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Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2015-12-13T02:39:47+00:00

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Euphoria wrote:
M4M (´･ω･`)

[Lunatic]
00:12:162 (1,2) - ctrl+g从flow的角度来看我觉得这样更顺手
//这个之前就有人提过..试了试感觉还是现在的更顺手点。而且2音更高，拉远一点比较正常

00:16:420 (6) - 和00:16:808 (1,2) - 同时ctrl+g里有同上，当然如果不改那就都不用改了;w;
//6不能反向，为了间距，因为这个音很高。

01:17:580 (3,4) - 换一下顺序..当然如果改的话后面01:18:355 (5,6,7,8) - 也要调整顺序
//没必要

01:35:580 (10) - 没叠好
//故意的因为 - 01:34:419 (5) - 也是这样

看了好几遍感觉没什么问题。。不过总体上感觉没必要完全根据中线来摆对称，可以之后尝试一下偏轴或者斜轴或者中心对称之类的
//中轴对称都有好多player完全感觉不出来，更不用说其它五花八门的对称了。
//所以我不太用其它类型的对称，但是各种对称都是有用一点点的。

然后还有一点是滑条的速度缺少一种根据节奏变化而变化的感觉（不知道是不是和图风有关
//一变速就难对称了...

都是有心论，图本身挺好;w;
//;w;

[Hard]
00:08:679 (4) - 前面都是对称的这个怎么突然变形状了
//呜呜果然没一个人看得出我是在做BG的镰刀的形状..谁来教我怎么拉滑条？

00:42:161 (4,1) - 这个没包好的太明显了
//修了

00:43:903 (1) - 这个可以往下来一点，让他和00:43:129 (3,4) - 这两个的滑条尾成一个等边三角，感觉可能会好点
//改了

00:51:645 (1,2) - 00:52:419 (3,4) - 这两组音乐上还是有差异的，不过从谱面上看完全没表现出来（虽然hard我也不知道怎么改，不过也许可以尝试改改音效？
//改个方向看看

低难度稍微看了一下，说不出东西
以上

GL >.<

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Mollon

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Mollon 2015-12-14T05:48:39+00:00

sv fixed!

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09kami

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09kami 2015-12-16T09:28:47+00:00

听得我射了一颗星

Lily Bread

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Joined December 2014

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Lily Bread 2015-12-16T10:03:31+00:00

09kami wrote:
听得我射了一颗星

谢谢

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2015-12-23T14:46:38+00:00

m4m
噫，这张就是之前我说的本来想M4M但是感觉摸不到什么于是丢星滚的图……结果果然这次还是摸不到什么……

[Easy]

00:29:581 声音很连续，感觉能少空点就少空点，所以我喜欢这样
SPOILER
00:32:871 这个音是这里早半拍进来的，想办法把这里用滑条盖上，不要空着，大概会更舒服
00:36:161 (3) - 加长半拍
00:37:710 (1,2) - 2之前这里声音很多，把1改成折返条把这部分声音盖上会更好，或者干脆放个转盘在00:40:032结束

[Normal]

00:17:969 (7) - 我更喜欢把67分开，可以叠到8上
01:23:000 (7,8) -
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[Hard]

并不能找出什么

[Insane]

00:14:001 (7) - 虽然这里也有声不过要比前后弱不少，我觉得删掉更好
00:43:516 (4) - 唔，这么摆容易断尾，因为前面几个都只折返一次。让尾巴和1同向，放近点，或者干脆直接叠下面会更好读吧

话说刚我那图你有没有兴趣做个gd

Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2015-12-23T14:51:55+00:00

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Pata-Mon wrote:
m4m
噫，这张就是之前我说的本来想M4M但是感觉摸不到什么于是丢星滚的图……结果果然这次还是摸不到什么……

[Normal]
00:17:969 (7) - 我更喜欢把67分开，可以叠到8上
//这都无所谓吧..
01:23:000 (7,8) -
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//不好，感觉上这里就应该空掉
[Hard]
并不能找出什么
[Insane]
00:14:001 (7) - 虽然这里也有声不过要比前后弱不少，我觉得删掉更好
//一是这音不弱，二是为了玩起来舒服
00:43:516 (4) - 唔，这么摆容易断尾，因为前面几个都只折返一次。让尾巴和1同向，放近点，或者干脆直接叠下面会更好读吧
//不行，我这图滑条、折返的1/4都是不碰在一起的
话说刚我那图你有没有兴趣做个gd

呜…钢琴曲我做不来的...

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Mollon

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Mollon 2015-12-23T19:41:32+00:00

[Easy]

00:29:581 声音很连续，感觉能少空点就少空点，所以我喜欢这样
SPOILER
这里我想突出2的折返滑条这里的音，所以决定还是这样了。
00:32:871 这个音是这里早半拍进来的，想办法把这里用滑条盖上，不要空着，大概会更舒服
我本来是这么放的，应lily bread的要求改成了现在的样子，感觉这样确实节奏简单一些，看其他的modder还有没有提这里的吧~
00:36:161 (3) - 加长半拍
就这样啦，统一两拍比较好
00:37:710 (1,2) - 2之前这里声音很多，把1改成折返条把这部分声音盖上会更好，或者干脆放个转盘在00:40:032结束

easy转盘要隔物件4拍不够啦

应lily bread的request，easy要做成节奏尽可能简单适应纯新的diff，所以不是太影响的音我都尽可能把节奏往简单统一地下了直接开的1/1，节奏方面目前来说比较满意了，所以暂时没有要改的打算，如果之后碰到有非改不可的理由再改节奏啦。thx for mod！

另外我看了一眼开头的滑条有一个居然飞出去了。。又调了一下，就麻烦帮我再重新传下拉

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YaegakiErika_old

4 posts

Joined April 2015

YaegakiErika_old 2015-12-31T05:06:13+00:00

来了

[Hard]
00:37:710 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段好无聊啊，能不能搞点花样出来？变点方向之类的
而且这四个还没有音效。。怎么搞的？
00:40:032 (5) - 这个滑条，在normal里都变了一下形状，hard里是不是也要变一下？

[Lunatic]
这。。感觉连我都能凹凹FC，没什么好说的。
不过这短滑条是不是太飘了点，完全捉摸不透啊

总的来说节奏太重复了。。不过根据你说的，音乐就这样。。确实，也没办法。。

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2015-12-31T06:32:34+00:00

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YaegakiErika wrote:
来了

[Hard]
00:37:710 (1,2,3,4) - 这一段好无聊啊，能不能搞点花样出来？变点方向之类的
而且这四个还没有音效。。怎么搞的？
//唔...没必要加音效，我看看要不要改一下位置

00:40:032 (5) - 这个滑条，在normal里都变了一下形状，hard里是不是也要变一下？
//好

[Lunatic]
这。。感觉连我都能凹凹FC，没什么好说的。
不过这短滑条是不是太飘了点，完全捉摸不透啊

总的来说节奏太重复了。。不过根据你说的，音乐就这样。。确实，也没办法。。

//嗯..

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- Milhofo -

683 posts

Joined February 2014

- Milhofo - 2016-01-05T16:28:44+00:00

Hi, from my 東方Project Queue

[General]

Your background has a pretty weird resolution, and those black lines aren't really seen (maybe in lower resolution?), because of this the picture looks pixelated in higher resolution, I searched for the highest res I could find and used it on the standard resolution for bg's, if you want to use it (fine if you don't): http://puu.sh/mkrKi/7b61b691eb.jpg

[Mollon's Easy]

00:16:808 (3,4) - this is perfectly fine but as a suggestion and taking into consideration the general tastes of players, I think it would looks better if you curved (4) into blanketing (3), same goes for 01:07:903 (3,4) -
00:21:453 (3) - rotate by -11º, than adjust 00:22:614 (4) - around x:300 y:132
00:29:968 (2,1) - even though it's slow, the flow between these sliders feels pretty weird 00:29:968 (2) - could be directed towards the right, like http://puu.sh/mktmu/b78ba052af.jpg
00:38:871 - why not use a note here? feels empty
01:17:193 (3,4) - this could be blanketed, not because of the aesthetics but because flow would improve too

[Normal]

00:09:840 (1,2,3) - this flow isn't the best, when going from (2) to (3) the cursor movement feels wrong, you could adapt the positioning of (1) to improve it
00:13:324 (7) - this slider shape could be improved, currently it looks too different from the rest, you could curve it more
00:40:807 (1) - I fell like this should have the same shape as 00:41:581 (2) - or 00:40:032 (4) -
00:43:903 (1,2) - blanket can be adjusted, as well as 00:51:645 (2,3) -
01:41:193 - imo it would sound better if you added a note here and started the spinner on 01:41:580 - , it would follow the song better I think

[Hard]

00:27:646 (5) - why not separate this into two reverse sliders? It has a change in power when the snares start at 00:28:033 - so you coould start the second slider there
01:27:258 (4,5) - flow could be improved, how about ctrl+h on (5)?

[Lunatic]

00:43:516 (4) - the player has no idea that this slider will be longer than 1 reverse when playing for the first time, you could change it for a triple with a slider or make it two sliders, to make it different from 00:41:194 (2,4,2) -
00:49:710 (4) - and 01:02:097 (6) - ^
01:23:774 (12,1) - this doesn't look very good comparing to the rest of the map that looks super clean, not saying to blanket but you could position (1) differently to make it look better
Beautiful symmetry on this map, it has been a long time since I've seen a map like this, love it

[Overall]
That last diff is really well made, shooting a star because I wanna see it ranked, gl ^^

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-01-06T02:18:34+00:00

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- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from my 東方Project Queue
//hi

[General]
Your background has a pretty weird resolution, and those black lines aren't really seen (maybe in lower resolution?), because of this the picture looks pixelated in higher resolution, I searched for the highest res I could find and used it on the standard resolution for bg's, if you want to use it (fine if you don't): http://puu.sh/mkrKi/7b61b691eb.jpg
//fine!

[Normal]
00:09:840 (1,2,3) - this flow isn't the best, when going from (2) to (3) the cursor movement feels wrong, you could adapt the positioning of (1) to improve it
//i think it's ok.
00:13:324 (7) - this slider shape could be improved, currently it looks too different from the rest, you could curve it more
//ok
00:40:807 (1) - I fell like this should have the same shape as 00:41:581 (2) - or 00:40:032 (4) -
//not necessary
00:43:903 (1,2) - blanket can be adjusted, as well as 00:51:645 (2,3) -
//in fact, i'm not making blanket in all my diffs.
01:41:193 - imo it would sound better if you added a note here and started the spinner on 01:41:580 - , it would follow the song better I think
//fixed
[Hard]
00:27:646 (5) - why not separate this into two reverse sliders? It has a change in power when the snares start at 00:28:033 - so you coould start the second slider there
//i should make hard diff easier, so one slider is ok imo.
01:27:258 (4,5) - flow could be improved, how about ctrl+h on (5)?
//for the flow to - 01:28:226 (6) - .
[Lunatic]
00:43:516 (4) - the player has no idea that this slider will be longer than 1 reverse when playing for the first time, you could change it for a triple with a slider or make it two sliders, to make it different from 00:41:194 (2,4,2) -
/*
00:43:516 (4,1) - they are very close, i think insane player can notice it.
and if i change to triple, - 00:43:516 (4,1) - they should be made away, that is very hard for me to fix.
but i will consider about it.
*/
00:49:710 (4) - and 01:02:097 (6) - ^
//^
01:23:774 (12,1) - this doesn't look very good comparing to the rest of the map that looks super clean, not saying to blanket but you could position (1) differently to make it look better
/*
01:24:161 (1,6) - they are a couple
01:23:774 (12,1) - and i use all this DS in this kind of repeat slider.
so i think it's ok.
*/
Beautiful symmetry on this map, it has been a long time since I've seen a map like this, love i
//than
ks
[Overall]
That last diff is really well made, shooting a star because I wanna see it ranked, gl ^^
//thanks!

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Mollon

86 posts

Joined February 2013

Mollon 2016-01-06T08:08:25+00:00

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from my 東方Project Queue

[Mollon's Easy]
00:16:808 (3,4) - this is perfectly fine but as a suggestion and taking into consideration the general tastes of players, I think it would looks better if you curved (4) into blanketing (3), same goes for 01:07:903 (3,4) - alright，fixed!
00:21:453 (3) - rotate by -11º, than adjust 00:22:614 (4) - around x:300 y:132 i've got a try and it seems weird...i prefer the objects before...anyway, i fixed the distance a bit~
00:29:968 (2,1) - even though it's slow, the flow between these sliders feels pretty weird 00:29:968 (2) - could be directed towards the right, like http://puu.sh/mktmu/b78ba052af.jpg i wanna make sense between 00:29:968 (2,1) so i decide to keep~
00:38:871 - why not use a note here? feels empty nice!
01:17:193 (3,4) - this could be blanketed, not because of the aesthetics but because flow would improve too
i prefer the shape before...blanket seems good until they are everywhere in my opinion...

[Overall]
That last diff is really well made, shooting a star because I wanna see it ranked, gl ^^

really thanks for your good mod!

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