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My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/331732
[Starlight]
00:18:556 (1,3) - I think you could bend them a bit like this to make them look better.
00:20:266 (4,5,6) - nazi, move 5 to (160, 228) to make the distance from 4 to 5 and the distance from 5 to 6 equal (now they are 0.46x and 0.54x)
01:06:898 (1,2) - feel like the flow is a little bit weird from 5 to 1. I would suggest to place them somewhere around (268,328)
01:18:711 - 04:27:727 - I think there should be a clickable object here (intuiation playing)
01:26:794 (1) - feel like the slider can be more asthetically appealing. Maybe try something like this? (just my opinion tho)
02:02:390 (5,6,7) - I think those jumps should be bigger or at least similar to the jumps here 02:01:768 (1,2,3,4) - . Moving 02:02:545 (6) - down a little bit should resolve the issue here
[Insane]
02:07:830 (1,2) - make them parallel like this?:
02:16:846 (2) - stack with 02:16:224 (4) - ?
03:36:121 (5) - feel like stacking 5 with 1 fits the music better
03:41:716 (2,3,4,5,6) - those beats are really strong. I would suggest to make a jump like this to emphasize those strong beats.
03:47:468 (1,1) - I think removing the reverse fits the music better
04:20:887 (1,2) - blanket
[Hard]
00:19:022 (3) - I would bend this slider to make a better flow to 00:19:333 (4,5) -
02:18:556 (3) -
01:13:271 (1) - How about changing into a circle + 1/2 slider. It fits the vocal better imo (you did that here too 01:15:758 (1,2) - )
03:47:468 (1,1) - same as what mentioned in Insane
[Normal]
00:06:121 (1,2) - Make them parallel?
00:57:105 (4) - Changing the slider into a circle could emphasize this strong beat better. The sound at 00:57:416 - is really small so I think it is ok to just ignore it.
02:53:374 (2) - bend this to make 2 and 3 look better like this:
03:47:468 (1,1) - same as what mentioned in Insane
[Easy]
Looks perfect to me!!
Nice jumps in Starlight :3. Shoot a star for you <3
Hope it helps!!
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/331732
[Starlight]
00:18:556 (1,3) - I think you could bend them a bit like this to make them look better.
00:20:266 (4,5,6) - nazi, move 5 to (160, 228) to make the distance from 4 to 5 and the distance from 5 to 6 equal (now they are 0.46x and 0.54x)
01:06:898 (1,2) - feel like the flow is a little bit weird from 5 to 1. I would suggest to place them somewhere around (268,328)
01:18:711 - 04:27:727 - I think there should be a clickable object here (intuiation playing)
01:26:794 (1) - feel like the slider can be more asthetically appealing. Maybe try something like this? (just my opinion tho)
02:02:390 (5,6,7) - I think those jumps should be bigger or at least similar to the jumps here 02:01:768 (1,2,3,4) - . Moving 02:02:545 (6) - down a little bit should resolve the issue here
[Insane]
02:07:830 (1,2) - make them parallel like this?:
02:16:846 (2) - stack with 02:16:224 (4) - ?
03:36:121 (5) - feel like stacking 5 with 1 fits the music better
03:41:716 (2,3,4,5,6) - those beats are really strong. I would suggest to make a jump like this to emphasize those strong beats.
03:47:468 (1,1) - I think removing the reverse fits the music better
04:20:887 (1,2) - blanket
[Hard]
00:19:022 (3) - I would bend this slider to make a better flow to 00:19:333 (4,5) -
02:18:556 (3) -
01:13:271 (1) - How about changing into a circle + 1/2 slider. It fits the vocal better imo (you did that here too 01:15:758 (1,2) - )
03:47:468 (1,1) - same as what mentioned in Insane
[Normal]
00:06:121 (1,2) - Make them parallel?
00:57:105 (4) - Changing the slider into a circle could emphasize this strong beat better. The sound at 00:57:416 - is really small so I think it is ok to just ignore it.
02:53:374 (2) - bend this to make 2 and 3 look better like this:
03:47:468 (1,1) - same as what mentioned in Insane
[Easy]
Looks perfect to me!!
Nice jumps in Starlight :3. Shoot a star for you <3
Hope it helps!!