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Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou

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-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
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-GriM-
zank uuu
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Fixed everything from Battle and Arphi's mods. Thank yoou so much guys, I hope I addressed the things as suggested. 

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TitleUnicode:ヒャダインのじょーじょーゆーじょー
Artist:Hyadain
ArtistUnicode:ヒャダイン
Creator:-GriM-
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:日常
Tags:Nichijou nichijo opening second 2 前山田健一  Maeyamada Kenichi  atsuro shiro happyrocket88 odaril
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Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro

Smokeman wrote:

[Shiro's Normal]

Why 1,6 sv ? It fits the song (arguably) and allows for 1/2 spacing without overlapping.

00:01:138 (3,4,5) - put those on a line? okay
00:02:938 (1,2) - 200bpm single taps on a normal.. damn son chill. I think this overlap and the 1/2 snap is WAY too much for a normal
00:08:338 (2,3,4,5) - damn.. same
Both are fine.
00:10:138 (8) - NC ? It geta bit too red :^) Oh, good catch!
00:12:838 (2,4) - move the note and sldier end a bit more apart from 00:11:938 (10) - so they dont "nearly touch" they don't nearly touch o.o
00:14:938 (1) - almost doubled the apsurdly high spacing... Considering the context, the new combo and the rhythm, this is fine to play and read. I've had newer players test this and none of them missed this part.
00:26:938 (1) - same ^
00:35:938 (4,1) - cant you make the transition a bit more natural. Jumping from 2/1 to 1/2 is quite a hit for a new player.. hmm okay I'll change this part a bit
00:38:938 (1,2) - this aswell.. This will be fine, don't worry!
01:05:038 (4) - move this a bit more away from 01:04:438 (2) - done
01:04:738 (3,4,5) - sudden ds increas on a nearly linear patrn... ok changed it
01:21:538 - you could put here and here 01:21:838 - notes for those aggressice vocals I purposely ignored those two notes to give players a short break and separate the two parts of the outro more obviously
01:24:538 (1) - thats a cheap spinner... yeah, but it works, so does that really make it cheap !

i thought normals should be this boring thing for newer players to get used to this game...
being creative doesnt mean breaking the norm... actually that's more or less the definition of being creative

Arphimigon wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:788 (5,6) - These feel really out of place, this 00:08:338 (2,3,4,5) - makes sense but skipping the sound at 00:09:388 - and mapping to sounds which are hardly noticeable here is offputting hmm changed
i am fox
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ヒャダインのじょーじょーゆーじょー
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ArtistUnicode:ヒャダイン
Creator:-GriM-
Version:Shiro's Advanced
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-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-
All fixed, update coming up!
Edit: Updated!
Kuki
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki
y thou
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-
what xd
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
M4M ayyyy

- General :

  1. So disable Countdown and Widescreen Support on all diff. You did it only on Normal.

- Rocket's Normal :

  1. AR2 for a 200BPM Normal ? Really ? Pls no and the gap with Advanced (AR6) is gigantic. AR4 minimum thx~
  2. 00:08:938 (4,2) - I don't know if a stack would be bad or not for a Normal, but looks awful like that ;w;
  3. 00:42:538 - Stop the spinner here would make more sense, and you can map 00:43:738 - this part, who is better than restart from the middle of the measure.
  4. 00:59:338 (1) - Why is it different from 01:02:938 (3,4) - when both are alike for song rhythm ?

- Shiro's Advanced :

  1. I guess your inconsistent spacing at some places is on purpose so won't point it out.
  2. 00:09:838 (7) - Could you move it to 172:260 ? A rounded flow works better here.
  3. Not a big fan of aesthetic except on kiai but why not.

- Atsuro's Hard :

  1. Looks good~

- Collab Light Insane :

  1. 00:01:738 (1,2,3,4) - Could you avoid to make them overlap ? Looks bad.
  2. 00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you keep spacing consistent on this part ? the "NANANA" are not progressive or show something who suggest an increasing spacing. Keep the jump for 00:05:188 (6,1) - tho.
  3. 00:08:188 (2) - Same, just up it at 100:156 to adjust spacing.
  4. 00:09:388 (6,7,1) - Flow is not the best here, because you go down, and just after goes up with 00:09:838 (1) - , so the movement could be improved.
  5. 00:14:188 (2) - Move it to 196:183, works a lot better. If you do, move a little 00:14:938 (1,2) - (and blanket correctly them too).
  6. 00:21:388 (4,2) - Stack ?
  7. 00:30:388 (3) - CTRL+G and move it to 229:361.
  8. 00:32:938 (1) - Could be more interesting by doing 2 reverses sliders here http://puu.sh/mW05a/af4dd95067.jpg .
  9. 00:47:188 (4,1) - Spacing inconsistent with similar pattern before 00:44:788 (5) - .
  10. 00:51:538 (1,3) - Stack ?

- Insane :

  1. 00:18:988 (3) - http://puu.sh/mW0k8/8124e36755.jpg to improve flow.
  2. 00:30:988 (4) - Why doing a so inconsistent spacing here ? Adjust it pls.
  3. 00:31:438 (7,8) - And why a such low one here when the song suggest the total opposite ?
  4. 01:23:788 (4,5) - ^

Aesthetic on both Insane could still be improved imo. Hope it helps. Good luck.
Mukyu~
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-

Nozhomi wrote:

M4M ayyyy

- General :

  1. So disable Countdown and Widescreen Support on all diff. You did it only on Normal.

- Rocket's Normal :

  1. AR2 for a 200BPM Normal ? Really ? Pls no and the gap with Advanced (AR6) is gigantic. AR4 minimum thx~ going to bump up to AR 4 myself, Happy will do the rest
  2. 00:08:938 (4,2) - I don't know if a stack would be bad or not for a Normal, but looks awful like that ;w;
  3. 00:42:538 - Stop the spinner here would make more sense, and you can map 00:43:738 - this part, who is better than restart from the middle of the measure.
  4. 00:59:338 (1) - Why is it different from 01:02:938 (3,4) - when both are alike for song rhythm ?

- Shiro's Advanced :

  1. I guess your inconsistent spacing at some places is on purpose so won't point it out.
  2. 00:09:838 (7) - Could you move it to 172:260 ? A rounded flow works better here. leads to a overlap
  3. Not a big fan of aesthetic except on kiai but why not.

- Atsuro's Hard :

  1. Looks good~

- Collab Light Insane :

  1. 00:01:738 (1,2,3,4) - Could you avoid to make them overlap ? Looks bad. fixed
  2. 00:04:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you keep spacing consistent on this part ? the "NANANA" are not progressive or show something who suggest an increasing spacing. Keep the jump for 00:05:188 (6,1) - tho. fixed
  3. 00:08:188 (2) - Same, just up it at 100:156 to adjust spacing. fixed
  4. 00:09:388 (6,7,1) - Flow is not the best here, because you go down, and just after goes up with 00:09:838 (1) - , so the movement could be improved. fixed
  5. 00:14:188 (2) - Move it to 196:183, works a lot better. If you do, move a little 00:14:938 (1,2) - (and blanket correctly them too). fixed i think
  6. 00:21:388 (4,2) - Stack ? nah, it should be ok
  7. 00:30:388 (3) - CTRL+G and move it to 229:361. fixed
  8. 00:32:938 (1) - Could be more interesting by doing 2 reverses sliders here http://puu.sh/mW05a/af4dd95067.jpg . alright
  9. 00:47:188 (4,1) - Spacing inconsistent with similar pattern before 00:44:788 (5) - . fixed
  10. 00:51:538 (1,3) - Stack ?
nah

- Insane :

  1. 00:18:988 (3) - http://puu.sh/mW0k8/8124e36755.jpg to improve flow. fixed
  2. 00:30:988 (4) - Why doing a so inconsistent spacing here ? Adjust it pls. made a bit better
  3. 00:31:438 (7,8) - And why a such low one here when the song suggest the total opposite ? fixed
  4. 01:23:788 (4,5) - ^
fixed

Aesthetic on both Insane could still be improved imo. Hope it helps. Good luck.
Mukyu~
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Nozhomi
Addressed all your suggestions. Thank you very much! I didn't fix your issue which concerned this slider 00:59:338 (1) because those are way different. If you listen carefully the song, you might see why I decided to use a 3/1 here instead of a 2/1 slider and a note. 

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55738
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SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:ヒャダインのじょーじょーゆーじょー
Artist:Hyadain
ArtistUnicode:ヒャダイン
Creator:-GriM-
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:日常
Tags:Nichijou nichijo opening second 2 前山田健一  Maeyamada Kenichi  atsuro shiro happyrocket88 odaril
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SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
queue

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[Rocket's Normal]

00:18:538 (5) - Hitclap on the reverse arrow?

super clean

[Shiro's Advanced]

00:06:688 (4,5) - These sliders are really close which makes me aesthetically nervous... maybe just have (5) "point" at (1)?

blah

00:09:838 (7) - flows awkwardly from (6) to (1). I'd move it down a grid or two. If so, you may or may not also change the position of (2) later.

blah2

00:13:588 (4,5) - slider nazi, make (5) parallel to the end of (4)!
00:22:888 (6) - I feel like the end of this slider needs some sort of emphasis. Maybe a whistle?
00:43:738 (1,1) - YES
01:04:138 (1,2,3,4) - Looks kind of awkward; can be made better with symmetry. (4) and (1) should have the same y coordinate.

[Atsuro's Hard]

00:24:538 (1) - I might move this closer to (2). Slider overlap here might look cool
01:10:138 (1) - This can still blanket (3) and be stacked under (2) ;w;

clean

[Collab Light Insane]

00:29:938 (2,3) - It would look much nicer if you moved these down so that (2) is blanketed by (1). I have a perfect blanket when (2) is at x:262 y:176
00:33:613 (2) - Why does this start on a blue tick? Extend it by one repeat and have it start directly after (1) ends. Sounds much less awkward.
00:39:988 (1,2) - Would play better as just 3 hitcircles.
00:40:288 (3) - Make this curve in the other direction?

blah3

00:41:938 (3,4) - This isn't the right rhythm for the lyrics. This would be better:

blah4

00:50:938 (1,2,3) - It might be slightly unreadable having these go straight into 1/3, maybe make these a repeat slider?
00:58:138 (1) - This should just be a straight line to match (2) and (3).
01:26:788 (5) - remove new combo

[Insane]

00:09:238 (1) - add clap
00:09:838 (4) - add clap to slider head
00:14:638 (6) - Should be spaced further away from (5) to keep consistency.
00:16:438 (2) - add clap
00:17:638 (2) - add clap to slider head
00:18:838 (2) - add clap
00:33:538 (9) - The reverse arrow point needs to be moved down a few grids so this slider is perfectly in line with the stream
00:41:938 (3,4) - You miss out on several beats in the lyrics.
00:50:938 (1,2,3) - Same argument as in Collab Light Insane.
01:02:038 (3) - Remake this so it blankets (4)
01:10:588 (4) - Space this so it's both a) further away from (3) and b) equally spaced to (1)
01:13:738 (1,3) - Why not just make (3) parallel to (1)?
01:17:639 (2,3) - consider individually using ctrl+g on these

---

fun song. GL

-SMIC
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-

SuperMICrophone wrote:

queue

---

[Rocket's Normal]

00:18:538 (5) - Hitclap on the reverse arrow? checked this out myself, doesnt found very good.

super clean

[Shiro's Advanced]

00:06:688 (4,5) - These sliders are really close which makes me aesthetically nervous... maybe just have (5) "point" at (1)?

blah

00:09:838 (7) - flows awkwardly from (6) to (1). I'd move it down a grid or two. If so, you may or may not also change the position of (2) later.

blah2

00:13:588 (4,5) - slider nazi, make (5) parallel to the end of (4)!
00:22:888 (6) - I feel like the end of this slider needs some sort of emphasis. Maybe a whistle?
00:43:738 (1,1) - YES
01:04:138 (1,2,3,4) - Looks kind of awkward; can be made better with symmetry. (4) and (1) should have the same y coordinate.

[Atsuro's Hard]

00:24:538 (1) - I might move this closer to (2). Slider overlap here might look cool
01:10:138 (1) - This can still blanket (3) and be stacked under (2) ;w;

clean

[Collab Light Insane]

00:29:938 (2,3) - It would look much nicer if you moved these down so that (2) is blanketed by (1). I have a perfect blanket when (2) is at x:262 y:176 ok, fixed
00:33:613 (2) - Why does this start on a blue tick? Extend it by one repeat and have it start directly after (1) ends. Sounds much less awkward. my mistake, must've messed it up when editing
00:39:988 (1,2) - Would play better as just 3 hitcircles. ok.
00:40:288 (3) - Make this curve in the other direction? alright, fixed.

blah3

00:41:938 (3,4) - This isn't the right rhythm for the lyrics. This would be better: fixed

blah4

00:50:938 (1,2,3) - It might be slightly unreadable having these go straight into 1/3, maybe make these a repeat slider? nah. its fine, trying to keep consistency with the pattern
00:58:138 (1) - This should just be a straight line to match (2) and (3). ok.
01:26:788 (5) - remove new combo okee

[Insane]

00:09:238 (1) - add clap fixed
00:09:838 (4) - add clap to slider head fixed
00:14:638 (6) - Should be spaced further away from (5) to keep consistency. fixed
00:16:438 (2) - add clap fixed
00:17:638 (2) - add clap to slider head fixed
00:18:838 (2) - add clap fixed
00:33:538 (9) - The reverse arrow point needs to be moved down a few grids so this slider is perfectly in line with the stream fixed
00:41:938 (3,4) - You miss out on several beats in the lyrics. not really
00:50:938 (1,2,3) - Same argument as in Collab Light Insane. same as what i said above.
01:02:038 (3) - Remake this so it blankets (4) meh, made a bit better but I thought it was ok
01:10:588 (4) - Space this so it's both a) further away from (3) and b) equally spaced to (1) fixed
01:13:738 (1,3) - Why not just make (3) parallel to (1)? fixed
01:17:639 (2,3) - consider individually using ctrl+g on these nah

---

fun song. GL

-SMIC
thanks for mod
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Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Atsuro

SuperMICrophone wrote:

00:24:538 (1) - I might move this closer to (2). Slider overlap here might look coolIt's fine, i prefer not to overlap since i don't do that anywhere else on the map
01:10:138 (1) - This can still blanket (3) and be stacked under (2) ;w; Would be a big jump to the next slider though
Thanks! But no changes for now
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-
All mods applied!
Last edited by -GriM- , edited 1 time in total.
Kuki
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki
oh boy
Nerova Riuz GX
1,413 posts
Joined April 2012
Nerova Riuz GX
lol

[rocket is happy]
00:50:954 - unsnapped green line xd
and AIMOD IS WHINING


[shiro]
00:00:838 (2,3) - the only 1.3x DS so im going to tell you ruin that rectangle
00:02:938 (1,3) - hard to read, my tester aka my poor young sister failed on catching that for around 5 times. probably AR6.5 instead of 6 because it's "advanced"
00:07:288 (5) - dat overlap plz

what a unique advanced diff lol
but tbh people nowadays are focusing on clicking more than moving in lower diffs, this is another kind of mind blast in 2016 lol

[atsuro]
HP5 or 4.5 is recommended, Advanced is 3 and Light Insane is 6, probably do something for the gapppppp
And you might need to delete some NCs, because you won't need that much HP heal lol

00:14:338 (2,3,1) - balance their actual distance
00:34:588 (3) - quite strange. it is the only 1/1 long slider in this section, there's an obvious sound on 00:34:738 - . Fill that place with something for the consistency?

[collab thingy]
00:09:088 (5) - consider making it into a straight slider so your moves won't be too "wiggle"
00:24:388 (1,2,1) - questionable NCs here, seems like 00:24:388 (1) - doesn't deserve one, it got nothing supported. BUT, if you don't want to ruin that triangle pattern, that's probably okay (but kinda like spam tbh)
00:29:338 (1,2) - this flow is not really comfortable. you don't have to blanket them.
00:32:638 (5,6,1) - This flow is pretty strange, your movement got forced to change its direction. probably add Ctrl+G on 00:32:638 (5,6) - and adjust their places, so you'll get a smooth back-and-forth jump
00:35:038 (5) - move this circle down so you can get a saturated flex pattern
image
00:39:538 (3,4,5,1) - I'm actually wondering why you didn't balance their spacing lol
00:44:488 (4,5) - personally i think stacking them together is a nice idea (though you may have to adjust its context)
00:53:738 (3,1,2,3) - The 3 obtuse can't really represent something here...at least you should do something different on 00:53:938 (1) - .

[]
I'd like to continue on modding insane but somehow i stopped.
I feel the patterns/flows have a huge space on improving, and some of them do appear in light insane (iirc i did mention them above)

[]
gl
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
fixed all! Thanks Nerova o.o7

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ヒャダインのじょーじょーゆーじょー
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ArtistUnicode:ヒャダイン
Creator:-GriM-
Version:Rocket's Normal
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-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-
[collab thingy]
00:09:088 (5) - consider making it into a straight slider so your moves won't be too "wiggle" okee
00:24:388 (1,2,1) - questionable NCs here, seems like 00:24:388 (1) - doesn't deserve one, it got nothing supported. BUT, if you don't want to ruin that triangle pattern, that's probably okay (but kinda like spam tbh) removed nc on (1)
00:29:338 (1,2) - this flow is not really comfortable. you don't have to blanket them. fixed i guess
00:32:638 (5,6,1) - This flow is pretty strange, your movement got forced to change its direction. probably add Ctrl+G on 00:32:638 (5,6) - and adjust their places, so you'll get a smooth back-and-forth jump fixed
00:35:038 (5) - move this circle down so you can get a saturated flex pattern nah
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00:39:538 (3,4,5,1) - I'm actually wondering why you didn't balance their spacing lol fixed
00:44:488 (4,5) - personally i think stacking them together is a nice idea (though you may have to adjust its context) okay. foxed
00:53:738 (3,1,2,3) - The 3 obtuse can't really represent something here...at least you should do something different on 00:53:938 (1) - . okay

thanks for mod
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce
just from looking though, the map looks pretty well made. Don't expect a miracle :(

[Rocket's Normal]

A little bit of a nazi suggestion, but when looking at this slider 00:14:938 (1) - I realised that the first curve was much sharper than the other one, I would make it more consistent just so it looks nicer.

01:05:338 (3) - I dislike the last two curves on this slider, they feel jagged and don't really flow off well to the next slider, I would recommend moving the white anchors from the 2nd and 3rd curve.

2nd curve anchor: (X: 360 Y: 244)
3rd curve anchor: (X: 308 Y:288)

Nicely laid out map, love the blankets. Professionally made normal, good job!

[Shiro's Advanced]

The SV is relation to the distance snapping is a bit extreme in terms of their respective ratios, I would look into it (:

00:02:938 (1,2,3,4) - I feel the flow is a bit forced here, I would either move slider 2 up a little to compensate for the flow or make the sliders more circular to allow room to flow.

I believe this example would provide nicer flow, just be sure to change the slider in the previous combo stack to accommodate for these changes.
Blanket

01:05:338 (5) - Why not add another white anchor to the first instance of a curve like so? I believe it will flow nicer into the part with the red anchors.

Curve

01:19:138 (5,6) - Why is this stacked, I don't particularly hear a part in the music where it should warrant such? :S

Nice map, I love the use of creative sliders! Plays well!

[Atsuro's Hard]

00:10:738 (3) - I feel this slider breaks the flow of the previous slider and note combination, I would Ctrl+G this slider, I believe it will just work better overall

00:22:138 (1) - Moving this slider to more more vertically aligned would create a nicer flow for the curvature of the slider before it.

Looks well made and plays well with the beats of the song! Cool map!

[Collab Light Insane]

00:01:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why does the DS choose to randomly jump. If you want emphasis on this part the music grows gradually, not suddenly. I would either keep the DS the same or make all the notes gradually increase in DS spacing.

00:02:638 (6,1) - I believe it would look better if you copy-paste the sliders in order to make a nicer transition and better overall look.

00:02:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - I believe the flow of this part can be drastically improved by looking at how the previous slider of one-another effect what is going to happen. I will give a practical example involving said sliders. For notes 2 and 3 there appears to be a conflict involving what has been done for slider 1, the slider is directly flowing into the 2nd hitcircle, and then for slider 3 it appears to be disregarding that pattern that has just been initiated. Now if we take that into consideration I made an example of what could be done:

Note Combo (1 to 4)
Last Slider I couldn't fit on lol

00:07:738 (1) - It is sort of a matter of my personal preference, but I dislike these kind of sliders, I believe the curvature should be symmetrical on both sides to compliment the cursor flow more nicely.

00:23:488 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - The notes don't actually increase in a specific structure throughout, I don't know if this was intended. However, if you look at (00:23:788 (3,3) - ) you can see that they don't actually increase as much as the other two.

00:25:588 (6) - I believe this curves a little too much to add proper flow from the previous note, I would make it curve half as much as it does now roughly.

00:29:338 (1,2) - These two sliders do not flow well with one another, the cursor is forced to be dragged left in order to attain a successful hit on this slider, I believe it should take into regard the previous sliders orientation and how it has ended. Something like this would do better justice imo:

Sliders


00:30:388 (3) - I would blanket the end of this slider inside note 2 as a nice finish.

00:44:488 (4,5) - You've stacked this in relation with the music, fair enough. Although, looking further on this appears to only be a one off thing, I would make this pattern idea more consistent if you want it to have real ground.

01:08:038 (2,3) - Curve slider 3 more in order to blanket the end of slider 2, I believe it will look better aesthetically.

01:11:338 (1,2) - Copypaste one of these sliders for a more consistent effect due to the music not having any extreme changes.

01:14:938 (2,3) - Revise this blanket. It's askew to the left quite a bit.

If I am honest, I would say this needs to be checked a few more times before it is ready to be ranked. Good luck though

[Insane]

00:06:988 (3) - I would move this to the right more to have an nicer flow, try: (X: 460 Y:140)

00:10:138 (1) - Add a finish?

00:14:938 (1,2) - How about making this a blanket, I think it will make it look much better in terms of how it looks in play.

00:16:888 (4,5,6) - I believe making the 4th note start above the slider would compliement the way in which the slider is actually indicating to go, which is upwards.

00:25:288 (5,1) - ^^

00:35:338 (1,2) - Making these the same slider would give opportunity for it to be realised as a blanket, I think it would work better if you considered doing this.

Overall, I believe this could do with a few checks to make sure sliders are properly orientated as there are quite a few instances in which blankets are initialised but they aren't exactly perfect. I would try and make sure they're as close as they can be, (I don't request them to be completely perfect, just make sure they're somewhat close to it).

Quality map. It has real aspiration, just maybe a few more mods.

Good luck! <3
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-
going to do this tommorow thanks for mod
i agree with the more mods part, will probaly get like 3-5 more before we start focusing on bn
Star Stream
2,031 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
m4m

[Normal]
00:34:138 - I would not make break time on this short map

[Advanced]
00:04:738 (6) - 1/1 slider would be easier to read
00:07:288 (5) - no repeat arrow would be easier to read the next 00:08:338 (2,3,4,5) - imo
00:23:338 - ~ maybe add some notes here?
00:38:638 - add a circle here?
00:56:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd put notes like this
SPOILER
00:59:788 (2) - nazi, (356,187)
01:21:238 (4) - maybe add an arrow

[Hard]
I recommend using ar7, I thought like 'oh, it must be Insane diff' before seeing the diffname
I'm afarid to call it 'Hard', but good map.

[Insane]
00:05:188 (7) - I highly recommend placing this note near 00:04:438 (2) - , also new combos for that confusing pattern
00:10:888 (4) - ctrl+g would be better and fun to play
00:19:438 (5,6,1) - sorry but they're terrible to play
to make them better, ctrl+g 00:19:438 (5,6) - and put 00:19:588 (6) - somewhere like end of 00:18:988 (3) -

the Insane diff needs more works I think, other diffs are fine
but the gap between Advanced and Hard is quite big (at least I think so)
please consider adding one more diff between them
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-
taking a break from mapping, hope you guys understand
mods should be done sometime soon i hope
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HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Star Stream wrote:

[Normal]
00:34:138 - I would not make break time on this short map I know, but the song is quite intese from the beginning till end so I thought a mini break of 6 seconds would hurt no one.

[ Space ] wrote:

just from looking though, the map looks pretty well made. Don't expect a miracle :(

[Rocket's Normal]

A little bit of a nazi suggestion, but when looking at this slider 00:14:938 (1) - I realised that the first curve was much sharper than the other one, I would make it more consistent just so it looks nicer. ayyy. ;w; It's not that noticeable while you're playing it though. Will change if someone else complains.

01:05:338 (3) - I dislike the last two curves on this slider, they feel jagged and don't really flow off well to the next slider, I would recommend moving the white anchors from the 2nd and 3rd curve.

2nd curve anchor: (X: 360 Y: 244)
3rd curve anchor: (X: 308 Y:288) A D J U S T E D!

Nicely laid out map, love the blankets. Professionally made normal, good job! owo thank you very much for your words! >u</
the train does Chuuu chuuuu
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Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Since you and Asagi doing collab light insane, adding collab collaboration in tags

No Kudosu!
-GriM-
181 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
-GriM-
Thanks alot Kitty!
I'm so bored of osu right now, I apologize but I promise this will not be in graveyard any time soon!
mod time son
Space's mod: Everything accepted on Insane, how ever all were rejected on shiro's... sorry ;p light insane mod will be done tommorow EDIT: all accepted on light insane thanks for mods!
Star Stream's mod (hype): all applied for insane. all applied for advance except the first, third, fifth, and sixth thing pointed out. thanks both of you for the mods!
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Atsuro

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

lollol xd

[atsuro]
HP5 or 4.5 is recommended, Advanced is 3 and Light Insane is 6, probably do something for the gapppppp okk hp5
And you might need to delete some NCs, because you won't need that much HP heal lol Too lazy for that, i'll leave the nc pattern

00:14:338 (2,3,1) - balance their actual distance Ok
00:34:588 (3) - quite strange. it is the only 1/1 long slider in this section, there's an obvious sound on 00:34:738 - . Fill that place with something for the consistency? I'm mapping to the vocals here and yeah, it's the only part where a 1/1 slider fits

[ Space ] wrote:

[Atsuro's Hard]

00:10:738 (3) - I feel this slider breaks the flow of the previous slider and note combination, I would Ctrl+G this slider, I believe it will just work better overall The break in flow is intended to emphasize the finish sound there

00:22:138 (1) - Moving this slider to more more vertically aligned would create a nicer flow for the curvature of the slider before it. I don't get what you mean here D:

Looks well made and plays well with the beats of the song! Cool map!
@Starstream Ar7 is too low imo, considering shiro's advanced is a bit hard too i think it fits well on the spread

Thanks all for modding

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Title:Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou
TitleUnicode:ヒャダインのじょーじょーゆーじょー
Artist:Hyadain
ArtistUnicode:ヒャダイン
Creator:-GriM-
Version:Atsuro's Hard
Source:日常
Tags:Nichijou nichijo opening second 2 前山田健一  Maeyamada Kenichi  atsuro shiro happyrocket88 odaril asagi collab collaboration
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