1. Bie's HD - 4Key (2.25 stars, 696 notes)
2. MX - 4Key (2.51 stars, 861 notes)
3. xiaox's NM - 4Key (1.75 stars, 554 notes)

Sky_Demon wrote:

這是一個坑

Sky_Demon wrote:

這是一個坑

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Sorry for waiting long time ;w;
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mod inside

bg is 960x540 . . . well, OK then (still in 16:9)
btw, i have more better resolution ==> clickwow thx

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  [NM]

1. 00:28:477 - should add note like 00:28:912 (28912|0) - fix
2. 00:34:564 (34564|0) - move to another column, different sound with 00:34:346 (34346|0,34781|0) - fix
3. 00:35:216 (35216|3,35651|1,36086|0) - this LN is hard to press for newcomer player, plz changefix
4. 00:41:520 (41520|3) - move to another column, cuz different sound
5. 00:42:172 - http://puu.sh/lNRoF/dbbeb424cd.jpg better to read by newcomer player imofix
6. 00:47:390 (47390|0) - move to 4 will be better
7. 00:49:564 (49564|3,49999|2,50216|1,50433|0) - dead me XDthats good XD
8. 01:09:564 (69564|0,69781|2) - drag 1 column to right sidefix
9. 01:37:390 - missing note here ?fix
10. 01:43:912 (103912|2,104346|1) - same as 01:42:172 (102172|2,102607|1) - so i suggest to keep use 1/2 LNfix
11. 01:50:868 (110868|2,111303|3) - same case ^fix
12. 01:52:172 - http://puu.sh/lNRMz/1b4fbe26de.jpgfix
    
    
    
    [MX]
13. 00:13:912 (13912|3,14129|3) - not so comfort imo . . . maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/lNSoS/082f783ab3.jpg start in 00:12:607 - fix
14. 00:28:368 (28368|3,28477|3,28694|2) - drag 1 column to left side plz . . . those jack is too much in 4th column http://puu.sh/lNSzd/cc27d580d7.jpgfix
15. 00:29:020 - add note on 1st column, still have a sound herefix
16. 00:34:781 (34781|0,34781|2) - move to another column, cuz different sound from previous patternafter have the same sound,so no fixed
17. 01:23:477 (83477|1,83586|1,83803|1,84020|1,84129|1,84455|1,84564|1,84890|1,84999|1) - plz reduce jack on 2nd column . . . try another column plzfix

yea, maybe just that XD
good luck

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Sorry for waiting long time ;w;
|1|2|3|4|

mod inside

bg is 960x540 . . . well, OK then (still in 16:9)
btw, i have more better resolution ==> click
[list]

[HD]
00:21:738 - add note for instrument sound not change.
00:28:259 - suggest to add 2 note, and 00:28:694 - add a note . . . for example http://puu.sh/lNRXx/96f1755397.jpg OK
00:29:129 - feel weird if blank . . . add note on that plz OK
00:29:999 (29999|3) - i saw many LN like this . . . but, i feel its better to extend until 00:31:303 - because the sound is not stopped on blue line OK
00:33:477 (33477|2,33912|1) - same reason as ^ the LN's is not stopped in blue line OK
01:40:433 (100433|3,100651|0,100868|0,101086|3) - ??? well, it should be 1/2 LN i think . . . OK

yea, maybe just that XD
good luck