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Dellvangel
Hi, mod requested by Sharlo via PM-forum :)

1|2|3|4
[LH's Normal]
00:14:044 (14044|0,14220|0) - too hard for normal diff imo, may be try to move 00:14:044 (14044|0) - to col 3?
00:18:279 (18279|2,18455|2) - same problem with ^, suggest to move 00:18:279 (18279|2) - to col 4, better flow because 'mirror' pattern with 00:19:691 (19691|0,19867|1,19867|3) - .
00:24:808 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868047 better flow.
00:39:102 (39102|2) - move to 00:39:191 - , feel much better for play.
00:50:397 (50397|1) - same with ^, move to 00:50:485 - , may be try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868100 .
00:56:220 - add note, may be at col 4? should be same 1/4 beat like ^.
00:59:220 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868110 better flow, and feels better for play imo because 'mirror' pattern with 01:00:632 (60632|0,60808|3,60808|1,61161|0) - .
01:03:455 - may be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868126 , seems better for me.
01:09:102 (69102|0) - move to 2? easier for play.
01:14:749 (74749|1) - move to col 3 avoid same pattern with 01:16:161 (76161|1,76338|0,76338|3) - for note variation.
01:42:455 - to 02:03:279 - why follow vocal? i feel something wrong when i testplay this part, i recommend you to follow the drum sound like 1st kiai (00:57:279 - to 01:17:749 - ).

[victorica's HD]
00:27:455 (27455|2) - move to 2? comfortable for play imo.
00:50:573 (50573|2) - move to col 1? comfortable for play, and balance too.

[victorica's MX]
00:50:573 (50573|2) - move to 00:50:485 - ? because i think the double should be at 00:50:485 - like you did at 00:44:838 (44838|0,44838|3) - and 00:39:191 (39191|3,39191|1) - .

good luck! :)
Akasha-
Mod

00:00:455 - BPM should be on here

[LH's NM]
(*) different from kick and snare
00:14:044 (14044|0) - why this note is on 1st column? kick and snare are different, move this to 3rd column
00:14:926 (14926|2) - move to 2, it's different from 00:14:573 (14573|2) - and also for balance
00:18:279 (18279|2,18455|2) - the reason i've point before
00:21:279 (21279|2,21632|2,21985|2) - this, well, move 00:21:632 (21632|2) - for balance but also make it different from kick and snare
00:25:161 (25161|2) - move to 4th for balance, but for kick 00:24:455 (24455|3,25867|3) -
00:26:220 (26220|3) - move to 2 and this 00:26:926 (26926|2) - move to 4 for balance, different from kick and snare
00:27:632 (27632|1) - move to 2 (*)
00:29:044 (29044|0,29749|0) - move them all to 2 (*)
00:31:161 (31161|0) - move them to 2 (*)
00:33:279 (33279|1) - move to 3 (*)
... (i think this diff need to remap or need more mod, I 100% can't understand this mapping style, i think ask db for mod? well, this is just my opinion only, feel free to contact me (after i got free again) to get irc mod
And for the last kiai time, it's fine but it's really really really easy for the gap from Normal to Hard, just look: http://puu.sh/od9i0/2124d3974d.jpg (you might want to increase the difficult for it)

[victorica's HD]
00:23:749 (23749|2) - move this to 4th for balance but also on here didn't have same kick with 00:23:926 (23926|2) -
00:32:220 (32220|1,32397|1) - same as with this
00:37:867 (37867|2,38044|2) - 00:40:691 (40691|1,40867|1) - the shield was really hard to catch in my opinion
00:42:102 (42102|2,42279|2) - as i didn't saw anything like pitch or vocals same with this so i think it's not worth to be on same column, but 00:42:632 (42632|1,42808|1) - does
00:43:514 - how about this for balance: http://puu.sh/od8D7/b591f7a94f.jpg
00:47:749 (47749|2,47926|2) - 00:54:808 (54808|2,54985|2) -
00:56:926 (56926|3,56926|1,56926|0) - kick and cymbal wasn't worths for 3 notes like this, still in hard diff so
(the streamy parts is a little mess imo but this looks cool and easily to passed to i found no problems with this
01:40:691 - this two holds was really cool for music if you want to follow it http://puu.sh/od8MR/b42e667546.jpg
01:42:808 (102808|2,102985|2) - 01:44:220 (104220|1,104397|1) -
01:44:573 (104573|3,104573|2,104573|0) - random 3 notes, the rest of this diff you didn't add any three notes for kick snare
01:44:749 (104749|1) - remove this note, hihat + that a little recym was totally fits with only 1 note, but suggsetion
01:47:573 (107573|0,107573|2) - 01:53:220 (113220|2,113220|1) - 01:56:044 (116044|1,116044|2) - 02:01:691 (121691|1,121691|2) - reason is the same, free to reject
01:50:044 (110044|2,110220|2,110397|2) - no reasons to put this jack (kick and then snare and then hihat)
01:57:632 (117632|1) - 02:01:867 (121867|0) - random finish
02:02:926 (122926|3) - move this to 4 for balance
02:03:455 (123455|2) - this, 2nd was fit with pitch, suggestion: http://puu.sh/od9ca/3ed61e9f1a.jpg

[victorica's MX]
well, overall it's good as i just light check it but wow 00:26:749 (26749|2,26926|2,27102|2,27279|2,27455|2,27632|2) -
Jacks everywhere, i will check this deeper after next mod, so sorry, i have no time to do the last diff
The last kiai time, some kick snare i can't understand http://puu.sh/od9tj/ba2a11b7c4.jpg http://puu.sh/od9uh/a9a607e240.jpg please make a self mod to check overall of your diff once again to make sure it's fine for rhythm-based


(P.S.: please take note that i only free at weekend, and it's already ran out of my time
Please and don't rush me at modding, i'm very hate this, other mappers doesn't do this to me, and I even don't ask M4M from them like I did from you, so keep in mind if you said you can wait for that, keep in patiens, else just find another BNs or whatever who can mod your mania difficulities, i got busy in real life, next week i have final exams, the heck, so no rushy or I rejects all the requests
And here is the rushed mod, I might mod this map again after exams so
But this is just some s**t i said so nevermind about this)

Call me when you done, good luck
Topic Starter
Sharlo

yes, you're right
sorry for this and thanks
Sandalphon
it seems like the NM have some problem need to be fixed
As db's request, i will mod this map and focus on NM after the GDer reply kk's mod
good luck :3
[Emiria]

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, mod requested by Sharlo via PM-forum :)

1|2|3|4
[LH's Normal]
00:14:044 (14044|0,14220|0) - too hard for normal diff imo, may be try to move 00:14:044 (14044|0) - to col 3?
00:18:279 (18279|2,18455|2) - same problem with ^, suggest to move 00:18:279 (18279|2) - to col 4, better flow because 'mirror' pattern with 00:19:691 (19691|0,19867|1,19867|3) - .
00:24:808 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868047 better flow.
00:39:102 (39102|2) - move to 00:39:191 - , feel much better for play.
00:50:397 (50397|1) - same with ^, move to 00:50:485 - , may be try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868100 .
00:56:220 - add note, may be at col 4? should be same 1/4 beat like ^.
00:59:220 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868110 better flow, and feels better for play imo because 'mirror' pattern with 01:00:632 (60632|0,60808|3,60808|1,61161|0) - .
01:03:455 - may be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4868126 , seems better for me.
01:09:102 (69102|0) - move to 2? easier for play.
01:14:749 (74749|1) - move to col 3 avoid same pattern with 01:16:161 (76161|1,76338|0,76338|3) - for note variation.
01:42:455 - to 02:03:279 - why follow vocal? i feel something wrong when i testplay this part, i recommend you to follow the drum sound like 1st kiai (00:57:279 - to 01:17:749 - ).

[victorica's HD]
00:27:455 (27455|2) - move to 2? comfortable for play imo.
00:50:573 (50573|2) - move to col 1? comfortable for play, and balance too.

[victorica's MX]
00:50:573 (50573|2) - move to 00:50:485 - ? because i think the double should be at 00:50:485 - like you did at 00:44:838 (44838|0,44838|3) - and 00:39:191 (39191|3,39191|1) - .

good luck! :)

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Mod

00:00:455 - BPM should be on here

[LH's NM]
(*) different from kick and snare
00:14:044 (14044|0) - why this note is on 1st column? kick and snare are different, move this to 3rd column
00:14:926 (14926|2) - move to 2, it's different from 00:14:573 (14573|2) - and also for balance
00:18:279 (18279|2,18455|2) - the reason i've point before
00:21:279 (21279|2,21632|2,21985|2) - this, well, move 00:21:632 (21632|2) - for balance but also make it different from kick and snare
00:25:161 (25161|2) - move to 4th for balance, but for kick 00:24:455 (24455|3,25867|3) -
00:26:220 (26220|3) - move to 2 and this 00:26:926 (26926|2) - move to 4 for balance, different from kick and snare
00:27:632 (27632|1) - move to 2 (*)
00:29:044 (29044|0,29749|0) - move them all to 2 (*)
00:31:161 (31161|0) - move them to 2 (*)
00:33:279 (33279|1) - move to 3 (*)
... (i think this diff need to remap or need more mod, I 100% can't understand this mapping style, i think ask db for mod? well, this is just my opinion only, feel free to contact me (after i got free again) to get irc mod
And for the last kiai time, it's fine but it's really really really easy for the gap from Normal to Hard, just look: http://puu.sh/od9i0/2124d3974d.jpg (you might want to increase the difficult for it)

[victorica's HD]
00:23:749 (23749|2) - move this to 4th for balance but also on here didn't have same kick with 00:23:926 (23926|2) -
00:32:220 (32220|1,32397|1) - same as with this
00:37:867 (37867|2,38044|2) - 00:40:691 (40691|1,40867|1) - the shield was really hard to catch in my opinion
00:42:102 (42102|2,42279|2) - as i didn't saw anything like pitch or vocals same with this so i think it's not worth to be on same column, but 00:42:632 (42632|1,42808|1) - does
00:43:514 - how about this for balance: http://puu.sh/od8D7/b591f7a94f.jpg
00:47:749 (47749|2,47926|2) - 00:54:808 (54808|2,54985|2) -
00:56:926 (56926|3,56926|1,56926|0) - kick and cymbal wasn't worths for 3 notes like this, still in hard diff so
(the streamy parts is a little mess imo but this looks cool and easily to passed to i found no problems with this
01:40:691 - this two holds was really cool for music if you want to follow it http://puu.sh/od8MR/b42e667546.jpg
01:42:808 (102808|2,102985|2) - 01:44:220 (104220|1,104397|1) -
01:44:573 (104573|3,104573|2,104573|0) - random 3 notes, the rest of this diff you didn't add any three notes for kick snare
01:44:749 (104749|1) - remove this note, hihat + that a little recym was totally fits with only 1 note, but suggsetion
01:47:573 (107573|0,107573|2) - 01:53:220 (113220|2,113220|1) - 01:56:044 (116044|1,116044|2) - 02:01:691 (121691|1,121691|2) - reason is the same, free to reject
01:50:044 (110044|2,110220|2,110397|2) - no reasons to put this jack (kick and then snare and then hihat)
01:57:632 (117632|1) - 02:01:867 (121867|0) - random finish
02:02:926 (122926|3) - move this to 4 for balance
02:03:455 (123455|2) - this, 2nd was fit with pitch, suggestion: http://puu.sh/od9ca/3ed61e9f1a.jpg

[victorica's MX]
well, overall it's good as i just light check it but wow 00:26:749 (26749|2,26926|2,27102|2,27279|2,27455|2,27632|2) -
Jacks everywhere, i will check this deeper after next mod, so sorry, i have no time to do the last diff
The last kiai time, some kick snare i can't understand http://puu.sh/od9tj/ba2a11b7c4.jpg http://puu.sh/od9uh/a9a607e240.jpg please make a self mod to check overall of your diff once again to make sure it's fine for rhythm-based


(P.S.: please take note that i only free at weekend, and it's already ran out of my time
Please and don't rush me at modding, i'm very hate this, other mappers doesn't do this to me, and I even don't ask M4M from them like I did from you, so keep in mind if you said you can wait for that, keep in patiens, else just find another BNs or whatever who can mod your mania difficulities, i got busy in real life, next week i have final exams, the heck, so no rushy or I rejects all the requests
And here is the rushed mod, I might mod this map again after exams so
But this is just some s**t i said so nevermind about this)

Call me when you done, good luck
lots of selfchanged by me thanks for mod
[ Left Hand ]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Mod

00:00:455 - BPM should be on here

[LH's NM]
(*) different from kick and snare
00:14:044 (14044|0) - why this note is on 1st column? kick and snare are different, move this to 3rd column
00:14:926 (14926|2) - move to 2, it's different from 00:14:573 (14573|2) - and also for balance
00:18:279 (18279|2,18455|2) - the reason i've point before
00:21:279 (21279|2,21632|2,21985|2) - this, well, move 00:21:632 (21632|2) - for balance but also make it different from kick and snare
00:25:161 (25161|2) - move to 4th for balance, but for kick 00:24:455 (24455|3,25867|3) -
00:26:220 (26220|3) - move to 2 and this 00:26:926 (26926|2) - move to 4 for balance, different from kick and snare
00:27:632 (27632|1) - move to 2 (*)
00:29:044 (29044|0,29749|0) - move them all to 2 (*)
00:31:161 (31161|0) - move them to 2 (*)
00:33:279 (33279|1) - move to 3 (*)
... (i think this diff need to remap or need more mod, I 100% can't understand this mapping style, i think ask db for mod? well, this is just my opinion only, feel free to contact me (after i got free again) to get irc mod
And for the last kiai time, it's fine but it's really really really easy for the gap from Normal to Hard, just look: http://puu.sh/od9i0/2124d3974d.jpg (you might want to increase the difficult for it)

[victorica's HD]
00:23:749 (23749|2) - move this to 4th for balance but also on here didn't have same kick with 00:23:926 (23926|2) -
00:32:220 (32220|1,32397|1) - same as with this
00:37:867 (37867|2,38044|2) - 00:40:691 (40691|1,40867|1) - the shield was really hard to catch in my opinion
00:42:102 (42102|2,42279|2) - as i didn't saw anything like pitch or vocals same with this so i think it's not worth to be on same column, but 00:42:632 (42632|1,42808|1) - does
00:43:514 - how about this for balance: http://puu.sh/od8D7/b591f7a94f.jpg
00:47:749 (47749|2,47926|2) - 00:54:808 (54808|2,54985|2) -
00:56:926 (56926|3,56926|1,56926|0) - kick and cymbal wasn't worths for 3 notes like this, still in hard diff so
(the streamy parts is a little mess imo but this looks cool and easily to passed to i found no problems with this
01:40:691 - this two holds was really cool for music if you want to follow it http://puu.sh/od8MR/b42e667546.jpg
01:42:808 (102808|2,102985|2) - 01:44:220 (104220|1,104397|1) -
01:44:573 (104573|3,104573|2,104573|0) - random 3 notes, the rest of this diff you didn't add any three notes for kick snare
01:44:749 (104749|1) - remove this note, hihat + that a little recym was totally fits with only 1 note, but suggsetion
01:47:573 (107573|0,107573|2) - 01:53:220 (113220|2,113220|1) - 01:56:044 (116044|1,116044|2) - 02:01:691 (121691|1,121691|2) - reason is the same, free to reject
01:50:044 (110044|2,110220|2,110397|2) - no reasons to put this jack (kick and then snare and then hihat)
01:57:632 (117632|1) - 02:01:867 (121867|0) - random finish
02:02:926 (122926|3) - move this to 4 for balance
02:03:455 (123455|2) - this, 2nd was fit with pitch, suggestion: http://puu.sh/od9ca/3ed61e9f1a.jpg

[victorica's MX]
well, overall it's good as i just light check it but wow 00:26:749 (26749|2,26926|2,27102|2,27279|2,27455|2,27632|2) -
Jacks everywhere, i will check this deeper after next mod, so sorry, i have no time to do the last diff
The last kiai time, some kick snare i can't understand http://puu.sh/od9tj/ba2a11b7c4.jpg http://puu.sh/od9uh/a9a607e240.jpg please make a self mod to check overall of your diff once again to make sure it's fine for rhythm-based


(P.S.: please take note that i only free at weekend, and it's already ran out of my time
Please and don't rush me at modding, i'm very hate this, other mappers doesn't do this to me, and I even don't ask M4M from them like I did from you, so keep in mind if you said you can wait for that, keep in patiens, else just find another BNs or whatever who can mod your mania difficulities, i got busy in real life, next week i have final exams, the heck, so no rushy or I rejects all the requests
And here is the rushed mod, I might mod this map again after exams so
But this is just some s**t i said so nevermind about this)

Call me when you done, good luck
i have redo some part thank u for ur mod
Sandalphon
1l2l3l4
[LH's NM]
00:31:514 (31514|2) - 前后太压右手了,建议这里挪到2
01:03:455 (63455|1,63632|1) - 没有jack的必要
01:07:426 (67426|1,67691|2) - 想之前一样都放在同一个col不是效果很好么
01:08:220 - 这里有很明显镲的声音,所以最好和01:07:867 - 换成不同的排列来表现出来,改成23不错
01:18:279 (78279|2,78455|1) - 怎么突然抓起bass了
01:27:632 (87632|2,87808|2) - pitch不一样,仔细听就能听出来,所以这两个放在别的col吧
01:32:926 - 这样呗 Img
01:38:573 - img
01:42:102 - 这里开始到02:03:279 - ,想和前段kiai区分开来所以用不同的抓音很好,可是我看的蛮蒙的,像是抓vocal但是有感觉没抓全。我建议是这里直接用一个note来抓主音(主音不确定的话可以看db的MX,短LN抓的就是主音),然后用double抓一下白线的鼓 这里是例子(01:42:102 - 到01:45:279 - ) Img

怎么和HD有些pattern一模一样...
如果没改请不要给kudosu,如果没改请不要给kudosu
祝好运
richardfeder
好听!
小姐有没有完整版

就随便水水摸...
Victorica's MX
00:13:867 - 这里有一个迷之空白 是不是00:13:955 (13955|3) - 其实应该是这里的

00:14:926 (14926|2,14926|3) - 少了一个?

00:18:102 (18102|0) - 多了一个?

00:44:749 (44749|1,44838|0,44838|3,44926|2) - 01:01:691 (61691|2,61779|1,61779|0,61867|3) - 我觉得其实你前面都应该长这样 比如 00:27:808 (27808|0,27808|3,27897|2,27985|1,27985|0) - 和00:50:397 (50397|1,50485|3,50573|2,50573|0) -

1:20:220 - 不做点变速吗

01:21:102 - 01:21:279 - 漏了两个短条子
01:21:544 - 硬要说的话这里其实也有一个 想玩的话也可以加(
01:22:514 - 01:22:691 - 同上
01:33:808 - 也是
01:38:220 - 好像是32分

01:57:632 (117632|0) - 放多了一个?而且这里一轨道好多(

好玩!
Topic Starter
Sharlo

richardfeder wrote:

好听!
小姐有没有完整版
现在的年轻人怎么都不看cw的呀
[Emiria]

richardfeder wrote:

好听!
小姐有没有完整版

就随便水水摸...
Victorica's MX
00:13:867 - 这里有一个迷之空白 是不是00:13:955 (13955|3) - 其实应该是这里的ok

00:14:926 (14926|2,14926|3) - 少了一个?ok


00:18:102 (18102|0) - 多了一个?ok


00:44:749 (44749|1,44838|0,44838|3,44926|2) - 01:01:691 (61691|2,61779|1,61779|0,61867|3) - 我觉得其实你前面都应该长这样 比如 00:27:808 (27808|0,27808|3,27897|2,27985|1,27985|0) - 和00:50:397 (50397|1,50485|3,50573|2,50573|0) -
ok

1:20:220 - 不做点变速吗

01:21:102 - 01:21:279 - 漏了两个短条子ok

01:21:544 - 硬要说的话这里其实也有一个 想玩的话也可以加(
01:22:514 - 01:22:691 - 同上ok

01:33:808 - 也是
01:38:220 - 好像是32分

01:57:632 (117632|0) - 放多了一个?而且这里一轨道好多(youge finish

好玩!
[ Left Hand ]

SanadaYukimura wrote:

1l2l3l4
[LH's NM]
00:31:514 (31514|2) - 前后太压右手了,建议这里挪到2
01:03:455 (63455|1,63632|1) - 没有jack的必要
01:07:426 (67426|1,67691|2) - 想之前一样都放在同一个col不是效果很好么
01:08:220 - 这里有很明显镲的声音,所以最好和01:07:867 - 换成不同的排列来表现出来,改成23不错以上都改了
01:18:279 (78279|2,78455|1) - 怎么突然抓起bass了
01:27:632 (87632|2,87808|2) - pitch不一样,仔细听就能听出来,所以这两个放在别的col吧
01:32:926 - 这样呗 Img
01:38:573 - img
01:42:102 - 这里开始到02:03:279 - ,想和前段kiai区分开来所以用不同的抓音很好,可是我看的蛮蒙的,像是抓vocal但是有感觉没抓全。我建议是这里直接用一个note来抓主音(主音不确定的话可以看db的MX,短LN抓的就是主音),然后用double抓一下白线的鼓 这里是例子(01:42:102 - 到01:45:279 - ) Img我在这用了一些主音加vocal

怎么和HD有些pattern一模一样...
如果没改请不要给kudosu,如果没改请不要给kudosu
祝好运
Akasha-
Recheck

I think i had already told you that the offset should be on 00:00:455 -

[LH's NM]
Honestly, this diff could be improved, but if you want to kept it it's no problem
move 00:13:161 (13161|3) - to 3, this small jack 00:12:808 (12808|3,13161|3,13514|3) - is weird
00:21:632 (21632|2) - move to 2 for keep up this kick 00:21:102 (21102|1) - and to avoid this weird three notes at the same time (00:21:279 (21279|2,21632|2,21985|2) - )
00:34:338 (34338|3) - move to 3 for balanced
00:53:926 (53926|1,54102|2,54279|1) - Ctrl + H them, this looks pretty when you keep repeat them although the music isn't repeat like them
00:55:514 (55514|0) - move to 3 for kick but also for balance
00:56:132 (56132|1,56397|2) - kick jack if you follow to make them like 00:44:838 (44838|2,45102|2) -
00:56:926 (56926|3) - move to 3 for balance and avoid from the 3 same notes at one column
01:00:102 (60102|2) - move this to 1 and move 01:00:632 (60632|0) - to 3 is better because http://puu.sh/ove2B/543c985a7c.png this looks really confuse
01:03:985 (63985|0,64338|0) - avoid this, kick and snare so move 01:03:985 (63985|0) - to 2
01:06:808 (66808|0) - same problem
01:08:220 (68220|0) - move this to 2, you know the problem then
01:09:632 (69632|0) - move to 2 ^
01:12:455 (72455|0) - move to 3 ^
01:14:749 (74749|1) - move to 3, this looks confuse for me because the distance of 1/1 and 1/2 are different but also accecptable because it's both kick so consider them if you might
01:15:632 (75632|1) - move this to 1 for balance but also for this snare 01:16:338 (76338|0) -
01:16:691 (76691|3) - move to 3, avoid this jack
01:20:044 (80044|0) - this one is bass, move to 2, different than 01:20:573 (80573|0,80749|0) -
01:24:279 (84279|0) - move to 2 for balance well
01:25:161 - move them like this: http://puu.sh/oveml/bb26196665.jpg because 01:25:161 (85161|0) - is lower pitch than 01:24:455 (84455|2,84808|1) - and also those notes for balance
01:29:044 (89044|0) - move to 4 for balance
01:29:926 (89926|0) - this note is different pitch than 01:29:397 (89397|0) - so move to 2 would be better
01:30:811 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/oveA8/d08b5dc99f.jpg because 01:30:985 - no reason to put jack here, no same sound at all or same pitch (totally different pitch)
01:32:397 - this part should be map like this: http://puu.sh/oveHj/a1a88a5145.jpg, wrong placed notes
01:34:161 (94161|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:43:338 (103338|3) - move to 3 for balance
01:42:102 - to 02:04:691 - i 100% can't understand what you mapping based on
Why i felt this diff is just like db's HD but it's easier?

continue later
Akasha-
last

[LH's NM]
i will igrone the patterns now if it's fine enough for you
00:34:690 (34690|1) - missed clap
01:23:749 (83749|0,84278|0) - don't you think this shield is a little hard to catch? well, move note to 2 was a better solution for balance
01:35:396 (95396|2) - clap here and remove clap 01:35:572 (95572|0) -
01:38:219 (98219|1) - missed clap
01:57:102 (117102|2,117278|0) - move them to the right 1 column was a better for balance
01:57:631 (117631|0,117631|1) - hmm? why there is cymbal here? no cymbal sound here, remove one note with that finish hitsound
02:00:102 (120102|2) - missed clap
02:01:866 (121866|0,121866|3) - no cymbal here
overall it's improved, looking good for me

[victorica's HD]
00:34:690 (34690|0) - missed clap
00:46:690 (46690|3) - remove this whistle hitsound
01:57:631 (117631|0,117631|1) - where are this cymbal came from? remove this hitsound
01:57:631 (117631|1,117631|0,121866|3,121866|0) - same here

[victorica's MX]
00:25:337 (25337|0,25337|2,25337|1) - i think you only added two notes for the bass, according to 00:23:925 (23925|0,23925|3) - so remove one note on there
00:28:160 (28160|2,28160|0,28160|1) - 00:30:984 (30984|1,30984|3,30984|2) -
00:32:396 (32396|3,32396|0,32396|1) -
00:32:396 (32396|1,32396|0,32396|3) - lost 1-2 notes for snare, this look really weird when you only added one note for snare
00:43:513 (43513|2,43690|2,43690|1,43866|1,43866|2,44043|1) - a litte hard for me, hmm 00:43:690 (43690|2) - move to 4 to avoid that but also for balance
00:56:131 - lost a note for bass
00:57:278 - lost a note for snare, according to 00:57:984 (57984|1,57984|3,57984|0) - since there are no long holds so fills it like other was the best
01:10:337 (70337|0,70337|1,70337|3) - why this part have three notes containing only hihat on here? you added three notes for snare so this part should be remove one note to make the different, also accroding to 01:04:690 (64690|0,64690|1) -
01:35:572 (95572|0) - wrong placed hitsound, remove this and add clap here 01:35:396 (95396|0) -
01:48:454 (108454|2,108631|0,108631|1,108807|2,108807|1,108807|0) - move some to 4th collumn, fill the emptiness (actually just make it balance)
01:49:866 (109866|3) - remove this, only have hihat and long sound so three notes is too many
01:57:631 (117631|3) - remove hitsound
02:01:866 (121866|3) - remove hitsound

Anymore i noticed drum-hitnormal.wav is under 100ms which is not allowed as RC said
so here is the fixed: http://puu.sh/oB9wa/3cec919604.wav
[Emiria]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

last

[LH's NM]
i will igrone the patterns now if it's fine enough for you
00:34:690 (34690|1) - missed clap
01:23:749 (83749|0,84278|0) - don't you think this shield is a little hard to catch? well, move note to 2 was a better solution for balance
01:35:396 (95396|2) - clap here and remove clap 01:35:572 (95572|0) -
01:38:219 (98219|1) - missed clap
01:57:102 (117102|2,117278|0) - move them to the right 1 column was a better for balance
01:57:631 (117631|0,117631|1) - hmm? why there is cymbal here? no cymbal sound here, remove one note with that finish hitsound
02:00:102 (120102|2) - missed clap
02:01:866 (121866|0,121866|3) - no cymbal here
overall it's improved, looking good for me

[victorica's HD]
00:34:690 (34690|0) - missed clap
00:46:690 (46690|3) - remove this whistle hitsound
01:57:631 (117631|0,117631|1) - where are this cymbal came from? remove this hitsound
01:57:631 (117631|1,117631|0,121866|3,121866|0) - same here

[victorica's MX]
00:25:337 (25337|0,25337|2,25337|1) - i think you only added two notes for the bass, according to 00:23:925 (23925|0,23925|3) - so remove one note on there
00:28:160 (28160|2,28160|0,28160|1) - 00:30:984 (30984|1,30984|3,30984|2) -
00:32:396 (32396|3,32396|0,32396|1) -
00:32:396 (32396|1,32396|0,32396|3) - lost 1-2 notes for snare, this look really weird when you only added one note for snare
00:43:513 (43513|2,43690|2,43690|1,43866|1,43866|2,44043|1) - a litte hard for me, hmm 00:43:690 (43690|2) - move to 4 to avoid that but also for balance
00:56:131 - lost a note for bass
00:57:278 - lost a note for snare, according to 00:57:984 (57984|1,57984|3,57984|0) - since there are no long holds so fills it like other was the best
01:10:337 (70337|0,70337|1,70337|3) - why this part have three notes containing only hihat on here? you added three notes for snare so this part should be remove one note to make the different, also accroding to 01:04:690 (64690|0,64690|1) -
01:35:572 (95572|0) - wrong placed hitsound, remove this and add clap here 01:35:396 (95396|0) -
01:48:454 (108454|2,108631|0,108631|1,108807|2,108807|1,108807|0) - move some to 4th collumn, fill the emptiness (actually just make it balance)x
01:49:866 (109866|3) - remove this, only have hihat and long sound so three notes is too manyx
01:57:631 (117631|3) - remove hitsoundi think there is finish
02:01:866 (121866|3) - remove hitsound

Anymore i noticed drum-hitnormal.wav is under 100ms which is not allowed as RC said
so here is the fixed: http://puu.sh/oB9wa/3cec919604.wav
others are fixed LH'S NM fixed by me
Akasha-
Sharlo - Eisou Youga ~Meikyou Shisui~ [OsuMania]


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Piano'd


Congratulations! Good luck
Topic Starter
Sharlo
thank u <3
Rizia
[Nachi's Extra]
01:24:719 (1) - 長度有問題? 滑條尾的音效顯得怪怪的

[Tt's Hard]
00:16:602 (1) - 這一個會不會有點怪 可能有其他方式可以代替這樣去放這個音?

that's all
Satellite
Sakaue Nachi
all fixed thanks
Frostmourne
:)
FrostxE's Insane
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TtmnZk
@柚子 wanna keep,有点坑不好打不过做了nc标识也希望保留吧,而且这个梗挺多的也是想突出点风格
Rizia
standard also fine
bubbled
Zero__wind
time to take off
Akasha-
Sharlo - Eisou Youga ~Meikyou Shisui~ [Hybrid]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified

Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Sharlo
Thanks all.
Underforest
congrats sharlo >w<
pls more covers
KyoukoeFX
nice cover

love you sharlo :)
Satellite
congrats :D
Len
congratz
hyouri
gratz <3
-Tochi
nice mapset
congrats!
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