- Yoshimaro - wrote:
M4M!That bouncy bouncy beatTbh this map's pretty fire I'll give it my best
00:44:658 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - runs a very circular flow, consider some Ctrl+G's I think this pattern is fine.
00:53:141 (1,3) - if that's what you're going for then nice otherwise the slider was too straight (you probably meant for it to be like this lol its k just looking for things) I actually didn't intend this xd. I changed it so it's slightly more curved.
01:11:968 (2,3,4,5,6) - consider toning down a (just a bit if at all) or adding a bit more direction to the jump I'll consider it, but I think the current spacing is fine.
01:21:072 (1,3) - definitely fix Should be finally fixed now.
01:44:244 (1,2) - reduce mirror distance imo Reduced it since I didn't really like the spacing with this.
02:17:141 (7,8,1) - since rest of pattern is anti directional and this part in particular is very linear, maybe switch 02:17:554 (1,2) - ? idk why im here fam this song is mmmmmmmmMMMMMMM Adjusted those two sliders since they were bothering me as well.
02:27:899 (3,5) - blanket again (sry lol) It's ok xd I fixed it.
02:32:244 (8,3) - again you probably meant for it to be more linear, just pointing it out I adjusted this very slightly but this one seemed fine.
02:47:347 (1,3) - nice this was good THanks mang11
03:38:658 - maybe change, for the difficulty i'd imagine there would be a PP/FC boner dead sliderbreak denial fest right here but idk maybe not This should be fine spacing wise, I might adjust the first three still if necessary in the future.
04:48:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - difficulty spikes pretty hard right here, consider nerfing I only adjusted the (7) in these jumps, I think the rest is fine.
04:56:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - woah shit nevermind this spikes hella hard xD, definitely nerf this I personally think this one is fine since the claps are the most emphasized in the song. I'll most likely change it if like literally every single person tells me to change it.
05:11:347 (1,2,3,4) - i like doritos too <3 Sam
hype! i like this song, never knew this artist, thanks for hitting me up i would've never found this xD No problem, too bad their soundcloud is closed now, they had a lot of cool songs.Complimentary meme that comes with all of my modsLol I've heard this song a long time ago xdShe can ride her bike with no handlebars
Thanks for the mod!
Thanks for the mod, good luck with your mapset as well!Kami-senpai wrote:
M4M from le queue
00:13:416 (1,2,3) - I think these should be spaced larger, or at least bigger than 00:14:658 (5,6,1,2) - these since the sound is much more emphasized. I understand what you mean here, but it's the intro of the song and I don't think it's necessary to have large spacing.
00:32:658 (6,7,8,1) - This stack is a bit unpredictable and doesn't play well I think it plays fine.
00:38:451 (4,5,7,8) - I would turn all of these into streams for consistency. Ideally, to fit the music, I would make those all short 1/4 sliders and then make 00:39:072 (1,2,3,4) - into circle stream. It would sound and play much better I'll think about it, but I currently like this pattern more.
00:44:037 (5,6) - I feel like 5 should be a slider and 6 should be a circle I agree with this, changed.
00:48:589 (3,5) - Blanket properly I probably forgot to blanket this, fixed.
00:49:830 (1,3) - ^ Fixed.
01:01:623 (2,3) - ^ Originally wasn't meant to be a blanket, but this was bothering me so I changed the pattern up here a bit.
01:09:072 (4,6) - These would play better if you stacked them, or semi stacked them I think it's fine.
01:11:968 (2,3,4,5,6) - I know you tried to make them horizontally parallel, but I think they would look better if you aligned them in the same line I like the current pattern better.
01:21:072 (1,3) - Blanket properly Fixed from previous mod.
01:22:106 (4,5,6,7) - Make more equilateral Adjusted slightly.
01:26:865 (4,1) - Move the 1 slightly down for a semi stack. This will make the timing gap a bit more predictable Changed.
01:28:313 (3,4) - Due to change in tone, I would increase the distance between these. I adjusted the whole section here a little.
01:29:554 (1,1,1,1,1) - I would put these closer together if you're going to have 1/4 gap in between. Also, maybe you can try increasing SV for 01:29:968 (1,1) - these. It'll make it a bit more interesting. NC on all of those is also not necessary, but if you want to keep it it's fine too. I think the spacing is fine, and I don't want to mess with the SV here because I think it plays better this way.
01:32:865 (1) - NC off I'll think about this, I want to stay consistent and use a NC for every large white tick.
01:39:072 (6,1) - Unstack these I think it's fine.
01:53:554 (5,1) - Blanket properly Fixed.
01:58:727 (5,6,7,1) - I would make jump smaller here since the volume of the song decreases. 01:57:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - However, if you want to keep high jumps, make these bigger. That way it fits the diminishing volume Reduced slightly in order to stay consistent with the other section similar to this.
02:07:830 (2,3,4,6) - Unstack It's fine.
02:11:554 (4,5) - I know there is sound in the music that you're mapping to here, but I think the silent effect that the music has here would be so much better if you deleted these. It was originally silent here, but people suggested I changed it. Maybe I'll change it again in the future, it depends.
02:12:382 (3,2) - Unstack It's fine.
02:16:934 (6,7,8) - Make equidistant I adjusted it slightly, but I didn't make it equidistant because it looks really weird to me with the pattern I have.
02:32:037 (7,8,1) - ^ Fixed.
02:32:244 (8,3) - Blanket properly Blanket fixed from previous mod.
02:33:692 (5,1,3) - This setup is pretty messy. I would move 1 so it's not overlapped This is intended and it doesn't look messy to me.
02:36:796 (4,5) - Blanket properly Not intended to be a blanket at all, and I don't like this blanketed.
02:39:072 (1,2,3,4) - Make a proper zigzag pattern with equal DS Pitch of song and vocals accounts for this, I don't agree with equal spacing here.
02:48:382 (4,6,5,6,7) - This stack is a little too much. You can stack one or two, but stacking two circles and a triplet is way too much I don't see what's wrong with this, it plays fine.
02:56:658 (4,5,6,1) - Blanket properly I can't really fix this because of how it automatically stacks for me, I'll see how to make it so it doesn't do this and fix it in the future if needed.
02:59:554 (4,1) - Semi stack for readablility Changed to stay consistent with the similar section.
03:01:003 (3,1) - Can increase distance a bit I think it's fine.
03:02:244 (1,1,1,1) - Same thing I said about the other part like this I changed the spacing on this one, but not the other one since that one was fine to me.
03:10:520 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a back and forth jump instead of two stacks. I think it's fine, I wanted to change it up.
03:38:658 (1,1,1) - These seem like way too much 1/8th spam, but tbh I'm not sure what I would do differently, so look for other mods on that part. This part is fine already and fits with the music, it doesn't really need to be changed.
03:57:072 (2,4) - Blanket properly Nothing wrong with this blanket.
03:58:520 (1,1,1,1) - Seem too far apart for 1/4 I changed only the spacing on two of the sliders, the rest is fine to me.
04:04:106 (2,3,4) - Instead of stacking, I would make it a straight stream. It would fit the flow of the electronic voice more I tried it and I don't like it so much, keeping it stacked.
04:04:313 (4) - You can NC here since it's start of emphasized musical statement I'll think about it, but I think this is fine to me.
04:04:934 (7,2) - Don't stack. It's fine.
04:07:209 (2,5) - Blanket properly Fixed.
04:31:416 (7,2) - Don't stack. Since 2 is obviously less emphasized than 7, make the distance between 04:31:623 (1,2) - smaller This one I changed because I didn't like the back and forth motion here, I instead moved the (2) somewhere else.
04:50:865 (6,7,8) - Make more equilateral Fixed.
04:53:141 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Instead of the 2 combo spam here, I would do it 04:56:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here Actually, I forgot to remove the NC's from the previous revamp of this map. I instead just removed the NC's.
05:05:554 (3,5) - Don't stack for readablility I adjusted this pattern here differently so it's not stacked anymore.
05:08:037 (1,2,3,4) - Align these Not sure if you mean to stack them closer to each other or so that they're the same slope, but I didn't change this since I like it.
This song could use some dope custom hitsounds. I'll probably find some soon since everyone is suggesting it.
You can also vary the SV a bit more in places to spice things up a bit since it's such a long map. I can't really find anywhere else to change SV because the song remains the same throughout it.
Overall, I think it is very fun to play and I will trying for that FC when it's ranked XD. Your mapping style with the jumps is very similar to mine, which is pretty cool, but I would watch out for the stacks a bit. You sort of overdo them at times and it makes it less fun or unpredictable at times. Most of the stacks you pointed out were fine to me since that's how I intended it to be, but I did change some of them.
Good luck!
MouseEz wrote:
Hello! form queues
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CR = Cricle
SR = SliderMoonlight SPOILER00:16:727 (1,2,1) - how about this? 1 or 2 I like it the way it currently is.
00:21:692 (1) -
The current rhythm I have fits better.
00:20:451 (2,3) - ctrl+g I like the current way I have right now.
00:23:761 (2,3) - ctrl+g or 1 Don't really like those either, I like the way it is right now.
00:29:347 (5,6) - 1 or 2 Don't really like those either, I like this rhythm more.
00:34:727 (8,1) - ctrl+g and add CR 00:35:244 I'll think about this one, but I used the long slider here to go with the drums more.
00:41:554 (1) - Replace SR on CR Doesn't feel right to me, no change.
00:44:037 (5,6,7) - mayby? I'll think about it, but I would have to readjust a bunch of patterns then.
00:46:934 (3,4,5) - Nah, it's fine.
00:48:589 (3) - Nah, I prefer the current rhythm.
00:50:244 (3,4,5) - Don't really like it either.
00:53:554 (3) - No to this either, I like the rhythm here more.
01:00:175 (3,4,5) - Current rhythm is better to me.
01:01:830 (3) - Current rhythm is better to me.
01:03:485 (3,4,5) - I like the current rhythm.
01:05:141 (3,4,1) - No thanks, rhythm is fine here.
01:26:865 (4) - I'm going with the vocals here, no change.
01:44:244 (1,2) - Current rhythm is better to me.
01:59:141 (7,1) - SR? I don't want a slider to end on the large white tick, it would sound weird with it ending on it.
02:06:382 (3,4) - I like the rhythm here more.
02:19:623 (3,4,5) - Current rhythm I have is better to me.
02:21:278 (3) - Current rhythm is better.
02:22:934 (3,4,5) - Current rhythm is better.
02:28:934 (8,1) - mayby? I don't see why a triplet needs to go here, no change.
02:32:244 (8,1) - ^ No need for a triplet.
02:32:865 (3,4,5) - ^^^ No need, rhythm is fine.
02:34:520 (3) - ^^^^^ Rhythm is fine.
02:47:347 (1) - It wouldn't go with the pattern and rhythm I have here.
02:50:658 (1) - ^ ^
02:57:278 (1) - ^^ ^
02:59:554 (4) - No need since it goes with the vocals.
04:24:589 (7,8) - SR? No need, it's fine.
04:40:727 (5,6) - No need, the current rhythm goes with the vocals better.
04:52:313 (5,6) - SR?No need for a slider here either.
This is all what I can do
If something is not clear, please send me a PM
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod, but unfortunately it wasn't really that helpful to me. I'll keep in mind possibly the ones I marked in orange though.