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Prismetical

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-29T14:25:14+00:00

REMAP DONE!

Going to change this in a 2/3 diff set.
Please do not mod until I edit this post for the remap being successful.

If you want the old version of this mapset: http://puu.sh/mcvuj/9cec44c54b.osz
Thankyou for all modders till now!

Let the modding begin!

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-01-11T15:13:27+00:00

Hi Hi

Normal

00:15:281 (1,2,3) - This is a bit ugly and intense, with DT seems mini jump, the county change slightly this
00:19:163 (8,2,4) - Stacks well can confuse beginners
00:45:281 (4) - You could go down so it almost touches the HP bar and put NC
00:51:987 (8) - NC here because of the spinner that follows
01:00:457 (4,5) - This is a bit ungly o.O
01:06:810 (1,3) - Snap NC

Hard

00:05:046 (7,3) - These two are very down, please raise them
00:06:987 (4) - NC

Gl~ :3

Tedda

193 posts

Joined August 2015

Tedda 2016-01-13T06:39:01+00:00

From my modding queue~

You didn't say what difficulty you want me to mod, so I only modded Normal and HOS' Hard.

I don't think I'll be much of help since it already has a fairly high SP and I'm a beginner at modding.

Normal:
00:51:634 (7) - Since you mapped this in "2010 style", why not put this at x:252 y:84.
01:01:163 (5) - Looks more pleasing if you copy the slider before it and flip it around a few times until you like the way it is.
01:06:810 (1) - Get rid of the NC here and instead add it here 01:07:869 (3).

Hard:
00:04:869 (6,7) - It looks like they're gonna go offscreen.

Also, why not add some hitsounds? If used correctly they can make the map better.

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-15T20:43:31+00:00

Marianna wrote:
Hi Hi

Normal

00:15:281 (1,2,3) - This is a bit ugly and intense, with DT seems mini jump, the county change slightly this I actually like it a lot
00:19:163 (8,2,4) - Stacks well can confuse beginners this is not for beginners :3, and these stacks are mainly to avoid any design issues
00:45:281 (4) - You could go down so it almost touches the HP bar and put NC correct, rotated and applies
00:51:987 (8) - NC here because of the spinner that follows
01:00:457 (4,5) - This is a bit ungly o.O I don't find it ungly, I find it funny and cool :3
01:06:810 (1,3) - Snap NC nah.

Tedda wrote:
Normal:
00:51:634 (7) - Since you mapped this in "2010 style", why not put this at x:252 y:84. (8) would look stupid then
01:01:163 (5) - Looks more pleasing if you copy the slider before it and flip it around a few times until you like the way it is. I like it, as stated in the mod above
01:06:810 (1) - Get rid of the NC here and instead add it here 01:07:869 (3).I find it fitting where it is

Thankyou! c:

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2016-01-17T19:04:57+00:00

======================
• = Unrankable issue
• = Highly recommended suggestion
• = Suggestion
======================

General

• The BG needs a size of 1366x768.
• Make sure that you untick Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks. Also you may want to have the same tags in every diff.
• The CS of every diff is very high for their difficulties.

Aldwaych's Easy

• 00:01:340 (1,1) - Honestly I'm not sure if such an overlap is allowed in an Easy. The problem is that both sliderheads are at the same point unlike 00:02:399 (2,2) . So it might be a problem.
• 00:09:104 (1) - CTRL + H and some rotation to improve the transition to the next slider? Same goes for the slider after that one, in case you change it.
• 00:20:928 (2,3) - This pattern would make more sense if there was a sound that sounds quite the same as 00:15:281 (2,3) but it isn't the case here.
• 00:26:575 (2,3) - Also a quite weird transition if you ask me. It'd be way better if the slider would be more to the right.
• 00:37:869 (2,3) - Not really a fan of this one.
• 00:43:516 (2,3) - The new word and also lower pitch starts at the white tick between these sliders.
• 01:13:516 (1,3) - Looks very weird and could confuse a new player.
• 01:14:575 (2,1) - ^

Normal

• 00:00:634 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest to stack circle + slider because there's not really a good flow in it due low density so this plays quite weird. The same goes for all parts that are mapped like this.
• 00:15:281 (1,2) - Ofc they are not touching, but it looks really strange.
• 00:19:163 (8,2) - Stack definitely visible and confusing for newer players. Same goes for 00:20:575 (2,4) and all similar stacks.
• 00:23:399 (2,3) - Flow / transition is very meh.
• 00:32:222 (3,4,5) - For what reason do you destroy the flow out of a sudden?
• 00:41:399 (1) - I don't here anything this circle could be mapped to.
• 00:43:516 (1,2) - Improve slider shapes, they look like 2010 ones.
• 00:50:928 (6,7,8) - Did we timetravel back to 2010? Jk, you should definitely change it as it's weird as hell.
• 01:02:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Imo they feel a bit awkward as there's nothing dominant it could be mapped to.
• 01:09:281 (5,6) - Fix blanket.
• 01:11:752 (3,4,5) - It's just really weird.

Overall this diff needs some polishing. D:

HOS' Hard

HEY HOS, HERE WE MEET AGAIN.

• I feel like you could use NC more often at the beginning.
• 00:15:457 (4,5,6,7) - (4) shows directly to the stacked 1/2 circles, which makes it look awkward.
• 00:28:340 (1,4) - Is it stacked? Can't really tell because sometimes my editor shows it and sometimes it doesn't.

Someday I'll request a GD from you! (^:

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2016-01-17T19:50:10+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
General
• The BG needs a size of 1366x768.

Not needs, it is recommended, what we needs is the ratio. However the ratio isn't good so it has to be fixed.

• Make sure that you untick Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks. Also you may want to have the same tags in every diff.

Prismetical, add Aldwych and HOS on each diff of the set please. :>

• The CS of every diff is very high for their difficulties.

Very high is a big word. But yes i recommend a -0.5 CS on our diff. (That's what i'll do on my at least)

Aldwaych's Easy

• 00:01:340 (1,1) - Honestly I'm not sure if such an overlap is allowed in an Easy. The problem is that both sliderheads are at the same point unlike 00:02:399 (2,2) . So it might be a problem. That should be fine, both slider are completely visible from the beginning.
• 00:09:104 (1) - CTRL + H and some rotation to improve the transition to the next slider? Same goes for the slider after that one, in case you change it. Symetrical pattern which will be destroy.

• 00:20:928 (2,3) - This pattern would make more sense if there was a sound that sounds quite the same as 00:15:281 (2,3) but it isn't the case here. In what this pattern doesn't make sense? In terms for slider shape? In terms of rythm? Maybe Develop what you think because i don't really understand what's the matter. In the end of the first slider we got a sound change and battery on the begining of the second. Here, the rythm is constructed on the 1/2, this is a legit 3/2 double sliders.

• 00:26:575 (2,3) - Also a quite weird transition if you ask me. It'd be way better if the slider would be more to the right. And after? I'm blocked and get a weird transition too with a circle a slider. It's easier to have this flow with 2 sliders rather than 1 circle between 2 sliders.

• 00:37:869 (2,3) - Not really a fan of this one. Sorry for you bro D:, give me an example of what you would want to have and we can discuss, because here i don't know what you really want me to do, last sentence you point the same rythm pattern that you want the sliders to go on the same direction and when i do this, you're not fan. Well ok.

• 00:43:516 (2,3) - The new word and also lower pitch starts at the white tick between these sliders. I don't care about the vocals here, i'm following the melody. And the structure i made along the whole part before the kiai.
• 01:13:516 (1,3) - Looks very weird and could confuse a new player. Fixed all here because of an ugly overlapp i didn't notice. Yep
• 01:14:575 (2,1) - ^

Thanks for the mod. :>

http://puu.sh/mzm2R/9d779d14c5.osu

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-19T18:20:05+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
General
• The BG needs a size of 1366x768. NEEDS?
• Make sure that you untick Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks. Also you may want to have the same tags in every diff. k.
• The CS of every diff is very high for their difficulties. I like mine, it looks clumsy when the CS is too low

Normal
• 00:00:634 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest to stack circle + slider because there's not really a good flow in it due low density so this plays quite weird. The same goes for all parts that are mapped like this. I prefer it how it is, because you use the playfield more in my version ^^
• 00:15:281 (1,2) - Ofc they are not touching, but it looks really strange. does it? looks cool to me
• 00:19:163 (8,2) - Stack definitely visible and confusing for newer players. Same goes for 00:20:575 (2,4) and all similar stacks. mirrored (2) in that case, also this is Normal, Easy diffs are for newer players and the star rating speaks for itself
• 00:23:399 (2,3) - Flow / transition is very meh. gonna think about that
• 00:32:222 (3,4,5) - For what reason do you destroy the flow out of a sudden? I try to kind of follow the "what--- do", so I made it like that
• 00:41:399 (1) - I don't here anything this circle could be mapped to. I hear a little break of the drums here
• 00:43:516 (1,2) - Improve slider shapes, they look like 2010 ones. no, why should all slider look the same? that's boring
• 00:50:928 (6,7,8) - Did we timetravel back to 2010? Jk, you should definitely change it as it's weird as hell. why? because there is a straight slider? OMG! xD
• 01:02:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Imo they feel a bit awkward as there's nothing dominant it could be mapped to. what else should I do? I can't do the 2010 mapping style the whole way through
• 01:09:281 (5,6) - Fix blanket. improved.
• 01:11:752 (3,4,5) - It's just really weird. nope

Overall this diff needs some polishing. D: give it some time, ^.^ ♥ thankyou

wajinshu

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Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-01-22T15:14:55+00:00

Uncheck letterbox and widescreen support
Normal
00:29:752 (6) - NC
00:15:987 (2) - 192 172
00:52:340 - 00:53:399 - why is it empty
01:21:634 (5) - 443 307

The other diffs looks good
GL!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-23T13:46:58+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
Uncheck letterbox and widescreen support ok
Normal
00:29:752 (6) - NC nah.
00:15:987 (2) - 192 172 fixed
00:52:340 - 00:53:399 - why is it empty I mainly map parts when she sings, also, there are no elements to map, wanna give a soft entry to the kiai
01:21:634 (5) - 443 307 done :3

The other diffs looks good yeeeei
GL!thankyouuu

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-01-23T21:08:16+00:00

asdsdfvsdf

[aiMod stuff]
tag are not same tbh
fix that pls

[Easy]
look p nice
asdjopkk fix kiai pls

[Normal]
00:15:281 (1,1,1) - that pattern looks p boring why dont make the typical

like i call it : tornado pattern

01:00:457 (4) - copy this slider and replace the incomming slider with it
01:14:575 (3) - why is a note there? no sound to map on
your map looks like from 2005 lmao

[Hard]
asjdasdoj good enough

also why is none doing full size songs,lazy mappers everywhere zzzzzz

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,568 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2016-01-23T22:50:26+00:00

Hi~ as requested.

- General :

Tags are different on Aldwych's Easy.

- Aldwych's Easy :

01:07:163 (3,1) - Not fan of the flow dude. I don't really have a solution without destroying everything but...ye rip flow.

- Normal :

AR5 works much better here, due to BPM, and for diffspread (2/6/7.5 is broken you know ?).
00:11:222 (5,6) - What about doing a symetry here with 00:10:516 (3,4) - ? Atm this pattern looks random and not really constructed.
00:15:281 (1,2,3) - You could have done a beautiful pattern here. 00:15:281 (1,2) - alone is ok, but with 00:16:693 (3) - it kinda break what you intended imo. You could do a pattern constructed around a 120° rotation like this -> http://puu.sh/mH2kv/52923348f8.jpg but up to you ofc.
00:24:104 (3,4) - Don't want to blanket here ?
00:29:752 (6,1) - ^
00:36:810 (5,6) - ^
00:42:457 (4,1) - The flow works poorly here. The angle between these slider is totally broken, doing like this could fix the issue http://puu.sh/mH2CL/202c63f446.jpg .
00:48:104 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket are off.
01:00:457 (4,5) - Could you make them with same shape ? Looks awful :c
01:23:046 (1) - Why NC ?

- HOS' Hard :

00:20:575 (3,4) - Blanket a little off.
00:28:340 (1,4) - Stack it correctly pls.
Exellent diff.

Guess that's all.
Mukyu~

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2016-01-23T23:10:28+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
[Easy]
look p nice
asdjopkk fix kiai pls Nope I'm allowed to do something different

also why is none doing full size songs,lazy mappers everywhere zzzzzz

@Nozhomi

Yeye gonna fix the tags, though Prismecital would fix that but ok. Edit : NVM updated a bit but mine are good now. Prismetical fix yours

Tried to fix a bit the flow, it should be a bit better now. Fixed also an overlapp i've kept by mistake.

http://puu.sh/mH5jS/996dd56cfc.osu

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-01-24T00:37:33+00:00

M4M from pm in-game. Thanks for the mod btw.

This bass is making my ear ring.

Hard

00:11:399 (1) - I think you can bend this a little. Just a small visual thing.
00:13:163 (5) - Same as above (this)
00:38:928 (6) - Maybe you were emphasizing that weird tom sound. But I think you should remove that red slidertick.
00:56:575 (1) - Bend a bit (this)
Chorus just feels like I'm playing the verse all over again (nothing important)
01:24:810 (1) - Please delete or make 01:24:104 (6) a 1/4 slider

Looks good though

Normal

Check AImod (ctrl+shift+a)
Change volumes to this
Difficulty has no hitsounds. Make sure to get that fixed as it is unrankable.
00:47:752 - Felt kinda weird not having a note here. I understand the other parts, but I'd prefer if you'd put a note here.
00:52:340 - Dont leave this part empty. Map until start of spinner.
00:56:575 - I think you need at least 3 beats (white ticks) between the end of the spinner and the start of the next combo. (not sure as I dont mod easier difficulties much)

Nice.

Easy

Creator should get the tags fixed up for ya.
00:05:575 (1) - Prefer if you'd start this on white tick to keep consistency. It's kinda confusing too.
00:32:222 (2,3) - Weird rhythm. It's hard for me to follow. I cant think of a way to fix it though.
00:43:516 (2,3) - ^
00:53:752 (1) - The spinner ends kinda weird, but I understand since you need 3 beats in between.

Looks good though.

Hope I could mention something useful. Good luck!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-24T09:23:19+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
asdsdfvsdf

[aiMod stuff]
tag are not same tbh sorry ._.
fix that pls

[Normal]
00:15:281 (1,1,1) - that pattern looks p boring why dont make the typical but I think what I did is different and that is why I like it :3
01:00:457 (4) - copy this slider and replace the incomming slider with it they are the same
01:14:575 (3) - why is a note there? no sound to map on I'm trying to fill the space there, it's easy to understand
your map looks like from 2005 lmao shut up ♥

also why is none doing full size songs,lazy mappers everywhere zzzzzzyou made a looped 40sec map you derp ♥♥♥

Nozhomi wrote:
Hi~ as requested. ty

- General :
Tags are different on Aldwych's Easy. answered above

- Normal :
AR5 works much better here, due to BPM, and for diffspread changed (2/6/7.5 is broken you know ?).what? ._.
00:11:222 (5,6) - What about doing a symetry here with 00:10:516 (3,4) - ? Atm this pattern looks random and not really constructed. I see no problem here :/
00:15:281 (1,2,3) - You could have done a beautiful pattern here. 00:15:281 (1,2) - alone is ok, but with 00:16:693 (3) - it kinda break what you intended imo. You could do a pattern constructed around a 120° rotation like this -> http://puu.sh/mH2kv/52923348f8.jpg but up to you ofc. why is everyone hating on that? I love it c:
00:24:104 (3,4) - Don't want to blanket here ? seems perfect to me
00:29:752 (6,1) - ^ how?
00:36:810 (5,6) - ^ moved a bit
00:42:457 (4,1) - The flow works poorly here. The angle between these slider is totally broken, doing like this could fix the issue http://puu.sh/mH2CL/202c63f446.jpg . good point, I made a blanket with 00:42:104 (3) -
00:48:104 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket are off. I don't think so
01:00:457 (4,5) - Could you make them with same shape ? Looks awful :c they are the exact same
01:23:046 (1) - Why NC ? removed and made NC here 01:23:399 (1) - instead

DavidEd wrote:
M4M from pm in-game. Thanks for the mod btw. always here to help o7

This bass is making my ear ring. good >:)

Check AImod (ctrl+shift+a) yup
Change volumes to this 39% hahahaha xD
Difficulty has no hitsounds. Make sure to get that fixed as it is unrankable. I know but it is still WIP, gonna work on that soon
00:47:752 - Felt kinda weird not having a note here. I understand the other parts, but I'd prefer if you'd put a note here. I know what you mean, but that would totally break the pattern and I couldn't avoid overlays there, it would look so ugly... :/
00:52:340 - Dont leave this part empty. Map until start of spinner. I try to map mainly parts where she sings, because she stops singing there I wanted to make a lil break there, also for the player to breathe a bit
00:56:575 - I think you need at least 3 beats (white ticks) between the end of the spinner and the start of the next combo. (not sure as I dont mod easier difficulties much) yeah, but this one beat is SO strong, I had to map it xD

Hope I could mention something useful. Good luck! of course! thanks! good luck with your map!

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-01-24T09:29:58+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Mazziv wrote:
asdsdfvsdf

[aiMod stuff]
tag are not same tbh sorry ._.
fix that pls

[Normal]
00:15:281 (1,1,1) - that pattern looks p boring why dont make the typical but I think what I did is different and that is why I like it :3

01:00:457 (4) - copy this slider and replace the incomming slider with it they are the same they didnt look like the same,thats why i pointed it out but if they are,its fine

01:14:575 (3) - why is a note there? no sound to map on I'm trying to fill the space there, it's easy to understand
#overmapped hue

your map looks like from 2005 lmao shut up ♥ linear patterns are out
also why is none doing full size songs,lazy mappers everywhere zzzzzzyou made a looped 40sec map you derp ♥♥♥
the original song is only 15 seconds long so i did more than full size hue

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-01-24T12:03:41+00:00

$$

[Aldwych's Easy]

01:00:457 (2,3,4,1,2) - why DS boosted to x1.2 at only this part? Make it x1.0 too m8
01:16:340 (1,2,3) - maybe can polish the circular pattern itself, or try other patterns that can avoid overlap of tails of 01:18:457 (3) - to 01:16:340 (1) -

[Normal]

00:11:222 (5,1,2,3) - it's kinda confusing lol, maybe convert to slider at least this 00:11:399 (1,2) -
00:13:516 (6) - you can copypasta the shape of 00:12:457 (4) - for more clean looking yo
00:19:163 (8,2) - nazi stack
00:52:340 - up to 00:53:399 - why spaced out? there's still same beat strength with previous part lol. map this plzxzxz

[HOS' Hard]

01:14:222 (3,4) - it's better if you did copypasta
01:24:104 (6) - fits better

good mapset, goodluck!

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2016-01-24T12:30:29+00:00

Creator should get the tags fixed up for ya.
00:05:575 (1) - Prefer if you'd start this on white tick to keep consistency. It's kinda confusing too. I don't really understand why it's confusing. And au contraire, using on a white tick would be confusing since it's not on the same break distance imo.
00:32:222 (2,3) - Weird rhythm. It's hard for me to follow. I cant think of a way to fix it though.
00:43:516 (2,3) - ^ For both of 2 it's follows the same rythm as before, just there's lyrics with. I've a way to fix it. But i would like to keep this rythm structure. Keep noticing tho.
00:53:752 (1) - The spinner ends kinda weird, but I understand since you need 3 beats in between. Yes no real choice
Looks good though. thanks :>

[Aldwych's Easy]
01:00:457 (2,3,4,1,2) - why DS boosted to x1.2 at only this part? Make it x1.0 too m8 Wooooot? aaaaaaaaaaaaa
01:16:340 (1,2,3) - maybe can polish the circular pattern itself, or try other patterns that can avoid overlap of tails of 01:18:457 (3) - to 01:16:340 (1) -
Fixed to avoid the overlapp

Thanks for the mod

http://puu.sh/mHJti/a3bb72ff30.osu

Kagetsu

796 posts

Joined March 2015

Kagetsu 2016-01-25T20:52:53+00:00

hi... m4m (my mapset

[General]

you should use hitsounds.. otherwise this would be unrankable... adding claps shouldn't be that hard

[Aldwych's Easy]

00:05:575 (1) - this slider starts kinda in a weird place... considering this part for example 00:11:399 (1) - i think you should start those sliders in the same place (musically speaking)
00:16:693 (4,2) - it's better to avoid all kind of overlaps/stacking in a easy diff
00:47:752 (4,1) - ^
00:50:575 (4,2) - ^
00:32:222 (2,3) - weird rhythm here... compare what you did here 00:37:869 (2,3) - ... it felt much better tbh
00:43:516 (2,3) - ^
00:53:752 (1) - this spinner is innecessary imo, there is no change at all in music... also it might be very confusing for a new player, because spinners are usually the hardest part for a beginner lol
01:02:222 (1,2) - - spacing here is not correct

[Normal]

cs 4 in a normal diff is kinda questionable... specially when you make a sudden transition from cs 3 to 4... but it's up to you
slider velocity's transition is also high in some way (0,9 to 1,2 and then 1,4)
the "problem" about this diff, is mainly about the rhythm... it is not that good because isn't consistent... you should try to map to the beat instead of focusing on voice to make it more logical
00:38:575 (2,3) - flow between this 2 is not that good
00:39:634 (4,5,6) - angle between this 3 might be too straight... it doesn't play good. maybe try to move 00:40:693 (6) - to "fix" it?

Good luck!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-25T21:54:44+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
hi... m4m (my mapset

[General]
you should use hitsounds.. otherwise this would be unrankable... adding claps shouldn't be that hard still not sure how to hitsound that, because it's a bit tricky on that song, but I'll figure out
[Normal]
cs 4 in a normal diff is kinda questionable... specially when you make a sudden transition from cs 3 to 4... but it's up to you I find it very fitting
slider velocity's transition is also high in some way (0,9 to 1,2 and then 1,4) where is the problem? ._.
the "problem" about this diff, is mainly about the rhythm... it is not that good because isn't consistent... you should try to map to the beat instead of focusing on voice to make it more logical I find it pretty cool the way I made it
00:38:575 (2,3) - flow between this 2 is not that good kind of right, but I want to keep this pattern really bad, gotta figure a way out to make it better playable
00:39:634 (4,5,6) - angle between this 3 might be too straight... it doesn't play good. maybe try to move 00:40:693 (6) - to "fix" it? and... what is the problem?
Good luck! thankyou!

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-01-26T13:38:20+00:00

yo

Red - unrankable issue.
Bold - highly recommend to change.
Normal - suggestion/nazi.

[Easy]
00:26:575 (2,1) - overlap.
01:00:457 (2,3,4,1,2) - spacing, you used 1х but changed it to 1.2x, fix that.
01:19:163 (1,2,1,2,3) - since here you ignored white ticks, but earlier you didn't.

[Normal]
00:13:516 (6) - don't end sliders with big white tick. *click* - second part.
00:20:575 (2) - but this is fine.
From that seems good.

[Hard]
00:11:222 (8,1) - use 1.5x, because of others patterns like this one.
Clear diff.

Best of luck~

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-26T14:55:52+00:00

Namki wrote:
yo oy

[Normal]
00:13:516 (6) - don't end sliders with big white tick. *click* - second part. very right and a really valid reason, but I don't find any way to avoid either overlaps or ugly patterns... ._.
00:20:575 (2) - but this is fine. yeah, mainly the strongest beat even isn't on the downbeat somehow...
From that seems good.

Best of luck~ thankyou! good luck with yours too! ♥

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2016-01-27T20:49:10+00:00

Kagetsu wrote:
hi... m4m (my mapset

[General]
you should use hitsounds.. otherwise this would be unrankable... adding claps shouldn't be that hard
Already hitsounded. It doesn't really needs more.

[Aldwych's Easy]
00:05:575 (1) - this slider starts kinda in a weird place... considering this part for example 00:11:399 (1) - i think you should start those sliders in the same place (musically speaking) Wat? Both sliders you compare are completly different. So why would i try to strat that the same moment?
00:16:693 (4,2) - it's better to avoid all kind of overlaps/stacking in a easy diff I don't really find it shockant it's not a suprise slider.
00:47:752 (4,1) - ^
00:50:575 (4,2) - ^
00:32:222 (2,3) - weird rhythm here... compare what you did here 00:37:869 (2,3) - ... it felt much better tbh You compare with vocals, but not with the beats. And i'm using the beats here, in terms of rythm structure, my pattern is logic.
00:43:516 (2,3) - ^
00:53:752 (1) - this spinner is innecessary imo, there is no change at all in music... also it might be very confusing for a new player, because spinners are usually the hardest part for a beginner lol No changes? Ther's no more vocal, a strong beat in the start and a loud sound. And spinners are fine for begginiers too lol. We won't wait normal diff to put some spiners spinner
01:02:222 (1,2) - - spacing here is not correct
Thanks to prismetical who didn't update the diff :V Already mentioned on previous mods and already patched.
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod, i may be nazi but i thought a lot while doing the diff if i made right choice or not, ofc it's not a perfect one, but i decided to follow a rythmic structure here.

[Easy]
00:26:575 (2,1) - overlap. Dunno if it is because of the non latest version or non but there's no overlapp at all if it is with next combo's (1), it's the same, theere's plenty of time before the sliders appears. :V
01:00:457 (2,3,4,1,2) - spacing, you used 1х but changed it to 1.2x, fix that.
Prismetical didn't update the diff giorgjirogjeriogjoergjeiorjgioergioejgero ¦:^(
01:19:163 (1,2,1,2,3) - since here you ignored white ticks, but earlier you didn't.
It's the ending so i can change the rythm and make something cleaner. And it's an easy so i can avoid some beat imo

Thanks for the mod but no changes.
Prismetical fzeprofjeiofjzjfzeiofjzfioz Take this link http://puu.sh/mHJti/a3bb72ff30.osu D:

Smokeman

463 posts

Joined November 2012

Smokeman 2016-01-28T20:51:05+00:00

M4M

skin is messed up pls fix http://puu.sh/mNfDz/df3da3ccf9.jpg

[easy]

lower difs are all about looking good and flowing well while keeping it simple

00:05:575 (1) - remove the red point in the slider and just make a normal curved one
00:10:163 (2,1) - changes form a 3/2 rythm to 2/1 rythm. You might wanna make the transition smoother
(I would recomend you just dont map this part 00:00:105 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - , you can since it a GD)
00:12:457 (2) - move this to 380|292 for a smoother curve motion
00:12:810 (3,4,1) - put 00:14:222 (1) - in a better position so the curvy motion doesnt break. Right now 00:14:222 (1) - is a bit off
00:15:281 (2) - mvoe this to 444|120 (if you dont change the above ofc, if you do change then you should try to get a smoother transition between 00:14:222 (1,2) - aswell)
00:26:575 (2,1) - slight stack is visible while playing
01:12:457 (3) - move this a bit mroe away from 01:11:751 (2) -
01:22:693 (3) - move this away from 01:20:928 (1) -
01:19:163 (1,2,1,2,3) - thise whole section has a wierd rythm. 01:20:928 (1) - its wierd that this starts on the vocals while there are all those drums...
01:23:399 (1) - whats up with this pointless 1 meassure long spinner? Newplayers are too slow to hit this in time...

[Normal]

00:10:693 (4,5) - put a 1/1 slider here so the transition happens smoother (no point in breaking consistency here)
00:12:457 (4) - end on nothing. Check your rythm, dont just map smth that clearly doesnt fit
00:14:928 (8,1,2,3) - move all those slider a bit apart so they dont touch eachother and dont stack 8 on a slider please
00:19:163 (8,2,4) - dont do those stacks, it looks very wierd.
00:32:222 (3,4,5) - these rectangular paterns look rly wierd. Just put in some angle so they flow better
00:43:516 (1,2) - wow
00:52:340 - why leave such a huge space open for a spinner which hardly fits, map it and remoe the spinner!
01:06:810 (1,2,3) - this doesnt play good at all
(01:19:163 - map should end here since the mp3 is cut so poorly, the next part of the song fades away and doesnt rly fit to be played)can you get a better mp3 or cut it better?

IN general you completely missed the rythm on a lot of parts It plays rly bad imho.
00:12:457 (4,5) -
00:15:987 (2) - wierd to start smth on those barely audible vocals
00:18:104 (6,7) -
00:21:634 (3) -
00:24:104 (3) -
00:29:752 (6) - wierd just like 00:15:987 (2) -

[Hard]

00:09:634 (4) - move this further up so it doesnt stack that much
00:20:928 - it would be better to have smth clickable here. 00:20:575 (3) - make this a 1/2 slider and add a note here 00:20:928 -
01:20:399 (4,5) - its wierd that these end on the drums

Hard looks solid

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-28T21:02:13+00:00

Smokeman wrote:
M4M yup

[Normal]

00:10:693 (4,5) - put a 1/1 slider here so the transition happens smoother (no point in breaking consistency here) prefer mine
00:12:457 (4) - end on nothing. Check your rythm, dont just map smth that clearly doesnt fit voice 'you've been less'
00:14:928 (8,1,2,3) - move all those slider a bit apart so they dont touch eachother and dont stack 8 on a slider please i like it, and there is no problem with stacking this
00:19:163 (8,2,4) - dont do those stacks, it looks very wierd. i love them ^.^
00:32:222 (3,4,5) - these rectangular paterns look rly wierd. Just put in some angle so they flow better no problem for me
00:43:516 (1,2) - wow lol
00:52:340 - why leave such a huge space open for a spinner which hardly fits, map it and remoe the spinner! no
01:06:810 (1,2,3) - this doesnt play good at all i think it plays cool
(01:19:163 - map should end here since the mp3 is cut so poorly, the next part of the song fades away and doesnt rly fit to be played)can you get a better mp3 or cut it better? afterwards a big beat comes again, i really tried to cut it as close as i could but thats it, cant change :/

IN general you completely missed the rythm on a lot of parts It plays rly bad imho.
00:12:457 (4,5) - no
00:15:987 (2) - wierd to start smth on those barely audible vocals no
00:18:104 (6,7) - no
00:21:634 (3) - no
00:24:104 (3) - no
00:29:752 (6) - wierd just like 00:15:987 (2) - no

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2016-01-29T14:42:02+00:00

[easy]

lower difs are all about looking good and flowing well while keeping it simple Not only, Rythm structure is important

00:05:575 (1) - remove the red point in the slider and just make a normal curved one Nope the melody transition is in the slider, howerver a changed it a little bit to fit it more, i admit that i didn't like this actual slider.
00:10:163 (2,1) - changes form a 3/2 rythm to 2/1 rythm. You might wanna make the transition smoother
(I would recomend you just dont map this part 00:00:105 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - , you can since it a GD) Completely disagree, if delete is the smooth transition, then it's not a transition at all, each part has to be mapped differently. And just miss at 11 second is not such a big deal.
00:12:457 (2) - move this to 380|292 for a smoother curve motion Distance snap? Fixed anyway

00:12:810 (3,4,1) - put 00:14:222 (1) - in a better position so the curvy motion doesnt break. Right now 00:14:222 (1) - is a bit off Fixed a bit but this is so nazi and has no real reason.
00:15:281 (2) - mvoe this to 444|120 (if you dont change the above ofc, if you do change then you should try to get a smoother transition between 00:14:222 (1,2) - aswell) This is completly fine. No changes

00:26:575 (2,1) - slight stack is visible while playing stack? There's no stack where you point? If you mean overlapp it's the same, the new player will be focus on the slider (3) and won't care about the """"""""""""""overlapp""""""""""""""" (because i consider there's none).

01:12:457 (3) - move this a bit mroe away from 01:11:751 (2) - Distance snap? Try by yourself you won't have any worth placement.
01:22:693 (3) - move this away from 01:20:928 (1) - Distance Snap?
01:19:163 (1,2,1,2,3) - thise whole section has a wierd rythm. 01:20:928 (1) - its wierd that this starts on the vocals while there are all those drums... Do You have any other choice? What do you expect? It's an easy, i won't map on this 1/2 drums when it's a clam part. I've to make it simple.
01:23:399 (1) - whats up with this pointless 1 meassure long spinner? Newplayers are too slow to hit this in time... You didn't point the previous one, so i consider it's fine, AI mod complete it with 6000 points which is the double of the minimal required (3000). Completly fine.

Why do you try to move away objects without considering the distance snap? This doesn't makes any sense.
http://puu.sh/mObG6/65321c1cd8.osu

Kei

1,797 posts

Joined May 2010

Kei 2016-01-30T20:34:35+00:00

Hi! m4ming back <3

[HOS' Hard]

This difficulty needs hitsounding. It's monotonous and a complete waste since the song has a lot of room for creative hitsounding.

00:43:163 (3) - It'd be nice if you could move this slider a tad down since it's quite close to the HP bar. You only have to move 00:42:104 (7,8) down so you can move 00:42:457 (1,2,3) down as well.

This difficulty is pretty solid as it is. It just needs hitsounds.

[Normal]

00:20:575 (2) - The repeat arrow is covered up by 00:19:163 (8)'s end. I tested this part and the hitburst dissapears right when you have to click (2) but I think it's a wise decision to avoid this regardless and rearrange this pattern.
00:38:575 (2) - How about trying a blanket here for better flow with 00:39:281 (3)?
SPOILER
00:46:340 (2,3,4) - I think you can make a blanket here like this, and add a note at 00:47:752 since it's a beat that feels ignored for no reason and should be clickable.
SPOILER
00:52:340 - This empty space here is unfitting. I see you left some space so players could see the spinner coming but this is way too much. I highly suggest you to map till 00:53:046. I think a long slider will do (to follow the vocals). Anything is fine as long as you don't leave that empty space. ):
01:00:457 (4,5) - How about reversing 01:01:163 (5) horizontally for a better looking pattern?
SPOILER
01:06:810 (1,2) - How about blanketing again?
SPOILER
01:24:104 (2,3,4) - This straightforward curve pattern is kinda overused and boring for being the final notes of the song. How about trying something more creative? Maybe something like this?
SPOILER

Just like the Hard difficulty: it lacks hitsounds.

[Aldwych's Easy]

00:01:340 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary. I see your reasoning behind it but I think it's better if you remove it. It's not that necessary.
00:06:987 (1) - Same here.
00:21:810 (3) - This red tick slider is a no-no for me. I think it's a bit too much. I'd rather add a repeat to 00:20:928 (2) and then add a circle at 00:22:340.
00:33:104 (3) - Same here.
00:53:399 (3,1) - You didn't leave enough time for beginners to prepare for the spinner. You should delete 00:53:399 (3) in order to do so. Also, the spinner is too short. I suggest you to extend it to 00:55:869. Sounds way better in my opinion.
_____________

I hope this helps. Good luck ♥

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-31T10:47:13+00:00

Kei wrote:
Hi! m4ming back <3 ty c:

[Normal]
00:20:575 (2) - The repeat arrow is covered up by 00:19:163 (8)'s end. I tested this part and the hitburst dissapears right when you have to click (2) but I think it's a wise decision to avoid this regardless and rearrange this pattern. mirrored the reverse slider
00:38:575 (2) - How about trying a blanket here for better flow with 00:39:281 (3)? I thought I had enough blankets here so I wanted to make something different ._.
00:46:340 (2,3,4) - I think you can make a blanket here like this, and add a note at 00:47:752 since it's a beat that feels ignored for no reason and should be clickable. made the blanket a bit different, added circle
00:52:340 - This empty space here is unfitting. I see you left some space so players could see the spinner coming but this is way too much. I highly suggest you to map till 00:53:046. I think a long slider will do (to follow the vocals). Anything is fine as long as you don't leave that empty space. ): too many people said it, so I mapped it now ._.
01:00:457 (4,5) - How about reversing 01:01:163 (5) horizontally for a better looking pattern? can't avoid overlays here
01:06:810 (1,2) - How about blanketing again? I like it how it is
01:24:104 (2,3,4) - This straightforward curve pattern is kinda overused and boring for being the final notes of the song. How about trying something more creative? Maybe something like this? changed

Just like the Hard difficulty: it lacks hitsounds. gotta do that soon
I hope this helps. Good luck ♥ of course it does! thankyouuu ♥ ♫

HootOwlStar

750 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2016-01-31T14:57:55+00:00

basically the line mentioning that there is skin in the mapset = i need to redl a song with 3.4kb/s speed. yes.
@Prismetical: idk whether u fixed the skin problem mentioned by @Smokeman or nt so i just state it out again
and pls change the bg resolution since the current one is 3:2

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

Mod

Marianna wrote:
Hi Hi iH iH

Hard

00:05:046 (7,3) - These two are very down, please raise them Lifted (7) up but (3) is fine I guess.
00:06:987 (4) - NC I followed the NC pattern b4 so no change

Gl~ :3 u too :3

yeeee thx!

Tedda wrote:
From my modding queue~ hi welcome

You didn't say what difficulty you want me to mod, so I only modded Normal and HOS' Hard.

I don't think I'll be much of help since it already has a fairly high SP and I'm a beginner at modding. nah u r ald gud

Hard:
00:04:869 (6,7) - It looks like they're gonna go offscreen. yep adjusted as mentioned above

Also, why not add some hitsounds? If used correctly they can make the map better. yah gonna add them

thx for mod!

Stjpa wrote:
======================
• = Unrankable issue
• = Highly recommended suggestion
• = Suggestion
======================

General
• The BG needs a size of 1366x768. yah
• Make sure that you untick Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks. Also you may want to have the same tags in every diff. ald fixed
• The CS of every diff is very high for their difficulties. i think it is fine tbh

HOS' Hard
HEY HOS, HERE WE MEET AGAIN. lo hi
• I feel like you could use NC more often at the beginning. i wanted to keep the nc pattern so yah
• 00:15:457 (4,5,6,7) - (4) shows directly to the stacked 1/2 circles, which makes it look awkward. agree
• 00:28:340 (1,4) - Is it stacked? Can't really tell because sometimes my editor shows it and sometimes it doesn't. i think my editor shows that it is but i restacked it to avoid any further problems

Someday I'll request a GD from you! (^: haha

thx for mod !!!11!1!!!!11!!1!!

Nozhomi wrote:
Hi~ as requested. o shintaku orza normal gd creator xddddd

- HOS' Hard :
00:20:575 (3,4) - Blanket a little off. i hope i fixed
00:28:340 (1,4) - Stack it correctly pls. o so it's my problem nvm fixed as mentioned above
Exellent diff. 10/10 - ign

Guess that's all.
Mukyu~

thanks for the mod!

DavidEd wrote:
M4M from pm in-game. Thanks for the mod btw.

This bass is making my ear ring.
[Hard]00:11:399 (1) - I think you can bend this a little. Just a small visual thing. curving the slider isn't that necessary imo and i love my current pattern too so no change sry
00:13:163 (5) - Same as above (this) as above
00:38:928 (6) - Maybe you were emphasizing that weird tom sound. But I think you should remove that red slidertick. i didnt emphasize anything at the red slidertick since it is just for slider pattern. i can remove that since i agree xd
00:56:575 (1) - Bend a bit (this) sry but no
Chorus just feels like I'm playing the verse all over again (nothing important) lo i made the chorus different from the verse by unstacking the circles. i thought it is brilliant as a difficulty progression lol but yah it is repeating the clicking pattern n stuffs xd
01:24:810 (1) - Please delete or make 01:24:104 (6) a 1/4 slider why ;-;

Looks good though thx o/

Hope I could mention something useful. Good luck! good luck to u too!

really thank u for the mod! helped a lot

Akitoshi wrote:
$$ yes 100%

[HOS' Hard]
01:14:222 (3,4) - it's better if you did copypasta sry but i dont think so
01:24:104 (6) - fits better alright
good mapset, goodluck! gl to u too

thx for mod $$

Namki wrote:
yo
Red - unrankable issue.
Bold - highly recommend to change.
Normal - suggestion/nazi.

[Hard]
00:11:222 (8,1) - use 1.5x, because of others patterns like this one. i forgt my intention of making this 1.6x but w/e i fixed it
Clear diff. thanks!

Best of luck~ u too

thanks for the mod :3

Smokeman wrote:
M4M

skin is messed up pls fix http://puu.sh/mNfDz/df3da3ccf9.jpg a

[Hard]

00:09:634 (4) - move this further up so it doesnt stack that much i did the current pattern purposely
00:20:928 - it would be better to have smth clickable here. 00:20:575 (3) - make this a 1/2 slider and add a note here 00:20:928 - the current one fits the rhythm better imo
01:20:399 (4,5) - its weird that these end on the drums since the drum beats are more audible i think it's fine as it is now

Hard looks solid thx!

thanks for the suggestions

Kei wrote:
Hi! m4ming back <3 <3

[HOS' Hard]

This difficulty needs hitsounding. It's monotonous and a complete waste since the song has a lot of room for creative hitsounding. i know i will do it xd
00:43:163 (3) - It'd be nice if you could move this slider a tad down since it's quite close to the HP bar. You only have to move 00:42:104 (7,8) down so you can move 00:42:457 (1,2,3) down as well. yeah ok

This difficulty is pretty solid as it is. It just needs hitsounds. ok lol
I hope this helps. Good luck ♥ gl to u too

thx for the advice!

hi

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55164
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 105,11399,33987,56575,76340,79163
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Anyway
Artist:Moxiie
ArtistUnicode:Moxiie
Creator:Prismetical
Version:HOS' Hard
Source:
Tags:electro dope Aldwych HOS HootOwlStar
BeatmapID:875443
BeatmapSetID:377259

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2016-02-01T00:28:47+00:00

Olala

Kei wrote:
Hi! m4ming back <3

[Aldwych's Easy]
00:01:340 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary. I see your reasoning behind it but I think it's better if you remove it. It's not that necessary.
00:06:987 (1) - Same here. I think so too on both of them. Maybe it's more logic and consistent tho.
00:21:810 (3) - This red tick slider is a no-no for me. I think it's a bit too much. I'd rather add a repeat to 00:20:928 (2) and then add a circle at 00:22:340.
00:33:104 (3) - Same here. For both of 2 above, i don't really think you're hearing about the music with the melody and beats. Plus it's the same break as all around. If you wouldn't check the object moving bar you won't really notice about that. And so on even with all these argues i won't change it. Yet you did a proposition, but it's not a good one too. :<
00:53:399 (3,1) - You didn't leave enough time for beginners to prepare for the spinner. You should delete 00:53:399 (3) in order to do so. Also, the spinner is too short. I suggest you to extend it to 00:55:869. Sounds way better in my opinion. Yes let's try it and i can't extend the spinner. Look on the ranking criteria for more informations
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I hope this helps. Good luck ♥

Thanks for the mod!

http://puu.sh/mT5iY/6e3cad2ee7.osu

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2016-02-03T15:26:37+00:00

M4M. AWESOME, My Style <3

[Hard]

01:24:457 - How about add 1/2 slider? this part has noise (drum??) sound. it will be fit with song
I think you used NC in 8 bit but its not fit with song, Add NC in 00:01:340 (4) - here, because 00:01:340 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this 6 notes is 1 combo set. you can realize 00:01:340 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this part and 00:03:457 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part is perfectly same. so, did you realize where is nc part? 00:01:340 (4) - NC, 00:02:928 (1,2) - NC swap. it will make funny and sensual combo. But after 00:11:487 - this part, your nc style is correct because of vocal
00:53:752 (1) - How about Del NC? and move 00:53:575 (8) - to x:324 y:192. stack and NC is not suitable with sound's feeling
01:15:634 (6) - Its not impossible... how about make curve?
01:24:810 - this note is very loud. make volume 10%

I Love your mapping style XD

HootOwlStar

750 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2016-02-07T05:54:57+00:00

UnLock- wrote:
M4M. AWESOME, My Style <3 <3

[Hard]
01:24:457 - How about add 1/2 slider? this part has noise (drum??) sound. it will be fit with song oh i forgot to fix this in the previous mod xdd thx for this
I think you used NC in 8 bit but its not fit with song, Add NC in 00:01:340 (4) - here, because 00:01:340 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this 6 notes is 1 combo set. you can realize 00:01:340 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this part and 00:03:457 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part is perfectly same. so, did you realize where is nc part? 00:01:340 (4) - NC, 00:02:928 (1,2) - NC swap. it will make funny and sensual combo. But after 00:11:487 - this part, your nc style is correct because of vocal since a lot of people mentioned this issue, changing it will be okay i guess
00:53:752 (1) - How about Del NC? and move 00:53:575 (8) - to x:324 y:192. stack and NC is not suitable with sound's feeling fix the nc and made similar adjust to the stack thing but im nt really that sure for that stack one so basically it's just experimental i guess
01:15:634 (6) - Its not impossible... how about make curve? impossible for wh? anyway it's not that necessary to make it curve tho so no change here
01:24:810 - this note is very loud. make volume 10% alright

I Love your mapping style XD lo thx !!1!!!11!!

Thanks for the mod!

hi

osu file format v14

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GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Anyway
TitleUnicode:Anyway
Artist:Moxiie
ArtistUnicode:Moxiie
Creator:Prismetical
Version:HOS' Hard
Source:
Tags:electro dope Aldwych HOS HootOwlStar
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[Difficulty]
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sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2016-02-09T03:17:34+00:00

Hey Prismetical! HootOwlStar has requested me this map for a M4M request, just to let you know!

[General]

Principally the same with your "Lost in Paradise" map, you need to include the other elements to complete a skin set in your beatmap.
1. approachcircle.png
2. hitcircleoverlay.png
Now, for the spinner, you have two versions you can choose: v1.0 or v2.0 (old or new). Currently you added those two versions in your beatmap, but only one version can be skin. If you want to know which spinner you like most, download the two templates here because there is a difference. I can't really explain it to you, but what I can say is that v2.0 is the most recent and it is used currently, so you might want to go with v2.0. If so, here are the list of images you need:
things in inside ouh
1. spinner-glow.png
2. spinner-middle.png
3. spinner-clear.png
4. spinner-rpm.png
5. spinner-spin.png
  
  and you need to remove spinner-approachcircle.png.

[Aldwych's Easy]

00:05:575 (3) - Could be just me, but you started this slider on a rhythm which has ended on 00:05:752 -, and after that, the rhythm is new. So that's a little rhythm issue in my opinion, and I would start it on 00:05:752 so it could begin on the new rhythm.
00:20:928 (2,3) - Not a good usage to the rhythm to be honest, because they are following something else, other than what's around is following. Try this perhaps:
Rhythm
This also happens to 00:32:222 (2,3) - 00:43:516 (2,3) .
00:37:869 (2,3) - Personally, the pattern doesn't look nice. Try maybe parallel sliders, like this:
Pattern

[Normal]
This doesn't look like your current mapping, therefore you should consider some remapping, in my opinion.

Your new combo pattern gets very inconsistent because you put sometimes on the upbeats and sometimes on other downbeats, and many more. For example, 00:22:693 (5) should instead have a new combo instead of 00:23:046 (1) because, well, it looks more logically when having a new combo on the first tick of the measure, which is the long white tick. I think you didn't understand this on my recheck for your other map, so I'll try to elaborate more.
So, what I suggest you is a new combo on "each second measure". A measure (or bar) "is a segment of time". Basically, when you see two long white ticks not far from each other, that is one measure. To give you an example, 00:12:810 to 00:14:222 is a measure, and 00:14:222 to 00:15:634 is a measure. When I say "add a new combo on every two measures", you count two measures and on the end of the second measure (which is also the start of the next measure), you add a a new combo on the object. So, 00:11:399 to 00:14:222 is two measures, since 00:11:399 to 00:12:810 and 00:12:810 to 00:14:222 is a segment. That makes that 00:14:222 will have a new combo if an object is on it.
You want to begin the pattern on 00:11:399 through the end. So, 00:14:222 - 00:17:046 - 00:19:869 - and etc. would need a new combo. If it's still confusing, I'll try my best to re-explain this point and maybe use images.
Some objects kind of conflicts with this, which I will explain on the next point.
Onto another point, it's the sliders ending on downbeats, mostly the long white ticks, like 00:13:516 (6) . I might skip 00:12:457 (4) but that sounds okay, yet 00:13:516 (6) doesn't feel nice to hear. The downbeats are usually the beats that should have a clickable object, like a circle and a head of a slider since the beats are generally louder. Unlike this song though, the rhythm is a little different, but it does still sound weird, at least for me. This happens pretty frequently like 00:16:693 (3) - 00:19:163 (8) .
Here are the others though, that I think sounds bad lel
1. 00:46:340 (2) -
2. 01:01:869 (6) -
3. 01:13:163 (5) -
00:10:516 (3,4,5,1) - You would want to rethink about the gap here. This is what you call "polarity", further explanation is in a video by Charles445. But briefly, what I pointed is a gap that is unusual and not the same as the other gaps. You can have some different gaps, but this one is confusing, and with the current AR setting, players might mistake it with a 1/1 gap like you often did like 00:09:634 (2,3) even if the distance is larger than what looks like 00:11:399 (1,2) . So, I suggest you start a slider 3/2 slider on 00:10:693 . Like 00:09:634 (2) .
00:15:281 (1,2,3) - Aesthetically and flowing are not great in my opinion. Here's a suggestion you can do or inspire it from, although it will require rearranging the following patterns:
Pattern and code
```
129,126,15281,6,0,L|146:244,1,120
221,339,15987,2,0,L|240:208,1,120
294,139,16693,2,0,P|332:188|317:263,1,120

If you need help for this, try to catch me online and I will gladly help you.
```
00:23:399 (2,3) - The blanket with 00:23:046 (1) can be done nicer, so try to adjust the curves or try something else.
00:25:516 (5) - Likely the same as the previous point, adjust the curve to make a better blanket with 00:26:222 (6) .
00:37:869 (1,2) - Not much of a fan for this flow, because 00:37:869 (1) is going to the right, although 00:38:575 (2) is on the other side, and it is going up while 00:39:281 (3) is on the right. Try moving it to x:268 y:316.
00:51:987 (8,1) - Lol, I remember this kind of issue in "Ransom". This is unexpected because the spacing has just "collapsed"; the distance is not constant and the gap is different like 00:51:634 (7,8) for example. You'll have to move 00:52:693 (1,2) elsewhere so that distance is constant here too.
00:57:281 (1) - I highly suggest you remove this circle because the spinner is near to it, therefore the recovery is short, and since the BPM is high and the difficulty is a Normal, it is not very suitable to the beginners.
01:00:457 (4,5) - The wave shapes could be more refined. Now, it doesn't look great. Actually, 01:01:163 (5) is not symmetric to 01:00:457 (4) but I would change the shape a little, like this maybe:
Shape
01:15:987 (3,1) - The "polarity" issue is also here. The gap is not what we have seen before and the distance is similar to 01:15:634 (2,3) -, and to fix this, you have to change the rhythm here, so I suggest you add a hitcircle on 01:16:693 .

Like I said before, I recommend a remap with better aesthetic and usage of rhythms. I'm sure you'll get it.
[HOS' Hard]

In the first part of the map, the rhythm like 00:01:340 (1,2) doesn't sound very nice with the music, since the slider is ending on a sound yes, but not a beat, and with the soft hitsound doesn't fit great with it. I suggest you go with a 1/1 slider instead; the head and tail will hit the red ticks beats while the body is "skipping" the downbeat if I compare with what you did. This only happens through 00:11:399 -, but you need to rearrange the patterns which will take a lot of time, unfortunately...
00:53:928 (1) - I highly recommend you reduce the spinner's length, maybe by one beat, because the recovery time to 00:56:575 (1) is pretty short since the BPM is fast, and this is a Hard difficulty, so it may not be suitable here.

No complains for this difficulty, just a little rhythm issue I found.

That's should be it, I think (?). Good luck with your map! If yo have any questions, don't hesitate asking them to me!

Aldwych

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Aldwych 2016-02-11T00:44:42+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hey Prismetical! HootOwlStar has requested me this map for a M4M request, just to let you know!

[Aldwych's Easy]
00:05:575 (3) - Could be just me, but you started this slider on a rhythm which has ended on 00:05:752 -, and after that, the rhythm is new. So that's a little rhythm issue in my opinion, and I would start it on 00:05:752 so it could begin on the new rhythm.

Yes you're right with what you said, and you're proposition is good. But i don't think it's such a matter, and i want to keep it simple, tbh, having a 3/2 distance isn't worth at all and the slider's shape make it quite well with the rythm. So imo both ways are good but both has advantages and inconvinients, but i prefer the easiest play for the player.
00:20:928 (2,3) - Not a good usage to the rhythm to be honest, because they are following something else, other than what's around is following. Try this perhaps:
Rhythm
This also happens to 00:32:222 (2,3) - 00:43:516 (2,3) .

Since every one even bn are complaning about this. I guess i've no choice. Sadlly i like and prefer my rythm structure but yours is decent too. :<
00:37:869 (2,3) - Personally, the pattern doesn't look nice. Try maybe parallel sliders, like this:
Pattern
No, the map is so seamless in terms of structure, give me the dignity to make diverse patterns. Plus it will give me such complication of remap and thinking for quite less than nothing.

Thanks for the mod. Rip in pepperonni 3/2 sliders stuff.
Rip in pizza opinions on my diff like always, but i guess 3 lines is enough to say it's clean.

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Vovan

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Vovan 2016-02-18T21:22:40+00:00

Hi Prismetical

[General]

Easy, normal, & hard havent the same kiai time, Easy kiai is different.

[Aldwych's Easy]

00:32:222 (2) - The end of the slider is here : 00:32:928 -

00:33:104 (3) - 1/1 beat slider, beginning here : 00:33:281 -

00:43:516 (2,3) - Same, like 00:32:222 (2) - & 00:33:104 (3) -

00:53:752 (1) - You can probably map this (If you apply this, you can make a big slider after the spinner. He begin probably here 00:55:516 - and make 3/1 beat OR 1/1 beat + reverse OR 2/1 beat + circle)

01:02:222 (1) - Circle with a 1/1 beat slider can make better : It can make the middle of the slider clickable.

01:09:281 (3) - Clap at the end

01:10:340 (4) - Whistle at the end, not clap

01:15:634 (3) - Clap at the beginning, whistle at the end

[Normal]
The high DS make something very strange and hard to map.

00:10:693 (4,5) - I recommend a slider not 2 circles. The 2nd circle don't need to be clickable

00:23:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This moment is a bit boring, that's pretty the same sliders.

00:44:928 (3,1) - Blanket ?

00:55:163 - End of your spinner + map end of the spinner --> Next circle

01:08:222 (4,5,6) - Make a line, that can be cool

01:09:634 (6,7,1) - ^

01:17:046 (1,2,3) - ^

01:22:340 (1,2) - Make a slider

[HOS's Hard]
Name of the diff : HOS' Hard That's HOS's Hard

00:55:163 - End of the slider & map after the slider.

Some beats can be better if they are clickable like this :
00:13:869 (7) - 2 circles
00:19:516 (7) - ^
00:38:928 (6,7,8) - For change a bit, slider & reverse + 1 circle ?
01:04:340 (6,7,8) - ~~slider, circle, circle~~ circle, slider, circle

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That's all for my mod !
:3 Prismetical, you wanted this mod, so here it is !

Aldwych

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Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2016-02-22T20:39:27+00:00

Lexis wrote:
Hi Prismetical

[General]

Easy, normal, & hard havent the same kiai time, Easy kiai is different. So what? We're allowed to since we are not the same author

[Aldwych's Easy]

00:32:222 (2) - The end of the slider is here : 00:32:928 - My version is correct too, and i prefer follow the sounds rather than vocals

00:33:104 (3) - 1/1 beat slider, beginning here : 00:33:281 - Refers to what above

00:43:516 (2,3) - Same, like 00:32:222 (2) - & 00:33:104 (3) - And again. Edit, i guess prismetical didn't update the diff since my changes from sheela's mod. So please, refer to the posts above on how i changed. Sorry.

00:53:752 (1) - You can probably map this (If you apply this, you can make a big slider after the spinner. He begin probably here 00:55:516 - and make 3/1 beat OR 1/1 beat + reverse OR 2/1 beat + circle) For this lound sound, i prefer a spinner, personnal preference

01:02:222 (1) - Circle with a 1/1 beat slider can make better : It can make the middle of the slider clickable. Not feel the envy, it's an easy diff not a normal one. Keep it clean of object please.

01:09:281 (3) - Clap at the end What? No the clap are not on this kind of sounds

01:10:340 (4) - Whistle at the end, not clap What²? Whistle for vocals. Why would i clap here?

01:15:634 (3) - Clap at the beginning, whistle at the end I suggest you to listen carefully the music, clap are not placed like the standards music on second and fourth place. Watch out

Name of the diff : HOS' Hard That's HOS's Hard No, HOS' is the correct version. Didn't find the thread for this kind of stuff but it's correct.

Désolé, mais aucun changements.
Prismetical -> take the link on my previous post.

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