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Senritsu & Xinely - and I'm home

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Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年12月30日 at 14:42:09

Artist: Senritsu & Xinely
Title: and I'm home
Source: 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ
Tags: Puella Magi Madoka Magica Kitamura Eri Nonaka Ai 喜多村英梨 野中藍 im collab
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4642kb
Play Time: 02:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.67 stars, 333 notes)
  2. Insane (3.59 stars, 401 notes)
  3. Normal (1.63 stars, 203 notes)
Download: Senritsu & Xinely - and I'm home
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Credit to Sharlo for the new mp3 (2015/12/24)

Collab mapset with Xinely:
00:00:737 - to 00:48:737 - : me
00:48:737 - to 01:54:017 - : Xinely
01:54:017 - to end : me
Last edited by Karen , edited 24 times in total.
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
害羞
Senritsu
2,197 posts
Joined October 2011
Senritsu
Phone quality ftw
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
又秀恩爱
BigEarsMau
786 posts
Joined June 2015
BigEarsMau
Hi there, Karen
Came here for an ordinary M4M
Normal and Hard are fine imo

Alright, let's check.....

[General]
Check AIMod. There are problems with the tags

Also, add "cover" to the tags since this is a cover song

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:467 (2) - Try to blanket this circle with 00:00:747 (1) so it flows better
  2. 00:36:027 (2) - Blanket this with 00:35:307 (1)
  3. 01:50:667 (2) - Blanket this with 01:49:947 (1) to make the spacing consistent for 01:50:907 (3,4,5) and for better readability and flow
  4. 01:59:787 (1) - You can stack this above for 02:00:267 (3) so it will be much more easier to read
That's all I can find. Overall, this map is pretty well-made, so I didn't find many problems

Good luck in being ranked :)
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
[Normal]
  1. 00:57:147 - 01:04:827 - Consider adding a note here. It feels pretty empty with the 1/1 patterns after this.
  2. 01:17:547 (1) - Missing Finish? (Check for Hard too)
  3. 00:47:787 (7,1) - 01:53:067 (1,2) - Combo inconsistency.
[Hard]
  1. 00:36:987 (5) - Check if this Clap was a mistake.
  2. 01:00:027 (5,1) - Unlike the second part of this first kiai section, this kind of 1.5x jump didn't appeared. Take 00:50:667 (1) - 00:52:587 (1) - 00:58:347 (1) - 01:01:947 (1) for example. They do not have a jump unlike 01:06:027 (1) - 01:07:947 (1) - 01:09:867 (1). Removing the jump of 01:00:267 (1) and maintaining a consistent spacing is what I highly recommend for pattern organization.
  3. 01:56:667 (2,3) - 01:57:627 (4,1) - This jump felt quite excessive considering this difficulty as a "Hard". Moreover, these massive jump appearing nearly in a row didn't felt appropriate enough in this difficulty and the overall spacing.
  4. Considering the spread, this hard could've been a little bit more easier, but this is just my opinion.
[Insane]
  1. Check your tags.
  2. 00:15:867 (1,1,2) - This combo setting feels pretty weird after the spinner. I personally believe starting the combo from (2) is more natural by ending the previous pattern at 00:16:107.
  3. 01:03:387 (6,7) - Personally this decision of stacking seemed to ignore a potential flow. Just a stack here didn't felt interesting enough compared to the music.
  4. 01:10:587 (2,3) - This decrease in spacing wasn't effective considering a consistently low distance starts to appear after 01:11:787 (1). You may want to increase this spacing to make the decreased spacing after the actual change in music more effective.
  5. 02:05:547 (1,2) - This was the only 3/4 rhythm pattern appearing in this map. Do you really think this part of the music suits that rhythm perfectly? I don't think so, and changing to an ordinary 1/2 beat is what I highly recommend. It is pretty hard to understand as something "variation" in the current stance since it's pretty much a different rhythm compared to the overall rhythms. If you really do prefer the 1/4 of 02:05:907, then please also make 01:00:267 (1) - 02:20:907 (1) - similarly to form a variation based on consistency.
  6. 02:32:067 (8,9,10) - I thought this stream was intended to be curvy. This lenient part doesn't look nice for me whatever you've intended currently.
Fine map.
Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from M4M from Hinely's queue

What pretty voices //v//

General
  1. Uhh I think your timing is a little bit off; try adjusting it by -25 ms, i.e. your red uninherited timing point should be at 722
Normal
  1. 00:09:867 (3) - In my opinion, the downbeat should be clickable, e.g. something like the pattern below. There're probably different ways you can go about changing this, but yeah I think a clickable downbeat here would be better
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:427 (5) - I'd fix up the curve on this slider so that it blankets the (1) more nicely; nearly there, but not quite
  3. 00:42:747 - I think there's a pretty distinct beat here; maybe you can make 00:42:507 (6) a 1/2 slider or add in a circle here?
  4. 00:58:827 (5) - You could potentially make this blanket 00:59:787 (6) if you want. What you have is also fine, but idk, maybe the blanket'll be more nicer?
  5. 01:27:867 (6) - I think this blanket is a little bit off
  6. 01:40:107 (6) - I think this blanket is a little off as well
  7. 01:54:027 (2) - Start the new combo here instead of at 01:53:067 (1); not only does the new phrase start at the (2), but it's also inconsistent with what you did at 00:47:787 (7,1)
  8. 02:02:427 - Maybe add a circle here too? Pretty strong beat here in my opinion
Hard
  1. 00:26:667 (3) - Is this supposed to blanket 00:27:147 (4)? Because it's a little off, in my opinion; you could make the blanket neater - that is, if it is a blanket lol
  2. 01:26:187 (3) - I think making this blanket 01:26:907 (4) would be nicer visually
  3. 01:43:467 (4,5) - ^; I'm not sure if the (4) is blanketing the (5), but I think making it so would be nicer visually; if it already is, then you can make it a little nicer, because I think the angle of the blanket is off-
  4. 01:48:507 - In my opinion, I don't think you should skip this offbeat; it feels oddly segmented. Maybe add a circle here stacked with 01:48:267 (1), or make (1) a 1/2 slider? Either way I don't think you should ignore this offbeat
  5. 01:55:947 (1) - I think this blanket is a little bit off as well; just a little bit too curved near the slider end
  6. 02:09:027 - You skipped a drum beat here; maybe you could use a 1/4 repeat slider similar to 02:08:187 (3)?
  7. 02:32:067 - I think there's another drum beat here?
Insane
  1. 00:19:947 (1) - In my opinion, flipping this slider and having it slide in the other direction would help with flow better, but what you have is also fine, so you don't really have to take this suggestion
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:667 (3) - I'd split up this 1/1 slider; there's a pretty distinct beat at 00:26:907 that you skipped over
  3. 00:55:467 (3,4) - In my opinion, having these as circles works, but makes this section slows down the pace of the chorus a little bit; maybe make these 1/2 sliders?
  4. 01:48:507 - Same thing as I mentioned in Hard, I don't think you should skip this offbeat
  5. 01:53:067 (1) - Why not use a pattern like 00:47:787 (1,2)?
  6. 02:09:027 - Same thing as I mentioned in Hard, I think you missed a drumbeat here
  7. 02:33:867 (5) - Similar to what I mentioned in Normal, I think the downbeat on 02:34:347 should be clickable, since it's pretty strong and distinct. You also ended up skipping a vocal note at 02:34:107,so yeah- many ways you can fix this; one suggestion is in the spoilerbox below
    SPOILER
    for context, the (5) in the image is at 02:33: 867
--
Hope this helps! ;)
Owntrolf
546 posts
Joined December 2013
Owntrolf
Crap I dont really like this cover as much as the nagi one :<
I died at 01:36:987 -

  • Normal

    00:36:027 (2) - Maybe make this curve upwards
    00:53:307 (2) - I like curves
    00:58:827 (5) - Maybe remove the middle point and rotate about -30 degrees clockwise
    01:41:547 (2) - Maybe change this to 2 1/1 sliders then 1 circle
    01:54:027 (2,3,4) - ^
    02:02:667 (2) - Replace with 1/2 slider starting at 02:02:427 - ?

  • Hard

    00:05:307 (2) - Going to rage about blankets
    00:11:067 (4,5) - Slider first then circle to match bells?
    00:30:747 (3,4,5) - Better triangles?
    00:36:027 (2,3) - I still like 1/1 sliders better
    00:59:307 (3) - Blanketrage
    01:04:827 (2,3) - Circle first then slider?
    01:16:347 (2,3) - Swap positions so that the slider starts on the "tai" similar to 01:15:627 (1) -
    01:17:547 (1) - Move spinner slightly over so you could fit a note here?
    01:43:467 (4) - Rageblanket
    01:57:627 (4,1) - That jump distance seems pretty far
    02:06:267 (3,4,5) - Maybe replace with 2 1/2 sliders
    02:32:187 (5) - This sounds like it should belong at 02:31:947 -

  • Insane



    01:29:067 (1) - Maybe use a higher curve
    01:53:547 - y u skip tenjiru (You didnt skip it in the hard)
    02:06:027 (2,3) - Swap these because the slider because I feel like su should be clickable
Last edited by Owntrolf , edited 1 time in total.
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
爷爷
Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
SPOILER
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
01:36:747 - Best part
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
BigEarsMau
fixed tag thing
nothing fixed in insane, i dont like forced blanket and i prefer my flow, about 01:59:787 (1) - this is for a pattern of 01:59:307 (4,1,3) -

Sonnyc
Hard:
00:36:987 (5) - this cap was added on purpose
other things all fixed

Doormat
about offset, hmm -25 sounds too early for me, changed to -10(737) instead
Normal:
00:42:747 - feel no need here, i'd try to avoid more 1/2 rhythms since this normal cant be harder ;w;
01:40:097 (5) - this is not blanket with anything ;w;
01:54:027 (2) - changed the previous one
02:02:427 - not so strong imo
Hard:
02:09:027 - ignored this on purpose, i feel its not important here
02:32:067 - ^
Insane:
00:19:947 (1) - i prefer mine :3. looks cool and not boring
00:26:667 (3) - i hate following vocal
02:09:027 - same with hard
Owntrolf
Normal:
00:36:027 (2) - it will be off-screen or look weird
01:54:027 (2,3,4) - uhh cant get your meaning
02:02:667 (2) -the vocal isnt strong 02:02:417 - here
Hard:
00:11:297 (5,6) - i like this pattern :3
00:36:737 (4) - following this
02:06:267 (3,4,5) - waa why, cant see the difference
Insane:
01:53:547 - changed 00:47:777 (1) - for consistency
02:06:027 (2,3) - hmm feel not so necessary
thx for mods
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
rip me too no time to reply, 3/4 fixed, 1/4 rest are about i prefer my own mapping style, thanks :D

http://puu.sh/lnBr5/2b8b32000b.rar
Owntrolf
546 posts
Joined December 2013
Owntrolf
I just looked at the Karen reply and im like lul i dont know what im looking at anymore
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
lit120
i literally have no idea what i am doing now, cuz why not?

watch this replay first before you start to fix some stuff below http://puu.sh/lujS8/90ff3228dd.osr (it's insane diff. gotta mod this diff only)

[Hitsound Stuff]
  1. drum-hitnormal is likely for "finish" :/. so you better change the name to soft-hitfinish2
  2. try this (change the name of the hitsound if you accept this)
  3. if you don't accept it from above, try to use whistle on those pianos after the intro part. same goes to 01:21:377 - . ohh, the xylophone too, don't forget about that
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:177 (5) - add whistle, since it makes more sense for double hitsound (xylophone + drum)
  2. 00:08:897 (2,3,4,5) - i heard a drum here, so use clap (well it is soft to loud. you know the drill)
  3. 00:14:297 (1) - clap, not whistle
  4. 00:30:857 (6) - this doesn't follow anything, so remove this note
  5. 00:31:217 (8) - drum finish
  6. 00:33:377 (1,3) - dude, nice. almost neat blanket for me here. ALMOST
  7. 00:36:977 (5) - is there a drum sound? nope, it's not. remove clap
  8. 00:41:537 (2,3) - ALMOST neat blanket
  9. 00:45:377 (2) - forgot to add clap here?
  10. 00:47:777 (1) - so i heard a 4 note vocal on it. try to use 2 1/2 sliders
  11. 00:54:497 (1,4) - clap for both of them, please ((1) tail)
  12. 01:03:017 (4) - i don't hear anything for this note, so remove this note
  13. 01:10:577 (2) - clap head
  14. 01:11:297 (3) - tail drum finish
  15. 01:21:137 (3) - drum finish should be fit imo
  16. 01:36:497 (6) - drum finish
  17. 01:43:937 (6) - idk if it's me or not, how about clap tail on that one?
  18. 01:47:297 (3,4) - almost neat blanket here
  19. 01:48:737 (2,3) - woops. wrong hitsound here. (2) head should be clap, not (3) head
  20. 01:53:057 (1) - same thing about the 4 vocal note
  21. 01:57:857 (1,3) - fix this blanket
  22. 02:00:257 (3) - head clap
  23. 02:07:217 (1) - clap tail
  24. 02:08:417 (5) - drum finish here
  25. 02:09:017 - i heard a note here. please add it
  26. 02:19:937 (3) - whistle with clap
  27. 02:23:777 (5) - drum finish
  28. 02:24:377 - add note here
  29. 02:36:257 (1,2) - almost neat blanket here
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

-Hakurei- wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 01:03:017 (4) - i don't hear anything for this note, so remove this note ada kok, dengerin pake 25%, headset terus volume 100% ngehe
    sama fix blanket gw
a love letter for my love
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: and I'm home.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 112467
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 48747,114027
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:and I'm home
TitleUnicode:and I'm home
Artist:Senritsu & Xinely
ArtistUnicode:Senritsu & Xinely
Creator:Karen
Version:Insane
Source:魔法少女まどか☆マギカ
Tags:Puella Magi Madoka Magica Kitamura Eri Nonaka Ai 喜多村英梨 野中藍 im collab
BeatmapID:822682
BeatmapSetID:375661

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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lit120
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lit120

Xinely wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 01:03:017 (4) - i don't hear anything for this note, so remove this note ada kok, dengerin pake 25%, headset terus volume 100% ngehe
    sama fix blanket gw
kampret, peka telinga w nanti D:
Karen
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Topic Starter
Karen
-Hakurei-

-Hakurei- wrote:

i literally have no idea what i am doing now, cuz why not?

watch this replay first before you start to fix some stuff below http://puu.sh/lujS8/90ff3228dd.osr (it's insane diff. gotta mod this diff only)

[Hitsound Stuff]
  1. drum-hitnormal is likely for "finish" :/. so you better change the name to soft-hitfinish2 can this change anything? the result is the same, i often do this :(
  2. try this (change the name of the hitsound if you accept this) i know your thought but i really dont like this hitsound and im trying to avoid using this, the default soft-whistle sound is the BEST hitsound EVER.
  3. if you don't accept it from above, try to use whistle on those pianos after the intro part. same goes to 01:21:377 - . ohh, the xylophone too, don't forget about that
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:177 (5) - add whistle, since it makes more sense for double hitsound (xylophone + drum)
  2. 00:08:897 (2,3,4,5) - i heard a drum here, so use clap (well it is soft to loud. you know the drill)
  3. 00:14:297 (1) - clap, not whistle added clap but kept whistle here as well
  4. 00:30:857 (6) - this doesn't follow anything, so remove this note
  5. 00:31:217 (8) - drum finish
  6. 00:33:377 (1,3) - dude, nice. almost neat blanket for me here. ALMOST isnt this perfect? >:(
  7. 00:36:977 (5) - is there a drum sound? nope, it's not. remove clap it fits perfectly, i dont really care what it is in bgm.
  8. 00:41:537 (2,3) - ALMOST neat blanket PERFECT
  9. 00:45:377 (2) - forgot to add clap here?
  10. 00:47:777 (1) - so i heard a 4 note vocal on it. try to use 2 1/2 sliders dont like follow vocal, i prefer speed down slider here
  11. 00:54:497 (1,4) - clap for both of them, please ((1) tail)
  12. 01:03:017 (4) - i don't hear anything for this note, so remove this note
  13. 01:10:577 (2) - clap head
  14. 01:11:297 (3) - tail drum finish
  15. 01:21:137 (3) - drum finish should be fit imo
  16. 01:36:497 (6) - drum finish
  17. 01:43:937 (6) - idk if it's me or not, how about clap tail on that one?
  18. 01:47:297 (3,4) - almost neat blanket here
  19. 01:48:737 (2,3) - woops. wrong hitsound here. (2) head should be clap, not (3) head added and kept clap on (3)
  20. 01:53:057 (1) - same thing about the 4 vocal note same thing
  21. 01:57:857 (1,3) - fix this blanket
  22. 02:00:257 (3) - head clap
  23. 02:07:217 (1) - clap tail
  24. 02:08:417 (5) - drum finish here
  25. 02:09:017 - i heard a note here. please add it i dont know why but i hate to add note here :( will consider if more ppl point out this
  26. 02:19:937 (3) - whistle with clap
  27. 02:23:777 (5) - drum finish
  28. 02:24:377 - add note here ^
  29. 02:36:257 (1,2) - almost neat blanket here

thanks ~
kouzuki_karen
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kouzuki_karen
moe/10 vocal
Milan-
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Joined August 2011
Milan-
normal
-01:04:935 (2) - this part is just 1/1 spam so adding this note on 1/2 feels unfitting. or just add it before downbeat like 02:10:455 (2,3,4) -
-01:17:655 (1) - missing finish

hard
-01:10:935 (3,4) - consider merging these into a 1/1 slider. fits the melody and also the music gets slower there
-01:16:455 (2,3) - rhythm should be the other way around .. like from 01:15:495 (4) - says "mitai mitai" so from 01:16:455 - should be a circle too
-01:17:655 (1) - missing finish


insane
-00:14:415 (1,1,2) - this rhythm is confusing, like drums is clear at 00:15:495 - but spinner finishes later. and then 00:15:975 (1) - is mapped but it's the same sound as before. it'd be better to end the spinner early or just extended it till 00:16:215 - which seems to be the best option i think
-01:35:655 (4) - 01:42:375 (1) - some hs on slider head'll sound good, right now sounds kinda empty. even a simple whistle works. same for others diffs
-02:09:135 - no triple? ;(

didnt like the amount of circle that hard has at the beginning, it doesnt allow much difference between hard and insane in terms of rhythms. the difference is just some gameplay stuff
prob at this bpm noone will care, but if you do, do.

also you could use "Puella Magi Madoka Magica" as source, as shown here http://www.madoka-magica.com/blu-ray_dvd/ if you want

yeyeye
Karen
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Topic Starter
Karen
All fixed in my parts except the source xd, no need to change that i think :p, and your opinion on Hard, didnt get your meaning but i think the hard's fine :d
Xinely
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Xinely
all fixed ~

@Karen : Normal里去掉01:04:935 (2) - 吧

Hard
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Milan-
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Winnie
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Winnie
Kinda just ran into this in pendings. Nice
Rizia
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Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:415 (4,5) - 間距可以大一點
  2. 00:31:095 (6) - 這裡糾結好久說不說不出來好 雖然我知道這想在這裡怎麼樣但是我會覺得把這個stack在00:31:335 (7) - 下面會比較順 (dt 1pc直覺)
  3. 00:51:735 (1,2,3,4) - 有點卡手 搞一點交叉的跳?
  4. 01:40:695 (1) - 可以對稱好
  5. 02:00:855 (4) - clap好像多加了
[Normal]
  1. 01:56:055 (4) - 底部好像不夠圓滑
想起muya的bg
其實我還期待有個sb的
call me back
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Rizia wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:095 (6) - 這裡糾結好久說不說不出來好 雖然我知道這想在這裡怎麼樣但是我會覺得把這個stack在00:31:335 (7) - 下面會比較順 (dt 1pc直覺) 这里那两个note跟着clap叠的，如果开音效打图我觉得应该不会有什么问题吧，先keep
想起muya的bg
其實我還期待有個sb的 我自己就是sb就不用sb了
call me back
其他fixed

@xinely:
00:51:735 (1,2,3,4) - translation: flow kinda bad, use crossing flow here?
01:40:695 (1) - translation: more symmetry
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
全部改了

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