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ClariS - Irony

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Jarby
I wish I could properly understand the lovely comments that've been left behind after I modded this. Google Translate isn't much help and I certainly don't like the look of those angry faces.
Curisu
小石头~
miss_dior
:D
Semi_Semi
:) great
gezixiong
:)
Topic Starter
sisiJiang
thank you ,guys :)
Sekai
star~
Numbers 596108
Mod Request from Random

If you have PM me to mod,i'll mark the name which PM me to mod it :3
If no,i'll random to mod and use Pink to mark ;)


Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect Timing or Move Notes
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

00:01:30 134.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:58:61 1.0x - K - -> Nice ;)
01:30:85 1.0x - N - -> Nice ;)
02:10:25 1.0x - K - -> Nice ;)
02:39:80 1.0x - N - -> Nice ;)

Notes :

00:01:979 (3) -
00:05:561 (11) -
00:18:770 (52) -
00:19:890 (59) -
00:20:337 (61) -
00:22:576 (69) -
00:31:308 (112) -
00:35:561 (X) - Add a ?
00:35:785 (133) -
00:45:651 (194) -
00:48:322 (194) -
00:51:009 (208) -
01:37:576 (415) -
01:49:143 (424) -

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain - 6 -> OK
Circle Size - 2 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max

Overall Difficulty - 5 -> OK

ah...just a suggest...a Guest Difficulty couldn't get a kudosu
Miu Matsuoka
桐乃.////. <3
Nymph
我推~
Vortex_old
Hello :3

Neko --> nothing to say, pretty good

Large
01:23:248 (7) New combo
01:46:308 - 01:47:651 (2,3,4,5) Aren't these jumps du hard for this diff? :3
02:08:248 (1) Remove new combo here
Overall, this difficulty is also pretty fine :)

Tiny
00:32:651 (7) Put it 1 field left, because the spacing is a bit strange there for me
00:39:591 (6) New combo
00:42:725 (14) ^
00:46:860 (20) New combo here and then remove new combo from: 00:46:084 (1)
01:14:516 (7) Could you make this slider more symmetrical? :D
02:50:561 (1) Remove this spinner
03:22:800 - 03:25:487 (2,3,4,5) Can you make these jumps harder? Because there is so mucht time between them :)
03:55:710 - 03:57:054 (1,2,3,4) This part is also strange, I think because of the spacing?
Keep workin'

Guest Diff
00:12:725 (1) Remove new combo
00:13:173 (2) New combo
00:22:800 (1) This spinner should go only till 00:26:382
00:26:606 Put a spinner here till 00:29:964
02:53:248 I think the break should end here
02:57:278 (3) New combo
03:31:091 (1) Remove new combo
03:32:203 (5) New combo
03:32:651 (1) Remove new combo
This diff is also fine at all, keep workin' :)

Greez Vortex, I hope it gives you a little lift to the ranking :P
No Kudosu left for star :( But i will give you one later^^
Topic Starter
sisiJiang

Vortex wrote:

Hello :3

Neko --> nothing to say, pretty good

Large
01:23:248 (7) New combo
01:46:308 - 01:47:651 (2,3,4,5) Aren't these jumps du hard for this diff? :3
02:08:248 (1) Remove new combo here
Overall, this difficulty is also pretty fine :)

Tiny
00:32:651 (7) Put it 1 field left, because the spacing is a bit strange there for me
00:39:591 (6) New combo
00:42:725 (14) ^
00:46:860 (20) New combo here and then remove new combo from: 00:46:084 (1)
01:14:516 (7) Could you make this slider more symmetrical? :D
02:50:561 (1) Remove this spinner
03:22:800 - 03:25:487 (2,3,4,5) Can you make these jumps harder? Because there is so mucht time between them :)i think not need
03:55:710 - 03:57:054 (1,2,3,4) This part is also strange, I think because of the spacing?
Keep workin'

Guest Diff
00:12:725 (1) Remove new combo
00:13:173 (2) New combo
00:22:800 (1) This spinner should go only till 00:26:382
00:26:606 Put a spinner here till 00:29:964 i think not need
02:53:248 I think the break should end here
02:57:278 (3) New combo
03:31:091 (1) Remove new combo
03:32:203 (5) New combo
03:32:651 (1) Remove new combo
This diff is also fine at all, keep workin' :)

Greez Vortex, I hope it gives you a little lift to the ranking :P
No Kudosu left for star :( But i will give you one later^^
thanks for your mod . all done except several i think not need.
thx again
- Suima -
我覺得有很多地方不協調,去玩一下已被rank的譜,應該可以找到不錯的擺法
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0?s=7&o=1&q=irony&r=0&g=0&la=0
我mod[Large]這個難度的,其它就沒時間了

我直接給你後我改的譜,位置會有些不正確,主要是時間軸的位置,可以嗎?
或是我新做一個譜來取代[Large]的難度。

star beacause I like it.

Download: ClariS - Irony (sisiJiang) [Large].osu
Chewin
General:

  1. You have to finish all maps, for example the "neko" isn't finished as the others.


Neko:

  • It's the easiest map, then Circle Size +1.

  1. 00:05:561 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4MgW Put it so? Sound is better.
    Ehm... It isn't finished.. is it in wip?
    You have to finish it, as the others.. :\


Jameskong1's Hard:

  • This 1/2 rhythm is so ripetitive...
    For example instead of the usual 1/2 here:

  1. 02:33:322 (2) - you could make a slider that start at 02:33:322 and end at 02:33:770.
  2. 02:34:218 (4) - Delete and use a circle
  3. 02:35:785 (4) - Move it at x:193 y:362 (don't use grid snap)
  4. 02:55:039 (5) - New combo
  5. 02:58:621 (6) - ^
  6. 03:03:994 (4) - ^
  7. 03:11:158 (7) - ^
  8. 03:12:502 (1) - No new combo
  9. 03:12:949 (2) - New combo
  10. 03:18:322 (7) - ^
  11. 03:19:666 (1) - No new combo
  12. 03:20:113 (2) - New combo
  13. 03:21:905 (2) - Delete and start the spinner here

    Change the usual 1/2 rhythm, so ripetitive, i don't like it <.<


Tiny:

  • Break time that starts at 00:17:875, can you set it as the other diffs please?

  1. 00:44:293 (6) - New combo
  2. 00:47:875 (5) - End it at 00:48:322?
  3. 00:54:591 (8) - New combo
  4. 00:58:621 Start kiai time?
  5. 02:10:263 (2) - Kiai time
  6. 03:03:994 (9) - New combo
  7. 03:39:815 (9) - ^
  8. 03:40:487 (1) - No new combo
  9. 03:43:397 (6) - New combo... and start kiai time..



Then good luck ~
JauiPlaY
hihi~
下次post請遵守規則 ;)

[General]
256kbps的mp3是不能使用的,而且我記得這規則是去年9月開始實行,你傳這圖的時間是十月...所以你恐怕需要換mp3了.
tags里面的anime是不需要的請刪除,因為在ranked之后BAT會把這歌的類別劃到anime里.

[Neko]
00:15:075 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?
00:55:934 (5) - 換成一個00:55:710開始00:56:158結束的slider.

[Large]
01:06:233 (2) - 加clap.
01:48:770 (x) - 加個note.
02:07:128 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這對個normal而言太難了...去掉(6)(8)(10)比較好.
02:38:919 (1) - 起始于02:38:808.

[Jameskong1's Hard]
為什麼只有這個難度有kiai?請在另外的幾個難度里也加上kiai,或者刪除這個難度的kiai.
00:56:606 (6) - 這slider感覺各種別扭.
01:43:173 (5,6) - 沒重疊好.
02:08:248 (7) - 各種別扭...

[Tiny]
00:10:039 (1) - 合并成一個長slider會比較好.
00:37:128 (x) - 加個note.
02:20:785 (3) - 聽起來很吵...而且這樣一個slider放這也實在不合適.

嘛,仍然需要努力~
Topic Starter
sisiJiang
thanks all of your mods. :)
(because of poor english. many things i don't know how to say it. just thank you . sorry
XD_____
Claris ~ ;)
YTYuyu
O wow so many stars lol

General:
Set the slider tick rate to 1 for all diffs. having a slider tick rate of .5 is unrankable.

Neko:
00:41:200(5) - NC
00:42:544(2) - get rid of the last repeat and replace it for a circle.
00:51:499(6) - NC
00:52:842(3) - same as 00:42:544
01:09:857(5) - NC
01:11:200(2) - same as 00:42:544
01:16:126(6) - NC
01:17:245(1) - remove NC
02:12:544(2) - ^

Average:
00:46:126(5) - NC
01:00:679(6) - ^
01:24:857(4) - ^
01:51:275(5) - ^
01:53:961(4) - ^
02:26:200(6) - ^
02:56:872(7) - ^
03:04:036(7) - ^
03:18:364(6) - ^
03:30:678(6) - ^
03:34:260(4) - ^
03:41:424(5) - ^
03:45:006(6) - ^
03:48:588(6) - ^
03:55:752(7) - ^
04:07:394(5) - ^

Tiny:

00:02:917(7) - NC
00:06:499(7) - ^
00:27:991(5) - ^
00:32:469(6) - ^
00:35:155(4) - ^
00:57:096(5) - ^
01:03:812(6) - ^
01:09:185(5) - ^
01:14:558(7) - ^
01:18:588(5) - ^
01:21:723(5) - ^
01:46:797(7) - ^
01:53:066(5) - ^
02:04:036(7) - ^
02:08:290(8) - ^
02:11:872(8) - ^
02:15:902(8) - ^
02:19:036(9) - ^
02:24:185(8) - ^ and Aline this to the previous circle
02:26:200(6) - NC
02:33:364(8) - ^
03:48:588(5) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D
OnosakiHito
May I make a Taiko guest diff. for you? :)
K a Y e
Star!!~ I don't know what exactly is wrong with your map!! :oops:
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