.
2) 00:17:533 (5,6) - I think they look better if they are perfectly tucked underneath each other. You have to reduce stack leniency to achieve that though.
- Applies to 00:32:313 (2,3,4,5) (affects 2 and 3)
3) 01:24:264 (3) - I just feel that this should be split into 2 notes instead of a 1/1 slider.
Strong Insane
One thing I want to mention before I continue is that I felt that I was playing your insane, just with larger distances between notes. Apart from 1 or 2 places, there was not much new in terms of the rhythm you offered.
You should ask someone else and see if they share the same sentiments as I do?
1) 00:16:655 (1) - The shape is not symmetrical; if you look closely, one sliderend is off from the other by 1 pixel.
2) 00:32:606 (1) - Missing a hitclap
3) 01:20:445 Curious as to why you leave this section empty?
Chris' Stronger Insane
From Auto Mod:
• Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
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00:23:689 {23689}
00:51:640 {51640}
01:01:006 {61006}
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1) 00:36:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is quite a reading challenge. I honestly do not know whether I should say that a reading challenge is good in this case or it feels very cluttered and ruins the difficulty?
2) 00:51:191 (2) - The sliderticks ruin the slider for me. I know that there is already a silent sliderslide sound so you are not allowed to have a silent slidertick sound. However, I think they will let you off if you have 1 slider that has no slidertick or sliderslide sound.
Extra
From Automod:
• Object is unsnapped:
00:18:842 {18842} Slider edge
00:21:322 {21322} Slider edge
00:21:768 {21768} Slider edge
• Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
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1) 00:24:850 (1,2) - For aesthetic purposes, 2 should be perfectly tucked underneath 1. You will have to lower stack leniency to achieve that though.
- Applies to 00:32:606 (1,2,3,4) -
2) 00:30:411 (4,1,2) - 1 is not tucked underneath 4 properly, so it does not look good.
3) 00:40:069 (2) - Shift to (256,96) so it sits right on the y-axis. Again for aesthetic purposes.
4) 00:42:889 No break section here? Why not map this section?
5) 00:51:338 (3) - Shift the note down to (140,192) so it sits on the x-axis
6) 01:22:801 (1,2,3,4) - Very weird looking diamond pattern. I assume you rotated the previous pattern and scaled it upwards which is why it is not aligned properly?
- Applies to 01:23:972 (1,2,3,4) -
The last section feels like a jump training map.
Edit: Decided to mod some more because why not?
Filler Extra
In a chat you said that the rest of the difficulty will be finished, so I will mod what I currently have.
1) 00:13:435 (1) Shift to (256, 240), lower stack leniency as well because with a high stack leniency, it is hard to get it to align properly.
2) 00:24:557 (1) - Shift this to (296,14) so the sliderend is perfectly tucked underneath 00:24:118 (2)
- Applies to 00:26:899 (1) - Shift to (216,14)
I really cannot say much about the diff.
Ser-Vestra Over Complexification.
1)00:33:045 (1,2,3,4) - You should emphasize the vocal bits here by adding hitwhistles.
- Applies to 00:37:728 (1,2,3,4) -
2) 00:44:752 (3) - You can see the slider is not symmetrical; one end of the slider is different from the other end by 2 pixels.
- Applies to 00:45:923 (1) -
3) 01:09:484 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The egg shaped stream pattern does not look nice. Is there a way you can make the pattern more circular?
4) 01:18:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very odd looking star pattern. You should use the polygon tool to make a star pattern, and then scale it up so you can have the jumps you want, while making it look a lot better.
5) 01:24:557 (1) - I do not know if you need the spinner or not. Even if you keep the spinner, why extend it to 01:28:655? I would say end the spinner at 01:26:899 or even a bit earlier.
Final thoughts
Keep working on this map. Apart from a few niggles and a bit of polishing, you have a nice set of difficulties, and the GD's so far are pretty nice
. Just make sure all the difficulties are properly hitsounded.Good luck with this set. I apologize in advance if the mod is not satisfactory.
Have a nice day,
RVMathew
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it's a ok map for 6 months ago lol
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hitsounds
even if one repeats need to put it in anyway >>.>>>>>>
http://puu.sh/q6T0q/656949f929.rar
http://puu.sh/q6T0q/656949f929.rar
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Topic Starter
Thanks for your workDavidEd wrote:
UPDATE DAVIDEDS EXTRAosu file format v14
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made hard stream easier
fixed hitsounds
minor aethestic changes
lol I didn't noticed mathew's mod until now
i'll answer soon
i'll answer soon
RVMathew wrote:
Frey's Filler Insane
1) 00:03:777 (4) - Notice how for this part, the music rises sharply in volume. I was thinking that near the end of this slider, you increase the volume of the slider track sharply to reflect the sharp increase in volume. nice idea but tbh sliderslide is hard to hear so maybe not.
2) 00:17:533 (5,6) - I think they look better if they are perfectly tucked underneath each other. You have to reduce stack leniency to achieve that though.
- Applies to 00:32:313 (2,3,4,5) (affects 2 and 3) As long as it won't hurt the game-play, it's fine to do it.
3) 01:24:264 (3) - I just feel that this should be split into 2 notes instead of a 1/1 slider. umm, 1/2 is not bad as well
Thanks for your mod!
thank you for mod~RVMathew wrote:
00:00:265 (1) - Being very anal here, but if you look closely, the slider is not symmetrical, as one end of the slider is different from the other end by 1 pixel. Yes I know you may say that 'this is so small that there is no point in changing it' but I think tiny things may add up. i ctrl+h them and find them perfectly symmetrical, so which node are you talking about?
00:09:630 (1,2,1) - Completely optional, but I think that this part should be symmetrical like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5519814 because I think it looks better. that part doesn't give me an impression of symmetry
00:21:338 (1) - Considering the previous sliders, such as 00:16:655 (1) and 00:18:996 (1), I think that you should add a hitwhistle on the sliderhead. I do not know whether you intentionally chose not to add a hitwhistle on 00:21:338 (1), or was an oversight? they sound differently, so i didn't add a whistle
00:52:362 (2,1) - Make the shapes symmetrical, for aesthetic purposes.? Otherwise it is fine. ye i think it's fine, differentiating them is my purpose
Modding almost all diffs on this mapset takes dedication, you should get a cookie for that.RVMathew wrote:
Hi Gandalfr. How are you doing?
This is something to keep you going. Note that whatever I say is my own opinion, so you do not have to follow everything I say.
Considering that there are a lot of mods applied on this map, I may focus more on the polishing aspect of mapping.
General
1) You seem to have an extra copy of the song. You can delete it as it increases file size for no useful reason.
2) Consider adding the opening video.
3) Consider using custom combo colours.
GuineaQ'sHypestLight Insane make up your mind Gandalfr xd
1) 00:12:850 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - The square pattern looks off (looking at the editor) but I assume that is due to the stacked notes. You can try and make the shape look like a perfect square if you want to. They are indeed a bit off if you look at it without stack view
2) 00:19:435 (2,3) - Try and tuck 3 underneath 2 nicely because it looks a lot better. To help you with that, reduce stack leniency redid that specific pattern
3) 00:33:045 (1,2) - Sliderend of 1 and sliderhead of 2. To emphasize the vocal parts here, add a hitwhistle. It gives this part more punch.
- Applies to 00:34:362 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:37:874 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:39:045 (2,3) -
I was actually so damn lazy and let Gandalfr do the hitsounds for me, so any hitsound mod, I'll leave it to Gandalfr's decision.
4) 01:02:606 (2) - I assume you are missing a hitclap? ^
5) 01:05:533 (4) - Why have a hitclap at the sliderend? I am curious as to why? ^
6) 01:18:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't mind having 5 note streams for a hard/hyper, but then when you put it at the end, especially when you do not use 5 note streams anywhere else, I would say that this would catch a few people out as they won't expect it. I would say that if you want to keep this pattern, you have to use it during the beginning or the middle of the song, wherever applicable. Made 00:13:728 (5) - into a stream.
Final thoughts
Keep working on this map. Apart from a few niggles and a bit of polishing, you have a nice set of difficulties, and the GD's so far are pretty nice
Good luck with this set. I apologize in advance if the mod is not satisfactory.
Have a nice day,
RVMathew
You should have messaged me if there was a mod that I should check xd
osu file format v14
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Title:Brand-new World
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Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Gandalfr
Version:guineaQ's Light Insane
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
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Topic Starter
Updated, thanks.guineaQ wrote:
Modding almost all diffs on this mapset takes dedication, you should get a cookie for that.RVMathew wrote:
Hi Gandalfr. How are you doing?
This is something to keep you going. Note that whatever I say is my own opinion, so you do not have to follow everything I say.
Considering that there are a lot of mods applied on this map, I may focus more on the polishing aspect of mapping.
General
1) You seem to have an extra copy of the song. You can delete it as it increases file size for no useful reason.
2) Consider adding the opening video.
3) Consider using custom combo colours.
GuineaQ'sHypestLight Insane make up your mind Gandalfr xd
1) 00:12:850 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - The square pattern looks off (looking at the editor) but I assume that is due to the stacked notes. You can try and make the shape look like a perfect square if you want to. They are indeed a bit off if you look at it without stack view
2) 00:19:435 (2,3) - Try and tuck 3 underneath 2 nicely because it looks a lot better. To help you with that, reduce stack leniency redid that specific pattern
3) 00:33:045 (1,2) - Sliderend of 1 and sliderhead of 2. To emphasize the vocal parts here, add a hitwhistle. It gives this part more punch.
- Applies to 00:34:362 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:37:874 (2,3) -
- Applies to 00:39:045 (2,3) -
I was actually so damn lazy and let Gandalfr do the hitsounds for me, so any hitsound mod, I'll leave it to Gandalfr's decision.
4) 01:02:606 (2) - I assume you are missing a hitclap? ^
5) 01:05:533 (4) - Why have a hitclap at the sliderend? I am curious as to why? ^
6) 01:18:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't mind having 5 note streams for a hard/hyper, but then when you put it at the end, especially when you do not use 5 note streams anywhere else, I would say that this would catch a few people out as they won't expect it. I would say that if you want to keep this pattern, you have to use it during the beginning or the middle of the song, wherever applicable. Made 00:13:728 (5) - into a stream.
Final thoughts
Keep working on this map. Apart from a few niggles and a bit of polishing, you have a nice set of difficulties, and the GD's so far are pretty nice
Good luck with this set. I apologize in advance if the mod is not satisfactory.
Have a nice day,
RVMathewYou should have messaged me if there was a mod that I should check xdosu file format v14
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AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-New World (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 50606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Mode: 0
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Title:Brand-new World
TitleUnicode:Brand-new World
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Gandalfr
Version:guineaQ's Light Insane
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags:THE ASTERISK WAR The Academy City on the Water Gakusen Toshi Asterisk -Yuzuriha CSLM CSLMVenezuela IamKwaN guineaQ Frey Akitoshi Hakard D4rksho0ter HabiHolic DavidEd Underforest Strategas Smoothie World Mamayu fuyuyu- fyy- Atsuro Arieeru Haruto Mira-san
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ewe
ultaima diff 00:14:313 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - aprende a mapear :> cambia esto y despues hablame
01:22:923 (1,2) - no xd no fittea la musica
01:16:947 (1,2,3,4) - que clase de ritmo consistente es este :>
00:34:810 - madre mia guili donde esta el flow
00:23:386 (1,2) - en serio, ponele nc a esto asi sube el hp
ultaima diff 00:14:313 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - aprende a mapear :> cambia esto y despues hablame
01:22:923 (1,2) - no xd no fittea la musica
01:16:947 (1,2,3,4) - que clase de ritmo consistente es este :>
00:34:810 - madre mia guili donde esta el flow
00:23:386 (1,2) - en serio, ponele nc a esto asi sube el hp
Topic Starter
gracias por tu trabajo . _ .Windalfr wrote:
ewe
ultaima diff 00:14:313 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - aprende a mapear :> cambia esto y despues hablame
01:22:923 (1,2) - no xd no fittea la musica
01:16:947 (1,2,3,4) - que clase de ritmo consistente es este :>
00:34:810 - madre mia guili donde esta el flow
00:23:386 (1,2) - en serio, ponele nc a esto asi sube el hp
mini mod, ultima diff (?
00:26:752 (3,4,5,1) - este overlap es feo :c
00:33:850 (6) - delete 00:38:533 (6) - same 00:39:704 (3) - same 00:40:728 (3) - same
01:08:606 (8) - NC
01:23:386 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - :')
HD,HR 792pp wow
00:26:752 (3,4,5,1) - este overlap es feo :c
00:33:850 (6) - delete 00:38:533 (6) - same 00:39:704 (3) - same 00:40:728 (3) - same
01:08:606 (8) - NC
01:23:386 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - :')
HD,HR 792pp wow
gandkard
00:05:533 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:07:728 (4,1,2,3) - queda mal con respecto al anterior
00:13:728 (5,6,7,8,9) - feo
00:14:313 (1,2,3) - me tenes cansado cn tu simetria spook
00:15:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - esto ni fluye
00:16:508 (7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - simetria forzada, borralo a la mierda
00:52:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - .......
00:58:216 (1,1,1,1) - para un poco skystar
00:05:533 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:07:728 (4,1,2,3) - queda mal con respecto al anterior
00:13:728 (5,6,7,8,9) - feo
00:14:313 (1,2,3) - me tenes cansado cn tu simetria spook
00:15:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - esto ni fluye
00:16:508 (7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - simetria forzada, borralo a la mierda
00:52:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - .......
00:58:216 (1,1,1,1) - para un poco skystar
Topic Starter
Windalfr wrote:
gandkard
00:05:533 (1,2,3) - spacing -es una extra tarado
00:07:728 (4,1,2,3) - queda mal con respecto al anterior -nada que ver
00:13:728 (5,6,7,8,9) - feo -si no te gusta no es mi problema
00:14:313 (1,2,3) - me tenes cansado cn tu simetria spook -bueno
00:15:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - esto ni fluye -si fluye, aprende a jugar
00:16:508 (7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - simetria forzada, borralo a la mierda -no se
00:52:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ....... - ?
00:58:216 (1,1,1,1) - para un poco skystar- me gusta
no hs yet
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Topic Starter
Can I hs it? ^^SnowNiNo_ wrote:
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227,210,55143,6,0,P|283:227|409:131,1,209.000006378174
284,31,55582,2,0,P|276:84|294:130,1,104.500003189087
501,39,55874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,56021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
501,39,56167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,56314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,163,56460,6,0,P|471:216|460:273,1,104.500003189087
407,369,56752,2,0,P|356:347|301:352,1,104.500003189087
354,229,57045,2,0,L|345:118,1,104.500003189087
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215,149,57630,6,0,P|142:127|104:139,1,104.500003189087
24,341,57923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,183,58069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,357,58216,2,0,P|241:354|288:315,1,104.500003189087
309,118,58508,2,0,P|254:121|207:160,1,104.500003189087
442,240,58801,6,0,L|431:125,1,104.500003189087
486,28,59094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,202,59240,6,0,P|276:219|220:215,1,104.500003189087
180,86,59533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,134,59679,6,0,P|421:180|411:255,1,104.500003189087
292,293,59972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,64,60118,6,0,P|390:42|451:61,1,104.500003189087
491,141,60411,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,110,60557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,231,60704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,64,60850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,303,60996,6,0,L|88:289,1,190
202,202,61435,2,0,L|308:194,1,95
117,100,61728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,289,61874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,148,62021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,202,62167,6,0,B|211:351|211:351|251:310,1,190
265,137,62606,2,0,P|217:113|163:122,1,95
329,233,62899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,30,63045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,202,63191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,119,63338,6,0,L|422:268,1,142.5
428,331,63630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,213,63777,2,0,P|240:196|185:209,1,95
98,267,64069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,101,64216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,278,64362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,119,64508,6,0,B|120:89|120:89|197:105,1,142.5
245,118,64801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,267,64947,2,0,P|87:208|103:159,1,95
222,217,65240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,350,65386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,217,65533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,350,65679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,174,65825,6,0,P|108:111|101:73,1,95
222,217,66118,2,0,P|217:264|230:309,1,95
288,127,66411,2,0,P|241:106|191:110,1,95
141,329,66704,2,0,P|188:329|230:309,1,95
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190,202,67289,2,0,L|198:107,1,95
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328,300,68167,6,0,B|307:240|330:161|330:161|364:199,1,190
232,299,68606,2,0,P|189:321|49:261,1,190
81,159,69045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,361,69191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,201,69338,5,0,0:0:0:0:
217,189,69411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,182,69484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,179,69557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,179,69630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,184,69703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,193,69777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,205,69850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,221,69923,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,209,69996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,197,70069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,185,70142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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210,116,70508,6,0,P|260:99|312:110,1,95
316,224,70801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,175,70947,2,0,P|107:123|118:72,1,95
188,264,71240,2,0,P|128:286|82:278,1,95
226,141,71533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,318,71679,6,0,L|315:206,1,95
353,84,71972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,233,72118,2,0,P|434:250|388:249,1,95
186,123,72411,2,0,P|233:123|277:139,1,95
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206,233,73143,2,0,L|214:348,1,95
94,236,73435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,171,74313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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257,188,75630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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306,140,75923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,254,76069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,188,76216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,91,76362,5,0,0:0:0:0:
303,230,76508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,96,76655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,168,76801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,254,76947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,111,77094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,244,77240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,172,77386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,57,77533,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,219,77679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,66,77825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,150,77972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,247,78118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,85,78264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,238,78411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,156,78557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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198,198,82508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,66,82655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,254,82801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,254,82874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,255,82947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,256,83020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,257,83093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,130,83240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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473,238,84264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,181,84411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
This is getting fishy for a highest diff .-.
Why is there no 1,0* diff with all those extras? :>
I mean, you probably wouldn't want one, but I'd be happy to make one
I mean, you probably wouldn't want one, but I'd be happy to make one
Sorry for doubleposting but I wanted to try modding the highest diff
Please don't scream at me for doing a mod this long >.<
[Ser-Vestra Over Complexification]
If you'd ask me, this diff needs to work a lot on spacing, emphasis, following the vocals, aesthetics and remaps of specific parts, in the worst case, this might need a complete remap. Now, I am not one to judge as I myself am not that good at mapping and modding extras, but still, I did not expect my mod to be this long and yet here is this mod. This does not mean I am saying this map is hopeless, in fact, if reworked again, this could be a masterpiece. So don't get demotivated and stay determined
I'll probably be back to mod the other diffs, so I'll wish you GL then
Please don't scream at me for doing a mod this long >.<
[Ser-Vestra Over Complexification]
- 00:03:777 (2) - This hitsound here sounds completely out of place here seeing how this is a quiet part disturbed by an extremely loud hitsound. I suggest making that timing point to volume 15% and add a 30% timing point here to emphasize the sliders there, because the way it is now seems to be too loud for that slider and doesn't distinguish it from 00:04:508 (1,2) - although the sounds are different
- 00:07:435 (2,1) - Is there a reason why this deserves more spacing than 00:07:729 (2,3) - ? Because that one has the higher pitch and thus should have more emphasis than 00:07:582 (1,2) -
- 00:10:947 (1) - This slider seems to break the consistency for me because up till now, you've only used 1/4 sliders on patterns like 00:09:191 (1,2,3,4,1) - and nowhere else, also, the spacing seems to be a bit low to the previous and next slider looking at the fact that you've used rather high spacing on similar parts to this
- 00:11:533 (4) - Same here with the spacing etc, but here, the stacking ruins the motion of the map in a complete unfitting place and I suggest moving it somewhere else
- 00:11:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part should be remapped imo because:
1. The jumps look really non- creative and look messy in comparison to what could have been done here
2. There is no emphasis on objects whatsoever next to 00:12:996 (4,1) - which is a bit weird though because of the fact that 00:12:411 (4,1) - sounds the same and gets less emphasis
3. There should be some sliders added in instead of jumps because for example: 00:12:557 (1,2) - 00:12:996 (4,1) - etc.
4. The transition here 00:13:436 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - plays really weird to me and breaks the flow which you have built up - 00:17:752 (3) - I think you should remove this because you have been following the vocals whenever vocals were there and followed another instrument whenever there was no vocal/a held vocal for 2 beats or more (00:16:655 (5,6) - ) but there no vocal here for only half a beat
- 00:23:386 (1,1) - Off the point of my mod but this doesn't look too aesthetic
- 00:23:679 (1,2) - Emphasis between these two notes and these two notes 00:23:386 (1,1) - should be the same yet 00:23:386 (1,1) - is emphasized more by bigger spacing, why?
- 00:25:728 (4,5) - These sliders don't follow the vocals at all and should, since you followed them up to this point, something like: A hitcircle 00:25:728 (4) - instead and then a 3/2 or 1/1 slider here 00:25:874 (5) - would follow the vocals much better
- 00:28:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again, like the jump section above, this part should be remapped, but mostly due to the fact that there are jumps that should be replaced with sliders instead, because:
In some parts, the vocals feel more connected and should be thus be represented by a slider looking at the fact that sliders connect two points. The fact that all of the objects are jumps kinda doesn't follow that factor of those vocals. I'll list what objects could be replaced by sliders:
00:28:362 (1,2) - 00:28:801 (4,5) - 00:29:533 (1,2) - 00:29:972 (4,5) - 00:30:704 (1,2) - 00:31:143 (4,5) - - 00:35:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These should get higher spacing because right now this has the same amount of spacing as the objects before although the vocals are stronger here
- 00:37:143 (4,5,6) - Now, I know this was intentional but really this high spacing?
- 00:39:630 (2,3,4,5) - There should be the same emphasis between (2,3) and (3,4) but (3,4) has higher spacing, why? Here 00:34:216 (1,2,3) - for example you did it right
- 00:40:069 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this really doesn't follow the vocals in a too good way, some vocals should rather have been have represented by sliders, the jumps play a bit weird and I don't get why the part between 00:40:069 (5,1) - has been ignored because I while I don't hear too many mappable sounds there, where 00:40:362 (1) - starts also isn't an optimal space to start, rather here 00:40:508 (1) -
- 00:41:240 (1,2,3) - Same as above, why this high of spacing? Doesn't play too well on high BPM
- 00:41:972 (5,6) - Understandable, maybe, but still, this deserves as much emphasis as 00:41:825 (4,5) - 00:42:118 (6,7) - but gets more, why?
- 00:55:582 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Can get really confusing to play, and 00:56:167 (1,2) - if you decide to use 1/4, a stream would fit more here imo
- 00:58:801 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - At least this jump section was good in catching intensity of the song but still looks aesthetically weird and has weird emphasis
- 01:02:021 (5,6) - This flows weird looking at the fact that parts before flowed rather good, but this breaks the flow by putting 01:02:167 (6) - more upwards, try lowering it, because this is a really unfitting flowbreak
- 01:06:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is like previous jump sections, it should follow the vocals more by adding sliders etc. Something different that triggers me here though is 01:07:728 (4,1) - The high spacing here. That's too much of emphasis imo in comparison of what's to come
- 01:09:923 (5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - About the NCs: 1. You forgot to NC the first note in the stream but that might be intentional and 2. I'd remove every second NC, NCs aren't there for spamming, they usually can be there for emphasizing objects of a map in another way than spacings. NCing every second note seems to be emphasizing more significant points of that stream
- 01:14:460 (1,2,3,4) - This could be positioned in a way more aesthetic and intuitive to play
- 01:13:874 (5,6,7) - This is not intuitive to play and people would think that this is not a 1/4 interval but a 1/2 and cause the player to miss this note, besides, this is ridiculous spacing
- 01:15:191 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This should be spaced out more imo, this has the same spacing than the previous jumps in the Kiai part but has stronger vocals than in previous patterns.
- 01:23:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Ok, this is just sheer overmapping imo. This is just as intense as the part before but yet it has complete fullscreen jumps and has no emphasis on stronger beats whatsoever. Like, it doesn't differentiate between 01:23:972 (7,8) - and 01:24:264 (9,10) - although clearly 01:23:972 (7,8) - should be more emphasized and have a comparable distance to 01:24:264 (9,10) - , but it doesn't. Just like the previous
- 01:24:411 (10) - On a side note, for emphasis on the end of this jump section, you could NC this.
If you'd ask me, this diff needs to work a lot on spacing, emphasis, following the vocals, aesthetics and remaps of specific parts, in the worst case, this might need a complete remap. Now, I am not one to judge as I myself am not that good at mapping and modding extras, but still, I did not expect my mod to be this long and yet here is this mod. This does not mean I am saying this map is hopeless, in fact, if reworked again, this could be a masterpiece. So don't get demotivated and stay determined
I'll probably be back to mod the other diffs, so I'll wish you GL then
I'm just stopping by to tell you something about the last difficulty, you can give me kudosu if you really think this was helpful.
I'm not going to have a 10 mile list of mods because that would be actually pointless xd
First of all, you have a lack of consistency, structure, and emphasis which are really important parts to a map. It doesn't matter if you have like a gazillion good guest difficulties, or mods because I really don't think this difficulty is getting anywhere near ranked.
The quality of it is not great which is also a problem when trying to get maps ranked.
Let me just sum all the problems up for you. You have inconsistent NC's which makes the map look messy, the rhythm isn't the best either with you following something and suddenly following something else. Aesthetics are a big problem too, I can't bring myself to say that this map is somewhat nice. That's how big of an issue this is. Also like I said before, this map really doesn't have the emphasis when you need it, it's like you just placed the notes there for the difficulty. This difficulty doesn't have a base spacing for the player to return to which makes it feel like the notes are empty, having no purpose. The structure of this map is also questionable with some parts that are absolutely overwhelming (not in a good way) with some overmapped and overdone parts which really doesn't make you a good mapper. I'm really sorry if I'm being really salty but with the comment you wrote on Monstrata's map sorta triggered me and made me want to see how good of a mapper you were. I'm not trying to be mean or anything but you do have to know in order to improve. I literally think that getting more mods on this diff is pointless, it would be better if you just remap with this all in mind.
I'm not going to have a 10 mile list of mods because that would be actually pointless xd
First of all, you have a lack of consistency, structure, and emphasis which are really important parts to a map. It doesn't matter if you have like a gazillion good guest difficulties, or mods because I really don't think this difficulty is getting anywhere near ranked.
The quality of it is not great which is also a problem when trying to get maps ranked.
Let me just sum all the problems up for you. You have inconsistent NC's which makes the map look messy, the rhythm isn't the best either with you following something and suddenly following something else. Aesthetics are a big problem too, I can't bring myself to say that this map is somewhat nice. That's how big of an issue this is. Also like I said before, this map really doesn't have the emphasis when you need it, it's like you just placed the notes there for the difficulty. This difficulty doesn't have a base spacing for the player to return to which makes it feel like the notes are empty, having no purpose. The structure of this map is also questionable with some parts that are absolutely overwhelming (not in a good way) with some overmapped and overdone parts which really doesn't make you a good mapper. I'm really sorry if I'm being really salty but with the comment you wrote on Monstrata's map sorta triggered me and made me want to see how good of a mapper you were. I'm not trying to be mean or anything but you do have to know in order to improve. I literally think that getting more mods on this diff is pointless, it would be better if you just remap with this all in mind.
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2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: la intensidad del principio aun no esta lo suficientemente alta
2016-08-23 14:01 Gandalfr: 00:00:265 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - deberia escalar a menos esto?
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: como para que se sientan apropiados los saltos
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: deberias hacer patrones mas sencillos
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: y hacer que el aumento de spaccing sea menos
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: menor
2016-08-23 14:02 Atsuro: triangulos repetitivos a este bpm son complicados de seguir :V
2016-08-23 14:03 Gandalfr: les baje un poco ahi
2016-08-23 14:04 Atsuro: el resto falle demasiado porque mi aim ahorita esta feo :^)
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: veamos
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: ok
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: gracias por tu ayuda
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: voy a seguie ezforzan2me
2016-08-23 14:05 Atsuro: cuando termines dime y le hecho una mejor mirada
2016-08-23 14:05 Atsuro: ahorita tengo mas ganas de jugar :p
2016-08-23 14:06 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 14:56 Gandalfr: listo
2016-08-23 14:56 Gandalfr: uplodean2
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: wat
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: tendre que hacerle un poco de overdone para que tenga mas sr :U
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: tan rapido?
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: la [3] actualizala
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: si
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: wow
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: xD
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: Rizia v2
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: aun no acabo de jugar, mappeas muy rapido
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: 50 minutos
2016-08-23 14:59 Gandalfr: LOL
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: ayy
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: siempre una de mas tiene que meter skystar(?
2016-08-23 15:00 Atsuro: no haz actualizado tu 3 :V
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: khe
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: si, lo hice LOL
2016-08-23 15:00 Atsuro: me sale latest pending version
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: digo
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: 2
2016-08-23 15:00 Atsuro: ah
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: xD
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: im idiot
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: :UUUU
2016-08-23 15:02 Atsuro: que fue ese stream? :O
2016-08-23 15:02 Gandalfr: stream incomodo donde
2016-08-23 15:02 Gandalfr: ACTION runs
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: I lov u
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: si esos sliders
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: del final
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: mueves un poco para abajo
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: cada par
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: deberia usar solo circles?
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: quedaria biem
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: imo
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: como
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: una piramide invertida
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: si, lo capto xD
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: btw que te parecio? un poco overdone?
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: es el que me gusta mas hasta ahora
2016-08-23 15:05 Atsuro: de tus mapas de esta cancion
2016-08-23 15:05 Gandalfr: great ^^
2016-08-23 15:05 Gandalfr: mejoro mucho el ritmo verdad? c:
2016-08-23 15:05 Atsuro: 00:14:021 (1,1) - esto confunde mucho
2016-08-23 15:06 Atsuro: te gusta mucho encimar notas de esta manera D:
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: LOL
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: ok. lo pongo abajo?
2016-08-23 15:06 Atsuro: abajo o arriba pero que sea mas leible lol
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: 00:14:021 (1) - stackeado en la cabeza de 1?
2016-08-23 15:06 Atsuro: que no esten juntos, puede estar stackeado con el final del slider pequeño
2016-08-23 15:07 Gandalfr: ok
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: no tengo idea de como lo falle lul
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: como no
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: *
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: 00:23:679 (2) - le falta clap al slider end
2016-08-23 15:07 Gandalfr: fix
2016-08-23 16:07 Gandalfr: Ñ'Ñ
2016-08-23 16:07 Gandalfr: '=
2016-08-23 16:07 Gandalfr: ;-;
2016-08-23 16:08 Gandalfr: perdona
2016-08-23 16:08 Gandalfr: que me habias mandado? CX
2016-08-23 16:10 Atsuro: se me fue la luz lul
2016-08-23 16:10 Gandalfr: LOL
2016-08-23 16:11 Atsuro: quieres que siga moddeando tu mapa?
2016-08-23 16:19 Gandalfr: espera
2016-08-23 16:19 Gandalfr: estoy actualizan2
2016-08-23 16:19 Gandalfr: le subi el sr y corregi algunos patterns
2016-08-23 16:20 Gandalfr: list2o
2016-08-23 16:21 Atsuro: np plez
2016-08-23 16:22 Gandalfr: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1063581 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [True Ser-Vestra]]
2016-08-23 16:23 Atsuro: cual es ahora
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: khe
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: True servestra
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: borra el 2 y 3
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: True Ser-Vestra
2016-08-23 16:25 Atsuro: 00:51:045 (1,2,1) - no soy fan de estos
2016-08-23 16:25 Atsuro: con circulos es mas que suficiente en mi opinion :v
2016-08-23 16:26 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 16:26 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 16:26 Atsuro: 00:53:972 (6,1) - esto podria usar un salto mas largo para acentuar el nuevo verso y downbeat
2016-08-23 16:27 Atsuro: 01:04:947 (2,3,4,5) - este overmap es muy obvio :p
2016-08-23 16:27 Gandalfr: ewe
2016-08-23 16:27 Gandalfr: lo voy a dejar
2016-08-23 16:27 Atsuro: 01:13:435 (3,4,5) - esto tiene un angulo muy... dificil de jugar
2016-08-23 16:27 Gandalfr: solo por que stratega lo hizo
2016-08-23 16:28 Gandalfr: ok, voy a cambiarlo
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: ok es todo lo general que puedo hallar
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: puedo sacarte unos kudosus? :^)
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: a ver si me pongo a farmear para sacar mi lisencia de nominator xd
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: licencia*
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: zi
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: aun no eres BG?
2016-08-23 16:30 Atsuro: 00:28:801 (2) - tiene un clap de mas
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: BN
2016-08-23 16:30 Atsuro: nop
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: lol
2016-08-23 16:30 Atsuro: soy un flojo para moddear :^)
2016-08-23 16:31 Gandalfr: i see xD
2016-08-23 16:33 Atsuro: ok, aqui ya veo un mapa que puede ser rankeado trabajandolo un poco mas (y que va a hacer que mucha gente se queje porque va a ser farmeado a morir)
2016-08-23 16:33 Gandalfr: lo
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: c:
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: ty
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: a lot
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: 01:23:533 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - otra idea
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: que tal si usas otro triple encima del 4
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: a
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: porque esos sliders parecen estar siguiendo el sonido ese de sintetizador
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: espera
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: pero el 4 no tiene
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: asi seria similar al 3
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: en un blanco?
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: o como
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: soy un idiota LOL
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: si. es en el blanco ok
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: no se
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: tengo otros combo colors :v
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: se tendria que eliminar la ultima nota
2016-08-23 16:36 Atsuro: el ultimo 2 puedes dejarlo como slider
2016-08-23 16:36 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 16:36 Atsuro: solo una idea para que todos los sliders sigan correctamente su ritmo :p
2016-08-23 16:37 Gandalfr: oc
Topic Starter
Atsuro wrote:
logloli thingasdf2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: la intensidad del principio aun no esta lo suficientemente alta
2016-08-23 14:01 Gandalfr: 00:00:265 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - deberia escalar a menos esto?
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: como para que se sientan apropiados los saltos
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: deberias hacer patrones mas sencillos
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: y hacer que el aumento de spaccing sea menos
2016-08-23 14:01 Atsuro: menor
2016-08-23 14:02 Atsuro: triangulos repetitivos a este bpm son complicados de seguir :V
2016-08-23 14:03 Gandalfr: les baje un poco ahi
2016-08-23 14:04 Atsuro: el resto falle demasiado porque mi aim ahorita esta feo :^)
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: veamos
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: ok
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: gracias por tu ayuda
2016-08-23 14:04 Gandalfr: voy a seguie ezforzan2me
2016-08-23 14:05 Atsuro: cuando termines dime y le hecho una mejor mirada
2016-08-23 14:05 Atsuro: ahorita tengo mas ganas de jugar :p
2016-08-23 14:06 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 14:56 Gandalfr: listo
2016-08-23 14:56 Gandalfr: uplodean2
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: wat
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: tendre que hacerle un poco de overdone para que tenga mas sr :U
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: tan rapido?
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: la [3] actualizala
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: si
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: wow
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: xD
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: Rizia v2
2016-08-23 14:57 Atsuro: aun no acabo de jugar, mappeas muy rapido
2016-08-23 14:57 Gandalfr: 50 minutos
2016-08-23 14:59 Gandalfr: LOL
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: ayy
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: siempre una de mas tiene que meter skystar(?
2016-08-23 15:00 Atsuro: no haz actualizado tu 3 :V
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: khe
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: si, lo hice LOL
2016-08-23 15:00 Atsuro: me sale latest pending version
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: digo
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: 2
2016-08-23 15:00 Atsuro: ah
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: xD
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: im idiot
2016-08-23 15:00 Gandalfr: :UUUU
2016-08-23 15:02 Atsuro: que fue ese stream? :O
2016-08-23 15:02 Gandalfr: stream incomodo donde
2016-08-23 15:02 Gandalfr: ACTION runs
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: I lov u
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: si esos sliders
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: del final
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: mueves un poco para abajo
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: cada par
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: deberia usar solo circles?
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: quedaria biem
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: imo
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: como
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: una piramide invertida
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: si, lo capto xD
2016-08-23 15:04 Gandalfr: btw que te parecio? un poco overdone?
2016-08-23 15:04 Atsuro: es el que me gusta mas hasta ahora
2016-08-23 15:05 Atsuro: de tus mapas de esta cancion
2016-08-23 15:05 Gandalfr: great ^^
2016-08-23 15:05 Gandalfr: mejoro mucho el ritmo verdad? c:
2016-08-23 15:05 Atsuro: 00:14:021 (1,1) - esto confunde mucho
2016-08-23 15:06 Atsuro: te gusta mucho encimar notas de esta manera D:
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: LOL
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: ok. lo pongo abajo?
2016-08-23 15:06 Atsuro: abajo o arriba pero que sea mas leible lol
2016-08-23 15:06 Gandalfr: 00:14:021 (1) - stackeado en la cabeza de 1?
2016-08-23 15:06 Atsuro: que no esten juntos, puede estar stackeado con el final del slider pequeño
2016-08-23 15:07 Gandalfr: ok
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: no tengo idea de como lo falle lul
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: como no
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: *
2016-08-23 15:07 Atsuro: 00:23:679 (2) - le falta clap al slider end
2016-08-23 15:07 Gandalfr: fix
2016-08-23 16:07 Gandalfr: Ñ'Ñ
2016-08-23 16:07 Gandalfr: '=
2016-08-23 16:07 Gandalfr: ;-;
2016-08-23 16:08 Gandalfr: perdona
2016-08-23 16:08 Gandalfr: que me habias mandado? CX
2016-08-23 16:10 Atsuro: se me fue la luz lul
2016-08-23 16:10 Gandalfr: LOL
2016-08-23 16:11 Atsuro: quieres que siga moddeando tu mapa?
2016-08-23 16:19 Gandalfr: espera
2016-08-23 16:19 Gandalfr: estoy actualizan2
2016-08-23 16:19 Gandalfr: le subi el sr y corregi algunos patterns
2016-08-23 16:20 Gandalfr: list2o
2016-08-23 16:21 Atsuro: np plez
2016-08-23 16:22 Gandalfr: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1063581 Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World [True Ser-Vestra]]
2016-08-23 16:23 Atsuro: cual es ahora
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: khe
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: True servestra
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: borra el 2 y 3
2016-08-23 16:23 Gandalfr: True Ser-Vestra
2016-08-23 16:25 Atsuro: 00:51:045 (1,2,1) - no soy fan de estos
2016-08-23 16:25 Atsuro: con circulos es mas que suficiente en mi opinion :v
2016-08-23 16:26 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 16:26 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 16:26 Atsuro: 00:53:972 (6,1) - esto podria usar un salto mas largo para acentuar el nuevo verso y downbeat
2016-08-23 16:27 Atsuro: 01:04:947 (2,3,4,5) - este overmap es muy obvio :p
2016-08-23 16:27 Gandalfr: ewe
2016-08-23 16:27 Gandalfr: lo voy a dejar
2016-08-23 16:27 Atsuro: 01:13:435 (3,4,5) - esto tiene un angulo muy... dificil de jugar
2016-08-23 16:27 Gandalfr: solo por que stratega lo hizo
2016-08-23 16:28 Gandalfr: ok, voy a cambiarlo
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: ok es todo lo general que puedo hallar
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: puedo sacarte unos kudosus? :^)
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: a ver si me pongo a farmear para sacar mi lisencia de nominator xd
2016-08-23 16:29 Atsuro: licencia*
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: zi
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: o
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: aun no eres BG?
2016-08-23 16:30 Atsuro: 00:28:801 (2) - tiene un clap de mas
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: BN
2016-08-23 16:30 Atsuro: nop
2016-08-23 16:30 Gandalfr: lol
2016-08-23 16:30 Atsuro: soy un flojo para moddear :^)
2016-08-23 16:31 Gandalfr: i see xD
2016-08-23 16:33 Atsuro: ok, aqui ya veo un mapa que puede ser rankeado trabajandolo un poco mas (y que va a hacer que mucha gente se queje porque va a ser farmeado a morir)
2016-08-23 16:33 Gandalfr: lo
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: c:
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: ty
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: a lot
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: 01:23:533 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - otra idea
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: que tal si usas otro triple encima del 4
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: a
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: porque esos sliders parecen estar siguiendo el sonido ese de sintetizador
2016-08-23 16:34 Gandalfr: espera
2016-08-23 16:34 Atsuro: pero el 4 no tiene
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: asi seria similar al 3
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: en un blanco?
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: o como
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: soy un idiota LOL
2016-08-23 16:35 Gandalfr: si. es en el blanco ok
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: no se
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: tengo otros combo colors :v
2016-08-23 16:35 Atsuro: se tendria que eliminar la ultima nota
2016-08-23 16:36 Atsuro: el ultimo 2 puedes dejarlo como slider
2016-08-23 16:36 Gandalfr: oc
2016-08-23 16:36 Atsuro: solo una idea para que todos los sliders sigan correctamente su ritmo :p
2016-08-23 16:37 Gandalfr: oc
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Please do only serious and helpful comments to this map. If you won't help, don't post. Thanks!Mizaki wrote:
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By modding, we mean constructive and concrete suggestion and justification. Treat this as a warning, if another insult is heard from you, no matter direct or oblique, corresponding action is going to be taken by the GMT.Mizaki wrote:
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