[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

waduh, mau ngemod ada lagi yg nunggu di fix
ntar panggil w lagi klo udah di fix mod mereka berdua yah ^ ^

Kawawa wrote:

Mod

4K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜

Please check once again your all two diff's for hitsounds. It will be important for consistence.

[HD]
00:16:781 (16781|3,16864|2,16947|1) - I could not feel drum roll on this snap. there is 6snap only (00:16:864 - ~ 00:17:030 - )
Just please skip this drum beat. and follow the vocal in this part. and It will be good than before for playalbe and structure.
and you can consider about this part from "HD diff's mods"

00:37:085 (37085|1) - Hitsounds missing "C"

00:23:494 - If this is not intend, then you need to same consistence of hitsounds with Hard diffs.
Consider this. I will not say it again from "HD mods' please compare with HD
00:24:157 - ^same with above.
00:46:035 - ^same with above.
00:48:687 - ^same with above.
like these things.

[MX]
00:16:754 (16754|3,16809|2) - There is not 6snap drum. is here exactly 00:16:864 - ~ 00:17:030 -
sample :: http://puu.sh/mTQDP/75e80dd0ef.png

00:53:328 - ~ 00:54:488 - in this part.
I could not feel some drum roll at here. You need to change this part for drum.
consider it http://puu.sh/mTTS6/b3f2b9a175.jpg
and you have to fix your NM diff also. like this.

01:01:367 (61367|1) - Hitsounds missing "W"

01:22:499 - add at 2. it same music structure with this 00:18:853 -
and you used 2note at here. it will be same consistence for amount of note.

Good luck !

Julie wrote:

Mod

4K 1|2|3|4

[Shana' NM]

00:34:765 - Shouldn't it be 2 note here like you did here 00:24:157 - ? Due to the cymbal and a new section and mostly to make it feel different then this 00:34:433 - and this 00:37:417 - .

01:06:588 - I know your mostly trying to make it 1/1/1/2 and follow the rhythm of the drum, but this part should really be like here 00:55:980 - , the cymbal is really clear + to emphasize the begining of a new kiai.

01:15:538 - to 01:16:864 - The song isn't going more and more calm here, this is probably the easiest part to play on the whole diff (easier then some slow pace part), while it should still feel like as if it was a really important kiai part.

[Hard]

00:16:781 (16781|3,16864|2,16947|1,17030|0) - This is kinda unrankable, I understand your trying to avoid 1/6, because this is an HD and not an MX, but we mapper should always keep our map with good snapping to not ruin the song.
00:16:947 (16947|1) - This is unrankable, since the 1/6 triplet stream start here 00:16:864 - , and there is no sound at 1/4 here 00:16:947 - . So I probably suggest removing this note, and keep the rhythm 1/2.
I probably suggest deleting this 00:16:781 (16781|3) - , since like you did on your MX, you thought the stream start here 00:16:754 - , but there stream start here 00:16:864 - . At 00:16:781 - is still 1/4 and nicely snap, but it might not be good to play if you don't map the stream after.

00:17:196 (17196|2,17196|3) - I think is better if you just put one note here, since you are basically changing the song a bit with those clap hitsound. 00:17:196 - and 00:17:361 - have the same sound now because of your double clap, while in the song, the drum here 00:17:196 - isn't as loud as here 00:17:361 - . So this is a bit re-creating the song due to the hitsound xD.

00:22:831 (22831|3) - Hmm shouldn't this be a clap? Too keep your clap consistent and fit the loud drum, also to keep it consistent with your MX.

00:23:494 (23494|1) - ^.

00:23:825 (23825|0,23908|3) - Change this 00:23:908 (23908|3) - into a clap, since these 2 in the song have the same drum sound, while these 2 00:23:991 (23991|2,24074|0) - have another drum sound.

00:24:157 (24157|3,24157|1) - This is a bit tooo much! Like the reason here 00:17:196 (17196|2,17196|3) - , you are a bit modifying the song. Yes this is 00:24:157 - a new section of the song, but is a calm part, if you remove your note and listen carefully, the cymbal isn't really super loud in the song. Mostly because this is the start of a calm part, it shouldn't be having much impact, but your hitsound are way too loud!! I'm pretty sure 1 finisher would been enough, 2 fnisher should fit more for like the begining of the kiai.

00:29:295 (29295|1) - Remove this note, I don't hear any loud bass sound, which you mostly map your whistle for a louds bass, I just hear another drum sound that is here 00:29:378 - and not suggested to map of course xD.

00:29:461 (29461|2,29461|3) - I think one finisher is enough, 2 rings the ears too much, yes the sound suddendly go high in the song, but the cymbal is pretty low. So you can keep 2 notes, but 2 finish hitsound, really rings the ears too much xD.

00:32:113 (32113|3,32113|1) - Feel like there is a bit too much hitsound, not sure where the 2 clap come from, since there is no snare sound there.

00:34:185 (34185|3) - Maybe remove this? So is a better spread in rhythm with the MX, also mostly because this is really unclear to hear compare to the drum stream here 00:34:267 (34267|2,34350|1,34433|0) - , so you can keep it pretty simple for HD.

00:35:925 (35925|2,35925|0) - This part should be 2 clap due to the snare and to keep your clap consistent. Is not the same drum sound as here 00:35:593 - .

00:37:085 (37085|0,37085|1) - Shouldn't this be double clap like you did here 00:36:422 (36422|3,36422|2) - and to keep it consistent with MX?

00:38:577 (38577|2,38577|3) - Same reason as 0:35:925 (35925|2,35925|0)

00:38:245 (38245|1,38245|0,38577|2,38577|3) - ^ if you fix above, ctrl + h for the pattern, so that 00:38:245 (38245|1,38245|0) - don't have the same column then this 00:37:748 (37748|0,37748|1) - , since both should really feel different in playing.

00:41:229 (41229|0,41229|3) - 00:43:881 (43881|1,43881|0) - Same reason with 00:35:925 (35925|2,35925|0) -

00:46:035 (46035|3,46035|1,46035|2) - Wowow 3 clap is wayy too much! + You even have more then MX!

00:48:687 (48687|0,48687|3,48687|2) - and 00:49:350 (49350|0,49350|1,49350|3) - ^

00:46:035 - to 00:49:350 - To be honest I don't think you need 3 notes hit for HD, you can just make it spread better with the MX by making it 2 notes, since there isn't much impact on those part from the song either.

00:51:008 - Same reason as 00:17:196 (17196|2,17196|3) -, really suggest to just keep it one note, the snare isn't even that loud, while is super loud due to your hitsound. Even this part 00:50:676 - should have more hit then here 00:51:008 - .

00:53:494 (53494|3) - Should be a clap here for the loud drum.

00:53:743 (53743|0) - ^ Same drum as 00:53:660 (53660|1) - .

00:53:328 - + You are totally modifying the song, player will feel like there is a nice drum stream here, but the actual song don't have a stream here.
PLEASE REMOVE YOUR NOTE IN ORDER TO SEE THE PART I SPOT, because if you don't, you will hear your whistle hitsound.
00:53:411 - There is no new drum sound, only vocal change of pitch.
00:53:908 - No drum sound, overmap.
00:54:074 - No drum sound
00:54:406 - No drum sound.

Good luck !

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's 4K Mania Modding Queue
1/2/3/4

Mod | NM

00:32:113 - Ctrl + H
00:52:168 - Change patterns? 1-3 or 2-4
01:00:289 - You could open these 2-3 *pasted patterns. I see a lot of them. Dunno if intended, because latter patterns got variated
01:15:870 - 01:16:201 - 01:16:533 - 01:16:864 - Add notes for impact

Mod | HD

00:13:218 - Add note?
00:42:057 - Ctrl + H
00:42:720 - Variate pattern here!
00:47:030 - Add note?
01:06:588 - Add note
01:19:848 - Add note

Mod | MX

I see very similar patterns to HD here
00:47:030 - Add note
00:48:356 - Add note

Not pretty much to mod,
Check Ctrl + Shift + A

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Kenny . . .
here is my mod as requested on my queue
sorry for delay hhh

|1|2|3|4|

Mod

• 
  [HD]
  

1. 00:16:698 (16698|3,16781|2,16864|1,16947|0) - sebenarnya ini salah snap, harusnya cuman 1/2 tapi dibagian drum nya ada 1/6 sound, seperti ini nih fixed nya http://puu.sh/mXGeJ/6ff07f04e0.jpg Detail sekali senpai :v Arigatou -A-
   
2. 00:23:245 (23245|2,23328|3) - Ctrl G aja, flows nya lebih enakan
   
3. 00:24:488 - sampai dengan 00:32:113 - kayak nya kamu bikin rythim sendiri ? soal nya kudengar 00:25:317 (25317|2) - 00:27:969 (27969|2) - 00:30:621 (30621|0) - dan lain-lain itu nggak ada suaranya, nggak ada piano atau pun suara kick, snare, dsb . . . w saranin liat aja diff shana sebagai referensi buat diff HD mu ini Tau aja senpai :* ty~
   
4. 00:32:278 (32278|2,32527|2,32610|1) - ghost note, delete aja . . . nggak ada drum roll ataupun suara sejenis stream lainnya disana
   
5. 00:34:433 (34433|1) - pindahin ke kolom 1 lalu setelah itu tambahkan note di kolom 2, lebih balance + disana ada drum impact, jadi saran w jadikan 2 note aja sekalian (1 LN + 1 Single Note)
   
6. 00:49:019 - tambah note, ada suara drum yang sama dengan part ini 00:47:361 (47361|1,47361|0,47693|1,47693|0) - Nope, udah benar tuh kok ._.
   
7. 00:49:350 (49350|1) - pindahin ke sini 00:49:516 - kolom 3 (suara drum nya ada disana) ^
   
8. 00:49:848 - enakan begini http://puu.sh/mXGJ7/3a170244c0.jpg fokus ke drum lebih pas Udah bener tuh bos...
   
9. 00:52:499 - gini aja http://puu.sh/mXGOh/4f029aff28.jpg for better flows
   
10. l00:59:792 (59792|2,59875|1,59958|3,60041|1,60124|2,60207|0,60289|1,60372|2,60455|0,60538|2,60621|1) - dan juga 01:01:284 (61284|1,61367|2,61450|0,61533|1,61615|2,61698|0,61781|2,61864|1) - dan lain-lainnya . . . . nah stream yg kek bgitu sungguh nggak recommended, susah dijangkau (serius) bahkan menurut saya stream di diff MX mu lebih gampang daripada stream di diff HD ini wkwkwk
11. 01:07:417 (67417|2,67582|2,67748|2) - kek gini juga masalah nih, coba deh di re-arrange lagi supaya lebih mulus streamnya ^ ^
    
    [MX]
    
12. 00:16:781 (16781|3,16864|2,16947|1,17030|0) - salah snapping, coba liat lagi mod w di diff HD
    
13. 00:24:654 - 00:25:317 - 00:27:306 - 00:27:969 - 00:29:295 - 00:29:958 - 00:30:621 - wadaw, itu very low sound gan, masa dikasi 2 note juga . . . saran w sih jadikan 1 note aja, tau hapus sama sekali Sip, beberapa gua buat remap.
    
14. 00:32:610 (32610|3) - nggak ada drum, delete aja . . . setelah itu 00:32:693 (32693|2) - pindahin ke kolom 1
    
15. 00:32:693 (32693|3) - big impact, tambahin LN lagi di kolom 1 http://puu.sh/mXHke/0f48bcfb66.jpg
    
16. 00:43:549 (43549|1,43881|2) - saran w sih pindahin aja ke kolom 4 dan 1 . . . biar lebih leluasa dan balance saat mau mencet double trill disini 00:44:046 -
    
17. 00:50:510 - waduh kamu ketinggalan drum sound disini, tambahin 2 note di kolom 1 sama 3
    
18. 00:52:831 - for consistency http://puu.sh/mXHxk/9fbeb880ca.jpg
19. 00:53:328 - kek gini lebih pas http://puu.sh/mXHzw/d0ee53837f.jpg
20. oke itu aja, but saran w . . . streamnya lebih dimulusin lagi :3

i hope this can be helped . . . overall of your map, hmmm good enough
but i still feel bad at your stream in HD diff wkwkwk

OK good luck Kenny ~

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

All mods checked, thanks guys, most of the advice was accepted.

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Suzuki Konomi - CHOIR JAIL (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55980
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:CHOIR JAIL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:CHOIR JAIL (TV Size)
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:Suzuki Konomi
Creator:Kenny-sama
Version:Shana's NM
Source:黄昏乙女×アムネジア
Tags:Opening Tasogare Otome x Amnesia [Shana Lesus]
BeatmapID:824872
BeatmapSetID:376214

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
290,331.491712707182,4,3,1,40,1,0
55980,-100,4,3,1,40,0,1
79848,-100,4,3,1,40,0,0


[HitObjects]
64,192,290,128,0,455:0:0:0:0:
192,192,455,128,0,621:0:0:0:0:
320,192,621,128,0,787:0:0:0:0:
64,192,787,128,0,1118:0:0:0:0:
448,192,1118,128,0,1284:0:0:0:0:
320,192,1284,128,0,1450:0:0:0:0:
192,192,1450,128,0,1781:0:0:0:0:
448,192,1781,128,0,1947:0:0:0:0:
64,192,1947,128,0,2113:0:0:0:0:
320,192,2278,128,0,2444:0:0:0:0:
192,192,2444,128,0,2610:0:0:0:0:
64,192,2610,128,0,2776:0:0:0:0:
192,192,2776,128,0,2941:0:0:0:0:
448,192,2941,128,0,5593:0:0:0:0:
64,192,3273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,3604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,3936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,4599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,5262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,5593,128,0,8245:0:0:0:0:
448,192,5925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,6256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,6588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,6919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,7251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,7582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,7914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,8245,128,0,10897:0:0:0:0:
448,192,8577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,8908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,9240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,9571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,9903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,10234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,10566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,10897,128,0,12886:0:0:0:0:
448,192,11229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,11560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,11892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,12223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,12555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,12886,128,0,13218:0:0:0:0:
64,192,13218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,13218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,13549,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,13715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,14046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,14212,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,14709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,15041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,15207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,15538,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,15704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,15870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,15870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,16201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,16367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,16533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,16698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,16864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,17030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,17361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,17361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,17693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,17693,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,17859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,17859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,18853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,18853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,19185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19350,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,19516,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,19682,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,19848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,19848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,20013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,20345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,20510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,20510,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,20676,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,20842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,21008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,21339,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,21505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,21671,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,21836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,21836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,22002,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,22168,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22334,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,22499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,22499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,22665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,22831,128,8,23162:0:0:0:0:
320,192,23162,128,8,23494:0:0:0:0:
448,192,23494,128,8,23825:0:0:0:0:
192,192,23825,128,8,24157:0:0:0:0:
64,192,24157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,24157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,24488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,24488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,24820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,24986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,25151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,25151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,25649,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,26146,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,26312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,26477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,26477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,26809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,26975,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27472,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,27638,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27803,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,27803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,28135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28301,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,28466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,28466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,28798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28964,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29627,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,30124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30289,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,30455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,30455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,30952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,31781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,31781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,32113,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,32278,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,32444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,32776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32941,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,33107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,33273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,33604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,33936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,34102,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,34102,128,0,34433:0:0:0:0:
448,192,34433,128,8,34765:0:0:0:0:
320,192,34433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34765,128,8,35096:0:0:0:0:
192,192,34765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,35096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,35925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,36256,128,8,36422:0:0:0:0:
192,192,36422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36919,128,8,37085:0:0:0:0:
320,192,37085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,37085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,37417,128,8,37748:0:0:0:0:
320,192,37417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,37748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38908,128,8,39074:0:0:0:0:
448,192,39074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,39074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39571,128,8,39737:0:0:0:0:
448,192,39737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,39737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40069,128,8,40400:0:0:0:0:
64,192,40400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,41229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,41229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,41394,128,8,41726:0:0:0:0:
64,192,41726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,41726,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42057,128,8,42389:0:0:0:0:
64,192,42389,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,42389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42720,128,8,43052:0:0:0:0:
192,192,43052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,43052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43549,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,43549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,44046,128,8,44378:0:0:0:0:
64,192,44378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,44709,128,8,45041:0:0:0:0:
448,192,45041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,45041,128,0,45372:0:0:0:0:
448,192,45372,128,0,46035:0:0:0:0:
320,192,45372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,45704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,46035,128,8,46698:0:0:0:0:
448,192,46367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,46698,128,8,47361:0:0:0:0:
64,192,47030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,47361,128,8,48024:0:0:0:0:
192,192,47693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,48024,128,8,48687:0:0:0:0:
448,192,48356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,48687,128,8,49350:0:0:0:0:
64,192,49019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,49350,128,8,50013:0:0:0:0:
448,192,49682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50013,128,8,50676:0:0:0:0:
320,192,50345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,50676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,50676,128,8,51008:0:0:0:0:
64,192,51008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,51008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,51505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,51505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,51836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,51836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,52168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,52168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,52499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,52499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,52665,128,8,52997:0:0:0:0:
448,192,52997,128,8,53328:0:0:0:0:
320,192,53328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,53328,128,0,54323:0:0:0:0:
192,192,53660,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,53991,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,54488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,54488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54820,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,54820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55151,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55980,5,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56146,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56643,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57306,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57472,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57969,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58301,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58301,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58632,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60455,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60621,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61781,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61947,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62113,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62278,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62444,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62941,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63273,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64433,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64765,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66091,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66422,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66919,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67251,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67417,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67748,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68080,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68577,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68908,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69406,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,69571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,69571,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69737,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70069,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,70234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,70400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,70731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71229,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,71560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71726,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72720,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,73052,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,73218,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,73549,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,74709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74875,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75372,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,76201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,76533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,76864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,77196,128,8,77361:0:0:0:0:
64,192,77361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77693,128,8,77859:0:0:0:0:
448,192,77859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78190,128,8,78356:0:0:0:0:
64,192,78356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78687,128,8,78853:0:0:0:0:
192,192,78853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79185,128,8,79350:0:0:0:0:
192,192,79350,128,8,79516:0:0:0:0:
64,192,79516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79516,128,8,79848:0:0:0:0:
64,192,79848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,80179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82997,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83162,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83660,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83825,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83991,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,85151,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,85649,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85814,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85980,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86146,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,86477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,86809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87803,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87803,1,0,0:0:0:0:

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii

4k = 1~4

Click Me!

[general]Video doesn't work on shana's diff Anjir... Lupa gua :v

[shana]seems fine

[HD]00:02:941 (2941|0) - delete W
00:04:930 (4930|1) - ^ C
dkk
HS dalam 1 timing sebaikan 1 aja kecuali beda sound misal W sama F baru gpp. tapi kalo sama 1 timing mending 1 aja.

00:04:930 (4930|1) - ganti F
00:16:698 (16698|3) - jgn nge double HS dalam 1 note

00:16:809 (16809|2) - move ke 00:16:864 -
00:16:919 (16919|1) - ^ ke 00:16:947 -
00:29:129 (29129|0) - F
00:32:113 (32113|2,32113|1) - HSnya -w-
00:33:604 (33604|1,33936|3) - ganti F
00:45:704 - mising hithat
00:46:035 (46035|1) - =w=
00:47:030 - hithat
00:47:859 - ^
00:48:356 - ^

[MX]HSnya jgn lupa di fix kek HD
00:12:886 - add kick
00:13:218 (13218|1) - ganti F
00:15:870 (15870|1) - ^
00:16:809 (16809|2,16919|1) - sama kayak HD
00:45:704 - hithat'
00:47:030 - ^
00:47:859 - kick
00:48:356 - hithat

GL~

-[Apple]- wrote:

From my queue!
Lol dude just wait for bubble and qualified,Your map is near perfect,So i shoot a star for you.
(I just have a trip and without computer 30 days lol,So delayed your mod request. That's all.
good luck!

Damar-sama wrote:

Why BN are not check this map for bubble?

I gave request to some BNs but they mostly reject it :'3

erlinadewi- wrote:

Wqwqwqwq :'3

ehh? :3

jakads wrote:

Hi, Kenny-sama!
You didn't request from my queue

BUT WHO CARES

1|2|3|4|

Overall

1. BG:
2. MP3:
3. Diff Spread:
4. AIMod:
5. Hitsound:
6. Timing:
7. Etc: Why isn't this map bubbled? This map is so good

MX

1. 00:17:693 (17693|0,17693|1,17693|3) - this CAN be 2 notes... Accepted
2. 00:29:295 (29295|2) - maybe move to 00:29:378 - Accepted
3. 01:00:621 (60621|3) - Remove (with this, this part has 2 notes) The LN is for the piano sound, so rejected
4. 01:05:925 - Add 3 (Clap hitsound needs 2 notes) Accepted
5. 01:06:588 - This can be 3 notes Accepted
6. 01:17:196 - ~ 01:18:853 - Change Whistle hitsound part to 2 notes I deleted 1 each whistle note
7. 01:19:516 - Add 1 Accepted

PLEASE MAKE THIS RANKED
I'LL GIVE YOU KUDOSU Thank you so much I'll do my best to get this map ranked xD

chieftots wrote:

Good map

Scores

CHOIR JAIL (Shana's NM)

CHOIR JAIL (HD)

CHOIR JAIL (MX)

Thanks for your testplay

jakads wrote:

oh, and how about moving this to Pending?
You can select Pending when you're uploading it

Damar-sama wrote:

Why BN are not check this map for bubble?