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WHITE WALL - Pluto The First

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ReesesPuffs
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Joined December 2013
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ReesesPuffs
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 03, 2016 at 2:15:43 PM

Artist: WHITE WALL
Title: Pluto The First
Source: DDR
BPM: 230
Filesize: 5996kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Challenge (7.55 stars, 438 notes)
  2. Insane (6.19 stars, 394 notes)
Download: WHITE WALL - Pluto The First
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Not for the faint of heart...

Still a work in progress
Last edited by ReesesPuffs , edited 4 times in total.
extrasensory
73 posts
Joined February 2015
extrasensory
The following suggestions are made for the "Challenge" Diff.

1) The stream from 0:45 to 0:49 seems to get a little too hard in my oppinion since it's getting wider and wider until it ends. Maybe try to just make it a little less wide. 2) From ~0:54:500 until ~1:08:345 there are 3 weirdly shaped sliders, especially the last one before the break begins. It seems like one could easily sliderbreak there, so maybe try to at least avoid such a shape as this slider has or maybe just avoid as many edges as it has right now. 3) The Slider at 1:27:700 seems a little sliderbreak attracting too. I'd suggest you could maybe make it a little rounder. 4) From 1:30 to 1:35:300 there are 3 sliders that look a little weird to me and it's not really necessary to shape them like that. All those suggestions that just have been made are only my personal preference and ideas though so you shouldn't hesitate to ask other people about their oppinions and suggestions. PERSONAL Conclusion: With a little more work it could be a pretty decent and challenging map.

PS: I like the jumps.
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Sadistic Potato
49 posts
Joined December 2013
Sadistic Potato
[General]
Artist name and title is correct
Source is from Dance Dance Revolution HOTTEST PARTY

[Timing]
There are some unsnapped objects in both difficulties. You can check that by opening AiMod (CTRL+SHIFT+A)
Time signature from the beginning until 00:29:198 is 3/4
Time signature from 00:51:983 until 01:17:101 is 3/4
Time signature from 01:25:448 until 01:36:357 is either 3/4 or 4/4. I'm not sure about this. I'm sticking with 3/4

I see that you're doubling the BPM to make sliders go fast. It's okay. But does it really 440 BPM?

Insane diff could've been like this
open .osu Insane diff in notepad (File -> Open .osu in notepad) replace corresponding sections with the following
51983,272.727272727273,3,1,1,75,1,1
51983,-50,3,1,1,75,0,1
54710,-100,4,1,3,75,0,1
55119,-50,4,1,1,75,0,1
57710,-100,4,1,3,75,0,1
58255,-50,4,1,1,75,0,1
63846,-100,4,1,3,75,0,1
64255,-50,4,1,1,75,0,1
67119,-50,4,1,3,75,0,1
67255,-100,4,1,1,75,0,0

Challenge diff could've been like this
.osu Challenge diff, replace corresponding sections with the following
51983,272.727272727273,3,1,1,75,1,0
51983,-50,4,1,1,75,0,1
54710,-33.33333333333335,4,1,3,75,0,1
55119,-50,4,1,1,75,0,1
57846,-33.33333333333335,4,1,3,75,0,1
58255,-50,4,1,1,75,0,1
63846,-33.33333333333335,4,1,3,75,0,1
64255,-50,4,1,1,75,0,1
67119,-40,4,1,1,75,0,0


85448,272.727272727273,3,1,1,75,1,0
85448,-33.33333333333335,4,1,2,80,0,0
85584,-33.33333333333335,4,1,1,80,0,0
88038,-33.33333333333335,4,1,1,5,0,0
88311,-33.33333333333335,4,1,1,75,0,0
92675,-33.33333333333335,4,1,2,75,0,0

[Insane]
00:10:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should be triangles. Listen carefully. It's three beats in a bar
00:19:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - consider making a new combo at 00:21:241 (9) -
01:06:301 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - inconsistent combo with 01:05:210 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -

[Challenge]
00:10:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Now this is a triangle. Maybe you should NC 00:11:198 (4) - and 00:14:328 (4) -
00:19:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - consider making a new combo at 00:21:241 (9) -
00:40:973 (9) - NC
00:44:198 (9) - NC
00:43:898 (5,13) - optional NC
00:47:573 (6,7,8,9) - weird turn. suggestion
ReesesPuffs
32 posts
Joined December 2013
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ReesesPuffs
Well, i'm a bit late but thank you for the mods :)

Updated the map once again
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