propasy wrote:

I modded this map set twice without realizing. Hope this is useful.

Normal

00:52:177 (7,8,1) – I don’t think the spacing of these circles work very well. I personally dislike where circle 8 is located but you have a very consistent mapping style in this beatmap and that location would continue that continuity so instead I think you should increase the spacing between circle 8 and 00:53:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Oh you are righr .. i changed their places .. and looks now good .. Thanks
01:04:365 (3,4,5,6,7) – I’m don’t think this section works but I see your trying to create variety in the patterns of the beatmap. I think you should find an alternative however. Ok here i made the slider 4 revers .. i think like that would be great ..
01:10:224 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – I think you should lower the volume of the end of all the sliders here to better accompany the vocal instead of having a metronome like beat. Naah i will leave like that .. i think it give more impact ..
01:39:990 (1,2,3) – I think slider 3 should be under slider 1 and the end of slider 3 be moved more to the right to better mimic slider 1 i will not change that .. cause i made this pattern like that .. so it would organized .. i will leave like that .. but thanks for the idea

Hard

00:23:115 (1) – This is a good opportunity to use a different sound such as drum to better accompany the music I will keep it like that .. i think its better to keep at the same effect ..
00:26:865 (1,2,3) – Same with this ^ Same ^
00:30:615 (1) – You could do the same for the entire section after here but that might make negatively affect the beatmap I will keep it like that ..
00:28:271 (3) – You could change the slider velocity to 0.75 to better accompany with the music Ok that good idea .. Thanks
00:32:958 (3,4) – I think the spacing between the two notes is a bit too far away based on listening to the vocal. But I can see you made a consistent map style throughout the beatmap so you could skip this. I changed these noted position
00:41:865 (1,2,3) – I don’t think this section works very well. I think having circle 2 and 3 be a single slider be a better alternative yeah you are right !
01:02:021 (4) – I think the beatmap would better follow the music if this slider had a faster velocity to signify the beginning of the chorus/kiai mode Well i leave it like that ..
01:39:990 (1) – You could change the sound of this slider to a drum perhaps? Alone with the other circles that follow with it that follow the drum noise Yup that good .. i change the other his sounds too

AsyouSaidsir wrote:

I was bored so I decided to mod this. I only modded Hard and Error, I'm also not really good so most of what I say may not be even valid. But hey, at least I tried :p

Hard

Couldn't find mistakes in this one so these are mostly me nitpicking.
* 00:17:490 (5) - This slider could blanket better. It is blanket
* 00:43:271 (4) - ^ ^
* 01:13:974 (1) - ^ Ok this oune i moved it a little bit to to left .. it fixed now ..

Error

* 00:01:083 (3) - Move this up a little (something like Y260). 00:01:552 (2,3) and 00:02:255 (2,3) are not on the same Y axis, so why should 00:00:849 (2,3) be? I think it'll looks better that way. I made it triangle
* 00:21:708 (1) - Move this in a way that makes a diamond shape with 00:21:943 (2,3,4) , the note feels off with its placement. Remapped this part ..
* 00:23:818 (2) - does not blanket that well with 00:23:115 (1) and 00:24:521 (3), it doesn't look very good. I recommend you change it. (Don't forget to move 00:25:224 (1,2,3,4,5) and stack it with the slider if you change its position/curve) Remapped this part ..

SPOILER

* 00:29:677 (3) - Move this so it makes a square with 00:29:208 (1,2,4), the way it is now looks messy. ok fixed
* 00:38:115 (1,2,1,2) - Blanket. Done
* 00:39:521 (1) - Remove NC. ^
* 00:43:271 (4) - You could blanket it better. ^
* 01:21:240 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

Nitpicks:
* 01:18:427 (1) - Move this to the left a little so it blankets with 01:17:958 (3). It is blanket
* 01:25:693 (1) - rotate this -20 degrees so it blankets with 01:26:161 (2) . (maybe?)Great idea ..

That's it, I hope this gets ranked! Good luck.

Thanks for the mod

Streliteela wrote:

Hihi~Mod from my queue ^owo^
Personally I think the Error diff needs quite a lot to be improved so I just mod some general issues and this diff.

[General]

1. Combo color: Only samplefish's Insane is different from other diffs. Is it on purpose or just forgot to unify? ops i fix it .. thanks for telling me ..
   
2. Unused hitsounds: {drum-hitwhistle2.wav} {normal-slidertick3.wav}. Please remove them. No .. in samplefish he is using it .. the only diff ..
   that's why
3. NC problems in Error diff is quite serious. I could hardly understand why you add nc or why not. Try to keep them in consistent please. You could take samplefish's Insane as reference and see where and how he added nc. ok i will see fix this

[Error]

1. 00:04:365 (3,1) - Swap nc? I see you add nc in 00:08:115 (1) - , so why not here as well? Fixed
2. 00:04:599 - Better add a note here, cuz the piano tune here is quite loud and shouldn't be ignored imo. ok added ..
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:17:490 (3,4) - hmm i think this pattern looks quite weird. Why not try something similar to 00:15:615 (1,2) - ? For example:
   
   SPOILER

   
   And this pattern can also increase some distance in 00:17:958 (4,1) - , which should have a same distance with 00:18:427 (1,2,3,4) - Alright
   ..
4. 00:19:365 (1) - add nc? perfect .. .
5. 00:26:161 (5,6,7,1) - Try to make the ds equal here. That could not only make the distance consistent, but also make this part looks more well-order. For example, I keep all the distance in 1.2x: . Here i made it star shape .. .
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:27:568 (2,3,4) - I prefer not use notes here cuz I couldn't hear any music sound in 00:27:802 (3) - , so I hesitate if it's a little bit overmapped. Better try what you've done in 00:23:818 (2) - and change these three notes to a 1/1 slider. thats right fix it .
7. 00:32:255 (4) - Please avoid using reverse slider here, cuz 00:32:490 - is a really strong downbeat which needs to be emphasized by a note or something clickable. So you can try to add a note in 00:32:255 - then a 1/2 slider in 00:32:490 - yeah i got it .. sounds good
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:38:818 (2,1) - Blanket better ok
9. 00:39:521 (1) - Remove nc ok
10. 00:42:568 (3,4) - I think you need to increase the distance here if you choose to stack 00:42:333 (2,3) - . cuz the distance in 00:41:865 (1,2) - is 2.37x, but here in 00:42:568 (3,4) - , same 1/2 rhythm interval with only 1.49x distance. Remapped this part ..
11. 00:44:208 (5,1) - Swap nc ok
12. 00:45:849 (1,1) - Remove both of the nc. That nc spam is not necessary, players could read this pattern easily without nc as well. Done
13. 00:47:490 (7,1) - Swap nc ^
14. 00:48:427 (1) - Remove nc ^
15. 00:48:896 (6,1) - This jump is too big. Move 00:49:365 (1) - to x256|y194 would be better imo. ok
16. 00:54:521 (1,2) - Swap nc ok
17. 00:55:927 (1) - Remove nc ^
18. 01:00:029 (4,5) - Highly recommend you to follow the vocal here cuz vocal is quite a special here. It's really a pity if you ignore it and use 2 notes to follow the drumbeats. Why not try a 1/1 slider + note? I think that is more suitable. good idea .. i was confused on this part
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:02:490 (1) - Rotate this slider by 15° anti-clockwise on site to make a better shape pattern. Alright ..
20. 01:03:896 (2,3,4,5) - Flow it quite weird in this part. Try to fix like this: fixed this part
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:06:240 (4,1) - Swap nc. ok
22. 01:11:279 (2) - I can't hear any rhythm here in the music. So please remove this note. Take 01:09:286 (2,3) - as reference. fixed this part too
23. 01:13:154 (4) - Same as above ^ ^
24. 01:13:740 (7) - nc ^
25. 01:16:786 (7) - oh man please avoid using such a reverse slider here, especially in the highest diff. Actually it's a good place to put a little stream to make the map more enjoyable and challenging to play. made it stream
26. 01:18:896 (2,3,4,5) - Flow is quite weird here. Try this? remapped this part
    
    SPOILER

    
27. 01:20:771 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow? ^
28. 01:39:638 (8) - Also I can't hear any rhythm here in music. Remove this note plz. ok

Please try to find more mods before ask BNs for checking, there still quite a lot of things could be improved in this diff.
Good luck~

Thanks alot for you mod

I was bored so I decided to mod this. I only modded Hard and Error, I'm also not really good so most of what I say may not be even valid. But hey, at least I tried :p

Hard

Couldn't find mistakes in this one so these are mostly me nitpicking.
* 00:17:490 (5) - This slider could blanket better.
* 00:43:271 (4) - ^
* 01:13:974 (1) - ^

Error

* 00:01:083 (3) - Move this up a little (something like Y260). 00:01:552 (2,3) and 00:02:255 (2,3) are not on the same Y axis, so why should 00:00:849 (2,3) be? I think it'll looks better that way.
* 00:21:708 (1) - Move this in a way that makes a diamond shape with 00:21:943 (2,3,4) , the note feels off with its placement.
* 00:23:818 (2) - does not blanket that well with 00:23:115 (1) and 00:24:521 (3), it doesn't look very good. I recommend you change it. (Don't forget to move 00:25:224 (1,2,3,4,5) and stack it with the slider if you change its position/curve)

SPOILER

* 00:29:677 (3) - Move this so it makes a square with 00:29:208 (1,2,4), the way it is now looks messy.
* 00:38:115 (1,2,1,2) - Blanket.
* 00:39:521 (1) - Remove NC.
* 00:43:271 (4) - You could blanket it better.
* 01:21:240 (1,2,3) - ^

Nitpicks:
* 01:18:427 (1) - Move this to the left a little so it blankets with 01:17:958 (3).
* 01:25:693 (1) - rotate this -20 degrees so it blankets with 01:26:161 (2) . (maybe?)

That's it, I hope this gets ranked! Good luck.

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:07:646 (6,1) - Why DS0.93?
   00:09:990 (4,5) - ^
2. 00:38:115 (1,2,3) - Bad flow
   00:39:990 (2,3) - Ctrl+H is better
   It affects the following placement
3. 00:45:615 (1,2,3) - ^
   
   i will propose

   
4. 00:57:333 (1) - spinner end is 01:00:380 -
5. 01:02:021 (1) - delete
   I think this is unnecessary
   It is better to start with kiai
6. 01:07:646 (2) - Why did you stack aim back?
   As easy as possible avoid stack and let flow better
   
   This is better

   
   You can avoid overlapping

Kaifin wrote:

Easy

1. 00:49:365 (1,3) - this stack might be a bit confusing to the Easy player flow wise due to the repeated motion and stacks being quite difficult for the easy player to understand, here's a possible solution for you Ok i changed the position to place .. well yours was a bit hard too .. but thanks for letting me know
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:11:396 (3,4) - watch your DS here oh thanks
3. 01:10:458 (2,5) - i cant tell if these are the same curve or not, but it really doesn't SEEM like they are so making them both a bit more curved might be a good solution to this I fixed the blanket here
   
   the reason i only point out the one stack when it happens multiple times is the other stacks are easy to understand due to the structure of the map just to note Thanks ^^

Normal

1. 00:10:927 (6,7,1) - uneven shape, 00:11:865 (1) - is distance snapped further than the others I don't get "uneven shape i will ask about it .. but about the DS i fix it thanks ..
2. 00:26:396 (5,1) - it is quite hard to see, but this blanket is off, try changing the shape of 00:26:865 (1) - to fix this Fixed blanket issue
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:32:021 (4,5) - another blanket, to fix these more precisely ctrl g 00:32:021 (4) - and use the approach circle to blanket 00:32:958 (5) - Hmm .. i don't think Ctrl g would be good idea .. but i fixed the blaket issue
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:35:302 (2) - distance snap error Fixed
5. 01:16:083 (2,3,4) - this flow might be a bit confusing to normal player due to the odd angle from 2 to 3 Fixed the angle
6. 01:17:490 (4) - NC + no NC on 01:19:833 (1) : i see that other people have given you NC suggestions before but you need to be careful listening to all mods, the most important part of NCing is just picking one pattern of NCs and sticking to it ok
7. 01:21:240 (3) - NC this to fit with the above and your NC structure is fixed just like that! You are right thanks
8. 01:28:036 (3,4) - avoid doing stacks like this in lower difficulties (Easy/Normal) because repeats and sliders and stacks are all confusing things for newer players, and combining the 3 in this type of pattern is just too much for them to handle at this level oh ok ..

Hard

1. 00:02:021 (3,4) - blanket Fixed
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:08:818 (2,3) - blanket ^
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:833 (1,1,1) - NCing all of these notes is quite unnecessary ok
4. 00:35:302 (3,2) - fix stack fixed
5. 01:03:193 (4,1) - blanket Fixed
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:05:068 (1) - unnecessary NC, try not to randomly use NCs like this ^
7. 01:21:943 (3,4) - blanket ^
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:22:177 (4) - also, NC here ^

Error

1. this difficulty also suffers from the same problem as Ky's Insane, where if everything is super spaced, basically nothing is emphasized, but to a lesser degree, examples include these expanding jumps in the opening 00:00:615 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Changed this pattern ..
2. 00:26:161 (5,6,7) - avoid using linear jump flow like this hmm stack it with the nest slider
3. 00:38:818 (2,3) - if you're going to do stuff like this, stack the slider ends ok fixed
4. 00:44:208 (5,1) - swap NC and no NC ok

okay so the reason why most of these diff mods were pretty light is i'm going to write something big here at the end

so basically, there isn't a lot that's objectively wrong in your mapset: new modders and mappers can spam blanket and stack fixes to you, something i'm guilty of too in my very mod but it's all stuff that isn't exactly improving your map

what i'm gonna say first is don't give up, just to preface the next point

you're not going to be able to rank this map in its current state, not because it breaks ranking criteria but because it's just not a high or even mid tier quality map, and no amount of mods is going to fix that without a completely and total remap on basically everyone's part

that being said, don't give up mapping or anything like that, it's pretty clear you put a lot of effort into your map from all the pages of posts on this thread, but right now you still need to learn a lot of the basics of mapping

i'd recommend checking out pishi's videos on mapping which do a fantastic job of explaining the basics, you have a decent grasp on things but need more specific instruction, which means instead of searching for beginner modders to mod your maps and getting 100 posts on your map thread, you should personally message experienced mappers in irc, have them look at your maps and tell you exactly whats wrong with them on a subjective level so you can use that feedback to improve yourself as a mapper

good luck! Well i will look for pishi's videos .. and thanks alot for your help .. i know its hard but i will try my best .. and really thank you for your opinion .. and hopefully i will find someone like IRC to help me .. again thank you for your mod ..

Yasaija 714 wrote:

From Queue

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:07:646 (6,1) - Why DS0.93? oh thanks ..
   00:09:990 (4,5) - ^ ^
2. 00:38:115 (1,2,3) - Bad flow No i like it thay way
   00:39:990 (2,3) - Ctrl+H is better i think its the solution for the above problem
   It affects the following placement
3. 00:45:615 (1,2,3) - ^ i rotate it for about -58 .. and it looks nice now .. Thanks
   
   i will propose

   
4. 00:57:333 (1) - spinner end is 01:00:380 - i made it here i think the best 01:00:146 -
5. 01:02:021 (1) - delete I hear strong beat here it should be clickable
   I think this is unnecessary
   It is better to start with kiai No i don;t think so
6. 01:07:646 (2) - Why did you stack aim back? I think its good .. not a problem
   As easy as possible avoid stack and let flow better i change it to another position
   
   This is better

   
   You can avoid overlapping Ok

I can not mod anymore
I pointed out where you could change. But I think you need a good modder Thanks for your mod ..

Ametrin wrote:

nm from my q
since there were already such many mods... maybe my mod will be nazi

error

00:03:427 (4) - NC and try to stack with 00:02:255 (2) - No NC .. bu changed their position ..
00:03:896 (5) - sv change here is not a good idea... if you really want to keep it, NC to show the sv change I will keep it like that ..
00:04:599 (2,6) - stack Done ..
00:07:177 (9) - NC No ..
00:12:333 (2,4) - put at 95|91 No
00:14:677 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g oh thanks ..
00:20:068 (2,3) - blanket Fixed
00:38:115 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:45:146 (2) - NC ok
00:48:896 (6) - ctrl+g and 402|352 oh good idea thanks ..
00:50:185 (3) - stack with 00:50:302 (4) - I like it that way
00:54:521 (5) - same as previous i will keep it
01:16:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make 6 stack with 01:16:083 (3) - , and put 7 295|172 i stacked 6 .. but kept 7 ..

little suggestion: ctrl+a and you will see the area your map occupied is just the very center, that somehow makes your map seems crowded. Try to map with a larger area. oh ok i will consider that .. and thanks for your mod ..

xDololow wrote:

Hi

[Genaral]
---

[Error]
Not accurate blankets. Some guide for this:
00:20:068 (2,3) - It is blanket ..
00:23:115 (1,2) - ^
00:38:115 (1,2) - ^

00:28:974 - Circle there? Can't hear anything
01:16:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this stream straight Ok
01:39:052 (5) - Move second point to x374 y154 No .. i will keep it

Thats All. Good Luck

Thanks for your Mod

Einja wrote:

M4M

[eRrOr]
The diff name sounds too generic, maybe something like "Curse" would be better, idk. No i think like that is good

make bigger jumps so i can get pp!!!1! I prefer Error .. for the title of the song

00:04:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You have a few combo inconsistencies here. NCs on 4 and 9 please I think like that is good

00:08:115 (1,2,3,4) - I think this should flow with 1/2 sliders and circles, since only 1 unique sound is played in the song and it doesn't really do anything. Well i like it that way .. and i made the next patter like what you said to give it more impact ..
00:26:865 (1,2) - These 2 sliders should not be overlapped. Use DS on them instead, like how you did it with 2 and 3. Nah i will keep it stacked

00:31:552 (2,3) - perfect blanket oppertunity Fixed
00:35:771 (5,7) - blanket Hm ?
00:38:818 (2,3) - ^ blanket slider 3's tail with slider 2 I will keep it like this

00:44:677 (1,1) - Why NC's? I think NC should start on 5 instead of 2 of them. Or you can keep the NCs and just start another one on 5.
I think NC on the other one .. cause 5 is still on the previous rhythm

01:03:427 (1) - Slider should be curved wherever the triple stacked on it is facing directions to. You can also blanket it with 01:04:130 (3) - while doing so. I blanket it with 3

01:16:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fix stream shape, nothing changes here and most of the streams in the map went one direction. ok

01:24:990 (1) - Why the weird slider shapes, they look cool, but the song doesn't change at all. well , i feel like it's good like that .. and i suit the song

good luck!

Thanks for your mod

elena2705 wrote:

Hi~
M4M

BG.... Maybe try to find picture with more good quality ...x1080
Players with good computers and monitors will notice quality of picture.
And i think picture should be more vivid. In the internet many pictures like this, but has more different colours. But you will decide
I will look for one more clear ..

Easy

01:21:240 (1) - For beginers it will be too hard, I mean this complicated slider. Try to do it easy. Although you have blanket for this slider.... Hm... Decide yourself, change it or no No i will keep it ..
Also with sounds, look at samplefish's Insane
Whistle... I would not use it. I think you should try to find special sounds, that will fits in this song)))
Good diff) I can't find smth more^^ Well i will think about it

Normal

00:16:083 (2,3) - delete circle, and move on 00:16:083 - slider, so that fits with 'da~' Oh , that's really good idea .. Thanks
00:19:365 (1,2,3) - like this good) Also 'da~': ^

00:55:224 (5,6,7) - looks ugly Well i like it that way
01:21:240 - do it more symmetrical Sorry .. but i like it that way ..
00:34:365 (1) - whistle here very bad No I will keep it ..
00:56:396 (1) - why NC? Removed it

Hard

00:19:833 (2,3,4) - do it symmetrical, or maybe with white dot, not red No like that it's better
00:53:583 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:00:146 (8) - i think here will be good one repeat slider, like previouse one, and delete circle Like that will follow the voice .. so i will keep it
01:13:271 (4) - change this to repeat slider well i will keep it now ..
01:18:193 (4) - if you add circle, it would be better It follow the Oh sound .. so i will keep it ..
01:19:013 - no sound for circle, delete it There is a sound here ..
01:38:115 (1) - NC Ok ..


Error

To be honest, this diff worse than others, and this diff named like this diff main, but it's bad.... What ..
Maybe add soft-slidertick, so that it has no sound.
00:03:427 (4,5) - this transition... ugly, maybe don't use stack changed it's position
00:07:646 (10) - increase this slider to blue stick and don't use stack Ok
00:26:865 (1) - do this slider with one white dot, not red I will keep it
01:16:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - do similar distance It is the same distance
01:24:990 (1) - slider with one white dot will be better No i will keep it
01:25:693 (1) - ^ ^
01:43:740 (1) - do this symmetrical i will keep it ..


So, it's all i want to say
Good Luck
Fighting!!!

Catshy wrote:

Hello from my mod queue

Error

1. 00:02:958 (2) - before this, the emphasis was only on the first note; what's different about this? Ok i think you are right .. i changed its position and stacked it with the first note of the map ..
2. 00:04:365 (1,2,3) - okay, you emphasize the strong sounds, but I highly doubt you need a spacing this big here Well i think it's ok ..
3. 00:05:068 (4,5) - blanket could be better here; it's kinda off now Fixed
4. 00:06:943 (3,5) - not properly stacked Fixed
5. 00:10:927 (5,6) - here you use spacing like this for 1/1 but here 00:14:677 (1,2,3,4) - is pretty much the same space between the circles even tho it's 1/2 rhythm Ok added circle on red line ..
6. 00:20:068 (2,3) - blanket properly Fixed
7. 00:22:646 (3,1) - I'd recommend to stack them since there's 1/1 space between each notes; this would make it more clear that there's slight break Ok i changed it !
8. 00:23:818 (2,3) - the blanket could be better; it's a bit off Fixed
9. 00:25:224 (1,6) - stack them Done
10. 00:40:224 (4,1) - the spacing here should be bigger to add an emphasis Changed it
11. 00:44:208 (5) - you change the rhythm here; nc instead of next note Ok
12. 01:00:380 (5) - move it up to make it clear it's still 1/4 I like it that way
13. 01:03:193 (3,4,1) - the flow here is really weird; I'd recommend rotating 01:03:427 (1) Nah i will keep it
14. 01:05:536 (3,4) - this is the only time where you use this kind of go-back flow; keep it consistent stacked it with the slider then
15. 01:16:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - while the DS says it's ~x0.49 spacing, it's clearly visible that spacing is different(due to SV changes in inherited timing points) oh thanks for letting me know that
16. 01:46:552 - that mp3 cut sounds really awkward tbf

Good luck c:

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! From queue

[- - General - -]

• - There are two unused hitsounds in the beatmap folder, "drum-hitwhistle2.wav" and "normal-slidertick3.wav". I'd suggest to delete them to reduce filesize, or reuse them in some parts of any song's sections. Guys this sounds are using it in Samplefish's diff ..

[- - Error - -]

1. 00:11:396 (7,8,1) - This may be quite unstructured by the differential intensity of the song track here. I wonder why 00:11:630 (8,1) - has a smaller distance spacing than 00:11:396 (7,8) - where actually (8) and (1) has more impact than the previous. So maybe swapping out the distance spacing for the emphasis would suffice this section, alike how you've done on 00:02:958 (2,3,4) - and/or 00:06:708 (2,3,4) - (Just using those parts in case you don't know, but maybe you could try another way around). Ok i didn't notice that .. but you are right .. i changed the slider 1 to another place to make it more impact
2. 00:13:974 (6) - To be honest, this one seems really out of context when it comes up to rhythm composition. I'd suggest mapping this out with some circles for the density of the piano rather than adding a single slider just to fill up the rhythm. For short; replacing this slider into three circles, or circle + 1/2 slider, would follow the song track more correctly. Ok i make it circle and 1/2 slider .. and change it's places ..
3. 00:20:771 (3) - I don't really feel right about the rhythm here, which is pretty unwise of it. The downbeat on 00:21:240 - sounds really strong for a click rather than being lifted from holding a slider. So, either redoing this rhythm onto something a little different than the current, or simply Ctrl + G the three notes 00:20:771 (3,4,5) - in rhythm timeline for a comprehended rhythm following up the vocals accurately and stressing the downbeat much better. Done , I ctrl +G and it sounds really good thanks !
4. 00:22:177 (1) - Would wanted to know why this circle is spaced out a lot more than the previous ones bypassed despite the unexpected slider velocity changes. Sounds too similar to the part on 00:18:427 (1,2,3) -. Ok made it jusr like the previous one .. and stacked 3 on the tail of the next slider ..
5. 00:22:880 - Not needed of a circle here, isn't? Because hearing this part over and over seems to be missing some potentials. Maybe adding at least a circle here would help so. I'd rather not put anything here ..
6. 00:38:115 (1,2,3) - Might be consistency-related, but I would really ask why the last two sliders' tails of these are stacked and along with the first one isn't. And putting off blankets aside, I would probably say... either (manual) stack their tails, or split them up for visibility and gameplay. In the alternative, you can freely overlap if fitting. Made it clear now .. and i changed the position of the circles after that ..
7. 00:45:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This whole track of the section is seriously forced by the looks of it. In spite of the song track starting to play the rides and hi-hats on the background music, it is way too much handling up the emphasis. And by telling that out, the distance spacing seems quite extended, and the next few parts are even lower than this whole section (e.g. 00:47:958 - or 00:50:302 -). I highly recommend redoing this part with a few 1/2 sliders or reduce the note density by equalizing the distance spacing like the rest of the next song tracks. Changed the DS ..
8. 01:02:021 (6) - Not the best rhythm composition to display the sound of the song, but it only fits the vocals at least. Maybe giving it a try improving this part a little bit, something like [http://puu.sh/vPKMF/a055b655e7.jpg this] might represent the upcoming chorus/kiai much greater. It's an Insane difficulty, is it not? No .. here i'm following the sound of the music .. and i made it slow beacuse of that ..
9. 01:08:818 (1,2) - The distance spacing here went suddenly too low while the track here is still continuously intensive. Like the rest of all notes in the whole chorus, extend the distance spacing here for it's kind of consistency. Changed the position ..
10. 01:22:177 (3) - Nearly the same thing for the strong downbeat before, but a slight change of it is the reverse arrow. As I can tell, the red tick on 01:22:880 - sounds promising for a circle. So you may need to redo this a little bit more over the rhythm by any means necessary. Still, that downbeat should probably be clicked alike before. Nah i will keep it like that ..

I would technically say about this map, it doesn't really need huge tons of mods just looking over the set. Recalling that it actually needs more polishing, and has quite a lot of room for improvements. I advise looking at your difficulties and recalibrate the aesthetics and playability of the map more frequently in your own time rather than just applying mods and never see it yourself. If you want it to be a great map, make it so. Well .. thanks for the advice .. and beside i'm trying to improve my skills by looking at the mods .. but yeah mapping need to self- learning ..

Would probably prefer mapping a full version of this song, but I guess it's too late for now ;p It's my first map .. so that's why i choose a short ver. .. but i'd love to map the full ver. it's really good song !
Best of luck!

Thanks for your mod !!

1. Before you waste any more time trying to push this map for ranked, stop. If after 11 pages worth of mods your map still looks like this, there's no way you'll be able to rank it at a satisfactory quality in any amount of time. You don't seem to completely lack all the basics, but there are great problems within your execution.
2. First and foremost, consistency in spacing is completely missing. Patterns like 00:00:615 (1,2,3) - and 00:04:365 (1,2,3) - make it pretty obvious that you have no idea how to relate intensity within to spacing and rhythm structure. A good guideline would be to make calmer bits of a song "easier" (as in, less spaced and less dense rhythm-wise) and emphasize important sounds through higher spacing.
3. Secondly, your object placement is all over the place. 00:00:615 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - a pattern like this is fundamentally flawed as far as 00:02:724 (1,2,3) - is concerned. If you're trying to give the idea of an identical sound, there is no point in making variations within your pattern. And even if you wanted to, you'd have to make that kind of variation for every group of 3, for consistency. It doesn't matter if your ideas for patterns are outstanding if you can't be consistent with instances of a same sound.
4. Hitsounding was ok
5. 00:54:052 (4,5) - Stuff like this is once again indicator that you don't understand the relation between intensity within the song and within the map. Manipulation of SV should only be used to indicate different intensity within the song (with the exception of weird Camellia-like maps using SV to express the intensity of single sounds).