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Insane
00:21:109 you should add a note here
00:30:740 (3) - perhaps you could change this into a slider
00:36:109 (5) - change the midpoint to (336,240) and end point at (288,320)
01:18:582 (2,3) - this flow here isn't that good

-Yuzuriha's Insane
00:02:319 (6) - maybe you could bring this down abit
00:03:424 (4,5,6,1) - blanket
00:46:530 (7) - NC here
01:11:951 (1,2,3) - blanket
01:21:740you should add a note here

Hard
00:00:109 (1,3) - blanket
00:05:477 (2,3,4) - use a constant DS
00:33:582 (3,4) - blanket
00:34:845 having nothing here sounds abit weird
00:37:056 (5,7) - stack these together
00:54:740 (3,4) - maybe change the position of these? put slider 1st instead of circle
01:18:898 (7) - NC
01:22:056 (1,3) - stack these

Polka's Hard
00:05:635 (3) - remove clap
00:56:319 (1) - shouldn't you drag this slider till 00:56:635 ?
P.S. don't you think that there's a tad bit too many spinners? ._.

Circle's Normal
00:03:582 (3) - add clap
00:26:635 (4,5) - I think this I s a bit too hard for Normal
00:41:951 (2) - drag this slider till 00:42:266
00:49:372 (1,2,3) - constant spacing
00:58:845 (1,2) - make them parallel to each other
01:01:372 (6,1) - the flow here is bad

that's it for my mod, the difficulty of Normal should be toned down, and good luck

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2015-12-15T09:46:53+00:00

XxSeonxX

Insane
00:21:109 you should add a note here Sure
00:30:740 (3) - perhaps you could change this into a slider Ok
00:36:109 (5) - change the midpoint to (336,240) and end point at (288,320) Wat. I can't understand u said :/
01:18:582 (2,3) - this flow here isn't that good Changed into straight slider

Hard
00:00:109 (1,3) - blanket Maybe u gonna update it
00:05:477 (2,3,4) - use a constant DS Ok
00:33:582 (3,4) - blanket Already blanket
00:34:845 having nothing here sounds abit weird Wat do u mean?
00:37:056 (5,7) - stack these together stack here and changed!
00:54:740 (3,4) - maybe change the position of these? put slider 1st instead of circle Ok
01:18:898 (7) - NC Ok
01:22:056 (1,3) - stack these Moved it

Thanks for modding!

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2015-12-15T09:54:46+00:00

XxSeonxX wrote:
hello, from m4m

mod
　
-Yuzuriha's Insane
00:02:319 (6) - maybe you could bring this down abit
00:03:424 (4,5,6,1) - blanket　fix
00:46:530 (7) - NC here fix
01:11:951 (1,2,3) - blanket fix
01:21:740you should add a note here

that's it for my mod, the difficulty of Normal should be toned down, and good luck

mod thanks!

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CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2015-12-15T15:30:59+00:00

M4M...!

Hard

Consider placing NC more often. NC every measure is probably a good idea.
Spacing feels inconsistent in general. For example, why does 00:11:635 (7) - has higher distance? Pretty weak sound in the music, and on a red tick.
00:11:319 (6) - rotating the slider counterclockwise may flow better
00:11:951 (9,1) - A blanket would look nice
00:15:424 (1,2) - ^
00:16:687 (5,6) - I recommend curving this less or not at all. Looks weird when short sliders are curved.
00:18:582 (4,5) - Would sound much better if you started 00:18:582 (4) - at 00:18:424 - and move 00:18:898 (5) - to start at 00:18:740 - . Follows the vocal better, follows the background music better, and makes the downbeat clickable.
00:19:056 - Would be nice if a slider started here for 1/2 beat.
00:20:161 (1) - I think this sound is less prominent than 00:20:477 -
00:21:424 (3,4,5) - Rhythm recommendation ( http://puu.sh/lWu5k/cbcc42557a.jpg )
00:23:319 (2) - Rhythm recommendation ( http://puu.sh/lWu7g/a719da4539.jpg )
00:31:214 (3,4) - blanket would be nice
00:31:214 (3,6) - try to avoid this overlap
00:37:056 (5,6) - consider ctrl + g for better flow
00:51:740 - consider making 1/1 slider starting here or stacking like 00:54:266 (1,2) -
00:55:845 (7) - This would flow more intuitively http://puu.sh/lWuiH/7dc89ab449.jpg
00:59:477 (7,8) - Blanket maybe
01:01:530 (4,1) - Consider reducing distance similar to 01:00:582 (1,2,3,4) -
01:26:477 (4,5) - Less curve would look nicer

Insane

00:05:635 (4,5) - Would sound better if they were moved to start at 00:05:635 (4,5) -
00:05:951 (5) - Why is this guy emphasized with larger ds?
00:05:951 (5,3) - blanket could be improved
00:23:003 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion ( http://puu.sh/lWuF8/233f8025a8.jpg )
00:26:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The triples don’t go well with the drum beats of the music, and I strongly recommend you follow drum beats when placing triples here. recommendation ( http://puu.sh/lWuIg/07754165bb.jpg )

Good luck with the mapset! Ok, Bai! \:D/

CircleChu

190 posts

Joined May 2012

CircleChu 2015-12-15T16:55:56+00:00

Circle's Normal
00:03:582 (3) - add clap okay.
00:26:635 (4,5) - I think this I s a bit too hard for Normal Fixed spacing a bit.
00:41:951 (2) - drag this slider till 00:42:266 Why whould I do that?
00:49:372 (1,2,3) - constant spacing Ok.
00:58:845 (1,2) - make them parallel to each other Fixed.
01:01:372 (6,1) - the flow here is bad[/box] Fixed.

Thanks for mod.

meh

http://puu.sh/lWzNl/e41a908c58.txt

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2015-12-16T03:06:11+00:00

DahplA wrote:
[Polka's Hard]
01:11:082 (1) - I don't think this spinner would be very fun to play out for anyone. By the time they realise it, it's already over. I highly suggest changing it to something different to increase playability. I agree. Changed.
Nice song choice. Good luck on ranking C:

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2015-12-16T03:28:48+00:00

I missed a mod EWPS

XxSeonxX wrote:
Polka's Hard
00:05:635 (3) - remove clapDone.
00:56:319 (1) - shouldn't you drag this slider till 00:56:635 ? Mapping the vocals here. This was intended.
P.S. don't you think that there's a tad bit too many spinners? ._. Probably, but there's a lot of held notes which call for that IMO

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2015-12-16T04:17:15+00:00

CaffeAmericano wrote:
M4M...!

Hard
Consider placing NC more often. NC every measure is probably a good idea.
Spacing feels inconsistent in general. For example, why does 00:11:635 (7) - has higher distance? Pretty weak sound in the music, and on a red tick. Changed and fixed
00:11:319 (6) - rotating the slider counterclockwise may flow better Fixed
00:11:951 (9,1) - A blanket would look nice Fixed
00:15:424 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:16:687 (5,6) - I recommend curving this less or not at all. Looks weird when short sliders are curved. Fixed into straight slider owo
00:18:582 (4,5) - Would sound much better if you started 00:18:582 (4) - at 00:18:424 - and move 00:18:898 (5) - to start at 00:18:740 - . Follows the vocal better, follows the background music better, and makes the downbeat clickable. Fixed
00:19:056 - Would be nice if a slider started here for 1/2 beat. Already 1/2 beat and fixed
00:20:161 (1) - I think this sound is less prominent than 00:20:477 - I can't understand
00:21:424 (3,4,5) - Rhythm recommendation ( http://puu.sh/lWu5k/cbcc42557a.jpg ) Ok
00:23:319 (2) - Rhythm recommendation ( http://puu.sh/lWu7g/a719da4539.jpg ) Fixed
00:31:214 (3,4) - blanket would be nice Ok
00:31:214 (3,6) - try to avoid this overlap Em, I've seen I agree, I will do dat later
00:37:056 (5,6) - consider ctrl + g for better flow Sure

00:51:740 - consider making 1/1 slider starting here or stacking like 00:54:266 (1,2) - Fixed
00:55:845 (7) - This would flow more intuitively http://puu.sh/lWuiH/7dc89ab449.jpg Fixed
00:59:477 (7,8) - Blanket maybe Blanketed
01:01:530 (4,1) - Consider reducing distance similar to 01:00:582 (1,2,3,4) - God damnit xD. Im bad english and I can't understand
01:26:477 (4,5) - Less curve would look nicer Straight slider is nice recommend xD

Insane
00:05:635 (4,5) - Would sound better if they were moved to start at 00:05:635 (4,5) - Ok and changed
00:05:951 (5) - Why is this guy emphasized with larger ds? Used ds
00:05:951 (5,3) - blanket could be improved done
00:23:003 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion ( http://puu.sh/lWuF8/233f8025a8.jpg ) Ok
00:26:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The triples don’t go well with the drum beats of the music, and I strongly recommend you follow drum beats when placing triples here. recommendation ( http://puu.sh/lWuIg/07754165bb.jpg ) Change triples
Good luck with the mapset! Ok, Bai! \:D/

Thanks for mod!

Skie1134

22 posts

Joined August 2015

Skie1134 2015-12-17T17:30:35+00:00

Circle's Normal

00:07:687 (5) - consider moving this note to the red tick to the left since all the instruments come in on that time
00:26:635 (4,5,6) - Space these closer together
00:56:319 (1,2) - The red tick between these two notes have a heavy sound going on, consider mapping to that
00:57:582 (4,5) - ^
00:58:845 (1,2) - ^
01:16:845 (2,3) - ^
01:17:793 (4,5) - ^
01:21:582 (5,1) - ^

Polka's Hard

Solid map, didn't find anything that needs correction so good job

Hard

00:17:635 (8,1,1) - Spacing these three more evenly might be better
00:46:372 (4,5,6) - 5 and 6 are a bit overmapped imo, consider having 6 start at where 4 ends and replacing 4 with a regular note.
01:11:951 (1,2) - Starting the NC on the 2 might be better since the 1 is hidden underneath the triple stack

Insane

00:50:319 (1,2,1) - Space the first 1 further away from the slider to make it easier to read (because both of the 1s are spaced the same currently, despite being different in terms of rhythm)

This was quite the fun map to play through

-Yuzuriha's Insane

00:28:845 (6,7,1) - should have the 7 stick out from 1 to help readability like you've done at 00:05:003 (1,2,3) -
00:54:266 (1,2,3) - ^

Celsius's Extra
Also really fun to play through this map

01:14:003 (4,5,6) - should space further apart
01:18:109 (6,7,1) - I don't see a good reason on why you should make these three notes harder to read instead of the intuitive pattern you've been doing so far.

All in all, this mapset is pretty solid. Hope to see it ranked soon!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2015-12-18T02:40:13+00:00

Skie1134 wrote:
Hard

00:17:635 (8,1,1) - Spacing these three more evenly might be better Meh, its fine
00:46:372 (4,5,6) - 5 and 6 are a bit overmapped imo, consider having 6 start at where 4 ends and replacing 4 with a regular note. I can't understand :/
01:11:951 (1,2) - Starting the NC on the 2 might be better since the 1 is hidden underneath the triple stack Fixed

Insane

00:50:319 (1,2,1) - Space the first 1 further away from the slider to make it easier to read (because both of the 1s are spaced the same currently, despite being different in terms of rhythm) Fixed

This was quite the fun map to play through

All in all, this mapset is pretty solid. Hope to see it ranked soon!

Thanks for modding!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-12-18T05:17:51+00:00

Hi! I'm the creator of the new easy

Waiting for mods for my diff and also the mapset uwu

Speed of Snail

548 posts

Joined March 2014

Speed of Snail 2015-12-18T06:17:26+00:00

Ok, in response to the M4M, now since your mod was very short, I'm going to give a full mod to only one diff.

seeing that the Easy has zero mods as of now, I'll do that one. *note, not checking overall meta*

FOREST'S EASY

After-Note: Your DS'ing is really bi-polar, sometimes it's completely accurate, and other times is fairly off cause why not? since it's an easy, prob want to make it all fairly exact.

Add some Audio lead-in, not a good idea to have the first note milliseconds after map start. 1500 would be a good amount.

00:02:477 - (1) this is shallow and far from the next slider, bring the head right up to slider 2 and make it a tight blanket.

00:05:477 - (5,6) Again, this hugging of sliders that aren't even slightly related isn't pretty, either move 6 upwards so that it's above 5 or pull 6 down and blanket 5.

Additional note, 4 measures and no NC, that's a really long time, considering how slow this map is combo should probably never even get above 4.

00:08:003 - (2,3) This motion out of 1 and diagonally down is weird as it doesn't look the same way it feels, move two upwards so that it's almost straight off slider 1 and goes straight down to 3.

00:08:951 - (4) Again this is an upwards shift in flow when it doesn't make much sense to me, move this slider downwards so it's slightly dropped below 3.

00:10:214 - (1,2) These don't make much sense with the song imo, single circles in the middle of a 3 tone riff? Ofc since it's easy you can't map the whole thing out, but make these circles sliders that extend to the white tick after each.

00:12:740 - (1,2,3) This is an awkward transition, if you want this to make sense either rotate the entire pattern 90 counter-clockwise or shift the whole pattern up and to the right. as of now it just doesn't work in terms of flow and direction.

00:16:530 - (3) This slider should entirely be curved instead of straight and tilted, pull the curve out to the edge of the screen to encourage good cursor motion.

00:18:424 - (2) Make this blanket the tail of 1, I don't understand why you wouldn't since doing so would make actually perfect flow into 3 as well...

00:22:845 - (1,2) This blanket is not even close, fix it.

00:24:109 - (3) Drag the tail of the slider upwards so that it's close to horizontal, high enough that it aims above 4 but not so high that it overlaps with 2.

00:25:372 - (5,6) Again, make this blanket 6, there's absolutely no reason for this to be angled like it is, it breaks flow in both directions and looks bad in terms of aesthetics, pull the tail up, blanketing 6 isn't even mandatory just please....

00:27:661 - (2) This slider is too close to the 3 slider, and the shape is too straight, maybe more like this...

00:31:056 - (2,3) Shuffle these forwards (left), the staircase like motion is not the greatest feeling.

00:32:951 - (1) Make this a little more interesting, give this slider a slight upwards curve.

00:35:477 - (1,2) Just change these entirely, this would be my suggestion...

Alright, I'm getting tired of modding this and frankly the mod I got was 6 points so this is already far more than even, hopefully you can take a lot of what I said and identify where similar problems might be in the rest of the difficulty. I didn't look at other diffs so can't talk for the whole map, but this needs a lot of work, GL with mapping.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-12-18T06:55:37+00:00

TheOnlyLeon wrote:
Ok, in response to the M4M, now since your mod was very short, I'm going to give a full mod to only one diff.

seeing that the Easy has zero mods as of now, I'll do that one. *note, not checking overall meta*

FOREST'S EASY

After-Note: Your DS'ing is really bi-polar, sometimes it's completely accurate, and other times is fairly off cause why not? since it's an easy, prob want to make it all fairly exact. I try to, but I have fallback version and stable and this version haves different AiMod i just can use the fallback cause my shitty PC ;_; I told Maruko fix distance for me

Add some Audio lead-in, not a good idea to have the first note milliseconds after map start. 1500 would be a good amount. No, conflicts the mapset

00:02:477 - (1) this is shallow and far from the next slider, bring the head right up to slider 2 and make it a tight blanket. I'm not trying to blank this part

00:05:477 - (5,6) Again, this hugging of sliders that aren't even slightly related isn't pretty, either move 6 upwards so that it's above 5 or pull 6 down and blanket 5. Blank with a different way

Additional note, 4 measures and no NC, that's a really long time, considering how slow this map is combo should probably never even get above 4. I think it's okay

00:08:003 - (2,3) This motion out of 1 and diagonally down is weird as it doesn't look the same way it feels, move two upwards so that it's almost straight off slider 1 and goes straight down to 3. Used CTRL+G

00:08:951 - (4) Again this is an upwards shift in flow when it doesn't make much sense to me, move this slider downwards so it's slightly dropped below 3. Moved a little bit below

00:10:214 - (1,2) These don't make much sense with the song imo, single circles in the middle of a 3 tone riff? Ofc since it's easy you can't map the whole thing out, but make these circles sliders that extend to the white tick after each. Fixed with a different way

00:12:740 - (1,2,3) This is an awkward transition, if you want this to make sense either rotate the entire pattern 90 counter-clockwise or shift the whole pattern up and to the right. as of now it just doesn't work in terms of flow and direction. OK now?

00:16:530 - (3) This slider should entirely be curved instead of straight and tilted, pull the curve out to the edge of the screen to encourage good cursor motion. Curved

00:18:424 - (2) Make this blanket the tail of 1, I don't understand why you wouldn't since doing so would make actually perfect flow into 3 as well... fixed

00:22:845 - (1,2) This blanket is not even close, fix it. Fixed

00:24:109 - (3) Drag the tail of the slider upwards so that it's close to horizontal, high enough that it aims above 4 but not so high that it overlaps with 2. Fixed

00:25:372 - (5,6) Again, make this blanket 6, there's absolutely no reason for this to be angled like it is, it breaks flow in both directions and looks bad in terms of aesthetics, pull the tail up, blanketing 6 isn't even mandatory just please.... Fixed

00:27:661 - (2) This slider is too close to the 3 slider, and the shape is too straight, maybe more like this... Fixed

00:31:056 - (2,3) Shuffle these forwards (left), the staircase like motion is not the greatest feeling. I think it's OK

00:32:951 - (1) Make this a little more interesting, give this slider a slight upwards curve. Curved now

00:35:477 - (1,2) Just change these entirely, this would be my suggestion... Applied

Alright, I'm getting tired of modding this
.-.
and frankly the mod I got was 6 points so this is already far more than even, hopefully you can take a lot of what I said and identify where similar problems might be in the rest of the difficulty. I didn't look at other diffs so can't talk for the whole map, but this needs a lot of work, GL with mapping.

Thanks a bunch, it help'd me a lot!
Maruko, please remember fix compose problems, oh! and please hitsound my diff too

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Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2015-12-19T13:13:31+00:00

Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

Title: Clattanoia
Remove "(TV Size)" because it has not been used in official.
Source: OVERLORD
According to the second link, this is correct title.
Please add "オーバーロード" to Tags because it is anime title!

Good luck~:3

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2015-12-20T01:09:50+00:00

Gamu wrote:
Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

Title: Clattanoia
Remove "(TV Size)" because it has not been used in official. Sure
Source: OVERLORD
According to the second link, this is correct title.
Please add "オーバーロード" to Tags because it is anime title!
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http://puu.sh/m1ebg/13aa78c95e.png
http://puu.sh/m1ebF/52d36e4b00.png
http://overlord-anime.com/products/music.html
http://www.oxt-music.com/discography.html
https://twitter.com/over_lord_anime
Good luck~:3

Thanks for checking my map!

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-12-23T04:55:34+00:00

@DavidEd still prefer current cs

Skie1134 wrote:
Celsius's Extra
Also really fun to play through this map

01:14:003 (4,5,6) - should space further apart current is fine now imo
01:18:109 (6,7,1) - I don't see a good reason on why you should make these three notes harder to read instead of the intuitive pattern you've been doing so far. oop

All in all, this mapset is pretty solid. Hope to see it ranked soon!

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-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2015-12-24T02:23:24+00:00

Skie1134 wrote:
Circle's Normal

-Yuzuriha's Insane

00:28:845 (6,7,1) - should have the 7 stick out from 1 to help readability like you've done at 00:05:003 (1,2,3) -
00:54:266 (1,2,3) - ^

fix

All in all, this mapset is pretty solid. Hope to see it ranked soon!

mod thanks~

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Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2015-12-26T03:45:06+00:00

Updated!

CircleChu

190 posts

Joined May 2012

CircleChu 2015-12-26T15:09:06+00:00

Skie1134 wrote:
Circle's Normal

00:07:687 (5) - consider moving this note to the red tick to the left since all the instruments come in on that time Okay.
00:26:635 (4,5,6) - Space these closer together Okay.
00:56:319 (1,2) - The red tick between these two notes have a heavy sound going on, consider mapping to that This will ruin the musical flow and rhythm of my map. I`ll keep it.
00:57:582 (4,5) - ^
00:58:845 (1,2) - ^
01:16:845 (2,3) - ^
01:17:793 (4,5) - ^
01:21:582 (5,1) - ^

fix

http://puu.sh/m9cIS/4f0d0a97f5.txt

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2015-12-29T03:37:54+00:00

Updated!

Sorry for late update because I had problem my osu! website

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-12-29T14:48:08+00:00

Hi, from my queue~ as you didn't select specific diffs, I'll choose 5 diffs myself.

[General]
* well 128kbps... Try to find a 192kbps if you can.
* The BG size should be 1366x768, but the current one is 1365x768.
* The black color is too dark and is really similar as the BG's color. It's confusing, try to change it to another color.
* The rhythm is changed to 3/4 beat on 00:38:003 - and back to 4/4 on 00:49:378 - here somewhere. Even though it won't affect the gameplay much (though the nightcore mod does affect!) it's still wrong in terms of musical theory.

[Forest's Easy]
I've mapped this song's Easy once before, so I'll make it a reference when explaining. https://osu.ppy.sh/b/759419&m=0
* 00:07:530 - as for here, the most dominent sounds are all on red lines. There's no need to insist the white lines when successive red lines make just easy rhythms. See my diff on that map and consider following it.
* 00:32:635 (4,1) - DS error
* 00:38:003 - Don't use sv changes on Easy. Just go with 1.00x sv
* 01:14:477 - This beat is strong. Try to put a note here instead of 01:14:319 - 01:14:635 - . Again take a look at my diff.
* 01:22:056 - Same for this beat.

[Circle's Normal]
Fix all distance into one. You shouldn't put any jumps on a Normal diff. Also if it's not for a specific pattern, just use distance snap and fix all the distances to 1.2x, rather it's kiai or not.
You need to make the rhythms more polished and take care of the flow and appearance as well. This diff needs some work.
* 00:05:003 - Try to keep what you're following. You represented 00:02:477 - this beat, then 00:05:003 - should be represented too, instead of 00:04:845 (5) -
* 00:07:530 - It's not good to put a break while Easy filled it out too. Map it.
* 00:25:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Keep same distance on same beats. Normal is not something you can put jumps or random distances.
* 00:41:793 - This beat is prominent and should be clickable, at least rather than 00:41:951 -
* 00:42:266 - Also it's a bit awkward to leave this beat while represented every other ones.
* 00:50:793 (1,2,3) - No jumps
* 00:56:793 - 00:58:056 - 00:59:319 - 01:00:582 - 01:17:003 - 01:22:056 - You're missing all the important beats. Try to represent them in some way.
* 01:14:497 (1) - 01:27:128 (1) - Putting a spinner 1/16 beat after a note isn't a good idea. I'd say you should use 1/4 or 1/2.

[Polka's Hard]
* You used a lot of spinners on this diff, but they're mostly too short and you can fill them out. It's not unrankable, but filling them with notes would be better. 00:16:845 (1) - 00:26:556 (1) - 01:00:819 (1) - 01:22:135 (1) - there are good sounds inside the spinner and you can make it fun with notes too. I would fill 01:14:635 (1) - this out too, but it's a bit better.
* 00:23:003 - I wouldn't neglect this start vocal.
* 00:37:372 (4,5) - This feels to be overmapped. The sounds I hear are at 00:37:372 - 00:37:530 - 00:37:687 - 00:37:766 - 00:37:845 - and not on else. Just go with normal 1/2s and maybe a triple at 00:37:766 -
* 00:41:635 - A strong vocal I would like to fill out.
* 00:42:582 - This beat is especially where the drum starts. I don't think it's a good idea to neglect it.
* 00:43:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is different than 00:38:003 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you listen carefully. I mean, this is a Hard diff, no need to keep that simple rhythm for here too. There are drums that are good to map.
* 00:47:477 (1,2) - The whole part is 3/4. therefore, you need to bind each 3 beats. 00:47:477 - 00:47:793 - 00:48:109 - should be one set, and 00:48:424 - 00:48:740 - 00:49:056 - should be another one.
* 00:56:319 (1,1) - Though they kinda fits with the vocal(I'm not sure if the vocal is actually intended like that) but you're not following the vocal only here. By doing that you're ignoring some good drum beats 00:56:635 - 00:57:898 - . I've never seen that on other diffs (and other mapsets of this song) so just keep 1/2 there.
* 01:00:582 - This beat is strong and should be clickable. I would just remove 01:00:740 (1) - and put spinner there.
* 01:13:214 - Same
* 01:19:687 (1,2) - and 01:20:951 (1,2) - feel different and the latter one could be emphasized more, with a different pattern.
Actually your diff is good

[Hard]
* A general problem with this map is that you're not considering which beats are stronger(therefore, should be clickable) and which are not. I'll give you some examples.
* 00:07:530 - This beat is strong and should be clickable.
* Actually you're neglecting many of the strong beats like 00:08:161 - 00:08:793 - and 00:12:582 - 00:13:214 - is still not clickable. I recommend you to see Polka's diff.
* 00:17:793 (1,1) - No need to spam NC. Remove it from one of them. 00:30:109 (1) - 00:34:687 (1,2) - no needed here too
* 00:18:740 - 00:19:056 - All these beats are strong. Please make it clickable.
* 00:20:477 - It's awkward to neglect this beat while you put a note on 00:20:319 (2) - a weaker beat.
* 00:23:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Don't make random spacings. Use one basic distance, and only put jumps on some beats that deserve to be emphasized.
* 00:36:740 (4,5) - Suddenly a big jump
* 00:37:845 (8,9,1) - I don't think there's a 1/4 sound here.
* 00:38:003 - All those random spacings. Also 00:38:951 - 00:40:372 - 00:46:530 - are strong beats. And listen to music carefully and think what you should represent more and which can be just neglected.
* 01:04:372 - 01:13:214 - 01:14:951 - 01:15:582 - 01:15:898 - All strong beats
I didn't point out every similar ones. But I would suggest to see Polka's diff and learn from it. Think of what should be represented as a click, and what could be just ignored, and where you should fix the distance and where to put jumps.

[-Yuzuriha's Insane]
* 00:02:477 (1,2) - 00:05:003 (1,2,3) - Make it consistent?
* 00:16:766 (2) - I don't hear anything on here and 00:16:924 - is stronger than 00:16:845 - (Is there a sound here even?). Anyway that maybe a bit of overmapping...
* 00:38:793 (4,5,6) - Isn't this a bit overmapped too? This is a quiet part anyway.
* 01:11:951 (1,2,3) - 01:13:214 (1,2,3) - 01:17:003 (1,2,3) - 01:18:266 (1,2,3) - These too, I think it's better to make some 1/2 jumps rather than triples for the whole part.

My part is done, will be waiting for your m4m part!

Kyle73

356 posts

Joined December 2013

Kyle73 2015-12-29T17:43:15+00:00

Hey there! From your M4M queue :3!!

Just a general note, be sure to hit ctrl + shift + a on all your difficulties and fix those problems!!

It's a really nice mapset and I'm sorry for only being able to mod the insane and above difficulties D:!

Insane

00:01:530 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe silent these notes? I think it would sound pretty nice since it's just vocals here, and then you would put back sound here 00:02:477 (1) -
00:17:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Just a suggestion but I think stack these triples like this? I know it doesn't really match the previous triples but imo the stacks look a lot nicer, though you'd probably have to change up some of the patterns for the triples. Just an idea

00:29:951 (1) - Remove the curve here, have this slider match 00:30:424 (2) -
00:32:635 (7,8) - Keep spacing consistent here, copy these two notes 00:32:477 (6,7) - and flip it -45. You would probably have to rearrange the other patterns after this though, but it helps keep spacing consistent
00:32:951 (1) - Hmm you should probably flip this slider around like this it will flow into the next note better
00:36:109 (5) - Imo remove this slider and introduce a slider pattern starting 00:35:477 (1) - perhaps use that same slider? With the vocals being how it is here and for you to have such a long slider, imo it just sounds, plays, and looks really boring and doesn't match the song
00:38:319 (2) - This note isn't really necessary imo, it sounds a little better if you removed this note and extended 00:38:003 (1) - slider's tick to the white tick
00:40:214 (2,3) - To maintain consistency I think you should find a way to stack these notes like how did with this previous pattern, it's basically the same sound and I don't see why you should change up the pattern here
00:49:372 (1,2) - I think these two can be more spaced apart from 00:48:424 (4,5) - but specifically the 00:49:372 (1) - and 00:48:424 (4) - try and have the same type of spacing so it matches the spacing introduced in the previous pattern here 00:47:793 (2,3,4,5) -
00:50:477 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh maybe silence these notes? If you choose to do so, start at 00:50:477 (2) - the slider end only
01:02:477 (3) - Move this slider up a bit so the follow points match like this
01:06:266 (3) - Imo this would look better if you remove the curve
01:08:951 (4,5,6) - Re-space these notes, try to keep the spacing in these type of patterns similar or the same
01:18:266 (1) - This slider is kind of ugly imo, you should either remove the curve here entirely, or copy a curved slider like this one 01:17:635 (4) - and make them both the same curve

-Yuzuriha's Insane

00:01:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like suggested before, I think silencing these notes would make it sound and play more epic, 00:02:477 (1) - sounds starts back here

00:07:924 (2,3) - Reangle these to come out of the slider here 00:07:530 (1) - honestly it just looks over spaced, maybe you can angle the notes so it goes a little something like this?
00:10:451 (2,3) - Same deal ^
00:12:977 (2,3) - ^
00:15:503 (2,3) - ^ Lol I'm just not a big fan of the spacing implemented here D:
00:42:424 (5,6) - Should reangle these notes to match this pattern 00:42:109 (3,4) - the sound doesn't change here so seeing a sudden change in the pattern imo is a bit too much
00:50:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like I said before, maybe silence these notes?
00:58:845 (4) - I think you can follow the same type of rhythm here, like i think the kicksliders like 00:57:582 (4) - this would fit here
01:00:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Instead of a circle I think the stream should loop a bit like this or something of the sort, basically not a circle imo, something that curves into the next note
01:01:845 (1) - Reangle this slider, the curve here is kind of ugly, perhaps make it follow the same curve pattern throughout the kiai or just change it completely
01:03:740 (3) - Perhaps angle this a bit higher? To match the follow points. 01:04:056 (5) - Move this one up as well if you choose to do this
01:05:477 (6,7) - I think you should make the spacing a bit more stronger here, to match the growing intensity in the song, also your other patterns get a bit more spaced as well
01:09:819 (2,3) - Maybe nerf the spacing a bit, make it something like this?
01:12:345 (2,3) - ^ You already know how I feel about these things LOL
01:18:661 (2,3) - ^
01:20:951 (1) - Hmm fix the blanket here
01:22:451 (2,3) - Same fix as 01:18:661 (2,3) and such

Celsius' Extra

00:15:898 (3,5) - Distance should match each other like, so space out 00:15:898 (3) - to match 00:16:214 (5) - or vice versa
00:17:477 (3) - You should change the angle of this slider, maybe something like this Also the hitsounds sound weird here imo
00:21:582 (1,2) - The patterns should match each other imo for here and 00:21:898 (3,4) - so either have them match 00:21:582 (1,2) - or match 00:21:898 (3,4) - either one is fine as long as it matches imo.
00:21:898 (3) - Fix blanket, or fix them both 00:21:898 (3,4) - if you choose to match 00:21:582 (1,2) -
00:26:793 (3) - Either remove curve or have a curve 00:27:266 (6) - here too since it's the same sound
00:49:845 (1,2) - Spacing is fine here, but I think it'd be a lot more epic if it was a little bit more spaced out
00:51:740 (1) - I honestly don't like the slider here, it's angle seems unnecessary to me, perhaps reduce the curving? It doesn't really look pretty, or fitting here with such a large curve
01:00:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stream looks a little awkward, mainly the notes here 01:00:819 (4,5) -
01:05:477 (4,5) - Fix blanket
01:14:003 (4,5,6) - Not spaced out properly, 01:14:003 (4,5) - the spacing should stay consistent for a pattern like this so copy that and paste it over 01:14:161 (5,6) - and shift it down, should look like this
01:18:266 (7) - Should me more spaced imo, it's way too close to 01:18:109 (6) - maybe you can place it somewhere here? I'm not sure, but yeah you should definitely space it out more
01:23:951 (3,4,5) - To match the patterning and intensity I think the triples after this point (not ones on top of sliders) should match the triples at 01:22:687 (3,4,5) - because it's basically the same sound.

Good luck getting it ranked

!!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-12-30T01:54:13+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Hi, from my queue~ as you didn't select specific diffs, I'll choose 5 diffs myself. rip celsius mod (?

[Forest's Easy]
I've mapped this song's Easy once before, so I'll make it a reference when explaining. https://osu.ppy.sh/b/759419&m=0
* 00:07:530 - as for here, the most dominent sounds are all on red lines. There's no need to insist the white lines when successive red lines make just easy rhythms. See my diff on that map and consider following it. No, I think it's good with the rhythm
* 00:32:635 (4,1) - DS error was an accident, thanks for notice
* 00:38:003 - Don't use sv changes on Easy. Just go with 1.00x sv Replaced with a break, rip beginner objects
* 01:14:477 - This beat is strong. Try to put a note here instead of 01:14:319 - 01:14:635 - . Again take a look at my diff. I think it's good the current flow
* 01:22:056 - Same for this beat. Same as above

My part is done, will be waiting for your m4m part!

with my code, with my heart, wait i'm not BN

osu file format v14

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Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2015-12-30T02:35:09+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Hi, from my queue~ as you didn't select specific diffs, I'll choose 5 diffs myself.

[General]
* well 128kbps... Try to find a 192kbps if you can.
* The BG size should be 1366x768, but the current one is 1365x768.
* The black color is too dark and is really similar as the BG's color. It's confusing, try to change it to another color.
* The rhythm is changed to 3/4 beat on 00:38:003 - and back to 4/4 on 00:49:378 - here somewhere. Even though it won't affect the gameplay much (though the nightcore mod does affect!) it's still wrong in terms of musical theory.

[Hard]
* A general problem with this map is that you're not considering which beats are stronger(therefore, should be clickable) and which are not. I'll give you some examples.
* 00:07:530 - This beat is strong and should be clickable. Fixed
* Actually you're neglecting many of the strong beats like 00:08:161 - 00:08:793 - and 00:12:582 - 00:13:214 - is still not clickable. I recommend you to see Polka's diff. Fixed
* 00:17:793 (1,1) - No need to spam NC. Remove it from one of them. 00:30:109 (1) - 00:34:687 (1,2) - no needed here too Fixed N NC
* 00:18:740 - 00:19:056 - All these beats are strong. Please make it clickable. Meh, its fine
* 00:20:477 - It's awkward to neglect this beat while you put a note on 00:20:319 (2) - a weaker beat. Make me confusing
* 00:23:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Don't make random spacings. Use one basic distance, and only put jumps on some beats that deserve to be emphasized. Fixed DS
* 00:36:740 (4,5) - Suddenly a big jump Its fine
* 00:37:845 (8,9,1) - I don't think there's a 1/4 sound here. idk how to explain u
* 00:38:003 - All those random spacings. Also 00:38:951 - 00:40:372 - 00:46:530 - are strong beats. And listen to music carefully and think what you should represent more and which can be just neglected. Fixed all spacing and DS
* 01:04:372 - 01:13:214 - 01:14:951 - 01:15:582 - 01:15:898 - All strong beats
I didn't point out every similar ones. But I would suggest to see Polka's diff and learn from it. Think of what should be represented as a click, and what could be just ignored, and where you should fix the distance and where to put jumps.

My part is done, will be waiting for your m4m part!

Thanks for modding!
but take me a minute

@Kyle73: Will take a minute because Im tired

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2015-12-30T04:11:10+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Hi, from my queue~ as you didn't select specific diffs, I'll choose 5 diffs myself.
[Polka's Hard]
* You used a lot of spinners on this diff, but they're mostly too short and you can fill them out. It's not unrankable, but filling them with notes would be better. 00:16:845 (1) - 00:26:556 (1) - 01:00:819 (1) - 01:22:135 (1) - there are good sounds inside the spinner and you can make it fun with notes too. I would fill 01:14:635 (1) - this out too, but it's a bit better.Reduced to 4 spinners.
* 00:23:003 - I wouldn't neglect this start vocal. I mapped the strong vocals, to map a breath in my opinion would shatter the style. I'll see if more people bring this up though.
* 00:37:372 (4,5) - This feels to be overmapped. The sounds I hear are at 00:37:372 - 00:37:530 - 00:37:687 - 00:37:766 - 00:37:845 - and not on else. Just go with normal 1/2s and maybe a triple at 00:37:766 - Changed.
* 00:41:635 - A strong vocal I would like to fill out. Done.
* 00:42:582 - This beat is especially where the drum starts. I don't think it's a good idea to neglect it.^
* 00:43:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is different than 00:38:003 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you listen carefully. I mean, this is a Hard diff, no need to keep that simple rhythm for here too. There are drums that are good to map.I added a repeat slider to incorporate the three main drum beats.
* 00:47:477 (1,2) - The whole part is 3/4. therefore, you need to bind each 3 beats. 00:47:477 - 00:47:793 - 00:48:109 - should be one set, and 00:48:424 - 00:48:740 - 00:49:056 - should be another one.This is very vague. I don't understand. I think I fixed it??
* 00:56:319 (1,1) - Though they kinda fits with the vocal(I'm not sure if the vocal is actually intended like that) but you're not following the vocal only here. By doing that you're ignoring some good drum beats 00:56:635 - 00:57:898 - . I've never seen that on other diffs (and other mapsets of this song) so just keep 1/2 there. Sorry but the drums just don't stick out to me here. I'll keep it this way unless more people mention it.
* 01:00:582 - This beat is strong and should be clickable. I would just remove 01:00:740 (1) - and put spinner there.I agree.
* 01:13:214 - SameDone.
* 01:19:687 (1,2) - and 01:20:951 (1,2) - feel different and the latter one could be emphasized more, with a different pattern.I don't understand what you mean?
Actually your diff is good Swig swag thanks son

My part is done, will be waiting for your m4m part!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-12-30T04:51:37+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:
* 01:19:687 (1,2) - and 01:20:951 (1,2) - feel different and the latter one could be emphasized more, with a different pattern.I don't understand what you mean?

Look at -Yuzuriha's diff, 01:19:687 (1,3) - these two fit with the sound as sliders, but 01:20:951 (1,2,3,4) - these are something that fit more when it's disconnected with circles. each of 01:20:951 (1,2,3,4) - are pretty much worth emphasized, but you're putting 01:21:266 - 01:21:898 - as slider ends.

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-12-30T12:51:48+00:00

Kyle73 wrote:
Celsius' Extra
00:15:898 (3,5) - Distance should match each other like, so space out 00:15:898 (3) - to match 00:16:214 (5) - or vice versa I think the current one spacing is fine it represent how I emphasis kick and snare very well
00:17:477 (3) - You should change the angle of this slider, maybe something like this Also the hitsounds sound weird here imo I find the current fit best here
00:21:582 (1,2) - The patterns should match each other imo for here and 00:21:898 (3,4) - so either have them match 00:21:582 (1,2) - or match 00:21:898 (3,4) - either one is fine as long as it matches imo. k
00:21:898 (3) - Fix blanket, or fix them both 00:21:898 (3,4) - if you choose to match 00:21:582 (1,2) - x
00:26:793 (3) - Either remove curve or have a curve 00:27:266 (6) - here too since it's the same sound lol I think the current one just fit how the song goes imo
00:49:845 (1,2) - Spacing is fine here, but I think it'd be a lot more epic if it was a little bit more spaced out it's enough now imo
00:51:740 (1) - I honestly don't like the slider here, it's angle seems unnecessary to me, perhaps reduce the curving? It doesn't really look pretty, or fitting here with such a large curve I don't think so
01:00:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - The stream looks a little awkward, mainly the notes here 01:00:819 (4,5) - 4 and 5 are like an angle change to emphasis a little changing in tone in music here
01:05:477 (4,5) - Fix blanket h
01:14:003 (4,5,6) - Not spaced out properly, 01:14:003 (4,5) - the spacing should stay consistent for a pattern like this so copy that and paste it over 01:14:161 (5,6) - and shift it down, should look like this o
01:18:266 (7) - Should me more spaced imo, it's way too close to 01:18:109 (6) - maybe you can place it somewhere here? I'm not sure, but yeah you should definitely space it out more d
01:23:951 (3,4,5) - To match the patterning and intensity I think the triples after this point (not ones on top of sliders) should match the triples at 01:22:687 (3,4,5) - because it's basically the same sound. keeping the stack there so it don't ruin the flow much , I think it doesn't need to have same pattern tho cus it's all about the rhythm here , I guess lol

Good luck getting it ranked !!

thanks for the mods

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- Castaway -

40 posts

Joined April 2014

- Castaway - 2015-12-31T08:49:53+00:00

Hey! M4M from my queue

SPOILER

Forest's Easy

00:02:477 (1,2) - Something like this looks better but stick to the DS heh: http://puu.sh/meBNE/1f536b40e1.JPG
00:04:214 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/meBSA/71d3633b0d.JPG like this??
00:22:845 (1,2) - Fix blanket please
00:25:372 (5,6) - ^
00:31:687 (3) - Straight horizontally better. It will lead on to the next circle
00:34:687 - Something should go here...
00:34:687 - 00:56:319 (1,2) - I don't like saying blankets...
Generally, the diff could be cleaned up abit 01:05:161 (5,6) - Something like this could be better like this: http://puu.sh/meCl5/9333f365fc.JPG 01:22:214 (1,2,3) - could be like this: http://puu.sh/meCsw/29e1877a5e.JPG These are just examples.
01:24:740 (1,2,3) - Better placement
00:54:740 (5,6) - 00:54:740 (5,6) - Again...something like this (really bad example lmao):http://puu.sh/meCAc/12c5bf72f7.JPG
00:17:793 (1,2) - 00:24:109 (3,4,5) - 00:59:319 (4,5) - These could be alot cleaner

Insane

You can tell you've used distance snap. There are parts where you can place jumps, especially on insanes
00:32:951 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of this
00:50:319 (1,2) - prefer this pair like these 00:49:372 (1,2,1,2) -
00:53:003 (1,2,3) - Actually these triples should be stacked and the slider after can have a jump...it feels like i'm going square around the screen erk...
00:03:109 (4,5) - Why are these so close
00:21:424 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:01:530 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/meDWF/5a18fa7d7c.JPG better
00:17:951 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/meE1d/9d3f182f77.JPG better
00:22:687 (8,9,1) - stack and move up for jump to next circle
00:23:793 (5,6) - place it better please
Add some jumps in the kiai and stack the triples will make the map better

That's it from me. Gl with your map

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2015-12-31T16:03:42+00:00

General

Inconsistency in Combo Colors, in all diffs.
Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped in Hard difficulty: 00:49:364

Celsius's Extra

00:00:109 - 00:01:214 - this whole first part should be like: http://puu.sh/meNvF/f97fffd0ac.png | http://puu.sh/meNwc/7b6991f8e4.png So the slider should start here 00:00:161 - to fit the music since there's no sound at the red line.
00:00:345 - If you want to map to the drums too, you should add circles here: http://puu.sh/meOb7/7b75814e11.png
00:10:056 (1) - Move down to x:404 y:294, makes more sense imo.
00:36:424 (4) - Move a little bit up? Like: http://puu.sh/meOxx/b187e25b61.png
00:48:740 (3) - NC?
00:53:635 (3,5) - Fix blanket, so it blankets more properly.
01:26:951 (3) - Move this more to the right to avoid sliderbreak: http://puu.sh/meOHP/4d43a64822.png

-Yuzurihara's Insane

00:00:109 - Should be like: http://puu.sh/meOM4/1088fa67d8.png | http://puu.sh/meOMR/e624f61ebb.png to fit the music since there's no sound at the red line.
00:02:951 (2) - Fix this slider like this: http://puu.sh/meORf/88f568a30b.png for better flow maybe?
00:07:056 (3) - Ctrl+G? Makes a better flow imo.
00:16:766 (2) - Please delete, there's no sound here to support it.
00:49:845 (3) - NC, 00:50:319 (5) - NC, to fix the misreading of 1/2.
01:01:530 (2,1) - Please avoid this tiny overlap.
01:06:898 (1) - Mute end?
01:08:161 (1) - Same as above.

Insane

00:00:109 - Please change this to something like: http://puu.sh/mePc2/e0697d9786.png Because there's no sound at 00:00:109 - to support, and it's 1/6 streams from 00:00:161 - to 00:00:319 -
00:05:635 (4,5) - This part isn't really supporting to the music/fits with the music very well. Feels kinda random to play, so you should move around with things and make it play like: http://puu.sh/mePiT/8575a3c7db.png
00:12:582 (1,2,3) - Same a above, just change it like: http://puu.sh/mePlw/f4fbe64eaf.png
00:15:109 (1,2) - Same as above, this is to make the mapping fit more with the music.
00:20:635 (5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, 00:20:951 (6) - NC to fix it, or move it to x:336 y:176 and select these 00:20:951 (6,7) - then move it a bit down like: http://puu.sh/mePqk/310482c9f9.png
00:21:582 (3,4) - Why suddenly low spacing when the song get's more intense from here to here? 00:22:845 -
00:21:740 (4,5) - Same as above.
00:22:372 (7,8) - Same.
00:38:003 (1) - Mute end?
00:49:372 (1,2,1,2) - Imo, these jumps are way too big for the diff, it should be more consistent, so please make it smaller.
00:50:477 (2) - Mute end?
00:57:503 (7) - Delete, it's overmapped.
01:03:187 (6) - Same as above.
01:05:082 (4) - Same.
01:13:845 (4) - Convert this to two circles to make it more fit with the music?

Well... Not to be strict or anything, but this needs more mods, and improvements to make it fit in the ranked maps. Some jumps and streams are randomly placed in the map, and overmapped like: 00:53:082 (2) - 00:53:714 (6) - 00:05:319 (2,3) - This is like only happening one time in the whole map, the jump is awkward and shouldn't be so big. Sorry for bad words, but welp. I hope you have the motivation to improve these, and make it fit more for ranking Good luck!

Feedback

Nice map and all, i like the anime too lol. Good luck o/

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-01-01T01:51:29+00:00

- Castaway - wrote:
Hey! M4M from my queue

Forest's Easy
00:02:477 (1,2) - Something like this looks better but stick to the DS heh: http://puu.sh/meBNE/1f536b40e1.JPG Fixed
00:04:214 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/meBSA/71d3633b0d.JPG like this?? no
00:22:845 (1,2) - Fix blanket please Is fixed already
00:25:372 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:31:687 (3) - Straight horizontally better. It will lead on to the next circle ok
00:34:687 - Something should go here... no
00:34:687 - 00:56:319 (1,2) - I don't like saying blankets... ?
Generally, the diff could be cleaned up abit 01:05:161 (5,6) - Something like this could be better like this: http://puu.sh/meCl5/9333f365fc.JPG 01:22:214 (1,2,3) - could be like this: http://puu.sh/meCsw/29e1877a5e.JPG These are just examples. later
01:24:740 (1,2,3) - Better placement is good for me
00:54:740 (5,6) - 00:54:740 (5,6) - Again...something like this (really bad example lmao):http://puu.sh/meCAc/12c5bf72f7.JPG not funny QAQ
00:17:793 (1,2) - 00:24:109 (3,4,5) - 00:59:319 (4,5) - These could be alot cleaner later
That's it from me. Gl with your map[/spoilerbox]

just open me

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-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2016-01-01T03:12:07+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Hi, from my queue~ as you didn't select specific diffs, I'll choose 5 diffs myself.

[-Yuzuriha's Insane]
* 00:02:477 (1,2) - 00:05:003 (1,2,3) - Make it consistent?
* 00:16:766 (2) - I don't hear anything on here and 00:16:924 - is stronger than 00:16:845 - (Is there a sound here even?). Anyway that maybe a bit of overmapping... fix
* 00:38:793 (4,5,6) - Isn't this a bit overmapped too? This is a quiet part anyway. fix
* 01:11:951 (1,2,3) - 01:13:214 (1,2,3) - 01:17:003 (1,2,3) - 01:18:266 (1,2,3) - These too, I think it's better to make some 1/2 jumps rather than triples for the whole part.

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Kyle73 wrote:
Hey there! From your M4M queue :3!!

-Yuzuriha's Insane
00:01:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like suggested before, I think silencing these notes would make it sound and play more epic, 00:02:477 (1) - sounds starts back here
00:07:924 (2,3) - Reangle these to come out of the slider here 00:07:530 (1) - honestly it just looks over spaced, maybe you can angle the notes so it goes a little something like this? fix
00:10:451 (2,3) - Same deal ^ fix
00:12:977 (2,3) - ^ fix
00:15:503 (2,3) - ^ Lol I'm just not a big fan of the spacing implemented here D:
00:42:424 (5,6) - Should reangle these notes to match this pattern 00:42:109 (3,4) - the sound doesn't change here so seeing a sudden change in the pattern imo is a bit too much
00:50:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like I said before, maybe silence these notes?
00:58:845 (4) - I think you can follow the same type of rhythm here, like i think the kicksliders like 00:57:582 (4) - this would fit here fix
01:00:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Instead of a circle I think the stream should loop a bit like this or something of the sort, basically not a circle imo, something that curves into the next note fix
01:01:845 (1) - Reangle this slider, the curve here is kind of ugly, perhaps make it follow the same curve pattern throughout the kiai or just change it completely
01:03:740 (3) - Perhaps angle this a bit higher? To match the follow points. 01:04:056 (5) - Move this one up as well if you choose to do this
01:05:477 (6,7) - I think you should make the spacing a bit more stronger here, to match the growing intensity in the song, also your other patterns get a bit more spaced as well fix
01:09:819 (2,3) - Maybe nerf the spacing a bit, make it something like this?
01:12:345 (2,3) - ^ You already know how I feel about these things LOL
01:18:661 (2,3) - ^
01:20:951 (1) - Hmm fix the blanket here
01:22:451 (2,3) - Same fix as 01:18:661 (2,3) and such

Good luck getting it ranked !!

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Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-01-09T09:45:52+00:00

8 days silenced.

- Castaway - wrote:
Hey! M4M from my queue

Insane
You can tell you've used distance snap. There are parts where you can place jumps, especially on insanes
00:32:951 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of this Wat do u mean lol
00:50:319 (1,2) - prefer this pair like these 00:49:372 (1,2,1,2) - Meh, its fine
00:53:003 (1,2,3) - Actually these triples should be stacked and the slider after can have a jump...it feels like i'm going square around the screen erk... Changed
00:03:109 (4,5) - Why are these so close Lol. look close
00:21:424 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Its fine lol
00:01:530 (1,1) - http://puu.sh/meDWF/5a18fa7d7c.JPG better Changed
00:17:951 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/meE1d/9d3f182f77.JPG better ^
00:22:687 (8,9,1) - stack and move up for jump to next circle Wat do u mean
00:23:793 (5,6) - place it better please Kk, used ds
Add some jumps in the kiai and stack the triples will make the map better lol
That's it from me. Gl with your map[/spoilerbox]

-Tochi wrote:

General
Inconsistency in Combo Colors, in all diffs.
Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped in Hard difficulty: 00:49:364

Insane
00:00:109 - Please change this to something like: http://puu.sh/mePc2/e0697d9786.png Because there's no sound at 00:00:109 - to support, and it's 1/6 streams from 00:00:161 - to 00:00:319 - Lol, why 1/6 streams. Its so weird. Idk what Im saying
00:05:635 (4,5) - This part isn't really supporting to the music/fits with the music very well. Feels kinda random to play, so you should move around with things and make it play like: http://puu.sh/mePiT/8575a3c7db.png Fixed
00:12:582 (1,2,3) - Same a above, just change it like: http://puu.sh/mePlw/f4fbe64eaf.png Changed into long slider is beter
00:15:109 (1,2) - Same as above, this is to make the mapping fit more with the music. Same as above
00:20:635 (5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, 00:20:951 (6) - NC to fix it, or move it to x:336 y:176 and select these 00:20:951 (6,7) - then move it a bit down like: http://puu.sh/mePqk/310482c9f9.png Fixed including x and y. Dat is confusing for me
00:21:582 (3,4) - Why suddenly low spacing when the song get's more intense from here to here? 00:22:845 - Fixed
00:21:740 (4,5) - Same as above. Used ds lol
00:22:372 (7,8) - Same. Same
00:38:003 (1) - Mute end? Yes lol
00:49:372 (1,2,1,2) - Imo, these jumps are way too big for the diff, it should be more consistent, so please make it smaller. This is my best make jumps like 4. Don't make me confusing
00:50:477 (2) - Mute end? Yes lol
00:57:503 (7) - Delete, it's overmapped. Sure
01:03:187 (6) - Same as above. ^
01:05:082 (4) - Same. ^
01:13:845 (4) - Convert this to two circles to make it more fit with the music? Yes and fixed

Well... Not to be strict or anything, but this needs more mods, and improvements to make it fit in the ranked maps. Some jumps and streams are randomly placed in the map, and overmapped like: 00:53:082 (2) - 00:53:714 (6) - 00:05:319 (2,3) - This is like only happening one time in the whole map, the jump is awkward and shouldn't be so big. Sorry for bad words, but welp. I hope you have the motivation to improve these, and make it fit more for ranking Good luck!

Feedback

Nice map and all, i like the anime too lol. Good luck o/

Thanks for modding

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-01-24T05:11:44+00:00

Hi!
I fixed some DS issues on my diff, please re-update and give me back my mutual

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osu file format v14

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novotrixes

49 posts

Joined July 2014

novotrixes 2016-02-13T21:34:51+00:00

hi i'm not good at mod but i'll try

Hard

00:50:319 (1) (2) - these black notes are barely visibles
00:50:793 (1) this after the black slider is just a little too fast for a hard map, and it with the black slider simply is unnecessary it can be like this

01:09:740 (2) - this is too close to 01:09:424 (1) and it is confusing
01:17:319 (1) - ^same thing, too close to 01:17:319 (2)

Good luck!

- Frontier -

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- Frontier - 2016-02-28T03:13:08+00:00

from Shocko's Queue (that you requested a long time ago :v)
lazy mod
[Easy]
00:24:898 (4,5,6) - DS
00:24:898 (4,5,6) - ^
[Normal]
idk i delete it :v
[Polka's Hard]
00:37:293 (3) - no sound here, overmap
00:48:109 (2) - not parallel
00:53:161 (1) - overlap

idk this mod is useful but im lazy
bye :v

georg2234

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Joined September 2016

georg2234 2018-06-05T10:23:24+00:00

Map is so cool ^-^. Thx you.

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