paperlens wrote:

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干 根本没得摸啊 只有一些排列建议了

[lv12]
00:12:364 - 这个滑键 建议每次从白线开始划 就是说 高音是在这里00:12:707 - 00:13:050 - 00:13:393 - 所以稍改一下让每个滑键从这里开划而不是延后1/4（像你lv10一样就好）

00:06:879 - 00:28:822 - 其实我还是建议考虑换一下这两个地方的排列：因为这两个地方还是歌曲的开头，直接放的这么难感觉会很突然，而且换了还可以增加以下排列的多样性 多好。相对的01:27:793 - 01:33:279 - 01:38:764 - 以及后面的这些地方这样放就毫不违和。

00:57:964 - 建议修改：前几个note往左手放一些，然后00:58:822 (58822|5,58993|6,59336|5,59679|6) - 这四个音最好能左右手交叉来点比较好，至少是空格和右手

00:46:222 (46222|6) - 建议把这个音甩到左手

[lv10]
00:46:222 - 同上

00:58:650 - 同上

01:13:907 - 怪，少放了吧

01:42:536 (102536|0,102707|0) - 感觉这个音不适合连皿

[lv6]
00:46:222 (46222|6) - 也同上

00:59:336 - 同上

根本没得摸 提不出什么有意义的建议 水水算了

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hello victorica
here's my mod

|1|2|3|4|

mod inside

* no 4K normal ? lol

• 
  [4K Hard]

1. 00:00:364 (364|0,1050|0) - can't understand this single note, i suggest to change it into LN only . . . end here 00:01:222 -
2. 00:02:764 - add note here for impact sound, like you do at 00:03:793 -
3. 00:07:222 - 00:07:564 - 00:07:907 - add 1 note on each timing? actually the sound is feel same (having impact)
4. 00:15:450 (15450|3,15450|1) - move to another column, i feel the sound is not same as 00:15:107 (15107|3,15107|1,15279|3,15279|1) -
5. 00:19:307 (19307|2) - delete this note, actually the violin sound is start here 00:19:393 -
6. 00:20:679 (20679|2) - same reason as above ^
7. 00:28:479 (28479|3,28650|2) - & 00:33:964 (33964|2,34136|3) - make same column? it's actually same sound
8. 00:43:564 - add note ? like in here 00:44:250 -
9. 00:45:622 (45622|3,45964|3,46222|1,46479|2) - will be more fun if you change that into LN imo
10. 01:23:593 (83593|0,83679|0) - & 01:34:564 (94564|0,94650|0) - why same column D: there's no same sound in this part
11. 01:46:307 - add note for impact here
    
    [4K Insane]
12. 00:00:364 (364|0,1050|0) - same as my mod in Hard diff
13. 00:15:107 (15107|3,15107|0,15279|0,15279|3,15450|3,15450|0) - oh my god . . . i think it's not really fit imo (just my feel)
14. 00:18:622 (18622|1,18793|3,18964|1) - delete this note, i suggest you to only follow piano sound here . . like 00:18:193 (18193|2,18279|1,18364|0,18450|1,18536|2,19050|2,19136|3,19222|2) -
15. 00:19:307 (19307|1) - & 00:20:679 (20679|2) - no violin sound here . . . this have same issues as hard diff
16. 00:23:679 - add one more single note here, for crash sound
17. 01:22:907 (82907|0,82993|0) - move to another coumn plz . . . why it's jacked ?
18. 01:41:507 (101507|2,102022|0,102707|2) - will be more fun if you add short LN on that timing ^ ^

good luck

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[4K Hard]

1/2/3/4

00:16:479 (16479|3,17850|3) - 这一段我感觉跟之前的音没什么变化？ 要不要考虑一下跟之前的一样

00:19:307 (19307|2) - 没音 delete

00:20:679 (20679|2) - 同上

01:19:736 (79736|1) - 移到 1

[4K Insane]

00:19:307 (19307|1,20679|2) - 这两处没音 或许能重新考虑下排列？

00:21:279 (21279|0) - 这个考虑一下要不要删了？

01:29:593 (89593|1,89764|3) - 没音

水摸完毕 太神啦

hokin1995 wrote:

Column: 1|2|3|4

[General]
你沒設預覽點跟kiai 還有是不是要反勾選widescreen support lol
反正影響不大 慢慢來

[4K Hard]
● 00:02:764 - 這裡是忘了放吧!? 加1個note在3或者4吧 - 像這裡 00:04:136 (4136|0,4136|3)

● 00:21:622 (21622|1) - 移到1 怎麼樣?

● 00:43:564 (43564|3) - 移到3 再加1個note到1 - 像這裡00:21:622

● 01:46:307 - 加1個note - 像這裡01:51:793 (111793|2,111793|0)

[4K Insane]
● 00:21:279 (21279|2,21450|2,21622|2) - 我覺得這3個音 感覺不太一樣 硬是放成用一行感覺怪怪的;w;k

● 00:43:564 (43564|1) - 移到4 怎麼樣?

後面的面條我都不知說啥好;w: 尿濕我幾條褲子

老實說沒什麼好摸 小弟摸不動
低端水

pocket-Gao wrote:

。

8K：|S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Lv.6

像 00:15:107 - 和 00:16:479 - 之类的推荐2note加强点节奏感。后面 00:37:736 - 也是
00:17:507 (17507|7) - 这有个琴音,那这是啥...00:16:822 (16822|7) -
01:18:879 (78879|5,79050|1,79222|6,79393|3) - 建议改一下摆位,配合音乐一个方向摆

Lv.10

00:35:679 (35679|4,35850|4,36022|4,36193|4) - 推荐|5|
00:46:222 (46222|3) - 建议|2| |5| |6|这些红轨道上 ，别的难度也是
00:55:307 (55307|2,55393|1,55479|3) - 其实这种摆位不好按...

Lv.12

00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - 太恶意了。。整个曲子就这里突出个jack(4K也是)

4K：

鳖's 4K Normal

LN怎么像转谱一样... 前面的LN和谐掉了
00:52:822 - 这之后怎么都是|2|1| |3|4|交换 没变化 啊已经换掉一大票了

Hard

00:13:307 (13307|0,13393|3) - 这里是错开的，00:12:707 (12707|1) - 那我感觉这里也错开比较好
00:42:193 - 加1note

Insane

00:41:679 (41679|2) - 建议|2|或|4|

这难度 4星整都没上 噫

根本没得摸 提不出什么有意义的建议 水水算了

pocket-Gao wrote:

。

8K：|S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Lv.6

像 00:15:107 - 和 00:16:479 - 之类的推荐2note加强点节奏感。后面 00:37:736 - 也是
00:17:507 (17507|7) - 这有个琴音,那这是啥...00:16:822 (16822|7) -
01:18:879 (78879|5,79050|1,79222|6,79393|3) - 建议改一下摆位,配合音乐一个方向摆

Lv.10

00:35:679 (35679|4,35850|4,36022|4,36193|4) - 推荐|5|
00:46:222 (46222|3) - 建议|2| |5| |6|这些红轨道上 ，别的难度也是
00:55:307 (55307|2,55393|1,55479|3) - 其实这种摆位不好按...

Lv.12

00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - 太恶意了。。整个曲子就这里突出个jack(4K也是)

4K：

鳖's 4K Normal

LN怎么像转谱一样...
00:52:822 - 这之后怎么都是|2|1| |3|4|交换 没变化

Hard

00:13:307 (13307|0,13393|3) - 这里是错开的，00:12:707 (12707|1) - 那我感觉这里也错开比较好
00:42:193 - 加1note

Insane

00:41:679 (41679|2) - 建议|2|或|4|

这难度 4星整都没上 噫

根本没得摸 提不出什么有意义的建议 水水算了

richardfeder wrote:

4K Hard

00:07:564 - 00:07:907 - 少note了？
00:16:650 - 这里咋出来单键了呢 要不要都双键 就像前面和后面一样

00:50:079 (50079|3) - 好像并不是一个条子 红线应该也有音我只听到白线的

01:04:222 (64222|1) - 个人感觉没必要我觉的这是2个音呀

01:19:564 - 感觉从这里开始一到高潮反而难度简单下来了

01:21:793 (81793|1,81964|2,82136|3) - 往左挪一个？

8k Lv.10

00:17:850 - 少了个note

00:28:822 (28822|3) - 你其他所有类似的pattern这个note都是没有的

00:50:079 (50079|5) - 同4K hard

00:51:793 (51793|5) - 这是个啥啦

00:52:993 (52993|6) - 换一个轨道我觉得好些

01:04:136 (64136|5,64222|4) - 也是觉得没必要 有窜音之嫌

01:41:164 (101164|0) - 加一个盘子？

4K Insane

00:21:450 (21450|2) - 挪左一格？

00:28:993 - 红线上少了一个note？这一串都是

00:50:079 (50079|2) - 捅4K hard

00:51:793 (51793|1) - 有点奇怪

00:56:250 (56250|3) - 加一个note

01:04:136 (64136|0,64222|1) - 同前

01:04:307 (64307|2,64393|1) - 双键？

01:31:650 (91650|1) - ？

01:43:907 (103907|3,103907|1,103907|0) - 怎么突然变成三键啦 一开始的时候都是双键全改了
01:45:279 (105279|0,105279|3,105279|1) - 等等也是

8K Lv.12

盘子取得不太一致 00:21:622 (21622|0) - 既然这里有 00:18:879 - 和00:20:250 - 该不该有？00:25:736 - 00:27:107 - 等等等等...这个得你自己检查一下
还有hithat也是 00:25:907 (25907|2) - 这里有00:20:422 - 这里就没有 包括开头00:09:450 - 这里也没 有一开始的部分我是没抓的 后面我根据歌曲进度抓了

00:35:164 (35164|5) - 这个应该挪到盘子

00:50:079 (50079|7) - 同前

00:51:793 (51793|1,51793|3,51793|5,51964|1,52050|1,52136|1,52136|6,52136|3) - 这个太诡异了..

00:53:164 (53164|6,53164|3) - 挪右一个？好的

01:00:879 - 又开始漏hithat漏了很多233

01:04:136 (64136|5,64222|4) - 还是跟前面一样 我觉得窜音了我认为是从白线开的是那个音。。
01:12:364 (72364|7,72364|5,72450|4) - 你看这里马上不一样了！

01:14:079 - 从这里开始感觉很多1/4有点迷..背景1/4

01:16:136 (76136|0) - 可以考虑加一个盘子 只是个人建议

其他都跟前面差不多了 找不出啥东西来呀hhh

祝早日rank~

Critical_Star wrote:

4K Hard
00:07:564 (7564|3,7907|3) - 为什么不双? 同音在 00:06:879 (6879|0,6879|3,7222|3,7222|1) -
01:19:564 - 这里几乎就像普通难度 , 建议用双在 01:19:907 (79907|2,80593|3) - 所有这些声音?


4K Insane
00:25:736 (25736|1,25736|3,25736|0,25822|2,25907|3,25907|0,25993|1,26079|3,26079|0,26079|2) - 00:03:793 (3793|3,3793|0,3879|2,3964|1,4050|2,4136|0,4136|1,4136|3) - 同样的声音,但不同的模式?其他也一样 2-1-1-1-3 和 3-1-2-1-3 ?
00:28:136 - 加多一个? crash
01:04:307 (64307|2,64393|1) - 双？

好运~

Spy wrote:

隨便水一下，反正我覺得還OK



[Bie's 4K Normal]
00:47:336 (47336|2) - 跟00:50:079 (50079|3) - 一樣可以LN
00:47:507 (47507|1) - 刪了吧，給個停頓
00:52:993 (52993|2) - 同樣刪了，00:52:822 (52822|3) - 這個也可以LN

以上部分参照db的HD....他没这么干所以....我也就...没那么放,,,

01:00:364 - 坦白說你這些白線都應該加個note，如果根據01:00:707 (60707|2) - 這種音的話

OK

01:19:050 - 01:19:393 - 不加可惜，屬於漏音

换掉了

01:19:564 (79564|3,79736|1) - 弄成jack，01:19:907 (79907|3) - 換到其他軌
01:36:022 (96022|0,96193|2) - jack
01:36:707 (96707|3,96879|1,97050|0) - 這3個其實都是同音，不過3連jack好像不太友善，但是可以改一下

这些按照音高其实都该是...3个jack......但是....NM还是别这么干吧....2+1感觉会略奇怪..?

01:37:393 (97393|0,97393|2,97736|2,97736|0) - 突然2 note ?

删掉了

這首曲子我還蠻喜歡的，還好譜子是你做的，不然我看又要被毀了，Good luck

Sky_Demon wrote:

就抓到那麼點時間 小摸一下

key:|1|2|3|4|

[Bie's 4K Normal]
00:13:050 (13050|1,13393|0) - ctrl + g 4 3 2 1 太過單調 音高是从高到低,4321会比较有感觉
00:13:736 - 加上一顆 因為是重音 →00:16:479 (16479|0,16479|2) - OK
00:15:107 - ^ 同樣的聲音這裡有+→00:16:479 (16479|2,16479|0) - ..有么
00:17:507 - 突然雙鍵維和 因為是高音才+的話 那這裡也要→00:17:850 - 00:18:193 - db叫我这么放的
00:21:622 - ~00:23:336 - 排列 可以再斟酌一下 无改动
00:35:336 (35336|0) - 建議改LN 很明顯的它跟前面3個單鍵音不一樣 可
00:35:679 - 重音 不加嗎? 可
00:46:222 (46222|0) - 移動到2 順手 可
00:51:793 (51793|1) - 砍掉 覺得不用抓到麼細的音 db让抓的
00:55:736 (55736|3,55736|1,55907|3,55907|0,56079|2,56079|0) - 同樣的音 建議同一列
00:57:107 (57107|3,57107|0,57279|3,57279|1,57450|2,57450|0) - ^ ...会不会有点吓人全放同一列?
01:05:164 (65164|0) - 移動到2 因為前一個單鍵的關係 這裡擺1會微卡手
01:00:364 - 這裡開始的長LN結束點都是錯的 Pls盡快改善
^而且就NM來說 這樣子無銜接的擺法新手很難打出好成績 都换掉了
01:09:279 - 漏了一個音
01:14:422 (74422|0) - 移動到2 同上上上點
01:19:393 - 漏了一個音 同樣的音→01:18:536 (78536|1,78879|3,79222|0) - 换掉了
01:27:279 (87279|2,87450|1) - ctrl+g 排除單調又順手 OK

祝好運 星星星星星星星星星星星星星星星星星星

Spy wrote:

隨便水一下，反正我覺得還OK

[General]
8K模式把7+1Style選項打勾，不然還玩個屁，然後所有diff Widescreen Support關了

[Bie's 4K Normal]
00:47:336 (47336|2) - 跟00:50:079 (50079|3) - 一樣可以LN
00:47:507 (47507|1) - 刪了吧，給個停頓
00:52:993 (52993|2) - 同樣刪了，00:52:822 (52822|3) - 這個也可以LN
01:00:364 - 坦白說你這些白線都應該加個note，如果根據01:00:707 (60707|2) - 這種音的話
01:19:050 - 01:19:393 - 不加可惜，屬於漏音
01:19:564 (79564|3,79736|1) - 弄成jack，01:19:907 (79907|3) - 換到其他軌
01:36:022 (96022|0,96193|2) - jack
01:36:707 (96707|3,96879|1,97050|0) - 這3個其實都是同音，不過3連jack好像不太友善，但是可以改一下
01:37:393 (97393|0,97393|2,97736|2,97736|0) - 突然2 note ?

[8K Lv.6]
00:52:993 (52993|6) - 我覺得可以刪

[4K Hard]
01:16:822 - 這一段我給0分

[4K Insane]
00:44:250 (44250|0,44250|2) - 我怎麼覺得排列放的跟00:44:936 (44936|3,44936|1) - 一樣會比較有感覺ke
00:51:964 (51964|0,52050|0) - 好像沒有必要jack好了

這首曲子我還蠻喜歡的，還好譜子是你做的，不然我看又要被毀了，Good luck

ExPew wrote:

2keymode has different difficult name, i would suggest you pick single diff name based name(Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane) or level(Lv.3/-6/-9/-12) for all keymodes to prevent any unwanted issue on your diff name.

Zan - wrote:

1. column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |

Overall is good, but
[8K lv.6]
00:09:793 (9793|5,9964|3,10136|5,10307|3,10479|5,10650|3) - rechange some pattern
01:33:107 (93107|7) - move to 3
[8K lv.10]
00:11:679 - add a note
[8K lv.12]
00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - delete the jack?
[Bie's 4K Normal]
01:18:536 - add
01:18:879 - add
[4K Hard]
00:12:364 - add
01:40:822 - do as insane diff
[4k Insane]
00:51:964 (51964|0,52050|0,52136|0) - reduce jack
00:43:907 - like before

Bruce wrote:

BN Check
[4K MX]
00:55:736 - 这里和这里00:57:107 - 感觉应该做的一样我把他弄花式了

01:09:193 - 加一个Note，那个叮铃铃一样的音可

01:42:707 (102707|3,102707|2) - 可以去掉一个便条了

[8K 10]
00:18:193 - 不放钢琴音是觉得太难了？

00:35:336 (35336|1,35336|0) - 感觉不太对，建议删了 然后盘子的话00:35:164 - 00:35:507 - 这里我的盘子是那个1/8

00:50:250 - 我觉得有音k


真没什么好说的

Blocko wrote:

Hi, victorica_db!

I'm disqualifying this mapset for the time being as it has some issues that I'd like to cover with you.

[4K Hard]
01:19:564 to 01:41:507 - The note density in this kiai is smaller compared to the rest of the map and way too similar to Bie's 4K Normal.
I recommend adding a note on every white line to make this difficulty more unique from the easier diff, and to make this part stand out from the rest, considering this is the kiai section after all.
Putting timestamps here for convenience and to give a guideline on where you could add the kick notes in.
01:19:564 to 01:22:307 -
01:24:364 to 01:27:793 -
01:29:507 -
01:30:879 to 01:33:279 -
01:35:336 to 01:38:764 -
i prefer no kick it is more comfortable to link to next part
[4K Insane]
01:18:539 - Incorrect snapping in this part of the map.
From 01:18:536 to 01:18:879 , the piano here is actually in 1/8, becoming 1/4s on the next white line from 01:18:879 to 01:19:222 , then coming back to 1/8 from 01:19:222 to 01:19:564 for the burst.
Something like the pattern below would do as this pattern keeps pitch relevance in place and it's relatively easier to play through.
http://puu.sh/lTjTW/52f5dcb4c7.png

1/6 1/4 1/6
[8K Lv.10]
01:29:850 - This section is arguably the hardest part of this difficulty. A pattern more simplistic will go a lot better with the music here. Take a look at the example below and see how you would find it.
http://puu.sh/lWq8I/aefd0474d3.jpg

different sound pitch it is the normal parttern in lv 10

Hope you can manage to requalify this as soon as possible. Good luck!

Starry- wrote:

Hi db!

I spoke with Blocko and ExPew about the snaps in 4K Insane and we prefer if you follow the snaps like 8K. (http://puu.sh/m4Ztm/eb5fe38722.jpg example, but obviously you can rearrange to make it like you want.)

The piano/harp noise is really quiet and the snaps feel unclear (like a mix of 1/8 and 1/6), so we feel it's best not to map to it.

Also, I suggest to follow Blocko's suggestion in 8K Lv.10 at 01:29:850 -, since that part is the hardest in the whole difficulty. You can also use a pattern like http://puu.sh/m4ZKA/33a9adee03.png to make it easier, too.

Call me back when applied. /o/

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Can I just take a moment to ask why is that scratch part considered the hardest part in the diff?

It's hard, okay, but it's not as hard as you think. The only hard thing about this whole part is 01:30:364 (90364|0,90364|6,90364|2) - , rest is simple alternation which is also equally spread amongst scratches, pretty sure I can nail that first try, depends on my form. If you want to change it, you can anchor 1 or 7 column but I really don't think it's necessary idkfor the sound pitch i dont want to change it although it is hard?

That being said, db, I see that you're mapping mostly for controller, being a controller player yourself (correct me if I'm wrong), in future think more about right special style kb players when layering scratch patterns. Your patterns are mostly fine for them, but some chords like 00:35:679 (35679|6,35679|0,35679|1,35679|3) - in lv.12 are a bit uncomfortable. Just a note ah i balanced both right and left side player when i do this map it is not hard to play

There's one thing I spotted tho, in lv.12 00:51:964 (51964|1,52050|1,52136|1) - this jack feel very random with the overall patterning and with LNs held on the right hand it might easily be a breaking point in a run, consider cahnging to 121 trill
ah many one says this jack is not good but i want to keep this because in my feeling it need to be there . /.\ sorry for doing this jack
Get this requalified and ranked ASAP \:D/hope

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

okay, a little thing before you started

1234

hitsound
F: finish
C: clap
W: whistle

[Bie's 4K Normal]
00:06:879 (6879|3,7222|3,7564|2,7907|3) - F
00:22:650 (22650|2,23336|2) - F
00:28:822 (28822|3,29164|3,29507|2) - F
00:44:593 (44593|0) - F
01:02:079 (62079|2,62764|0) - W
01:03:450 (63450|0) - W
01:04:822 (64822|1,65507|2) - W
01:06:879 (66879|1) - W
01:07:564 (67564|2,68250|1) - W
01:08:936 (68936|2,69279|1) - W
01:10:307 (70307|0,70993|3) - W
01:13:050 (73050|2,73736|0) - W
01:15:793 (75793|2,76479|1) - W
01:17:507 (77507|2) - W
01:37:393 (97393|3,97736|1,98079|3,98422|0) - W
01:46:993 (106993|3,107336|2,107679|3,108022|2) - F
This diff is good enough, only some hitsounding issues

[4K Hard]
00:13:393 (13393|3) - move this to 2? i think it would be better, almost same pitch 00:13:393 (13393|1,13564|1) -
00:47:507 (47507|2,47679|2,47850|2) - why jack? appearanly 00:47:850 (47850|2) - is lower pitch than 00:47:507 (47507|2,47679|2) -
00:53:164 (53164|1) -
Rest are fine

[4K Insane]
looks fine

[8K Lv.6]
fine

[8K Lv.10]
01:29:507 (89507|3,89507|5) - two W

[8K Lv.12]
sound good

only few these, call me back later then

paperlens wrote:

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