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Nayutan seijin - A Perfect Life

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ragingkrane
81 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
ragingkrane
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 27, 2017 at 6:10:53 PM

Artist: Nayutan seijin
Title: A Perfect Life
Tags: send me some goddamn tags please
BPM: 200
Filesize: 5795kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.17 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Extra (5.45 stars, 773 notes)
  3. Hard (3.32 stars, 482 notes)
  4. Insane (4.62 stars, 317 notes)
  5. Super Ultra Mega Extra (5.71 stars, 784 notes)
Download: Nayutan seijin - A Perfect Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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here's some shit,

take it.

┓(◎_◎)┓★☆★┏(◎_◎)┏★☆★┓(◎_◎)┓★☆★

(mapset will be done soon.......jpeg)
if some could just make a normal (and possibly an easy insane) for me
that would make you the greatest person earth

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jigglypuff
71 posts
Joined January 2015
jigglypuff
Are you still working on this? I'll make a Normal diff & mod this map later if you would like me too.
ragingkrane
81 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
ragingkrane
I probably wont make any more diffs and the insane is scrapped for the most part, but i'll take mods and diffs though.
jigglypuff
71 posts
Joined January 2015
jigglypuff
General - The song cuts out at 98% so you should trim it down.

Easy

00:31:236 (3,4) - This might be a bit to fast for noobs. Try this.
00:45:636 (3,4) - ^^^ http://puu.sh/nj5dX/39eda2e783.jpg
00:56:436 (4,1) - I think this would sound better like this this
00:58:536 (2) - I think this is unnecessary for an easy diff.
01:19:236 (4) - You could turn this into three notes and that might be a good idea because of of the notes for the last eight seconds have been sliders. http://puu.sh/nj652/41a259dc9b.jpg
01:21:036 (1) - Turn this into a reverse slider and delete 01:21:636 (2) -
01:49:236 (4,5,6) - I think this is too fast, make it a slider. http://puu.sh/nj652/41a259dc9b.jpg
02:09:036 (2,3,1) - Too fast
02:12:036 (3,4) - Too fast
02:15:636 (2,3) - Too fast
02:28:236 (4,5,1) - Too fast
02:33:636 (1,2,3) - Too fast
02:42:036 (4,1) - Too fast
02:45:636 (3,4,5) - Too fast
02:56:436 (2,3,4) - Too fast
02:57:336 (4,1) - This feels empty, try putting a spinner there.

Since it's an Easy diff, it's best to keep everything distanced by at least one beat

Cancer

Rename this diff, unless you're trying to say that life is anything but perfect, lol.
00:56:661 (4,5) - Place the four over the five like you did here 00:56:961 (6,7) -
00:59:961 (8) - Delete this
01:01:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you're gonna space these streams out at least put them a little close together. http://puu.sh/nj9DB/4fc3530d25.jpg
01:21:036 (1,2,3,4) - These four lead the stream in the wrong direction http://puu.sh/nj9O5/1847ea2278.jpg Try to make it curve a little more into it.this.
01:21:336 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make this one combo.
02:57:336 (5,6) - Put a spinner in between these.

I will add onto this tomorrow, I'm going to sleep. :o
ragingkrane
81 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
ragingkrane
I added most of the changes. I'll make a post of which ones i added in a few hours (because school). Also I couldn't come up with a better name for the cancer diff so i just named it something silly.
ragingkrane
81 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
ragingkrane

_rat wrote:

General - The song cuts out at 98% so you should trim it down.

Easy

00:31:236 (3,4) - This might be a bit to fast for noobs. Try this. done
00:45:636 (3,4) - ^^^ http://puu.sh/nj5dX/39eda2e783.jpg done
00:56:436 (4,1) - I think this would sound better like this this done
00:58:536 (2) - I think this is unnecessary for an easy diff. did something to change it. not sure if its better.
01:19:236 (4) - You could turn this into three notes and that might be a good idea because of of the notes for the last eight seconds have been sliders. http://puu.sh/nj652/41a259dc9b.jpg done
01:21:036 (1) - Turn this into a reverse slider and delete 01:21:636 (2) - done
01:49:236 (4,5,6) - I think this is too fast, make it a slider. http://puu.sh/nj652/41a259dc9b.jpg
02:09:036 (2,3,1) - Too fast
02:12:036 (3,4) - Too fast
02:15:636 (2,3) - Too fast
02:28:236 (4,5,1) - Too fast
02:33:636 (1,2,3) - Too fast
02:42:036 (4,1) - Too fast
02:45:636 (3,4,5) - Too fast
02:56:436 (2,3,4) - Too fast changed all the fast bits
02:57:336 (4,1) - This feels empty, try putting a spinner there. done

Since it's an Easy diff, it's best to keep everything distanced by at least one beat

Cancer

Rename this diff, unless you're trying to say that life is anything but perfect, lol.
00:56:661 (4,5) - Place the four over the five like you did here 00:56:961 (6,7) - i did a slight change to it but i think it might be better
00:59:961 (8) - Delete this don't know why the hell it was there to begin with xD
01:01:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you're gonna space these streams out at least put them a little close together. http://puu.sh/nj9DB/4fc3530d25.jpg done
01:21:036 (1,2,3,4) - These four lead the stream in the wrong direction http://puu.sh/nj9O5/1847ea2278.jpg Try to make it curve a little more into it.this.
i think its fixed
01:21:336 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make this one combo. done
02:57:336 (5,6) - Put a spinner in between these. done

I will add onto this tomorrow, I'm going to sleep. :o
Thanks for the mods. Also could you tell me if the ones with an orange response are better?
jigglypuff
71 posts
Joined January 2015
jigglypuff

ragingkrane wrote:

_rat wrote:

General - The song cuts out at 98% so you should trim it down.

Easy

00:31:236 (3,4) - This might be a bit to fast for noobs. Try this. done
00:45:636 (3,4) - ^^^ http://puu.sh/nj5dX/39eda2e783.jpg done
00:56:436 (4,1) - I think this would sound better like this this done
00:58:536 (2) - I think this is unnecessary for an easy diff. did something to change it. not sure if its better.
01:19:236 (4) - You could turn this into three notes and that might be a good idea because of of the notes for the last eight seconds have been sliders. http://puu.sh/nj652/41a259dc9b.jpg done
01:21:036 (1) - Turn this into a reverse slider and delete 01:21:636 (2) - done
01:49:236 (4,5,6) - I think this is too fast, make it a slider. http://puu.sh/nj652/41a259dc9b.jpg
02:09:036 (2,3,1) - Too fast :(
02:12:036 (3,4) - Too fast
02:15:636 (2,3) - Too fast
02:28:236 (4,5,1) - Too fast
02:33:636 (1,2,3) - Too fast
02:42:036 (4,1) - Too fast
02:45:636 (3,4,5) - Too fast
02:56:436 (2,3,4) - Too fast changed all the fast bits
02:57:336 (4,1) - This feels empty, try putting a spinner there. done

Since it's an Easy diff, it's best to keep everything distanced by at least one beat

Cancer

Rename this diff, unless you're trying to say that life is anything but perfect, lol.
00:56:661 (4,5) - Place the four over the five like you did here 00:56:961 (6,7) - i did a slight change to it but i think it might be better
00:59:961 (8) - Delete this don't know why the hell it was there to begin with xD
01:01:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you're gonna space these streams out at least put them a little close together. http://puu.sh/nj9DB/4fc3530d25.jpg done
01:21:036 (1,2,3,4) - These four lead the stream in the wrong direction http://puu.sh/nj9O5/1847ea2278.jpg Try to make it curve a little more into it.this.
i think its fixed
01:21:336 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make this one combo. done
02:57:336 (5,6) - Put a spinner in between these. done

I will add onto this tomorrow, I'm going to sleep. :o
Thanks for the mods. Also could you tell me if the ones with an orange response are better?
Yeah, the orange fixes are fine. Here's the rest of my mod, sorry about taking so long I've been pretty busy lately.
No Kudosu.

Hard

00:46:986 (1) - Lower this down slightly.
02:07:236 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make sure that these segments are all the same distance from each other. Example: http://puu.sh/nlD0k/0884d233d5.jpg
02:57:336 (5) - Add a spinner after this
Pretty solid diff.

Insane

00:14:136 (4) - End this on the red tick.
So far it's good, too bad you're scrapping it.

Extra

00:57:261 (8,1,2,3,4,1) - Connect these http://puu.sh/nlEAQ/bcbb2a0433.jpg
02:21:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Connect these http://puu.sh/nlEMj/d5eea09cc2.jpg
02:57:336 (6,1) - Spinner :o

I didn't find many errors with the rest of your maps, them seem really good :)
I'll make my diff when I have the time :oops:
Also, don't forget to trim the mp3 down.
ragingkrane
81 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
ragingkrane
changed most of it besides this http://puu.sh/nlEAQ/bcbb2a0433.jpg . mostly because it messes up the triangle slider pattern there. other than that thanks again. also i didn't trim it down because in the last few seconds you can hear the a bit of sound and when you cut it off it kinda sounds weird. idk not that big of a deal anyway.
agusch
152 posts
Joined January 2014
agusch
The offset is wrong, should be in 4836 instead of 4536
no kds
ragingkrane
81 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
ragingkrane
changed it ^
_Hou
391 posts
Joined November 2014
_Hou
hi, dude
Blue is an advices
Pinkish is strongly recommened
01:01:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these are overmapped , you should connect them
02:22:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -These also feels weird and overmapped a bit. i would recommend to change
ragingkrane
81 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
ragingkrane
well the for the pink one i can understand why you want it removed however i really like it so sorry.
for the blue one i understand that too but i don't really know how to make it any better. I'd need a suggestion of some kind. thanks for trying tho.
and i don't want to come off as a dick so i'm sorry i couldn't really do much about it.

Edit : changed the pink one
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_Hou
391 posts
Joined November 2014
_Hou

ragingkrane wrote:

well the for the pink one i can understand why you want it removed however i really like it so sorry.
for the blue one i understand that too but i don't really know how to make it any better. I'd need a suggestion of some kind. thanks for trying tho.
and i don't want to come off as a dick so i'm sorry i couldn't really do much about it.
The same thing is on captin1's diff this map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/824891 , similar pattern feels better here, that's only i can recommend. Check out how it is done there, probably you can realise smth, lol.
I Must Decrease
908 posts
Joined June 2013
I Must Decrease
Metadata is wrong since hatsune miku didnt make this song.

I'll see if I can find the actual composer later, I am a bit busy atm.
ragingkrane
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Joined November 2013
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ragingkrane
i'll change it
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