1. Advanced (2,7 stars, 540 notes)
2. Bakari's Simple (1,5 stars, 225 notes)
3. I remember (3,78 stars, 777 notes)

• [Bakari's Simple]

1. 01:14:157 (1) - Beginning of this slider is slightly to close to the end, which makes it out of shape.
2. 01:40:498 - There should be something. Next circle at 01:40:986 (2) has too small distance to previous slider which makes it easy to click too early.
3. 03:41:962 - There should be 1/4 slider. I don't see any sense in this break.
4. 04:48:791 - Spinner end fits better here. (imo)
   [Advanced]
5. Biggest thing here is that there shouldn't be any drum hitsounds until 00:46:840
6. 00:36:108 (2) - Really confusing overlap. At least move it slighty to the left.
7. 00:40:986 (4) - This slider chould be moved to 00:40:742 and be a little closer to previous. It will fits the song perfectly.
8. 01:49:279 (1,2,3) - Much too big spacing for this diff. 1/2 has just a little larger. Consider doing something with it.
9. 01:51:962 (10) - NC
10. 02:26:596 (2) - Place this circle somewhere else, it plays weird when placed there.
11. 03:07:328 (1) - This lack of spacing makes map a little undermapped here since song intensity doesn't change
12. HP Drain 5 -> 4
    [I remember]
13. Same thing about drums
14. 01:56:474 (5,6,7,8) - a little overmapped ;;
15. 02:02:328 (4,5,6,7) - Same
16. 02:12:084 (5,6,7,8) - Same
17. 02:17:937 (5,6,7,8) - Same
18. 02:24:157 (5,1) - Too big jump comparing to rest of the song
19. 02:28:669 (2) - Bad overlap. Move this slider slightly down and do CTRL+J on it.
20. 02:35:620 (4,1) - Next big jump
21. 02:40:010 (1) - This slider is really confusing because it has 2 white point in the center of screen so it seems like you have to make like spiral to get through it. (Amazing shape tho)
22. 02:44:279 (2) - Next bad overlap.
23. 02:51:718 (1) - This slider doesn't fit here imo. :S but I'm not sure.
24. 03:58:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Patterns like this one is really hard to hit, It may fit here but it's not fun pattern.
25. 04:09:279 (6) - Increase spacing of this slider
26. HP Drain 6 -> 5,5 (Taking care of HR and DT)
27. OD 8 -> 6,5~7 (I'm serious here)

LukerMaster wrote:

Let's start modding \:D/

• [Advanced]

1. Biggest thing here is that there shouldn't be any drum hitsounds until 00:46:840 Not agree, why do you say it?, tone of drum feels good with piano tone, imo. but I delete drum in 00:28:303 -
2. 00:36:108 (2) - Really confusing overlap. At least move it slighty to the left. Maybe, but is not really difficult to read.
3. 00:40:986 (4) - This slider chould be moved to 00:40:742 and be a little closer to previous. It will fits the song perfectly.ehh, nope. I want this bc Piano!.
4. 01:49:279 (1,2,3) - Much too big spacing for this diff. 1/2 has just a little larger. Consider doing something with it. Not agree. This is same spacing. Stacking that could be bad idea, and other DS feels wrong to me.
5. 01:51:962 (10) - NC Why?, I tried use a NC each 2 measures.
6. 02:26:596 (2) - Place this circle somewhere else, it plays weird when placed there. Ok, I unstack
7. 03:07:328 (1) - This lack of spacing makes map a little undermapped here since song intensity doesn't change Not agree, feel how music is quiet here!
8. HP Drain 5 -> 4 I will think about it later.
   [I remember]
9. Same thing about drums same before
10. 01:56:474 (5,6,7,8) - a little overmapped ;; Maps does not have any overmapping. I'm 95% sure.
11. 02:02:328 (4,5,6,7) - Same
12. 02:12:084 (5,6,7,8) - Same
13. 02:17:937 (5,6,7,8) - Same
14. 02:24:157 (5,1) - Too big jump comparing to rest of the song Not really, I used 3.0x in anoter sections too.
15. 02:28:669 (2) - Bad overlap. Move this slider slightly down and do CTRL+J on it. I dont understand why do you think this stack is bad :/
16. 02:35:620 (4,1) - Next big jump ^
17. 02:40:010 (1) - This slider is really confusing because it has 2 white point in the center of screen so it seems like you have to make like spiral to get through it. (Amazing shape tho) hahaha, Thanks. But really?, I think slider way is completely clear... with default skin.
18. 02:44:279 (2) - Next bad overlap. ^
19. 02:51:718 (1) - This slider doesn't fit here imo. :S but I'm not sure.
20. 03:58:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Patterns like this one is really hard to hit, It may fit here but it's not fun pattern. But its beautiful ;w;
21. 04:09:279 (6) - Increase spacing of this slider Not agree. This slider is not stacked due its difficult to read. But i dont want spacing here, because song is decreasing intensity here.
22. HP Drain 6 -> 5,5 (Taking care of HR and DT) Im not mapping for mods, I mapped for NoMod.
23. OD 8 -> 6,5~7 (I'm serious here) I will think about it later.

Kalibe wrote:

hoy

General*

* Unused hitsounds:
asdsoft-hitfinish.wav waaahh, thanks!
- Also uncheck Widescreen in all diffs, cause it's unnessesary. I am planning add a SB later


[Advanced]

* 00:35:132 (1,2) - ?? This is really weird to play dude. I really would to move (2) elsewhere. Now it can be rather confusing while gameplay. Changed!
- 00:44:889 (3) - Whistles on repeater and second head not fitting well with song imo. Only one in first head plays nice. I not agree ~_~
* 01:49:279 - Section overall feels weird. example 01:51:596 (8,9) - vs 01:54:401 (4,5) - why one of them are stacked manually and one with used ds? That's so strange. And both of them are the same sounds xd. Even if those are same rhythms, both styles are intuitive in play. Manual stacks are only when triples are before a slider.
- 02:13:913 (4,5,6) - Check spacing? Every note have diffirent ds lol. good catch!
- 02:24:401 (1,2) - Kinda misleading. Why u just don't use ds on him or stack it on 02:24:401 (1) - ? cuz that was more misleading xD
- 02:51:718 (9,1) - Swap NCs. done
* 02:56:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - What's wrong with this spacing? Why is it getting much bigger than before here 02:56:596 (2,3,4) - and then drastically decreases 02:57:571 (4,5,6) - ? // Just make it consistent since there are same sounds here. this does not feel same for me :/
- 03:16:840 (4,5) - I saw ur mapping vocal things with circles, so split those 2 sliders into 4 circles for consistency? :3 jummm. nope, I think sliders feels better here.
* 04:37:084 (1,2) - Ok, (1) follows vocal, but why you extending (2) ? There's nothing here to extending something. I would just map those drums, like u did before. ugg, I dont want. I want to keep a good spread too.

[I remember]

* 00:25:132 (1) - That slider shape looks ugly a bit ;w; // I know u can do it better ;w;
- 00:40:010 (3,7) - Stack properly those sliders~ very nazi, but okay xD
- 01:41:474 (3) - If you want to overlap fully slider, u should just NC it for reason. xD, I will wait for more opinions
* 02:02:937 (1,4) - This overlap is visible in-game and doesn't look nice imo. Try to avoid it~ I want this pattern (yeah, with overlap)
- Ok i will stop here, since rest of diff looks fine to me.

That's all. Good luck!

Yoshikawa Hoshi wrote:

hard
00:35:132 (1,2) - not the best overlap/flow thing for the hard diff.. ehehehe ^^U
00:38:547 (6,1) - such 1/1 stacks isnt a good idea when u are using the same 1/2 stacks just ahead 00:42:693 (6,1) - Not agree, sorry.
01:12:450 (6) - better to end this slider here 01:12:693 - so it would work correctly with the music this is following voice
01:45:132 (9) - better to use here a 1/2 slider since u are mapping on vocals but just here I changed to follow drums xD, Voice was very long to follow
01:49:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to change a few triplets here with ones with lower spacing, like u did ahead, for example, here 01:54:401 (4,5) - I dont feel 0.2x confortable in slider tails, but... I stacked those.
02:24:401 (1) - looks really weird.. why didnt u just started it here 02:24:157 - like u did before some times.. vocal is very strong here and since u are mapping on it, better not to do such things lol, sorry, i not agree
02:51:718 (9,1) - swap ncs for consistency done
03:36:108 (6) - http://cs630417.vk.me/v630417809/45d46/jIF2YaRih2A.jpg maybe try something vertical? for the better flow nahh, i want to point to next
04:25:376 (1,1) - the recovery time after the spinner is too little for such an easy diff >advanced, >123BPM
04:40:986 (1) - give this note more spacing cuz the beat is pretty strong? nope.

insane
use ar8, since in hard its only 5.5, so the gap is pretty huge Not agree because density!
00:23:913 (2) - nc this for consistency
00:40:986 (5) - this one too
01:35:620 (5) - and again xd
01:40:498 (2,3) - not like this is unreadable or smth, but it just looks weird ._. also u forgot to nc this one 01:41:474 (3) - hehehehe ^^UU, I dont want to change it. It works like a surprise, but no one test player has failed here!
01:45:376 (7) - and again missing nc
02:19:767 (7,8,9) - maybe to use a bigger spacing on this triplet? will look more interesting imo mm... I will think about
02:24:157 (5,1) - this spacing is really huge.. its even bigger than 02:20:254 (10,1) - this one, when it should be lower since here starts 02:20:254 (10,1) - the new scetion. also flow here isnt the best But I use long jump in other places too. I think this is fine and cool.
02:49:767 (1) - this note needs more spacing than this one 02:49:523 (8) - cuz of the emphasis (02:49:767 (1) - here is a strong for ur section downbeat) Not agree. Jump is due Piano!
04:44:889 (3) - nc this one because there are some huge changes in the musci

okay, thats all! best of luck!

1. Maybe add green to combo colors? It's pretty stong color in bg
2. Your bg should be 1366x768, not 1229x768 1366x768 sized here
3. 03:38:547 (1) - I would start the kiai from here, that kiai part before this is closer to a buildup for me

1. I'd raise ar a bit, maybe to 6 or 6.5
2. 00:19:523 (1) - Imo 4 second long slider shouldn't just have a single curve, it's.. boring and not aesthetically appealling to the eye, and if you insist on keeping simply curved slider you could fix that blanket a bit with 00:23:913 (1) -
3. 01:21:474 (12,13,1) - this is kind of linear jump and 13-1 is a lot bigger jump than 12-13 and thinking that this is just an advanced diff so players will easily missplay that part, it's just uncomfortble to play
4. 01:50:986 (7) - sliderstart whistle?
5. 02:06:596 (7) - ^
6. 01:56:108 (10,11,12) - uneven spacing, and maybe a bit too spacy imo, uncomfortable to play and after that all of those triples after sliders are a bit too spacy
7. 02:07:815 (11,12,13) - uneven spacing
8. 02:14:645 (7,8,9) - ^
9. 02:26:596 (2) - so silent sound but it has pretty big spacing from 02:24:401 (1) - ? Imo it emphasizes that sound pretty badly
10. 02:43:669 (7) - stack properly
11. 02:59:523 (1) - move sliderend a bit to the right so this slider points to 03:00:254 (2) - better
12. 04:23:425 (1) - by moving 3rd tick to x:-8 y:140 and red tick to x:172 y:132 you can make this blanket perfect

1. Cs6? Whoa that's brave, I'd rather put OD7 because Cs6 gives player pretty much challenge already
2. 00:19:523 (1) - 00:19:523 (1) - Imo 4 second long slider shouldn't just have a single curve, it's.. boring and not aesthetically appealling to the eye
3. 00:25:132 (1) - I just don't like this slidershape, could be prettier
4. 00:33:181 (6) - try to make that curve look smooth at the end of this slider? Now it looks like a sharp corner
5. 00:35:620 (2) - stack sliderend under 00:34:645 (8) - sliderend?
6. 00:40:986 (5,6) - copypaste?
7. 01:33:669 (1) - Imo that whistle doesn't fit on that sliderslide
8. 01:41:474 (3) - ^
9. 01:40:498 (2,3) - ehh.. I don't like this idea
10. 01:51:718 (2,4) - ugly overlap for me
11. 02:03:669 (4,5,6) - move these a bit further from 02:03:303 (2) - ?
12. 02:40:010 (1) - okay this is neat as fuck
13. 03:18:303 (6,7,8) - uneven spacing
14. 03:36:352 (7) - x:96 y:152?
15. 03:39:035 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing
16. 04:40:742 (8,1) - wow this is insane spacing here, You shouldn't do this because kiai ends at 1 and making suddenly a jump this huge at the end of the kiai is not good
17. Overall astonishingly beautiful diff!

1. Only 3 colors? C'mon you can increase them. A green like this would be nice
2. Disable your "Widescreen Support" since you haven't a SB or a video yet
3. Add other tags, like 'low bpm'

1. 00:58:547 (1,2) - a blanket here seems great
2. 01:02:450 (1,2,3) - forgive this finicky suggestion, but a perfect triangle here would fit better than that one
3. 01:35:620 (2,1) - you can also make a double blanket here, but it's up to you
4. 01:50:742 (2,3) - just a slightly fix on this blanket
5. 01:57:084 (1,2,1) - blanket here too?
6. 03:21:474 - really sure to keep this part empty?
7. 04:37:084 (1,2) - what about to blanket this by moving '1' at x:184 y:264 and fixing 04:36:596 (3) - this one too?
8. 04:39:035 (3,4,1) - perfect triangle? >.<

1. 03:26:352 (9) - this one is overmapped tbh, just make this just like 03:27:694 (3) - this one (for example)
2. 03:30:255 (9) - same
3. 03:36:108 (6) - ^ (Well, there are a lot of them, I'll be honest with you. I don't really like that and imo those small overmap ruins the map, which is AWESOME
4. 04:22:693 (4,1) - blanket can also be improved a bit

1. 00:37:328 - why you've skipped all this downbeats while 00:35:132 (1,2,3,4) - here you follow them? That's awkward :/
2. 00:56:108 (4,5,1) - align this pattern better
3. 01:28:547 (3) - why this random shape here? lol
4. 01:41:474 (3) - that's enough confusing man, move it a bit to right or left since it's almost covered by the previous slider

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs

Simple


Advance

SPOILER

00:23:913 (1) - I think it would flow better if you moved this slider down so the previous one is aiming at it. (If you move it down, flip it so it's on it's side.)
00:27:328 (1,2) - To improve the flow and keep a similar idea here, try this: Without adjusting the sliders, move 2 to the right, and re-snap the notes ahead.
00:57:328 (6) - This might work out better if you either make this a straight slider, or make it curve outwards instead of inwards.
01:18:059 (1,2,3) - There is no triplet here Remove 2 and it'll be fine.
01:18:547 (4) - I think it would look better if this curved towards 5 instead of the way it is now.
01:24:645 (7) - You could angle this a bit so it aims towards the left a bit so it flows better.
01:47:328 (6,7) - I don't think overlaps these obvious are allowed in normal. Simply move it to the right?
02:19:035 (9,1) - Spacing here is inconsistent. Maybe bring forward 1, and re-snap the notes so they aim towards each other.
02:20:011 (4) - Plus you're better off keeping this pattern at an angle so it flows better into 1.
02:23:913 (9,10) - ctrl + g (Improves flow.)
03:08:791 (2) - Again, I don't know if these overlaps will work very well. Blanket?
03:16:108 (3) - ctrl + g and re-snap so it flows into 4 better.
04:15:133 (5) - I see what you're going with here, but wouldn't keeping this slider straight upwards instead of angled be good too?
04:32:693 (5) - ^

Last Diff

SPOILER

00:30:254 (2) - ctrl + g for easier flow between the previous note, and the next one. Not changed.
00:55:620 (3) - Although it might be fine here, snap to the end of the slider instead of under it? I dont feel any issue with place at slider tail.
01:00:254 (5) - The spacing here is inconsistent. Although I see legit reasons to do this, I think you're better off putting this on the head of 1 instead. its a jump because the piano.
01:11:230 (3) - Not overlap here please? Sorry, not changed.
01:18:059 (1,2,3) - The over map from the previous diff. Remove 2 and it's good. Its not overmap, (decrease effects volume, and you will listen its not :3 )
01:21:962 (1) - I know you're going for symmetry here, but the flow here isn't the best. Try replicating this pattern. (Although it's not need on the left side, if you want to stay symmetrical, nothing wrong with doing it!) (If you can think of a better pattern than this, then go ahead and use it!: http://puu.sh/rKbMC/a6ff115997.jpg&#41; Your suggestion is not bad, but I feel the flow fine, and I like as i made. Not changed.
01:28:547 (3) - You had a similar thinking to me when I was fixing the previous mod. But this slider might be too small to do and make it look good. A simple straight slider should be 'flowy' enough. red node is placed to follow the voice here. Not changed.
01:29:767 (1) - I know you're doing a spiral pattern, but the flow could be improved. Flip this so it curves upwards and try to replicate that same pattern this way.
01:30:254 (2,3) - ^ Not agree about flow, sorry.
01:30:742 (3,4) - The slider leniency isn't low enough to the point where this flows good. If you fix the mod above it should be fine though.
01:31:718 (1,3) - Although this works, you can do the same slider pattern I showed you before. (Or your own?) For consistency and improved flow. Not changed
02:00:986 (1,2) - Not only is the flow here not the best, it's unfairly spaced. How about overlapping the head of 1 over the head of 2 instead of it's tail?
02:35:620 (4) - You might have to re-map this slider so it flows into the next note better.
02:40:010 (1) - Some players might view this as a loop, and not an upside down ' U ' Keep the pattern, but maybe spread the ' U ' apart more. Slider way is very clear, imo.
02:55:620 (1) - This slider is aiming towards the border instead of the next note. Flip the curve?
02:56:596 (3) - I have an idea for these sliders. Try this: http://puu.sh/rKcwz/7ae10ebbc3.jpg To keep the symmetry, do it on the other side to.
02:57:571 (5,6) - Now that I think about it, you might have to do a completely different pattern altogether, because this slider is aiming towards the border, but the next note is above it.
03:02:693 (4) - Might need to do a different slider shape to flow better into 5.
03:05:376 (1) - You could turn this into a red-point slider (Where the end points into a different direction. It's like a burai slider but rank-able.)
03:06:108 (3) - ^
03:28:547 (7) - Since you're going for a snappy-theme during the Kiai, why not bring this not out so it's not overlapped anymore?
03:45:376 (5) - Should make this slider aim towards 6 for better flow.
Not because it:

03:49:279 (5) - ctrl + g for better flow.
04:02:328 (2,3) - Fix this overlap?
04:04:279 (2,3) - ^
04:09:767 (1) - ctrl + g for better flow.
04:10:620 (4,5) - Fix overlap?
04:16:108 (3,4) - Not only does this overlap not look very good, the spacing is unfair. Try a blanket instead. I move it a bit
04:19:523 (1) - Make this slider aim towards 2?
04:22:450 (5) - You might have to change the shape of this slider so it has better flow with the next few notes. Not because the shape with 04:21:474 (1,3) -
04:23:913 (3) - ^
04:25:376 (1,2,3,4) - If you want to do overlaps here, which I now see a reason for. At least do it at the heads instead of the tails so it has a much more fair spacing. Its just taste.
04:30:254 (5) - This should curve towards the next note instead of towards the border.
04:36:108 (5) - ^
04:38:059 (5) - ^

Good luck on the map.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi, I changed the BG and added a simple SB.