Heya, you have on your userpage that you accept m4m for this map, so if you wanna you can mod my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/373847
I agree with what previous modders said so I will try to point out other things
[Easy]
03:40:007 (1,2) - Same shape?
[Normal]
00:02:079 (3) - Try x99
01:17:934 (6) - Try x189
03:17:623 (1) - Something like x140y139 would fit better imo
04:01:768 (5,6) - Make these a copy of eachother, it looks way cleaner I think
[Hard]
01:41:872 (1,2) - Make these exactly the same shape for consistency, making it look cleaner
03:31:302 (1) - I'd make this circles since 03:31:457 - is very loud and it would be cool to have a click on that
04:20:887 (1) - This shape should be toned down a little imo
04:28:659 - Is again very loud, consider having a note here instead
04:45:758 (1) - I get your thought process behind this but tbh it should be toned down a little aswell, the shape.
I love this diff! So well made.
[Insane]
00:39:074 (3) - Try x252y162 00:39:229 (4) - x177y62
00:47:468 (2) - Red anchor point to x223y56 looks better imo, adjust 00:48:090 (5) - accordingly
01:37:209 (2,3,4) - Imo these make you randomly slow down a little too much and kinda break the flow, try to come up with a different pattern
01:47:468 (3) - I feel like this should be about centered between 01:47:157 (2,4) -
01:59:281 (1,2,3,4) - Try to be a little more consistent in the spacing of these, it will look cleaner
02:34:722 (4) - Try rotating this from selection centre by 15 degrees and then moving it up and to the left a little, for example x281y184
02:35:343 (1) - Doesn't really fit the sliders in the rest of the map imo
02:57:260 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream doesn't seem completely straight. Make it straight
04:07:986 (2) - I suggest you follow the vocals instead of this slider as it seems kinda vague what it is following, as if it's just there to fill up space
Why did you not start using streams until the end of the song xD
[Starlight]
01:24:773 (2,6) - Same shape is recommended
And things from previous mod.
Good stuff
Very good stuff
Good luck
I agree with what previous modders said so I will try to point out other things
[Easy]
03:40:007 (1,2) - Same shape?
[Normal]
00:02:079 (3) - Try x99
01:17:934 (6) - Try x189
03:17:623 (1) - Something like x140y139 would fit better imo
04:01:768 (5,6) - Make these a copy of eachother, it looks way cleaner I think
[Hard]
01:41:872 (1,2) - Make these exactly the same shape for consistency, making it look cleaner
03:31:302 (1) - I'd make this circles since 03:31:457 - is very loud and it would be cool to have a click on that
04:20:887 (1) - This shape should be toned down a little imo
04:28:659 - Is again very loud, consider having a note here instead
04:45:758 (1) - I get your thought process behind this but tbh it should be toned down a little aswell, the shape.
I love this diff! So well made.
[Insane]
00:39:074 (3) - Try x252y162 00:39:229 (4) - x177y62
00:47:468 (2) - Red anchor point to x223y56 looks better imo, adjust 00:48:090 (5) - accordingly
01:37:209 (2,3,4) - Imo these make you randomly slow down a little too much and kinda break the flow, try to come up with a different pattern
01:47:468 (3) - I feel like this should be about centered between 01:47:157 (2,4) -
01:59:281 (1,2,3,4) - Try to be a little more consistent in the spacing of these, it will look cleaner
02:34:722 (4) - Try rotating this from selection centre by 15 degrees and then moving it up and to the left a little, for example x281y184
02:35:343 (1) - Doesn't really fit the sliders in the rest of the map imo
02:57:260 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream doesn't seem completely straight. Make it straight
04:07:986 (2) - I suggest you follow the vocals instead of this slider as it seems kinda vague what it is following, as if it's just there to fill up space
Why did you not start using streams until the end of the song xD
[Starlight]
01:24:773 (2,6) - Same shape is recommended
And things from previous mod.
Good stuff
Very good stuff
Good luck