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just a noob mod if you dont mind

00:05:284 (1,2,3,4) - would sound nice with some drum additions
00:06:743 (1,1,1) - thease have a kick sound so you might wanna add something here too
00:19:229 (1) - i dont feel anyting special in this slider so i would whistle the body to make it consistent
00:20:202 (4) - the tail is a strong beat, would be better clickable
00:26:770 (4) - there is no beat
00:42:743 (1) - the guitar you follow here doesnt make that kind of sound. An extended slider would do it.
00:50:040 (2) - and it does here i think. This is a the good place for a 1/2 repeat slider
00:57:338 (5,6) - drum addition is a good option
01:08:040 (1,2) - maybe this part is in 1/3 i cant tell :D
01:10:473 (3) - consider whistling the body (sounds nice to me)
01:19:067 (3) - the little nazi in me says you need 10% more volume for kiais
01:28:148 (1) - i would replace the clap with a finish
01:30:094 (4) - whistle
01:34:635 (1) - again, i really dont like it. To me its just shouting for an extended slider.
01:37:878 (1,5) - some whistle maybe?
01:39:824 (1,1) - on body

From this point ill keep my hitsound suggestions because they are only preferances, and i feel like im forcing you to use them the way i see it should be.
01:48:257 (3) - what about a 1/2 slider and circle like this: 01:45:662 (3,4) -
02:02:527 (3) - and here something like 01:50:851 (3,4,5) - ?
02:19:716 (1) - i dont think you need to change the SV here. And come on... ugly 2010 slider, you can do better than this ;)
02:23:608 (9) - what about nc this?
02:24:743 (2,1) - too much use of slider leniency imo.
02:26:527 (1,2,3) - equal spacing?
This part (and the previous 00:58:311) are really undermapped. I feel too much beats are missing. I suggest making thease sections more intensive or rising the sv.
02:35:770 (4,5,6) - better triangle please, looks ugly
02:43:554 (1,2) - the beat at the tail is strong. I would make two 1/2 sliders.
02:46:959 (3) - shouldnt this face upwards? and nc 02:47:284 (4) -
02:57:013 (3,4,5) - they need bigger spacing
02:59:932 (5,6) - ctrl+g
03:02:446 (6) - i dont hear anything here
03:13:067 This part is a mess... You created a rhythm so much different from what i hear in the music.
03:15:419 (12) - there is no beat here
03:15:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - instead of this the rhythm looks like

03:19:716 (1) - This is still increasing in the music so the spacing could too.
03:28:473 (8) - to me it seems like the music stops here. Removing 9 is a good option.
03:36:419 (1) - this ends on downbeat
03:37:013 (3) - and this starts on 1/3 + ends on blue + touches the hiterror bar dayumnn
03:37:473 (4) - what about a 1/4 repeat slider starting on red?
03:40:148 (4) - would flow better somewhere near 03:39:500 (2) - head
03:42:094 (2,4) - errrr owerlap
03:43:716 (8,9,10) - my nazi sense is tinglingand it says you should make a right angled triangle.
03:45:662 (11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - i hear beats in blues but its fine
03:46:392 (5) - Although i dont here
03:55:878 (1) - and we are here again... Why did you slow it down? It looks nice tho 8-)
03:58:635 (4) - i prefer NC
04:07:067 (5,1) - looks like an accidental overlap. really minor thing
04:09:013 (2) - this curve is not practical i suggest changing it
04:09:986 (7,8) - if you add my previous option you will have more space to work with. so you might consider adding a jump to 7
04:16:797 (1,2,3,4) - its the climax of the song. Make them more interesting, rotations, curves, anything...
04:20:365 (5,6) - ctrl+g but if you do that the jump will be huge between 04:20:689 (1) -
04:21:986 (3,4) - you can add a not between them
04:27:175 (1,2,1,2) - this part is so strong... I can imagine this part with 1/4 sliders as paired. Its just too intensive for only 1/2 sliders imo.
04:36:257 (1,2,1,2,3) - and this is shouting for streams. (Im sorry if you feel like im forcing things on you but this part is the peak of the song and it should be so much harder)
04:45:986 (3) - i would add 3 circle instead of this. And in its current state it doesnt flow really well.

I deeply apologise if my mod felt forced. My wording is bad and i probably sound like an ahole right now.
Hope i could help.
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Sailexk wrote:

just a noob mod if you dont mind

00:05:284 (1,2,3,4) - would sound nice with some drum additions I don't like the drum samples
00:06:743 (1,1,1) - thease have a kick sound so you might wanna add something here too added whistles
00:19:229 (1) - i dont feel anyting special in this slider so i would whistle the body to make it consistent fixed
00:20:202 (4) - the tail is a strong beat, would be better clickable fixed
00:26:770 (4) - there is no beat it's very subtle
00:42:743 (1) - the guitar you follow here doesnt make that kind of sound. An extended slider would do it. fixed
00:50:040 (2) - and it does here i think. This is a the good place for a 1/2 repeat slider fixed
00:57:338 (5,6) - drum addition is a good option doesn't sound any different imo
01:08:040 (1,2) - maybe this part is in 1/3 i cant tell :Dthis is fine
01:10:473 (3) - consider whistling the body (sounds nice to me) fixed
01:19:067 (3) - the little nazi in me says you need 10% more volume for kiais I'll add 5
01:28:148 (1) - i would replace the clap with a finish fixed
01:30:094 (4) - whistle fixed
01:34:635 (1) - again, i really dont like it. To me its just shouting for an extended slider. leaving it as it is
01:37:878 (1,5) - some whistle maybe? fixed
01:39:824 (1,1) - on body fixed

From this point ill keep my hitsound suggestions because they are only preferances, and i feel like im forcing you to use them the way i see it should be.
01:48:257 (3) - what about a 1/2 slider and circle like this: 01:45:662 (3,4) - fixed
02:02:527 (3) - and here something like 01:50:851 (3,4,5) - ? I'll add something else instead
02:19:716 (1) - i dont think you need to change the SV here. And come on... ugly 2010 slider, you can do better than this ;)fixed
02:23:608 (9) - what about nc this? fixed
02:24:743 (2,1) - too much use of slider leniency imo. fixed
02:26:527 (1,2,3) - equal spacing? they are equal
This part (and the previous 00:58:311) are really undermapped. I feel too much beats are missing. I suggest making thease sections more intensive or rising the sv. it's fine as it is
02:35:770 (4,5,6) - better triangle please, looks ugly fixed
02:43:554 (1,2) - the beat at the tail is strong. I would make two 1/2 sliders. no
02:46:959 (3) - shouldnt this face upwards? and nc 02:47:284 (4) - fixed
02:57:013 (3,4,5) - they need bigger spacing no
02:59:932 (5,6) - ctrl+g no
03:02:446 (6) - i dont hear anything here ?
03:13:067 This part is a mess... You created a rhythm so much different from what i hear in the music. that's how I interpret it
03:15:419 (12) - there is no beat here fixed
03:15:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - instead of this the rhythm looks like
too unintuitive
03:19:716 (1) - This is still increasing in the music so the spacing could too.
03:28:473 (8) - to me it seems like the music stops here. Removing 9 is a good option. fixed
03:36:419 (1) - this ends on downbeat reworked this part
03:37:013 (3) - and this starts on 1/3 + ends on blue + touches the hiterror bar dayumnn reworked this part
03:37:473 (4) - what about a 1/4 repeat slider starting on red? no
03:40:148 (4) - would flow better somewhere near 03:39:500 (2) - head fixed
03:42:094 (2,4) - errrr owerlap fixed
03:43:716 (8,9,10) - my nazi sense is tinglingand it says you should make a right angled triangle. no
03:45:662 (11,12,13,1,2,3,4) - i hear beats in blues but its fine same
03:46:392 (5) - Although i dont here fixed
03:55:878 (1) - and we are here again... Why did you slow it down? It looks nice tho 8-)for the next part that is less intensive
03:58:635 (4) - i prefer NC fixed
04:07:067 (5,1) - looks like an accidental overlap. really minor thing ? there's no overlap at all here
04:09:013 (2) - this curve is not practical i suggest changing it it's fine
04:09:986 (7,8) - if you add my previous option you will have more space to work with. so you might consider adding a jump to 7 no
04:16:797 (1,2,3,4) - its the climax of the song. Make them more interesting, rotations, curves, anything... the jumps are enough
04:20:365 (5,6) - ctrl+g but if you do that the jump will be huge between 04:20:689 (1) - no
04:21:986 (3,4) - you can add a not between them fixed
04:27:175 (1,2,1,2) - this part is so strong... I can imagine this part with 1/4 sliders as paired. Its just too intensive for only 1/2 sliders imo. 1/2 sliders fit better
04:36:257 (1,2,1,2,3) - and this is shouting for streams. (Im sorry if you feel like im forcing things on you but this part is the peak of the song and it should be so much harder) fixed
04:45:986 (3) - i would add 3 circle instead of this. And in its current state it doesnt flow really well. fixed

I deeply apologise if my mod felt forced. My wording is bad and i probably sound like an ahole right now. no problem, thanks for the mod!
Hope i could help.
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Welcome to 2017

I liked the old version from ~2010 heh
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You still need to write "Youkai no Yama ~ Mysterious Mountain" in romanized field, because romanization!=translation. Though you may write the translation in tags.
And "東方風神録 ~ Mountain of Faith." in source. Yes, with that dot.
no kd
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den0saur wrote:

You still need to write "Youkai no Yama ~ Mysterious Mountain" in romanized field, because romanization!=translation. Though you may write the translation in tags.
And "東方風神録 ~ Mountain of Faith." in source. Yes, with that dot.
no kd
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I prolly can't bubble this since you will need someone with taiko expertise, but I will give the ok for the standard diff you just need a taiko BN after

[General]
Timing needs a quick fix for the end:
05:00:905 - 158bpm
05:01:284 - 142bpm
05:01:706 - 134bpm
05:02:153 - 120bpm

[Lunatic]
01:08:040 (1,2) - i would try to follow the 1/3 layer here with repeat sliders, otherwise this should be all circles for emphasis on the drums
02:41:770 (3) - kinda weird having the slider end land on a strong beat, try to break up into 1/2 slider + circle?
02:47:284 (5) - missing finish
02:57:338 (3,4,5) - this flows better if you reverse the stream via ctrl+g
03:16:148 (7) - usually when you have these type of long streams with spacing breaks there is a NC, might want to add one here as well
03:35:121 (5) - whistle on slider body?
03:59:932 (1) - this part caught me by surprise, the spacing is really deceiving for 1/3 slight read. You might want to use repeat sliders for the first combo so players know it will be 1/3 for this section
04:06:419 (1,2,3,4) - to follow the music better, 123 should have a higher spacing for drum emphasis and 4 should be a soft sample with lower spacing, up to you how you want to handle it
04:07:716 (1) - missing finish
04:32:689 (6) - there is this really strong drum roll at 04:33:013, I don't think skipping it is a good idea
04:51:662 (1) - finish kinda sound random here imo
04:55:554 (1) - remove the finish here and have it on 04:56:040 (2) instead

good old Glass mapping love it <3
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jonathanlfj wrote:

I prolly can't bubble this since you will need someone with taiko expertise, but I will give the ok for the standard diff you just need a taiko BN after

[General]
Timing needs a quick fix for the end:
05:00:905 - 158bpm fixed
05:01:284 - 142bpm fixed
05:01:706 - 134bpm fixed
05:02:153 - 120bpm fixed

[Lunatic]
01:08:040 (1,2) - i would try to follow the 1/3 layer here with repeat sliders, otherwise this should be all circles for emphasis on the drums changed to circles
02:41:770 (3) - kinda weird having the slider end land on a strong beat, try to break up into 1/2 slider + circle? fixed
02:47:284 (5) - missing finish fixed
02:57:338 (3,4,5) - this flows better if you reverse the stream via ctrl+g fixed
03:16:148 (7) - usually when you have these type of long streams with spacing breaks there is a NC, might want to add one here as well fixed
03:35:121 (5) - whistle on slider body? fixed
03:59:932 (1) - this part caught me by surprise, the spacing is really deceiving for 1/3 slight read. You might want to use repeat sliders for the first combo so players know it will be 1/3 for this section I'll increase the spacing
04:06:419 (1,2,3,4) - to follow the music better, 123 should have a higher spacing for drum emphasis and 4 should be a soft sample with lower spacing, up to you how you want to handle it increased spacing and added soft sample
04:07:716 (1) - missing finish fixed
04:32:689 (6) - there is this really strong drum roll at 04:33:013, I don't think skipping it is a good idea I'll add a stream here
04:51:662 (1) - finish kinda sound random here imo fixed
04:55:554 (1) - remove the finish here and have it on 04:56:040 (2) instead fixed

good old Glass mapping love it <3
Thanks for the mod! I'll try to find a Taiko BN :D
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vvv gud map fren

heck
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Natteke wrote:

vvv gud map fren

heck
<3
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geez man how do you this..
I can't even imagine a better mapping. forever in love
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Star to fill this star bar to half, hello old russian mappers
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IceBeam wrote:

geez man how do you this..
I can't even imagine a better mapping. forever in love
myyyy duuude

ReFaller wrote:

Star to fill this star bar to half, hello old russian mappers
thank you for the star!

update: removed the Taiko diff because
1. the mapper is not longer active, thus unable to make adjustments to the map
2. it's probably not up to today's Taiko standards
3. nobody wanted to mod it
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rip taiko diff you will be remembered
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oh shit i forgot lol
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i looked at it it was no use lol dw
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Hello beautiful people,

just a thing I noticed

03:19:067 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - The lead guitar here is in 1/3 and only go in 1/4 from 03:20:040 (5) - to 03:20:365 (1) - (implying you didn't map 03:20:284 - ). Is this intended?


Also
03:15:419 (4) - there isn't a new guitar note here but 03:15:581 - there's one here. maybe you misheard it?


Also grats on getting bubbled, and good luck for the rest of the process!
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jonathanlfj wrote:

rip taiko diff you will be remembered
rip

[Hiiro Sakaki] wrote:

Hello beautiful people,

just a thing I noticed

03:19:067 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - The lead guitar here is in 1/3 and only go in 1/4 from 03:20:040 (5) - to 03:20:365 (1) - (implying you didn't map 03:20:284 - ). Is this intended?


Also
03:15:419 (4) - there isn't a new guitar note here but 03:15:581 - there's one here. maybe you misheard it?


Also grats on getting bubbled, and good luck for the rest of the process!
changed that part to 1/3, thank you for the mod :D
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general

  1. remove the gd from tags, since you deleted his diff
  2. Mysterious mountain.mp3 218kbps
  3. any metadata source?


diff

  1. 05:01:706 (2) - something went wrong here
  2. 00:04:148 (1) - ctrl g would flow better with previous and next object
  3. 00:37:554 (1) -, 00:40:148 (1) -, 00:40:635 (3) -, 00:43:229 (2) -, 00:45:338 (1) -, 00:45:662 (2) - (tail) , 00:50:527 (4) - 00:50:851 (5) - tail, 00:55:716 (1) - would be cool if you add finish to them, there are a lot more, but you can find them on your own
  4. 00:51:500 (1) - the slider shape doesn't looks nice at all, but I also will understand if u want to keep it
  5. 00:55:716 (1,2) - missing finish too, i hope u can check the beatmap hs again
  6. 05:02:153 (1) - 5% volume at the spinner end pls
  7. 02:26:201 (4) - unnsnapped
  8. 03:48:255 (3) - same
  9. 04:28:392 - unsnapped kiai
  10. 04:28:473 (1) - same
  11. 03:19:067 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/3


map is cool, call jonathanlfj for rebub
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Natsu wrote:

general

  1. remove the gd from tags, since you deleted his diff
  2. Mysterious mountain.mp3 218kbps
  3. any metadata source?


diff

  1. 05:01:706 (2) - something went wrong here
  2. 00:04:148 (1) - ctrl g would flow better with previous and next object
  3. 00:37:554 (1) -, 00:40:148 (1) -, 00:40:635 (3) -, 00:43:229 (2) -, 00:45:338 (1) -, 00:45:662 (2) - (tail) , 00:50:527 (4) - 00:50:851 (5) - tail, 00:55:716 (1) - would be cool if you add finish to them, there are a lot more, but you can find them on your own
  4. 00:51:500 (1) - the slider shape doesn't looks nice at all, but I also will understand if u want to keep it
  5. 00:55:716 (1,2) - missing finish too, i hope u can check the beatmap hs again
  6. 05:02:153 (1) - 5% volume at the spinner end pls
  7. 02:26:201 (4) - unnsnapped
  8. 03:48:255 (3) - same
  9. 04:28:392 - unsnapped kiai
  10. 04:28:473 (1) - same
  11. 03:19:067 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/3


map is cool, call jonathanlfj for rebub
all fixed, thank you for the mod :D
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