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Supercell feat. k*chan - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (dj-Jo

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Falling Snow
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, November 23, 2015 at 5:43:30 AM

Artist: Supercell feat. k*chan
Title: Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (dj-Jo Remix)
Tags: supercell remix collab -inyafaze-
BPM: 165
Filesize: 6288kb
Play Time: 05:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Shiranai (5.67 stars, 1316 notes)
Download: Supercell feat. k*chan - Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (dj-Jo Remix)
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A collaboration between me (Falling Snow) and -Inyafaze-

11/17/2015 Finally done mapping!

Parts:
00:00:000 - 01:06:981 - Me (Falling Snow)
01:06:981 - 02:20:981 - -Inyafaze-
02:20:981 - 04:11:708 - Me (Falling Snow)
04:11:708 - 05:45:527 - -Inyafaze-


I need to polish my parts .-. (Falling Snow)
Myko
Random modding time!

General :

remixes < original

[Shiranai]

00:07:391 (1,2,3) - put them on the actual white beat. please. Maybe with a 1/4 interval? but that's up to you
00:08:799 (3) - this one should be long as well to follow the idea? though I see why you put it short
00:20:073 (10) - sound please. just. lower
00:24:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - starts off too big of a jump. Progressive here could fit, but it just starts too big
00:28:800 (1,2) - too big of a jump.
00:28:982 (2,3,4,5) - sound please
00:56:800 (1,2,3) - You were doing progressive jumps because the song was getting higher and higher, but here it comes back to a rather low staple. I'd lower those jumps
00:57:527 (4,8,4,8) - sound please
00:58:255 (5,6,7) - too big of a jump. the music here is rather low and comfortable, don't put on stress
00:59:709 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:164 (5,6,7) - ^
01:07:346 (1) - doesn't fit anything in the music at all. Put it 1/2
01:07:890 (2) - By making it a slider you make the end of it apart, while it's a strong beat. Make it 2 circles?
01:10:618 (7,1) - I'd lower a bit, but that's fine as is
01:10:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why are these jumps bigger than the previous ones when the song stays on the same height?
01:12:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These feel a bit higher than the rest as well
01:15:164 (6,7,8) - These are too big for the progressive jumps you're making
01:17:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - the bigger spacing is....rather stupid and doesn't play well at all. If you want to make it appear that the song changes a bit, then use a 1/4 slider before and after it
01:19:799 (5,1) - change for circle- 1/2 slider - circle as a stream. Will feel better
01:20:799 (5,6) - why getting a bigger spacing here? nothing in the song gets intensively bigger at this precise moment
01:26:617 (8) - This one feels better as a 1/2 slider
01:29:890 (1) - This slider makes its end be completely hidden when it's an important part of the singing, since you're following it at this point
01:30:436 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Though it's a good pentagon, the song doesn't really imply it, so I'd get a more random-ish pattern
01:34:436 (9,10) - it's more of a 1/8 repeat slider that ends with a circle, which would make the spacing a bit rough
01:37:890 (1) - I feel like it's better to get it as a 1/2 slider and put a circle afterwards, but it's your choice on this
01:41:708 (2,3,4,5) - why aren't they the same as before when the music does the EXACT same? also make the new sliders start on the actual white tick.
01:43:527 (1,2,3,4) - put them 1/2 after their current placement, remove the circle after them and add one before them. Fits the singing better since I assume it's what you wanted to follow
01:46:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those are fine, but the problem is the singer is LITERALLY singing the same note, so half of them are kinda thrown away. But it's fine as is, just an idea
01:51:890 (1,2) - the song here implies a jump of some sort, you could use it
02:02:254 (3,4) - these should be the one being near each other
02:02:617 (1) - this slider makes the strongest beat being hidden
02:03:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increasing rather fast for the song
02:06:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:345 (1) - make it 1/4 less big, and add 2 1/1 sliders behind it (they both start on the white tick, with the previous slider ending at the blue tick)
02:17:527 (2,1,2) - the way you've put them doesn't feel right but I didn't find an alternative, so I guess they're fine as is?
02:20:254 (2,3,4) - Make the first slider repeat and put an additional circle in the gap made by the now-removed slider
02:23:345 (1,2) - this makes it look like lazy mapping, though it's fine on its own
02:30:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the bigger spacing is....rather stupid and doesn't play well at all. If you want to make it appear that the song changes a bit, then use a 1/4 slider before and after it
02:32:436 (11) - Put it a bit closer to the previous one and going onto the same way
02:33:708 (2,1) - the fact it's the same spacing as before is bad on its own, but the fact it changes from 1/2 to 1/1 makes it fine. Your choice on what you do with it
02:38:981 (3,4,5) - the change in spacing here goes against the flow
02:40:981 (6,7,8,1,2) - making the big jump at the end is mostly a bad idea, but it plays fine
02:43:708 (5) - I'd repeat it once
03:04:799 (8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The fact you reuse the same 3 positions over and over again makes it meh as a mapping standpoint
03:13:527 (1) - Start the back-and-forth jumps right away instead of making that little stop here before the stress
03:29:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stream here doesn't go at all with the slow mapping and the relaxing moment. Put a slider instead
03:33:890 - I'd decrease SV here
04:11:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - remake rhythms here. The patterns are good, but the rhythm don't fit the song
04:23:345 (6,7,9) - I know those are for fun but....if you want to make big sliders, make them resemble something please that'd be great
04:32:072 (11,12,13) - Those are better a tick shorter
04:36:617 (6) - Make it 2 circles
04:47:345 (5,1) - start the slider where the circle is
04:50:254 (5,1) - ^
05:01:527 (2) - jumps from here on are just too big, for most. I know it's the end, but still
Exceptions
05:12:981 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
05:26:617 (2,3,1,2) -
05:30:436 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
Topic Starter
Falling Snow

The Mykonian wrote:

Random modding time!

General :

remixes < original

[Shiranai]

00:07:391 (1,2,3) - put them on the actual white beat. please. Maybe with a 1/4 interval? but that's up to you
00:08:799 (3) - this one should be long as well to follow the idea? though I see why you put it short
00:20:073 (10) - sound please. just. lower
00:24:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - starts off too big of a jump. Progressive here could fit, but it just starts too big
00:28:800 (1,2) - too big of a jump.
00:28:982 (2,3,4,5) - sound please
00:56:800 (1,2,3) - You were doing progressive jumps because the song was getting higher and higher, but here it comes back to a rather low staple. I'd lower those jumps
00:57:527 (4,8,4,8) - sound please
00:58:255 (5,6,7) - too big of a jump. the music here is rather low and comfortable, don't put on stress
00:59:709 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:164 (5,6,7) - ^
01:07:346 (1) - doesn't fit anything in the music at all. Put it 1/2
01:07:890 (2) - By making it a slider you make the end of it apart, while it's a strong beat. Make it 2 circles?
01:10:618 (7,1) - I'd lower a bit, but that's fine as is
01:10:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why are these jumps bigger than the previous ones when the song stays on the same height?
01:12:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These feel a bit higher than the rest as well
01:15:164 (6,7,8) - These are too big for the progressive jumps you're making
01:17:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - the bigger spacing is....rather stupid and doesn't play well at all. If you want to make it appear that the song changes a bit, then use a 1/4 slider before and after it
01:19:799 (5,1) - change for circle- 1/2 slider - circle as a stream. Will feel better
01:20:799 (5,6) - why getting a bigger spacing here? nothing in the song gets intensively bigger at this precise moment
01:26:617 (8) - This one feels better as a 1/2 slider
01:29:890 (1) - This slider makes its end be completely hidden when it's an important part of the singing, since you're following it at this point
01:30:436 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Though it's a good pentagon, the song doesn't really imply it, so I'd get a more random-ish pattern
01:34:436 (9,10) - it's more of a 1/8 repeat slider that ends with a circle, which would make the spacing a bit rough
01:37:890 (1) - I feel like it's better to get it as a 1/2 slider and put a circle afterwards, but it's your choice on this
01:41:708 (2,3,4,5) - why aren't they the same as before when the music does the EXACT same? also make the new sliders start on the actual white tick.
01:43:527 (1,2,3,4) - put them 1/2 after their current placement, remove the circle after them and add one before them. Fits the singing better since I assume it's what you wanted to follow
01:46:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those are fine, but the problem is the singer is LITERALLY singing the same note, so half of them are kinda thrown away. But it's fine as is, just an idea
01:51:890 (1,2) - the song here implies a jump of some sort, you could use it
02:02:254 (3,4) - these should be the one being near each other
02:02:617 (1) - this slider makes the strongest beat being hidden
02:03:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increasing rather fast for the song
02:06:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:345 (1) - make it 1/4 less big, and add 2 1/1 sliders behind it (they both start on the white tick, with the previous slider ending at the blue tick)
02:17:527 (2,1,2) - the way you've put them doesn't feel right but I didn't find an alternative, so I guess they're fine as is?
02:20:254 (2,3,4) - Make the first slider repeat and put an additional circle in the gap made by the now-removed slider
02:23:345 (1,2) - this makes it look like lazy mapping, though it's fine on its own
02:30:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the bigger spacing is....rather stupid and doesn't play well at all. If you want to make it appear that the song changes a bit, then use a 1/4 slider before and after it
02:32:436 (11) - Put it a bit closer to the previous one and going onto the same way
02:33:708 (2,1) - the fact it's the same spacing as before is bad on its own, but the fact it changes from 1/2 to 1/1 makes it fine. Your choice on what you do with it
02:38:981 (3,4,5) - the change in spacing here goes against the flow
02:40:981 (6,7,8,1,2) - making the big jump at the end is mostly a bad idea, but it plays fine
02:43:708 (5) - I'd repeat it once
03:04:799 (8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The fact you reuse the same 3 positions over and over again makes it meh as a mapping standpoint
03:13:527 (1) - Start the back-and-forth jumps right away instead of making that little stop here before the stress
03:29:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stream here doesn't go at all with the slow mapping and the relaxing moment. Put a slider instead
03:33:890 - I'd decrease SV here
04:11:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - remake rhythms here. The patterns are good, but the rhythm don't fit the song
04:23:345 (6,7,9) - I know those are for fun but....if you want to make big sliders, make them resemble something please that'd be great
04:32:072 (11,12,13) - Those are better a tick shorter
04:36:617 (6) - Make it 2 circles
04:47:345 (5,1) - start the slider where the circle is
04:50:254 (5,1) - ^
05:01:527 (2) - jumps from here on are just too big, for most. I know it's the end, but still
Exceptions
05:12:981 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
05:26:617 (2,3,1,2) -
05:30:436 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
(For my parts) Fixed all except:


02:23:345 (1,2) - this makes it look like lazy mapping, though it's fine on its own
- The same sound in the music is used for the jumps before, so I repeated it
03:04:799 (8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The fact you reuse the same 3 positions over and over again makes it meh as a mapping standpoint
- Same as above. No audible (to me) change in intensity, so the same jumps are used just like the same sound is used in the song.

Thanks for the mod, I'll have -Inyafaze- respond to the changes on his parts when I can. Enjoy your Kudosu!
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