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[Emiria]

Zan - wrote:

  1. column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |
Overall is good, but
[8K lv.6]
00:09:793 (9793|5,9964|3,10136|5,10307|3,10479|5,10650|3) - rechange some pattern
01:33:107 (93107|7) - move to 3
[8K lv.10]
00:11:679 - add a note
[8K lv.12]
00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - delete the jack?
[Bie's 4K Normal]
01:18:536 - add
01:18:879 - add
[4K Hard]
00:12:364 - add
01:40:822 - do as insane diff
[4k Insane]
00:51:964 (51964|0,52050|0,52136|0) - reduce jack
00:43:907 - like before
fix most and do some change by meself
Zan-
did irc fixed some snapping xd

hoha
Bruce
BN Check
[4K MX]
00:55:736 - 这里和这里00:57:107 - 感觉应该做的一样

01:09:193 - 加一个Note,那个叮铃铃一样的音

01:42:707 (102707|3,102707|2) - 可以去掉一个

[8K 10]
00:18:193 - 不放钢琴音是觉得太难了?

00:35:336 (35336|1,35336|0) - 感觉不太对,建议删了 然后盘子的话00:35:164 - 00:35:507 -

00:50:250 - 我觉得有音


真没什么好说的
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Bruce wrote:

BN Check
[4K MX]
00:55:736 - 这里和这里00:57:107 - 感觉应该做的一样我把他弄花式了

01:09:193 - 加一个Note,那个叮铃铃一样的音

01:42:707 (102707|3,102707|2) - 可以去掉一个便条了

[8K 10]
00:18:193 - 不放钢琴音是觉得太难了?

00:35:336 (35336|1,35336|0) - 感觉不太对,建议删了 然后盘子的话00:35:164 - 00:35:507 - 这里我的盘子是那个1/8

00:50:250 - 我觉得有音k


真没什么好说的
Bruce
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[ A v a l o n ]
oh yeah . . .
congratulations XD
Sky_Demon
飛高高
-BANGKE-
that was fast, gratz
Blocko
Hi, victorica_db!

I'm disqualifying this mapset for the time being as it has some issues that I'd like to cover with you.

[4K Hard]
01:19:564 to 01:41:507 - The note density in this kiai is smaller compared to the rest of the map and way too similar to Bie's 4K Normal.
I recommend adding a note on every white line to make this difficulty more unique from the easier diff, and to make this part stand out from the rest, considering this is the kiai section after all.
Putting timestamps here for convenience and to give a guideline on where you could add the kick notes in.
01:19:564 to 01:22:307 -
01:24:364 to 01:27:793 -
01:29:507 -
01:30:879 to 01:33:279 -
01:35:336 to 01:38:764 -

[4K Insane]
01:18:539 - Incorrect snapping in this part of the map.
From 01:18:536 to 01:18:879 , the piano here is actually in 1/8, becoming 1/4s on the next white line from 01:18:879 to 01:19:222 , then coming back to 1/8 from 01:19:222 to 01:19:564 for the burst.
Something like the pattern below would do as this pattern keeps pitch relevance in place and it's relatively easier to play through.
http://puu.sh/lTjTW/52f5dcb4c7.png


[8K Lv.10]
01:29:850 - This section is arguably the hardest part of this difficulty. A pattern more simplistic will go a lot better with the music here. Take a look at the example below and see how you would find it.
http://puu.sh/lWq8I/aefd0474d3.jpg

Hope you can manage to requalify this as soon as possible. Good luck!
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Blocko wrote:

Hi, victorica_db!

I'm disqualifying this mapset for the time being as it has some issues that I'd like to cover with you.

[4K Hard]
01:19:564 to 01:41:507 - The note density in this kiai is smaller compared to the rest of the map and way too similar to Bie's 4K Normal.
I recommend adding a note on every white line to make this difficulty more unique from the easier diff, and to make this part stand out from the rest, considering this is the kiai section after all.
Putting timestamps here for convenience and to give a guideline on where you could add the kick notes in.
01:19:564 to 01:22:307 -
01:24:364 to 01:27:793 -
01:29:507 -
01:30:879 to 01:33:279 -
01:35:336 to 01:38:764 -
i prefer no kick it is more comfortable to link to next part
[4K Insane]
01:18:539 - Incorrect snapping in this part of the map.
From 01:18:536 to 01:18:879 , the piano here is actually in 1/8, becoming 1/4s on the next white line from 01:18:879 to 01:19:222 , then coming back to 1/8 from 01:19:222 to 01:19:564 for the burst.
Something like the pattern below would do as this pattern keeps pitch relevance in place and it's relatively easier to play through.
http://puu.sh/lTjTW/52f5dcb4c7.png

1/6 1/4 1/6
[8K Lv.10]
01:29:850 - This section is arguably the hardest part of this difficulty. A pattern more simplistic will go a lot better with the music here. Take a look at the example below and see how you would find it.
http://puu.sh/lWq8I/aefd0474d3.jpg
different sound pitch it is the normal parttern in lv 10

Hope you can manage to requalify this as soon as possible. Good luck!
Spy
嘻嘻
Starry-
Hi db!

I spoke with Blocko and ExPew about the snaps in 4K Insane and we prefer if you follow the snaps like 8K. (http://puu.sh/m4Ztm/eb5fe38722.jpg example, but obviously you can rearrange to make it like you want.)

The piano/harp noise is really quiet and the snaps feel unclear (like a mix of 1/8 and 1/6), so we feel it's best not to map to it.

Also, I suggest to follow Blocko's suggestion in 8K Lv.10 at 01:29:850 -, since that part is the hardest in the whole difficulty. You can also use a pattern like http://puu.sh/m4ZKA/33a9adee03.png to make it easier, too.

Call me back when applied. /o/
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Starry- wrote:

Hi db!

I spoke with Blocko and ExPew about the snaps in 4K Insane and we prefer if you follow the snaps like 8K. (http://puu.sh/m4Ztm/eb5fe38722.jpg example, but obviously you can rearrange to make it like you want.)

The piano/harp noise is really quiet and the snaps feel unclear (like a mix of 1/8 and 1/6), so we feel it's best not to map to it.

Also, I suggest to follow Blocko's suggestion in 8K Lv.10 at 01:29:850 -, since that part is the hardest in the whole difficulty. You can also use a pattern like http://puu.sh/m4ZKA/33a9adee03.png to make it easier, too.

Call me back when applied. /o/
im really sad about the snap in 4k insane. dq because snap but still no clear snap ..

in 8k lv.10 the hardest part is stair + scratch ..not there it is easy to play
http://puu.sh/m5MLt/dca8f9a1e3.osr here is my reply with iidx controller .it is clear to see ..
im only 7 段 at iidx 21 spada
Kamikaze
Can I just take a moment to ask why is that scratch part considered the hardest part in the diff?

It's hard, okay, but it's not as hard as you think. The only hard thing about this whole part is 01:30:364 (90364|0,90364|6,90364|2) - , rest is simple alternation which is also equally spread amongst scratches, pretty sure I can nail that first try, depends on my form. If you want to change it, you can anchor 1 or 7 column but I really don't think it's necessary idk

That being said, db, I see that you're mapping mostly for controller, being a controller player yourself (correct me if I'm wrong), in future think more about right special style kb players when layering scratch patterns. Your patterns are mostly fine for them, but some chords like 00:35:679 (35679|6,35679|0,35679|1,35679|3) - in lv.12 are a bit uncomfortable. Just a note :P

There's one thing I spotted tho, in lv.12 00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - this jack feel very random with the overall patterning and with LNs held on the right hand it might easily be a breaking point in a run, consider cahnging to 121 trill

Get this requalified and ranked ASAP \:D/
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Can I just take a moment to ask why is that scratch part considered the hardest part in the diff?

It's hard, okay, but it's not as hard as you think. The only hard thing about this whole part is 01:30:364 (90364|0,90364|6,90364|2) - , rest is simple alternation which is also equally spread amongst scratches, pretty sure I can nail that first try, depends on my form. If you want to change it, you can anchor 1 or 7 column but I really don't think it's necessary idkfor the sound pitch i dont want to change it although it is hard?

That being said, db, I see that you're mapping mostly for controller, being a controller player yourself (correct me if I'm wrong), in future think more about right special style kb players when layering scratch patterns. Your patterns are mostly fine for them, but some chords like 00:35:679 (35679|6,35679|0,35679|1,35679|3) - in lv.12 are a bit uncomfortable. Just a note :Pah i balanced both right and left side player when i do this map it is not hard to play

There's one thing I spotted tho, in lv.12 00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - this jack feel very random with the overall patterning and with LNs held on the right hand it might easily be a breaking point in a run, consider cahnging to 121 trill
ah many one says this jack is not good but i want to keep this because in my feeling it need to be there . /.\ sorry for doing this jack
Get this requalified and ranked ASAP \:D/hope
Topic Starter
[Emiria]
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Lirai
Hello db
i already checked the 4K Insane, i see that u use LN to coverage the snapping problem, good Job
also the pattern at 8K lv.10 is easier now, and last is 4K Hard which is less density but i see it's for mapping variety reason, and it's still fits with this difficulty
no need to talk anymore


Rebubbled

godd luck for requalify
Akasha-
okay, a little thing before you started

1234

hitsound
F: finish
C: clap
W: whistle

[Bie's 4K Normal]
00:06:879 (6879|3,7222|3,7564|2,7907|3) - F
00:22:650 (22650|2,23336|2) - F
00:28:822 (28822|3,29164|3,29507|2) - F
00:44:593 (44593|0) - F
01:02:079 (62079|2,62764|0) - W
01:03:450 (63450|0) - W
01:04:822 (64822|1,65507|2) - W
01:06:879 (66879|1) - W
01:07:564 (67564|2,68250|1) - W
01:08:936 (68936|2,69279|1) - W
01:10:307 (70307|0,70993|3) - W
01:13:050 (73050|2,73736|0) - W
01:15:793 (75793|2,76479|1) - W
01:17:507 (77507|2) - W
01:37:393 (97393|3,97736|1,98079|3,98422|0) - W
01:46:993 (106993|3,107336|2,107679|3,108022|2) - F
This diff is good enough, only some hitsounding issues

[4K Hard]
00:13:393 (13393|3) - move this to 2? i think it would be better, almost same pitch 00:13:393 (13393|1,13564|1) -
00:47:507 (47507|2,47679|2,47850|2) - why jack? appearanly 00:47:850 (47850|2) - is lower pitch than 00:47:507 (47507|2,47679|2) -
00:53:164 (53164|1) -
Rest are fine

[4K Insane]
looks fine

[8K Lv.6]
fine

[8K Lv.10]
01:29:507 (89507|3,89507|5) - two W

[8K Lv.12]
sound good

only few these, call me back later then
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

okay, a little thing before you started

1234

hitsound
F: finish
C: clap
W: whistle

[Bie's 4K Normal]
00:06:879 (6879|3,7222|3,7564|2,7907|3) - F
00:22:650 (22650|2,23336|2) - F
00:28:822 (28822|3,29164|3,29507|2) - F
00:44:593 (44593|0) - F
01:02:079 (62079|2,62764|0) - W
01:03:450 (63450|0) - W
01:04:822 (64822|1,65507|2) - W
01:06:879 (66879|1) - W
01:07:564 (67564|2,68250|1) - W
01:08:936 (68936|2,69279|1) - W
01:10:307 (70307|0,70993|3) - W
01:13:050 (73050|2,73736|0) - W
01:15:793 (75793|2,76479|1) - W
01:17:507 (77507|2) - W
01:37:393 (97393|3,97736|1,98079|3,98422|0) - W
01:46:993 (106993|3,107336|2,107679|3,108022|2) - F
This diff is good enough, only some hitsounding issues

[4K Hard]
00:13:393 (13393|3) - move this to 2? i think it would be better, almost same pitch 00:13:393 (13393|1,13564|1) -
00:47:507 (47507|2,47679|2,47850|2) - why jack? appearanly 00:47:850 (47850|2) - is lower pitch than 00:47:507 (47507|2,47679|2) -
00:53:164 (53164|1) -
Rest are fine

[4K Insane]
looks fine

[8K Lv.6]
fine

[8K Lv.10]
01:29:507 (89507|3,89507|5) - two W

[8K Lv.12]
sound good

only few these, call me back later then
fix all
Akasha-
I'm printing
Okay, snapping checked, no more problems, patterns in 8K Lv.10 discussed and seem it's fine enough to

Requalified

Congratulations! Happy New Year
Sky_Demon
OP
stupud man
Just a quick thing I noticed when playing the song:

[8K Lv.12]
00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - These jacks are completely out of place. When I gave the song a play, the pattern felt extremely uncomfortable to hit. It took me a couple of tries before finally remembering that those jacks would come up just so I could hit them. I'd recommend removing the 2nd/middle note or change it to a 121 trill so the pattern is much more comfortable to hit. Right now I don't see why the jack is there in the first place. There's no sound in the song which justifies the use of a 3rd note. I saw your post earlier saying how you "feel it needs to be in there", but it honestly does not make any sense at all having said what I just said.
paperlens
嘻嘻
liaoxingyao

paperlens wrote:

嘻嘻
Spy
I feel J8
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Spy wrote:

I feel J8
mijkolsmith
thanks


blackcow30
Worst 4k map ... Too bad, really.
Spy
Be careful to your attitude.
Shohei Ohtani

Spy wrote:

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